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9 Years Ago
Please feel welcome to share your thought of the day. It could be about your new painting, your new photo, and art in general, or about any other topic about life and love you want to share. Thank you. Have a nice day.
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9 Years Ago
My Thought of The Day
A Poem A Day
what
impact
could a poem make?
you may reply
‘who cares?
why ask?
for what?’
it may mean nothing to you
I only put my thought into words whenever it itches my mind
and like gusty wind
it blows my hat off
and makes me
laugh or
cry
unlike
an apple a day
a poem a day may be too much to be written
let alone to be digested
I
hope
at least
it would keep my insanity away
from any of you
my dear
readers
Thao Chuong
2015-01-16
9 Years Ago
Rational Insanity
I don't think
that in the dark abyss of depression
or even in the elevations of ecstasy
That I can truly realize
How very blessed I am!
Kathy K. McClellan
KeppenArt
1/16/2015
9 Years Ago
To Poets
where are you -poets?
are you hibernating in your den buried in deep snow
or sunbathing naked
on a sandy beach
somewhere
in Cuba?
I
hope
I would
meet you
running around
in the labyrinth of words - the lost world of poetry
Poe Ed
2015-01-16
9 Years Ago
I poeth
I am here today
sweating, wondering, 'Will I get to paint?"
things are not always as they appear, some say,
I took care of you because I'm a saint.
9 Years Ago
I wrote this while away at college at LSU Louisiana State University in 74
"I have sub-stained the reality of my own piece of mind,
to meliorate for no one else but thee,
simply by restraining the obsession,
that which was in me"
(c) 1974 by Michael Joseph Hoard
Cheers, Michael Hoard Actor, Artist, Photographer
9 Years Ago
Thank you all for sharing your thoughts. Have a restful weekend.
Of Bird’s Mind
landing safely on a sundeck
after its first try
a short fly away
from his nest
in the tree
nearby
the baby bird looks very calm and quite relaxed
undoubtedly
he ain’t aware of the grave danger of being caught
and becoming a live toy
for the neighbour’s cat
to satisfy her bad habit
of being a torturing
addict
i’d
rather be
like a silly bird with an irrational but peaceful mind
than a human being with all thoughts of logical sanity
at every troublesome moment
throughout
my entire
life
Thao Chuong
2015-01-17
9 Years Ago
Thanks Bill.
Here's the second poem of the day from my thought of Lisa Kaiser’s work Night Falls Upon
When Night Falls Upon The mind
in
panic
she was quickly retreating to the opposite corner
as he slowly approached
and laughed
at each of
his step
pale light from the nearly-finished burning candle on the coffee table
was moving his terrifying shadow
on a blank wall
closer
to her
at the same time,
she heard intermittent hoots of a night owl
penetrating the deep darkness outside
vibrating through the thick thermal windows
and echoing into the well-insulated room
he emptied the wine
licked red liquid around his lips
then raised his hand up
and threw
the goblet
at her
hearing
piercing sound
of the wine glass
shattered on the marble floor
she had a terrible cramp in her head
and felt as if someone was driving a nail right into her central nerves
she desperately cried aloud for help
and profoundly
sweated
after
waking up
she smeared colours on canvas
and painted her worst
nightmare of
the dark
Thao Chuong
2015-01-17
9 Years Ago
Know the rules well so you can break them effectively. Dalai Lama XIV
MY THOUGHT EVERY DAY AS AN ARTIST.
9 Years Ago
Thanks Lisa for your nice feedback
And thank you Marlene for sharing the quote and your thought as an artist.
This is my third attempt today - a provoking poem about the past slavery in USA as a result of the reflection from Michael Hoard’s work Wash Day Blues. Have a good night to all
Description: Copyright Warning Do Not Alter My Photographer Notes: While riding my bike in the Central Business District I glanced upwards and noticed this makeshipe clothes line on upper roof of a slave quarter. The building was in a section which still had apartments to the rear. Many of the older buildings were removed neglected and turned into parking lots, or modern high rises. Photo taken of makeshift clothes line atop a building located in the Downtown Business section of New Orleans, Louisiana USA - by Michael Hoard.
The Wash Day – Blues
(to Michael Hoard)
as
slaves
they could never complain against their masters
for being tortured because of their dirty look
they were badly beaten from inside out
while drowned in soapy water
‘till became
deadly
wet
after
the execution
they were hanged dried on a metal wire
up high in the bluish sky
fully exposed to
the general
public
on a dreary day
without sunshine
only gusty wind whistled and moaned
while their bodies were swinging back and forth
like a flock of hungry city seagulls
flapping their wings around
looking for
food
please don’t tell me it were just my hallucination
or
else
I would
argue with you:
“your belief in god ain’t any better than my imagination”
Thao Chuong
2015-01-17
9 Years Ago
My thought for life today is
GO PATRIOTS!
Sorry Viet.....but you did ask. :-)
Bill Tomsa
billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
There is from several years ago. Rebecca
It Was Not A Good Morning
Some days don’t go very far;
Short-sheeted by an unforeseen turn,
They remain suspended
And the noisy silence echoes
Through the remaining hours.
Shoulders hunched against a future blow,
We gather the fragments of a torn existence
And work quietly to press them
Seamlessly together so
Tomorrow we can begin anew.
© Rebecca Cook 2009
9 Years Ago
No problem Bill. I am happy to take whatever you give me for the day
Also thanks to Rebecca @ Bellesouth Studio and Roy. Have a nice day
His Distant Memories
(to Bill Tomsa)
it stopped snowing
the sun started shining outside
she turned his wheelchair around and pushed it toward a big window
she could see patches of winter light on his bonny face
she really wanted to talk with him about anything
at the moment - she was looking at snowflakes melted on frosty glass
she suddenly thought of the weather topic
“it’s a gorgeous day, isn’t it?”
she
didn’t
really recognize
whether she really put it into words and said it out loud to him
or her thought was still sleeping inside the head
as
he
kept
rocking
himself
back and forth
she bent forward
looked into his blank eyes
put both hands on his shoulders
and raised her voice to catch his attention
“Daddy! Please look at me and say something today.”
obviously
he heard her voice
and somewhat understood her request
he momentarily stopped his body movements
as if he were in search for a proper reply from his distant memories
yet, he could only mumble a couple of words utterly inaudible
then got back to his
daily rocking
rhythms
Thao Chuong
2015-01-18
9 Years Ago
Know the rules well so you can break them effectively. Dalai Lama XIV
MY THOUGHT EVERY DAY AS AN ARTIST.
Posted by Marlene Burns about 19 Hours Ago
Marlene! Your thought everyday about rules could be too dramatic for some artists. Here is my extremely subjective thought about the same issue.
Rules - The Drama Evolved
he always wonders
why does anyone wana waste money and many years in school
to learn something about the trade
that he can simply do it
by himself
alone
considering formal education as a burden on his mind for his creative process
he often talks in confidence
about his skills and talent
to do everything
in fine
art
yet
he ain’t
interested in drawing
so he needs neither pencil nor pen
don’t give him any bullshit question about colour pallet, paintbrush, and canvas.
'cause he hates the messy part of painting
a camera
or a computer
is really needed
but both would be better
for him to do all the tricks
in the art of photography
and the digital art
he
is so
proud
to claim himself
a contemporary artist
who breaks all rules in fine art
as he always creatively thinks out of the box
I think
he might have
a different approach
if he would ever ask himself this most fundamental question
“do I know anything about rules and which one should I effectively break to make my art unique and creative?”
Thao Chuong
2015-01-18
9 Years Ago
Thanks Lisa.
I‘ve tried to find any hidden message from other people’s thought or some hidden stories in their art. Have a good night.
An echo to Rebecca Cook’s poem It Was Not A Good Morning and her artwork above
I Said Get Outta Bed
(to Rebeca Cook)
it was
still rare
and I liked it well-done
so I turned back ’n forth and upside down
to barbecue myself
under a warm
blanket
“it’s late
move your butt out of bed, now!”
I heard her annoying shouts as usual
it seems she always makes
my good day bad
and my bad day
worse
looking at the wall clock
it was only 10:30 in the morning
I yawned in deep moans
and talked
to myself
not to
her:
“c’mon
gime a break
on a day like this
who wanna to wake up so early”
I
was
about
to pull the top sheet to cover my head
and got back to my sweet dream
my ears were exploded
by a deafening
thunder
“I
SAID
GET OUTTA BED
NOW ”
Thao Chuong
2015-01-18
9 Years Ago
"The professionals are losing their powers. It's been going on for quite some time." - Hayao Miyazaki (creator of the Oscar-winning animated film "Spirited Away").
9 Years Ago
Viet - hahaha! That is funny, and I like your poem about my picture, and your other poems for other people.
A great thread of contemplative thought and humor interwoven.
Rebecca
9 Years Ago
BIG
I am so big
I can spread out over the mountain.
Feel the animals and plants
become one with them and feel my paws on the earth.
I am so big
I can commune with the stars…
Swing on the moon…
Ride the energies in laughter.
I am so big
I can feel the joy in everything.
Dance to the rhythm of life
dance for the joy of movement
and uplifting of spirit.
I am so big
that my heart is an endless
source of compassion
and my love shines
brighter than the sun.
But sometimes I am so small
you could hold me
in the palm of your hand
and your breath
could break me.
ShannathShima (Dorothy Berry-Lound) 2010
9 Years Ago
Viet/Thao
His Distant Memories
(to Bill Tomsa)
That poem is, without a doubt, the most insightful interpretation of one of my paintings that I have ever seen. Thank you my friend.
Bill Tomsa
billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
A life is teetering on
the brink of death
today.
Each breath is hard,
the eyes open
one does not,
the voice is dimmed
the whole right side
will not work.
This man's life has seen
94 years.
They have been full of both
joy and sadness.
Now the stroke of nature,
has stricken his life,
Has weakened his life,
Will take his life!
Gathering at his side,
family and friends,
share, touch, sing, cry, wait,
for a life to end.
Tears flow, words come,
yet none can speak,
Goodbye, old family friend,
Let your one eye
see the praises of life
And let yourself go.
— MJOA
9 Years Ago
Thanks to those special artists of the day:
-J L Meadows for the interesting quote
- Nicole Whittaker for your big fat hug
- Rebecca Cook for your nice comment
- Dorothy Berry-Lound for your provoking poem
- Bill Tomsa for your like of my interpretation of your work.
- And last but not least: - Mary Armstrong for sharing your interesting poem
Here is my thought generated by Roy Erickson’s following work and his poem posted on this thread one day ago.
The Future Is Tonight – Absolutely Not Tomorrow
he could hear the urging whistle
as if it was encouraging him
to speed
up
he
was
running
with both feet on his neck
yet he wasn’t fast enough
the door was quickly shut
just about a quarter of an inch from his runny nose
if his nose was about a half second faster on its run
he would be home in time for the dinner with her
he was so mad at himself
that he automatically spitted out from his dry throat
those most undiplomatic
words:
“oh no
not again
fuck me!”
now
he sits
on a bench
catching his own breaths
and waiting for the next train
he looks calms and very relaxed
as the coldness from the metal seat penetrates through his butts
and radiates inside his entire body
to cool down
his mind
he
has
tons of time
to think about possible outcomes of his last procrastination
he might eat a crappy meal with a cold wife
or he could enjoy fine wine,
good food and
exotic
sex
he must hold his breath long enough to know
how his future would be unfolded sometime by tonight
and absolutely not be
delayed any further
'til tomorrow
Thao Cbuong
2015-01-19
9 Years Ago
@ J I Meadows: I think your Tombstone is very thought-provoking. Yet, it was the message under your description about the self-destruction of a smoker that gave me some thought about the correlation between lives and cigarette. I am not in the position of defense of smoking. But for me, it was more a bad habit (that I used to enjoy) than an addiction (that I was attached to). As a chained smoker in the past, I smoked cigarettes, cigars, tobacco, and pipe. I was able to quit smoking cold turkey over 25 years ago without any sweat.
Description: Sometimes our addictions lead us to create our own destruction. This man is a smoker whose choices have turned him into a golem - a living tombstone, his sad fate carved in stone. The lily symbolizes the grief of his loved ones. The wall represents the barrier between the living and the dead. The white bird is his soul, departing.
Of Lives and Cigarettes
(To J I Meadows)
not
much
difference
between lives and cigarettes
whether you burn them or not
in the very end
both will turn
themselves
to ash
regardless
whatever you do
with your life or a cigarette
it don’t really matter much
'cause at each instant
you’re still breathing
in and out
you’re
constantly
carving your own gravestone
tell me in any language about your one thousand o one reasons
why must I not enjoy
whatever I love to
while I’m still
kicking
alive
?
Thao Chuong
2015-01-19
9 Years Ago
"You create your own reality." -- Seth Speaks
Chuck Staley Concept Art
9 Years Ago
Good morning to you Viet.
Here is the thought that "itches my mind" today. It comes from someone very far away in the past but his words are so very applicable to us today as, I think we all, in our own way look for a place to retreat to if even for a few minutes. ( For the politically correct out there please excuse the gender references as this was written 2,000 years ago.)
"Men seek retreats for themselves: houses in the country, sea-shores and mountains; and thou too are wont to desire such things very much. But this is altogether a mark of the most common sort of men, for it is within thy power whenever thou shalt choose to retire into thy self. For nowhere, either with more quite or more freedom from trouble, does a man retire than into his own soul, particularly when he has within himself such thoughts that by looking into them he is immediately in perfect tranquillity; and I affirm that tranquillity is nothing else than the good ordering of the mind. Constantly then give to thyself this retreat, and renew thyself..."
Marcus Aurelius
Meditaions of Marcus Aurelius as translated by John Long (Mount Vernon, NY Peter Pauper Press)
Bill Tomsa
billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
a reply to Po Ed's question... "where are you -poets? "
when last seen
this poet kneeling
over a box brimming
of used words
held them high
one by one
only to let them fall
into meaninglessness
Ed Meredith
20 January 2015
9 Years Ago
Thank you all
@ Chuck Staley: I’d like the quote.
@ Bill Tomsa: Wow, you shook my mind with those words from Marcus Aurelius. You’re the man. I appreciate you taking time and sharing your thought with us daily
@ Natalie Holland: Nice to see you here, my friend. Long time no talk.
@ Kevin Callahan: I’ll get back to you about this quote after I catch up my breath
@ RoyD Erickson: How about me talking with you during your nap and we both will be back together?
@ Ed Meredith: Great to see you, friend. Haa…I think Poe Ed is still in his own hibernation.
9 Years Ago
My thought today in response to Nicole Whittaker's *big fat hug* given to me one day ago. My heart was cracked and mind was numbed for awhile after her long-distant hug.
Your Rejected Journey
(To Nicole Whittaker only. Don't let anyone know about this special offer! OK?)
your journey is probably same as that of anybody else’s
amongst billions of struggling souls
on this crowded planet
it may go around
back and forth
up and down
left and right
in and out
unless
you travel
in god’s heaven
it ain’t much different
even for the living journey
of those aliens at some unknown places in deep space
it’s quite normal for everyone
what the heck makes you think
your zig-zag
journey is
rejected
if you would like to travel within my own world
I’ll give you a lifetime warranty
for one hundred percent
of satisfaction
or full cash
back
before
you decide
to take my special offer
during this limited promotional period
you can have a free trial at any time
with an unconditional return
no extra charge applied
no question
asked
go ahead
why
not?
Thao Chuong
2015-01-20
9 Years Ago
"The empiricism of poetry is quite unorthodox in its mobility."
- Richard Reeve
reevephotos.com
9 Years Ago
I have been experiencing and recognizing this more the last few years...
"You are lead through your lifetime by the inner learning creature, the playful spiritual being that is your real self."
~ Richard Bach
9 Years Ago
Viet, good to see you too my friend...
Thought Senryu
i had a thought once
it belonged to someone else
i gave it no thought
9 Years Ago
@ Richard Reeve: Thanks for your own interesting quote.
I myself think that poetry - like any other art form - is a tool for expression and also a creative way of communication. Words themselves in their own nature don’t carry any thought in them. Yet, they can be used as a vehicle to transport messages from the minds of those writers/poets/speakers to their readers/listeners. Words must be intentionally arranged in a certain pattern.
It is likely that words themselves present no meaning when they are together in a random format. I think under a linguistic perspective, poetry could be quite orthodox in its own essence.
@ Roger Swezey: I could see your happiness in the relationship. I think it is much better to have someone call us ‘GRANDdad than a dad. Because most of the responsibilities are now offloaded away from our shoulders. We take all the joy and now it is our kids’ turn to clean up their own “shit” (LOL).
@ Rahdne Zola: Welcome to this thread and thank you for sharing your thought
@ Ed Meredith: Here is the echo to your senryu, my friend
Senryu Your Words
all the words you wrote
I could not vomit them out
as I’ve lost my thought
Thao Chuong
2015-01-20
9 Years Ago
My interactive poem in response to Dorothy Berry-lound’s poem BIG posted one day ago and to her following artwork
Never Alone
(to Dorothy Berry-lound)
you follow me every day
from dawn to dusk
you hold me tight all night
from sunset to sunrise
you
never
let me down
regardless, I’m happy or sad
I feel good or bad
I succeed or fail
I gain or lose
you don’t care when I am with someone
you’re always by my side
to make sure
I’m alright
I may feel lonely
from time
to time
but
I am
never alone
with your dedicated love for me
who else would be more loyal than you’re
my own dear
shadow
Thao Chuong
2015-01-20
9 Years Ago
Viet, namaste, that is beautiful thank you so much. And you got right to the point of the piece. Dorothy
9 Years Ago
@ Dorothy Berry-Lound: Thank you very much. Nice to get back your warm feedback. I like the red tome in your work. Those embedded lines create smooth movements and it makes the piece look lively.
@ Kevin Callahan: Thank you for the quote. Enjoy a cigar and a glass of wine tonight, my friend.
@ Chuck Staley: Here is my thought from Seth Speaks’ quote "You create your own reality." that you posted on day ago. I like your and also the “conceptual” titles of some of your works . My poem is surrealism as is your work Knight in the Cemetery
Knight in the Cemetery
(to Chuck Staley)
less
homes
for the homeless
no shelter to shelf himself
he’s been dragging his life on streets
like a confused driver keeps riding a car
around and around inside a roundabout
in downtown of a rundown town
and not know
how to get
out
whether the weather’s good or bad
he sleeps outdoor without any door for minimum security
and it ain’t nice as those beatniks having their picnic overnight on a beach
it has been frostily cold
during the last
two nights
tonight is much colder
he has to drink a whole bottle of Chinese cooking wine to warm himself up
all his favorite places have already been taken
he staggers around and finds a perfect spot
he takes an old campaign poster of the junior gorge bush
carefully puts it inside a dense bush
he lies his back down
ready for his loud
snores
it’s dark
and moonless
all of a sudden
he hears a grave voice
coming from a grave just a couple yards away
from the graveyard
nearby
”i’m
the knight of knights
get the hell out of my nite
or I cut your head off ”
it’s same damned nightmare
each time he’s intoxicated during his sleep
Thao Chuong
2015-01-21
9 Years Ago
Good evening Mary Armstrong
Please accept my apology for my mistake. I wasn’t aware that I accidentally missed your touchy poem posted one day ago, until I scrolled back to make a cross-check on my long thread.
Here is my echo to your work To The Wet City.
The Wet City
(To Mary Armstrong)
it
rains
all day
all night
whole week
entire month
and much longer
it pounds nonstop
on
metal
wood
plastic
asphalt
concrete
it sends heavy rock'n roll music in tedious rhythms
it pours down heavy loads
on everything in the city
buildings
streets
trees
and
on a colorful sea of umbrellas
water is everywhere
inside,
outside
in the sky
on the ground
heart gets wet, mind’s damp, soul’s soggy, and life becomes too mushy
in the city of no sun
during monsoon
season
Thao Chuong
2015-01-21
9 Years Ago
"Attitude is more important than the past, than education, than money, than circumstances, than what other people will think or say or do. It is more important than appearance, giftedness or skill. It will make or break a company, a church, a home.
But the remarkable thing is. we have a choice every day regarding the attitude we will embrace for that day. We cannot change our past. We cannot change the fact that people will act in a certain way. We cannot change the inevitable. The only thing we can do is play on the one string we have and that is our attitude." - Charles Swindoll
This is a quote that I have hanging in my studio, committed to memory and have actually carried copies of it in my wallet to leave around as a "gift" to anyone who might pick it up.
I do my best to choose a positive attitude at the beginning of each day, not always successfully,.
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
Many thanks for sharing the quote of wisdom. You’ve make my day. Have a happy day, Bill
Sundry Thought About My Attitude
I often think it is my own talents
that take me to success
however I tend to blame my bad luck
not my lack of skills
whenever
I fail
this
attitude
serves me well
it has maintained the confidence to keep me going forward
also it gives me good excuses
to enjoy sound sleep
at night
such
an inflated ego
somehow would make me I sound arrogant
yet, if I couldn’t be myself with my own self
then who the hell
would I
be?
Thao Chuong
2015-01-22
9 Years Ago
Once again you get a big thought into a few well chosen words, Thank you Viet.
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
Many thanks Bill. Your nice words are much appreciated. Have a good night
@ Natalie Holland: Here is my thought – an echo of your artwork and the quote your posted two days ago
“Follow your heart wherever it takes you, and be Happy. Life is brief and very fragile and only loaned to us for awhile. Wake up every morning with the thought that something wonderful is about to happen.” ~ Author Unknown
Of My Heart
(To Natalie Holland)
my heart is so blind
it ain’t alright
for me to
listen
to
it
very often
it deceptively
leads me to a cul de sac
I’ve followed my heart many times in the past
and most of the time
I ended up
being
at
the wrong moment
the wrong place
with the wrong person
in an unknown space
already occupied
fully
either, I’d rather listen to my mind
at least, I could foresee
where I’m heading to
when I’ll get there
whom I will be with
or
I’d better follow my instinct
at best, I could enjoy the natural desire of an animal
with no regret when unexpectedly caught
on a cobweb of life
and love
Thao Chuong
2015-01-22
9 Years Ago
“A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step” Laozi
Posted by Kevin Callahan three days ago.
My Sundry Thought of Taoism
(To Kevin Callahan)
soft
as cloud
wandering to infinite horizon
flexible as water running from high mountains
flowing through rough terrains
down to creeks
and rivers
to the immense ocean
it’s Tao
the Way of living
in harmony with nature
Laozi once said: ” A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”
I often ask myself
if I didn’t take any single step
to begin
with
would my voyage to life be still in existence
and if I let myself go with the natural flow of cloud and water
would it make any
difference
to my
fate?
Thao Chuong
2015-01-23
9 Years Ago
A billion sleigh bells ringing
a million miles away
the night song of the cicadas.
--------------------------------------------------------
Everything misplaced
enters a secret space
in another dimension
the one rarely mentioned
the place where things disappear
vanishing into thin air
and beg the question
where?
Billy East 2015
01/23/2015
9 Years Ago
Description: Walking along the edge of the surf at Ormond by the sea beach, I came on this little still life, a small piece of drift wood with a tiny crab shell perched on it. Ormond by the sea is just to the north of Ormond Beach and Daytona Beach in Florida.
Still Life On the Beach
after
drifted
on a long journey
of many days and nights
on high seas
washed ashore a piece of driftwood
lying lifeless
on sandy
beach
awaiting
another journey anew
either being taken back to the sea by high tide
or becoming an objet trouvé
in an exhibition
of a renowned
artist
isn't still life still alive both in real life and in fine art?
Thao Chuong
2015-01-23
9 Years Ago
Do we all go through life self-hypnotized or hypnotized by others?
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
Good day, Bill
Thank you for providing the good exercise for my mind. I cannot answer for others. Most of the time, I'm self-hypnotized but mainly reflected by other people around me as a clear mirror for myself.
Here's my today's poem as a result from your post.
Of Self-Reflection
when
I’m mad
it’s hard for me
to recognize how hot my head is
it could be 100 degree Celsius
or much higher
more than
enough
to burn the whole world into ashes
I ain't crazy no longer
as soon as I become aware of my insanity
why the hell do I often feel offended
when someone tells me
about a bad moment
of my true
self
don’t I owe that person an appreciation
for pointing out my own foolishness
and for giving me
such a good
lesson
ins't it the worst part of my ego?
Thao Chuong
2015-01-24
9 Years Ago
Thank you Viet. Very nice poem with much truth...as usual. Have a restful night.
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much for the dialogue, Bill. Restful weekend to you.
@ "The empiricism of poetry is quite unorthodox in its mobility." Posted by Richard Reeve 4 days ago
Description: Some artwork is guaranteed to make you thirsty... It must have been fun putting together this collection though. I assume the collector was celebrating National Beer Can Appreciation Day 24 January. For it was on that date in 1935 when beer was first sold in cans. So celebrate with a day that provides people with the opportunity to enjoy and appreciate the very many different kinds of beer cans. Cheers. Richard Reeve
Of Man And Beer
(To Richard Reeve - Cheer to your health on the National Beer Can Appreciation Day of 24 January)
after
throwing
the empty can
on the messy floor
scattered by a couple of dozens of empty ones
he leaned forward and said to me
-“men without alcohol
are like flags
without
wind.
have you ever heard that well-known proverb before?”
I grudgingly replied
while holding my heavy head straight up
as it was about
to fall off
my neck
“nah!
forget it
open another one
bottom
up
cheer to your health!”
that night
I was too intoxicated to recall
how I did end up in a detention cell
of a local police
station
next time
when he invites me over for a drink
I would offer him a version of my own proverb
“men
without
driver’s licence
worse than cars
without
steering
wheel"
Thao Chuong
2015-01-24
9 Years Ago
It's How I Celebrate the National Beer Can Appreciation Day
between
the two of you
one loves full beer cans
the other wants empty ones
beer
itself is
as
is
not
when it's
fully packed inside a can
or totally drained out of a bottle
you celebrate the National Beer Can Appreciation Day
by holding your full cans intact or taking the empty ones
I simply let the beer drink me
'till it drives me hi
on its highway
of joys
Thao Chuong
2015-01-24
9 Years Ago
Chicken Rotisserie Observation
Birds without feathers
All savory contenders
Make no sound spinning on spits
Their flesh touches lips
Concealing teeth that rips meat from bone
Then their bones are thrown
To be resown
Into the carcass of earth
----------------------------------------------------
How high am I
who watches clouds drift by
each other they chase
as if in a race
of which there is no winning
it's just the Earth
forever spinning
Billy East 2015
9 Years Ago
Viet,
My wife and I have the radio set to wake us every morning usually with music on the station it is set to. This morning the song I woke up to was saying "This is gonna' be the best day of my life...". I layed there with a smile on my face thinking to myself "What a great thought to wake up to. I should keep this thought in mind every day I wake up." So this will be my thought for today at least. This is gonna' be the best day of my life.....because, for today, it's the only day of my life.
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
A job title does not matter. What matters is the quality of the effort in any job. This is your signature, no matter what, ... and this is how other people will remember you.
People might ask me what I do,
and to them I respond,
"What is it to you?"
W'HAT I do has little worth.
Instead, the worth is in the HOW I do it.
Collecting trash or writing symphonies is all the same
in Nature's vast eternal workings.
"Work", thus, is a selfish label
falsely posed by mortal minds
that fear the loss of a flicker of their one
small instant of awareness of a single life
within a greater life that never dies
but always is an always has been.
9 Years Ago
In the depths of winter, I dream of summer.
The Visitor
I had a visitor while watering the plants today
An emerald dart in the form of a hummingbird
No bigger than a moment and
Quicker than a brief thought
The avian jewel appeared seemingly from thin air
Hovering inches from my startled countenance
In what was either a greeting or abject curiosity
A long moment - then gone (into space and time?)
As I resumed my Aquarian task my gem rematerializes
Returning to the courtyard again and again
I gazed rapt as he pierces the delicate blooms
Drinking sweet nectar from each, one by one
What a gift for us both
Mother Nature’s elixir for him
A moment of magic for me
9 Years Ago
@ Billy East. Wow! I like both poems of yours as they brought a lot of thought to my mind. I have found a sense of humor in provoking messages from your poems.
@ Welcome Gregory Scott: Thanks for sharing your thought that reflects a common sense about our memoir of the past.
@ Bill Tomsa: It’s good to be around with people who have positive thinking as you do I could sense your energy (Chi) though your post.
@ Robert Kernodle: It’s quite an interesting poem. I do hope you would keep sharing your poetry here.
@ Kevin Callahan: We also have wet and cold weather here. I have the same dream as yours about the summer.
Thank you all for sharing your thought of the day.
Peaceful Nature
lying
my back flat
on green lawn
up high
in the azure sky
patches of cloud slowly glided
couple of birds hurriedly flew
the sun was coming down on the blue mountain
ready for its relaxing rest
after a long day
of hard
work
twas serene lullabies for my mind
I gradually fell into sleep
Thao Chuong
2015-01-25
9 Years Ago
Here is my echo to Billy East’s poem Chicken Rotisserie Observation
Of Wings
waiting
for my turn
at a KFC fast food outlet
in a long line of slow-moving vehicles
I smell a strong mixture of deep fries and raw gasoline from hazy smog over the drive thru lane
I can buy French fries everywhere
no need for me
coming to
Paris
if
I didn’t
wait here
nowhere else I could find wings without chickens
not even on
a poultry
farm
I am not fancy in my dream
of flying high up
to the sky
but it could be a nightmare
of not having wings
without feathers
for my drink
tonight
Thao Chuong
2015-01-25
9 Years Ago
Notions of True Love Evaporate
I go to places
filled with faces
most are talking
some are walking
many are having fun
a few want to run
there is genius and madness
laughter and sadness
here to learn, here for kicks
the serious and the foolish, all in the mix
side by side the down trodden and the lofty
all trying to relax, all drinking coffee
she stands alone
far from home
and makes me think
there is a link
a reason for her being here
instead of who knows where
I look at her and she looks at me
I hope a smile is what I'll see
she moves slowly and with grace
heading towards me, a steady pace
she smiles, time stands still
this is our moment, this is the thrill
a beauty, great to behold
her youth reminding me I'm old
she asks if I'm looking for a date
and all notions of true love evaporate
Billy East 2015
9 Years Ago
Greetings Viet Tran, I am truly touched and humbled by your interpretation of my "Wash Day Blues" Your poetic words are no doubt the inner beauty which lies within. I shall frame your poem of "Wash Day Blues" and mount it on the wall next to "Wash Day Blues". Thank you.
Cheers, Michael Hoard Actor, Artist, Photographer
9 Years Ago
Good Morning. Have a nice day
@ Billy East: Another poem that gave me some thought
@ Michael Hoard: You’re very welcome. It was your work that led to those words of mine. The title did attract my attention, the work itself made me think. In the poem I used your image of clothes hanged on the wire over an old living quarter for slaves as a metaphor to relate to miserable fates of the Black in the dark age of slavery in the US history.
I appreciate you putting my poem side by side of your work. Thanks.
Viet Tran
@ www.papercollage.ca
9 Years Ago
Smart Lappy
smart phone sitting on the café table
displayed like a shrine to worship
starry eyed gazing, stroking it like a beloved pet
The world is at her command on a star ship
illuminating, flashing, making beautiful sounds
music to the ears and soul
everything at the finger tips abounds
an image of a rat flashes on the screen
Lappy the little lap dog rolls
springs up on the table
aggressively bites down on its foe
was it the rat image
triggering this behavior
or long suppressed jealousy
Jim Taylor 1/26/2015
9 Years Ago
Welcome Jim Taylor. Thanks for sharing your poem
The following poem is an echo to Robert Kernodle’s poem posted 1 day ago
My Living Process
I’m
what I’m
regardless whatever they call me
I do what I love
not
what
other people expect me to
I live my life
the way that suits my style
whether others think it’s great or tiny
it don’t really matter so long as I am happy
I enjoy my creative process
it gives me the pleasure and ecstasy while I’m doing it
nevertheless how the outcome would be
I consider my work is a bonus
nice if the public like it
if not it’s fine
with me
I live my life as is and do what I love
my living journey is for me
not for anyone
else
no
point
to worry
if I would be remembered or forgotten after I leave this world
Thao Chuong
2015-01-26
9 Years Ago
a child asked me why do people have to die
I answered with a shrug, I don't know why
a man with a shovel asked why must we work
to eat I said and drove my pick into the dirt
a pretty woman asked me what is love
two feet on the ground and your mind in heaven above
my hungry dog looked at me with his power of suggestion
I fed my best friend well , without question
billy east
9 Years Ago
Thanks Billy East for sharing your poetry that always stirs my head up. Good night, my poet.
My poem in response to Billy East’s poem “Notions of True Love Evaporate”
Notion of Love Vaporized
(Not what you might think)
I
don’t
know nothing
about your favorite
I
myself
love licking breasts
as softness of the flesh
magically rolls around my lips
and also its tenderness numbs my tongue
but
most of all
when I slowly swallow
the juicy taste remains so deep and too long inside my throat
it makes me quite
addicted
never mind
whatever you may think about chicken breasts
but I must tell you about my taste
I hate chewy wings
unless for my
drink
Thao Chuong
2015-01-26
www.papercollage.ca
9 Years Ago
My echo to Bill Tomsa’s daily thought of wisdom: “This is gonna' be the best day of my life.....because, for today, it's the only day of my life.” Posted 2 days ago
Yesterday – Today - Tomorrow
I
can’t
be a ghost
living in the past
yesterday has gone
nothing can be done
to change what has already ended
no need to count how many days
I’ve lived so far
tomorrow is untouchable
it’s only an abstract notion
when it turns into reality
it becomes today
who knows
what future would be?
why should I worry how many more days I’ll have left for the rest of my life?
what point to be afraid of
when my last day
on earth
would
be?
today is
the only day
truly in existence in my living
as I am still breathing in and out
at this very instant present
not the past second
nor the next
moment
neither
yesterday
nor tomorrow
but today is the best day for me.
Thao Chuong
2015-01-27
9 Years Ago
As usual, my friend, a brilliant interpretation of my thoughts and feelings in a way only you can do. Thank you.
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
It's sweet of you, Bill.
If I lived in the same town with you, I like to have a drink and nice chats with you in person. Nice day!
9 Years Ago
Good night, Bill
Her Best Day
still
half-awake
and half-asleep
she curls herself under the warm comforter
like a worm enjoys its good time
inside a ripen
apple
through
well-insulated
and thick fabrics
she could smell strong aroma of hot coffee
coming into the bedroom from the kitchen on the main floor
“honey
coffee’s ready”
she hears his sweet voice as usual
but it’s too cosy
for her
to get
up
as a Zen master
in deep meditation
she is in absolute silence
knowing for sure he’d pick it
as a sign of her need
for his room
service
so
often
she loves drinking her morning coffee
at the same time she enjoys
his unshaved face
rubbing on
her bare
breasts
the eccentric combination of
sweet-‘n-bitter flavour in her throat
and tinkling sensation on her skin
wakes her mind up
and often drives
her desire high
for sex
it’s how
she takes the best from her day
Thao Chuong
2015-01-27
9 Years Ago
I think that too many people on this site are overly obsessed with sales, views and imagined wrongs instead of art.
9 Years Ago
While I was shoveling out our driveway from the "Blizzard of 2015" today here in Topsham, ME, I got to thank the municipal plow truck driver for doing such a great job under such adverse conditions. He was grateful for the appreciation and said "We don't get that very often." It reminded me of how we take these workers for granted. My thought for the day...Thank someone today for what they do.
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
Good morning Thank you very much for sharing your today’s thought
@ John Haldane: “every path a lesson” is a sharp remark
@ David Lane: I share the same observation with you about marketing overused on FAA forum which very few buyers would read those threads. I also agree with you that threads with topics about art don’t attract much and are derailed so often.
@ Bill Tomsa: I could imagine how messy nature could bring to a city. We got snow storms here in the past. Our town was totally immobilized for a couple of days: houses buried under snow, collapsed roofs, roads impassable, etc. I hope you get out of this blizzard safe and sound,
@ Georg Hoffmann: I agree that a message or a story can be found from every artwork. Enjoy your coffee.
The following thought came from John Halden’s remark and his artwork above.
Of Man and Bird
a blue heron spreads its wings
and lets itself flow
to wherever
the wind
blows
man
with high pride of his wisdom
often doesn’t know
with path
he must
follow
Thao Chuong
2015-01-28
9 Years Ago
Thanks for the concern, Viet. Not to worry - the snow has stopped and today it is bright and sunny here in Maine. The calm AFTER the storm! Take care.
@ John H. photo of Heron...I earned my pilot's license in the early 1980's and got a lot of stick time in sailplanes and single engine Cessnas. John's photo reminded me that if I could come back to this earth again I would want to be a bird....preferably a soaring bird.
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
Good to know that snow has stopped. Enjoy to your best day- today, Bill
Of Man ‘n Nature
man always thinks
he’s totally in charge
everything’s under
his tight
control
but
when
nature
strikes back
it’s like a rubber band
swinging to the opposite direction
as far as it’s been pushed
then
man’s losing his grip
and falling into
his own
shits
Thao Chuong
2015-01028
9 Years Ago
Of Man ‘n Nature
Another way of saying the only thing we have complete control over is our own attitude?
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Juergen Roth
I Think Pablo Picasso was intoxicated when he said that.
Love
when
he said
"love is the greatest refreshment in life."
Pablo Picasso probably was intoxicated
after taking too many drinks
and thinking of the sexy lady
whom he had just
made love
in bed
with
love isn’t
about euphoric sex
it’s a merry-go-round
joyful to jump on
but hurtful
to fall
off
love is
blossoming in spring
soon turning into dead leaves
and falling off
in autumn
love is
always a two-way street
of sweet and bitter
of rosy and
blue
Thao Chuong
2015-01-29
9 Years Ago
"Another way of saying the only thing we have complete control over is our own attitude?" posted by Bill Tomsa.
It's a very inspiring comment. So do you enjoy hot coffee or cold snow, Bill? (LOL)
Only One Thing I Can Do to Change The World
I could happily sing or miserably swear in the wind
I could whine or smell the rain,
when it pours down
and makes me
soaked
I
could
go out
shoving snow
or stay inside complaining about the cold
it isn’t the environment
that keeps me calm
or drives me
mad
it
ain’t
other humans
who make me sad or happy
nothing I can do to control the weather
nor anything could be done
to change people
around
me
my attitude
is
only
one thing
I can hold inside my own hands
to make the day
good or
bad
Thao Chuong
2015-01-29
9 Years Ago
I enjoy hot coffee after I've been shoveling cold snow. :-))
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com.
9 Years Ago
Description: The three cups in this acrylic painting are used primarily for drinking coffee however, they work just as well as for tea, hot chocolate, etc. My inspiration for the title references the coffee aspect and as well as the three primary colors blue, yellow and red while the checkered table cloth hints at a cafe setting. By Bill Tomsa.
On a Snowy Day
downs ups
downs
ups
…in endless rounds
he pushed
he pulled
he thrust
he yanked
he moved
he turned
he twisted
on
a snowy day like this
it was such perfect timing for sex
he did it so hard
‘til
his back ached
his feet trembled
his hands numbed
as if he were making love ten times in a row
out of breath
about to drop dead
right on the spot
in chilly wind
no
fun
at all
he was shoveling snow
he wish if he were staying inside
holding a cup of hot coffee by the fire
or warming her up
in bed
Thao Chuong
2015-01-29
To your attention, Bill! I’ve tried your link @blogspot.com. But it took me to nowhere!
9 Years Ago
Posted by Billy East 3 Days Ago
a child asked me why do people have to die
I answered with a shrug, I don't know why
a man with a shovel asked why must we work
to eat I said and drove my pick into the dirt
a pretty woman asked me what is love
two feet on the ground and your mind in heaven above
my hungry dog looked at me with his power of suggestion
I fed my best friend well , without question
billy east
@ Billy East. You made me think hard about the child question “why do people have to die?” in your poem. Your poetry often provokes readers’ mind. I enjoy reading your poems.
Why People Have to Die
living
forever
the fanciest
dream of mortal man
since his life is way too short
one hundred years - the longest for a very few
and much sooner
for the majority
but
in such
a flash of
an eyeblink
he badly fucks himself up
killing other beings
for his greedy
benefits
he’s collecting much rubbish
dumping trash in his own home
and destroying
his living
habitat
if man
were immortal
he would soon drive his own world to extinction
tell any curious child
people have to die to leave a decent place
for the next generation
also for the survival
of other beings
on planet
earth
Thao Chuong
2015-01-30
9 Years Ago
Ba Thứ Lăng Nhăng ...
Một trà, một rượu, một đàn bà,
Ba thứ lăng nhăng nó quấy ta.
Chừa được thứ nào hay thứ ấy,
Có chăng chừa rượu với chừa trà !
Tác giả: Trần Tế Xương (*)
* Poet Trần Tế Xương was renowned by his humorous poetry in Vietnam
The Troublesome Three…
tea
liquor
woman
the troublesome three bother me
the more I give up
the better for me
if I must quit
I could only get rid of liquor and tea
(English version by Viet Tran)
9 Years Ago
Make Love or War
too
obsessive
with their own ism
they chase each other like cat and dog
she’s
been
accusing him
of being a sexist
he always thinks she’s a feminist
what if
these two happen to share the same bed
would they make
love or
war?
Poe Ed
2015-01-30
9 Years Ago
Cold and Hot
between
icy snow
and a sexy woman
I prefer to take the hot one
even though
I
know
for sure
catching a cold is the most
I might get from shoveling snow
but cooling her heat off
I could get
the worst
flu
Thao Chuong
2015-01-31
9 Years Ago
My thought for today - It's almost over - then there is tomorrow.
@ Bill - I prefer not to shovel snow at all - it's beautiful in pictures and on mountains - there's a reason I live in Florida.
9 Years Ago
Description: It was most strange to come up on this huge panel of graffiti on the old tobacco warehouse in Lake City, Florida. I knew the lady somewhat and her husband. She lived for her grandchildren. © Roy rd Erickson
In Loving Memory
it was a long time ago
in our memory
as if
it were
yesterday
on that gloomy day
when your heart ceased
the world suddenly stopped spinning
in absolute silence for a moment
we were frozen in shock
then busted into tears
and cried
you’ve left us for another world
yet we could sense your presence
somewhere around us
you’re still alive
inside our
hearts
grandma
we love you
Thao Chuong
2015-02-01
9 Years Ago
Viet my thought for today ---It's SUPERBOWL SUNDAY and we're sending positive thoughts to the Patriots! GO PATS!
@Roy-shoveling snow...
Yeah, that's also why we moved to lived in Arizona before moving to Maine....what were we thinking?! LOL
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
Enjoy the game, Bill.
Super Bowl
go ahead
enjoy nachos,
wings, ribs, dips and pizza
or whatever your favorite treat with Super Bowl
it’s too much for me
I must take
a small
bowl
the less food
the better
for my
body
I'd
better
take a walk with my dog
than glue my butts to a couch
and add more fat
to my tummy
Thao Chuong
2015-02-01
9 Years Ago
Description: "America's Game" depicts the game of baseball as about as All American a sport as you can find. Upon careful examination of this acrylic painting one realizes that the baseball, bat and glove are not of professional level but rather what would be used by sandlot players and one is transported back to the days when we all played the sport just for fun and moneyball, mega contracts and endorsements were not much thought of in connection with our game - America's Game.
America’s Game
fun
in sport
nowadays
in America may be just for little kids
in any neighborhood
to enjoy different games
on dead-end streets
on playgrounds
or an empty lot
they play sport
at their spare time
after school
on weekends
or on holidays
they shout and yell
they throw
they catch
they kick
they run
for fun
no
fun
at all
when America’s Games become commercialized
those sport celebrities on a distinguished sport league
get
pay
big bucks
by signing mega contracts
of millions of dollars
only
little kids can still enjoy America's Games
big
boys
in high school
sweat to their own death
for the America’s wildest dream
of playing any sport
without fun
at all
Thao Chuong
2015-02-02
9 Years Ago
Description: This footprint at the beach in the sand was so clear. Sometimes it is indented, sometimes it appears to be raised up. Photo taken at Ormond Beach, Florida © Roy rd Erickson
Footprints On Wet Sand
gusty
wind blew
his long hair up
it filled his lungs
with the familiar odour from the sea
smell of salt, dead fish, rotten seaweed.
at midday
sunlight was too bright
its reflection on high surfs blinded his eyes
he put his sunglasses on
and kept walking
slowly on the
beach
he
stomped
his bare feet
tried to implant footprints deep onto wet sand
as he enjoyed watching
tireless waves wiping
them off
as
quickly as
the infinite time has washed every human’s life away
Thao Chuong
2015-02-01
9 Years Ago
Viet my thoughts for the day;
Thank you for the 2 poems on America's Game and Superbowl (we had pizza).
The baseball poem really expanded beautifully on my original thoughts about the painting and the second one hit the nail on the head. Thanks,
For today my thoughts are also on the idea of "never give up" or as, I think it was Yogi Berra, who said "It ain't over til it's over."
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
Good day, Bill.
Thank you for sharing your thought. My mind has been refreshed by your positive comment: “For today my thoughts are also on the idea of "never give up" or as, I think it was Yogi Berra, who said "It ain't over til it's over."
No One Else Can Help
never too late
to start
when
it’s done
no point to regret
endless possibilities for me to try it again
it never ends
unless
I quit
It’s up to me
to make my life better or worse
either I keep walking ahead
or I sit by the roadside
breathe dirt
and whine
Thao Chuong
2015-02-02
9 Years Ago
Viet No One Can Help
That poem and it's context is so very appropriate for those of us on a web site titled Fine Art America. Bravo my friend! Sleep well.
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
9 Years Ago
Hi Bill. Sleep tight, tonight.
BTW: It was the capital “F“ word in your comment that has led me to the following thought.
A Bizarre Place
oh my...
my dear artists
poets or whatever you’re
never get into that sacred place
the forbidden land
of so-called
fine art
only
for
birds
flowers
and so on…
on throw pillows
where
nudity
couldn’t be displayed
no politics would be touched
no religion could be mentioned
it
was like
you went
to a church
and not allowed to pray inside
or you sat in a restaurant
but not permitted
to order
food
it
made
you feel stuck
as if you were prohibited
to deposit your own
solid waste into
a toilet bowl
in another words
it’s a serious place
where you wanna have fun
you must keep
your mouth
shut
except
a burning hell
tell me if there is such a bizarre place on earth nowadays?
Thao Chuong
2015-02-03
9 Years Ago
Popcorn
Popcorn crowding all around,
Hot air blows them round and round,
Yellow corn kernels poppity pop,
One after another, when will they stop?
Whirling, swirling the popcorn pops,
In a bowl they quickly drop,
Fluffy popcorn, grab a bunch,
Light and tasty, eat them crunch.
james hörner
9 Years Ago
Good Day and thank Nicole Whittaker. Popcorn is an identical reflection of what has been happening so far.
Of Monkey and Human
totally free roaming in the wild
monkeys do what
monkeys
like
fighting
wrestling
swinging and chasing through the trees
only
when
restrained
in the pens
“money see monkey do”
would smart humans be any better?
when
imprisoned in a cage
without freedom of expression
of thoughts in the mind
and love from
the heart
Thao Chuong
2015-02-03
9 Years Ago
I've been thinking....what if a fractal were our universe and each piece of the repeating pattern was another dimension?
What if they intersected?
What if everything behaved as a Fractal, repeating as time passes? would that be déjàvou?
Hi Viet! You are looking well. Good to see the words are flowing great for you.
9 Years Ago
I met a fifteen year old prostitute at breakfast this morning. She was sitting at the counter having breakfast. She told me a disturbing story about her life. I will use it in my next creation.
9 Years Ago
Everyone thinks of changing the world, but no one thinks of changing himself. ~ Leo Tolstoy
9 Years Ago
Good day and thanks to Fran Riley, Monsieur Danl, Natalie Holland, and Tony Murray. Have a restful day to all
Soap Opera
jam-packed
in a small place
struggling for being distinguished from the crowd
they’re been fighting teeth and nails
to the top spot
or at least
for bigger
space
they elbow
they knee
they kick
they hit
at each
other
to
make
more room
for their own bloom
don’t
guess
me wrong
I’m talking about kernels
in their plight of becoming popcorns
not
about
the soap opera of artists
on a crowded art site during their heated metamorphosis
transforming themselves
from an ugly worm
into a colourful
butterfly
Thao Chuong
2015-02-04
9 Years Ago
Good evening Fran. Long time no talk. You look very sharp with your new avatar. I didn’t understand much of your thought in the post. Maybe it could be “déjà vou” that led to my following poem
Description: The Long Way Home, walking the train tracks no longer used provides for solitude.
The Long Way Home
I saw you walking straight
while I were on the other side of the railroad tracks
we were heading toward the same direction
I
kept
pace with you
while trying to catch your attention
as soon as I saw you turning your face at me
I waved and smiled
you shrugged
but smiled
back
on
that day
it was my luck
I had crossed your path
otherwise our walk on the two parallel tracks could have lead us to
nowhere in the infinite horizon
the long way home
for both
of us
Thao Chuong
2015-02-04
9 Years Ago
I'm drinking...tea, my forth cup of the day and wondering what kind of treat I can feed my cats sitting by the fire. Life is very good.
9 Years Ago
Glad to have the night off from work. I've been listening to a lot of Simon and Garfunkel lately and have been thinking about doing a painting inspired by "The Boxer".
9 Years Ago
Posted by Monsieur Danl one Day Ago
“I met a fifteen year old prostitute at breakfast this morning. She was sitting at the counter having breakfast. She told me a disturbing story about her life. I will use it in my next creation.”
Title: Mindy's Night Of Death
Creator: Danl
Medium: Mixed
Series: Ladies Of Pigalle
Year 2012
-Script: Live Interview With Mindy
“I was in the ally giving some oral pleasure to a guy. Another
girl was a few feet away. She was on her knees with a big guy
standing in front of her. He was yelling something in Russian. The
girl started to stand up when he grabbed her by the hair,
Pulled her head back. Reached into his pocket. There was a
flash. A loud bang. He ran past me out of the ally. She laid
there. Blood everywhere. I will never forget that night. Or his face.
” - Mindy
I like this series of yours that led to my today's thought
Sex Trade Business
her innocence was stolen
her childhood was robbed
if she were lucky, her life must be different
she could still be in school
enjoying the good time of her teenage
holding a boy’s hands
in her romantic
dream of
love
instead of selling her own fresh meat
on side streets
or dark alleys
in Paris
you felt upset
listening to the disturbing story
from the fifteen-year-old prostitute
whom you met
that morning
at a street
café
yet
she isn’t alone
not the only child
in this bothersome world dominated by men
like her- over two millions of children
are sexually
exploited
every
year
in
the sex trade business
for nauseated desires of many sadistic men
urging for erotic sex
with little
kids
I believe those predators
must have their balls
fully chopped off
to the core
what do you think?
Thao Chuong
2015-02-05
9 Years Ago
Good Day! Thank you Lisa Kaiser, Jim Taylor, and Maria Masella for dropping and sharing your thoughts, especially to Jim for your nice words. Have a restful day you all
9 Years Ago
crime, horrible things.
there are people that can do worse things than what we can think of, because it would hurt us to even think of it.
And that is also why they can do them.
i am doing a one square meter painting about swizerland, since i just received the swiss nationality.
right now i can't look at it anymore, it is too big, red, dark and nightmarish.
9 Years Ago
- Good to see ya Viva. Here is my love. Help yourself. Take much as you want (lol0
-How are you doing these days., Sr. Sweezey.
- Georg Hoffmann; Thank you for dropping by and for sharing your thought
9 Years Ago
Posted by Natalie Holland -one Day Ago
Everyone thinks of changing the world, but no one thinks of changing himself. ~ Leo Tolstoy
Description: I always like to look on the optimistic side of life, but I am realistic enough to know that life is a complex matter. ~ Walt Disney
Your painting has revealed the Dark Side of Mine. Nice night, my friend
The Dark Side Of Mine
I’m very optimistic in my thoughts
confidently thinking
I’m always right
everyone else
is wrong
I
often point
my finger at others
even for my own mistakes
believing what I know is the truth
it is mistaken for anyone
not to agree with
my belief
you must be kidding criticizing me
it’s
you
and the world
that must be changed
not me
Thao Chuong
2015-02-05
9 Years Ago
"crime, horrible things.
there are people that can do worse things than what we can think of, because it would hurt us to even think of it.
And that is also why they can do them." Posted by Georg Hoffmann 16 Hours Ago
Of Man and Cat
when
weeding
and turning soil over
for new seedlings
she often finds stinky treasure
unexpectedly buried
under her vegetable bed
she had seen dead birds many times on her backyard before
but
this morning
she is really upset
when witnessing by her own eyes
her neighbor’s cat playing
with his live catch
on her patio
the poor songbird’s badly injured
having a broken wing
dragging itself on green lawn
trying to escape
but unable
to take
off
the predator’s playing his sadistic catch-and-release game
to enjoy his victim’s
desperate struggle
to its slow
death
even
though
she loves cats
she hates their evil nature
of killing for fun not for food
she forgets some human beings are the same
in their fun games
of sport hunting
and fishing
Thao Chuong
2015-02-06
9 Years Ago
"The opposite of love is not hate, it is indifference". Posted by Tony Murray - two Days Ago
The Simple Way Of Life and Love
(To Vincent and Victor – my grandsons)
I have so much to learn
from your
simple
Way
of
living
at ease
and love without hate
you’re pure
you’re pristine
you’re innocent
like a piece of blank paper
you have a lot
to show
off
your bright eyes and sweet smile light up my day
you bring me back to the world of wonders in my childhood
you’ve taught me how to keep a sound mind
you make me laugh naturally
from my heart
again
I feel so lucky having you hoping around
tis’ the most joyful and
peaceful time
of my life
Thao Chuong
2015-02-06
9 Years Ago
“I'm drinking...tea, my forth cup of the day and wondering what kind of treat I can feed my cats sitting by the fire. Life is very good.” posted by Lisa Kaiser one Day Ago
@ Good morning Lisa: I was about to write poem related to your drinking tea by the fire, but I changed my mind after viewing your awesome work Poetry a couple of times. The abstract painting offers movements of harmony with unique colours and nice brushworks. Through this painting, I could even connected myself to your emotions at the time you painted it. It’s an inspiring abstract for a song lyric.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Have a restful weekend to you all
Poetry (Song Lyric)
what
inside
my mind and heart
I let it drift
I let it flow
I let it pour out
I let it run wild
I let go
of
myself
poetry is dead
ready to be buried
let me be free
free…free…free…
thought in my mind
emotion in my heart
I let it drip
I let it drop
I let it trickle
I let it dribble
I let go
of
everything
poetry is dead
ready to be buried
let everything be free
free…free…free…
cyclone in my mind
typhoon in my heart
I let it twirl
I let it whirl
I let it blow
I let it breeze
I let go
of
the world
poetry is dead
ready to be buried
let the world free
free…free…free…
rhymed
or unrhymed
words or without words
I puke
I vomit
I throw up
‘til
I drown myself
in a shallow puddle
of dead
poetry
poetry is dead
ready to be buried
let everyone be free
free…free…free…
Thao Chuong
2015-02-07
9 Years Ago
The Worst Foe
it’s my own
fear
anger
anxiety
distress
frustration
that pull me down
it’s my own
delight
happiness
excitement
that take me off guard
it’s I
who let my mood
control over
my life
I am such a fool
who often forgets
my worst foe is not anyone else
but me
myself
Thao Chuong
2015-02-08
9 Years Ago
Cold Market Day by Steven Bateson Native American Photography
The day is almost over and its toiling is through;
Is there anyone to utter now a kindly word of you?
Can you say tonight, in parting with the day that’s slipping fast,
That you helped a single brother of the many that you passed?
John Hall
9 Years Ago
Welcome and thank Steven Bateson for posting your artwork and the poem. Have a good night.
Hi Jim Taylor
What's a great painting! Here is my poem coming from your painting Time To Go In. Have a good night Jim.
A Quiet Night In Town
silent
around
midnight
the noisy town was in deep sleep
she could hear clearly tedious rhythms
“tick tack tick tock” at each second
from the pendulum
swinging back
and forth
the cuckoo clock on the wall
kept pounding inside her head
with its torturing strikes
at every quarter
she tried to focus her mind
on the tune of his acoustic guitar
from the rooftop patio
of her penthouse
she could hear the sound of his fingers running, pressing and twisting the strings
and moaning response
from his Yamaha
playing
solo
he was singing songs of lost loves
broken hearts
and despair
she gradually fell asleep
by the lullabies
of his sweet
voice
Thao Chuong
2015-02-09
9 Years Ago
Thank Jim Taylor and Billy East for sharing your thoughts. Have a god night.
Billy: You've made me think hard to find a place where you could use your sword to get along well with others (lol)
A Place Where We All Can Get Along
quiet
neat and clean
the best place in town
rows and rows of shelters
on both side of the main road
with well-manicured lawn
and colourful
flowers
the safest neighbourhood
without criminals
no break-ins
no police
on patrol
at night
it's
the most
peaceful community
no one wants to complain against others
no one cares to swear at hungry crows
nosily fighting in early morning
on weekends
the only place
where we – humans - can get along well
and we all rest in peace
for good
Thao Chuong
2015-02-10
9 Years Ago
On the road I met Louise
fun to be with, hard to please
she wanted rings, a house, home and children
she made a long list, I found bewildering
she wanted to see Paris and paint
she had our lives all planned out, and just couldn't wait
then there was acting, the stage and silver screen
that’s the thing about Louise; she sure can dream
she married another man who went along with all she planned
and ended up a housewife with three kids and a minivan
20 years goes by and she gives me a call
just to let me know she is divorced and the world is small
I pictured you in Paris on the Champs-Elysees ,with brushes and canvas painting away
She said she traded in her dreams for security
gave up on all those wild notions, including me
so what have you done she asked with your life and all?
nothing much, I answered, I've just been sitting here waiting for your call.
------------------------------------------------------------------------
Lets do lunch
a fondness for finding things
nails, coins, bottle caps or diamond rings
brings out the combers
mostly loners
waving the wand of their metal detection devices
in the hope they discover an object that entices
I was such a one
seeking lost treasures for profit and fun
beneath the trunk of a scraggy pine
I dug up a most unusual find
a woman’s purse
frightening at first
for this is just a hobby
I didn't want to find a body
digging deeper
I found no sleeper
no cache of human bone
so, I took my find and headed home
The purse contained a quarter, dime nickle and penny
forty one cents , not a lot of money
but this was a most curious find
as the date on these coins boggles my mind
I found the coins in the year 2014 AD
the date on each coin is 2035- a mystery to me
of all the possibilities I've tried to unravel
what these coins suggest to me is time travel
If a lady from the future is reading this , which is just a hunch.
I want her know I have her money and I’d love to take her lunch
Billy East 2015
9 Years Ago
Just return from three glorious weeks on my favorite dessert island in the Caribbean and my mind is still swimming...
A neighbor called out, “Welcome home”… i waved back and said, "i never leave home”…
9 Years Ago
Thao Chuong’s; "The Worst Foe”, gave me thought...
Teardrop Prisms
when i cry of dreams lost
all seems so shattered
in the prism of teardrops
but when i feel the wind
upon my skin
and the breath within
i stay outside the circles
i have drawn
and cope with the beginnings
to survive the ends
Ed Meredith
11 / 02 / 2015
9 Years Ago
Hey Viet this is exactly the place I have been looking for. They dont have those noisy leaf blowers do they though??!!
9 Years Ago
Good evening
@ Billy East: Thanks for sharing your poems. I enjoyed treading them.
@ Ed Meredith: Welcome home, my friend. Good to see you back. Thanks for the echo.
@ Jim Taylor: Haa..haa.. It seems that you are tired of leaf blowers. I may have a humorless poem about them later (lol)
Have a restful evening to all.
9 Years Ago
A Brew Please
the Irish pub
in downtown
on late Friday afternoon
was noisy and crowded
like a war zone
in Afghanistan
no
one
could
hear anything
but the ear-deafening music
so
loud
that people had to yell at other's ears
in conversations
he
preferred
not to stand
in the long line
at the service counter
so he sat in a corner and waited for waiters
he almost lost his patience
when
a waitress
was walking by
with a tray full of glasses
but didn`t
look at
him
he raised his hand and shouted
-hey! a brew please!
-pardon me! I can't hear ya
he stood up and yelled louder
-a brew for me
-sorry sir. i'll be back in a minute
very
disappointed
he dropped his butts on the chair
thinking of the easy "u-brew"
on the quiet deck
with his dog
at home
Thao Chuong
2015-02-11
9 Years Ago
Viet, good take on the image. I can relate to that. I don't really frequent these places much these days but sure do enjoy a few with friends when it happens.
A Toast to you and all on this thread, and FAA people for that matter.
9 Years Ago
Yay!
Nice day to Nicole Whittaker and Jim Taylor
A Brew Please and Cheer to the Cloudy Day
nothing for you
a highball for her
a shot of tequila for him
a beer for me
bottom up
cheer
to everybody's health
to someone's hell
for a better
day
oh no!
I know you don't like alcohol
but please mind your own business
just forget and
leave us
alone
the party couldn't be canceled as you've asked
no
need
to talk further about it
I've
known
quite well
drinking alcohol is stupid
self-destructive
it's a disease
highly
contaminated
so
stay away
as far as you could
or you would catch the headache
from my hangover
Thao Chuong
2015-02-12
9 Years Ago
THE THOUGHT
i had a thought today
it something i wanted to say
and while i was writing
of something so exciting
THE THOUGHT!!!
it just slipped away
Ed Meredith
Today
9 Years Ago
Haa...Ed, I know where and what it is about Have a restful day, my friend.
An echo to THE THOUGHT
The Thought You've Lost
the thought
you've
lost
you cannot find at any lost-n-found unit
but
don't be too panic
I've
just found it
fully exposed
and revealed to the public
on a beach
in Florida
you can have it back now
it's too late
you could no longer keep it secrete
it`s
about
the exotic girl
you`ve met at your favorite dessert island in the Caribbean
and so on...
Thao Chuong
2015-02-12
9 Years Ago
Good day to you Viet. My thoughts today are of our days living in Arizona and thinking of jumping in the car and driving out there for a few weeks. Tired of the snow and cold.
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com
9 Years Ago
Description:
"Desert Spring" is a plein air painting by Bill Tomsa, depicting a beautiful Southwestern spring day when the Sonoran Desert bursts forth with bright greens, yellows, reds purples and many other colors not usually associated with the desert. This particular scene is in Phoenix, Arizona just south of South Mountain in an area known as Ahwatukee Foothills Village. By Bill Tomsa
Good day Bill. Enjoy a hot cup of coffee after shoveling the snow. Have a restful evening,
Perception About the Weather
white
powder
from the nature
looks magically beautiful
only
on TV
for those
who live in tropical weather
but
NOT
for the guy
who has been buried in deep piles of snow
and sweating to his last breath
trying clear the driveway
having sex by the fire sounds very romantic
only
for younger folks
but for older guys
like him
sex
NO longer works
especially
during his
sound
s..
...l
.....e
..........e
.............p
tired
of shoveling snow
early in the morning
and lighting the fireplace
without exotic sex
late at
night
he's
dreaming of leaving the snow-buried city New York
for his former home
in Arizona
stop dreaming
and make your day better
so keep shoveling snow and enjoy a cup of hot chocolate or coffee
and if possible
try a little bit
of hot
sex
why not?
Thao Chuong
2015-02-12
9 Years Ago
The Lost Love In Midnight Rain
she
wakes up
at midnight
all’s quiet
no
symphony
of nocturnal insects
only
melancholy melody
from whispering wind is weaving
with sharp sound of water needles against tempered glass
as if
tedious
rhythms
of lonesomeness
keep striking non stop
inside herself grows the craving for romance
warm touches
sweet kisses
love and
sex
in a seclude place
disappointedly,
she looks at him in bed
drooling like a baby
and snoring as a locomotive
in his sleep
she couldn’t believe
how much change in the man
whom she
used to
adore
she
sighs
and tries
to hold back her tears from rolling off
as the blue rain keeps falling down outside
she
weeps
in deep silence
Thao Chuong
2015-02-13
9 Years Ago
Early Morning Walk On Goose Trail
we
walk
side by side
not holding hands
without much romance
but we’re attached to each other
more than any lovers
it’s
around
9 degree Celsius
it’s too warm for an early morning on a winter day
the sun’s still sleeping somewhere inside the gloomy sky
at
six
o’clock
on Saturday
quiet on the Goose Trail
no one else
walking or
jogging
only my dog and I
leisurely stroll
slowly
Thao Chuong
2015-02-14
9 Years Ago
Description: My Heart's On Fire - Vivian Anderson fine art digital art , celebrating valentines, love, fire, passion. Art created from an original painting into fine art digital art.
On Valentine Day
she
didn’t know
who had sent bouquets of flowers
to her every weekday
for a couple of
months
until on a Friday afternoon
he showed up at her office after work
and invited her
to a dinner
it
was
how their love started
unlike Romeo and Juliette
their story had been going smoothly
with a happy ending
of a honeymoon
unfortunate
romance is like a flower
beautiful when blooming
but soon will fall off
in pollination
for a fruit
to come
out
love is cooling down
gradually
bit by
bit
in a marriage
it
is only
warmed up once a year
on Valentine Day
with the same old ritual
a bouquet of long stemmed red roses
dinner in a restaurant
and sex in
a hotel
room
she
wonders
whether love still remains
its genuine romance
in a marriage
Thao Chuong
2015-02-15
9 Years Ago
Thanks for posting the video, Xoanxo.
Your nice poem goes well with the music and your dreamy voice. I enjoy your poetry as well as the artistic way that you visually present them in videos. Have a great day, my friend.
9 Years Ago
Dreamin’ (song lyrics)
I’m dreamin’
of
chasing
you by the waves
on a sandy beach
when the sun is glazing at noon
I’m dreamin’
of
walking
with you
on a rural trail
under silver moonlight at night
I’m dreamin’
of
watching
your long hair
flying in cool air
when the wind blows
I’m dreamin’
of
sharing
with you
an umbrella
when heavy rain is pouring down
I’m dreamin’
of
holding
you tight in my arms
on a cold day
when it snows
I’m dreamin’
of
kissing you
on a park bench
under maple trees
when leaves flurry in autumn
I’m dreamin’
of
falling down
on my knees like a slave
worshiping his deity
during his lifetime
I’m dreamin’
of
dreams
huh…uh…uh…huh…
Thao Chuong
2015-02-15
9 Years Ago
my thought of the day...listen to this music..experience a prodigy ...and feel good...
http://www.pachamama.org/blog/video-aloha-ke-akua-medicine-for-the-people
9 Years Ago
Welcome Joseph J Stevens and thank you for sharing your thought of music and your post about the song; Enjoy a good night.
Mystical Music of Nature
coming
from the sea
the wind
blows on a sandy beach
fully covered
by snow
it
hurls
white powder
all over the skin-biting cold air
the
beach
always noisily crowded in summer
now completely
empty
as
no-man-land
he's listening to the whistling song
of nature
that
no
man
could ever sing the same mystical tune
Thao chuong
2015-02-16
9 Years Ago
Poetry
would it be possible for me
to throw those
nonsense verses
into a trash
can
?
words are
nothing
but
tiny cells
to imprison myself
let the waves of fury carry my anger away
to the vast seas
inside of
me
let the wind blow my sorrow
to infinite horizons
of my immense
mind
let the bon fires burn
my terror to ashes
in the jungles
of mine
let the sun light my passion
deep inside
the boundless
soul
without
ancestral sins
let moonlight shine my pathway
leading to fragrance
of sweet love
buried
deep
inside my heart
let my life keep going
on the smooth flow
of its own
rhythms
and let silence free myself
from being tangled
in the web of
my boloney
poetry
Thao Chuong
2016-02-15
9 Years Ago
Earthquakes! I just heard there was a 6.8 earthquake in Japan. On Valentine's Day we were in the epicenter of a 3.5 earthquake here on the Sunshine Coast of British Columbia. It's the first time I ever heard an earthquake (a big bang and grating sounds) as well as feeling the shaking. It was scary! So I was wondering, if I had time to grab a few things, what would I grab?
9 Years Ago
Good evening and welcome Beauty For God, Peggy Collins, and Lisa Kaiser
@Beauty: I echoed one of your interesting work
@ Peggy: your comment made me think about the BIG ONE that could happen anytime to Vancouver Island. We've been preparing for it. But no one knows how well we could deal with it, until it comes
@ Lisa: Thanks for the feedback.
Have a restful night to all of you
Description: No matter how fractured our outer lives appear, our hearts will remain whole. It can feel broken, it can feel trampled and bleeding, but our hearts remain protected and we will survive and our hearts will go on. "Be strong and courageous. Do not be afraid or terrified because of them, for the Lord your God goes with you; He will never leave you nor forsake you." Deuteronomy 31:6
Shattered Heart
he was acting
like
a naughty child
who deliberately threw
a pebble against a glass window
then ran away
as quick as
possible
she
could hear
clearly a sharp blow
at her fragile heart
then
followed
by shattering sound
still
in love
with him
she kneeled on a bench of a church pew
and prayed for
his quick return
to heal her
wound
would God help her turn
that rotten Satan
into an angel
to salvage
her lost
love?
Thao Chuong
2015-02-16
9 Years Ago
My thought of the day...thanks for asking.. MY thought is "Look Before You Leap" You never know who's life you are affecting with your words in type or otherwise.. Jean
9 Years Ago
Viet, I didn't realize that you live in Victoria. It's in the highest risk area for earthquakes. I just read that we have a 1 in 10 chance of the big one happening within the next 50 years here in B.C.
9 Years Ago
Bonjour Jean Gabriel Poivre. Thank you very much for sharing your thought. I`ll get back to you late this evening when I have time for further thought about it.
Good morning Peggy Collins. Thank you for the dialogue. We have often experienced minor tremors nearly every year. Once in a while we get some strong enough to knock pictures off walls, or create cracks in chimneys. Yet we`ve been lucky so far that the Big One hasn`t come yet. I look at your art portfolio, you have a lot of stunning works.
Have a restful day to all.
The Big Earthquake
only
God knows
when it would come
on its tough and rough arrival
the Big One could drive whole Vancouver Island
deep down to
the ocean
floor
I wonder
what I could I take with me
as I run to higher grounds for safe shelter
from the coming
tsunami
I'd love to take them all
my art
my cat
my dog
my better-half
and many other things
ah
honey
I am so sure
you're the first one
whom I never leave behind
in my entire life
until I
die
but
who
knows
at that time
I could be too terrified
and the survival instinct of an animal
could mechanically drives me blindly insane
to automatically flee
by myself alone
with both feet
on my
neck
oh
honey
now I know
what to do
when it comes
I must hold you tight
and let the tsunami take you and me
to the bottom
of rough
sea
so we would be happy
to be together
forever
Thao Chuong
2015-02-17
9 Years Ago
WARNING!
WARNING!
Nudity for only adults with open mind. Viewer`s discretion is advised
Fruits Of Passion
a hot day
on the beach
many hot girls walked by the waves
in two pieces
of a sexy
bikini
tiny
enough
to display
almost everything
of those mysterious lures
supposing to be
hidden
he watched them cat-walking nearly naked
his mind was fried by a fancy dream
of having a good time
in bed to
death
he was ready for being burnt
into ashes by
the hot
fire
from one of those volcanoes
but his worst fear of a terribly cramping headache
from the aftermath hangover
did turn his
mind
off
he closed his eyes
and tried
to take
a nap
Thao Chuong
2015-02-17
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Viet. Let's hope we never have to decide what we can take and what we have to leave behind.
9 Years Ago
Three Senryu Echos of Viet's;
WARNING!
WARNING!
Nudity for only adults with open mind. Viewer`s discretion is advised
blind are staring men
over-looking innocence
enigmatic nude
the lubricious eye
misses erotic beauty
in nude line and form
not exploitive sex
a psychological quest
eroticism
Ed Meredith
9 Years Ago
Thank you Peggy. Spring is coming to Sunshine Coast. Have a restful time.
@ Ed Meredith
Here is the echo to your echo. Sleep tight without any nightmare about her (lol)
Dancing With the Beast
she
always
complains
against men
for seeing female beauty
as a sex
toy
but
she often
reveals those most erotic parts of her sexy body
to attract hungry eyes of men
arouses their sexual desire
allures them
to her dirty
game
and
makes
herself ready
for further exploration
who
must be
blamed for
the murky perception of
her own
self
Thao Chuong
2015-02-18
9 Years Ago
Nantucket
There is a good deal of misery in poetry
all those references to death
ashes to ashes
Orpheus crashes
and least we forget mythology
anthropomorphism in simile
unrequited love is another big one
a plethora of gloom, not a lot of fun
Yes, there are joys, bliss and supernal elation
and a lighter side, like a smooth jazz radio station
Beneath it all , below the dead and the quick
grins, the lewd and lowly limerick:
If Romeo and Juliet went to Nantucket
they both would have lived, but -------------
===================================
It sure is cold outside
I can’t recall a cold this brutal, or relentless
my memories are frozen so comparisons are pointless
When the fire burns out I’ll stare at the ashes
content the wood gave all it could ,in sparkling collapses
I placed the last log , it’s warmth reached deep within
and just when I thought I could beat this cold, the roof caved in
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Billy East 2015
9 Years Ago
Thank you for sharing your poems, Billy.
Tonight is the New Year Eve.
TO YOU ALL:
HAPPY LUNAR NEW YEAR
ENJOY THE YEAR OF GOAT FULL OF GOOD HEALTH, INNER PEACE, JOY, AND HAPPINESS.
Thank you for reading or sharing your thought of the day on this thread. Cheer
Regards
Viet Tran
www.papercollage.ca
9 Years Ago
Description
Photograph of two sandhill cranes flying past misty mountains at dawn with a full moon in the pink and purple sky. The forest trees covering the mountains can be seen in the distance through the fog at sunrise. This is a composite of two photographs...the photo of the moon about to set at dawn was taken on the Sunshine Coast of British Columbia, Canada, and the image of sandhill cranes in flight was taken in Ladner, British Columbia.
Full Moon At Dawn
early
morning
mist’s rising up
over distant mountains
two sandhill cranes relaxingly fly
side by side
toward
open
wetlands
for romantic time
during the mating season
the night is over
but
still
hangs
around
the full moon
in the roseate sky
the sleeping sun is about to wake up
and takes over for
a brand new
day
Thao chuong
2015-02-18
9 Years Ago
The Luna New Year's Cheers
to
you, Viva
to your health
and most importantly
to the fact
that
we're
still kicking alive
at this very instant
moment
Viet Tran
9 Years Ago
My dear friend Viet and all my other FAA friends;
Chúc Mừng Năm Mới…
and Tiền vô như nước… LOL
4636
born in the year of the tiger
as the dragons and loins danced
among plum blossoms, kumquats
sunflowers
eggplant and
bamboo
bringing good fortune
with health
prosperity and luck
on my very first day
of the new year
evil was banished
and all were welcomed
in happiness and good cheer
on that very first day
of my new year
Ed Meredith
First day of the Year of the Goat
9 Years Ago
Good morning Viva and Ed.
Thank you ,my friend Ed. Chúc Mừng Năm Mới… and Tiền vô như nước… until to you dial 911 to rescue you out of your flooded house LOL
I Look For Any Hint of Spring
(on the First Day of Lunar New Year)
I
open
my bedroom window
and pop my head outside
to look for something joyful to cheer
on the first day of the Lunar New Year
a
flow
of cold air
strikes at my face
and quickly pours into the room
green lawn
in my backyard
camouflages itself
under a thin film
of white
patches
of fog’s slowly
rising in the wildlife habitat of the back field
blurring the nice view of distant hills
I
hear
high-pitched sounds
of two sparrows chirping
chasing each other
on fruit trees
I’m happy to see some pinkish buds
shooting out from branches
on the leafless plum trees
a clear hint
that
spring
is coming pretty soon
just around
the corner
Thao Chuong
2015-02-19
9 Years Ago
Sundry Thought
(on the First Day of Lunar New Year)
I
wish
I could have
sunshine on rainy days
blue sky over gloomy clouds
summer heat during freezing winter
spring blossom for falling leaves in autumn
I
hope
I would see sweet smiles
blooming
on your
lovely
face
I
dream of
your aromatic love taking over
my lonesome
heart
if
somehow
I could keep them all
my wish
my hope
my dream
completely alive with me
I would be able to enjoy
every happy moment
during my
entire
life
no
need
for me
to await 'til the day
any of these come true
Thao Chuong
2015-01-19
9 Years Ago
The Geisha
like
a butterfly’s
flapping its wings
into the bright
sunny
sky
her
colorful
kimono is swinging in the air
with her dancing
rhythms
the music steadily rests to its last note
as she’s slowly dropping
her robe on
the floor
the noisy
room becomes
completely silent
the air is frozen for a moment
as if those drinking men were deadly intoxicated
by the natural beauty
of her flawless
body
not
by hot
saké
Thao Chuong
2015-02-20
9 Years Ago
Viet, thanks for posting my Geisha with your sybaritic and humorously telling poem…
My Echoing Geisha:
The Geisha
she is the artist
and the art
a lotus blossom
in a floating world
singing and dancing
service
in conversation
and wit
she entertains desires
and the fantasy
of elegant slavery
while ever maintaining self-possesion
and never asking for more
behind the mask
of shadow and secret
the woman
Ed Meredith
2015-02-21
9 Years Ago
I am nothing ...yet everything . I am free ...yet enslaved . dis-ease...it is i mind issue... manifested into the body .
9 Years Ago
Good morning
@ Ed Meredith: I love it my friend,
@ Tom Druin: Welcome Tom. Thank very much you for dropping by and sharing your thought today. I enjoyed your Zen-like approach in which you raised the complex issue of yin-yang only in a couple of words. But I could feel the strong impact when I reads it.
Have a restful weekend.
Reflection
(Senryu)
it’s the eyes - the mind
or trees drowned in calm water
which one authentic?
Thao Chuong
2015-02-21
9 Years Ago
Description overlay...Infuse. Tom druin leland,illinois. photographer...These pictures of time:they fade in the light of there meaning sublime. "ralph waldo emerson "1803-1882 u.s. essayist,poet,philospher."the spinx "poems 1847
Conquering Delusion
(Senryu)
nothing could be held
inside a human’s bare hands
even his own fate
Thao Chuong
2015-02-21
9 Years Ago
Viet, how beautiful that you can write Poetry! For I still trying to remember how to spell.
Thank you for sharing your poem Viet, To-Tam
9 Years Ago
Thank you Chi To Tam for your kind words.
FYI: English isn’t my mother tongue. I often don’t know how to spell. Most of the time, I rely on Spell Checker in my computer for my writing. Without that chief editor of mine, I would write no poetry at all (lol). Have a good evening.
Description
Precious Sardonyx Zen Stones on Sand was photograph by To-Tam Gerwe with oil painting background.
Zen
found inside a tone
not in a Zen master’s mind
absolute stillness
Thao Chuong
2015-02-22
9 Years Ago
Description: After a trip back to Vietnam in 1990, I spent sleepless nights haunted by nightmares and flashbacks of what life would have been had I remained there after the American troops withdrew in 1975. The deep heartache and fear have compelled me to paint and have my sister To-Lan copy my painting for this hand embroidery as a memorial picture. This tragic war which took so many lives. I feel a debt to all the people who had sacrify their life so I can have a better life. The Vietnam War forever changed many lives. The Vietnam
veteran's wall holds over 58,000 names of the American heroes. Vietnam is the site of thousands of marked and unmarked graves. Every one of those patriots had a family and friends who still feel the loss. The US has the wall with all the names but in the Vietnamese cemeteries 75% of the graves have no names. Many are mass Graves.
@ Chi To Tam & Chi To Lan: Thank you Chi both for your painting and embroidery. Your work reminds me of my brothers who lost their lives for both sides in the nonsense war between North Vietnam (supported by Soviet Unions and Red China) and South Vietnam (supported by USA).
I wrote the following poem in 2008 about an American friend of mine who fought side by side with South Vietnamese troops against the quick expansion of the International Communism in the sixties and seventies.
An Unsung Hero
[In Memory of 58,159 U.S. soldiers who devoted their lives for freedom
against the Communist Block (Soviet Union; China, and North Vietnam) during Vietnam War.]
You were from the United States - other side of Pacific Ocean
the country of freedom
of modern cities and skyscrapers
of Statue de la Liberté holding the torch of flame.
You left behind your loved ones
the pregnant wife
‘n one year old child just learning how to talk
you gave up your peaceful life
full of convenience and comfort
came here to fight the bloody war against
those heartless evils
the cold-blooded North Vietnamese communists
and their masters in Beijing ‘n Moscow
full of feudal ideology
to paint the whole world
Red.
You held the symbol of freedom
stripes and stars on your flag
against the red hammer and sickle
icon of totalitarianism ‘n dictatorship.
You were under attacks
by tropical heat, mosquitoes, bugs, flies
‘n camouflaged guerrillas with hit-and-run tactic
communist terrorists cowardly trapped with TNT explosives
detonated themselves as live bombs
for suicide attacks at crowded markets, theatres, coffee shops,
nightclubs, trains, buses, ‘n school yards
killed their own people: children, civilians, and innocent victims
just to take your live away.
My American friend - the unsung hero
you were no longer here but still rested peacefully in my heart
I lost my country
became driftwood
in exile.
We lost the battle but won the war
Our fight had never been wasted
it led to the collapse of Soviet Union
and shattered forever
the fanatical desire of the communists' pipe dream
O Red globalization.
Now you could rest in peace
and smile
at last.
Thao Chuong
9 Years Ago
Medium:Tapestry - Textile - Hand Embroidery
Description: Bird of Paradise is a hand embroidery by my sister To-Lan is a copy of my painting.
Part of this proceed will be donate to Autism charities in VN and US. Thank you so much for looking.
Sundry Thought of Birds’ Paradise
unlimited sky is
the only
limit
for birds roaming in the wild
freedom of flying becomes a lost instinct
when wings clipped
or imprisoned
in a little
cage
what could a freeman enjoy
when voluntarily confines himself
on God’s Heaven
eternally?
Thao Chuong
2015-02-23
9 Years Ago
Just incredible work, Tapestry - Textile - Hand Embroidery To-Tam Gerwe! From concept through what must be quite labor intense. I can feel your joy creating the pieces.
With another great poem by Viet Tran!
9 Years Ago
@ Jim Taylor: Thank you very much for your kind feedback about To Tam's hand embroidery. I think that the creative process could be very time consuming and it would also require patience and detailed oriented skills.
@ Maria Masella: It is quite interesting to know that you turn your fear into art. Here is my poem - an echo to your painting with a simple solution of how to deal with your terror of going to work tomorrow (lol).
The Nurse's Guardian Angel
floated on a tiny piece of debris
and drifted on a rough sea
his
hope for
a rescue craft
has kept him going
for many
days
unlike that sailor
her
ship
isn’t sinking
she is still safe and sound
drinking and smoking on its deck
yet
her mind’s fully occupied by terrors from some reasons
that have yet been materialized
furthermore
who could know for sure
what
would
come tomorrow
she
needs
no guardian angel for her terror
but only some straight shots at a local pub
then back home
for a good
sleep
for sure
no fear left
as she’d be calling in sick tomorrow
for her drilling headache
from the hangover
Thao Chuong
2015-02-24
9 Years Ago
Oh,Viet....the riches displayed here! So wonderful fine art, given us at great pains, and your supportive poems, to enrich us all, and the lovely response of your readers in support! All very amazing! Congratulations and thanks to all contributors.
9 Years Ago
Good Day Viva
Thank you very your sweet thought of this thread.
Here is an echo to the luring title of your work (lol).
Restful time to you all.
Oh My Darling
you would never know
how much love
I have reserved
just for
you
buried
inside my heart
something impossible to define
it’s
as aromatic as
fragrant
smell
of tea roses in hot air on a summer day
or of jasmine blooms in cool breeze at night
oh my darling
you’re
softer than sponge
harder than a piece of rock
sweeter than honey slowly absorbed into the tip my tongue
and bitter as a sugar-coated pill stuck in my throat
I
touch
fine skin
on your smiling face
closed both eyes of mine
and take
a free
fall
deep
…..
…
…
..
..
.
down
into your mystical
world of
love
Thao Chuong
2015-02-24
9 Years Ago
Viet, thank you for your beautiful verse in response to my Roses.....I reply with this quote, learned very early in my life, and treasured as a truism...
"there is a certain ecstacy in wanting what you cannot have".........
Edit...from the play "Old Acquaintance", and subsequent film for Bette Davis.
9 Years Ago
@ Maria Masella: You sound very relaxed. I would guess that either you did call in sick or your (yesterday's) terror didn't come true at work. Whatever happened it was over. So you could start another type of fear for tomorrow (lol). BTW: tomorrow is always a magic word to me
@ Viva Anderson: I think that the code you posted itself is quite ecstasy. It could be more frenzy through the wild process of my own interpretation.
Have a restful time to everyone
9 Years Ago
Source: http://fineartamerica.com/showmessages.php?messageid=2358536
The following poem is an echo of mine to Patrick Anthony Pierson’s work Bonafish Final - 3D version of street painting
The Creator
like
a young guy
makes love with his newly wed
trying to create
his first
child
the artist turned to the left
he twisted to the right
he leaned back and forth
he propped up and down
in his best
effort
to
find most enjoyable position
for each of his dedicated move
he could feel sharp pain on
his neck
his back
his hands
his knees
and his entire body
as if he have just had sex for endless rounds
he had no problem
since he could show his wife
some paint
on
his hair
his shirt
his pants
even on his butts
he enjoyed the process of creating an illusion of reality
through his three-dimension art
on hard asphalt
of a city
street
unlike God
Who created only once
but keeps holding his work
by requiring humans
to worship Him
for good
the contemporary creator had no worry
to let his kids go free
unconditionally
so soon as
they could
since
he always feels
as if his art would stay
inside his heart
forever
Thao Chuong
2015-02-24
9 Years Ago
Two Entwined Lives
they used to sit side by side
on their sun deck
hand in hand
in silence
on sunny
days
what was going on?
no
sign
them
neither could be seen around
only two empty
chairs
left
are
they alive
or already dead?
still in love with each other in a burning hell
or divorced and living happily
in separation on
the same
heaven?
Thao Chuong
2015-02-25
9 Years Ago
A Gift
A Guardian Angel arrives,
so many gifts to bear.
Mortals do not see
the burden
upon her shoulders,
only the golden light
in her hallowed hands.
9 Years Ago
Welcome Karen. thanks for sharing your poetry
My echo to your short verse
Two Chairs of the Single
without her
his life is quite simple
he could relax his back on one chair
and has other chair
for his empty
beer
cans
Thao Chuong
2015-02-25
9 Years Ago
Thank you Maria. I appreciate your nice words. Have a good night.
You have one of the most interesting artist's bios that I have read so far on faa site
About Maria Masella:
Maria Masella is a burn nurse by night, and an artist on her nights off. She uses art as an escape from the stresses of being a burn nurse. Her art is generally fueled by alcohol and music. Thus being dubbed 'Drunk Art'. Mrs. Masella's choice medium is acrylic paint. She has no formal experience in the art world, and just wishes for anyone and everyone to get lost in her drunk art. Cheers!
9 Years Ago
Thank you Karen.
Thank you Thao.
It is beyond what I ever could have imagined for my life to be like this, here, with two poets actually speaking about my artwork..........and both so perspicacious..and such beautiful words/thoughts/verse.
I am in poet's heaven, on earth.
Yes, Maria, this is a beautiful thread...............you are a beautiful girl........life is wonderful.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Viva
There's no poet's heaven - only poet's hell on earth (lol). Have a great day in Sidney -the real paradise on earth.
9 Years Ago
Ah, you've had a great sense of humour, Viva. The German Language made your "light marriage" sound as horrible as “die hell” (LOL)
Ehe ist die Hell
(Marriage Is The Light)
honey
with you
by my
side
I would have everything
a man needed
for his exotic
paradise
yet
my
single
trouble
could be doubled
also I might be burned in a hell
without having
a life of my
own
oh my…
oh my dear!
without you
by my
side
I could be totally relaxed
but my life without
your love is
not a life
at all
what the heck
would I be
here
for?
I
had
no choice
but to trade my freedom of a single
for you to be
by my side
forever
together
no
matter
in a heaven
or in a hell
of yours
Thao Chuong
2015-02-25
9 Years Ago
Viet Tran
You do not have my permission to use my art work- "A BEACON WILL SEND YOU HOME". Please remove the art work..
9 Years Ago
Good day Bill
Please accept my apology, Bill. I will send an email and ask the moderator to remove it. Because I am unable to do it after 24 hours since the time I posted it. Now it is our of my hand, only the moderator has the power to do it. So it is up to the moderator to decide if she/he as time to do it. Sorry again. Have a restful day.
Regards
Viet Tran
9 Years Ago
To Billy East. FYI: The following request has just been sent to the FAA moderator.
Dear Lady Isabella
I would like to officially request for your intervention as a moderator to remove Billy East's artwork titled "A Beacon Will Send You Home" that was posted 4 days ago on my following thread - as he has asked me to do so. I need your help, because only you - as a moderator have the authority to do it.
http://fineartamerica.com/showmessages.php?messageid=2292414&targetid=2371491#2371491
Many thanks for your time.
Regards
Viet Tran
9 Years Ago
..
Dear Viet........just so you know, I herein quote words addressed to you,here, by Bill Tomsa, that I add here to be my thoughtsalso, thanks also.....for your generosity and insight and support........
"
""That poem is, without a doubt, the most insightful interpretation of one of my paintings that I have ever seen. Thank you my friend.
Bill Tomsa
billtomsa.blogspot.com/""
...
9 Years Ago
I cannot edit after 24 hours either without asking Sean to intervene and I am not going to do that when he is this busy
I removed the whole post therefore and am pasting the poem here so it is not lost.
Home Sweet Home
they were sent into deep space
to explore other solar systems
in search for planets
abundance of
water and
air
preparing
for
a long term
re-settlement for their race
when their land becomes over-populated
or no longer inhabitable
after
the lengthy journey
through endless galaxies
their mission was finally accomplished
they were heading
to planet
earth
when their craft approached its orbit and entered the atmosphere
at the smooth landing
they were so excited
and happily cheered
“finally
home sweet home”
yet they came back too late
the earth was totally destructed by pollution and nuclear wars
and became the waste land of death
no
living
beings left
everything was in rubbles
their hearts sunk
some cried aloud
others silently sobbed
and totally collapsed
on their
own
feet
Thao Chuong
2015-02-22
9 Years Ago
The image is on Google search as well. Ms. Shores. I don't care how busy - I want the image removed from Google as well. .
.
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much Lady Isabella., You help is much appreciated. Have a restful day
@ Billy East: The issue has been solved. Your related image has already been removed with the whole original post as Lady Isabella has clearly confirmed in her post above. Please let me know if you still have any further concern. Sorry for the inconvenience and thank you again for raising your original; concern. Have a peaceful day.
I appreciate you feedback Vivia. Have a nice day.
9 Years Ago
Viet Tran. The issue is not solved as the artwork appears on Google search.
I want it removed.
9 Years Ago
Billy. I really don't know how to do it. I really hope if Lady Isabella could offer her help with this.
9 Years Ago
I did Google search, and have found this interesting video
http://youtu.be/8qqCwbqEc-o
Adds on: Just for the straight record
The above video is a substitute for Billy East's original image of the same title A BEACON WILL SEND YOU HOME. Billy East's related image in the original that was removed by Lady Isabelle at Billy East's request due to his concern that his image was shown by Google Search engine.
Home Sweet Home
they were sent into deep space
to explore other solar systems
in search for planets
abundance of
water and
air
preparing
for
a long term
re-settlement for their race
when their land becomes over-populated
or no longer inhabitable
after
the lengthy journey
through endless galaxies
their mission was finally accomplished
they were heading
to planet
earth
when their craft approached its orbit and entered the atmosphere
at the smooth landing
they were so excited
and happily cheered
“finally
home sweet home”
yet they came back too late
the earth was totally destructed by pollution and nuclear wars
and became the waste land of death
no
living
beings left
everything was in rubbles
their hearts sunk
some cried aloud
others silently sobbed
and totally collapsed
on their
own
feet
Thao Chuong
2015-02-22
9 Years Ago
Viet, Moderator Shores response;"I cannot edit after 24 hours either without asking Sean to intervene and I am not going to do that when he is this busy " .
Not satisfactory.
Now the image is lost.
I had to remove it.
I went to Google and found my art piece .
9 Years Ago
Hi Billy. I think that I somewhat I understood your frustration. However, I have done all what I could do in my best effort to have this issue settled in a reasonable manner.
I am really sorry for this incident. I also officially confirm that I am not able to do anything further.
9 Years Ago
If your image was on the site, Mr East, then it will be on Google. You say you removed the image? then Google will remove it after a period of time. We cannot make Google do that. It was your choice to have the image on the site, Viet had nothing to do with it going on Google.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Lady Isabella.
I am glad that it seems the issue has been settled even not in the most perfect way.
@ Billy East: I do hope that you would accept it without asking any further action from me.
9 Years Ago
My thought of the day
Eighty Six Not Quite One Hundred
eighty six
not quite one hundred
but it’s such a long way
for a baby
to grow
that
old
eighty six
not quite one hundred
but he’s very close to the exit door
every minute passes away
he could no longer
have it
back
time
flies fast
it makes no difference
for a guy at his eighty six years old
than
for
an
old chap
at one hundred
it’s the full length of life
a man could enjoy the most on this earth
at
eighty six
no time left
why does he not learn how
to let things go
to walk leisurely on a smooth pathway
and to enjoy an easy flow of his day
Thao Chuong
2015-02-26
9 Years Ago
I sat pondering the reason why... to discover the mind " playing " a silly game... life seeking to find itself
9 Years Ago
Moderator Shore:You wrote:"Lady Isabella F A Shores Lady Isabella F A Shores17 Hours Ago
If your image was on the site, Mr East, then it will be on Google. You say you removed the image? then Google will remove it after a period of time. We cannot make Google do that. It was your choice to have the image on the site, Viet had nothing to do with it going on Google.".
!. If my image was on the site ( Fineartamerica.com) it will be on Google ,but not associated with Viet Tran's poem. I removed my image from the FAA site. My image was imported without my permission to a forum post which can be searched on Google and there it will show my image associated with Viet Tran's poem- this association was never my intent .
FAA can contact Google and have the content removed.
If Viet Tran who imported the image to this forum post without my permission had nothing to do with my image being on Google associated with his poem, then FAA did.
REMOVE IT!
9 Years Ago
I just saw another of my images used in this post without my permission!
Listen , Viet Tran, I don't use your poetry with my images. It's not a free for all.
9 Years Ago
Good morning Billy East
I really don't know what you were talking about on your last two posts here.
Your image have been totally removed from my thread.
I have used Google Search engine from the following address that lead to my thread here and the related image is no longer here.
https://www.google.ca/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=a%20beacon%20will%20send%20you%20home%20billy%20east
9 Years Ago
An official message to Billy East
I HOPE THAT YOU WOULD BE SATISFIED NOW.
IF NOT GO AHEAD AND DO WHATEVER YOU CAN. BUT PLEASE STOP HARASSING ME
9 Years Ago
Viet Tran:
You used my images without my permission and you did it twice, both times without my permission. I am the one that is being harassed by you.
9 Years Ago
Good day Tom. Thanks for sharing your philosophical thought about the mind’s games. I really like your quote of wisdom “life seeking to find itself”
Here is my thought generated from yours
Enjoy a restful day
Inside Out
(Of Mind and Heart)
I know how essential
a heart is for life
as
when
it stops
no man could survive
I’ve been told
mind for thought
heart for love
in a general
belief
however
I wonder
whenever
a man has his mind so critically lost
that he couldn’t even recognize himself
what would there be inside his heart?
would he still be able
to fall in
love?
I doubt it
since I’ve witnessed
people in mental institutions
who have their minds wandering in an unknown world
they could only act naturally
on the instinct
of a being
so blame for the mind
for a sunken heart
when love is
lost
Thao Chuong
2015-02-27
THANKS & APPRECIATION:
1- Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts. You and your thoughts are always welcomed and appreciated.
WARNING:
1- Please be aware that according to one of the most common practice on faa forums, when you share your thought on this thread, one or more of artworks on your faa portfolio might inspire(s) Thao Chuong for his poetry. Viet Tran could post them on this thread. The only purpose is his goodwill to promote your art.
2- Those works can only be removed, on the strict condition that a formal request MUST be made by email sending to Viet Tran’s faa email account within 12 hours since the time that the related artworks posted.
9 Years Ago
Billy, your image was removed from this thread and I see it is not on the site.
Therefore you have no more reason to be in the thread.
Thank you.
9 Years Ago
Here is my thought of the day: Motivation is not the energy it takes to achieve something; it's actually what you're doing right now. You can do whatever you want and that is your motivation. A huge part of success is believing you can make it happen...but knowing full well it won't happen overnight. You can do it...anything, but you must first start the process.
9 Years Ago
Abbie's dog has cancer, Jeannette put her dog down today, one of my dogs is 12 years old and having issues.
I celebrate the joy of animal companions today :))
Chores
I am cleaning up
the dog poop today,
acknowledging the joy
of my animal companions.
I am thinking
of my friends today,
as they face the mortality
of their animal companions.
Lifetimes lived
in a manner
inexplicable.
9 Years Ago
I believe that the matter has been officially settled. I'd like to offer my apology to participants and readers, in case this unfortunate incident would have any impact on your thought of the day
Thank you Lady Isabelle. I appreciate you for taking time from your busy schedule to help me deal with the sensitive issue.
Lisa: It's nice to read your thought about motivation
Karen: I am a friend and a lover of dogs of both genders. I was told female dogs are very smart and male dogs are very protective. I don't know if it is true with every breed. Thanks for sharing your poem
Have a nice day to all
9 Years Ago
Veit, I have always found my dogs to be more breed typical than gender typical. My sheltie/ heeler is very loyal and smart. My great dane /cur is lovable, goofy and territorial. Both are males. Funny, as in all of my life, I almost always choose boys as my companions.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Karen for sharing your own experience about your dogs.
Of humans and Dogs
no one could deny the fact
dogs are the most faithful friend of man
whom one can fully trust
without any slight fear
of being stabbed
at the back
I’ve
often read
fancy words
on the back of vehicles
“the more I know people the more I love my dog”
somewhat
I could understand
those dog lovers might have had
some bitter experience
or serious problems
with few other
humans
they’ve
met
also
for
peace
of mind
they might feel
it’d better stay away
from very few bad fellas
at their ugliest
moment
yet
I wonder
if there is enough room in those hearts
for both dogs and human beings
at the same time
it
ain’t
about their sweet love for dogs
but purely the nasty expression
of their hatred towards
all human
beings
Thao Chuong
2015-02-27
9 Years Ago
i am thinking about putting prints of my paintings on some of the "free placarding" panels in my city.
with an internet address where to get the image for free so that nobody takes the print as a poster.
just for fun, but it may be a marketing idea, open art like in open source.
9 Years Ago
Viet, tears were in my eyes after I see the posting of my hand embroidery "A Lesson to Remember". The two women posed for this picture had passed away in the last few year, they are my mother in laws and my mother. Thank you so much for your poem and the posting.
Sincerely, To-Tam
9 Years Ago
“the more I know people the more I love my dog” yes, it is often how I feel when I read the news
You may well be right in the analysis
Thank you for using my image :)
9 Years Ago
Good morning and thank you for your thoughts. Enjoy a restful weekend
@ Georg Hoffman: I have no skills and zero experience in marketing. Yet, I think you have had such a good idea to make your art known in your city. You have a very noble concept of sharing art when you wrote “open art in open source”.
@ Roy Erickson: In your thought of “being alive”, you sound as if you were William Shakespeare in his very philosophical question “to be or not to be…”. But the major difference between Shakespeare and you is that he is dead and you’re still alive (lol)
@ To-Tam Gerwe: Your work has had a huge emotional impact on me. It brought me back to my horrible experience in the past. Vietnam War is the topic that I often avoid to touch. Because I have felt that no words could be used to express those nightmares of mine in the past. Your work is very powerful to me (and I think) to other peoples who were involved in that war.
I am glad that you and I are now able to enjoy basic human rights and the freedom that the people in Vietnam could only have in their dream. Have a peaceful time, Chi To Tam.
@ Lady Isabelle: I was born and grew up with dogs. I currently have a Germen Shepherd. I had him when he was four months olds. I think that we understand each other very well. He is very protective but friendly to people/dogs he meets in our daily walk. He is also very gentle and knows how to play with my two grandkids (one years old and 2 and a half years old). I’ve learned a lot from him through our close relationship.
I am sorry to hear that your friend has cancer. Again thanks for your help.
9 Years Ago
My thought not only of this day but that have accumulated over the past couple months.
My perceptions of human nature have been greatly altered by the interactions of some people in these discussion forums. I have come to see the anger, hatred, greed, criticism and self absorption of many. It has disheartened my desire to participate in the social interaction and I will be refraining from spending much time in the community area. I will check discussions out that sound uplifting and anyone that needs help, but the discussions that obviously are started to fuel all the above stated emotions are useless and demeaning to anyone who participates in them. I am not stating this to receive pity. I am not stating this to start a diatribe. I am stating this to make others realize, what you comment/say reflect where your heart lies. Ask yourself before you comment if that is truly who you want to be.
These are my thoughts..yes. They do not pertain to the content of this discussion thread nor to Viet Tran-just to my thoughts.
9 Years Ago
@ Julie Senf: Thank you very much for sharing your thought. I only read to learn from some of faa threads with the topics that interest me. Yet, I haven't engaged much in discussions in those threads. Your thought made me think about the tricky part of one-line communication. because we talk to strangers without knowing their mood or their personal circumstances during the conversation.
@ Brian Wallace: Thanks for sharing your amazing poem that offers a great sense of wisdom. I felt very relaxed after reading it. .
Here is my thought generated by Julie Senf's words from her heart.
The Mirror
I don’t know
what my face would be like
or how I would look
without a mirror
without
your interaction
no way for me to recognize
how good or bad
my mood
could
be
I might be utterly shocked
to know some true
moments of
mine
thank you for offering me
a clear reflection of myself
through the mirror
of your natural
reaction
Thao Chuong
2015-02-28
9 Years Ago
Description:
We have all seen them, they are all around us, the office sharks are a terrible menace.
Office Sharks
they’re
neither
Draculas
wandering in dark night
for raw blood from
their victims’
throats
nor
sharks
swimming close to shores
for fresh flesh from their preys during the day
but
exactly
like them
those CEOs on Wall Street live well-off
on human’s flesh
and blood
in ties
and suits
they’re noble in their formal look
but rotten to the core
in their greedy
nature
they're
but a fatal cancer
in the modern economy
of capitalism.
Thao Chuong
2015-02-28
THANKS & APPRECIATION:
1- Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts. You and your thoughts are always welcomed and appreciated.
WARNINGS:
1- Posting works of faa artists’ on faa forums is the most common practice on faa site. Please be aware that after you share your thought on this thread, one or more of artworks from your faa portfolio might be paired with Thao Chuong’s poetry. He posts any work of yours on this thread as his goodwill with the sole purpose of promoting your art.
2- Those works can only be removed, on the strict condition that a formal request MUST be made by email sending to Viet Tran’s faa email account within 12 hours since the time that the related artworks posted. Or after the mentioned deadline, please contact directly the faa moderator-in-chief Lady Isabella for her help with the removal of the related work(s).
9 Years Ago
Description: The Noble Eightfold Path is taken from the Nagara Sutta and was one of the teachings of Gautama Buddha; practicing the Eightfold Path leads toward self-awakening and liberation. I created the background from a glass disc I purchased; the image of the Kamakura Buddha I purchased in Kamakura Japan in 1966. I have left the name of the artist on the piece to the left side of the Buddha as you are looking at it.
www.rdEricksonfineart.com
http://fineartamerica.com/profiles/royd-erickson.html
© Roy rd Erickson
Peace of Mind
one could find stillness and peace
for each of his breath
through a modest journey
within his
inner
self
Thao Chuong
2015-02-28
THANKS & APPRECIATION:
1- Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts. You and your thoughts are always welcomed and appreciated.
WARNINGS:
1- Posting works of faa artists’ on faa forums is the most common practice on faa site. Please be aware that after you share your thought on this thread, one or more of artworks from your faa portfolio might be paired with Thao Chuong’s poetry. He posts any work of yours on this thread as his goodwill with the sole purpose of promoting your art.
2- Those works can only be removed, on the strict condition that a formal request MUST be made by email sending to Viet Tran’s faa email account within 12 hours since the time that the related artworks posted. Or after the mentioned deadline, please contact directly the faa moderator-in-chief Lady Isabella for her help with the removal of the related work(s).
9 Years Ago
My regular enclosure of those nonsense warnings to each post of mine (in which I showcase artworks of other faa artists) makes me think about laws and regulations that eliminate imagination and creativity. I am tired of it. I’m asking myself do I need these nonsense legality in an art world
I’ve read Julie Senf’s thought a couple of times. Her very sharp and smart observation has made me rethink about the purpose of my thread here. I’ve started questioning myself whether I should continue showcasing other artists’ works on this thread (as I have done endless times before on my other art and poetry threads in the past), or should I cut off totally my time in the cyber world and get back to my the real life as soon as Spring comes and the temperature is warm enough for outdoor activities
Sundry Thought
“the law is an ass” (*)
erected
just
for
very few assholes
as it’s supposed to target only those outlaws
unfortunately
it
mostly
effects the general public
it makes law abiders suffered
and leaves criminals
running
free
“the law is an ass” (*)
why does our government keep creating more and more?
Thao Chuong
2015-02-28
“the law is an ass” (*) is often referred as Charles Dickens’ quote in Oliver Twist 1838. In fact, 'the law is an ass' is from a play published by the English dramatist George Chapman in 1654 - Revenge for Honour:
9 Years Ago
Viet Tran please don't let my thoughts of the day put a damper on your quest here! Please continue but do go out and enjoy the sunshine also.
9 Years Ago
Good morning
@ Marty Saccone: Thank you for your inspiring thought. I have just had quick look at your portfolio. You have many awesome works.
@ Julie Senf: Thanks for your nice words today.
FYI: I was thinking about unfriendly warnings which I posted in a couple of my last posts just for legal protection. I was asking myself if I could do something better or friendlier but it still can help me avoid the uncomfortable incident as the recent one. Then your sharp thinking came in the right time. because it helped me rethink of the whole purpose of my thread here.
I've learned a lot from other artists's thoughts, their art and their interaction, etc. I am on this site to get inspiration from other artists's creative minds for my poetry- I am not selling my art here. So I can leave this site anytime without facing any negative impact on my income. I would stay as long as I could have more fun than the headache. Moreover, I often cut off my online time when the weather permits comfortable outdoor activities. Thank again.
Have a nice day
9 Years Ago
@ Marty Saccone: Your work Tranquil Moring Fog is very restful for the mind. Please let me know as soon as possible, if you’d like your work to be removed from this post. Thanks for your time.
Description
Tranquil Fog by Marty Saccone
A gull quietly glides by the fishing boats "Princess Deanna" and "Eastern Winds" at mooring in a soft morning fog on Johnson Bay in Lubec, Maine
Tranquil Morning
a
lone
seagull gently flies
then slowly disappeared into the dense fog
the quiet morning
by the shore
stands
still
as
a pretty seascape painting
on an artist’s
canvas
Thao Chuong
2015-03-01
9 Years Ago
@ Julie Senf: Your drawing is very touchy. Please let me know asap, in case you feel unease to your work posted along with my poem. I am happy to remove it within the timeframe permitted by faa default edit settings. Thank you.
Description: A young lady I know spent a year in Africa helping in an orphanage in Uganda and took a picture of this young sweetheart. The little girl had had her meal stolen by another classmate and sometimes that is their only meal of the day. When I saw the picture it just broke my heart and I knew I had to draw it. It captures the pure emotion and heartache being experienced. I hope you enjoy and thank you for viewing!
A Lost Meal
“what’s
a big deal!
just only a meal lost
why cry like a wounded wolf?”,
after
seeing
the photo
of an African girl crying
for her stolen food
an
obese
child asks
while he’s taking a good bite
at an over-sized Big Mac
in one of countless
MacDonald outlets
in U.S.A.
the innocent child’s guiltless question clearly reflects the fact
obesity has been on its sharp rise
on the paradise in the West
as food is abundance
and often
wasted
while
at other places
on the same planet
people are dying of starvation
wouldn’t it be nice
if millions of hungry children around the world
could have access to the food wasted every day in the West
Thao Chuong
2015-03-01
9 Years Ago
Moderator Shores: You wrote:"Lady Isabella F A Shores Lady Isabella F A Shores2 Days Ago
Billy, your image was removed from this thread and I see it is not on the site.
Therefore you have no more reason to be in the thread.
Thank you."
I find your statement insulting as I can participate in any thread I wish.
I also find your statement disrespectful.
When you address me by name, I respond.
9 Years Ago
Good day everyone. Peace to the mind to all of you
“Live every day as if it were your last,......eventually you'll be right.” Posted by Marty Saccone - 1 Day Ago
My Last Day
what
would
it be like
if today were my last day?
would I laugh or cry?
would I let go everyone whom I love
my wife, my kids, my grandchildren
my brothers, my sisters, my relatives
my friends, my dog
and anyone else
including
myself?
would
I remorse
for anything bad
I’ve done to my loved ones
and to my foes?
would
I regret
not to enjoy the most
from my living in the past?
oh no
why the heck
am I wasting my instant moment
for the unknown
last day?
luckily
I’m still kicking alive
right now
today must be my best day
like any other day
in my life
Thao Chuong
2015-03-02
9 Years Ago
Our Morning Walk On The Goose Trail
it’s a beautiful day
for our routine
morning
walk
bright sunshine starts clearing up thin patches of fog on the Goose Trail
it’s still chilly cold
I’m jogging to warm myself up
while he runs ahead of me
and barks
as
if
he's challenging me
to keep up pace
with him
I laugh and bark back
at my annoying
friend
“shut up
enjoy your peaceful time
with me
won’t
you?”
Thao Chuong
2015-03-02
9 Years Ago
On Langford Lake
not full moon tonight
but the sky is so clear
moonlight seems brighter on the water
its silver reflection’s trembled on surface
like a mystic mirror
smoothly
moving
when sea breeze is blowing inland
from Saanich Inlet
after
eight thirty
it’s chilly and quiet
no human rowing on Langford Lake
only some water fowls paddling around
and tranquil echoes
of intermittent cries
from night birds
flying somewhere
in the cold air
up high
Thao Chuong
2015-03-02
9 Years Ago
Morning Fog On Albert Head Lagoon
buried
deep
behind
a thick curtain
everything beyond the water edge becomes paranormally invisible
sea breeze carries warning horns
from mystic mist
in open water
to the quiet
shores
abruptly
disturbing
the tranquil sound
of calm waves softly touching the sandy beach
on Albert Head Lagoon
in a quiet morning
Thao Chuong
2015-03-03
9 Years Ago
Sundry Thought
Caught On Cyber Web
like
flying bugs
attracted to bright light at night
many souls get caught on cyber web
without any struggle for survival
no one bothers
kicking at
an exit
door
endless hours spent
love lost
lives forgotten
marriages rotten
relationships broken
what would be gained?
is it
a highly addicted sleeping pill to freeze the mind
from chronic sufferings
of painful
reality
or
purely
an illusion
but comfortable enough
to ease unbearable lonesomeness
in the cold-hearted environment of this modern era?
Thao Chuong
2015-03-03
9 Years Ago
Ah, thanks my friend Viva.
It was just a sundry thought of mine. I didn't mean to criticize anyone. Anyway, there are a lot of amazing things and interesting people on internet to learn from .
Different people spend time on the internet for different purposes: some for fun, some for self-promotion, others for art sale, etc. I think art sale is the most tricky part on this forums as most buyers don't read those threads in which some artists have been trying to post on the first visible segment of every thread - for self-promotion. Unfortunately, the majority make no sale or only a couple of sales for the whole year. But who could know that sooner or later they would hit the jackpot someday (lol)
FYI: I like the title of your digital work My Heart's On Fire. I hope I have some spare time tonight to write a song lyric about it.
Have a nice day.
9 Years Ago
Viet, I apologise for breaking in to your thread again
Billy, you are banned from the forum under rule 10.
10. Forum moderators reserve the right to remove posts and threads, and to ban offenders from the forum, temporarily or permanently, without warning. Any ban can and will be at moderator discretion. Disciplinary action will NOT be discussed on the forum.
Thank you
9 Years Ago
@ Jacqueline Athmann: Thanks for sharing your thought.
@ Lady Isabella F A Shores: Thank you. You have a job to do and the authority to decide what needed to be done on faa forums. I appreciate your courtesy.
For clarification: I have no remaining issue with Billy East. Unfortunately, he’s banned at this moment. I do hope that the ban would be a short one. I like his poetry. When his ban is lifted, he is welcomed to share his thoughts and his poetry again on this thread.
9 Years Ago
Find your path.
Don't waste a day....
Posted by Jacqueline Athmann – eight hours ago
Here is my thought from your post
The Path I’ve Taken
I’ve found my path long time ago
too long to remember
how I did
find
it
for
many years
I’ve been walking on the same
worn out
route
it’s
so comfy
that becomes
my rusty
habit
also
fear of
the unknown
has kept me from straying away
off the current path
to find
a new
one
for
better
or worse
from now on
I’d better start taking some risks
getting out of my comfort zone
and trading my security for endless possibilities on many different roads
Thao Chuong
2015-03-04
9 Years Ago
Hi Viva.
I am not a song writer. Yet, once in awhile I write song lyrics It normally takes me more time to write song lyrics than to poetry.
My Heart’s On Fire (song lyrics)
my heart’s on fire
forever for you
whatever
I love
the blue sky
the bright sun
the starry night
the silver moon
oh
yes
for sure
off course as always
I reserve for you
forever for you
wherever
I go
the river I row
the ocean I sail
the prairie I roam
the mountain I climb
oh
yes
for sure
off course as always
I reserve for you
forever for you
everything
I own
my craving heart
my insane mind
my sacred soul
and my own self
oh
yes
for sure
off course as always
I reserve for you
forever for you
only one thing
I know
my mind is roasting
my heart is melting
my life is burning
soul is blazing
oh
yes
for sure
off course as always
I reserve myself only for you
forever for you
I
have
no doubt
I’m in love
I’m for you
forever for you
my heart’s on fire
forever for you
you...uh..uh...uh...
Thao Chuong
2015-03-05
9 Years Ago
Viet, thank you! An amazingly inspired artwork,poem,song, as only you could produce, from your multi-faceted talents. It's so lovely,charming,affectionate...I am truly blessed.i will treasure this...a rare gift...V
9 Years Ago
Hi Viva and Maria. Thank you very much. Good to have you drop by with your nice words, Maria. Have a great day.
9 Years Ago
On The West Hill
bright
sunshine
outside today
but still chilly
with the breeze
well-insulated in warm clothes
they’re heading toward the playground on West Hill
like
a mule pulling
an overloaded cart
the old man’s pushing a toddler and a baby
on a red wagon
up the stiff
hill
he’s wheezing
while the two kids comfortably sit and happily enjoy their easy ride
he ponders if it’s the price he keeps paying for
the biggest promotion in his life
to have someone call him
“grandpa...
grand papa..”
Thao Chuong
2015-03-05
9 Years Ago
@ Lisa Kaiser: Your painting is very cheerful and uplifting. Please let me know asap, in case you feel unease to your work posted along with my poem. I am happy to remove it within the time-frame permitted by faa default edit settings. Thank you.
-Medium:Acrylic
-Description: This abstract painting was created during a filmed interview of why I chose to start painting and who motivates me to paint.
It was a documentary of artists.
Taste Of Wine and Taste of Life
enjoy while it lasts
the glass of wine
in our hand
swallow every sip
‘till the last
drop
enjoy while it lasts
the living time
in our lives
take every minute
until the last
breath
too bad
not to appreciate while it lasts
as when it’s gone
no one could
gain it
back
cheer to you, to me, and to anyone
those who could take the best
from each day
while it
lasts
Thao Chuong
2015-03-06
9 Years Ago
@ Jacqueline Athmann: Your painting is very touchy and mournful. Please let me know asap, in case you feel uncomfortable to have your work posted along with my poem. I am happy to remove it within the time-frame permitted by faa default edit settings. Thank you.
Description: Let us not forget the consequences of a rich mans war.
Imagine all the people living life in peace ~John Lennon
The Hero
the soldier - in his twenties
fought a war far away
on foreign soil
to
defend
his nation
and his people’s freedom at home
he was back as a hero
with great honor
unfortunately
in a body
bag
leaning
herself on his casket
fully draped by the flag of stripes and stars
she moaned, wept,
and cried
now
he rests in peace
but she continues living
in pain for
her lost
love
how many heroes needed
and how much suffering must be endured
to keep the nation safe
for
the rich to
live in highly fortified mansions
do business from Wall Street to Dubai
play on well-manicured golf courses
and rest on luxury yachts
and
for
the poor
to live from hand to mouth
especially
for the homeless
to have their lives free on city streets
Thao Chuong
2015-03-06
9 Years Ago
Deaths Of Innocent Children
could
there be
enough words (?)
in any langue to describe
the desperate and hopeless feeling of a mother
when her child’s
dying of
cancer
how
would
you feel
if the little youngster were your lovely kid?
countless innocent children
around the world
get killed
everyday
either
by bad guys who blow themselves at crowded places
to terminate their own people
who are on the same side
with the infidels
or
by professional soldiers who accidentally shoot
or drop bombs over villages
and kill innocent civilians
including children
in the so-called
collateral
damages
whether
you
call them
terrorists fighting in the name of Allah
or heroes combating in defense of your nation and your freedom
does
it make
any difference
when they are committing the same act
of killing innocent
children
to all
of you
regardless
of countries or nationalities
would you accept any excuse if someone killed your offspring?
Thao Chuong
2015-03-07
9 Years Ago
Chimes of Freedom - Bob Dylan
The first verse of the song.
Far between sundown's finish an' midnight's broken toll
We ducked inside the doorway, thunder crashing
As majestic bells of bolts struck shadows in the sounds
Seeming to be the chimes of freedom flashing
Flashing for the warriors whose strength is not to fight
Flashing for the refugees on the unarmed road of flight
An' for each an' ev'ry underdog soldier in the night
An' we gazed upon the chimes of freedom flashing.
9 Years Ago
Edit: Due to some confusion, the related artwork was removed. Sorry for any of inconvenience. Thank you.
A Lesson To Remember
(The rerun of Vietnam War peace talks)
they absolutely didn’t need to lift their fingers up
as
the thermostat took good care of the job
turning the heat on when it was cold
and switching to air-conditioner when it was hot
someone always served coffee, tea, wine
and whatever required
before they
asked
the room
was
so
fresh
with fragrance of flowers in the air
so
cozy
with comfy chairs around two square and a round tables
they were very safe and sound in Paris
too far away from fierce battles in Vietnam
they had had no reason to be in a hurry
and no motive to speed up
the process
they drank, they smoked, they talked about peace
they sat the opposite side
so
close to see winkles on each other`s face
but they were thousands
of miles
apart
they were worst enemies
yet they still shook hands
and smiled like
good friends
after a long time
no see
it had taken them over a half year to discuss and agree upon what type of table that could be used for the talk
negotiations had been on and off for many years
while the war kept
accelerating
at its high
speed
indeed
as peace talkers
they didn’t worry too much
as fighting the war was someone else’s job
moreover
neither
they had heard popping sounds of riffles Carbine, M16, AK47…
exploding blasts of claymores, grenade launchers, heavy howitzers, missiles…
rumbling sounds in the sky by SkyRaiders, DragonFlies, Falcons Phantoms, B52, Cobras…
nor
they had experienced anguishes of the dying, the wounded, and the loss of lives
they did not witness blood, body parts, dead people scattered everywhere
they
neither saw burning the sea of Napalm on jungles, mountains, rice fields, and destruction of houses, villages, towns, cities…
nor felt the sufferings of millions of refugees on their own homeland
regrettably
for
-about a half million Vietnamese civilians
-nearly three hundred thousand soldiers of the South Vietnamese Army
-over one million combatants of the North Communist Junta
-and fifty-eight thousand two hundred and twenty American troopers
it was too late for them
to know how peace
really
was
when the Paris Accords were reached
if the war had been ended sooner
majority of the dead must have been still survived
and might have enjoyed
their peaceful lives
up to
now
a lesson to remember
whatever war for any reason is never a solution
and absolutely not
needed
Thao Chuong
2015-03-8
9 Years Ago
I grew up during the Viet Nam war and was impacted myself. Not nearly as much as you Viet and To-Tam.
I am quite moved by your writing on the subject Viet.
You would think after Vietnam future wars and policies would have changed.
I watched what I suppose was a locally made documentary on local public television about fifteen years ago that I never forgot it.
It was a group of Mexican Americans from the central valley where I live.
This one guy said I was gung ho to go serve my country do my duty be a hero save the world.
When he got to Vietnam he saw all these brown people who were farmers working in the fields.
"They were just like me." After I observed that "it was all about just trying to save my ass."
Just another poor boy fighting a rich mans war!
I'm not trying to get political and am not interested in a debate.
9 Years Ago
I Protest
At thirteen
I teethed my political awareness
as Walter Cronkite
dead panned the news.
Vietnam
Our "boys in action"
dying and bloody.
The "enemy"
pillaged and plundered.
Each night,
from the comfort of suburbia,
I watched
as humans suffered.
I yearned to be a hippie,
to protest
with flowers in my hair
and an MIA bracelet on my wrist.
I believed in my Country
but not in the war.
Today
America is still waging war.
Mid-East,
thirteen years and counting.
In the time
of escalated social media
it is amazing,
I am barely subjected
to the atrocities
which might spoil my dinner
and taint my patriotic views.
These days I am a hippie,
I protest
with flowers in my hair
and peace in my heart.
I do not believe in the war
or in my Country.
Karen Newell
3/7/15
9 Years Ago
Jim Taylor: Thank you for sharing your own experience, your thought, and the interesting story about the Vietnam War from the American soldier of the Mexican cultural heritage.
I agree with your thinking about the poor boy fighting a rich mans war!`. The majority people in the lower class has suffered the most during war times in human`s history. The middle class had less impact because of their connection with the rich or working for the governing class. Only the rich and the upper class could enjoy benefits from the war.
I appreciate your clarification to avoid any political discussion or debate on this thread. I have not seen any positive outcome from those threads that have had heated discussions. I think this would better to share and exchange our thoughts than defend or attack other people who are not in the same line of thoughts.
Karen Newell: It is an awesome poem carrying a powerful message. I love it. (Watch out for your back. Because of this poem, you may be on the watch list of big brothers -lol)
Have a restful evening.
9 Years Ago
Viet, there are 4-Viet Nam Wall total that I painted and one of them is "Time for Healing" #363.Please read the description I wrote. Perhaps It will help?
Thanks, To-Tam
9 Years Ago
Kinh chao Chi To Tam:
Thank you very much. It really helped.
For your healing purpose , I have just removed your artwork A Lesson To Remember and your description from my former thread. I hope you would be pleased with the removal. Have a good night.
9 Years Ago
A re-post here, Viet, to you.....from your f/b page of this poetry..........my reply........to ensure you are appreciated as earned, and with respect...........
'' Always, when I encounter you here,there,dear Viet, do I remind myself to respect what you know that I will never have to know...and thank you for surviving and becoming my friend...I have always wanted to say that somewhere out loud...this is definitely that moment. Cheers, Viet. You are so special. You have seen it all. You know the big things, that really matter........VIVA.''
9 Years Ago
Many thanks Viva for your re-post that led to the following re-post of mine from my FB page
'' Thanks for your nice words, Vivian. The past is over. I want to put it behind my back, go ahead, and enjoy the moment. Yet, sometimes it comes back. it`s hard to get rid of those horrible experiences. I remember those who died for me to be alive-. I`m thankful to Canada and her people for giving me a second life in this peaceful country - a heaven on earth. Have good night.''
9 Years Ago
Good morning J L Meadows. Thanks for sharing your WIP and the humorous poem. It was fun to read it.
Here is my cheer to your promising WIP.
The Artist’s WIP - The Panther
he has harbored
his hard labor
in colors
for many
hours
on
a piece of blank canvas
he expected
his selected palette would be right for the new painting
he has been creating to promote the famous movie “The Pink Panther’’
he
painted it pink
a big feline in the wild
alas
next day
somehow
what was a surprise!
on his work-in-progress
the wild cat has camouflaged itself
into a black
panther
only Inspector Jacques Clouseau could help him demystify
what was going on overnight
on his messy canvas
while
he was having sex
with his girl friend
on a couch
Thao Chuong
2015-03-09
9 Years Ago
Springtime
singing
in the pink
in the white
in the whitish pink
and in the pinkish white
inside beautiful blooming canopies
of Japanese plum trees in early Spring
jolly birds are greeting a new season
on
the lawn
under sunlight
two American Robins fight over a dirt worm
a sparrow couple is hopping around
picking up long grass
flying back and forth
to build their
new nest
a cat crouches motionless on the deck
awaits the right moment
for its catch
coming back from his early morning walk
the dog’s barking and chasing the cat away from his favorite spot
he then dashes toward the green yard
scares these birds off the ground
to reclaim fully
his territory
Thao Chuong
2015-03-09
9 Years Ago
A Mighty Grace
By Gerald Strine
This I can see from this scared place.
In my kayak floating above their space.
The whales gather with their mighty grace.
From depth’s below as dark as space.
They have come to feed upon this place.
Their massive forms contain a dancers grace.
Their leaps so near they spray my face.
Reveal to me their mighty grace.
And music too in dark depths below.
Contain a wisdom we will never know.
Their oil was of great value to man.
Oil for machines and light upon the land.
Now man has oil and light for his place.
To do whales harm now is mans disgrace.
Let us not render the sea as empty as space.
Let us all treasure their mighty grace.
http://fineartamerica.com/featured/a-mighty-grace-gerald-strine.html
9 Years Ago
Welcome Gerald Strine
Thank you very much for sharing your poem and the link to your artwork. I like the way which you present the depth of the ocean in your work
I share the same thought of yours about conveniences that we - humans could have from those off-shore oil rigs. Also damages that human beings have done to the sea and to those big creatures in the ocean. Your poem reminded me about one of my poems which I wrote in 2012 about the same issue. I re-post it here for your reference. Have a good night
Man And His Own Monster
the huge marine mammal
bled to its death
lying lifeless
on a coral reef
the wide and thick layer of its blood
floated
on high waves
while many modern hunters
wore masks
and safety gears
anxiously trapped and pumped the monster’s fluid
into their hunting vessels
dolphins, seals, seabirds, marine wildlife
cloaked and choked
by thick liquid
coming from the monster’s body
the sea and miles of shorelines are covered
with a back coat of crude oil
leaked
from the gigantic tanker
that ran aground and stuck there
for many weeks
What could
nature and other beings
benefit from technical progress
and civilization of the most superior specie on this planet
the so-called
human?
Thao Chuong
2012-09-29
9 Years Ago
I appreciate your nice words, J L Meadows. The baby in the photo is my 13 month old grandson now. The picture was taken he was about 11 months
Have a restful evening
9 Years Ago
My Thought of the Day
THANK YOU ALL
instead of
kicking your bare feet back
at my face
you
are so kind
giving me your nice feedback
I understand the fact
when putting my head out in the rain
I must get wet
unless
you help me be dry
by sharing with me a cozy corner of your wide umbrella
therefore, I enjoy your pleasant thoughts
yet, I prepare for worse
so, I wouldn`t mind
having
black eyes
broken nose
bleeding lips
or a swollen cheek
for sure
it is
a bonus
as always
when someone like you sharing with me your nice treat
that turns my pleasure time here
more delightful
to
both
those who have given me the tough feet back at your uneasy timing
(I have found some good lessons to learn from)
and
those who have sent gentle feedback from your happy instant
(I have enjoyed those easy moments)
I
must
thank you
ALL OF YOU
and appreciate YOU ALL
for taking time to share with me
your thoughts
of the day
Thao Chuong
2015-03-09
9 Years Ago
The Lone Angler and I on Langford Lake
he waved at me
I raised my paddle making a greeting motion
and rowed toward his boat
“how r u doin'?
any good catch
today?,”
I started the casual conversation
“not bad.
nice day, eh?
but it’s still too cold
no bite so far ”.
he
responded
while throwing
his new bait in the water
and a friendly smile at me
I replied
“at least
you’re catching some fresh air”
he said
“yeah
you’re right
I’ll tell my wife
she must stop complaining about me
wasting time in the cold
fishing for
nothing ”
unexpectedly caught by the joyful moment
we both laughed aloud
Thao Chuong
2015-03-10
9 Years Ago
Warming: My following thought may disturb your belief. Readers' discretion is advised. Also, religious discussion is not welcomed as it is forbidden by FAA rules.
My Sundry Thought About “Forgive and Forget”
Every Church teaches its followers
"to forgive and forget"
However, I’ve read somewhere in the holly Bible
Adam and Eve were kicked out of
Garden of Eden
for the only
mistake
of eating the forbidden fruit
not
only
God couldn’t give the first couple a second chance for reform
and imposed as harsh punishment
by evicting them out
of His Paradise
forever
but
also
He put the worst curse on their offspring
with eternally
ancestral
sins
even
God couldn’t
“forgive and forget”
how could I beg any human
for a pardon for
my mistake
done to
him
Thao Chuong
2015-03-11
9 Years Ago
Sounds of Spring
It’s been sunny for four days in a row
the ground is pretty dried up
grass in my yard is growing higher
yet, it‘s too early
to trim it
back
also
it’s
still cold
for gardening
I’d rather enjoy
my outdoor activities
with my dog and grandkids for awhile
but
I guess
as usual
my neighbor seems in a hurry
as he always does everything in his yard ahead of me
at
four
in the afternoon
sunlight is bright
and warms up a little bit
my older grandson jumps on the trampoline
I hold his little brother
while playing stick throwing-‘n-retrieving game with the dog
all of a sudden
from the other side of the fence
come annoying hiccups of a small gas engine
and a loud mouth of F words for frustration
everything goes back to the normal rhythm about five minutes
then again vibrate in fresh air the rumbling noise of the lawnmowers
and the sounds of metal blades hitting rock
the dog barks
my younger grandson cries
by disturbing noises of Spring
starting in my backyard
today
Thao Chuong
2015-03-12
9 Years Ago
Farewell to Rules
inhale nice aroma of hot coffee
rousing in
morning
fresh
air
let the dog out
and run
for
fun
set
the mind
on a free ride
leave poetry bloom by itself
like thousands of flowers
blossoming
in Spring
Thao Chuong
2015-03-12
9 Years Ago
"It is easier to recognize good than it is to define it." ~ Wystan Hugh Auden
www.ExploringTheLight.com
9 Years Ago
@Juergen Roth: Thanks for sharing the interesting quote and the link that brought me to your gallery of The Light. Have a good night
9 Years Ago
My thought of the day
Between Talks And Dos
he sounds like a nice guy
who always claims
he
follows
the teachings
of Jesus Christ
except
for self-defence
when someone
attacks
him
he retaliates only for that legitimate reason
he often slaps back twice
on both sides of
the ugly face
of the guy
who
strikes once at one of his cheeks
it’s quite understandable
because it hurts
and makes
him mad
like
hell
he also tends to forget
the most valuable lesson of forgiveness
not
only
he holds onto his shirt
and beats the robber to take his jacket back
but
also
he calls the police to bring the bad guy into jail
in reality
there is always a huge gap
between what people are talking at this moment
and what they would do afterward
Unfortunately, this kind of pep talks have fooled endless people
Thao Chuong
2015-03-13
9 Years Ago
Existence must be eternal. If existence never existed, it's absence is still a form of existence.
9 Years Ago
Good morning Maxwell Hanson
Thank you very much for sharing your thought. Have a nice day.
I like your work and your tricky thought that sound as if it were philosophical and logic. But I have different thinking about this
I am so sure that this type of argument (in your quote) has been widely used in many debates. It is a tricky game that politicians and lawyers often use to fool people in promotion of their causes or in defense of their cases. This type of mind game has a serious flaw in it.
Back to your quote: "Existence must be eternal. If existence never existed, it's absence is still a form of existence.'
I would argue that: Absence is certainly NOT a form of existence but a clear form NON existence. So therefore, if existence never existed, its absence also never existed.
Let's take a simpler example to identify the flaw in this type of thinking process:
He has NOTHING. (And nothing is a form of existence, therefore nothing exists. Since NOTHING exists. Nothing must be something.)
So he has SOMETHING
9 Years Ago
Definitely interesting, but I would say the example you provided just backs up my thought of the day. Or should I say thought of the other day?
As you say "So therefore, if existence never existed, its absence also never existed. " I imagine this as true! But, doesn't that show that existence must be eternal? If it's absence has never existed, existence itself must be eternal.
Either that or at one point the absence of existence did exist, meaning that something (i.e. your NOTHING example) existed. Even if all that existed was the absence of existence. Which, like pretty much everything we are talking about, is incomprehensible.
It's an interesting thing we may never understand, thank you for sharing your thoughts :)
9 Years Ago
Ah, Maxwell.
Thank you very much for sharing your new thought of the day.
It is quite interesting that you have just raised another flaw in your assumption about the correlation between the concept of "existence" and the concept of "eternal".
The fact that you have just mentioned about your "thought of the other day". You actually accept that your thought of yesterday has gone -no longer in existence. Am I correct? So the existence of the thinking process in your brain keeps changing and is NOT "eternal". Simply because you are not immortal. Not only your thought but yourself will cease the existence after you die (or whenever you have brain dead - I hope not -lol ).
The primary flaw in your argument is that it is based the assumption: "existence MUST be ETERNAL" . And you have gone further in your debate by attaching concept "existence" to the concept "absence"
Ask yourself two following questions, and you could find the flaw in your assumption
1- what is the correlation between "existence" and absence"
2- Must existence be Eternal or Temporary? How?
Now let's get back to your original thought (from yesterday post) and find it out.
If Existence itself ceases its own existence (in theory), then it turns into a new form its Absence. In either case (Existence or Absence) its nature is temporary as each of them would take turn to cease its existence .
9 Years Ago
Ah, Maxwell.
I would like to offer you the same type of thinking process for your further thought about the tricky games of argument within the dualism concept .
"everything is relative"; if this statement is 100% correct, then this statement itself is absolute.
or
"everything is temporary", if this statement is 100% correct, its truth is "eternal".
You see! when I attach the concept "everything" and the concept "truth" I got the same result "eternal" as your thought about existence and absence.
It's quite interesting how we could put our mind into the loop of dualism.
9 Years Ago
@ Maxwell Hanson. I wonder if you don’t mind taking a break to enjoy your art. Then if you’re still interested, we could get back and discuss further about our thoughts of existence, eternal, etc…
I love your following painting that you painted after one of van Gogh’s painting. Your color palette is much bolder, rawer, and brighter than that of in van Gogh’s original painting “a Meadow in the Mountains Le Mas de Saint Paul”. You were very successful in your application of van Gogh’s brushworks and his impasto style (thick layers of pigment). It is quite interesting that you added a UFO in the painting.
Medium: Painting - Acrylics On Canvas Paper
Description: This is my personal take of one of Van Gogh's paintings. It is a very thick painting.
Portal to The Immortal
dread
of the unknown after death
is the wild drive for the mankind’s
fancy dream of getting a portal to the eternal
being immortal
is more realistically achievable
and much better
than
any afterlife
even in a heaven
fear of
leaving
everything
behind is also
a mind’s bugging thought
absolutely
nothing
not
any
tiny thing
human beings could bring with them out of the exit door
even
their bodies
left to be decomposed
ironically
what humans leave behind
that could make them become immortal
it’s
the Starry Night
that keeps van Gogh alive
portals to the eternal stay deep
inside wild imaginations
of each
artist.
Thao Chuong
2015-03-14
9 Years Ago
It’s the Mind’s Game
to
keep
me in silence
a gun could be physically pressed against my temple
my hands could be tied
my mouth could be gaged
my pen would be taken away
I myself could be imprisoned
however,
nothing could be done to suppress my thinking process
no one could control my mind
except
I
myself
I
can
always
drive my thought on many different freeways
why do I often walk on a narrow path
toward one single direction
and confine my freedom
inside a tiny cell of
my own
self
Thao Chuong
2015-03-15
9 Years Ago
You know Viet, I see this post everyday .. and think.. I have many thoughts of the day.. mine today is.. "To be or not to be....what was the question?" Have a great evening..I love this thread..it is very enlightening and interesting..
9 Years Ago
Jean Gabriel Poivre: Thank you, Jean. I appreciate your feedback. Your thought of the day is quite "itchy" for my mind (lol). Have a good night,
To Bees or Not to Bees
to
bees
or not to bees
not really a question for me
honey bees
mason bees
I
need
you all
for pollination
as it’s springtime
all fruit trees in my garden are blooming
to be
or not to be
maybe a big question
for you - all human beings
those who wanna be too philosophical to drive your mind insane
and your life nonsense
for me
to bees
more important than to be
Thao Chuong
2015-03-15
9 Years Ago
Good morning Jean
I took another tour to your art galleries. I enjoyed your painterly photos. I think you are an interesting thinker and good thought provoker. I have second thought about our quote "To be or not to be....what was the question?". Your thought “ ....what was the question?". in that quote has turned a very philosophical question about existence “To be or not to be...” into a non-issue.
I like your Zen-like attitude. It's stillness for the mind, Jean
Existence or Non-existence? Fullness or Emptiness?
Excuse me !…What was the question?
No big deal!
Forget it,
Enjoy a restful day
9 Years Ago
Let’s enjoy your art. Smoker is an awesome work in term of light, lines, movements…(FYI: Let me know if you want to have your work removed for any reason. Especially, if you are afraid that your work (as posted here) would make easier for being stolen. In case you have a copyrightophobia as some of artists whose works I posted and had to remove from this thread).
The Smoker
“you’re burning your life
your lungs would be black
and look exactly like inside a chimney of a wood stove
most importantly you’re going to die of cancer”
they’ve been trying to scare
him not to
smoke
“also, you’re polluting the air
and poisoning other people”
they’ve warned
him to
quit
as
a single
and a strong believer
he don’t wanna commit any sin of making love outside a marriage
he has enjoyed no sex at all
so he’s never known so far
how a woman’s raw flesh
would taste
in bed
his
stomach
can’t tolerate any booze
he absolutely drinks no alcohol
he lives from hand to mouth
so often
not enough
money for food
he has no fun in gamble
life’s too short
what’s the heck going on?
everyone must hit the exit button sooner or later
smoking is his only little joy
what would be left for him
c’mon
giv’ im a break
stop injecting sins or guilt into his mind, won’t you ?
Thqo Chuong
2015-03-16
9 Years Ago
Good day Viet, sorry to be so delinquent in your thread but here i am today with a thought and echo to your; "Existence or Non-existence?”
Another Beginning?
my story began
somehow
created
in time
and spent in memories
of an accumulated past
confused
with the present
and quickening into the distance
towards where
my story ends…
another beginning?
Ed Meredith
2015-03-16
And speaking of Beginnings, i have just begun my task of reading the thoughts and writings posted on this thread… enjoy the day my friend..
9 Years Ago
The Lands of Hypnos
I close my eyes,
drifting
off to sleep,
breath and heartbeat
gliding along.
Existing
on autonomic
auto-pilot.
My mind
sliping so
very far from
this plane
of physical
existence.
The dreamy world
of Morpheus,
beyond the
boundaries
of conscious
existence.
Where then
do
I
Exist?
Karen Newell
3/16/15
9 Years Ago
Thanks Ed and Karen. Yay! It's such a delight to get double treats from two Wandering Clouds.
Ed, Here is my possible answer to your question about another beginning.
Another Beginning
(To Ed Meredith - my atheist friend)
the happy ending
of your story in this suffering life
may be doomed by another horrible beginning
in an extremely overheated oven
called the burning hell
don’t expect
you would get any good start at a paradise
where there’re abundance of
wine and beer
sexy girls
and everything you enjoy
don’t wanna be suffered eternally
afterlife
now
you’d
better start
bribing my god
by worshiping him
in trade for a waterfront home on his heaven
nothing you could lose
it is a win-win situation
for
both
you and my god
why not?
Thao Chuong
2015-03-16
9 Years Ago
Good Morning Viet,
.,
Although Im still on Paris time...I am visiting my son in the U S for holiday ,my wife and I for a bit.So this would be rather early me,,,lol. I was rather delighted to see you had made a visit or two into my gallery .I kept seeing Victoria BC..and although there are many here from there..I felt I should know who this was.
I also was very happy to see your comments on my work.It made me feel good that you had ventured into the Lion's Den so to speak of FAA. Viet, When I look through the forums here and discussions at the end of the day I run across this post that has lasted and endured here for a very long time and I glance into the profile photo that is yours and see a person at peace and a great thinker and thought provoker himself.
Your photo brings a peace over me and is like a beacon ever present in time of a storm.I am not afraid of anything being stolen.I am happy you posted my work here as I am thrilled that you ventured into my galleries and took time to observe and to comment and make your presence known.I appreciate you so very much and I appreciate the thoughts and words that go into this post each and everyday .You truly are perhaps a great study of the human race and also a bit of an existentialist yourself.
My thoughts are too shallow at the moment but as you once said..in another post to me ,I will have to give it some thought and get back to you.I do in fact have so much to say but just waking has made my mind .. just barely here for the moment .I hope you forgive me and you are very welcome to post my work here anytime you want.I do not worry for theft,I do in fact almost encourage it,, for what is art if not for sharing it with another human being?
I think that there is no reason to worry about theft..we all steal from each other or as I rather say borrow..We borrow other peoples ,thoughts,their words..like your quote or poem here and their work..We stand on the shoulders of giants to accomplish more than we have ever done..We take a photo here and there and capture a moment or a thought and share it with others that in turn share it with the world and so on. Sharing is itself a wonderful thing. Expression of being transcends time and history and leads to the future for all to enjoy. Theft,me worry?Why. Most do not call it theft,they call it borrow. As I borrow a book from the library ,but yet I borrow a idea from a great philosopher, I borrow a poem from a great poet,I borrow an idea of how to split the atom,it goes on and on and on.. Viet..so no need to cause a stress in our lives..we all share what we can and do what we can to make the world a better place
and waking up to your kind comments and finding this post here today has made me feel a pride inside.
I actually inspired something thought provoking in another human being that will be a part of their memory and useful in their thoughts ,a communication a conveyance of idea,and positive energy that keeps the universe flowing and in sync for all time. Have a great evening and thank you so much for making me a part of this eternal post forever as someone that was brought into a light that keeps glowing and acting as a beacon for all of those that feel they are slipping into the abyss .
Also thank you for visiting and please come again anytime and always comment and make your presence known.It is always nice to see your face and a spark of intuitive thoughts and comments from your keystrokes .Share what you like with whomever you like. As I said in the beginning here.. if not for art to share ,what is the purpose of it...Art is meant to share,as are
all the wonderful things in this life. You shared something with me today and others..your time and your kind words and your deep thinking.. a gift to each and everyone of us ..also your deep thoughts on the world that surrounds us.. Thank you for that and thank you for all that you are.. have a great evening. JGP
9 Years Ago
Viet, I would so like to beg your forgiveness for my ignorance of saying you borrowed your poem from another.I did not know until this very exact moment that your pen name is "Thqo Chuong "Please forgive my transgression for now I am enlightened forever about your alter ego or pen name and will always know whom the poet is from and for. JGP
9 Years Ago
Good evening, Jean.
Wow! I am awed at your sharing spirit.
Welcome to USA- the land of opportunity (you can make tons of dough and become a billionaire at the Wall Street) and especially the land of very highly protected security (so you can enjoy your sleep with all doors wide opened without fear of any intruder -lol).
No need for any apology. I don't see any difference, whether I am called Viet Tran, Thao Chuong, or any other names. Because the name doesn't reflect what and who I am.
I agree with your thought that we often borrow ideas and thoughts from other people. I also don't have any reason to be afraid of having electronic copies my art borrowed and used by other people. as I still own the original -the hard copy of my collages. However, I fully respect other artists'rights to safe-guard their artworks. This is the reason that sometimes, I hesitate to pair my poetry with some other artists' art. I must thank you for your confirmation of allowing me to showcase your artworks here.
Have a good night.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for your welcome Viet, A name is meaningless...you can call me Bill or you can call me Bob,or you can call me Sam but make sure you call me for dinner.. That is an old southern joke ..I heard while living in New Orleans.. years and years ago. A name is only a reflection of a state of being.. a mere symbol in a universe that is oblivious to names and words..our spirit is what makes us who we are. Names are a human characteristic that we conform to ..for reasons of being identified when in reality ,there is no purpose of being identified,other than the question that springs in to mind.."to be or not to be,that is the question" but "to be" I suppose would be a better thing but to "not be" we have no answer ,as so
there are many that have not been. Do you think they minded so?
That will always be the existential question for now and all time ..To be or not to be...does it matter...we are just star dust that formed into beings of energy that will return to that same star dust. When ask how old we are. I would say 60,but the truthful answer would be at least 14 billion 60 years old..as our molecules are the same age as the beginning of the universe ,and I suspect a lot older than that depending on what you subscribe to as when and where the universe began and where. I too have taken time to view your works..so unique and full of life and as many great pieces of art take time an extended time to complete ,which makes them so unique and unusual and complete.I find them very exotic and creative and only a very creative person could construct and put together such wonderful pieces of creation of ideas and conceptions...so like your art ,I find you the same,very centered in a world of chaos and confusion .
This is a very good thing that makes you even more unique and different than most.Also that you choose Thao Chnong as your alter ego makes so much sense..to me..Your words remind me of the great Tao Te Ching a great philosopher and founder of a whole new belief system and way of life. I think you are a great influence in this sea of confusion called life and so fortunate to have you in our midst ..there is a great calm and wisdom about you that seems to radiate from you .I am glad you are here..and thank you again for direct discussion and communication with a humble artist and student of the human species..Have a wonderful evening there in Victoria BC.
9 Years Ago
My thought for the day is this, " If you are a wet blanket, you shouldn't run for politics." This thought then leads to the idea that I need to capture a wet blanket on canvas. Yes?
9 Years Ago
Many thanks to you for sharing your thought: Jean and Kim
@ Jean: You are a writer who could let your flow of thought run on keyboards as easy as water running through different terrains down to streams, rivers and ocean. It is very kind of you to give me too much nice words. (I often remind myself the higher I climb, the more pain when I fall). Since you've mentioned again about "to be = existence" and "not to be" = non-existence. you've generate some thoughts that I would share with you when I have more time for this complicate matter
@Kim: " If you are a wet blanket, you shouldn't run for politics." This thought then leads to the idea that I need to capture a wet blanket on canvas. Yes? posted v=by Kim Peto 28 minutes ago
Yes, it's a good idea to put your thought on canvas (-not a wet blanket on canvas). I think it could be a good abstract. May I ask: " In your opinion, who should run for politics, Kim?
Have a good night or good day to all
9 Years Ago
Oooh. Who should run for politics? Good question. We could start with fortitude to not care about being reelected but worrying more about saying what needs to be said even if only given a brief moment to shine. We could at least ask that they not wear suits or have horrible 50's appropriate JFK haircuts or we could say that they should at least have answers; not necessarily the perfect answer but an answer would be good.
9 Years Ago
Ah. Kim
Unfortunately, the people who could give us appropriate or reasonable answers or solutions are not interested in politics.Only those people - who are unable to govern - run for public offices. Therefore, voters often don't have any choice.
9 Years Ago
My thought (with a sense of humour) generated by Ed Meredith's poem and the thought of Jean Gabriel Poivre about TO BE OR NOT TO BE.
The Philosopher’s Enlightenment
he always philosophically wonders
about his existence “to be or not to be”
the haunting question has permanently occupied his mind
anything else’s secondary
he has spent endless sleepless nights
and many ceaseless days
contemplating
meditating
thinking
hunting
searching
imagining
envisioning
visualizing
and so on…
he has kept scratching his head until very few hair left
yet
he has seen
no light
no end
in his living tunnel
too tired
to hold on his philosophical thought
he has come to an English pub for relaxation
he doesn’t remember
how many jugs of beers
he has emptied up
on the way home
the call of the nature becomes so urgent to be ignored
panic to look for a hidden place
on busy streets in Paris
for a quick
leak
unable
to hold
any more
he felt a great relief
after having his pants warmly wet
somewhat he gets the light and becomes enlightened
his own existence
no longer a big issue
in comparison with those simpler matters
in his daily activities
such
as
"to pee
or not to pee"
it could become the most essential question occupying mind
Thao Chuong
2015-03-15
9 Years Ago
Thank for posting your interesting work
Sorry for my late reply, Jean. I've been quite busy today.
Back to your humorous thought "to be or not to be.. what was the question again?". I think it is a good topic for us to have some fun. Since, you are on holidays and have more restful time, why don't you share your thought about this issue, first? Please make this complicated issue easy to swallow. Here is my assignment for you. It ain't a test (lol).
1- Have you yourself had any question about your existence, Jean? If yes, what was (or were) the question(s)?
2- Do you think about "to be" or :"not to be" in a general sense or in specific cases"?
You let me know yours, I will let you know mine (when I have some time late tonight)
Have a good night.
9 Years Ago
1- Have you yourself had any question about your existence, Jean? If yes, what was (or were) the question(s)?
Viet, I have questioned my existence since I was old enough to do so meaning since my first real thoughts at a very young age.. maybe 5 or 6.
We don't have enough space here in this forum for my questions, maybe one day I will give you a brief synopsis .Im sure that it will even at that time take up way to much space and frankly when it comes to questions..im very much like a little boy ,why,but why, but why..? Priest,theologians,and preachers despise me.. and turn when they see me walk near them
for the incessant questions that they cannot answer only to turn their facts back into questions. Scientist that I have known.philosphers ,doctors,lawyers,you name it and they walk the other way for the incessant questions.
My life has been an endless quest of knowledge and started in the libraries long before PC's . Then with the advent of PC's I was in heaven..constant research on insationable levels .It has driven everyone mad that I have ever known. The funny thing is that my wife is very similar to me in that way but even her ,I cause to have a nervous break down from time to time with the constant questions..She gets angry at me and screams.."What does it matter anyway" .I say..it matters to me.
As far as my questions there are many versions of the answers.. but Ahh...I am looking for the correct one..but then alas how can you know you have the correct one?It is a catch 22.
2- Do you think about "to be" or :"not to be" in a general sense or in specific cases"?
Frankly I always thought it an odd thing to say..even in shakespere..I thought what an odd thing? To tell you the truth Viet..I have never given the phrase much thought..It was used here in a jokingly manner or repiticous way repeating something much like a mockingbird does ,just repeating it as the joke I heard many years ago..to be silly to act in a humorous way.I am not sure where I heard it or whom I heard it from,perhaps,the late Robin Williams.. I found it strikingly funny and occassionally use it when I can. I will have to research that and find out exactly where I heard it from ..thanks for reminding me to do so..and hope that answers your question about that.
You let me know yours, I will let you know mine (when I have some time late tonight)
Im sure that you will be a better commicator on the subject than I am able to at the moment as I have never really dwelved into the depths of the meaning. Perhaps a poem would honor it in some manner or just plain communication and deep anaylasis.on the subject or maybe I will have time to do a little research as to others thoughts on the meaning.I look forward to hearing from you on the subject tonight. Yes I am on holiday but that never seems to slow my actions or motion in the sense of staying busy as well. My ever constant quest to create something not so mundane that someone looks and says "hey look another one" yet to find something that makes someone say WOW! I have only composed one or two WOW's in my life but the feeling you get from that exclamation is a feeling you never forget..So I thank you for your response and look forward to hearing more from you tonight. JGP
PS..Have a good evening too..
Have a good night.
9 Years Ago
Many thanks, Jean. You’ve won the race (lol). Now the next run …Just joking!
It’s amazing how each of us think about our own existence. I have a lot to learn from different perspective. You’re very articulate in expressing your thought. I appreciate you taking time to write it down.
1-Have I myself had any question about my own existence? And what was (or were) the question(s)?
I myself often wonder if my mind didn’t work like those of people with serious mental illness, would I recognize myself and my own existence? and would it make me happier than I am now with the self-awareness?
I have met many people living in different rural areas. They didn’t go to schools nor got basic education. Yet, they seemed very happy and very content with their living condition. I believe that in their pure mind, there is NO philosophical thought such as “existence”, meaning of life? They really made me think of those intellectuals and well-educated people (especially philosophers) who are always obsessed by those issues that make their living process more complicated. I don’t know knowledge is the burden or an enhancer to the mind. When a mind is full of knowledge, there is no more room to put the new one in. I wonder if it is the reason why Zen Masters mediate to empty their mind and lead themselves to nothingness.
Trading our thought/knowledge to learn and enjoy a fun time would be fine. Yet, I am afraid that we would waste our living time to look for answers to those questions that aren’t much useful for our living process. I hope you would enjoy the conversation as I do.
2- Do I think about "to be" or :"not to be" in a general sense or in specific cases"?
Like you, Jean I also think the concept ("to be" or :"not to be" in a general sense) is a joke. Simply, term “to be” must be clearly defined and attached to a specific subject. Existence of who? or of what? Without the attachment, thee concept existence is generally meaningless. For example: The existence of god, of universe, etc.
The concept “to be” alone or “not to be” alone is never a question, unless it has a specific attachment (to what? or who? or how?)
To be…who? … a being?, a good man?, an angel? …
To be…what? …an artist, a lawyer, …
To be...how?.. naked? poor? rich? black, white…
It is quite tricky that may people often use the general concept to apply into a specific case and think that the truth …
Have a restful evening.
9 Years Ago
http://youtu.be/F1ZwaEzMtJw
The End of Suffering Read by Thich Nhat Hanh:
May the sound of this bell penetrate deep into the cosmos
Even in the darkest spots
Living beings are able to hear it clearly
So that all suffering in them cease
Understanding comes to their heart
And they transcend the path of sorrow and death.
The universal dharma door is already open
The sound of the rising tide is heard clearly
The miracle happens
A beautiful child appears in the heart of a lotus flower
One single drop of this compassionate water
Is enough to bring back the refreshing spring to our mountains and rivers.
Listening to the bell
I feel the afflictions in me begin to dissolve
My mind calm
My body relax
A smile is born on my lips
Following the sound of the bell
My breathe brings me back to the safe island of mindfulness
In the garden of my heart
The flowers of peace bloom beautifully
9 Years Ago
The prettiest smiles hide the deepest secrets. The prettiest eyes have cried the most tears and the kindest hearts have felt the most pain.
Anonymous
9 Years Ago
Jean, I would agree with that.
I am blessed to live in a beautiful place and that I got out of bed this morning and was able to do some networking for my photography today.
9 Years Ago
Thanks Pamela, I didn't write it but saw it and thought how appropriate for a thought for today.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Jean Gabriel Poivre and Pamela Walton. Have a nice day. (Sorry for not sharing my thought with you for awhile).
Farewell to Love and Life
1-
how cruel it sound
after thirty-four years
together
up and
down
cold
and hot
sweet and sour
he left her
without saying a word
neither waving goodbye
nor looking back for the last time
to see how she would cope with the farewell
.
How much tear would be enough
to wash away a heavy load of sufferings in her mind
how much time would it take
for her wound to be healed
could she ever get back
to her own feet
without
him
2-
thirty four years together were such a long time
but
she felt
as if it were yesterday
when he held her tight and kissed her for the first time
she couldn’t believe
how it could happen
how
could
he leave
her alone forever
without showing his hesitance
nor expressing any regret
3-
without
any warning
his heart suddenly decided
to take its final rest
against his desire
for love
‘n life
she
found him
sleeping peacefully on a garden bed
sunlight was shining on his face
it was a quiet afternoon in the late winter
the cherry trees in his garden started blooming
Thao Chuong
2015-03-27
9 Years Ago
Thank you Karen for sharing "The End of Suffering Read by Thich Nhat Hanh". It was quite peaceful for the mind.
9 Years Ago
echo to Viet
Foot prints on the sands
in each foot print
a universe momentarily lives
to be washed away... ... ..
where walks the feet...
of God?
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
9 Years Ago
Beaches
I followed footprints
in the sand
as far as the eye
could see.
Full Moon rising
tide pulling
grains of sand
forever shifting
til once again
I walked alone.
Karen Newell
3/27/15
9 Years Ago
Welcome and thanks to Jason Christopher and Karen Newell for sharing your thought.
An echo to Jason’s echo
God’s Gender … Is the Question of Equality?
she strolls
on
wet sand
without leaving any trace
no footprints could be seen
as
she walks the feet…
of
Goddess
on a no-man land
Thao Chuong
2015-03-27
.
9 Years Ago
Goddess
Goddess, do you wait to seduce mankind?
or does compassion fill your heart?
This rain of endless tears...
this river of floods
your heart of love
will it ever stop?
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
9 Years Ago
Good morning Jason. Thanks for sharing your poem. It's a good one that generated my further thought about the creator and the issue of gender equality
The Creator
those wise men of
the ancient
days
not
only
insulted
their biological mothers
but
also
dared paint
a tainted image of the holy creator - as a sexist
who created the first woman from just a rib of a man
nowadays
it’s overdue
for gender equality
in this highly civilized modern area
wouldn’t the church better acknowledge to its followers
about its gender bias and prejudice against females?
both
in its practices
and
in what
written in those outdated books
by those men in the male dominated world
Thao Chuong
2015-03-28
My own observation: In many different religions, females still have been treated unequally in the male dominated world in term of priesthood and authority in those religious systems Those religious men-in-power have been trying to keep the "status quo" in the name of god or (belief) to continue suppress female and maintain their male dominating authority.
WARNING: You're welcomed to share your thought. However, please be aware that discussion about religion is against the forum regulations of this site)
9 Years Ago
An echo to Karen's poem Beaches
Of Humans and Nature
on
hot days
crowded humans lie down
on
beaches
like sardines
in
tin cans
even
with no wind
the sound of surf never stops
tireless waves keep shifting
over and
over
and erase all traces
left
in
soft sand
by
the most destructively unkind
species
on earth
the so-called mankind
Thao Chuong
2015-03-28
9 Years Ago
About apple -the forbidden fruit of knowledge
Description: Eve temptation..ruby lips,green eyes and tempting apple in the garden of eden..
Temptation of Adam
how much knowledge have humans gained?
from
the first bite
at God’s forbidden fruit
to
terabytes on a laptop
if my ancestor Adam could resist the lure for sin
mankind would have still been living in god’s paradise
however
I
wonder
who would voluntarily
wanna
be
a domesticated pet bird
joyfully singing
in a safe
cage
without any knowledge of
the unlimited sky
out of
its
garden of Eden?
Thao Chuong
2015-03-28
9 Years Ago
The Hard Core of a Soft-looked Apple
her sexy beauty
is
more luring
than god’s forbidden fruit
he takes many deep bites at the soft flesh outside
‘til he reaches
her hard
core
and
breaks
his teeth
what looks innocent and harmless
on
the surface
could be a deceptively lethal trap
at
the bottom
now
he’s
getting
caught forever
on her sharp hook
like
a fish
dangled on a fishing line
struggling for
a gulp of
air
Thao Chuong
2015-03-29
9 Years Ago
Hi Thomas Woolworth
Welcome and thanks for sharing your work, I really like the quote you put on your work. I really like your artwork below . It reminded me of the most wonderful moment when I held my first child.in my arms
The New Love
like in a dream
I
carefully held
and gently pressed against my chest
the newborn
so
tiny
fragile
and dedicate
flooded my heart with love
rising inside my mind a desire to protect
many years have passed
still
I would have never forgot
how delightful moment
it
was
the strange feeling
of becoming a parent
for the first
time
Thao Chuong
2015-03-29
9 Years Ago
Why
do we waste
so much time
chasing pointless rainbows
on
a
Discussion.
Bored
And I don't meant this one, Thao, but rather several other "discussions" that have taken place this week :- (
Thank you, Thao for this creative outlet :D
9 Years Ago
@ Richard Reeve. Thanks for dropping by and sharing your thought. Enjoy a peaceful day.
I looked at your work and found my peaceful moment.
Contemplating
getting rid of the outside world “I see”
with
both eyes
tightly closed
exploring the inner realm “I feel”
through
a mind widely opened
reaching deep
down
to
the bottom of self
found
a moment of peace
Thao Chuong
2015-03-29
9 Years Ago
Contemplation
I stop
the ceaseless
monkey mind
chatter,
the reckless
runaway thoughts
and contemplate........
9 Years Ago
Thao and Karen, excellent thoughts. Thank you!
- Richard Reeve
ReevePhotos.com
9 Years Ago
The imagination is the door way to creativity.
Art doesnt need a plan, you just have to let go and create a masterpiece!
Inspire Imagine Create :)
9 Years Ago
@ Karen Newell. You've make me think of my monkey mind and how I could stop it (lol)
@ Welcome Jennifer Schneringer. Thanks for sharing your thought about creativity and imagination
@ Richard Reeve
Why
do we waste
so much time
chasing pointless rainbows
on
a
Discussion.
Bored
By Richard Reeve
An echo to Richard’s thought
Peace for Inner Self
whenever
I
hear
clearly
warning whistles
and rumbling noises
of metal wheels shrieking on steel tracks
I often take a deep breath and decide
to avoid the coming train
carrying heavy loads
of other people’s
disturbing
thoughts
I’m
pondering
why the hell do
humans
often
go to war – not peace
and select heated fighting over serene harmony
I’d better not get involved in endless problems out there
and focus on little peace
for my own
inner
self
Thao Chuong
2015-03-29
9 Years Ago
An echo to Jennifer Schneringer's thought about creativity and imagination.
Creativity Needed for Both Love and Art
touchy emotion
let it flow off the heart
like
water runs on fast current
in a river
wild imagination
set it free from the mind
as
cloud leisurely wanders
in windless
sky
creativity needed
for
both love and art
smear naked thought
on
blank canvas
until dropped dead on the floor
entwine two unclothed bodies
in one piece
‘til reaching
orgasm
Thao Chuong
2015-03-30
9 Years Ago
An echo to Karen's poem Contemplation
Contemplation
what
type of key
does a monk
use to contain his monkey thought
and drain his full mind
to
nothingness
after his meditation session
could
he
really
relieve himself from a sea of sufferings
when his mind gets back to the reality
what would he gain in his attempt of running away from the living process?
Thao Chuong
2015-03-30
9 Years Ago
Hello fellow thinkers of thoughts of the day…
Here are some echoes upon echoes of
Monkey Thoughts from a Monkey
in a chain of seven Senryū…
lost in monkey thoughts
meditating over angst
forgotten in now
riding mental waves
the mind talks within itself
meaningless chatter
silencing the mind
searching for impossibles
tying self in knots
living in conflict
likes and dislikes frustration
life’s energy sapped
no judgmental thoughts
transcending duality
mind becomes silent
freeing from conflict
meaningful relationships
life is harmony
profoundness abounds
follow any path of choice
living quite mind
Ed Meredith
30 March 2015
9 Years Ago
Thanks Ed. Nice day my friend.
Senryu Key of Meditation
monk without a key
like a monkey in jungles
having his mind lost
Thao Chuong
2015-03-30
9 Years Ago
Senryu
mind becomes silent
transcending duality
no judgmental thoughts
Ed Meredith
My echo to Ed's non-judgmental thoughts
Senryu Judgement
mind without judgement
as a boat without rudder
where does it end up?
Thao Chuong
2015-03-30
9 Years Ago
my monkey boo meditation echo to monkeys echo
Monkey me
monkey you
two stuffed monkeys
in a zoo
monkey him
monkey her
two sexed monkeys
on a car
monkey bee
monkey boo
time to think
time to coo and coo and coo
arghhhhh just monkey You!
(c) found this by the monkey zoo bin 2915
9 Years Ago
an echo to the hell of monkey thought
The Monkey Thought
how
chaotic
life could be
when a monkey is running away from a zoo
and roaming on the freeway
of thoughts
Poe Ed
2015-03-30
9 Years Ago
The Monkey's Fun
the
hungry
monkey searched for some freebee
inside a garbage bin
in a zoo
he
found nothing
but
some banana peels
of
crappy
thoughts
Thao Chuong
20154-03-30
9 Years Ago
Viet, My thought for today.!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am so happy to see you back up and going here and doing what you do.. As I said before seeing your post everyday is like a light in a storm .. a beacon of hope and happiness.... to all.
I truly adore your poems, and also love reading you.. I hope you are an author because if you are not you are wasting yourself here but promise me when you get famous and you will if you try .. if not already...you should be... but please don't ever stop this thread...Today for some reason..I am happy ,happy happy..My thoughts are all great..my work is springing forth and the ideas and thoughts cannot even begin to be expressed here..its is like a high without the drugs which brings me to a quote about myself that I quite literally stole from a great artist.. which is all good ,he won't need it anymore because he is dead. The late great Salvador Dali " I don't need drugs, I am drugs" my sentiments about myself EXACTLY..
Thanks for letting me post here and hope you and yours and everyone here has a wonderful evening ,morning or afternoon whichever the case be.. Ciao
9 Years Ago
Ah, Jean. Give me a Tylenol, will you? Your thought has given me a serious headache (lol). Have a good night.
Here is my thought about celebrity
Dream of Being Well-known
being renowned
is
but
a nuisance
not only personal privacy’s lost
but also basic freedom’s gone
you cannot walk alone on busy streets
without being disturbed
by the crowd
those
who
wanna talk with you in person
you can no longer lie down on a sunny beach
without being surrounded
by those fans
who
wanna have your autographs
famous people usually have more headache than regular folks
their lives are under permanent surveillance
by hungry troops
of those Paparazzi
who wanna hunt you at every minute of your step
like
police’s chasing criminals
worse
every piece of your personal information could be fully exposed to the public
photos of
you having sex with your mate
or lying naked in seclude place
could be posted on the world wide web
it’s
the costly price
of being well-known
no
certainly not me
I never dream of being a celebrity in such an insane world
Thao Chuong
2015-03-30
9 Years Ago
WOW Viet, guess that is why I gave it all up.... lol..sorry about your headache...guess it is best for me to read and not put thoughts here..sorry
9 Years Ago
Viet, you are correct in your question:
Judgement Senryu:
mind without judgement
as a boat without rudder
where does it end up?
Thao Chuong
2015-03-30
i only have time today for one echoing thought…
Judgment is the rudder of my boat that keeps me from crashing upon the rocks of being judgmental...
moving through the world
judgment keeps me alive
moving judgmentally
though the mind
kills my spirit
Ed Meredith
31 March 2015
9 Years Ago
Good morning, Jean. I could see that you were very happy in your former post. I took this happy mood to make a joke. I didn’t expect that you were so serous with my joke about headache. Sorry for creating the misunderstanding
You are a good thinker and a thought provoker who make me think whenever I read your comment. You let your thoughts go freely in your writing as a flow of water. Welcome to share your thought anytime you’d like. Have restful day.
9 Years Ago
Hi Ed.
I love your further thought about the judgmental matter, my friend. Nice day
Here is another echo
Judgement
it ain’t what I see
in my own judgmental mind
the truth is as is
Thao Chuong
2015-03-31
9 Years Ago
My imagination from your exotic avatar, Jean. Not about your naked body soaked in bubbles but about a relaxing moment of yours after having sex (lol)
Description: Three Dollar Whrilpool Sometimes Truth Is Stranger Than Fiction, TRUE STORY
I used to love being able to get into a hot tub or whirlpool bath but could not afford it. I was in a thrift shop where most days you can find incredible bargains. I ran across a portable whirlpool bath machine for three dollars.. and it worked. First I have never heard of a portable whirlpool but decided for three dollars what could it harm.I am used to soaking in bubbles to relax from hard days and so I set up the machine and did not turn it on and then put the bubble bath in the water. I left while the machine was running to go downstairs and I came back up and the bubbles were over my head all through the bath room. I quickly cleaned up the mess but this was the remainder of the bubbles left. My wife also artist/photographer grabbed the camera and shot one of the best photos I have ever had taken at one of the most happiest times of my life at that very moment captured for all time.. a brief moment carved in memory of ever lasting time etched not only in my mind but as a digital image for all to laugh and think how silly.. I just love this so much that I turned it into a painting and decided to put it here in my galleries with the story for all to laugh and enjoy.. JGP
Love Without Sex- How Could It be?
lighting
a cigarette
while soaking himself in spongy bubble bath
is
one of his most favourites
after
having sex
he could feel very relaxed
inside every tiny cell of his flesh and bones
his body regenerated
his mind refreshed
he finds himself back to his regular rhythm
after
being hit by the big bang
and sucked into her black hole of orgasm
he blows hollow rings of smoke
thinking of her sexy body
and
wonders
what would love be
without
sex
Thao Chuong
2015-03-31
9 Years Ago
Cherry Blossoms in Springtime
wind’s blowing on pink canopies
of cherry
trees
flurries of spring blossoming
dance in cool air
on the lawn
a thin tapestry of fallen flower petals
keeps moving
in
the breeze
Thao Chuong
2015-03-31
9 Years Ago
How You Doin Viet?
My thought for the day as usual...
Why do people feel they have to say mean things and insult others.. when there is no need.. ?
My mama always said... if you can't say anything nice.. don't say NOTHING!!!! and no im not related to Forest Gump..
On that note.. have an awesome evening.. :-)
9 Years Ago
“My thought for the day as usual...” Jean Gabriel Poivre. Today, I share the same thought as yours. Enjoy your best day, sir.
Today’s Moment
how nice
it is to be able
to
open my eyes
and wake my mind up
this morning
ah
I’m still breathing and kicking alive
unlike
any other day in the past
today is a brand new day
I wanna enjoy the best
from every
piece
of
it
Thao Chuong
2015-04-01
9 Years Ago
“Why do people feel they have to say mean things and insult others.. when there is no need.. ?” posted by Jean Gabriel Poivre - 9 Hours Ago
I don’t have solid answers for your legitimate question, Jean. However, I can share with you my own thought about this issue.
On the Bright Side
maybe
they’re at the worst moment of their day
high on drugs
their minds are so fucked up
that require brain
surgeries
or
so uptight
under unmanageable stress
they’re in need of being deflated
or
so upset at their failure
they want to drain
their anger
out
or
many other
personal reasons
that make people become so mean sometimes
however
both
online
in real life
most people are decent and nice
luckily
only very
few verminous folks
those were born with hearts, minds, and souls rotten to the core
who could enjoy their evil nature
of turning the world
into a nasty
place
regardless
who they are
whatever they do
it’s better not to let those ugly moments infest our day
Thao Chuong
2015-04-01
9 Years Ago
“My mama always said... if you can't say anything nice.. don't say NOTHING!!!! and no im not related to Forest Gump..” posted Jean Gabriel Poivre - 17 Hours Ago
Good evening Jean. Your thought also reminded me of my mom's teaching. Thanks for your dialogue. Restful evening to all of you.
Mom’s Valuable Lesson
“son!
you talk too much and rarely listen”, said my mom
then
she added:
“you
would better
clear up your mind
open your ears wide
and listen carefully to other people’s wise thoughts
it’s the best way to learn”
her teaching has helped me avoid a lot wars of words
however
I don’t always follow my mom’s valuable lesson
Instead
of keeping myself silence all the time
I often say things
not
really needed to be said
“mom!
forgive me
for my stupidity”
Thao Chuong
2015-04-01
9 Years Ago
Feathers...
A tiniest hidden moment, exposed for all its worth...
like the flicker of a smile, the twitch of an eye, the shudder or shiver of a moments attention. .. .
Feather sweeps across her face... .. .. .. . feathers blown... .. ..
soft sweep of feather, tickles
Almost unseen, then blown away.....
yet felt, deeply, far within
Blown far, far away, where feathers gather.. ... ..
Somewhere yonder
Swans gather by golden Lakes
And skies open, as winds blow....
as sounds lift and cry
the clouds sway and stream their wondrous forms
Whitest swans lift, and carry, upon their Bluest skies
©Jason Christopher 2015
dreaming swans
9 Years Ago
You know Viet, I have a image posted of me.. young.. saying forgive me father..in reference to asking the creator for forgiveness but I should change the name of it.. to Forgive Me Mother... she was a wise woman, a brilliant woman, and her teachings stay with me to this day although many went unheeded ,It was my stupidity that led to my lessons learned after the fact.. although I leaned to survive this cruel world for 60 years, I feel she did a great job of giving me the basis to live this long and prosper..Her genes I inherited to ,maybe her intelligence and skills of surviving this life were passed down through our cells ,but as a silly boy much of what she said went unheard or not wanted to be heard but I did remember.Im sorry for the rambling..you just made me think... I sure do miss her.. Have a good day .. Jean
9 Years Ago
Post Scrip...I also learned to cook from her.. The fabulous dishes from this and that.. wonderful meals that I remember ,to this day I still repeat in my kitchen. I cooked them for me when I was single , I cooked them for my children growing up and my wife.. and now I still cook them.. but long for her way of cooking, although my cooking is similar it could never ever measure up to hers.. it is sad to know that I will never taste the wonderful dishes she prepared again from her loving hands.. but it is superb to know I did in fact pay attention to how she prepared them down to the very spices and way she measured ingredients ..Im sorry .. I really am...this has made me a little nostalgic but I guess old men get that way or at least this one does.. Jean
9 Years Ago
Wow! Jason. I enjoyed reading the poem. I could feel the nice flow of those words flying in the wind like a feather. Thanks for sharing your poetic moment.
Thanks Jean. Good to see you here and read your writing about mom. I love food. I also know how to cook. Yet, like my mom, my wife is a much better cook than I.
Have a restful day
9 Years Ago
The Quest for Knowledge
nowadays
still
humans
don’t know much
about the immense universe
yet
from the time
Adam committed the original sin
to
the modern age
of
today’s date
that daring bite on the forbidden fruit has provided
a quantum leap
for
mankind
we have shredded some light
out of the world
we’re living in
otherwise
with
no knowledge
and unawareness of own selves
humans would have been still lost somewhere inside god’s garden of Eden
the paradise that lullabies our ignorant minds to sleep in the dark forever
Thao Chuong
2015-04-02
9 Years Ago
"You know Viet, I have a image posted of me.. young.. saying forgive me father..in reference to asking the creator for forgiveness but I should change the name of it.. to Forgive Me Mother..." posted by Jean Gabriel Poivre 18 Hours Ago
Good thinking, Jean. Mother's love is unconditional. Any mother would forgive her child for any mistake without asking anything back
Here is my thought about asking for forgiveness. Have a good night.
The Easy Solution
he keeps praying for forgiveness
from the creator
for
the sins he’s committed
and the mistakes he has made
it’s likely
he only believes
in the easy solution
by simply begging his god
to help him wash his dirty hands
he
tends
to forget
the simple fact
that he who digs the hole must fill it up
no
one
could help him deal with
his own problems
but
himself
it’s time for him
to take some responsibilities
by
correcting his bad deeds
and paying back the damages
he has done upon
others
then
probably
god would grant him a full pardon
Thao Chuong
2015-04-02
9 Years Ago
Viet, thank you .. I enjoy your poems so very much.. they are a comfort to me in some unique way . also our communications here are very nice.Thanks again for your kindness. You have a great night too. Jean
9 Years Ago
A combo echo :))
Home
The feather fine touch
of a sweet mother hen.
She records her recipes
with a quill pen.
When I am fed and full
I creep
beneath her downy wing
for a long dreamy sleep.
Snuggling in with a sigh
and a yawn,
safe in the nest
from dusk til dawn.
Karen Newell
4/3/15
9 Years Ago
Good morning Jean and Karen. Thanks for sharing your thought
Here is my echo to Jason’s Feathers... and your combo echo -Home. Enjoy the restful Easter
Wings Without Feathers
birds spread their wings and easily glide in air
featherless humans could also take off
become airborne
and fly up high
in
the sky
but unlike birds
of
flawless flights
men
often
crashed
Thao Chuong
2015-04-03
9 Years Ago
@ Jean Gabriel Poivre.
It was the title of your gallery “What If God Was One Of Us” that intrigued my mind. I did surfed a couple of times to view your interesting works of old men from different cultural heritages. Thank for permitting me to use your art anytime, Jean
Description: Aboriginal Australian Elder,Scholars had disagreed whether their closest kin outside Australia were certain South Asian groups or African groups. The latter would imply a migration pattern in which their ancestors passed through South Asia to Australia without intermingling genetically with other populations along the way. A 2009 genetic study in India found similarities among Indian archaic populations and Aboriginal people, indicating a Southern migration route, with expanding populations from Southeast Asia migrating to Indonesia and Australia.
In a genetic study in 2011, researchers found evidence, in DNA samples taken from strands of Aboriginal people's hair, that the ancestors of the Aboriginal population split off from the ancestors of the European and Asian populations between 65,000 and 75,000 years ago—roughly 24,000 years before the European and Asian populations split off from each other. These Aboriginal ancestors migrated into South Asia and then into Australia, where they stayed, with the result that, outside of Africa, the Aboriginal peoples have occupied the same territory continuously longer than any other human populations. These findings suggest that modern Aboriginal peoples are the direct descendants of migrants to leave Africa up to 75,000 years ago. This finding is supported by earlier archaeological finds of human remains near Lake Mungo that date to 45,000 years ago. The same genetic study of 2011 found evidence that Aboriginal peoples carry some of the genes associated with the Denisovan peoples of Asia; the study suggests that there is an increase in allele sharing between the Denisovans and the Aboriginal Australians genome compared to other Eurasians and Africans. Examining DNA from the finger, researchers from the Harvard Medical School in the US and the Max Planck Institute for Evolutionary Anthropology in Germany concluded that the Denisovans - a primitive group of humans descended from Neanderthals - migrated from Siberia to tropical parts of Asia. The researchers concluded that Denisovans interbred with modern humans in South-East Asia 44,000 years ago, before Australia separated from Papua New Guinea. They contributed DNA to Aborigines along with present-day New Guineans and an indigenous tribe in the Philippines known as Mamanwa. This study makes Aboriginal Australians one of the oldest living populations in the world and possibly the oldest outside of Africa, confirming they may also have the oldest continuous culture on the planet. The Papuans have more sharing alleles than Aboriginal peoples. The data suggest that modern and archaic humans interbred in Asia before the migration to Australia. - By Jean Gabriel Poivre.
If One of Us Were God
if
one
of us
were god
no religion needed
no
more
piped dream of becoming immortal
in a fancy heaven
afterlife
no
more
terror of enduring ceaseless sufferings
in a burning hell
after death
however
if
one
of us
were god
our entire lives would be in another worst nightmare
as
under
tight control
by the almighty power
of
that living lord’s
we would still have to worship him
for our personal gains
and for our fear of being tortured or killed
it’s likely
whoever the creator would be
not really matter
much
it’s
the insecurity
inside each human’s fearful mind
that robs his freedom and takes his fate away
totally
out of his own hands
Thao Chuong
2015-04-03
9 Years Ago
Viet, You flatter me with your post here about my gallery,although it isn't all old men..its women and children and elders of different places,its camel herders .its this and that.. Although I cannot take credit for the thought. of what is God was one of us.. It has been a nagging thought in the back of my mind and always since I first heard the words to the song."What if God Was One of Us' The words are posted in the Gallery description.. It makes sense. what if God was one of us..just an average or what we call average person wandering through our world interacting with us on the same level as us but yet as far from us as he or she would be in the heavens above..
It makes sense.. we were created in his images according to some.. why not live among us and be with those that was created. It is a very haunting thought provoking song and I dearly love it.. Im not sure why but as a person that thinks a lot about many things.. it makes sense to me. But I do want to respond here that there are others in that gallery other than old men.. people from all walks of life..I am honored that you peek in on me from time to time and glad to know that something I created in turn spur you to create something here.. also when you share my works here it comes back to me in others looking and it runs the views up and helps people here in these discussions to know more about me and the art I create. Thanks again for sharing my work here and also for the communication that comes from you on a although public forum more on a personal one on one level. I also hope you have a wonderful evening. JGP
9 Years Ago
As the continents still slip, slowly and shyly,
So we travel further and further apart,
Who knows where the land under my feet will carry me,
As Some hand in all of this moves the jigsaw pieces around.
Or as we naturally heat and freeze and break and float,
Women hanging out washing fall mysteriously down sink holes,
Deep sea plates turn in their deep sea beds and move Islands.
No matter how still and quiet you feel reading a book, in a chair, in silence,
The earth is always moving,
From those first itchy feet, we are accustomed to moving without knowing.
Ideas from cave drawings, before language, designed ideas of something farther afield,
Then sandalled beings with spears began to trek, and build boats and sail into their dreams,
And finding strange lands, warmer or cooler their bodies began to camouflage,
Change colour, to suit.
I would like to meet that first fleet, the parent of us all.
Maria Disley 4/4/15
9 Years Ago
Thank you Jean for sharing your thought Jean
Thanks for sharing your poem, Maria.
Enjoy the restful long weekend.
9 Years Ago
Again. I keep walking on the narrow and worn path of my blind thoughts about god
If We Were Gods
what would happen?
if all of us were gods
everybody could be equal
no rich
no poor
no loser
no winner
no longer an unjust universe
the earth would become the Garden of Eden again
it would be disastrous
if all of us were gods
not only
the Pope himself becomes jobless
millions of priests, nuns, and other religious folks will be laid off
the world’s economy would be flushed into a toilet
as
trillions of dollar revenue per year will be lost
when all religions
are
out of
business
wouldn’t it would better?
for any human
not being
god
Thao Chuong
2015-04-03
9 Years Ago
In response to your last poem...I contribute the following.
"Imagine"
Imagine there's no heaven
It's easy if you try
No hell below us
Above us only sky
Imagine all the people
Living for today...
Imagine there's no countries
It isn't hard to do
Nothing to kill or die for
And no religion too
Imagine all the people
Living life in peace...
You may say I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
I hope someday you'll join us
And the world will be as one
Imagine no possessions
I wonder if you can
No need for greed or hunger
A brotherhood of man
Imagine all the people
Sharing all the world...
You may say I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
I hope someday you'll join us
And the world will live as one
Writer(s): John Winston Lennon
Copyright: Lenono Music
9 Years Ago
Thanks Jean. John Lennon was an awesome writer. His Imagine Lyrics did reflect his spirit of a humanist. He has continued touching hearts of millions of people with his song lyrics –even after he left this world. Nice weekend,
9 Years Ago
Whatever It Takes
inside a soft velvet glove
often
hidden
an iron hand
within harmless attraction
maybe
disguised
a lethal trap
who
knows
under a calm surface
concealed
a fierce storm
deep
down
at
bottom
honey!
I’m happy to take whatever required
and ready to pay any price
for me
to be with you
in my entire life
Thao Chuong
2015-04-04
9 Years Ago
@ Thomas Woolworth
Thank you for sharing your art. I have a quick look at your galleries. It could take hours to view all of your works. You have many stunning works. I'll will surf your art portfolio again. And I may post some of your works on this thread if you allow me to do so. Good day.
Hope
hope
is what
that
lifts me up
when I’m down
clears my mind
when I’m confused
warms my heart
when I’m touched
helps me keep going ahead
‘til
I see light in the distance at the end of the tunnel
how could I cope with the downside of life
without
hope
Thao Chuong
2015-04-04
9 Years Ago
My thought of the day. My shoulders ache from writing via the light from the Lunar eclipse seen from Australia last night, but it was worth it. It will never happen again, the writing I mean, of that particular moment in time. Family friends and poets/artists. I wrote until my camera ran out of power.
9 Years Ago
The moon rolled over like some huge stone
devouring the light
from reaching the earth,
like some deep sad mood for all sins,
of torture, of disbelief, of miracles, of man.
It was captured through the lens of the camera,
and I wrote those names,
with love,
and gratitude,
then the light returned,
and everything was back to normal,
and now I ponder,
what the reason was,
what a powerful way to pass on a message.
Maria Disley 5/4/2015 Easter Saturday.
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much for sharing your thought of the day, especially sharing your poetic moment. What`s an awesome poem! I enjoyed reading it a couple of times.
Here is my echo
The Sky-watcher and the Blood Moon
it was a chilly night
the sky-watcher sat outside on his deck
looked up onto clear sky
and patiently waited for hours
just to catch glimpse of the lunar ellipse
not only
did he have his neck ached
but also
he did catch a bad cold
she rested her back on a swivel chair inside the cozy family-room
looked through the big bay window
and viewed the moon
gradually turning
its glow from silver
into intense
orange
if he were smart enough
he would have stayed indoor
and watched the blood moon with her
while enjoying sex
on the couch
right
by
the fireplace
Thao Chuong
2015-04-04
9 Years Ago
Well, I have to confess I slept through this eclipse and it was clear skies. I will have another chance in September. It starts a little after 7 PM. It is partially blocked at first by the horizon but I will make this one since it starts at dusk!
The moon did come to me in a dream vision while sleeping.
It said please don’t you people visit me and land on my skin, poke flags or dig around
I see the damage you do down there on earth
please just gaze upon me and enjoy my beauty.
Also don’t blame me if some of you go crazy when I am full.
9 Years Ago
Good night Jim. Thank you very much for sharing your interesting poem about man, his destruction on planet earth and his pipe dream of the moon.
BTW: You are painter - not a photographer. Therefore, I didn’t foresee any impact on your creativity process when you slept though out the lunar ellipse last night .
Here is my echo to your poem
The Lunatic Moon-watcher
he wandered alone on a beach
in
the night
of a full moon
risen
high tides
on vast ocean
he saw clearly
under bright light
silver waves running in a hurry
and constantly crashing on rocky shores
furious sounds carried
by strong wind
traveling far
away
he felt
risen
rough tides
on the inner sea of his own body
surged
in his veins
high pressure of blood level
flooded
in his mind
with a wild desire for running naked on bare feet
he lost his total control
when the lone wolf inside himself started howling at the full mood
Thao Chuong
2015-04-04
9 Years Ago
Viet Tran
Although it takes time for me to read all the poems on this thread, I love the poems you've written along side my images, never stop using my paintings. I think you have some psychic abilities in tapping into my emotions. I love all your poems, but the one on dead poetry was excellent. Thanks again...very touched.
Lisa
9 Years Ago
This has helped me a lot
Who cares.
When the world just seems to knock you down and leave you black and blue
And people that you cared for don't give a hoot for you
When you want to tell the world your dreams and no one wants to hear
And they tell you that you're selfish, mean and insincere
Remember –
Someone out there loves you, the good and bad beneath
So tell the rest to go to Hell
And kick them in the teeth
Jean L Rayner
9 Years Ago
Love your moon dream Jim. You were probably connecting more spiritually with the event than those of us awake and pointing our cameras at it. 😉
9 Years Ago
Thank you Maria. Just for the record my writing about the dream vision and the moon is made up as just a writing for fun. I don't want to mislead. I have never had what I could call a vision. That would be quite a wonderful spiritual experience and is something to be said on this Easter morning.
I do enjoy your and Viet's thoughts/poetry and the use of images.
Your guys poetry reminds me of all the artists that say the reason they paint, photograph etc. is because they just have to. It just has to come out naturally.
Quite prolific and quick.
9 Years Ago
Good morning Lisa, Jean L Rayner, Maria, and Jim. Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts and for the dialogues.
@ Lisa: I like the rhythmic colours and movements in your abstracts. They generate emotion and stir up my thought each time I view them. As you’ve permitted to post your works on this thread, I like to celebrate your art here. Thanks again.
Description: In my home, there is an extra bedroom, it has a walk-in closet so big that it is my watercolor studio. In this small space there is a door to a very narrow stairway to a secret room where I store some work that I don't want to sell. I plan on selling my home one day not to divulge that there is a secret room with my works in it. I don't know when it will be discovered if ever because it is so hidden. My family doesn't care about it at all because they know I store my unwanted works in there, but really, it's very interesting. My builder built me this Victorian room knowing my psychology and wanting my son and I to have awesome hide and seek adventures. Do you have a secret room in your old or new house and do you hide things of value in such a room?
Her Hidden Room
she always wanna know
everything
about
him
how much
he loves and cares for her
deep
in his heart
who were there in the past
anyone else - except her - is occupying at this moment
within
his mind
what kinda thoughts going on
any other girl is hidden inside
and
whether he permanently thinks of her
why does he do this and not do that?
and millions of other tiny things
not really important
such
as
what he’s doing
whom he is with
when he’ll be home
or why he is so late
However
she never shares her secretes with anyone else
as
she prefers to keep them only for herself
in a hidden room
somewhere
in the depth
o’ her heart and mind
ain’t it ironic?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-05
9 Years Ago
Blood Moon Eclipse
3/4/15
Caught
between Passover
and Easter
the shadow of
Earth
slides across
the face of
Moon.
The third Blood Moon Eclipse
in the Tetrad.
This one a descendant
of April 1942.
Attune yourselves
to the powerful
portents
that Earth
is presenting.
Earthquakes.
Wars.
Plagues.
Volcanic eruptions.
Government control.
Nuclear accidents.
These are the signs.
Search
your Soul
and weed
your Garden.
Karen Newell
3/6/15
9 Years Ago
Blood Moon Eclipse
I sit in the starry silence
watching the Earth's shadow
slide across the face of the Moon.
When Her countenance is covered
the owls begin their call and response
and the coyotes sing.
A cosmic concerto.
Karen Newell
4/15/14
Blood Moon Setting
I awaken from a dream
and pull myself up from the warm nest of covers.
I step into the chill morning Autumn darkness.
The shadow of Mother Earth
is creeping across the face of Sister Moon.
I watch the red blush crescent
slide to full circle.
I hear an owl hoot and growl
as a star shoots across the sky
and winks away
into the infinite mystery.
Karen Newell
10/8/14
Blood Moon Eclipse Commute
I rise for work
and hurry to the window.
Earth's shadow
sliding
across the face of the Moon.
Setting in the West,
I am driving East.
A dangerous combination.
Karen Newell
3/4/15
9 Years Ago
I couldn't help but react to Lisa's painting.
The subconscious room,
life storage,
no one will ever know
the deluge,
I carry,
to the secret room,
and unload.
better to sit in the garden sun
and reveal it,
afterall its smeared on canvas,
now its time to talk,
and liberate,
those dark dungeons of happy secrets.
Maria Disley 6/4/15
9 Years Ago
Thank you Maria!! I love that so much :)) You know I am an eclipse girl! Very meaningful to me
9 Years Ago
Jim, when you say 'made up' it trivialises your imagination, that wonderrful imagination that paints not only thoughts and ideas but wonderful pictures for us to enjoy.
9 Years Ago
Dear Maria,
Happy Easter to you, too, my friend.
I was away,but you remembered me,and I am so touched. thank you so much for the poetry and images. I can't believe I might matter enough to be worthy of your thoughts,and words and images..........I am overwhelmed by your grace, dear friend. I, too, believe in miracles...we have already shared quite a few, just ours !! And this is your loveliest poem for me yet and thank you for your thoughts,reflections,trouble,sharing........xoxVIVA
""Along with some other names I wrote yours in the light from the Eclipse last night with my camera. Enjoy. Then today in reflection of my whim, I wrote a poem:
The moon rolled over like some huge stone
devouring the light
from reaching the earth,
like some deep sad mood for all sins,
of torture, of disbelief, of miracles, of man.
It was captured through the lens of the camera,
and I wrote those names,
with love,
and gratitude,
then the light returned,
and everything was back to normal,
and now I ponder,
what the reason was,
what a powerful way to pass on a message.
Happy Easter.
Maria""
9 Years Ago
Maria I never quite thought of it that way. Our imaginations are our visions and can be quite visionary. Thanks for your thoughts.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Karen, Maria, Vivian, and Jim for sharing your good time here.
- Karen. I am awed by your beautiful poetic flow. What`s a special gift for the long weekends. I have a lot to read tonight. I have a habit of reading each poem or viewing an artwork for a couple of times. I think the moon might have some psychological impacts on your body and soul.
-Maria: Thank for the dialogue and your poetic echo to Lisa`s abstract.
-Vivian: Nice to see you around, my friend.
-Jim: You have an unique painting style - very close to naivism.
Have a good night orfgood day to everyone
9 Years Ago
Sundry Thought
Another Perspective
the moon
which I see tonight in the sky
isn’t it the same moon
that you saw
last night
lunar eclipse has happened from time to time
why
the hell
did everyone make this event such a big deal?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-05
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Maria. It was quite a nice surprise.
I have to admit that at first I didn’t recognize my name written in your work By The Light Of The Lunar Eclipse until I viewed the work again, after reading Karen’s and Vivian’s postings. I’m sorry as my genuine mistake could be interpreted as if I were very rude by not thanking you for your nice thought about me.
After I’ve read your description of the related work. It described as: “ Written via the light of the Lunar Eclipse 4 April 2015”, I still didn’t know how you could do it with a camera. Thanks again. Have a restful day,
.
9 Years Ago
Hi Jean Gabriel Poivre: Thank you for sharing, Jean. That would generate a lot of thoughts. Have a good night and sleep tight with sweet dream, sir.
posted by Bamalam Photography -22 Hours Ago
This has helped me a lot
Who cares.
When the world just seems to knock you down and leave you black and blue
And people that you cared for don't give a hoot for you
When you want to tell the world your dreams and no one wants to hear
And they tell you that you're selfish, mean and insincere
Remember –
Someone out there loves you, the good and bad beneath
So tell the rest to go to Hell
And kick them in the teeth
Jean L Rayner
An echo to Jean L Rayner’s poem Who Cares above
Who Knows?
the ones
for
whom
you’ve cared
would love to help you
but
who knows
they could be bluer than you’re
they would have more problems than you do
now
you know
why the people who love you so much
could do nothing
to care for you
it’s you
who must help yourself first
then
god would lend his hands to you.
Thao Chuong
2015-04-06
9 Years Ago
That's OK Viet. I wrote about 30 names and initials before my battery in the camera went flat. I forgot Oxo and Jason 😢 and more.....many of those I did write would not make that amazing connection or know what I meant by writing via the lunar eclipse, but that is OK, I enjoyed doing it so much. The difference in the eclipse.....for me...is imagining when the earth was not fully lit by electric lights at night, then, there would be complete darkness and people of the time would....must have...felt something very mysterious was happening....we shouldn't think it is still not because we have light 24/7.
9 Years Ago
Thanks Maria. I feel good to know our communication is back to normal.
Good to see you around, Jean.
Have nice day.
Description: Ashes To Ashes Dust To Dust,The Burying Point is located on Charter Street in Salem, Massachusetts (Essex County). The Burying Point, also known as the Charter Street Cemetery, is the oldest cemetery in Salem - it was established in 1637. That makes it the second oldest known cemetery in the nation. There are many old, interesting gravestones with unique carvings. One of the most famous people buried in the cemetery is Justice John Hathorne, the great-great-grandfather of writer Nathaniel Hawthorne. John Hathorne was a judge during the witch trials, and he had a bad reputation. Nathaniel Hawthorne was so ashamed of his ancestor's role in the trials that he added a "w" in his name to make it different.
Ashes to Ashes – Dust to Dust
I came into this world
empty-handed
`n naked
regardless
whoever I am
whatever I make
and how much I gain
I can take nothing with me when I leave here for good
“ashes to ashes – dust to dust”
absolutely
no happy ending
for any story of a mortal man as I am
why have I kept dreaming
of
being rich
being renowned
or being able to control the world
shouldn’t
I just relax and enjoy
what I’m currently holding in my hands?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-06
9 Years Ago
Hehehehehe VIet.... Thanks Viet.. good to see you around Jean.. I never went to sleep ,I have been around the whole time.. I saw you when you came through the Japanese link to the ashes to ashes page to bring back here..glad to see you made use of it in one of your poems.. that place is very interesting place.. if ever in Salem you should stop in. it was where many of the people from the Salem Witch trials were buried...im not talking about the accused but the puritans that burned the women they accused of witchcraft..
It is a solemn place, it demands reverence and the tombstones most all carved by hand are very interesting and delightful. The story of that place is amazing and creepy all in one.. Also it is suppose to be hallowed ground.. the witches on the other hand were I think buried or what remained of them buried in another place around town.. forget exactly where but you can visit,and I think that even one tree survives where some were hung.. the whole town is witch crazy now and I say that in a good way.. but it is a wonderful fun place to go if you are into that sort of thing.. very interesting.. I laugh to myself.. I post this huge green bird thing.. on your page and not a mention of it.. Frankly I laughed myself silly with it.. You remind me of my professors and school teachers when I was in school ,no matter what I had done or changed or made a joke.. the head masters would come in and greet everyone with good morning how are you and then they would look around for whatever was different or put somewhere or made a joke or whatever and never say anything other than looking down their glasses and noses and peer at me and say "good morning Jean" lol..geez I feel like back in my school days here.. greeted but just that wavering look of peering down the nose and over the glasses and good morning Jean. hehehehe brings me back.. well Viet..ya'll have a nice day now ya here.. :-)
9 Years Ago
It`s nice to be surrounded by happy people as you`re , Jean. I enjoy your easy flow. Keep smiling.
I have read again your post about Simplicity in Taoism. It made me think of simple form of words in poetry. I have tried it in haiku and senryu. I want to try to write a poem in another simple form.
Of Time and Life
time flies
nonstop
seconds
minutes
hours
days
weeks
months
years
.
.
.
pass
by
unnoticed
life’s short
enjoy
its best
why wait?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-07
9 Years Ago
Description: I have this reoccurring dream. I'm very old and so is my husband and we are walking quite a distance to get our dinner of one bottle of wine, some bread and fresh tomatoes. We are not rich and we live in our house but it is very old, the table we eat on is old, and we do not talk as we share a meal. There is no TV. There is not much but a spectacular garden with a few edible fruits. We only eat the tomatoes. I'm not sure why and we buy them at a market about two miles from our home. We share our meal and then I put my husband to bed. And then there is only me and the rest of that bottle of fine vintage wine.
Simple Things
fine wine's nice
before
sex
cigarette's
more
relaxed
aftermath
Thao Chuong
2015-04-07
9 Years Ago
Mine is actually from yesterday thanks to my brother in law, an army colonel, after my five year old niece told him to stay in his seat -
"Princess does outrank colonel."
9 Years Ago
Thanks David S Reynolds. Have a good night.
Description
Some like to say loud pipes save lives thinking that they will be heard out on the road. In reality, all they are doing is annoying the neighbors.
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Thank you for looking
Dave
Redneck Bikers
busy freeway
rows and rows
vehicles
slowly
crawl
no
time
to wait
he weaves
his bike
zigzag
left
right
right left
then quickly
out
of
traffic jams
he zips away
and
leaves
behind
loud noise
black smoke
cemeteries
redneck
bikers
often
end up
Thao Chuong
2015-04-07
9 Years Ago
Good morning David S Reynolds. I enjoyed those simple words on your art as I could find a sense of humor in them,
Description: Many ask why we ride. Some have reasons, others don't. What's important is that we do
The Move For Biker’s Soul
fast lane
slow lane
regardless
accidents
do
happen
drivers
or
bikers
you must know
which one safer
four wheels
would move
any body
to
hospital
two wheels
could only
drive
thy soul
to hell
Thao Chuong
2015-04-08
9 Years Ago
24 Hours a Day
around itself
the earth
spins
in
cycles
days
nights
dawn
for work
dusk for sleep
those who sell most hours of their day for money
do they work to live
or
live
to work?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-09
9 Years Ago
Love Me Not
I'm afraid of picking each petal of an oxeye daisy
and repeating myself
like a broken
record
'til
the truth's revealed
love me
or
love me not
don’t give me a straight answer
yes
or
no
so
please
continue
your own game
of beating around the bush with thousands of your fancy words
I wanna keep my silly dream about your love
Thao Chuong
2015-04-11
9 Years Ago
Viet as always thanks for your writings with my images.
Here is an echo.
Please accept these flowers that I have left
They’re in a vase next to your favorite sitting chair
yes that chair that looks out to the hills and beyond
Please read the poem that I wrote
I left it on my pillow as you lay sleeping
perhaps a gentle summer breeze will come through the window
blowing it out of sight not to be found until the time is right
9 Years Ago
Really Viet...going nudity.. lol.. guess I started a trend.. wow reminds me of that song.. I start a joke that started the whole world laughing.. wow.. my memory of old old old things just pops into my head.. I like the image so much here it is again..... so nice posted twice.. Moto Moto
9 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your poems Jim.
going nudity..Uh.. Jean. Let run naked to see if we could reach the finish line or we would drop dead on our own feet (lol). The only problem was that I could no longer find your hidden exotic nude gallery to start the race..
I could find only your Nadia. Here is my echo.
Alcohol and Sex
as
usual
after many drinks
in an English pub
then more beers to cool themselves down at her apartment
they were somewhat intoxicated
he looked at her
and smiled
her
eyes
sparkled
she didn't say nothing
but
took her skirt off
as a luring invitation
she was naked
sexy
and hot
he
knew
for sure
what to do next
in their regular drinking ritual for many years
it ain't love
but sex
that tied up the two lost souls
drowned in
alcohol
Thao Chuong
2015-04-11
9 Years Ago
Just screen shot your poem with the photo and sent it via email to Nadia. she will be so happy.. thank you so much .. it was a great thing for you to do this for me and also for her ,as she gets depressed about being in her 50's now..Jean
9 Years Ago
@Jim Taylor.. why Ugh.. I love that work..there is something so.........intriguing about it.. and never say ugh...I think it is fabulous..
9 Years Ago
Jean, the ugh is not knowing exactly what you mean and asking for clarification. Now that you have clarified it in plain English I understand. I am guilty also because ugh doesn’t exactly clarify either. You are quite vociferous why don’t you turn some of that rant into a little poetry here. I don’t claim to be a poet like Viet, Maria and the others. I call it putting down some words occasionally, with out cluttering the thread a lot. Also I would like to see you back in your bubble bath, a favorite image.
9 Years Ago
Wow Jean you have as much right to be here as I do and I enjoy your art and big personality. I am not speaking as trying to be a poet as I said before because I don't consider my self one, just testing my personal limits with out cluttering. Besides that it is not my thread or my call and have not the right to tell anyone that they shouldn't be here. I like the idea of art combined with poetry and just thoughts that Viet has created.
"Your thought for the day" seems wide open and Viet does a great job with his relaxed and easy going way.
9 Years Ago
My sundry thought.
I think that each of us has a unique way of communication and that we all have the same right to express our own thought. So please feel free and comfortable to share your thought on this thread so long as your thoughts don't violate the regulations of this site. I don't see any issue of having artists/poets agree or disagree, discuss, or debate issues that are not related to religion or politics. Since it could lead to the closure of this thread.
Have a restful weekend to all
9 Years Ago
My thought of the day.
Of Difference and Uniqueness
what would it be?
if
you and I were as identical as clones
wouldn't it be very boring?
if
all flowers in a garden looked alike
it's the difference
between you
and I
that
makes
each of us individually unique
our lives more fascinated
and our world more interesting
I share my good time with you
when you have the same thought as mine
however
I
have
much to learn
from a different perspective
whenever you disagree with me
Thao Chuong
2015-04-11
9 Years Ago
Status:
-stopped smoking 12 hours ago
-did not sleep
-drank over 1l of coffee
While the cigarette withdrawal gives me psychopathic tendencies , the massive coffee dose gives me a manic feeling.
My thoughts are as follows under the given conditions:
thoughts:
-murder plans
-coffee
-i want to try to work seriously on art.
-the data collected about humans from the internet will turn us into cattle and cause our extinction.
-more coffee
-more murder plans
9 Years Ago
Good morning Georg Hoffmann
How are you doing?
I hope you would have some sleep during the last eight hours, since you shared your status and thoughts on this thread. ,
I also hope that you joked about "murder plans". (This matter is too serious for a joke)
If your writing was from your genuine thought, I must say that thought of murder plans is a serious matter. It should be dealt with professional helps from medial experts. May I suggest you to go see your family doctor as soon as possible?
FYI: In term of legal implication, any information (that you publicly post on the internet) can be used against you in court. Therefore, May I suggest that you'd better edit your entry by removing the words "murdering plans? (I will edit this entry after you edit yours.)
Take some sleep and focus on your art. Peace to your mind, brother.
9 Years Ago
Description: did the original drawing some years ago a night i could not sleep in vacations in scottland. a friend asked me to paint an elf and a fairy, so i promised him to put them on this painting. green fairy is the other name for absinth in swizerland by the way...
You have such a unique style in your work, Georg
Sleepless Night
cool night
in spring time
sleepless for many hours
he laid his back on wooden deck
his eyes wandered in the starry sky
his mind strolled about somewhere
unknown
in the milky way
faraway
tried
to run away
from the hell of life
he chased his dream into the fairyland
and found nothing
but
peace
at the core of his inner self
next
morning
the sun was shining on his smiling face
he still lay motionless
in an eternal
sleep
Thao Chuong
2015-04-12
9 Years Ago
Georg, I also had murderous thoughts giving up smoking. It is VERY hard. I do hope you are feeling better today and know that giving up is the best thing I EVER did :D
(Viet, that was my thought for today :) )
9 Years Ago
Good day and thanks for sharing your thought of the day to both of you: Lady Isabella Shores and Ricardo De Almeida
@ Ricardo: I like your quote. It is so true when someone doesn't enjoy what he/she holds his/her own hand. Have a nice day.
@ Lady Isabella Shores: I am in the same line with you in your murderous thoughts about giving up smoking. Quitting something is a hell of a job. Smoking and drinking are the two most difficult ones. Yet, I have witnessed endless success stories from other people.I did it before.
It was a nightmare of quitting smoking for me during the first three days and the following three weeks, then it was gradually faded after three months. However, I personally think the most difficult to quit is…a totally different one without any chemical abuse. I have to admit that I am too addicted to this special one that I have never tried to quit.
I let my humorous echo to bring back a light day for fun. I hope you would smile. But if you don't like any stanzas of the following poem, please let me know I am happy to remove your work and my thought below. Have a restful time.
To Quit or Not to Quit…Is the Question
(The Nude Man In Shadow)
smoking, drinking, and having sex
which pleasure must I quit?
I used to enjoy a cigarette
while
sipping alcohol
or
after
making love
it was a fatal combination of joys
for me to bury my life in these threes
so I quit not all
but
twos
I am in need of no more intake of nicotine or liquor
injected
into my system
now
I dunno
what's left
for my rights
how could I get high without you
I'd rather go to hell
than
to quit having sex
I strip myself naked
like your nude man-in-shadow
waiting for you
to come here
with me
won't you?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-12
9 Years Ago
Description: Waves crashing against each other, rocks hidden beneath the water
Tempest in a Teacup - A Time of Change
he's somehow getting excited
by the clanking-clinking noise
of
metal hittin' glass
he spins really fast
the spoon against the inside wall of a teacup
and keeps stirring it up
'til
he sees yellow liquid insides splashing out
it's too bad
he blows too hard
at something very tiny
not
really
necessary
and turns it into a hurricane
life's short
nothing is a big deal!
wouldn't he better forget that unhappy moment
and
enjoy
the best
from the rest
of a good day
with everybody else
Thao Chuong
2015-04-12
9 Years Ago
I won't quit. My thought for today.
I won't quit walking in the sunshine.
Or the rain,
Or the snow,
Or the wind,
They all own their own beauty,
But this afternoon,
I stepped out of the concrete mall,
Into the silence of a warm afternoon,
How quiet the Rays shone,
I squinted at oncoming shoppers in the car park,
Everything was softly glimmering,
So tranquil and still it made me smile
Gratefully for the moment,
For my senses.
Maria Disley 13/4/15
9 Years Ago
I put your post to the gentleman in the photo and he loved it :). He said that at least we are healthier now without the lethal smokes. Thank you for using the photo.
Love the storm poem :)
9 Years Ago
Good morning and thank you: Maria and Lady Isabelle
@ Maria. Wow! I enjoy your romantic thought and the easy flow of your words.
@ Lady Isabella. Nice to know that you allow me to use your nude photo that generated my poem. I appreciate your permission.
Have a nice week to all
9 Years Ago
Description: three seagulls hover above the splashing waves under an overcast sky
I like the movement, the brush work, the colour, and especially the van Gogh's feeling in your oil painting.
Overcast
waves crash at each other
shooting foamy water
up
high
into the air
riding on the wing of strong wind
a couple of hungry seagulls circle on overcast sky
looking down at white foams
on rough sea
for food
no sail
no ship
no boat
could be seen
without human's infesting activities
nature reclaims its beauty and
tranquility
Thao Chuong
2015-04-13
9 Years Ago
An echo to Maria poem I Won't Quit
Impossible to Quit
buried
for many hours
of everyday and each night
inside different mega shopping malls
searching for good deals
to buy whatever
on sales
not
what needed for any household
more than a bad habit
shopping is an addiction
and
worst
it becomes a worshipping ritual in the newly created religion
the so-called consumerism
of the modern area
like any other sacred belief
it's impossible
for anyone
trying to
get rid
of
it
Thao Chuong
2015-04-13
9 Years Ago
Abbey, I can see a horse galloping in the water....very mystical :)))
Yes Viet, they are an addiction.
9 Years Ago
Maria! You are the one and only person to see Pegasus...I was beginning to think nobody ever would lol
9 Years Ago
The lady bugs me,
Her copper clanking armour rebukes me
She is the colour of compost,
A forest floor,
A camouflage of treachery.
Are those her eyes,
She has me believe she looks at me,
Or are they her eyes,
Is she looking elsewhere?
She bugs me but I love her.
No shiny red coat attracts me
Like to the others,
Her russet is demanding though,
Her noise a deafening blow!
Look at her proliferating, regurgitating her responses her excuses
To my attention.
She bugs me
But I love her.
Maria Disley 14/4/15
9 Years Ago
Maria. You have sharp eyes and great observation. I didn't see the galloping in the shadow until after you revealed it. That makes the painting more interesting. Nice day.
9 Years Ago
Those two paintings by Lady Isabella are fantastic...and I enjoy the poems as well.
The nude man is a very sexy picture...can you rework that poem? LOL...just kidding. All your work needs no fixing, it's wonderful as is. Thank you for making my day brighter.
9 Years Ago
"The nude man is a very sexy picture...can you rework that poem? LOL...just kidding. All your work needs no fixing, it's wonderful as is. Thank you for making my day brighter."
Ah, Lisa. It's a good suggestion. It is quite simple task. why not.I have just removed the last stanza which is not actually needed. I intentionally added on - as a joke -just to itch Lady Isabella's humorous mind. But I failed as she didn't laugh.
Here is the edited version
To Quit or Not to Quit…Is the Question
(The Nude Man In Shadow)
smoking, drinking, and having sex
which pleasure must I quit?
I used to enjoy a cigarette
while
sipping alcohol
or
after
making love
it was a fatal combination of joys
for
me
to bury my life in these threes
so I quit
not all
but
twos
I am in need of no more intake of nicotine or liquor
injected
into my system
now
I dunno
what's left
for my rights
how could I get high without you
I'd rather go to hell
than
to quit having sex
Thao Chuong
edited version @ 2015-04-14
9 Years Ago
I am loving this thread and feel deeply touched by all the word art. Some of you will see a private email from me. Viet Tran, you are amazing. Thank you so much! I am so happy to watch this thread and will be even happier when I can spill out another part of my soul. Thanks, guys (girls, too!)
9 Years Ago
Welcome and thank you Sabrina for your nice words and also for your time and the pm.
Hi Lisa. See! Poetry is just words that can be put in nay order and also could be changed anytime -lol.
Have a god night to all
Here is my today's poem.
I'd like to invite faa artists to feel welcomed posting your work which you think it would match with my poem. Thanks for your participation in this game. (it helps me avoid any concern about the issue of your copyrights.)
The Art of Luring Men
unlike
an abstract painter
who could only mess colours on canvas
she is a skillful performing artist
who can paint her beauty
in full spectrum
of a rainbow
in a real
show
she's realistically aware
of how
hot
sexy
pretty
and attractive
she looks
she knows
how
to
drown thirsty hearts
freeze blind minds
burn hungry eyes
and lure
those
guys
into her empire of love
'til
she captures totally their souls
and turns them into slaves worshiping her
as
their goddess forever
Thao Chuong
2015-04-14
9 Years Ago
Good Evening and Good Morning Viet :-) I put one of my works here ,and after decided.. in the future to let you have free reign of my artwork to pick and choose as you prefer if you so desire. Thank you for posting my works in the past and I appreciate the descriptive words to go with the artwork.You are welcome anytime to immortalize any of my works here in your thread for all time. Thank you.:-)
9 Years Ago
Wow Raiden, I love your felt tip drawing! It suits Viet's poem perfectly.
Viet, I echoed your collage with the Lady Bug poem, and it turned out to be an interestingly darkish poem. My response was to the unusually dark colours that you used in your collage, of which most others are bright and full of colour, although sometimes emotional. I was wondering if you could shed any light on why it is a dark image.
Thanks for pm Sabrina, The poem was not something I intended I didn't know how it was going to turn out, it was very spontaneous, but after writing it I thought it was strange, I could see something I was trying to express but am not fully aware of myself, at least in my consciousness.
My thought for today.
We are deeper than we know
Our little minds
The tips of our icebergs.
Our hearts often sunk in our chests
Uneyed treasure,
Buried and barnacled
Sometimes forever.
Maria Disley 15/4/15
9 Years Ago
Hi Maria. I think you got your poetic moment in your poetry gain.
About your question: Those collages - which I created when I was in Galang Refugee Camp and during the first year after coming to Canada - were in somber colours. It might reflect my emotion during the unsettled period of my life. I could see that I tend to use vibrant colours in my recent works.
9 Years Ago
Yes, that figures, but this is the darkest from the others I recall. I wonder what was going through your mind while creating Lady Bugs. I don't expect you to answer that, I am just thinking out loud and trying to empathise with the horror of those moments.
9 Years Ago
My quick echo to Maria's poem Thought Of the Day above
You're My Mirror
I always think
I truly know about myself
much more
than
anybody else who could know about me
yet
whenever
I
am
upset
afraid
stressed out
or over-joyed
I often get lost within my foggy inner self
then
you show me
how to see myself clearly
through the mirror of your reactions
I become aware of
the simple
fact
that
without
you
I would know nothing about my true self
Thao Chuong
2015-04-15
9 Years Ago
Thank you Viet for using one of my works...I just read your poetry of today and it is very thought provoking.I enjoyed it very much . I hope you have a wonderful day and evening. Thank you again.
9 Years Ago
Viet, yes, I noticed your visits, knew you were 'responding',and, due to your preamble, I will not read your post YET....I must prepare myself for your usual perspicacity .........you rarely 'miss' with me, sometimes so well that I am taken aback, and indeed, fall off that ride I am on, by choice. When I'm ready, I will reply...you know that and understand, Viet . We go back a long long way...........
to quote Bette Davis: 'fasten your seatbelts, it's gonna be a bumpy night'....in "All About Eve' movie.........oh yes, yet again, Viet.....
9 Years Ago
Viet
I begin, by asking that this be, the end. Please accept my request, with thanks.
I knew this day would come.
For years,
I've heard your poetry for me, not always designated, for me, but I knew for me.
Partly understood designated for me by virtue of our many conversations, off site.
Those remain, off site.
But, today, twice, you have reached the epiphany of your designation of me...I think.
I knew this day would come.
This poem...recent...., The Art of Luring Men, immediately caught me up, so close to
others less direct. Same subject. Guess which.
And I thought, after noticing your visits to Magic Carpet, that the full understanding was
soon to appear.
And, so it has appeared.
Yes.
You don't have to be right or wrong about me, Viet.
that is the privilege of being an artist.....words or deed.
Which is why, I won't get too upset about your seeming being convinced of my
downfall to a little,beautiful,old,Lady Bug, now relegated to the underworld community,
rather than the high fliers. Important to note: I am happy where I'm at.
You might be right.
Does it matter?
Most importantly.........my Art - is it also relegated to the needy underworld, for their comfort.
Useless to the current generation?
If so, that would destroy me.
If so, that would upset me.
But, how to know.
Nobody buys my pictures.
Nobody but you seems to 'read' me.
Although, some do love me, thankfully.
ADDENDUM, for Viet............I quote myself, Viet.......in answer to your interpretation...you might have missed my reply there to another, who saw this totally differently, with whom I could indeed agree..............I said:
"This is my dream,Sandi...how could you know? Wonderful of you !! It is all about an odyssey through time and space,and dreams,and poetic love.............including the rifts and torn edges...as with life, itself..........VIVA.""
I am always 'in love' , Viet, thankfully, love never fails me.
9 Years Ago
i too am in love
with a tortoise
that carries the world
upon her humble back
lettuce is all she needs
for nourishment
as the world moves
with her
upon her shell
home for everyone
x
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
9 Years Ago
Hi Viva.
I am hit by surprised by your reaction. I really don't understand about your interpretation of my last two poems, especially the poem The Art of Luring Men which I didn't paired with any of your work.
I am sorry about my poem Dream Shattered that I wrote about your work. It was my own poetic interpretation of the work that I have visited many times in the past as it is quite an interesting abstract. The work does give me a feeling of something sad and broken. The poem is a reflection of my feeling about the work- NOT about you. I could have never imagined that you would think that I wrote about you.
The poem was actually a combination of my feeling about your work and the feeling generated by Maria's echo about my dark coloured collage Lady Bugs and her question how I did it.
About our relationship: You are one of FAA artists whom I respect and consider as a best friend of mine on FAA.
About your art: You have a very unique style - the ton-sur-ton colour palette which I love. I have never had any light thought of making you feel uncomfortable- let alone upset or offend you. .I hope you could see through our friendship for many years
Unfortunately, you misinterpreted my poem that was inspired by your work. I MUST reaffirm that the poem has nothing about you., again it is my emotional echo from the work itself.
I hope I could express myself clear enough for your understanding. I will respect whatever you would do about our friendship. However, I also do hope that you would take sometime to think prior to making your decision.
FYI: I am going to remove your work and the related poem - as now I know that it has bothered your mind.
Best regards.
Viet Tran
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Viet. Now that it is gone, so is my angst,so we are square one......differences occur...........we must get past them, to honour our friendship.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Vivian. I am glad to know that our relationship is still intact. I appreciate your understanding of our lasting friendship. Have a great day.
FYI: It is quite tricky for me to put my personal perspective as a viewer about the works of other artists into words.
I want to show my real emotion/feeling and that how an artwork would have its strong impact on me as a viewer. Unfortunately, my poetry doesn't always reflect the feeling of related artist when she/he created the work. Therefore, he/she may not be happy with my poetic interpretation.
I have had some misunderstandings about my poetry in this thread. I don't know if it is a good idea for me to continue writing poetry about other artists'works.
9 Years Ago
Cheers, Viet.
As to your commenting. ..this is a popular thread. That is your measure,I suppose.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Raiden. I have noticed that you have uploaded many new works. I enjoy your series about Japanese's traditional art and culture. Enjoy your long vacations. Have a good night.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for sharing the poem and your work, Jean. Have a peaceful evening
Warning: NUDITY.
Viewers' discretion is highly advised.
(Note: Re-posted at Jean Poivre's request)
Same Sex Partnership
she falls in love with her mate
like
other women love their men
it’s for understanding
companionship
support
‘n sex
not
much
difference
between the two types of loves
except
the gender orientation
however
she enjoys
more
compassion and harmony
she also feels
less
controlled, threatened, and abused
than
in a male’s dominating world
whatever she does with her own body
whomever she makes love with
is
absolutely her own business
why
the hell
the social and religious bias against same sex partners
is so nasty
in
many cultures?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-16
9 Years Ago
VIET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank the Gods you are still around.. whew... I was wondering when seeing your post from above...geez you scared the beejeebees out of me.As always thanks for using another one of my works...is wonderful.. no nudity a tease only .. but a very nice work..do you not agree.. After all you co authored a book about erotic situations which the cover is in your gallery and such a beautiful cover. I need to order the book so I can read your poems.. the reviews were fantastic..and sorry about jumping the guns and helping out,please feel free to edit my previous contribution here but at least it got you to come out and play.. thank YOU Viet as you are a beacon as I stated before.. Have a great night.. Jean RR or RR Jean.. ..
9 Years Ago
Good morning, Robert.
Now R R and his amazing Japanese art has also vaporized. I think that there is a good market for this type of traditional art. Have a restful day.
9 Years Ago
Hi Jean (Robert)
I have noticed that your whole Japanese traditional art has been deleted from your faa portfolio again. I could sense something unusual after I posted your nude photo.
Therefore, I removed your nude art that paired with my poem Same Sex Partnership. I did it by myself automatically without your request to ensure that would make your day. I do hope that I could see your awesome Japanese traditional art re-uploaded again. Nice day.
9 Years Ago
My Thought of the Day
It’s Me…Me…Me –And Only Me
oh
my…
my god
it’s great
the sky doesn’t fall
not much has changed
everything seems the same as yesterday
today
the sun’s still rising
the earth keeps spinning
the ocean is full of salt water
oh
yes
as always
there’s a constant change in each second
inside my inner universe
I tend to forget
it’s neither the outside world
nor anybody else
but me
only
I
who can make a difference for my fate
even
if the sky were falling apart
wouldn’t I better duck than sit idle and whine in terror?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-17
9 Years Ago
Viet.................omg.. why? there was nothing at all wrong.. really.. geez man.. why ? I love that work and am getting to posting it back again asap.. I removed my art for temporary cleaning and yes it will be back to sell as i think there is a big big big market for Asian cultural art, It is beautiful and timeless.. much like me im afraid and you , no i wouldn't forget you my friend.. So you get back to the gallery in a bit and put it back and put your poem back and why say there is anything wrong with same sex love.. not to me.. its all good..
I have no problems with any sexual preferences.. I on the other hand and just a straight 8 guy that loves women.. from the very first moment of my birth my mom said I came out flirting with those big beautiful eyes.. So hey I say ..do what makes you happy.. and it seems that did and I want for you to be happy ,I know the more exposure of my work makes me more controversial and more popular and I cannot thank you enough for posting it here with you wonderful poems and think that maybe we should actually collaborate on a book another erotic book but this time really get erotic. The photos I put here are very mild and so so .......
I do have some master works of art that would pair well with your poetry and think would be a great hit. I love your poems and thank you so much for using my works and your senses were off im afraid.. as there was nothing wrong at all..you know they only give you 24 hours here to edit so i did so.. anyway you have a wonderful day and give me sometime and some of my works will be back up and post that two lovers again.. it looked great on your page here and thank the Gods you are back...you know how to scare a guy.. ok now that is out of the way I will get back to work. JGP Jean Gabriel Poivre
9 Years Ago
Viet, one of the first pieces now in place is Keiko And Kaori Twin Kabuki Actresses In Love. How could I go on knowing that you loved it so and not put it back? I am starting to look through the pieces that I really loved and replace them..sorry for the temporary cleaning.. sometimes we all need an enema .. lm sorry can I say that? lol
9 Years Ago
lol... you make me howl with laughter. I love it.. your whole RR Robert Asian art thing vaporized.. wow.. you my friend are truly Asian.. so drama.. I love it.. and I think the Asian drama thing has rubbed off on me.. too being married to an Asian for so long.. lol....she says omg.. you are so drama I say who do you think I got it from lol..this is hilarious.. no more changes..it is me it is me Earnest T. remember on Andy Griffith show.. Earnest T can't remember his last name but anyway no more changes...Im backkkkkkkk Jean Gabriel Poive.. the only thing is there will be one heck of an assortment of art styles and types .. so get ready and fasten your seat belt you still have free reign of all that is.. and thank you , and you march right back over there and get the work that you posted yesterday young man and supersize it and put your poem back..do you hear me? You have a great evening.. and thanks my friend. ,,,vaporized .. .so drama heheheheheh JGP
9 Years Ago
Saw you peeking Viet.. yes its true I know it is you..because I only had two pieces of art up and one view and guess where it came from? .. Victoria BC..so..come on.. what are you waiting on? I know..you are writing the poem again.. ok.. that makes sense.. well im here ,waiting and I will be backkkkk lol.. im sorry Viet.. just kidding around with you all in good fun.. take care. have a good day and evening..
9 Years Ago
Viet thank you for replacing that but could you make it supersize like yesterday..? I don't have that talent yet .. Im working on it but just found out from Dave it is tripping the numbers in the line of code that makes it huge.. thank you . your friend..JGP
9 Years Ago
@ Jane McGowan: Thank for sharing your positive thought that jacked up my spirit
@ Jean, Raiden, Robert. You're a mystical person with multiple identities. It's quite interesting. You've been appeared and vaporized like a ghost. I don't know with whom I would have to talk next time (lol).
Good day.
Senryu Joyful Moment
just for little fun
he flies without any wings
joyful child on swing
Thao Chuong
2015-04-17
9 Years Ago
My dear friend Viet,it is only I Jean Gabriel Poive.. I feel that I have been vaporized myself since all of this.. but as I said change is good.. I am Jean Gabriel Poive no futher guessing as to whom I am . Truly everything that I have written is true and is of me Jean Gabriel Poive. I would give a lengthy explanation for all the back and forth but im afraid that it would be overkill as I have already done that in some discussions here on this page but one was closed. You have sized me up quite well.. I am an outspoken ,fun, and light hearted person that loves to be involved with people on a personal basis ,and even more so if they are interesting and talented and fun as you are. I have enjoyed our conversations and although I have had name changes the things we have spoken about are honest and true of me Jean Gabriel Poive.
I feel a kindred spirit with you and although sometimes you do not respond I feel your presence somewhat like a watchful spirit there ever watchful but not making the person aware of their presence .It is with high hopes that you forgive the changes that were temporary and know that I am just a playful fun loving person and truthful ,it is just sometimes you can grow tired of a name..What is a name anyway, it is something you are called,it's meaning ,nothing pretty much..In some cultures it can mean certain things but most people were named after a relative or an actor or actress or what have you but there is nothing in a name.. for it is only the person and who they are that means anything.
I am a good and kind person , you have told me that I am intelligent and I am inclined to go with that belief hopefully .. and feel it was the truth coming from someone that I consider a mentor in a world that needs more people like yourself. A spiritual person but one of openness and goodness and non judgmental nature.So with that being said, you do know me more than you know most as what you have read from me is my life and truth and who I am . I think that my art also reflects who I am
My thoughts go way beyond this universe and its minor inhabitants . From the first moment of my birth my quest for knowledge has far exceeded my limit for understanding. I am involved in many things that aren't a current thing in most life's. My interest and thoughts range from quantum physics to quantum mechanics, from advanced mathematics to string theory to chaos theory to all the greatest scientist and philosophers that ever walked this earth.My ranges of knowledge consist of time space continuum and also of organic non organic carbon based life forms. My past has been devoted to the ancients ,the cultures that not only survive but those that have not.The artifacts the engineering where their mastery of architecture and organization came from . My theories of the universe and all that is and my studies have long invoked my thoughts and through processes but as a gift to myself I use my art as therapy to ween myself away from my research and studies. It seems that all my memories float around all that is and has ever been . My art and my chat here is my gift as an escape to my solemn world of continued discovery and information absorption. My life is reached a observation of epitome and breached into a process that I have to interact with others and enjoy some "fun' sometimes as a way of release of the things that are tangled in my mind through discovery and studies..In short order Viet.. I use these discussions and the art as a release and for pleasure.. I thank you for inviting me into its existence to enjoy life not to only study it.
I only say to you that no matter who I am or what I am called that I am the person you have always known you have known me more than most and have a keen insight as to what im doing and that you know deep in your heart and mind that I can be called many things but I am not a deceiver nor liar. I have been honest and truthful with you and open .I have humbled myself and given you a friend and also a person to interact with on a level that you enjoy.I not only feel this ,I know it to be true. I will leave this post now as it will certainly disappear as things normally do when I am taking to much time explaining but I will come back shortly with a poem for you although I did not compose it ,I want you to ponder it and read it and understand what I am trying to say with it. I appreciate you so much for letting me be here and your patience with me as well. You are a good friend and a good man Viet..Thank you. Jean
9 Years Ago
'Tis but thy name that is my enemy;
Thou art thyself, though not a Montague.
What's Montague? it is nor hand, nor foot,
Nor arm, nor face, nor any other part
Belonging to a man. O, be some other name!
What's in a name? that which we call a rose
By any other name would smell as sweet;
So Romeo would, were he not Romeo call'd,
Retain that dear perfection which he owes
Without that title. Romeo, doff thy name,
And for that name which is no part of thee
Take all myself.
William Shakespeare
Romeo and Juliet is one of the best-known love stories in Western literature, and this quote is said only in one of the most romantic scenes in the play: the balcony scene. There's lots of poetry, vows of love that sound a lot like religious worship, baffling language, and teenage melodrama. What more could you ask for?
The two lovebirds have just met at a party at Juliet's house. Romeo doesn't want to leave the Capulet's property, so he ditches his friends and hides out in the orchard behind the Capulets' house. He's not supposed to be there because he's the son of the Capulet's biggest enemy: Montague. But he kind of figures seeing Juliet again is worth it. Risky move.
Juliet says this quote when she's wondering, "Why does the guy I love have to be a Montague?" She struggles with the conflict between her feelings for Romeo and her knowledge that he is an enemy of her family. But then she has an idea: she won't picture Romeo as a Montague. They're her enemy. More like Monta-ew.
Nope, she'll picture him just as Romeo. How much do names really mean anyway? They can't be found anywhere on our bodies. They can't change who we are. Even a rose would have a lovely perfume smell if it weren't called a rose. Blah, blah, blah.
She tries to separate Romeo from his identity as a Montague as a way of rationalizing her love for him. Then she contemplates deserting her family for him instead.
9 Years Ago
Senryu Joyful Moment
just for little fun
he flies without any wings
joyful child on swing
Thao Chuong
2015-04-17
Love this. And what a compliment to JGP
9 Years Ago
Maria, you are truly observant and thank you for posting it again.. Viet is a kind and good man and a very special soul.. He finds value where most do not. He is a very gracious and wonderful human being. Thank you again. Also Maria I appreciate you as well.. it seems that you and Viet are cut from the same cloth. Jean
9 Years Ago
Good morning and thanks for the dialogue, Jean and Maria.
@ Jean: I'll read your articulate writings again whenever I have time tonight. Unless my wife requires me to provide her with the full serve (lol). I might have some thought about the issue that you have raised about name, identity and personality later.
My thought of the day
Of Money and Time
I-
life’s swirled
within a vicious twenty-four hour cycle
II-
day
to work
for
more
and more money
no time
for
love, fun, and hobbies
III-
night
to sleep and rest
for
full recharge
no
sweat
wasted in sex
as energy must be fully reserved
for
next day to work
again
IV-
no
time left
to spend all money made
what’s the point of working
like
a horse
until dropped dead own feet?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-18
Have a restful weekend to all
9 Years Ago
My thought from Jean Gabriel Poivre's writings;
Have a great day
The Reality of The Two D World
inside the world of two dimensions
behind a flat screen
life is but an illusion
most of people escape from painful reality to a safe refuge online
many come in for thousands of different things
some log in to kill their time
some drop by to have some fun
some pop in to vent their rage
some enter to ease their pain
some get in to sell something
everything is dreamlike
everyone is invisible
no one knows no one
nobody knows who is who
no one is aware of
what’s going on
nobody cares whether
it’s
right or wrong
true or false
love or hate
no one discerns
between
friends and foes
as long as they still have their real lives buried in the realm of hallucination
Thao Chuong
2015-04-19
9 Years Ago
Another fine one Viet. You are like a poetry fountain.
Cyber world is quite strange and I never loose sight of the real yet unreal nature of it. I think about it a lot.
I wonder if some younger people that have always had it just take it as almost totally reality, or don't think much about it.
Also is " Poe Ed "you as another pen name.
9 Years Ago
Thank for your comment, Jim.
It was a gorgeous day –sunny and warm. I spent my whole day outside.
I think internet has changed dynamics in human’s social relation and communication. It has turned the world into a global village. Also, it also provides mass information that we didn’t access before. We can get any information needed just in a couple strokes on a keyboard. It is an excellent resource for self-learners.
While it brings human beings closer to each other globally in a two dimensional world. It may disconnect us with local people around us as we tend to spend more time talking to strangers thousands of miles away and have less time to communicate with people in our neighborhood.
Communication online is tricky, Even with poetry.
Let’s take the recent example about my Senryu Joyful Moment, I wrote it to describe the moment in which I had with my grandson at the playground on the same day. (I pushed my little grandson while he was on a swing- he was jiggling). Somehow Maria re-posted the poem – and commented: “ Love this. And what a compliment to JGP”- I really didn’t understand her thought and why was the poem a compliment to Jean Gabriel Poivre. I think that her comment created some misunderstanding –at least for me. However, I thought that it wasn’t a big deal for me, so I went with an easy flow. (But then I really don’t know how would Jean think about it. What would he take from Maria’s complex interpretation about my simple Senryu as I intended it to be.)
There have been many incidents since I started this thread. Those led my thought to recent poem posted above.
FYI: Poe Ed is another pen name of mine which I used when I was banned from FAA for one year. Now I use it from time to time for some provoking situations.
Have a good night.
9 Years Ago
Ha ha not so complex Viet, for me the poem described Jean, I wasn't trying to read your mind or anything, that is just how the poem spoke to me...and I love it.
9 Years Ago
I got to say on this important point, the debate on art and interpretation and the beholder, and prior statements in other threads stating that what the viewer perceives is just as valid as what the creator of that piece intended, it is all too easy for a person on an agenda, to hijack a body of work, be that poetry or art of any sorts, for their own intended self and wider "deceit" (for want of a better word), and distort its meaning, this would ultimately destroy the wider artistic worth of the piece and really is, in this respect, a potion of poison! A poem can involve everyone and anyone from differing perspectives and places, and they can all feel something that relates to them! The above posts illustrate this well.
Personally i write illusions and perhaps the tiniest elements of 50 or more individuals might now be present, but no more than 1 or 2 poems could be influenced by one person and then i embody a lot of personal experience and thoughts and those of the world of emotions and humanity and create a journey of sorts, some is complete nonsense, other humorous and many quite deep and provoking, i don't like people telling me what they are about or inferring some other "plot" in the literary sense, the "plot" lies within their misconstruing minds!! Illusions are illusions and no more. I got an interesting reply on Goddess, and i liked its thoughtful etheral content - the feeling of a transient involvement with the poem! excuse my ego. . i can also be as childish and playful, just like you!
good day people :-)
9 Years Ago
Jason, I'm confused. I don't really know what you are saying. I can only ever explain my response to a poem. I can't possibly know the meaning for the writer unless they tell me. Just enquiring, do you think I hijacked Viet's poem? That's scary, friend!!! I would love to know what others think...seems I may have a very different idea about poetry. I know you are very protective about your work, and rightly so, but once you let it go, which you must, it will always remain yours, but it will turn into a different million other poems because of how it is interpreted...I think that is a wonderful thing.
9 Years Ago
Maria, you are seeing this post as referring to you! oops! its a philosophical post "my thought of the day" on the issues that was exemplified by the above posts which i also related too!! It wasnt about you or Viet or me!!
edit of edit: Our own perceptions and responses are part of the dialogue, there is no letting go of the poem, ownership has not been freely passed on. It still is the poets possession to describe, chastise, clarify, diversify, and give opinions, etc as she or he decides based on perceptions. There is no passing on in ownership. There is freedom to explore it. Your responses are great to have. And as i have always said, critiques on critiques are sorely lacking, it makes for a complete diologue. I could add "why are you so defensive in my post?" lol Personally i always enjoy your comments! And so you have no issues to worry about! And these are just comments. And your impressions are always interesting and well put!! SO to follow on, as you give your impression, surely you dont mind a dialogue on the impression? an impression on an impression - anyway i was talking far more generally.
9 Years Ago
No, I wasn't saying it definitely was, I just whimsically wondered. But I would still like to know as nothing more than a matter of interest for the sake of poetry...do you think I hijacked Viet's poem, a perfectly simple uncomplicated request to a writer who's opinion I appreciate....simple....😊
9 Years Ago
No, I wasn't saying it definitely was, I just whimsically wondered. But I would still like to know as nothing more than a matter of interest for the sake of poetry...do you think I hijacked Viet's poem, a perfectly simple uncomplicated request to a writer who's opinion I appreciate....simple....😊
9 Years Ago
No, I wasn't saying it definitely was, I just whimsically wondered. But I would still like to know as nothing more than a matter of interest for the sake of poetry...do you think I hijacked Viet's poem, a perfectly simple uncomplicated request to a writer who's opinion I appreciate...😊
Sorry triple posted 😂
9 Years Ago
reposting the above edit of an edit, of my post above, to this quandary
Our own perceptions and responses are part of the dialogue, there is no letting go of the poem, ownership has not been freely passed on. It still is the poets possession to describe, chastise, clarify, diversify, and give opinions, etc as she or he decides based on perceptions. There is no passing on in ownership. There is freedom to explore it. Your responses are great to have. And as i have always said, critiques on critiques are sorely lacking, it makes for a complete diologue. I could add "why are you so defensive in my post?" lol Personally i always enjoy your comments! And so you have no issues to worry about! And these are just comments. And your impressions are always interesting and well put!! SO to follow on, as you give your impression, surely you dont mind a dialogue on the impression? an impression on an impression - anyway i was talking far more generally.
9 Years Ago
perhaps, without a "dialogue", and internally is probably the most profund place of all to have such a discussion, in the heart and soul, , there is no real poem.... just text
9 Years Ago
I started this a few days ago...
Here are the first few lines
Windswept
Windswept, the plains upon which you tread your walk
alas, this grass sways to endless winds
that which you stir in meadows talk
A rustle of songs
a Summer's breeze...
words written, restful cliffs of chalk
write for all, this day
this day of plays
listen the wind, as meadows talk and talk...
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
9 Years Ago
The Poem Thief
I pilfer every lyric
That's in print
I rob the verbs
Wallow in the way they twist and turn
Soak up any assonance,
And weep at magical metaphors,
I am a pirate!
Arrest me,
Only, does your onomatopoeia!
Like a butterfly
You let it loose,
It's wild now,
Once it leaves your soul
It's on its way,
Hold it for a moment,
Like a soft feathered bird
That's all you have of it, until it flies
Into my midst,
And I interpret it
As it finds me.
As I find it, and steal the layer that now belongs to me.
Maria Disley 20/4/15
9 Years Ago
How did you do that....get your post in before mine...😀 you stole my poem's spot, that's worse than stealing poetry.
9 Years Ago
Maybe I was unknowingly defending my integrity as a sharer of poetry, obviously, without needing too. I think it was all that talk about, deceit, hijacking, and distortion. Had me spinning for a minute😳
9 Years Ago
Metamorphosis
I wad up your words
and chew them,
a sweet poetic cud.
Extrapolating
juicy flavors
tingling my tounge.
Savoring
my unique interpretation.
Do our minds mesh,
syncing your meaning
upon my taste buds?
Not always,
still, I savor them.
Then I spit them back
onto a new page,
my morphed impression.
Karen Newell
4/20/15
9 Years Ago
Cheeze Pleeze!
We all want more cheeze
to pay the expenses
of living.
Unfortunately
my passion for creating
Art
brings no cheeze
to my pocketbook.
Only a deep joy
and a satisfaction
to feed my Soul.
Karen Newell
4/20/15
9 Years Ago
oh definietly was not a shot at you Maria!! we enjoy your comments immensely! integrity still in tact. was more generally aiming, where writing poetry could be turned in to a nightmare as opposed to a joy and passion, for the hell of it, but yep i squeezed mine in first lol
good days ;-)
9 Years Ago
Lilacs
I love the lilacs
purple blossoms
filling my home
with their special
cloying fragrance
Karen Newell
4/20/15
9 Years Ago
Description: I am going to hang this in the kitchen so I don't forget to put the cheese away.
To The Cheese Thief
say cheese
for a wide smile
but
don’t laugh
it’s a serious matter
you’d be caught at the most unexpected moment
cheese is what you see
not
what you’re going to get
so
be aware
what lures it’s a trap
Thao Chuong
2015-04-20
9 Years Ago
Electronic Mind
It has a Mind
of its own.
The whirling download
symbol
tricked me
into writing more
poems.
My machines
joke
of the day :))
Karen Newell
4/20/15
9 Years Ago
The heated Moment
too
early
in the morning
the sun still slept somewhere in the immense universe
already awoke
I was about to get up for coffee
“Stay in bed”, she said
then
romantically added
“I am in heat
extremely hot.
cool me off
honey”
it wasn’t the right moment
when my mind was also in need of a strong dose of a caffeine intake
to wake it up
and
calm me down
what was the heck of a chaotic way
to start a new day!
Poe Ed
2015-04-20
9 Years Ago
Dancing Pickles
crowdedly packed in a small jar
beneath
sour and salty liquid
it’s been very long
‘n
too hard to breathe
luckily
they’re set free for fresh air
before the expired date
they’re wildly dancing on a plate
like
those over-joyed poets
with their blissful moment of tossing words
into a two dimensional world
totally
flat
Poe Ed
2015-04-20
9 Years Ago
Wow pretty feisty people here for a Monday morning. But it isn't Monday morning in many places as part of this cyber space deal.
I see how you get so much done Viet since there's two of you. Banned for a year thanks for disclosing your criminal record. he ha.
Thought for the day would be.
You can steal my cheese if your hungry, just don't take my coffee. That would be serious.
9 Years Ago
Good evening, Jim. I enjoyed the poetic flow. It was very seldom that three poets would get on at the same time to react and interact poetically. I think that Jason handled the friction very well and Karen got on the right moment to keep the momentum. I like your art, your sense of humor, and also your gentle nature, Jim.
Thank you. Have a good night.
9 Years Ago
Good evening Orlando Hernandez. Sorry for my late reply to your post. Thank you for sharing your thought on this thread. I understand that you've just joined in FAA today. Welcome. Brother.
I was aware that you created a thread to ask for help on your first day. Unfortunately, your thread was overloaded with too many advises and unsolicited critics.
You are new, so you might not know that newcomers’ threads (asking for help) have always been flooded by some of those know-all and rough artists who want to show off their knowledge with hard critics rather than to provide good advises in a nice manner.
However, I strongly believe that they did the same to everyone asking for help –especially with the new ones. I think that it had nothing to do with your cultural heritage.
I think you have unique style which has a special market for it. Don't let the new experience dampen your artistic spirit.
The Art of Making Money
you’re at the wrong place
to look for
cash
art is for fun
cheese is for rats
not
for hungry artists
to
make
big bucks
either
would you chop trees
clear forests
and build endless housing complexes
or
could
you be
a famous rapper
being seen on big screens by millions of people
and selling tons of records
being
an artist
is just a pipe dream
that drives you on a one-way street
to a cul-de-sac
Thao Chuong
2015-04-20
9 Years Ago
Show Off
(To the guy who often shows him off on nearly every faa thread)
oh
man
he is a real smart-ass
who
thought
he would know everything
from a to z
from one end to the other end
of the whole
universe
he strolls around wherever he could
he jumps right in whenever possible
to
torture
other people’s eyes and ears
by
showing everyone
how
much
he knows about everything
yet
he forgets
he knows nothing about himself
especially
about his sarcastic attitude
that annoys the hell out of people
on a regular
basis
if
he could just
sit back,
relax,
and keep his mouth shut
there would be peace for this site and for many minds
Thao Chuong
2015-04-20
9 Years Ago
My thought of the day about human's nature in general
You Can’t Never Know, Until…
no
matter
who I’m
what I look like
in real life or online
regardless
how talented
I’m in the make-up art
and
how well
I could do to cover my face with an attractive mask
just
wait and see
don't be surprised
time will gradually peels off
layer by layer
of
my camouflage
it eventually reveals my true self underneath
it lies in the way
how I act, react, and interact when I’m in conflict with you
that defines
who I’m
no
need
for you to meet me in person
to know how nice or nasty
I could be
now and then
Thao Chuong
2015-04-21
9 Years Ago
Hi Drew. Thank you very much for sharing the quote which comes from an old kōan attributed to Zen Master Linji. It’s a simple version: “If you meet the Buddha, kill him.”
As you know, it is a metaphor. And the road, the killing, and the Buddha are symbolic. I myself prefer the simple version as it provides total freedom to kill not only the “Buddha on the Road” but also “the Buddha Within”. So long as the image of the Buddha is still patronizing one’s mind, it becomes a roadblock on his path to the enlightenment
BTW: I have surfed your galleries. You have many awesome paintings and drawings. I like most of them. I’ll visit your art portfolio again. I wonder if you would allow me to post them on this thread sometime in the future, in case I am inspired by any of them for my poem(s).
Have a good night
Here is my thought of the old kōan
The Buddha Within and With-Out
no
longer
needed
to look further for the Buddha
as he has already resided
inside
oneself
kill
both
the Buddha on the Road and the Buddha Within
to free yourself from becoming
a slave
of him or his thoughts
and explore
your own
path
to
Enlightenment
Thao Chuong
2015-04-21
9 Years Ago
The Balcony scene of Romeo and Juliet that Jean posted, saw it performed in his birth house in Stratford a week or 2 back! Coincidences abound in life... hope Jean can continue with his mysterious intriguing posts that we/I so rudely interupted... and Orlando should get in on the act here too! Rude of me/us/him/her Uh? Not my/your thread? oh..
"oops"
is a great little word!
for it says everything and nothing...
a bit like silence
with emphasis!
perhaps...
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
9 Years Ago
Oops...An echo to Jason's shooting poem Oops
Exclamation!
oops!
the sticky term
when a foot accidently dipped in poop
yuck!
the smelly expression
when lungs blasted by stinky toot
ayah!
a painful moan
when a mature man pees in his own pants
for sure
when shooting from a mouth filthy or not
those common exclamations worth than millions of words
as
they reflect the genuine feeling at the most surprising moment
without being covered by
any slight deception
damned lies
or fake
Poe Ed
2015-04-22
9 Years Ago
I heard them tell me that this land of dreams was now
I told them I had ridden shooting stars
And said I'd show them how
--Roz Abellera
9 Years Ago
@Jason.. holy cow.. you caught me.. I live in Stratford. I did not think anyone would make the connection but wow.. you are an extremely great detective..egads batman.. oh I mean Jason.. you are so clever and wow it was such fun as my mother's side of the family are very prominent in Stratford as that is where here side can be traced back to 1546.That is another story and since this is not about poetry and I don't have the talent for that sort of thing I will make this short but wanted to say ,you are brilliant.. and my mysterious post? hmmm do I detect another unsolved mystery? Jason. I checked you out.. and read about you and reviewed your work. I have been in Thailand for a few days with my family for a vacation of sorts and seems I have missed a lot. I just wanted you to know. I do have a page here on FAA , and a email address there .If you have any questions about my mysterious post my email door is always open..lol
You guys just crack me up...does all poets act the way you do? Also Poe Ed? Hmm do I detect another Raiden Ryuu? Just kidding Viet.. I think Viet..I have caught up on much of what I missed while gone and geez....wow.. so much weirdness and the comments..omg.. the comments.. funny if someone knows you are gone then you are the talk of the town. Oh and Viet, I can call you Viet right? Are you duplicating Poe Ed...I think that was Edgar Allen Poe's aka too.. hmmm believe it or not.. Anyway you all have a great night and its nice to be home and catch up on what is going on. Jean
PS ..sorry I don't have a poem for you, maybe I can take a class and learn how to compose. it seems according to Jason I am excellent at mysterious post .. whatever that is.. you just crack me up Jason. thanks for the laugh.. it hurts to laugh lol. im sore from the trip but well worth the chuckle..
9 Years Ago
@ Roz Abellera. Thanks for sharing your verse . You have many awesome paintings. Have a good night
@ Jean welcome back. I thought that you would be vaporized again (lol). Will you upload more works on your portfolio. It is very normal for writers to use different pen names. So you know the rest of the story. See you around!
9 Years Ago
Description: 'Flagler Beach Dream' by Roz Barron Abellera. I arrived to this incredible scene one day at Flagler Beach. It's days like this that make me have to pinch myself to make sure I'm not dreaming.
@ Roz Barron Abellera. Your painting gave me as viewer a peaceful moment. Please let me know within the next 24 hours if you want me to remove your work from this post. Thank you very much.
Beach Dream
at
distant
horizon
on the immense ocean
gradually sinking down
an orange sun
cool breeze from the sea is blowing to the shore
the last patch of bright light is riding on the waves
couple of seagulls hurriedly fly home
before
nightfall
he submerges himself into the peaceful afternoon
while strolling around
like a sleepwalker
in a surreal
dream
Thao Chuong
2015-04-22
9 Years Ago
Hi Thao, me again.. so that is what I have become? A writer? but you did say to me one time in an email personal email and maybe in jest..that I should be a writer and write my memoirs or something to that extent.. probably in jest now that I think about it.. Upload more, well ,when I get time..I am hand selecting some that I really like. My thoughts if I like it then others must.. Anywho..I see that you have already succeeded in finding the few that I did upload..and commented..wow very unusual for you off of this thread but nice regardless. I am exhausted and frankly relaxing watching a little television ,and have severe jet lag.. for a 60 year old a quick three day trip across the ocean and back is a long stretch but nice to get away. Oh and you ask me about the model in the photo...asking if she was my first wife...ummm I would have to say no...she might have been but Nadia beat her to it. LOL.. anyway ,check your permanent photo of Nadia above and then look at the model in the image ,...no.... close. but no cigar..lol.Anyway now that I think about it you have my thoughts rushing through my head....hmmm writers use pen names.. writers use pen names.. now that I think about it ,I get many comments with different names from different places...hmmmm so writers have pen names...so Viet, Thao,and Poe is that the extent or does it go further? I think that there are many writers here in our presence ,and all is not what is seems like...to quote one gentleman that was speaking about "Jean the Jester" I won't call any person's name but he is dressed like an X MAN.. but he says now with the rash of multiple personalities ....he didn't know who was who anymore...funny because none of us "really" see the other person only what the person wants you to see...via profile photo.. maybe a face ,maybe theirs,maybe a models,maybe a company name or maybe an abstract...so when in reality did anyone ever really know whom they were speaking.. .As I said prior..before and you even bestowed a poem on us about it...does anyone really know whom we are ever speaking to on the internet..I mean really? ok bud.. see you round.. as you said ,,,be there or be square. lol.. just love the sayings and the slang in the U S. ..makes me smile.. Oh and just hold on you will have plenty of art to post. ...just be patient Thao.. just be patient.. and you have a good night ya here..:-)
9 Years Ago
Im sorry Viet truly but I was laughing telling my "present wife" about your comment below.. I will post as copy and paste here so that you will remember...here it is..
"@ Jean welcome back. I thought that you would be vaporized again (lol). Will you upload more works on your portfolio. It is very normal for writers to use different pen names. So you know the rest of the story. See you around! " As quoted by Mr Tran. Anyway laughing.. till I cried..my wife said to tell you about vaporizing .. lol.. she said and I quote " He is like a bad penny he always turns up" im cracking up here.. sorry could not help myself. This time good night.. and you have a good night and great day my friend. Jean
9 Years Ago
A real terror is found in our fear that we may be left alone one day, to have lived inconsequential, to die unknown with no trace. Who will care? In our quest to climb above personal emptiness, we confront an endless battle against all odds to fill the hollow, and keep on trying, grasping for that intangible something that will secure an inner meaning. Through it all, a natural desire is non-negotiable, and we keep knocking on the door of hope until someone answers our call to belong, to be needed, to bond, and, perhaps above all, to love.
Kenneth Agnello, "Agnello by Agnello: Striking the Heart of an Artist's Confessions," 2015.
9 Years Ago
Kenneth, Awesome.. I love this.. I am not talented this way but it makes me envious..beautiful.. thanks for sharing it here...
Can I use that with credit to you on my page..it is very meaningful to me?
9 Years Ago
Jean...be my guest and thank you for the kind words. The excerpt is an abbreviation from the last page of my recent book, a sort of art-biography, totaling some 250+- pages with 270 illustrations of my work, near-complete, looking to be self-published...should be completed within the next month...AGNELLO BY AGNELLO: STRIKING THE HEART OF AN ARTIST'S CONFESSIONS.
9 Years Ago
Good morning and thank you fro sharing your thought, Jean and Kenneth
@Jean Gabriel Poivre: You're back like a wild fire burning everything on your path (lol). I'm going to post a poem written for you. But you have to promise that you won't be vaporized and send a PM to ask me remove it.
@ Kenneth Agnello: Wow. I love your poem and your art. You're a great thinker and talented artist.
Have a nice day to all
9 Years Ago
Hi Kenneth Agnello:
I have viewed your online art galleries. Your art is very powerful, emotional, and expressive. I think your book STRIKING THE HEART OF AN ARTIST'S CONFESSIONS will be very attractive. I could write an art and poetry book with your art. I have collaborated with many artists both in group and in individual bases. I wonder if you’re interested in an art and poetry collaboration with me, please send me a PM. I’ll let you know in detail how the collaboration works. Thanks
For your reference: Following are the two books resulted from my collaboration with two individual painters
Please have a full preview of the collaboration between painter Natalie Holland and I – in the Art and poetry book Exotic Dream.
Exotic Dreams | Make Your Own Book
And the other collaboration with neo-expressionist Noredin Morgan
Dreams 'n Shadows | Make Your Own Book
9 Years Ago
Viet, I am here to do art. To tell you the truth ,what you do in your discussion is your business. There is no poem in the world or words that have been spoken about me that would be anything new that you could say. You think of yourself as such a unique individual but you are on a atom in a group of people 7 billion or so that are just as talented and as artistic as you .As far as vaporizing anything... You of all people, the poet the man that spent time in the refugee camp that has suppose to have a talent far exceeding most would have another word besides "vaporized' it seems that you are very redundant in your use of the language for a poet.
Although it seems that since I went through what I did and changed my persona and came back ,all for enjoyment of doing something different.. which many complain that nothing ever works .I think that it is such an "artist" thing to do..to do what I did ...others complain here that this and that never works out for them here .blah blah blah.. Definition of insanity: doing the same things over and over and expecting different results, It is fine if you dislike or hate me as many have, they feel insecure and envious of me. I cannot help that and do not know why .I feel sad for them. Please do not worry that I will quote "vaporize" on you .I assure you I will be here at least as long as you or possibly longer. Also please block your PM box for me but that would be silly as there will be no PM's from me. Most of the time I never bother an individual for any reason other than to compliment them and I have often done that with you .Please have no worries that there will be a personal message from me or email or any communication and I will remove myself from this thread and although I really enjoy the communication here with you and others ,I will force myself to look away when I see it come up on the list everyday. After everything that happened last night ,your comment on the model on my page with a little sarcasm, and yes I know how you meant it, I responded in turn under the image in my way of being more forthcoming than yourself as you think yourself subtle and far superior to anyone with your words.You are as subtle as a brick falling on crystal. I responded and if you are saying burning bridges with saying im a wildfire. LOL you jest..burning bridges here. Im laughing.
For all my life I have been my best friend, as for art,I have always been a very good artist and always will. You are not the only one that has shown your work in the Chelsea Art District of New York or other places..I know the Chelsea district and most of its galleries owners like the molds on the back of my hand along with thousands of others..But what Im getting at my friend is that I have always been my own best friend and will continue to do so.I would like to have acquaintances to talk to here but not necessary ,to thine own self be true. Please have no worries of my of PMs or email coming through to you because there will be none. Mr Tran I do respect you and now for a different reason. Last evening as I scrolled down my page and found your cute sense of sarcasm under my image, I knew it to be sarcasm but your use of words camouflages it to glaze it where others would not recognize it as that but I have studied your use of it here so much I recognized it immediately and responded as I would. Not your style but close enough. As I was saying the time I did PM you and ask for your forgiveness it was for pity for your stories of whoa of personal suffering and being refugee and such..by the way you did know about the facebook site for people that were in the same camp as you and the hundreds and hundreds of photos of people on google images of people that were there those years. I did notice that I did not see a Viet Tran listed as facebook member there or see a name or face on the pages of the google images that had a Viet Tran on it but of course that doesn't matter. Once again as I was saying I do respect and admire you but not for your stories that I have seen about you on the internet and the past. I admire you and respect you for another other reason that I won't mention here. I was rather taken a back last evening with your posting under my images the way you did and it got me to start doing a lot of research back into the past..My whole thought process was turned inside out looking back and back and back.I saw pages upon pages of nudes and other artworks that you have not shared here that you produced and my thoughts were why?
I would think that an artist that has produced so many wonderful works would choose to share them in his portfolio here but I suppose its ok. Most of the time I put the past in the past and think of things that happened for a purpose but as I studied you and studied the country you say you are from and the history there I grew angry. I find that it isn't a good feeling ,I felt angry at what happened in your country.You see I had many many friends that were in that conflict as well that never came back to the U S alive and the ones that did came back mentally damaged beyond repair forever and forever. As the ideas about producing art based on the conflict became a reality and it pulsed through my brain a sadness came over me and I just shut down and close the pages and this site and decided to sleep. A rage and bad feelings and surged through my heart and soul and I did not like the feel of it so I put everything out of my mind and went to sleep.
I let go of those feelings and close that chapter of my life forever. But as I was saying looking back last evening I changed my feelings of respect and admiration for going through what you wrote you went through to a feeling of artist to artist and a artistic respect and a human to human respect as one that looks as two but does as one and for others will not know what is meant here but you do. Anyway to put a fine point on it .....please do not worry that I will give in to my urges to view this area again or to post silly useless thoughts here nor to bother you in anyway .I have to admit I have enjoyed our exchanges at times but please do not mistake my kindness for weakness. I also wanted to say to most that post here ,I have found your expressions of poetry and your post of thoughts very enjoyable but I will take my leave and not respond again no matter how much I want to I will turn away because I do understand the meaning of your post above as most in these discussions feel about me. They do not want me here because they do not understand me or they fear me or they are envious of me or whatever reasons or maybe they just don't like me.. its ok really..I don't mind..and I do understand...people fear what they do not comprehend, so what makes you any different.. you are only human.....but its been fun.
Also I will use this last post as a public expression of my desires,much like you do when expressing proof. To the administrators here at FAA and to you my fine sir and to others that will read this post in the future.. I do hereby resend the use of any and all artwork from my pages of my portfolio from any use here in this thread or discussion area by any and all persons posting in this thread or discussion.The time being 4 25 pm this 23rd day of April 2015 .Thank you for the time that I have spent here and thoughts that I have expressed here and the exchange between us.
It has been enjoyable. I take my leave of your thread now and please don't feel that I will express my remorse for my thoughts here or beg your forgiveness as you have in the back of your mind as I have done nothing here or to you to feel remorse..the first time I did so was only to see what you would say..Also love the photo of you on facebook with the whole sunglasses cigarette thing.. nice look for you ..In the future you can post your own works..they really are beautiful ,and so many you really should be proud and show them off here...take care sir and all the others that read this discussion. and thank you all for letting me express myself here .It has been fun and I will have fond memories of posting here but rest assure...I will not go anywhere. I will still be here posting art and creating art and showing it to the world as I do pay for that privilege just like you and others.Regards to you my friend and others that have been so kind to read my post and ramblings in your thread. Good luck to you and your endeavors and to all here that are talented and kind. Jean Gabriel Poive
9 Years Ago
Viet...thanks for the invite...yes, I am interested in anything you suggest. I enjoyed your site, too--good work!
9 Years Ago
Thank you Kenneth. It nice to receive your positive reply to my invitation. I will send you a PM. I do hope that the potential collaboration would be fruitful as my former ones.
9 Years Ago
Description: 100% paper collage. The nude figure serves as focus point for the abstract background
Déjà Vu
I walked by
she raised her hand
and smiled at me
at first
I was scared
she looked exactly the same as my ex-wife like two peas
then
I was quickly relieved
as
I knew for sure
my ex wasn’t here
maybe, I had known her from another life
it was a déjà vu
she lay on the seashore
revealing her mussel
from inside out
did
she sell her seashell
or display only for window shoppers?
anyway
my hungry eyes took a free ride on her attractive body
my mind went wild with further imagination
oh no
not again
another nightmare was about to happen
it was arisen with her now
exactly how
it did start with my ex before
however
without her
how could I cool down my damn desire?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-23
9 Years Ago
Of Money and God
printed
on every dollar nomination of U.S. currency
“In God We Trust”
such an odd combination
between
god and money
yet, it’s so true
as
both
are almighty
and mainly depend on beliefs
if no one trusts the face value
those US dollar bills would worth nothing
but paper rubbish
the same with God
He could only exist
so long as man continues trusting in His holy existence
however
it’s purely a matter of convenience
for
humans
to better believe, in and worship, both
Money
makes lives more comfortable
while still kicking alive
God
would ease groundless fears
of the unknown afterlife
Thao Chuong
2015-04-24
9 Years Ago
I just read some poems, actually they may be the first ones i read in english. I remember some verses from Goethe's Faust in german (actually not really a poem),
and the Prose du Transsibérien in french from Blaise Cendrars.
Just like with some jokes, you just can't translate them, a shame that this is an art that needs you to understand the language.
Actually that is not enough, you need to know the melody of the language, i noticed that i am lacking that a bit for english.
9 Years Ago
Thanks Goerg. I agree with your sharp observation about translation of poetry from one language to another, Even, it's impossible to translate some jokes because of cultural differences.
Here is some jokes just for laugh
A nurse was on duty in the Emergency Room when a young woman with purple
Hair styled into a punk rocker Mohawk, sporting a variety of tattoos, and
Wearing strange clothing, entered..... It was quickly determined that the
Patient had acute appendicitis, so she was scheduled for immediate
Surgery... When she was completely disrobed on the operating table, the
Staff noticed that her pubic hair had been dyed green and above it there was
A tattoo that read . .. .' Keep off the grass.'
Once the surgery was completed, the surgeon wrote a short note on the
Patient's' dressing, which said 'Sorry . . . Had to mow the lawn.'
Submitted by RN no name,
A man comes into the ER and yells. . .....
'My wife's going to have her baby in the cab.'
I grabbed my stuff, rushed out to the cab, lifted the lady's dress and began
To take off her underwear.
Suddenly I noticed that there were several cabs - - - and I was in the wrong
One.
Submitted by Dr. Mark MacDonald,
San Francisco
One day I had to be the bearer of bad news when I told a wife that her
Husband had died of a massive myocardial infarct.
Not more than five minutes later, I heard her reporting to the rest of the
Family that he had died of a 'massive internal fart.'
Submitted by Dr. Susan Steinberg
While acquainting myself with a new elderly patient, I asked, 'How long
Have you been bedridden?'
After a look of complete confusion she answered . . . ' Why, not for about
Twenty years - when my husband was alive.'
Submitted by Dr. Steven Swanson-
Corvallis , OR
AND FINALLY!! ! .. . .. . . . . .
Baby's First Doctor Visit
A woman and a baby were in the doctor's examining room, waiting for the
Doctor to come in for the baby's first exam. The doctor arrived, and
Examined the baby, checked his weight, and being a little concerned, asked
If the baby was breast-fed or bottle-fed.
'Breast-fed,' she replied...
'Well, strip down to your waist,' the doctor ordered.
She did. He pinched her nipples, pressed, kneaded, and rubbed both breasts
For a while in a very professional and detailed examination.
Motioning to her to get dressed, the doctor said, 'No wonder this baby is
Underweight. You don't have any milk.'
'I know,' she said, 'I'm his Grandma, but I'm glad I came.'
9 Years Ago
My thought if the day about money and love.
Of Money and Love
I know
no way
“money can’t buy love”
I’ve been told many times
but…
I would give tons of cash for you
to shop around
and
an unlimited credit card
so you could buy whatever you want online
I would build
a waterfront home on a private beach
you could lie naked for suntan
anytime you like to
or
a mansion on the top of a high mountain
for
you
to touch the stars and the moon
and have an eagle’s view of the world below
I could load
your fancy wardrobes with luxury clothing, apparels, and lingerie
of latest fashion specially for celebrities
and thousands of pairs of footwear
more
than those of the former Filipino’s First Lady Imelda Marcos
I would buy…
many fancy convertible cars
you could drive around town to show your pretty face
a luxury yacht so you and I
we would sail on seven seas
and
a private jet for you to fly like a phoenix in unlimited sky
I would also
take you to endless trips to secluded resorts
and stay in best hotels only for the rich and dignitaries
when you become so tired of those long tours around the world
I
would
welcome you home
dine with you under romantic candlelight
offer you a glass of wine and a diamond ring
bigger
than those that Richard Burton gave to Elizabeth Taylor
then
I would kneel down and ask: “will you marry me?”
please tell me
what would you reply?
would you pour cold water on my face
and coolly say
“no!
your money can’t buy my love”?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-25
9 Years Ago
5.30 It's light
Nice and bright
Birds a twittering
Birds a fluttering
Spring is here
Summer is near
No more cold
as warmth takes hold
9 Years Ago
Jean, thanks for the kind words and chuckkle. er i think lol. 👏🏿👀
Good luck with the collaboration Viet and Kenneth!
the birds tweet every morning and dusk by my window Jane, even parakeets fly by some days, i love Spring and Summer
we missed Shakespeare's birthday 2 days back! it was and is also St George's day..
The Play of Life
The love of whimful play, fell short this shortened day
A play of whims and jest, did bring our fates to test
A laugh and shriek and cry, a trial of whims to test the world and I
Forlorn, torn, I hear this day doth mourn, the bitter taste of scorn
Fall upon my heart, not sword, and all yea gathered, shall find the truth, of true accord
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
9 Years Ago
@ Jane Mcgowan: Thank you for your poem. It’s quite relaxing. You have such a unique artist’s bio and interesting experience in different cultures.
@ Jason: I like your poem.
Jean has decided not to be involved in this thread any longer. It was his personal decision that no one could do anything about it. However, he is welcomed to this thread anytime at his own choice.
About the potential collaboration with Kenneth. Thank you very much for your good wish. Yet, it is too early to know if it would take off, as it requires a lot of work, trust, compromise, and strong commitment from both sides. After both of us agree on a working format, it might take from eight to ten months to have a final outcome.
Have a restful day to all.
9 Years Ago
Here is the unique artist’s bio of Jane McGowan’s
About Jane McGowan
Hi!
I was born in England, but brought up in Southern Africa, spending time in Zambia, Zimbabwe (what was then Rhodesia), Botswana and South Africa.
We moved to Australia briefly for 8 months and then back to the UK.
I work full time, and spend all my holidays travelling. I do not take beach holidays laid on a sunbed, nor sleep in luxurious hotels. I like to experience how people in other countries live and eat. Have used long drop toilets, and eaten rats, worms, and frogs amongst other things!
I try and capture the world and beauty around us. I want people who have everything, and still complain, to see how lucky they are, but are the poorer for not being happy. Having the latest gadget does not make them as happy as a child in Africa whose dad has just made them a rattle from old bottle tops, or a car from wire.
I hope you enjoy my photos - critiques are always welcome, how do we know we are doing something wrong if we are not told and how can we improve without suggestions, we are always learning..
Thanks for looking and taking the time to read my bio,
Helen aka Jane....... (its a long story :-) )
Nothing can dim the light which shines from within - Maya Angelou.
(Note: Source of information http://fineartamerica.com/profiles/jane-mcgowan.html)
9 Years Ago
Walking in cheap shoes
walk a mile in my shoes and see if they hurt your feet
comes complete with a roll of duct tape and a bottle of glue
a little foam rubber and plenty of band aids
dodge any tacks for the soles are thin
these cheap shoes hurt my feet
but they are the only ones I have
I may wear them to the nearest thrift store
secretly slip into a good used pair for a trade in
then casually sneaking out the door like a sly fox
I really don’t want to end up barefoot in jail
Jim Taylor 2/26/ 2015
9 Years Ago
The trouble with "working for the weekend" is that you get so tired you practically sleep through it.
Today I got out of bed at 2:30. Not AM. PM.
That's what this crummy day job is doing to me. No wonder I can't get anything done. Sucks!
9 Years Ago
Hee. Jim. I enjoyed your sense of humor. You have an easy way to take serious matter in a light manner (lol). Thanks for sharing
Haa...You sound too funny, J L Meadows. At least, you have had your energy fully charged and rready for thre next round of sleep (lol)
Have a good time to you all
Jim's light poem about "walking a mile in someone's shoes has reminded about an annual event - A Walk a Mile in Her Shoes. It is the International Men's March to Stop Rape, Sexual Assault & Gender Violence. Event
Walk a Mile in Her Shoes
I have never thought
what experience I would gain
until
I walked a mile in her high–heeled shoes
in the first thirty yards or less
I
enjoyed
the new challenge
of balancing myself at every pace
I could feel the fun
like
a baby jiggles in those first steps
in his learning of how to walk
after
one hundred yards or so
I started limping
as it became more uncomfortable at each stride
I could feel the pain
my toes blistered
my feet swollen
my back ache
only
one mile walking in her shoes
but
for me
it seemed so long as a journey of thousand miles away
at the finish line
I could feel as if the tight shackle were just taken off my feet
it was quite a great relief
for me
to
get back to my own comfort zone
I wonder
how could those women endure much violence
in an abusive relationship
for such a long time
in silence
Thao Chuong
2015-04-26
9 Years Ago
The world will have another washing-day;
The decadents decay; the pedants pall;
And H.G. Wells has found that children play,
And Bernard Shaw discovered that they squall,
Rationalists are growing rational--
And through thick woods one finds a stream astray
So secret that the very sky seems small--
I think I will not hang myself to-day.
- G.K. Chesterton
9 Years Ago
Hi Viet Tran - thank you for posting my bio and I can assure you I am no more unique than anyone else......actually thinking about it Mum did say thank heavens they broke the mould when they made me .......hmmmmmmm wonder what she meant :-)
Seriously though I consider myself to have had a privileged upbringing, visiting all these places whilst still raw and unspoilt by tourism, we certainly roughed it when holidaying but back then it was luxury travelling round in an old blue Landy with tent and mattresses thrown in the back, my sister and I would be sitting on the roof eating oranges ! That was happiness. :-)
Love each other
Helen
9 Years Ago
Thanks J L Meadows for sharing the poem
@Jane McGowan: You wrote in your bio "I like to experience how people in other countries live and eat. Have used long drop toilets, and eaten rats, worms, and frogs amongst other things!" You have very unique experience of which most Westerners could have ever imagined such as eating rats, worms, frogs, crickets, etc... It could flatten their mind (lol).
9 Years Ago
Description: Taken at Uvongo Beach, Kwa Zulu Natal, South Africa. These two were having the time of their lives running up and down on the beach.
Joie de Vivre
“catch me” she jiggled
while
running away
from coming waves
then
chasing after them as they were receding
a nice day
in Spring
the little girl was playing with her younger brother on a beach
they ran to and fro
at the water
edge
their reflection on wet sand were moving along
right under their feet
he
loves
watching kids play
they often bring back fun and joy
from his childhood
as
he
could
no longer find
his lust of life in the troublesome world of adults
Thao Chuong
2015-04-27
9 Years Ago
A Shriek for Release
after the straight shot into his vein
he
got high
and went nuts
his mind became ballistic
he felt
as
if he was shooting to the moon
obsessed
with an urge for rebellion
against the suppressing system
he wanted to kill everyone
then
shoot himself
he put a revolver into his mouth
and licked around
its hard barrel
he could feel his tongue
penetrated
by
the odd taste
and the coldness of the well-oiled metal
he closed his eyes
slowly pulled the trigger
he heard nothing
but absolute
silence
after
woke up next day
and looked at the unloaded handgun
he hysterically laughed at his bad karma
next time
he would write a suicide note
and make sure to
hang himself
instead
Thao Chuong
2015-04-27
9 Years Ago
Poetry aligned with visual suggestiveness---well done! I always welcome a viewer's interpretation--my own personal backstory is perhaps less important than what others see. That said, for me the image is simply a general statement: a "scream-out" of frustrations, erupting like the release of steam from a pressure cooker. Optimistically, the figure--and all other like-minded sufferers--will scream out an emotional release before finding a fateful rope.
9 Years Ago
Thanks Kenneth. I appreciate your honest feedback. I wrote the above poem with the purpose of testing the water. I am glad to know that you're a thought provoker with a very open mind. I do hope that our collaboration would lead to as fruitful outcome.
@ Jane McGowan: It's quite a challenge for me. I'll see if I have some time tonight and that I could write something for only laughs without tears.
Here is my thought of the day from your new challenge. I hope you wouldn't cry in panic (lol)!
The Happy Ending
you’ve
probably
watched too many amorous movies
and
read a lot of romance novels
with
love stories of happy endings
so you've asked me for poetry
with
more
comedy
less tragedy
full of fun with no stress
oh yes
I could write whatever you prefer
how about a love story for us
through which you could laugh
to the last
chapter
however
you know
any love story with happy ending must reach its perfect end in a marriage
the finale of our love will be the same
no other way
around
don't you think
we'd better end our exotic relationship
just
a couple seconds
before
our potential marriage starts its stormy impact
that would twist your peaceful mind
and may lead your life
and our love
to a hapless
ending
Thao Chuong
2015-04-28
9 Years Ago
Jane: Here is the echo to the work you've posted above for fun. I have to admit that I cannot do the tango without twisting you around.(lol)
Happy Pill
“laugh is the best medicine”
she doesn’t know
who said it
and forgets where she read it
anyhow
it don’t matter much
as
she don’t wanna laugh
even when she is extremely happy
simply
because
she don’t wanna show her shiny golden teeth
behind her big smile
outside
to
the whole world
but
today
early in the morning
instead of regular coffee
she takes a happy pill for joy
that damned drug
alters
her mood
shoots her mind too high up
and makes her feel funny as someone is tickling inside her stomach
she can’t stop but laugh
and keep laughing aloud
‘til
her cheeks are flooded
with happy
tears
for
sure
when someone is under mega stress
a happy pill is the best medicine for a quick relief with long laughs
Thao Chuong
2015-04-28
9 Years Ago
Thank you for sharing your verse, Jane. Have a nice day.
none;'>
Internal Inferno
he’s been suffered for many years
from lasting abuse
by
his boss
his co-workers
his supervisors
his customers
and everyone else
whom he has met daily on the job
massive pressure dropped on his shoulders
messy stress piled up in his life
his world overturned upside down
so afraid of losing his job
he
often
swallows bitterness back to his throat
and tries to cover his fury
with
a nice smile on his face
he
feels
like an over-stretched balloon with no exhaust valve
but
keeps getting more and more air intakes
raging
inside himself
a hell of an inferno
full of intensive heat
more than enough to scotch the whole world.to ashes
Thao Chuong
2015-04-29
9 Years Ago
Great interpretation of inferno...I wonder just how many people have actually felt like that....more than we imagine.
9 Years Ago
The worst kind of betrayal,
Is when those who should believe in you,
Do not.
The worst kind of pain,
Is Knowing you're a failure,
Without even trying.
- Ashley Swamy
9 Years Ago
Description: Actually taken in my garden with my old Panasonic FZ38 bridging camera. Just stuck it between the leaves and snapped hoping it would capture one of the little rainbows - it did! In the middle of the two raindrops :-)
Fresh Reflection
after
heavy rain
the bright sun is shining
midday breeze gently shakes tree canopies
tears
of rain
keep falling off
on soggy ground
some
raindrops
still get caught
on green leaves
she
could see
inside one of those shiny watery diamonds
the bubbling reflection
of
a colourful rainbow
green leaves
the blue sky
and
her face
she inhales freshness in the air
and enjoys bright sunshine
after the rain
Thao Chuong
2015-04-29
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much for sharing the thought-provoking poem, J L Meadows. Have a good night.
Here is my echo
The Matter of Trust
the
most
disastrous
is
losing trust in human beings in general
after being stabbed in the back
by
only a couple of bad people
whom you mistakenly considered as friends
yet
the worst betrayal
is
when You
no longer believe in You
Yourself
Thao Chuong
2015-04-30
9 Years Ago
Viet,
Nice piece you wrote in relation to my "Inferno I." Whatever the reasons that cause the fiery pit, the Inferno, the images are simply dropped into a incinerator of human life. I leave it to viewers like you to express an interpretation as to the "why" or the "how."
8 Years Ago
Thanks Kenneth. Your painting Inferno had a great impact on my thinking. I was about the write about sinful men falling into the burning hell of god. But I changed my mind as the painting is not in your gallery Spiritual Presence .So it would be more appropriate to direct my poetry to human's daily activity such as pressure in life or in love.
Jane: Glad to know that you like it. I tried to write without any twist from your original work
Have a good night to all
8 Years Ago
Kenneth
It's the most powerful painting of yours which I have ever seen about the destruction of a nuclear bomb. I hope my poem wouldn't itch your mind as an American. I understand that patriotism is a big thing for many US citizens. So I am happy to remove your image, if your feel uncomfortable about my writing.
The Road To The Nuclear
(Nuke 'em Dead)
Killing unarmed civilians “en masse”
with a weapon of mass destruction
is
a war crime
against humanity
so far
fortunately
it has happened only twice in the human’s history of wartime
it was the doomsday of man
in
combination
with the hell of god
the blast of blinding light engulfed the earth
followed by a huge mushroom of smoke blackening sky and the sun
no one survived
and nothing left
on its path
Hiroshima
eight fifteen a.m.
August sixth nineteen forty five
eighty thousand civilians
instantly exterminated
three days later
Nagasaki
eleven o two a.m.
about forty thousand residents
immediately
slaughtered
at once
after
the genocide
at the Pentagon
they raised the glass and cheered out loud
for their successful tests of the newly developed weapon on live human beings
Truman
U.S. President proudly announced to his nation and the world
“It is an atomic bomb. It is a harnessing of the basic power of the universe.
The force from which the sun draws its power has been loosed against those who brought war to the Far East.”
however
Robert Oppenheimer
the "father of the atomic bomb
regrettably declared: “Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds”
nowadays
with over 16,000 nuclear warheads
much more than enough to wipe out everything on the earth
is
there
any hope left
for mankind’s survival
on the road of self-destruction?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-30
8 Years Ago
Just around the corner
There's a rainbow in the sky.
So let's have another cup of coffee,
Let's have another piece of pie.
Life is just a bubble,
And the clouds will soon roll by.
So let's have another cup of coffee,
Let's have another piece of pie.
Who cares about bad weather?
It's just an April shower.
Go ask a fortune teller,
And she'll predict a silver lining.
Soon we'll turn the corner
With our banners flying high.
So let's have another cup of coffee,
Let's have another piece of pie.
- Irving Berlin
8 Years Ago
Viet,
No need to be concerned...your poem is an articulate reflection of what you, the viewer, sees in the painting. Keep the image alive, aligned with your poem; whatever regard the work gets from a typically uncaring audience, I welcome the exposure. And you may be at rest to know that my American patriotism is not offended--we are artists, exposing the world around us, sometimes through razor-sharp brutality, other times via clever or tantalizing dramatic effects, or, then, through harmless projections of an indifferent mindset. I chose, of course the former--to awaken the sleepers, to close the lid on calendar top photo imagery.
By the way, Road to the Nuclear is a generic statement, however one chooses to relate to their own experience. Put simply, mass destruction of all kinds has been been a global happening for centuries; man has always had a "talent" for destroying his fellow man, no matter how loud a protest shrills. This painting, I may add, is usually received with an audience cringe.
Best...Ken
8 Years Ago
I got an email from D M Poivre this morning informing that his father –artist Jean Gabriel Poivre, passed away last night at 6:07 PM. I’d like to express my condolences to the Poivres for the loss of their beloved one.
Mr. D M Poivre also attached the latest painting and a poem of artist J G Poivre . He wrote in the email: “ Although not a writer, he said that you always were fair that you might post this for him in memory of him in case something happened.”
I posted both of them here in memory of Jean Gabriel Poivre –a talented artist, a thought provoker, and an interesting human being.
"I want to touch the sky, feel that blueness so light
But I can’t do any of this, so I’m leaving this world
Everyone who’s heard of me
Shouldn’t be surprised at my leaving
Even less should you sigh or grieve
I was fine when I came, and fine when I left."
J G Poivre
8 Years Ago
Good Evening Viet Tran, I hope you don't mind, but here is a poem I wrote back in 2007 - thought I would share :-)
As We Stroll Through the Corridor of Life (JEM 140107)
There are things I have seen
And places I have been
But, there is one thing I have learnt
Whatever we believe
No matter how you conceive
What you say, what you touch, what you do,
Does not just affect you.
The ripples, ad infinitum
As we stroll through the corridor of life.
There are things that we say
And the prices that we pay
When do we look at the affect?
The hurt the words have made
Once the foundations have been laid
What you say, what you touch, what you do,
Does not just affect you.
The ripples, ad infinitum
As we stroll through the corridor of life.
If it is life you have taken
It is not you it has shaken
There are, friends and relatives too
We have to think of the consequences
Of our actions, and the circumstances,
What you say, what you touch, what you do,
Does not just affect you.
The ripples, ad infinitum
As we stroll through the corridor of life.
Is that all that we can see
Is how to get rich quick TV
We are all too idle to make a difference
And have we let corporate greed
Sew; the final; damning seed
What you say, what you touch, what you do,
Does not just affect you.
The ripples, ad infinitum
As we stroll through the corridor of life.
What if, the litter that we throw
Into our own back garden does blow
Is it only then we pick it up?
Why do we do things far too late
Are we just sealing our own fate?
What you say, what you touch, what you do,
Does not just affect you.
The ripples, ad infinitum
As we stroll through the corridor of life.
8 Years Ago
Thanks for posting this Viet. I knew Jean was quite ill but did not know death was this close.
He reached out to me in a pm. I will treasure his thoughts and am glad I had a good response.
I was glad to know you for at least a short while like the smoke that spirals upward and is then gone.
RIP my friend you are a Great artist and have a pleasant journey.
8 Years Ago
Goodbye My Friend
(In Memory of artist Jean Gabriel Poivre)
goodbye my friend
you’ve just left here
for
good
maybe you’re on your way back
to where you came from
your original home
in
an another world
who you were
no longer matters
as
an artist
you will be missed
for what you created and left behind
next
generations
will be inspired by,
and enjoy your amazing art
my friend
wherever you are now
no
mistaken
it’s the common place
that every human will come
absolutely
with no
exception
I will certainly see you again
sooner or
later
so you and I
we would share a glass of wine
and pick up our unfinished conversations
for now
goodbye my friend
enjoy the best of your new journey
see you next time
for sure
Thao Chuong
2015-05-01
8 Years Ago
Viet I was quite shocked, I didn't know Jean was ill. I referred to him in a poem as a child on a swing, that's how I thought of him, he retained the qualities of a child, in his energy and openness and prolific writings.
I see him in my mind's eye
Laughing like a child,
Swinging up high in the air
His laughter echoing through the heavens,
I can only smile,
For a loved life,
A creative life,
A beautiful soul.
Maria Disley 2/5/2015
8 Years Ago
@ J L: Thank you very much for sharing the interesting poem
@ Kenneth: It was quite a relief! I somewhat have a little more understanding about you- especially your high tolerance and your openness to viewers’ interpretation of your art.
I have collaborated with quite a number of faa artists in art and poetry. I have learned that some artists strongly felt that my poetic echo MUST reflect the way they thought about their work. In those cases, I’ve always made full compromise by editing my poems or rewrite new ones. I don’t mind doing it, as I am able to take the challenge. However, this type of compromise often takes away my original thought of the related works. Also it doesn’t reflect the reality that viewers don’t always share the same thought, belief, and interpretation of an artist’s work. You’ve made me feel very positive about our collaboration. Thank you.
@ Jane: Woow! I really love the flow of your poem. It is a nice piece of music lyrics. Also, your poem provides readers some aftermath deep thoughts. Please feel welcomed to share your poetry here. Thank you again
@ Jim: Jean had not revealed his illness in his PMs to me. I knew that he was sick through one of his last thread on faa. Yet, I didn’t expect that he had been suffered the terminal illness. Thank you, Jim
@ Maria: Thanks for the poem It is very nice of you to do it in memory of him as an artist with an easy-going human being. His death has reminded me of how fragile we are and how short life is!
FYI: I was shocked at the bad news of his death when I read his son’s email this morning. He wrote::”Our hopes is that his last days would be easy and enjoyable and he did seem to enjoy speaking with you and also read your column everyday without missing a day if he read nothing else. I was going to keep his account open until his health was better but he had asked me to ask the management there to remove all his art from their servers and to change his name so that it would not be present there on the site. I am not sure as to why but I contacted the company and ask them to comply. After his passing last evening I did go online and close his account.”
Have a restful evening to you all!
8 Years Ago
What a beautiful memory Viet, that he read your posts every day. Very moving. That they took him off happily. Such a lively person who I only got to know briefly, but such an energetic mind til the end, what we all hope. X
8 Years Ago
Jean
You blew in
on your bubble bath
loving those Poets pages
so clearly.
Quick to compliment
and full of words.
Shyly demurring
any talent for penning
poetry of your own.
We missed out
Dear Sir,
for your final peice
proved you a Poet.
May you touch the clear blue,
riding the opalecent bubbles
across the Heavens
into the Stars.
Karen Newell
5/2/15
8 Years Ago
So sad about Jean. I knew he was ill but I didn't realise how ill. What a nice man. Om mani padme hum
8 Years Ago
Thank you Maria, Karen, and Dorothy. Have a nice day.
FYI: Here is part of a recent email from his son: "My family and I are still trying to cope with the loss of our father. We knew he was very ill but were blind to knowing just how ill. Sometimes it is very hard to see what is right in front of you. Perhaps we did now want to acknowledge what we knew to be true and certain. My father was cremated yesterday and today we are too go to the coast to scatter his ashes in the Pacific Ocean."
8 Years Ago
Thanks Bill. Good day.
My thought of the day is reflected through an old poem of written in 2011 - the tribute to the Vietnamese music composer/singer Trinh Cong Son.
Man's Ephemeral Asylum – Mot Coi Di Ve - Song Lyrics
endless years gone by
i’m still strolling around
reaching nowhere in this wearing life
sunshine and moonlight shining on my shoulders
for one hundred years throughout my journey
in a man’s ephemeral asylum
rhythms o’ foliage
'n tempos o’ exotic grass
rolling in my intoxicated mind
sitting motionless in an afternoon
wondering how delicate a life is!
days flown by
spring had already left
summer has just passed by
then galloping sounds of early autumn
echoed from afar
cloud hanging over my head
‘n sunshine on shoulders
i keep dragging both tiring feet ahead
leaving many streams and rivers behind
in my obsessive heart
vibrated an astonishing call for passionate love
watching sudden reflection of a human shadow
appeared in my inner mirror
listening to pounding sounds on a soggy day here
dreaming of rainy season somewhere else far away
watery drops keep pouring inside myself
each tiny needle strikes against my solo soul
running about on a vicious trail
oh a fatigued round
dreaming of a newly green path
‘n the youthful wonders of the past
each word by the sunset
last words to the tomb
final eulogy buried into rivers and seas
echoed from my past passage
through small creeks and streams
while going back home
i recall my ongoing journey of strolling around
climbing on high mountains
sailing to open seas
in both uncompassionate human hands
the howling wind has frigidly wiped out my youthful time
one hundred years in a man's life
an eye blink of the infinite time
i have yet reached the final destination
so wondering whereabouts of my homeland
in another world
Thao Chuong
@ 2011-10-22
8 Years Ago
Morning Walk at Esquimalt Lagoon.
who wanna miss
a day like
this?
it was sunny
nine degree Celsius
at seven thirty a.m.
warm enough
perfectly
perfect
for
any early morning walk
the dog
and
I
decided to skip our routine stroll on Goose Trail
instead,
we went to Esquimalt Lagoon
and played ball throwing and retrieving game
he ran
happily barked
and had a nice swim
as
usual
I got a good shower from his hard shakes
such a beautiful day outside
who
wanna
keep gluing
numbed butts on a chair
fatigued eyes to a screen
and a nerve-wracked mind inside a two dimensional matrix?
Thao Chuong
2015-05-03
8 Years Ago
Man's Ephemeral Asylum....one of your best...if not the best fro what I have read. Amazing!
8 Years Ago
Today was the first day in six that the sun shone and it was gloriously warm.
we actually got to sit in the garden and have lunch with a glass of wine.
Fed the birds and watched the squirrels play. Love Life.
Dirty Streets n dirty skies
Dirty mouths n dirty lies
Feet are leaden, eyes cast down
No words spoken, in this town
Insular little lives are lead
From getting up to going to bed
Dirty Streets n dirty skies
Dirty mouths n dirty lies
8 Years Ago
@ Maria: Thanks for the comment. The weather’ been very good. It’s really warm about 17 degree Celsius. Great for outdoor activities.
@ Jane: Hee…too much dirt to soil the mind
Of Money and Living
they mistakenly believe
“time is money.”
It’s the reason
why they always spend their time
to make more and more money
much more
than
they’re really in need of
when
getting older
and having no time left for a living
they become aware of the cruel fact
that
their useless money can’t buy any extra minute for their valuable lives
would they have ever regretted
not to enjoy the fullest
of their living
time ?
Thao Chuong
2015-05-07
8 Years Ago
An echo to Jane’s poem
Untitled
from a psycho mind – endless rotten thoughts
illusory talks ‘n naughty acts
nothing real
but lies
and damned lies
what would be gained from a deceptive game
yet integrity
loss
bad
karma
for the whole life
from birth to death
Poe Ed
2015-05-07
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day is brought by this poem:
Artist ticks
As the clock moves on
- the brushes wait
- the paint sits still
the artists debates
- setting on a blank start, where the stroke of the brush finishes
the artist remains until she begins again.
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your thought Janelle. Have a good night.
Life is But…
life is but a dream
or just a nightmare
depending
on
how
we really wanna make it
a dream
only
if
we know how to
relax
take life as is
and be happy with it
or
a burning hell
we torture ourselves with an endless desire
to put life under total control
exactly the way
in
which
we like it to be
let’s
enjoy
the living process
and leave the final outcome whatever it would be in our sweet dream
Thao Chuong
2015-05-07
8 Years Ago
A Dream Interrupted
The who-hoot of an owl
raised my consciousness
from the land of Morpheus.
I lay so still
drifting
upon my little latex island.
Listening
to the coyotes calling,
frogs screeching,
swirling Kansas clouds
thundering across the sky.
Night
is never silent.
Closing my eyes
I waited
for the tides to rise,
pulling me back again
into the wondrous world
of Dreams.
Karen Newell
5/8/15
8 Years Ago
In response to "Of Money & Living"
- Burning question of the day
There are those that have
There are those that haven't
The haves sit on their little piles of money
The have nots gladly share every penny
The haves know not the joy of sharing
the have nots love the joy of caring
If the have nots ended up with lots of money
and the haves ended up with just pennies
Would the roles reverse in time,
and the have nots end up just like the haves,
and the haves end up just like the have nots ,
or, do we get many sharing caring people?
8 Years Ago
I've have this bumper sticker on our vehicle to give people an alternative reason for purchasing art that moves them.
Invest in Joy & Inspiration - BUY ART
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
8 Years Ago
@ Karen.
Your poem A Dream Interrupted is an amazing one. I could visualize your night as I read it. I think yours is one of the most dreamy ones written about the never-silent sounds of the night
@Jane: Love the provoking thought in your poetry.
@ Bill: I like your idea of promoting art in the form of bumper stickers.
I think that it'd be better that "slogan" on the ticker could have either a sense of humor or controversy to attract other drivers.
Followings are from my quick thought:
Smart Guy - Buys Art
Dumb Ass - Buys Diamond
or
Smart Guy - Buys Art
Dumb Ass - Buys Sex
or
BUY ART - A Gift From Heart
etc..
Have a good night to all
8 Years Ago
Description: Emergence of God the Father; 2014, oil on canvas, 50 inches x 33 inches.
Do you really know the right God, or are you just a sponge for all you've been taught by blind tradition? Perhaps the spirit of a better life is all around you, can hit you by surprise, catches you half-naked, grabs you unprepared through its onslaught, but falls within no political denomination. Religious wars, religious righteousness, they are pompous, silly in the real scheme of things, or they not? In the end, what does it matter--the shirtless man in the picture will be entombed and covered with the same dirt as he who follows.
Look up, look around. Instant Karma awakens us all, perhaps rudely.
By Kenneth Agnello
The Satanic Creator
the whole mankind
and all other species
except
a very few
were totally wiped out
from the earth by the Great Deluge
as
the harsh punishment
for humans’ sins
far
more than
a mass murder
it was an unquestionable genocide
only
Satan could carry out
such a coward act
to terminate
humans
and all other innocent beings on this planet
except
those wise men of the far past
who would dare those satanic writings about the holy creator
they intentionally used
God
as a scarecrow
to terror those weak humans of fearful minds
and built a vast empire of religion
for
their own benefits
Thao Chuong
2015-05-08
8 Years Ago
Viet- Your suggestions brought a broad smile to my face this morning. Thank you.
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Good accompanying poetry to my work...Emergence of God the Father. I appreciate also that you included my own brief description.
8 Years Ago
Enjoy your happy day, Bill. I hope your vehicle wouldn't be vandalized by those guys who buy sex on dirty street - instead of buy your awesome art (lol)
Thank Kenneth. Your description is very essential for viewers to know a little bit about the thought of the artist about his work. Without your description, the powerful message of your work could be lost in a viewer's interpretation.
Enjoy a nice weekend.
8 Years Ago
Believers - Do You Really Know Your God?
don’t
you believe
Your God is the holy creator
of
mankind,
all beings,
and the whole universe?
don’t
you also believe
Your God is the only true one
Who must be worshiped by every human?
for
those who believe in any god other than yours
are but religious infidels
worshiping
Satan
their souls must be suffered forever in a burning hell of your god
I
always
wonder why
humans of this modern era
could maintain such a crappy belief
that
god is such a psychopath
with
a bothersome mind
an unsympathetic heart
and an absolutely un-challengeable power
ready to be unleashed and terminate everyone
those who refuse
to pray for his
mercy
followers
in all religions
often talk about love
awkwardly, worshipers of one god always act the opposite
with so much hatred against worshipers of other gods
regardless of your beliefs
are
you
believers
somehow awake?
or
continuously sedated
and still under heavy influence of a religious substance?
as Karl Marx once wrote
“Religion is the opium of the people”
Thao Chuong
2015-05-09
8 Years Ago
Most excellent Viet Tran. You are very correct in what Karl Marx said. I agree. See my contest and you will understand why? Again sir, superb poetry, meaningful and exquiste.
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane. It seems that our thoughts came from the same cast (lol)
@ Erik Ingeborgsen: Thank you for your feedback, Religion is always a controversial and heated issue that could burn us alive (lol). Have a good night, sir.
8 Years Ago
Description: Portrait of a Young Artist on a Mission; 1983-2012; charcoal, china marker, pastel, and pencil drawing on paper, 20 inches X 16 inches with mat and frame.
The Young Artist On His Mission Impossible
cigarette butts scattered all over the cold concrete floor
inside his tiny studio hidden in the basement of his rental suite
he’s been looking at
the blank canvas
in front of him
for many
days
indeed
he is tired of following those Old Masters on their worn paths
or whatever well-explored in the past
he is also fed up
with
nudes
flowers
still-lifes
landscapes
anything else in realism
he prefers to leave those for photographers to capture for their photo-art
and tries to create something new
that has never been done
by anyone
before
yet
he seems stuck with the old way of thoughts
runs out of idea
and doesn’t know what
he would paint next
very
stressful
to stare at the blank canvas
he pours coffee and more coffee into his empty stomach
and keeps inhaling black smoke nonstop into his congested lungs
in
the false hope
of keeping his foggy mind alert
too
exhausted to hold his upper eyelashes from shutting down
he falls asleep and momentarily snores
like
a baby
dreaming of the best painting for his next solo show
Thao Chuong
2015-05-10
8 Years Ago
To all loving mothers on the Mother's Day
Pieta - The Mother’s Love
she
held her son tight
rocked him back and forth
hummed the most favorite song of his childhood
and lullabied his sleep
as
if he were still a baby
resting peacefully on her lap
instead
of
smiling at her
he was unresponsive
remained lifeless and motionless
her heart was shattered as a piece of glassware smashed by an iron fist
her mind was frozen
she wept
in
anguish and disbelief
as her mind was in denial of his death
what language could describe immense sufferings of a mother
who was holding her dead child
by her own
hands
which fool would sacrifice
his
only son
to correct his own mistake
and
save
his bad art
in the creation of those sinful beings –called men
wouldn’t it be better for God to be a loving Mother
instead of being the heartless Holy Father as He has been so far?
Thao Chuong
2015-05-10
8 Years Ago
About Artists and the Contemporary Art World
the young artist always ponders
if
art is what
he creates for joy
by raw emotions from his heart
and wild imagination inside his mind
and
whether
he'd better express himself naturally
purely for his love of art
or
he'd better create
to meet the needs of the contemporary art market
for best sells
and
for himself
to become popular and renowned
he feels
he's always torn apart onto many different directions
at
the same time
gets lost in the labyrinth of creation
the young artist tends to forget one essential thing
the damned
ironic
fact
"Dead Artists Always Makes Tons of Money"
so
regardless
whatever he does in art while he is still alive
it don't matter much
until
after his own death
why
don’t
he create
what he loves
and writes a fancy suicide note for "his future art collectors"
Thao Chuong
2015-05-10
8 Years Ago
“True words aren't eloquent;
eloquent words aren't true.
Wise men don't need to prove their point;
men who need to prove their point aren't wise.
The Master has no possessions.
The more he does for others,
the happier he is.
The more he gives to others,
the wealthier he is.”
― Lao Tzu, Tao Te Ching
8 Years Ago
Thank you Xue Di for sharing Lao Tzu's words of wisdom, He was a great philosopher who had a great influence in China's art and culture for many centuries. Taoism, Confucianism, and Buddhism are three main pillars of the traditional Chinese philosophical thoughts and the ways of life in China. Those traditional values has been intentionally erased by Communism since 1949. Have a good night.
8 Years Ago
Words and Thoughts
from
mind to mouth
thousands of miles away
thoughts might be lost in words on the way
during the long journey
Thao Chuong
2015-0512
8 Years Ago
Point Of No Point
(sundry thought from Tao Te Ching)
a fool has no point to prove
yet
he always
proves that
he has a point
while
an intellectual has a point to prove
however
he
prefers not to prove his point.
Thao Chuong
2015-05-12
8 Years Ago
Description: "Self-Portrait with Hand on Head - 1983;" 1983, charcoal, china marker, pastel, and pencil drawing on paper, 19.5 inches X 15.5 inches with mat and frame.
Sundry Thought of The Creative Process
like any other artists
I
often
pull my hair
scratch my head
‘n wonder what would I write
if
not
about
love and sex
humans and god
life, money, and glory
philosophy, politics, religion
and
so on…
in humans’ dynamic relationships
then
what else left for poetry
except
the beauty and disasters of the nature
such as
rain,
snow,
sunshine,
moonlight,
or
tsunamis,
hurricanes,
earthquakes, etcetera…
however
without any human factor involved
poetry would be hopeless and bored to death
then
what’s the point to write
who would enjoy writing
who would like to read?
Thao Chuong
2015-05-13
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Viet Tran / Thao Chuong for your thoughts and this thread.
I've come to appreciate your efforts here.
I know I've been there
I have something to share
But just as I try
I find I'm not alone.
Am I an original?
Special?
Unique?
Do I have something new to offer?
My mind
My way
My voice
That is all that is required of me.
No more.
No less.
Joe Burgess 5/13/15
jb-imagery.com
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Good poem...the drawing is obviously direct...32 years ago I drew it (had more hair in those pre-30-years-of-age years)...created during a moment of being flat-out fed up. But, I survived, and continue to swim forward. I can paint and draw frustration, but never once thought of throwing in the towel--the challenge to succeed was always too great and adventurous!
Good job,
Ken
8 Years Ago
@ Joe Burgess: Many thanks for your comment and for sharing your poem. You're an awesome artist and a thought provoking poet.
@ Ken: I really enjoy working with you in the collaboration.
Have a good night.
8 Years Ago
The world is small but your tiny finger tips will fill the cracks in my heart. Its hard living life with a voice in my head. I choose to fight in order to make it alive. We may like our candy but it does not take away the sweetness in your voice. In this moment that I am stuck in ,so pleas hold me as my tears turn into feathers to give me wings to fly were you are......................
8 Years Ago
So now I sit
Looking for clever
Searching my mind
For that magic lever
I want to sound smart
And passionate
And deep
But all that I found
Were these words
Time for sleep
Joe Burgess 5/14/15
J.B. Imagery
8 Years Ago
About Joe Burgess: “Art and creation are evidence that we are alive. That we are more than just these bodies we inhabit. It is evidence that we can affect the natural course of the physical world. It exclaims loudly, ‘I am here!’” ~ Joe Burgess
Description:
Take a peek
You know it's there
The truth behind the lies we share
The light beyond the world we see
Take a peek
And be set free
~ Joe Burgess ~
A glimpse beyond the veil; the act of looking upon something which was not meant to be seen.
An echo to Joe Burgess’s artwork and poem
The Way I See You
rather
than opening my eyes wide
to see you clearly under bright sunshine
I prefer to fool myself
by being blind
in my fall
for you
I close my eyes tight
and quietly tiptoe into my dream
so
I could see your beauty
fully exposed under the silver moonlight
no
point
to keep peeling off
layer
after layer
‘til touching the core of your camouflage
and revealing nothing
but damned lies
of illusory
love
wouldn’t
I
better
see you
and hold my true love for you in a sweet dream?
Thao Chuong
2015-050-14
8 Years Ago
Please allow me to introduce myself
I'm a man of wealth and taste
I've been around for a long, long year
Stole many a man's soul to waste
And I was 'round when Jesus Christ
Had his moment of doubt and pain
Made damn sure that Pilate
Washed his hands and sealed his fate
Pleased to meet you
Hope you guess my name
But what's puzzling you
Is the nature of my game
I stuck around St. Petersburg
When I saw it was a time for a change
Killed the Tsar and his ministers
Anastasia screamed in vain
I rode a tank
Held a general's rank
When the blitzkrieg raged
And the bodies stank
Pleased to meet you
Hope you guess my name, oh yeah
Ah, what's puzzling you
Is the nature of my game, oh yeah
(Woo woo, woo woo)
I watched with glee
While your kings and queens
Fought for ten decades
For the gods they made
(Woo woo, woo woo)
I shouted out,
Who killed the Kennedys?
When after all
It was you and me
(Who who, who who)
Let me please introduce myself
I'm a man of wealth and taste
And I laid traps for troubadours
Who get killed before they reached Bombay
(Woo woo, who who)
Pleased to meet you
Hope you guessed my name, oh yeah
(Who who)
But what's puzzling you
Is the nature of my game, oh yeah, get down, baby
(Who who, who who)
Pleased to meet you
Hope you guessed my name, oh yeah
But what's confusing you
Is just the nature of my game
(Woo woo, who who)
Just as every cop is a criminal
And all the sinners saints
As heads is tails
Just call me Lucifer
'Cause I'm in need of some restraint
(Who who, who who)
So if you meet me
Have some courtesy
Have some sympathy, and some taste
(Woo woo)
Use all your well-learned politnesse
Or I'll lay your soul to waste, mm yeah
(Woo woo, woo woo)
Pleased to meet you
Hope you guessed my name, mm yeah
(Who who)
But what's puzzling you
Is the nature of my game, mm mean it, get down
(Woo woo, woo woo)
Woo, who
Oh yeah, get on down
Oh yeah
Oh yeah!
(Woo woo)
Tell me baby, what's my name
Tell me honey, can ya guess my name
Tell me baby, what's my name
I tell you one time, you're to blame
Oh, who
Woo, woo
Woo, who
Woo, woo
Woo, who, who
Woo, who, who
Oh, yeah
What's my name
Tell me, baby, what's my name
Tell me, sweetie, what's my name
Woo, who, who
Woo, who, who rick
Woo, who, who
Woo, who, who
Woo, who, who
Woo, who, who
Oh, yeah
Woo woo
Woo woo
Songwriters: JAGGER, MICK / RICHARDS, KEITH
Sympathy For The Devil lyrics © ABKCO Music Inc
8 Years Ago
A thread of thought
Your thought of the day
A fleeting moment
All over the page
Life spread, open
A painted picture
speaks many words
Soul open bare
In a few lines
your inner thoughts
on a molecule
8 Years Ago
@ Dominic Kinkaid: Thank for sharing the provoking song lyrics. I enjoy it. Good luck with your contest. Fallen Angel is a good title for a song or a poem.
@ Thanks Jane. You are an awesome poet who can convey your complex thoughts just a very few words and lines.
Have a restful weekend to you all.
8 Years Ago
Rain Myths
everyday
grandmother washes her hair
with the old spirits of fog and rain
the fisherman’s widow
moves from puddle to puddle-
those dark mirrors that belong to crows
reminding her of the last time
she slept the whole night through
girl with old eyes
and breath like yellowing letters
wears a wild flower-
it’s damp smell
tucked behind one ear
ballerina
her small feet move
along your roof like water
she loves thunder and lightning
and showing men
how things really look in the dark
8 Years Ago
Sundry thought of the day to Dominic Kinkaid's erotic art.
The Art of Nudity
you
peel
yourself off
to expose fully naked
under a bright spotlight
what
is left for
the mind to run on its wild ride
at
least
leave the last piece of your secrete
for
some imagination
and for a dream of an exciting journey
into the mysterious world of your splendour
Thao Chuong
2015-05-15
8 Years Ago
Welcome Tara Turner. Thanks for sharing your pretty poem.
an echo to Tara Turner's artwork And I Will Wait for You Until the Sun Does Down
I’ll Wait for You
the sun
is about to be buried
under the blue mountain afar
I've been waiting for you
for the whole day
even
though
I have a bad feeling
still, I will have waited for you
after
the nightfall
the full moon-rise
'til the sunrise again in the next day
then many following days and nights
who
could ever know
you may come any time
it
could
happen
just in a split second
if I would leave here without waiting for you any longer
I’d rather stay solo right here and wait for you till my last day
oh
dear!
you can lie to me about your love
but please never fool me about our rendezvous
Thao Chuong
2015-05-15
8 Years Ago
An Ode to Viet Tran
A prolific poet
Waxing lyrical
daily
descriptive
delectable
emotive
emotional
evocative
inferring
insatiable
intertwining
thought provoking
turning
twisting
salacious
sensuous
sexy
wanting
wistful
woeful
Viet Tran
Is your man :-)
8 Years Ago
"When you put pictures on the walls, you see the greatest change in place." ~ Rita Konig
Roth Galleries
8 Years Ago
Thanks to Dominic Kinkaid, Jane McGowan, and Juergen Roth
Have a restful weekend to you all.
Free Promotion for your Contest, DK.
FYI: Kenneth Agnello has many wonderful paintings that fit perfectly in your contest. I think that you could send him an personal invitation if you'd like to. Good luck.
Followings are detailed information about the Sympathy for the Devil or Fallen Angel contest
http://fineartamerica.com/contests/sympathy-for-the-devil-or-fallen-angel-contest.html?tab=overview&saved=true
Contest is for Paintings, Drawings or Digital Created Art Only! No plain photos only photos that have been massively modified to create a fantastic image!
I feel that Lucifer has gotten a bad rap and been portrayed as an ugly vile creature when in fact the holy books state that Lucifer was the most beautiful creature in the heavens.
There was no other creature that was as beautiful in heaven or earth. His only issue was his very being rivaled God’s. His sense of vanity got him into trouble much like humans. He was jealous of those who worshiped God and wanted other creatures in the heavens to worship him.
Basically it was a power struggle much like today. Always two cannot rule only one is on top. Concept of Lucifer: Angels are not to be of either sex but of both, so Lucifer can be of either. Male or Female concept.
IMPORTANT: Please read the rules because I will be deleting those entries that do not go by the rules and without any notification.
This contest is not for anything that even relates to God, Christian Religion or ANYTHING other than what is stated.. Lucifer, the fallen one. Male or Female
If your images disappeared it is because they were not according to rules.
ABSOLUTELY NO abstract blobs or weird stuff that you cannot see the complete concept of Lucifer the beautiful . NO PHOTOGRAPHY of weird off subject art or what you decided to just throw in.
No solicitation.
No prizes other than showing off your work and another contest listed on your portfolio.
The only prize is knowing you entered and won and are recognized by your peers as having great artwork and public viewing of your work, and congratulations
Submission Rules
Each participant may submit 10 images.
Voting Rules
1) You must be a member of FineArtAmerica.com in order to cast votes in this contest. Your account must have been active at least 30 days prior to the start of the contest in order to vote.
2) You may only vote once per image.
3) You may vote for as many images as you like... but only once for any given image.
Contest Timeline
Status: Now Accepting Submissions (13 Days Remaining)
Submissions Begin:
Friday, May 15th, 2015 - 7:38 PM
Submissions End / Voting Begins:
Friday, May 29th, 2015 - 7:38 PM
Voting Ends / Prizes Awarded:
Friday, June 5th, 2015 - 7:38 PM
Current Time (Eastern United States):
Saturday, May 16th, 2015 - 12:01 PM
8 Years Ago
A Reply to Jane’s Ode
you’ve wrote a serene lullaby for my mind
that
makes
me feel absolutely blissful
but extremely confused at the same time
as you gave me no clue
of
whom
I am the man for
as you’ve known for sure
I
could be
lyrical
romantic
emotional
and sensuous
in my fragile heart
and
irritating
provoking
wildly imaginative
in my insane mind
most importantly, I can be very sexy with my super body
like all men always do to self-proclaim
they're the best
of the best
in bed
I
wish
you would mean
I am the man not for everyone in my crazy poetry
but
only
for you
in romance
until a church’s bell tolls for my rotten soul fully buried in a hell of the sinful love
Thao Chuong
2015-05-16
8 Years Ago
The Passage from Nothingness
I've
believed
fate is what
a man can hold in in palm throughout the passage of his own life
not
what
already written
in any Heaven's Book
you could disagree with my soggy thought
as
you
might
firmly believe
humans’ fates must be held
tightly sealed
and under full control of the mighty hands of your God
doesn’t
it sound very odd
that human beings are nothing
but
loyal slaves of God
created for the sole purpose of worshipping Him
I’d rather keep my total freedom
as a human
who
emerges from nothingness
transforms himself into a pretty live form
enjoys his exciting journey towards the rising sun
then has been gradually faded into the nightfall of nothingness
isn’t it
inspiring
powerful
and astounding for any man
who could empower himself to be totally in charge of his own karma?
Thao Chuong
2015-05-16
8 Years Ago
interesting one about our interpretation of the universe.
I think we can have both views expressed in the poem at the same time.
8 Years Ago
Viet,
You are having a field day with my art work and I love it! Your poems are a great accompaniment to my images--what a complete presentation! Good job and keep it up...I'll be in touch.
Ken
8 Years Ago
@ Georg Hoffmann: Thanks for sharing your thought
@ Hi Ken. I take today off to enjoy fun in writing poetry. Keep in touch.
Here is my silly answer for Juergen Roth's doubtful title of his photo.
End of a Journey the Beginning of another One
gone
with the spring
the youthful green on tree canopies
then
dancing
in the wind
the colourful flurries in autumn
fallen back to their roots
left
on trees
only naked branches
like bony fingers hopelessly raise into the gloomy sky
trying to rise into life again
scattered
on the ground
leaves gradually decomposed
and becoming rich fertilizer for the comeback of new green in the next spring
death
is certainly not the end
but the beginning
of another living
journey
anew
Thao Chuong
2015-05-16
8 Years Ago
Viet, Again so nice of you to go the extra mile and copy and paste my contest here. You are a very good promotional person:-) Contest is kind of disintegrating but I am hoping for a
comeback since it is a very long contest. I feel a chill in the air towards it, but no matter. I have been a very busy boy since I last posted here. I created four other contest with nothing to do
with that subject but one maybe is a bit on the edge. I have had very good response in the rest. I feel good about all of them. On another note I just love Juergen Roth's work above. There is
nothing like natural subjects to draw attention and show awesome beauty. Thank you for putting it here. I will have to look at Juegen's portfolio. I bet it is awesome.
8 Years Ago
Dominic! I hope you can put more feathers on the wings of your contest. Good luck.
The Infidels
religious leaders
what are your real beliefs?
aren’t you but sadistic traitors
who collaborate with Satan in secrete
by stabbing at the back of your God’s
then leaving Him
bled to dead
without
mercy
what are your real faiths?
you’re only ruthless bounty hunters
who think
you can do business with your God
by collecting souls and trading with Him
for a waterfront mansion on His infinite heaven
in your fancy dream
of an eternal life
after death
as leaders in all religions
you could exploit your naïve followers as much as you would
from their lasting fear of being suffered forever in a burning hell
however, you must not forget
you could get nothing
from those
who
follow no rules
rely on no gods
believe in no souls
and show no fears for sins
oh
holy
leaders!
stop fooling yourselves
let followers connect themselves directly to their gods
Thao Chuong
2015-05-17
8 Years Ago
Viet, I think you better delete that image I put here promoting my contest. I posted a conversation in another post about the contest and all the members here started going to my page and checking each image for settings.Lady Shores said she checked and they were work safe. These people kept checking and looking checking and looking and worrying why my images still showed up. It is so sad when people have no life and have to destroy someone elses. I had a few little pieces of art here trying to get started and just deleted them. These people have no life and want to keep new people out of the discussion area and are submoderators . Your discussion here is the only place I have felt welcomed. thank you and I appreciate it. I deleted my work and now have to decide what to do about everything.
I love this poem thank you for posting it today .Have a nice day .
8 Years Ago
Hi Dominic.
In response to your request for me to remove the image which you put in one of your post here two days ago with the purpose of promoting your contest. I must confirm that I love to do it for you. Unfortunately, I don't have access to any posts on this thread of mine.
FYI: You are new, so you may not know that only the person who posts and the Discussions Moderator-In-Chief Lady Isabella Shores can edit or remove an image of the post. The one who posts has a time limit of 24 hours for the edit of the related post. Yet, Lady Abbie has the ultimate authority to remove an image of a post -even the whole post. In this case, You'd better send Lady Abbie an private message and ask for her help to remove the image on your related post. Lady Abbie is very busy but she is responsive to provide her help. I had the same issue and she did help me in the past.
Sorry to hear about your uncomfortable experience with your thread to promote your contest. I think that every place - either in life or online - has its own "culture". There are always some "old timers" who enjoy playing the roles of big brothers and big sisters to show newcomers all the know-hows of their little village.
May I suggest that whether you feel comfortable or not, you'd better take their good advises and ignore the bad ones? If you feel offended by their arrogant attitudes, just keep your coolness and treat those annoying behaviors as you often do with your neighbor's barking dogs. Don't let those ugly moments tax your energy and time. Ignore them and keep marching forward on your chosen path.
Don't pay any attention to those inputs that hit your nerves. If they become extremely annoyed, you can either officially request them to leave you alone or close your thread and open a new one. You're fine as long as your art or thread comply by the rules of the site. I think you'd better upload your works back and run your business as you originally intended.
Good luck. Have a good night.
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day
Oh Man!
Words, words, words...with emptiness
Google Translator
oh no
he
must
be too robotic
no way he could be a translator
he must be the worst murderer of languages
who makes me laugh
until
I pee in my pants
wouldn't
it sound more mystic
to leave one language as beautiful as is
and either learn how to understand it thoroughly
or
transform it
into something
comprehensible in another language
communication is an art
don't rob its
beauty
Poe Ed
2015-0517
8 Years Ago
Viet, you misunderstood. I was trying to tell you maybe you should only take it off here so you did not get in trouble. I was not asking you to remove it for me. I guess I am new to all of this and don't know about these things. I just got off of work and am so dog tired. I work at night unloading trucks but I was going to try and upload them again but my hard drive where I keep them is acting up so im not sure it is possible. I put a request in on my discussion and ask Lady Shores to please ask tech support if they could fix them back as I am not sure I can right now. Thank you for your advice. I feel like I have known all of you personally for a long time. I have read these discussions many times when trying to decide if I should put some art here and try to sell it.
I am just trying to make a little cash and pay the bills and it is hard to do that. I live in the desert in a trailer and a very hard life. I have a friend that pays for my internet and I am very lucky to have it. Anyway I was just excited having a contest and friends and be able to talk art. I am so far away from most art people or anyone that knows anything about art or wants to talk about it. I have a free account on here and if I could just sell some I could get a real account but then I have to borrow a camera to do that,but I guess everything will work out. Thank you for supporting me and being nice to me.You are a good guy and there are so few anywhere anymore. I love poetry and especially yours. I have been reading your discussions for months and did not have an account so I could not put anything here but it is good to talk to you now. Once again a nice poem. I am going to sleep now and thank you . Dominic
8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
@ Good morning Dominic.
You sound very familiar to me in your thinking process that has reflected through your writings and your interactions so far. I think that I've read this writing style before on this thread and in some PMs sending to me. Maybe, it is just a déjà vu that just happens in my wild imagination (lol).
I don't make any assumption about the motives and identities of people who drop by and share their thought of the day. I consider online is the place where I can meet and communicate with people of different characters, and cultural and social backgrounds, also mainly for me to enjoy my fun in poetry.
FYI: I don't need to know whatever you do or whoever you are in your real life. Also, I don't care whether I've met you on this site before or not. In short, if you need to express yourswelf, go head. Feel welcomed to share your thought of the day on this thread anytime you like to. I think freedom of expression could help ease any burden in the mind of anyone those who have issues and have been trying to cope with them.
Good rest and nice day!
8 Years Ago
You are the man for the Poetry, the one whom waxes lyrical, daily, prolifically, superbly, imaginatively, emotionally and heart felt :-)
She closes her eyes
thinks of her special time,
Licks her lips
blows,
blows again,
blows twice more,
heart leaping
a big sigh
a final blow
five o'clock
it's now 4.30
Glances in the mirror
she looks pretty
picks up her bag
walks out the door..
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing the lively poem, Jane. You're very articulate in expressing the essence of your thought in very few words. Have a good night,
Here is my echo to your poem about time.
Her Time Game
it’s
five p.m.
she wanna take her time for a thorough makeup
to
make sure
her beauty is flawless
and everything else is perfect
standing
in front of
a full size mirror
and smiling at her reflection
she is pleased to receive a pretty smile back from the beaming face
suddenly, her deep thought about his impression of her beauty was interrupted
by
the annoying bird
when it starts leaning forward from the cuckoo clock on the wall
and making its calls to remind her
it’s already six o'clock
she ain’t in a hurry
it only takes her a half hour to drive
by
the time
she gets there
it will be still too early for her first date
which was set
at
four
oh clock!
anyway
she has no worry
he has said many times
he falls in love with her forever
no
big deal
to let him wait for only a couple of hours!
Thao Chuong
2015-05-19
8 Years Ago
Poets and Poetry
who
would say
poets are only dreamers
and poetry is just lyric, romantic, and emotional?
meaningless letters
when gathered together into words
in
certain orders
they’re sharper than swords
and more powerful than any weapon of mass destruction
those
who plays with knives
someday
will have their hands sliced
same
for poets
those who play with words
sooner or later
might have their throats slit
historically
many have been tortured and killed for putting their forbidden thoughts into influential words
Thao Chuong
2015-05-19
8 Years Ago
The Magic-Go-Round
What once was so clear
So vivid
So sound
Now feels like a dream
Long gone
Unfound
I witness the cycles
The ups and the downs
As I try to control
This magic-go-round
I want to let go
But fear that I'll fall
Ironically clinging
To my prison wall
The time will come
Again
To leap
But until that day
I exist
Asleep.
Joe Burgess 5/20/15
jb-imagery.com
8 Years Ago
GONE FISHING
I read the headstone
GONE FISHING
just to think
he could have done that here
an eternity of fishing
I suppose there are worse alternatives
he will probably have twenty virgins
cleaning his fish for him
walking through a pearly gate
to gaze upon turquoise waters
rainbow fish jumping
hey this is the easy life
sentenced to an eternity of boredom
Jim Taylor 5/20/15
8 Years Ago
Good morning Joe and Jim. Thanks for sharing
@ Joe: I like the way you’ve expressed the forlorn moment by relating the magic-go-round to the prison wall.
@ Jim: Nice poem about death with light humour that reflects your humorous style in art. It make me smile and think at the same time
Have a restful day to you all
My thought of the day
The Fool
a pin
neatly hidden
inside his deep pocket
it
would
ultimately
stick its sharp head out
and penetrate his own flesh
he
who
silly believes he could fool everyone
fools no one else
but
himself
Thao Chuong
2015-05-20
8 Years Ago
The New Reality of Modern Living
unknown people
a surreal space
the busiest place that never sleeps
twenty four hours a day
seven days a week
for the whole year
round
no
other spot like this
in any town around the world
where everybody could reach each other
for
chatting
gossiping
having fun
easing stress
and expressing freely from true emotions
without fear of having real identity be revealed
who could resist such a convenient and anonymous dumpster
for personal
rubbish?
Thao Chuong
2015-05-20
8 Years Ago
in response to Modern living......
We are reminded....
Happy Birthday we type
what emotion
what feeling
what thought
Is exactly conveyed
An automated response
Once typed then forgotten
for yet another year
to be reminded
what does this teach us
can we see what they are feeling
can we see what they are thinking
where has it gone......
this thing called empathy?
8 Years Ago
Personal Rubbish
I pour my heart
Onto this screen
In hopes that somebody
Is listening
I see it fall to the bottom
Of the list
My personal rubbish
For all to dismiss
Joe Burgess 5/20/15
J.B. Imagery
8 Years Ago
Thank you Jane and Joe for your poetic echoes. Here is a personal rubbish which I have just accidentally stepped my foot onto it (lol). I hope Kenneth wouldn't feel uncomfortable to have his art paired with this rubbish thought.
Have a good night to all
Description: THE PASSAGE FROM THIS LIFE INTO THE NEXT, 1987, oil on canvas, 75 in. x 93 inches.*Make offers--all offers considered...no set price.
*****Witnesses best not interrupt the omnipresent, yet invisible, power of the calling to the next life. Sit still, observe, let alone, the scene urges to those stationed on the platform. The red wall to the next life is now penetrable, but only to those invited. The others sit tight, yearning for reason, rendered in different individual predominant coloring, which assures their separation from each other. By Kenneth Agnello
What Is Next?
The Passage From This Life Into The Next
he
often
acts like a baby
moans about little discomfort
and complains too much about the deteriorated health of his old age
whenever
he gets sick
he makes a big deal
he wants the whole work to know about his misery
and to send him a rainfall of sympathy and prayers
to ease his pain
too bad
the old chap doesn’t recognize
that he’s been suffered a great deal
from the self-centered
syndrome
it
takes
his mind away
from the cruel fact
sickness is the inevitable of life
millions of sick kids enjoy their time in hospital beds
as an old chap, he must take it as a norm
and
be happy
that he is still kicking alive
poor him
he doesn’t foresee
“what comes next?”
someday
pretty soon
he will be in a seniors’ care facility
he might not recognize who he is any more
and know not how to ask for a diaper change
when he soils a big mess
in his pants
what’s next
certainly
he would sleep forever
just couple feet under the cold ground
and will become yummy and juicy meat for worms to feast
oh
yeah
who would be there to listen to his scream when he goes to Satan’s hell
instead of his god’s heaven
as he’s been
expected ?
Thao Chuong
2015-05-20
8 Years Ago
Rubbish? Most things, when we boil them down, are reduced to rubbish. As I have told you, any time someone uses one of my images to fit into his personal thought-process, relating my painted experience to an interpreter's other back story, the recognition is appreciated. Art seems best understood when viewers can express with words what is perceived and reconciled.
Keep it up--the greatest insult any artist is forced to endure is to be ignored. So, any time spent on writing about my work is, well, time well-spent!
Best,
Ken
8 Years Ago
Some words to live by...no matter what happens...stay cool..be cool...
~mak
I always live by the, golden rule
Whatever happens, ha, don't blow your cool!
You gotta have nerves of steel
And never show folks how you, honestly feel
I lived all my life this way, hah
For example, take yesterday
I breeze home happy bringin' her my pay
Her note read, so long sappy, I have run away!
An' I threw myself down across our empty bed
An' this is what I said
Oh shit Oh Oh Oh
What? Oh what are you gonna do with me?
Oh wow uh
But I was cool!
So I "one for the roaded" at a all night bar
I wound up so loaded, I tore up my car
The judge threw the book at me,
An' when I read, the sentence there, I said
Ow! Please ow ow, please I got to know, I got to know
What? what went wrong?
I don't underst' I oh a,
But I was cool!
So I said she's the only one, that I have to pay
And I found her an' pulled my gun, an' fired point blank
The shot whistled right past that woman's head
An' I killed my hound dog, dead!
Ow, ruff ruff, r' r' r' r' r' r'
As they carried me away
I was overheard to say,
"Be cool, be cool, stay cool, be cool!"
Oscar Brown Jr. - But I Was Cool
8 Years Ago
Ah Ken! Don't you also think that without personal drama, life would be very boring? So wouldn't it be easier to let everything go with the flow and laugh on the way to the end?
@ Michaelalonzo Kominsky: It's really cool. Thanks for sharing the lyrics. I think in general songwriters might have more freedom to roam for their lyrics as the music effectively covers rhymes and rhythms that lullaby listeners. While poets have some certain restrictions, if they want to make in their poetry sound lyrical to their readers.
Have a good night.
8 Years Ago
Some words to live by...no matter what happens...stay cool..be cool...
~mak
A funny thought from the quote
The Cool Guy
he always lives by the book
by
the way
he is an accountant
so he feels it's cool not to live by the rule
as
a smart crook
who knows how cook the book
he
chops
chops numbers
then mixes with secrete ingredients
to make his food look good
unlike
starving artists
with high anxiety of creative blocks
and serious insomnia from too much stress
he
sleeps tight
every night
with a stomach full and a mind free of sins
he ain't afraid to be caught
since he knows how to fool the corrupted system
with his cool
money
Poe Ed
2015-05-21
8 Years Ago
In Proper Place - God’s Heaven
pet
birds
well fed,
in good care
but confined in a cage
always try to escape to the wild
for the dream of a free flight into the deep blue
up
high
and the freedom of an unrestrained sky
outside
quite ironic
for many humans
those
who have the free choice
yet love to go for the opposite
in the bizarre dream of being fully controlled by god’s hands
and
having
their next lives
confined forever
inside god’s heaven
is
it
the fear
of the unknown?
or
the horror
of having the lost soul tortured forever in a hell?
or
anything else
so unbearably frightened?
that has pushed man down on his knees
to desperately pray for
being accepted as
a loyal pet
of
god
Thao Chuong
2015-05-21
8 Years Ago
God's Loyal Pet
To obey
Is not
To surrender free will
But to listen
Embraced
As the world stands still
It knows
The heart
The soul and the dreams
And offers
The tools
The methods and means
When one
Is able
To forgive and forget
One finds
True freedom
As God's loyal pet
Joe Burgess 5/21/15
jb-imagery.com
8 Years Ago
On Sharing A Husband by Ho Xuan Huong
Screw the fate that makes you share a man.
One cuddles under cotton blankets; the other's cold.
Every now and then, well, maybe or maybe not,
once or twice a month, oh, it's like nothing.
You try to stick to it like a fly on rice
but the rice is rotten. You slave like the maid,
but without pay. If I had known how it would go
I think I would have lived alone.
Ho Xuan Huong is my namesake but not me. This is a famous poet I borrowed from her since she is my namesake.
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Certainly I share your perspective: life without drama would be boring! To this end I subscribed to an art, too, which without drama (and controversy, perhaps) is boring! I think the images I create are testimony to my position. As I have written, time and time again, let the pretty innocuous scenes reproduced over and over again to the point of ad nauseam continue their place on calendar tops--we can flip through them one month at a time, doubtless forgetting their content as we turn the page one month at a time. I chose another direction.
8 Years Ago
Good morning Joe, Huong and Ken.
@ Joe: You have such a unique poem about the freewill in finding true freedom in a cage. Ha...now it's good to know why a caged bird sings (lol)
@ Ho Xuan Huong: I'll get back to you and share my though about that poem you've posted.
@ Ken: I enjoy viewing your art and reading your words.
Have a nice day
8 Years Ago
In Proper Place - God’s Heaven – Part II
every morning
he lets his dream ride on new waves of bright sunrise
in his faint hope
that
today isn’t a day like any other day
it must be a better day
for his life
he
closes
his eyes tight
and tricks his mind
with a wild imagination of
spreading his wings wide to glide into the blue sky
yet
as usual
he fails to fool himself too long
when aromatic coffee from the kitchen fills in the air
freely floats into his cage
and takes him back
to his painful
reality
he cries for many hours each day
trying to ease his sufferings from the painful loss of his freedom
until he’s deadly tired
and has his mind fully frozen
only humans would enjoy listening to heart-broken lyrics
from a lost soul trapped for a lifetime
inside a cage
any
believer
who always dream of god’s heaven
he could ever comprehends the concealed feeling
why a caged bird cries more luring tunes
than any bird’s song
in the wild
Thao Chuong
2015-05-22
8 Years Ago
The Cage
This body and mind
This world and time
This desire of mine
Is all an illusion
A temporary space
For a temporary face
In a temporary place
With no real conclusion
How can it be
That I am not free
In this caged reality
Of imagined confusion
The pride and the shame
The loss and the gain
The addiction to pain
Is all a delusion
Joe Burgess 5/22/15
J.B. Imagery
8 Years Ago
Joe! Thank you very much . I've enjoyed your articulate thinking process. The exercise of thought is healthy to keep the mind in its good shape.
@ Artist Ho:
My thought about the poem On Sharing A Husband by Ho Xuan Huong
The English version betrays the essence of the original poem Kiếp Lấy Chồng Chung, since it couldn’t convey the great sense of humour in combination with the bitter taste that the poem injects into the readers’ minds.
Poet Ho Xuan Huong used unique idioms such as “Năm thì mười hoạ”, Cố đấm ăn xôi", “Làm mướn không công”, etc. that don’t exist in the English language. Although, the translation seems fine. It destroys the beauty of the poem written in her mother tongue.
Have a good night.
8 Years Ago
God of The Wind Environment
what
seen by the eyes
and perceived by the mind
of a mortal human being
is
not
what really happening
but only his subjective perception of reality
in another words
under influence
of
drugs
alcohol
and other substances
or
when
sedated with a strong dose of holy opium
his eyes become blurred
his heart is emotional
his mind is blind
his perception of what really happening becomes an illusion
no
point for endless debates about reality
as under his own perception
the truth is
what he believes
it would have happened
not
what is really happening
only
God of the Wind Environment could vaguely forecast
which direction would the wind blow out
the truth about
Himself
Thao Chuong
2015-05-22
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Nice write-up...like your poem! God of the Wind Environment was a rather unplanned development--a drawing that was left unfinished. So I reopened it years later, wildly smeared around pencil and pastels and allowed uncontrolled anatomical distortions to unfold however they may fall. The end result left an image of electrically charged lightning bolts of hair strands, contour lines,limbs, fingers, etc.--an electrically visual "wind" that blows apart all left in the ruins.
8 Years Ago
Ken
It's a gorgeous day in Victoria. I have escaped from the psychological labyrinth of art and spent most of my great day outdoors. Now I am sucked back into the black hole of your mystic world (lol). I hope you have good weather in New York too.
Description: "One Can't Bear To See One's Truth II," 1988, oil on canvas, 52.75 x 75 inches. (approx; painting is damaged to the left, and is under restoration. The image illustrated is the preserved section--damaged left portion not included).
THE TRUTH
Likely, no one wanna be deceived by lies
it’s why people always
pursue
search
ask
request
demand
and do everything as much as possible to unearth
THE TRUTH
quite
surprisingly
when it is revealed
and exposed fully naked under the sun
its light is so bright to blind the eyes
scares the mind
it is
so real
so genuine
too painful to take
too hurtful to touch
and unbearable to believe
oh no
it’s enough
please put it back
to where you found it
I prefer to continue fooling myself
about the Truth of Myself
Thao Chuong
2015-05-23
8 Years Ago
My Sundry Thought
On the Memorial Day
flag’s
flown at half-staff
the nation is mourning on Memorial Day
today
is the time
we have our heads bowed
in silence
to
moan
pay respect
and remember
those heroes who sacrificed their lives or left parts of their bodies on a battlefield
also
to share our heart-felt sympathy to families
that cope with the loss
of their loved
ones
also
don’t forget
those veterans
who survived those past wars somewhere
but could never get back on their own feet at home
no
glorious victory
when many lives lost
endless sufferings for each war won
today is the nation’s moaning day
and
isn’t
the right time
to rowdily show off high pride in patriotism
and in the absolute freedom at the costly price
Lest We Forget!
Thao Chuong
2015-05-24
8 Years Ago
Why?
Who created wars?
why did they start?
one mad man
for one reason or another
Your God is not my God
What you have I want
Al that glitters is mine
I will rape you and control you
Who created wars?
Which reason did it start?
another mad man
Possessed and embittered
Surely Gods teach love,
acceptance and humanity
Caring, empathy and sharing
Warmth, patience and kindness
Who created wars
Surely it cannot be a believer
Must just be another possessed
Embittered crazy mad man.
Why nearly always man...
not woman
Too much testosterone?
Can someone explain?
JEM 240515
8 Years Ago
No Mere Man
Look at me
Aren't I grand
Don't you see
I'm no mere man
Not impressed
Well I want more
I'll show you
Who creates war
Joe Burgess 5/24/15
jb-imagery.com
8 Years Ago
Thank you Jane and Joe fr sharing your poetic thought.
@ Jane: You have a very tough question . I think maybe God knows why wars and always men - not women, as the Creator -He is the only One Who would know his faulty products. It could be the reason why He has been doing his routine recalls and send new products all the time (lol).
@ Joe: You are grand and you sound as if you were one of the "son of god". I enjoyed your poem.
Have sound sleep with a sweet dream of peace.
8 Years Ago
War - a Nightmare and Peace – a Pipe Dream
wars
never
needed
but always exist
from East to West
from past to present
conducted
by ruthless rulers
those “sons of a bitch”
often deceitfully claim as the “sons of god”
being sent to earth for leading mankind to better lives
made under irresistible banners
such
as
in the name of a god
or in the best interest of a nation
but
actually to fulfill
wildest dreams of those conquerors
and serve best interests of a very few on the top
the governing class
and the rich
yet
the most
destructive tragedies
for civilians during the wartime and soldiers at battlefronts
only
those ill-fated souls in lower classes
serve as pawns in coldblooded chess games
peace
is but a pipe-dream
so long as
the poor has to be at war somewhere for the rich to safely make love at home ”
Thao Chuong
2015-05-25
8 Years Ago
Nice photo, Jane. Thank for sharing it on Memorial Day
Sundry Thought on Memorial Day
In Memory of Those Who Sacrificed Their Lives
burning smells of meat and barbecue sauce
float into warm air
all
over
the neighborhood
for
many
today is just another national day off
for relaxing, drinking, and partying
to celebrate the galloping sound of summer
about to arrive at the corner of their backyards
for
some families
it’s always deeply personal
a true memorial
never
forgotten
as they still mourn the loss of their loved ones
let’s spend a couple minutes on this special day
to pay respect and honor
in memory of those who served and died for the nation
but couldn’t enjoy the freedom
they fought
for
let’s
not leave
Memorial Day automatically become a cliché
a social event for barbecue and drinks
at a backyard
party
Thao Chuong
2015-05-25
8 Years Ago
Sunday – God’s Day Off
after a long week of hard work
even, God took
His day
off
who could know
what He would do on that free day?
probably God might set a good example
and He would ever commit any sin
so
for Him
no drinking, not smoking,
neither shooting drugs
nor having sex
unlike many
sinful
men
not
much fun
He would enjoy
except taking a good rest
or a quick nap in a hammock swinging on a rainbow
anyway
wouldn’t it sound deadly boring to be a God?
Thao Chuong
2015-05-25
8 Years Ago
@ Jane:
“….
…
Why nearly always man...
not woman
Too much testosterone?
Can someone explain?”
JEM 240515
The last stanza above of Your poem “Why?” has kept chasing my mind. It has also injected some guilt in my mind. Fortunately, I’ve found the perfect answer from Kenneth Agnello’s painting below:
Description:
"SEA OF FOOLS," 1988, Oil on Canvas, 92.17 in. X 70 inches...
Sea of fools, sea of the lost, sea of hapless souls, however one interprets the work, this large canvas moves from bottom to top. Blindfolded or blind, sinking, locked in isolation amongst many, individuals, drained of expression, cannot find a way out. Their fate, devoid of reason, is set in rich blue water, a lake situated within surrounding woods. Only a distant sun, flickering light through the trees, may hold an answer, but isn't telling.
By Kenneth Agnello
God in the Religious Sea of Fools
in the world dominated by MEN
women are but a vague shadow
religiously
created
from
a spare rib of man
in every religion
God’s always painted in an image of a man
men,
men, men…
and endless men can be found
on the long list of all sacred prophets
most
essentially
only the Holly Father
and those “Sons of God”
have been worshipped by all religious beliefs on earth
oh
believers
any of you
would have ever asked yourselves
why there is neither Holy Mother nor Daughters of God?
'n
why
those biological mothers of yours
who
gave birth to you into being as a man
should continue swimming in your religious sea of fools?
no need to convince me
I know
why
Thao Chuong
2015-05-26
8 Years Ago
So the question remains unanswered :-)
Here is another Why?
We see freedom
within the birds
we see beauty
within the butterflies
We see grace
within the gazelle
We see mystery
within the tiger
We see majesty
within the lion
We see nurturing
within the elephant
We love to meander
in the meadows
we love to walk
in the woods
we love to master
those big mountains
we love to swim
in the seas
So
why
do
we
chop
burn
destroy
maim
kill
litter
pollute
poison
Is this down to corporate greed
while we sit
and watch
and do
nothing
Is it because we
do not care
or
we
cant
see?
JEM 260515
8 Years Ago
Wow...Jane
"why?" you've asked
again
you've drowned my mind
deep
down
to
the
bottom
of the sea of thoughts
I love your provoking thought
especially the following stanzas of your poem "WHY?"
"Is this down to corporate greed
while we sit
and watch
and do
nothing
Is it because we
do not care
or
we
cant
see? JEM 260515"
Thank you for poetry exchange. I'll post my thought soon.
Viet Tran
http://papercollage.ca/
8 Years Ago
Description: KEEP OFF THE GRASS, 2003, oil on canvas, 62.5 in. x 42.5 inches.
Can We Keep Off the Grass?
the house we dwell
the hotel we stay
the bed we sleep
the tea we drink
the food we eat
the soap we bath
the makeup we put
the clothes we wear
the TV we watch
the laptop we chat
the path we walk
the car we drive
the bus we take
the train we ride
the plane we fly
the cruise-ship we sail
and everything else that we shop, we buy, we do daily
to make it
nice
comfy
and easy
for our fancy needs ‘n greedy wants
it's the way we live
yet
regarding
endless man-made destruction to the environment
we love to play the blame game
we protest
we chant
we shout
”down with corporate pigs!
hell to culprit’s greed for big profits!”
you really care to save the world
don’t you think each of us
one
by one
would better keep off the grass
and starts changing the way
which we’ve been
consuming
so far
Thao Chuong
2015-05-26
8 Years Ago
Morning Viet. . Thank you for trying to reason out my burning questions I have an answer to your response which I will post tonight. I believe we are a number of hours difference.
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Good words to, for me, an uncertain painting. The visual rhetoric in the piece is rather direct--a gobbling up of the living spirit by surrounding forces, which pull from all sides, heights, and dimensions. The painting process concentrated on loose, wide open brush manipulation with broad color fields and a freedom for "elastic" contour lines and spatial logic.
Good poem!
8 Years Ago
I promise I will lighten up after these final heavy questions :-) Your
poem about wars got me thinking....which is not always a good thing :-)
What if?
What if
There were no adverts
Things were sold only on merit
what if
we suddenly realised that
The next best thing was not
What if
The next big eating fad
did the same as the first
what if
you were told your designer gear
was made by the same people as not
what if
we knew things were manufactured
only to break down not wear out
what if
We were told that pharmaceuticals
held control over governments
What if
Companies did not have shares
and there were no money markets
What if?
JEM 270515
8 Years Ago
Jane, your What If reminds me of a piece I wrote a while back. :))
What If
What if
at my Temple by the Sea
time did not exist
and waiting was
just an invitation
What if
Wind never blew sand
only the canvas
or the hem of my skirt
and my hair
What if
that canvas
blew into the Sea
then washed ashore
so finely painted
that no man's hand
could have held the brush
What if
I were content
dancing alone
on an empty beach
without a fire
under that vast starry sky
What if
I never waited
for you
What if
in a monumental effort
to slake your curiosity you climbed
the crumbling cliffs
seeking to capture those exotic birds
that you might more closely
examine their plumes
What if
they were Mourning Doves
or Mocking Jays
and they pecked out your Soul
then fed it
back to the Sea
What if
in the cozy nest
your own little House Sparrow
was waiting
in her gilt cage beside your bed
What if
You could never return
to feed her
Karen Newell
2014
8 Years Ago
Ken: Your painting Keep Off the Grass is very gruesome. I could sense the bloody punishment for those who didn't obey the rules, ignored the warning sign, and stepped over the grass. Most of your artworks have taken me to the dark side of humans and his gods. As a result, my writings have reflected my thoughts associated with your works
Jane: Your poem What If has reminded me a series of poems about What If written by different poets on one of my art and poetry threads in the past.
Karen: Thank you for re-posting your poem that brought me back to the good old days of our poetry exchange.
Have a good night to all.
8 Years Ago
Hi Ken
Here is a poem of mine (written in 2012) – that could unearth the hidden message from your following painting.
Description: "The Path That Brings All Together, Then Leads Them Astray," 1988, oil on canvas, 65 inches X 72 inches
Homo Sapiens
emerged
from nowhere in darkness
into the silhouette of light
the hairy homo sapiens wandered
in ancient forests naked for millions of years
before fully evolved
into the well-groomed modern man
civilized but still savage
in his own nature
imaginative
and highly articulate
man climbs up on the top of food chain
by recklessly exploiting nature and destroying his own living habitat
he discards from his mind
what’s simple, true, and meaningful
and fills up his heart with
what’s deceitful
and useless
man’s playing god
but know not what to do with his power
he has been dragging his own fate
back
into the shadow of deep darkness
from
where
he was organically emerged
Thao Chuong
2012-09-05
8 Years Ago
Description: "An Unknown," circa-1977-2012, 14 inches X 10.5 inches (without mat and frame), China Marker, Pencil, and Pastel on Paper.
Of The Eyewitness and The Belief
we often believe that
the truth and nothing else
but
the truth
is all what we see
by our own naked eyes
in that regard
the earth must be flat to infinite horizon
and
the sun is visually moving itself over the earth
in the morning
it rises from the east
at noon
it reaches above the top our heads
by the end of the day
it sinks down in the west
but
if you don’t believe in
what you see by your own eyes
then
in that sense
it’s quite ironic
as you wouldn’t trust anyone else
including yourself
except
your sacred belief in god
whom you could have never seen by your naked eyes
Thao Chuong
2015-05-27
8 Years Ago
Into The Darkness
Into the darkness
I dove
Head first
So sure of myself
My strength
My worth
I emerged on top
With pride
And gold
And an insatiable thirst
For more
To hold
Into the darkness
I dove
Once more
Searching to find
Silence
My core
With a desire to be
All that
Surrounds
At first I was lost
But now
Am found
Joe Burgess 5/28/15
jb-imagery.com
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Good poem for "The Path That Brings All Together, Then Leads Them Astray." Curiously, when I painted it, I was unsure as to where it was going or what is was about. The work was created in the late 1980's, and essentially employed many of the conventions that I have personalized over the years--winding path in a barren landscape leading to a distant horizon, behind which a rising sun climbs or setting sun descends. True to my motifs, too, for the time are the nudes, balding but bearded men, and thick knife-applied color.
Good job--I am experiencing time and time again another dimension to my work through your words!
8 Years Ago
Woow, Joe. It's a very inspiring poem. You've got into the core of yourself and found the loss of your essence. It must be an enlightening moment of yours.
Ken. Thanks for giving me your insight of the painting that reminded me of the path on which human has been walking so far. Under a broader scope, is there still hope?
Have a good evening!
8 Years Ago
Description: "One Bird in Flight; One Bird in Hand;" 1990, 96 in. x 65 inches.
*****What separates these individuals may be more than the leaning block wall that stands behind them. Capture of a dream in hand is unseen by the blind and remains suspicious to the undressed. A bird soars from behind, the scavenger in all who are free to pursue. No message is here, no moral, just an unfolding event depicted with thick color, manipulated with brush and knife, modeled with the flick of a wrist.
Ifs and What If
if every being was born into life in an equal status
and
must share
the same fate
from birth to death
would one man still want to try his best effort
to make his life better than lives of many other humans’
would he stop pursuing his burning desire
to climb up to the top of the world
in
art,
music,
poetry
or in anything else he loves to do
would he still chase his dream of
being rich
becoming renowned
obtaining glory, power, authority
at
any price
regardless of
grave impact on nature
and massive losses of other beings’ lives
if
man’s
less blindly greedy
and more visually generous
wouldn't the earth be a better and peaceful place to live
what if
this silly dream of mine
comes
true
Thao Chuong
2015-05-28
8 Years Ago
Description: LIFE'S MELTDOWN, 2000, oil on canvas, 65.25 in. x 50.17 inches.
And in the end, all that is familiar melts away and washes down. Dripped paint is aloud to follow the arbitrary, downward path of decaying life. What is left is a shapeless whirlpool of swirling color, dissolved into a puddle of human abstraction. Yes, the dream is over. By Kenneth Agnello
Hi Ken
Your painting Life Meltdown brought back the hopeless feeling as written in a poem of mine in 2012. I think only those who have gone through the horrible experience of being tortured, would understand the feeling of having their flesh melted in pain.
Life's Meltdown While the World In Silence
(to all victims of torture)
I vomited
acidic liquid
from my empty stomach
and spitted out bitterness stuck inside my dried throat
I bit my tongue
ground my teeth
held back any moaning sound
and endured extreme physical pain in silence
my mind was filled with nothing
but
hatred
and thirst for revenge
ironically at the same time
I was crying for justice and compassion
the frozen time stood still in its infinite mode
the world was utterly quiet in deep sleep
even not a tinny snoring sound
could be heard
except,
the joyful laughs of my torturers
enjoying their sadistic game
extreme pain became physically too much for my body to take
my mind was automatically shut down
I was passed out
why was the world witnessing my ordeal
in absolute silence!
Thao Chuong
2012-03-16
8 Years Ago
Is Love a Two-way Street?
she expects he falls in love with her
neither for her beauty
nor her sexy
body
he expects her true love for him
not for his social status
nor his fat
wallet
love is likely a two-way street
on which she and he could meet somewhere in between
and have their own needs
and expectations
mutually
met
wouldn’t it be safer to be on a one-way street
where
one blindly
drives in love
without any head-on collision at all
Thao Chuong
2013-12-23
8 Years Ago
The resonance of my words
cannot describeth
the beauty that aboundeth
colorful menagerie all aroundeth
highlighted by chirping birds
~Genevieve Esson © 2015
All Rights Reserved
8 Years Ago
Viet,
I find it fascinating that you are so able to relate so many of your poems to my art work--an unending reel of written "color" with visual "dialogue." Think of the potential if we could put both brains in one skull! Lol.
8 Years Ago
@ Genevieve Esson: Welcome to this thread and thanks for sharing your thought.
@ Ken. Your paintings in combination with my poems would double the troubles for our thought (lol).
Here is an echo to Genevieve Esson's poem
Of Thought and Words
thought
without words
remains forever in absolute silence
words
without thought
run amok like a train fallen off its tracks
much
thought
and less words
would resonate a better ripple effect
Thao Chuong
2015-05-29
8 Years Ago
Description: DEATH OF THE ONENESS, 2007, oil on canvas, 62.38 in X 42.38 inches.
***A collage of present realities engulfs the real, the beginning, the remembered, the dream. Can we talk it over one more time? Can you understand the oneness? No...no...no...it's too late. So we collapse from within along the streets of the passersby, destined to become just another broken statistic, dropped like the fallen leaves from the autumn trees. By Kenneth Agnello
@ Ken. A painting of yours and another poem of mine written 2013
Falling Out Of Love
you’ve
flown away
gone with the wind
and disappeared to unknown horizon
without your tears
I cry no more
without your smiles
I no longer laugh
without your love
I live in
hell
we are drifting far apart to two opposite ends of the universe
you took my heart
you crushed my mind
you ruined my life
I’m collapsed in emptiness
what else from love
you left for
me?
Thao Chuong
2013-12-21
8 Years Ago
Description: SPIRITUAL NAKEDNESS-HALF-HIDDEN, 2007, oil on canvas, 62 inches X 41.88 inches.
Spiritually Naked - Half-hidden
whenever man loses his faith in himself
he relies on someone else
for his spiritual
survival
he created different religions
with
various gods
in his own image
to enhance his desire for an eternal life
and put his fate into his God’s holy hands
for
the false hope
of easing his unbearable sufferings about life and death
unluckily
he has fooled himself too long
more than long
enough
to
recollect
it isn’t about his religion nor his God
but purely about himself
and
his dream
of being immortal
and his permanent fear of the uncertainty in his life and the unknown after his death
too bad
he believes
that he has to serve as a slave to his last day on earth
for
what
originally
created by man
to serve human’s own interests
Thao Chuong
2015-05-29
8 Years Ago
Of Love, Sex, and Companionship in Marriage
it was fabulous
he really enjoyed so much
every single moment of their romance
he decided to kept it forever
by jumping right into a marriage
many years later
he
regretted
he made the worst mistake in life
by trading his total freedom for sex and companionship
but less
'n less
love
now
no way out
probably stuck with it for a lifetime
he wonders why marriage is too addictive to quit
after
each divorce
men often act exactly like those drug junkies with a bad habit
of getting back into the same trap
over and over
again
‘til they are completely trashed
Thao Chuong
2013-12-11
8 Years Ago
Most Peaceful Moment
my feet touch grass
my back leans on a lawn-chair
my chest’s filled with fresh air
my eyes rest onto sapphire sky
my mind sinks deep
into its own
world
fully
deflated
like a balloon
I let go everything
and have myself floated into nothingness
unless
on a god’s heaven
how could I expect any more peaceful moment like this on earth ?
Thao Chuong
2015-05-31
8 Years Ago
My silly thought of the day
My Own Shadow
wherever
I go, it follows
whatever I do, it does the same
shame
shame on
the worst stalker
that has harassed me all the time
that bothers me
that makes me sick
that drives me mad
that pushes me insane
let me cry
let me whine
let me vent my filthy air into your ears
let me throw my stress at your face
you must listen to my bad fate
but
remember
you don't know
nothing about myself
I am too sensitive to take any of your honest words
which don’t sound too good to my ears
keep
your mouth shut
I am fed up with your useless sympathy
I know quite well how to get rid of my own shadow
it's pretty simple and easy
I keep submerging
myself into
darkness
Thao Chuong
2015-05-31
8 Years Ago
Hi Viet - Just love your peaceful moment - reminds me when I was going through a very stressful time at work and we went to Spain on a weeks break to get away. The first night we stayed at a little place in the hills above Malaga - a little place near Comares. I sat outside the little finca on the balcony looking down into the valleys and all you could hear was a dog below in the valley which barked and the bird song in the trees. The peacefulness and perfectness of that moment just overwhelmed me, I felt everything just melt away and I cried. I could have died happy there at that moment. Who needs the entrapment of things and wealth. The simplest things are Heaven..
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Jane. It is quite relaxed to get a peaceful moment once in awhile. I agreed that simplicity often helps our mind get rid of stress. Have a good day!
8 Years Ago
Dead End
I tied the knot
put my fate into your hands
and expected that you would give me
something called love
in return
it's too bad
as soon as my head got stuck inside the loop
it became your game
you could kick the chair off any time
to see me dangling
in the air
I
must beg
for your mercy
or it would be the dead-end of my damned world
Thao Chuong
2013-12-23
8 Years Ago
On My Knees
it could be my lovesick heart
that knocked me
on my knees
or
it might be
her pretty face
her attractive eyes
her innocent smiles
that pulled me down
to her
feet
whatever it was
no longer matters
it’s too late for me
I’ve already fallen and gotten caught
in a fatal trap
called
love
Thao Chuong
2014-01-01
8 Years Ago
To Poets
where are you, poets?
are
you
going out to lunch
taking a long nap in the back of your shop
drinking beer on your deck
sunbathing in your backyard
lying naked on a sandy beach
being busy to make love
or getting lost in
your own
words
what are you doing, poets?
It’s
been
very quiet
I could hear
the jingling sound
of a tiny needle dropped on marble floor
where are you, poets?
Thao Chuong
2015-06-01
8 Years Ago
Poe :))
This Poets pen
has felt paralyzed,
though my words roll along,
they are all in my mind.
I have been wandering
the Ouachita mountains
on Arkansas crystal quests.
Puttering in my muddy gardens,
and walking with the pets.
I watch the raindrops
endlessly fall, then stroll
through the deep clover
growing incredibly tall.
I am minding my beehive
as I have started beekeeping.
Lounging around,
thunderstorm sleeping.
Dreaming, waking,
doing the chores.
Reading mythology
and foreign fairy tale lore.
Sometimes
the rain makes me quite lazy,
it never seems to quit,
so I sit by the window
and don't accomplish shit.
Karen Newell
6/1/15
8 Years Ago
I wrote this a little while ago for someone I know !!!
In Denial
Oooooooooooooooooh
Stretch it
Shove it
Stuff it
Suck it
Cut it
Staple it
Push it
Pull it
My daughters blossomed
and I have bottomed
I’m in denial
I’ve lived a while
I colour my greys
& pull out the strays
Pull on my corset
oh, I’ll have to force it
The use of cucumber is clear
but more like polyfilla I fear
That crack’s become a crater
Oooh stretch it now, not later
Oooooooooooooooooh
Stretch it
Shove it
Stuff it
Suck it
Cut it
Staple it
Push it
Pull it
My underarms are sagging
Whilst my posterior is lagging
My beauty sleep’s a must
For my jowls have hit my bust
Is that cellulite above my knees?
Oh let me see those surgeons fees
Pull up my creases staple them tight
Suck out my tum with all your might.
Oooooooooooooooooh
Stretch it
Shove it
Stuff it
Suck it
Cut it
Staple it
Push it
Pull it
You said no need for surgeons fees
I have the answer just you see
Pull all of it high; above my head,
and tie it really tight you said,
Then cover it all with a floppy hat
There, that’s taken care of that!!!
JEM 251109
8 Years Ago
Jane, reminds me of this piece :)
Wisdom Gleaned
The Crone
holds her Power,
once freely flaunted
in the folly of her Youth.
Now Wisdom resides
in the arid Womb
and Men
no longer captivate.
Karen Newell
8 Years Ago
As usual, your poetry adds another dimension to my art work. This is a good thing, because it incorporates viewer interpretation through written word with that which the artist has painted. I write about my work, too, as you have noted on several pieces. But, to combine the viewer's "art" through poetry with my visual dialogue creates a "two-dimensional" product story, a coalescing of two points of view.
8 Years Ago
Joe Cool.
Yeah, I can do that.
It's Joe Cool
With my rhyme and my rap
Hey Joe Cool
Ain't nothin' stopping' me
Yep Joe Cool
With late night poetry
Joe Cool
Serenade us again
Please Joe Cool
Tell us where you've been
Say Joe Cool
Won't you give us another
More Joe Cool
He's one hip brother
Joe Cool
Stays up too late
Cuz Joe cool
Likes to procrastinate
Hey Joe Cool
Is a lover not a fighter
Wow Joe Cool
With a tongue on fire
**drops the mike**
Joe Burgess 6/3/15
jb-imagery.com
8 Years Ago
The Devil's Will
The gift was given
Then taken away
Shrouded by darkness
In light of day
Clarity held
In the palm of my hand
Now lies hidden
By the flaws of man
The greatest of knowledge
For all to seek
The impossible dream
Heaven for the meek
I want it back
And that's the game
The Devil's will
Is the gift of pain
Joe Burgess 6/4/15
jb-imagery.com
8 Years Ago
Where has he gone?
I fear Viet Tran has gone away
I hope too far he does not stray
where would we be without our poet
in motion Laureate
Perfect poetry he does write
whist some us just write shi*e
:-)
8 Years Ago
The Missing Poe et
Perhaps
he is resting
his tired wrist.
Wandering along
his garden paths
in silent,
dreamy inspiration.
Vaguely wondering
if his words
are missed
and if his absence
is sorely noticed.
They are
and it is.
8 Years Ago
Echo Karen
Maybe.......
Our Poet has flown away
boarded a plane
over seas and mountains
to foreign shores
A place of many islands
cocooned in a warmed sea
with crystal clear waters
which gently lap the shores
a place where life is slow
and people live as they used to
many years ago
and local wines abound
You dine outside on fresh fish
and watch the sun sink into the sea
The warm breeze gently flicking your hair
and delicately pulling on your hem
A place where stress slides
from your shoulders leaving you
feeling free and weightless
your mind emptied and purified
oh how I wish I was there too.
8 Years Ago
Perhaps
He has built
a bonfire
on the beach
at the base
of the bluffs
where the waves
never sleep.
Perhaps
He is dancing
alone along
the sandy shore
waiting
for the Sun
to sink
slowly down
beneath the horizon.
Perhaps
he is watching
the stars
come to life
illuminating
the darkness
with a million
Milky Way secrets.
Perhaps
he is waiting
patiently
for his muse
to appear
and share
his romantic moment.
8 Years Ago
To the depths perhaps?
He dove to the bottom of the sea
where things have fangs
and snap and snarl
and lanterns which illuminate their way
these things are big
these things are small
these things are gruesome
these things are frightening
they swim this way and that
some wriggle some fly
some lie on the bottom in wait
and wait, and wait, then, SNAP
Our poet would not stay down there
it is far too dark and gloomy
he would rather be somewhere roomy
with sun and trees and birds without a care.
8 Years Ago
Catch and Release
Caught on her
Love line
he flys
through the air.
That big fish
had never seen
the Sky so blue.
Gasping on the deck
of her little ship
he knows the face of Death.
She loosens the hook
and kicks him back
into the Sea.
She wonders,
Will he forget his desire
to bite that bait?
To see that
Pure blue Sky?
As she casts her allure
Again...
Karen Newell
8 Years Ago
He could be
lounging back on a comfy sofa,
checking his thread at leisure.
A small smile of amusement
on his lips,
like a Buddha.
Watching his little harem
skitter like schoolgirls
with a crush
on the absent professor.
8 Years Ago
I am curently looking for a job, if someone has a job to offer as sofa and chocolate tester please send me a message (it has to be in Lausanne. Switzerland, of course)
My thougt of the day is giving it a try.
8 Years Ago
When ever I was being a smart ass my Mom would say You got just enough brains to out smart Your Self, She could always bring me back to reality and make me laugh. Thanks Mom
8 Years Ago
I Was in a bad mood all day.
I woke up today from a dream where I was visiting and talking to a group of other artists at a prestige artist's gallery. When it came to show them my website and artwork, they laughed, snickered and commented that my artwork is "cookie cutter", boring, average and undesirable "TO ART COLLECTORS". That today's art collectors want "new" exciting artwork that is colorful, abstract, and large. Art that is out of the box with a style that isn't / can't be done by hundreds of other "artists". Then when I went to talk to the gallery owner I called her Barbara, when her name was Amanda. I left the gallery embarrassed and unsure of myself.
So when I did wake up, I wanted to just throw all my artwork into the trash and delete all my files.
I posted an limited time offer on FB, and around town last week to drum up some business.
One person called me a day ago and was very rude.
I know this was only my subconscious causing havoc in my dreams and I've been without a commission for a little over six months now.
Tomorrow I'll pick up the pencil and draw something for a friend. Hopefully that will put me in a better mood.
8 Years Ago
Probably a bit late...definitely more than a bit late...but the "what if" entries did also remind me of the good old exchange days...So here's my contribution from those times...on the subject...
8 Years Ago
Sorry for not being able to engage in the dialogues for awhile. Thank you all of you for sharing your thoughts and keeping this thread floated. Special thanks to Karen and Jane for your supports.
Enjoy a peaceful time.
8 Years Ago
Not as Hard as She Used to Think
whenever she thought of it
she was so afraid
as she knew
someday
sooner or later
it would come for sure
however
she often wondered
how would it be ended up
before
she could recognize it
everything was perfectly done
completely
gone
like
a lightning
the blade of his scythe was swift
the last kiss of death was so sweet
she only felt a sharp pain in her chest for a couple of seconds
then fell into nothingness
now
resting in peace
she no longer worries about life and death
Thao Chuong
2016-06-11
8 Years Ago
Mourners
she
who died
rested in peace
as
she knew
either should she go back home where she came from
or would she turn into dust to nourish many other life forms
she has just crossed the bridge
on which endless human beings have gone through
sooner or later
everyone will follow her foot steps
why
the hell
do those who are still alive weep and cry?
are you jealous that she is going to take a better spot in heaven?
Thao Chuong
2015-06-11
8 Years Ago
Borrowed Days
Sorry for your loss
The words ring hollow
A ship wind tossed
In the joy and sorrow
Better days to come
Waiting for tomorrow
The teardrops run
While today is borrowed
Joe Burgess 6/12/15
jb-imagery.com
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Joe. Have a good night.
An echo to Joe's poem Borrowed Days
My Time
unlike
money
the more I save
the more I have
my days are numbered
the more I save
the less I have
and
whether
I spend them or not
I will lose them one by one
wouldn't I better enjoy my days
'til the last minute
unlike
money
I can borrow anytime
and spend as much as I could
until I wreck my credit card
when I run out of time
no
way
I could borrow
even a second of it
why
the heck
should I sell my time
for money, glory, power, and other nonsense stuff
that I can never use them to buy my days back?
Thao Chuong
2015-06-11
8 Years Ago
Modern Motherhood
she has kept chatting for many hours online in the family room
while children are
playing
shouting
chasing each other inside the house
noisy
rowdy
chaotic
and increasingly bothersome
too much for her focus
she shouts out loud
to
vent
her frustration
“enough! stop it.
get some fresh air
go outside
now!”
kids immediately run to the backyards
the mother sighs
then
immediately
gets back to her chat
Thao Chuong
2015-06-12
8 Years Ago
Viet, So sorry to see you have lost a loved one.
The kiss of Death
bittersweet.
The curling vines
of life
and love
twining
still green
in memories eye.
8 Years Ago
Good morning Karen. Thanks. Have a restful day.
The Beauty of Life
if
there is
no hope
no dream
no expectation
we would drown ourselves
deep
down
into a sea of sufferings
if we always think of our last day on earth
we wouldn’t be able to enjoy any second of our lives
isn’t it amazing
that
we all
expect the better
hope for the best
dream of the impossible
and forget the inevitable
Thao Chuong
2015-06-12
8 Years Ago
A Reflection Question For Myself
(probably for someone else)
when
I’m still kicking alive
every emotion in my heart
from compassion to hatred
is
really
a big deal
every thought in my mind
from contemplation to inattentiveness
is
absolutely
a serious matter
everything in my body
from top of the toes to the end of the hair
is
completely precious
in
no doubt
within the next instant
when I’m no longer kicking alive
whether the problem is massive or tiny
it’ll
go
away
eventually, nothing does matter
any more
why do I not
stop worrying
sit back
relax
and enjoy this moment
while I’m still kicking alive?
Thao Chuong
2015-06-12
8 Years Ago
Life
Nothing more certain than
when you are born you will die
It is what you do in between
with every second that counts
If you learn to always be grateful
Don't covet what others have
What they do is not your business
Unless it directly affrects you
Be happy pass on those smiles
Learn to walk in others shoes
open your eyes to actually see
Learn to feel and understand
Do not become an obstacle
And stand in others way
Instead hold out a hand
and see if you can help
you will not have an embittered heart
you will see people for what and who
they really are good and bad
Be Grrateful and be happy
JEM 130615
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much for sharing your poem and giving happy pill. I appreciate your poetic thought. Have a nice day, Jane
Sundry thought of the day
Good or Bad
the weather always is as is
whether
it’s
rainy
sunny
snowy
windy
stormy
but
to some humans it’s good
to others it’s bad
depending on what they expect
how the day would be
to make ‘em
happy
I
believe
people keep changing like weather
humans behave in the way
that fits them most
and act accordingly on whichever serves them well
to me
only people are good
whenever they make me pleased and meet my own benefit
otherwise
they could be
as bad as the weather I hate
oh no
absolutely not
I could do nothing about the climate and about the other people's behaviors
but
I can control my judgmental mind and my emotional heart
to leisurely accept
the day as is
in its own
way
Thao Chuong
2015-06-13
8 Years Ago
The Forecast
The weather forecast said rain...
all day... and only 14 degrees
The rain stayed with us until 10...
and the temperature rose to 19
The sun peeked out only briefly
then disappeared behind a bank
We worked in the garden the rest of the day
Before we knew the day had gone away
I love the rain in a dry hot climate
You smell it in the air before it hits
the first few drops on the ground
raises the dust in a cloud
Soon a million drops hit the earth
You stand there drenched and cooled
Before you know it the ground is dry
as are you and your clothes
Here is a different story
you stay out of the rain
It wets you through
and chills you to the bone
JEM 130615
8 Years Ago
I like your Weather Forecast, Jane.
Here is my thought about the weatherman
The Weather Forecast
according to the weather network
today is cloudy with sunny periods
not
too hot
not too cold
the perfect time
to work in the garden
or to take a long walk with my dog
as
usual
it unexpectedly pours down and makes me soaked like a wet blanket
a couple days ago
it
was
forecast
mainly rainy on that day
in
addition
the sky also fooled me
it looked practically too gloomy
as if it was about to rain cats and dogs
I had to wear a raincoat
when rowing on the lake for a couple of hours
yet
I couldn’t catch a tiny drop of water
falling down from heavily black clouds
to quench my thirst
the weather forecast is likely a myth
it's
why
between
a meteorologist
and a mythologist
I trust neither of them
Thao Chuong
2015-06-13
8 Years Ago
The Past – My Reminder
no
way back
what’ve been done
the past has gone completely
nothing I could do about it
but
for myself
it could be the best reminder
for my living instant
and for my next steps
I often looked back
not
to regret
for what I did
but
to see
how well I’ve done so far
and what can be learned from my past mistakes
I often looked back
neither to inflate my big ego
nor lullaby my sleep on what I’ve achieved
but
to remind myself
I can try the best to improve myself
I often looked back
not
to forget
the loved ones
who are no longer by my side
and
to refresh my memory of those joyful times
that I’ve had with them
I also look back
to remind myself
how lucky I am to have another extra day to enjoy
Thao Chuong
2015-06-14
8 Years Ago
Sadness
why do the good die young
or so it seems
Just starting out again in life
New girl soon to be wife
New roof over their heads
renovating
Planting veg in the garden
Going green and organic
Great jobs
Chilled out beautiful people
Looking to the future and
a happy life
Still in his forties
Working out in the gym
At least like your friend
It was over and done
in a heart beat
His dad too died young
Is it in the genes?
Will miss your smile
JEM 150615
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane. Have a great day.
Inside a Square Box
1-
I often focus too much
on
the living process
how I should do
where I must go
whom I would be with
which path I’d better take
when’s the good time
what’s the best move
and
so on...
2-
I also tend to worry a lot
about
the outcome
what would happen
it’ll be good
or
it’ll be bad
in
case
I success
what I’m going to get
how much I could gain
if
I fail
what I’m going to lose
how I would cope with it
3-
could it be possible
that I take my routine thought out of the square box
and
free myself
as water flows on a river
Thao Chuong
2015-06-15
8 Years Ago
My sundry thought of the day
Would You Mind Accepting My Invitation?
what else is more precious
than
inner peace
and happiness?
I
remind
myself
to go slow with the flow of nature
and with my own rhythms
yet
I’d like
to tango
with other humans
would you mind taking your easy breaths?
together
we can make our days better
Thao Chuong
2015-06-16
8 Years Ago
I spend my days
in the deep green
haze of summer.
Languidly lazing
as life rolls along.
Letting go,
drifting slowly
into the humid.
The grand dreams
of my youth
now need more energy
than I have left to offer.
Karen Newell
6/16/15
8 Years Ago
Love your poem Karen - so true as you get older...unfortunately lol. Viet I think you are too hard on yourself :-) Stop analysing and enjoy life :-)
People will always disappoint you. But don't let it get you down. p.s. invitation accepted
8 Years Ago
Thank you Jane :) my life is quite lazy right now :))
Viet
Time rolls along.
All of the dreams
once so vivid
somehow seem
meaningless
in the face
of a loss.
A ship rudderless,
drifting,
far from shore.
Everyday normality
steeped
in a new direction.
Where is the sweet
sense of ordinary life
and our reliance upon it,
like a lifeboat
bringing us back
to our hearts' home.
Karen Newell
6/17/15
8 Years Ago
Maze
Lost in the labyrinth
of life
where no bread crumb trail
of words
can lead the way out.
Perhaps
the green
upon green of Earth,
the bluest sky,
and the darkest night
will soothe the Soul.
Perhaps
then you will see
the Sun again
to find your way
home.
Karen Newell
6/17/15
8 Years Ago
Thank you Jane and Karen for your dialogues
An echo to Karen's Time Rolls Along
Time’s Psychologically Perceptive
now and then
time’s
frozen
like ice in the arctic
or
motionless
like a corpse inside a coffin
especially,
when
having nothing to do
or
awaiting her for a date
or
waiting for
either the unknown to come
or the suffering to have gone away
on
occasion
time’s flying
like an arrow
piercing through a heart
and leaving a big hole
yet
it is too fast to instantly feel the pain
until
after it has passed beyond the infinite horizon
so
often
time’s soaring
like an alien saucer breaking the light barrier
when
falling in love
feeling happy…
(off the record
and
having sex
in many rounds
for a couple of hours
nonetheless, she still complains it’s too quick –too little)
time
is perceptively psychological
no watch, no clock, no scientific device
which can be used
to measure
time
Thao Chuong
2015-06-17
8 Years Ago
“Viet I think you are too hard on yourself :-) Stop analysing and enjoy life :-)
People will always disappoint you. But don't let it get you down.” By Jane McGowen
A humorous echo to Jane’s thought
The Talker and the Doer
you’ve reminded me to
forget all thoughts
stop analyzing
and enjoy
life
quite clear
your patience has been lost
as
I’ve been acting like a guy
who
sits with his lover in his own room
and do nothing
but keeps talking
while his lover awaits his real actions
such
as
holding her cold hand
kissing her juicy lips
fondling her firm breasts
and stroking further down
in between
to
explore
her most alluring secrete
I’ve kept throwin’ too much philosophical stuff at your face
and shuff’in many nonsense words
into your ears
that
you dun wanna hear
yeah, I think you’re right
however
I’d rather be a guilty talker
than
a non-blamable doer
who is the unknown author for many pregnancies throughout the neighbourhood
Thao Chuong
2015-06-18
8 Years Ago
Simple piece of advice in which I believe...
"If you are too busy to laugh you are too busy."
---------------
~ Bill
~ US Pictures .com
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing Bill. It is nice to visit your site, You have awesome photos.
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8 Years Ago
My thoughts are with the victims of the bible study group in Charleston.
We are not safe from evil in our homes, on our streets, in our theaters, in our malls, in our schools, in our churches, synagogues, or mosques.
It confounds my mind and saddens my heart as to how we got here and where we're going.
A man much wiser than myself a long time ago said "No problem can withstand the assault of continuous thinking." I do believe that.
Good night my friend and peace to you.
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
8 Years Ago
Thanks Bill. My heart is with the victims of this senseless massacre. Peace to you too, my friend.
The Hate Crime
(In memory of all victims of the recent Charleston church massacre)
it
was
neither
a random shooting of a psycho
violently spraying an automatic rifle at the crowd
to take some lives with him
before committing
suicide
nor
an insane act of a desperate man
killing someone
while
under influence of alcohol or drugs
he had planted and cultivated hatred
on the vast prairie
of
his dark mind and his venomous heart
and waited
‘til it had grown big enough and ready for harvest
to carry out his plan
he came to a church in Charleston
he selected his hate target
prayed with those members of the Bible study group
then
pulled the trigger from his handgun and committed the massacre
of killing nine prayers
in cold blood
during
the shooting
he accused his victims:
“you rape our women, and you’re taking over our country.
And you have to go”
he also claimed earlier
he was there “to shoot black people”
on this very sad day
let’s hope
the senseless act of this lone guy wouldn’t divide us further
regardless
the difference in colors of our skins
Thao Chuong
2015-06-18
8 Years Ago
My sundry thought generated by Bill Tomsa's recent post.
Americans' Own Shadow – Their Psychologically Self-injected Fear
Americans are more likely
to be crushed to death in a car accident
than
to be shot by a psycho of any type
at a public place
regardless,
nonsense deaths by some gunmen
her states, her cities, her streets, her utility facilities
her shopping malls, her schools, her theaters
her churches, her synagogues, her mosques
and especially her citizens’ homes
are very
safe
and
despite of her history
through which she has been constantly at wars with other foreign countries
her soil has never been blasted by airplanes
nor
blown up by missiles, mortars, artilleries, and other heavy weapons
USA is the most fortified nation on the planet earth
nevertheless
quite a number of Americans have been increasingly losing trust in the security of their homeland
and
somewhat become too sensitively fearful
of
being attacked by terrorists
or
being raped
robbed
killed
right on their soil of birth
I wonder
whether
the American people could
ever
get rid of their own shadow – the psychologically self-injected fear
and enjoy their peaceful lives in the most secured nation in the world?
Thao Chuong
2015-06-19
8 Years Ago
Also in reference to my recent post on the bible study massacre, a ray of hope.
This is from Charles Swindoll on the subject of attitude:
"Attitude is more important than the past, than education, than money, than circumstances, than what other people will think or say or do.
It is more important than appearance, giftedness or skill.
It will make or break a company, a church, a home."
It is a sign of great hope, IMO, that the attitude of those who lost loved ones to this act of pure evil by an evil person, will not be turned from positive to negative.
Bill Tomsa
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: Thank for sharing your thought. I am in line with your point of view in your PM.
@ Bill. Thanks for sharing Charles Swindoll's smart quote on the subject of attitude. Your feedback is always welcomed.
I got your point which has reinforced my thought. I think that it is quite normal that people often have different perspective on an issue. Their perceptions depend very much on their cultural, educational, social, political, and religious background -and also on their emotion at the time of the event.
Have a good night.
8 Years Ago
The Predator and His Victims
as
a predator with supreme power
over
his victims
he has never experienced severe pains
which
he has badly inflicted on those sufferers of his
it’s impossible
for
him
to comprehend the simple reason
why
his victims cry
yet
when
something
is very minor
but out of his controlling hands
it often makes him suffer a great deal
he spontaneously moans
as
if
the world were collapsed
the sky were fallen down
and his life were totally shattered
he
thinks
it is really a big deal
that has been happening to him
he questions
why the hell
does a church bell only toll
for his victims
but
not for
his own sufferings
Thao Chuong
2015-06-21
8 Years Ago
Description: "THE HUNTERS," 1987, Oil on Canvas, 68 in. x 80 inches...
Arrogance stands aloof to the crime it inflicts. Goons of destruction rape the natural order, pulsating forward to the ultimate trophy. This linen canvas is painted with thick paint, smeared and manipulated mostly with knife. Human faces are modeled with the greatest emphasis, incisions of paint capturing their rugged demeanor. The landscape behind is but a baron opacity of color, resting below an uncaring sky, devoid of life, an unending run of nothingness
The Hunted Vs. the Hunters
it's just for your humane thought as a human being
of
the inhuman
regularly done by some humans
Which one is more savaged?
Between:
animals in the woods
marking territories
fighting for mates
killing for food
and
purely
acting based on survival instincts
And:
civilized beings from modern cities
with
powerful rifles in their hands
and a clear intention to kill in their calculative minds
coming to the wild
hunting for trophies
or
just
for fun
in
any case
the complaint about the violation of animals' well-being is invalid
neither
a judge
nor a jury is needed
no trial is required
as
the verdict has been already decided
and the death sentence must be promptly carried out
humans always play by their own rules
the laws of the jungle
it sounds very odd
that the predators also blame their victims
for inflicting physical pain on their weak bodies
when being attacked during hunting trips
by powerful animals
in the wild
such as
cougars
tigers
bears
lions
isn’t it ironic
those powerful hunters are habitually in great fear of being attacked
by hopeless and desperate acts
of self-defense
from
the hunted
Thao Chuong
2015-06-21
8 Years Ago
To Vivianne:
My thought of the night
Welcome back to the troublesome land of art - and the chaotic world of faa (lol).
The Easy Flow
let
it be
what it is
let it go with its own flow
let your breaths go easy in your chest
keep your nose above murky water
keep your mood
as happy as
you
could
make your day as comfy as
you'd like
it to
be
Thao Chuong
2015-06-22
8 Years Ago
Description: "TUMBLING DICE," 2005, Oil on Canvas, 62.5 in. X 42.5 inches.
*Tumbling Dice, like fallen dominoes, is just an expression, is it not? Figures, half-hidden, topple over in symmetrical order from top to bottom. Only the large figure in the foreground, seen from bust up, stands upright, but its appearance may be part translucent, revealing hints of background pink in varying areas. Colors are generally flat, expressed loosely through broad areas with wide brush. Figures seem set in dream, quietly adrift in unconscious motion.
The Tumbling Dice
no gift
no party
no dinner
no music
no internet
TV was turned off
so was the laptop
no communication with the outside world
not much left for him
to
enjoy
on this special day
scattered
on the messy floor
inside the living room
dirty clothes
carton boxes
hard liquor bottles
and empty beer cans
no chasing
no running
no fight for toys
no laughs
no cries
the house was utterly quiet
without his noisy children around
he
felt lonesome
with emptiness occupying his heart
and a pointless sense taking over his mind
somewhat
intoxicated
he dropped his back on the cold hardwood floor
looked at the ceiling above
high
and blank
he hysterically laughed then sobbed
this was his first Father’s Day alone
since
she took his four little kids away
Thao Chuong
2015-06-22
8 Years Ago
In response to the Hunted vs the Hunters
As she shielded her young
The queen of the savannah
Raised her trunk
Her great white tusks
glinting in the light
A single shot rings clear
Those magnificent tusks
Turn crimson
as she falls to her knees
Whose soul has turned black
and into stone
as he hacks away trying
to rip out the majesty and might
whilst the calf stands and watches
his mother defiled
only to starve later and die
Why do we turn our backs and do nothing?
JEM 230615
8 Years Ago
SQUARE PEG
A square peg in a round hole
Has to be a chameleon
No matter how much you twist and turn
You never quite fit
So to ensure that no one notices you are different
you learn to blend
As long as you keep those thoughts in your head
you nod and agree
Your colours will change and adapt seamlessly
whilst inside you
You are screaming the truth and what's important
whilst you nod and agree
JEM 230615
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your poetry. Have a nice day.
Here is my thought generated by your poem Square Peg
Square Peg and Round Hole
the difference is so immense
it’s
likely
a square peg could never fit into a round hole
regardless
endless trials of twists and turns
impossible
to make them agree with each other
I’d rather accept the reality
by leaving their own identities
exactly the way
they’re
I’d use square pegs to secure my tent
and the round hole
for my exotic joy
at
night
Thao Chuong
2015-06-23
8 Years Ago
Description: FAMILY UPHEAVAL / END RESULT, 2000, oil on canvas, 70 in. x 50 inches.
*****When the soul departs, the home sinks, leaving those who are left to stand in between, pondering the "why," the "how," and the "what if." Colors, here, drip and overlay, melt and bleed, rhythmically merging over a green field as a natural flow of things.
Paints finally dry. Images and scenes are set in time. Art-making imitates the natural order.
The Cold War
no historian would waste time to find out
when
how
why
and who started this war
when they first met each other
the chemical reaction was increasingly heated
blazingly burnt their hearts
and steadily glued them together
like
Adam and Eve
they enjoyed their best loving time together
on the paradise of love
probably
only God would know
why
they decided to change their happy status quo
by tying the knot
so
soon
it was a fatal mistake
from poor judgement of both sides
their honeymoon was gradually faded
as a colourful piece of cloth hanging too long under the bright sun
the taste of love turned
from sweet to sour
then from sour
to bitter
started
by
hot battles of blaming words
then it was cooled down into a combat of dead silence
unlike
the past Cold War
between the communists’ block run by Soviet Union and Red China
and the capitalists’ ally led by the Americans
when it was over
USA
has become
a big conqueror
the only superpower on earth
when their cold war in marriage was officially ended
unfortunately
no
winner
only two badly wounded losers
Thao Chuong
2015-06-23
8 Years Ago
Hey,
It's nice getting in touch with you. Here's my email address Eva.kuol@hotmail.com. Please contact me directly.i will send you my
pictures. beside there is something very important i will like to tell you when
you contact me on my email address here
i will respond to you.waiting to hear from you.
Eva
8 Years Ago
Had to pop by
Just to say Hi
Get rid of the spammer
Like a sledge hammer
Shove her down the list
Goodbye she'll be kissed
B-)
8 Years Ago
Hee.. Jane. Don't destroy her beauty with your sledgehammer. Be nice to her, she'll send you her naked pictures plus her love (lol)!
The Spammer
HE always acts as a sexy lady
and
lures
every man
to contact ‘er directly
SHe promises
if you would email ‘er
SHe’ll send you erotic photos of someone else’s
in
addition
SHe’ll offer more than you could take
tons of distant love
and sex
or a lot of dough
how nice SHe is
to spend ‘er time to give you the goodies
very
rare
to get such nice offer from a man
where are those male spammers?
are they
in jail?
drunk?
sleeping?
having sex?
or already passed away?
why the heck
only
female
spammers have flooded the world wide web
what do they gain in their endless attempts
which stupid fish would bite such a visible bait?
Thao Chuong
2015-06-25
8 Years Ago
Her Dream on a Hot Day
it’s dry and sizzling
whenever
wind blows
dehydrated leaves inside thirsty trees rattle
the same sound
of
endless sand
beating on shifting dunes
inside
a hammock
under full shade
between the two bushy trees
she is dreaming of cool breeze on the ocean
her chest full of fresh air
her hair blown back and flapped as a flag
the mast of her sailboat fully stretched
around
her
the immense sea
under
her
deep water
above
her
infinite sky
in
her dream
she is fully surrounded by the aqua blue
Thao Chuong
2015-06-26
8 Years Ago
Ha Viet - you may enjoy the naked photos and endless email sex, but I am not of the same sex persuasion :-) I shall forward you the ones I receive.
With regard to your latest poem......I wish I were there :-) Reminds me of something I wrote for my nephew when he had a choice of doing something big......
What’s that all about then ?
5.30 the alarm goes and the late night shows
Bags beneath the eyes, can I tell more lies?
Its Monday morning and I wanna stay snoring
Gotta go to work Ben – Whats that all about then?
(Whats that all about then?……..)
I want sunny days and an open road
Wind in my hair and the sun on my face
I want white sands and the sound of the waves
Living my life at a lot slower pace
(do what I want to do..)
7.00 Hit the school run traffic – makes me sick
Got indigestion, from the feeding station
Sounding the horn, everyday – another one born
Gotta go to work Ben – Whats that all about then?
(Whats that all about then?……..)
I want to smell the fresh rain on the dry ground
And hear the pizzicato on the tin roof
I want to laze on a boat and soak up the sun
Get the fishing rod ‘n show ‘em how its done
(do what I want to do..)
Sitting in front of a box, this job really sucks
Sitting all day, there ain’t enough pay
Taking the same old crap, really ain’t all that
Gotta go to work Ben – Whats that all about then?
(Whats that all about then?……..)
I want to do all the things that I want to do
Do all the things that I dreamt about
I want to travel the world, don’t wanna stay curled
Get a job that you enjoy, you gotta make it happen boy
(do what I want to do..)
(You gotta make it happen boy)
(Whats that all about then, you gotta make it happen boy)
JEM 170503
8 Years Ago
Coup de foudre
on a rural path
you leisurely walked
morning wind blew
your long sleeve dress
‘n stream of your hair
flapped in the air
from a distance
you looked like a phoenix
soared over the breeze
as in a surreal dream
when I approached
I could see
bright sunlight
on your pretty face
cloudless sky
in your shiny eyes
as I walked by
you smiled
my heart sunk
my mind drunk
my time frozen
my world stopped
you passed me
I turned my head
looked at your back
hoping you turned around
but you kept walking straight
‘til you vanished
behind a bush
at the sharp curve
I stood there
utterly confused
and felt as if
I totally lost
myself
Thao Chuong
2015-06-29
8 Years Ago
The Very Basis
I’m too exhausted to stand on my feet
and
so worn-out
that I could use some toothpicks to hold my eyelashes from shutting down
what
I do need
is a tiny place to rest my back
nothing
is
more essential
than a quick nap right now
money
glory
love
sex
and everything else
you can have them all
just
leave
me the basis
it’s purely a short break!
Thao Chuong
2015-07-01
8 Years Ago
O' Canada
(My thought on Canada Day)
O’ Canada
the paradise on earth
more
realistic
than any God’s heaven afterlife
as we could enjoy her fully
while we’re still alive
O’ Canada
her vast land
stretches
from the East coast to the West coast
from the longest border in the world sharing with the United States in the South
to the Arctic in the North
we
could taste
her lobsters boiled with Atlantic salt water
her sweet maple syrups
her beef ribs barbecued on natural gas
her Pacific salmons smoked with cedar wood
O’ Canada
the land of First Nations
‘n home of immigrants
the only country in the world
where multiculturalism is protected by laws
instead
of
being burned in a meltin’ pot
our different cultural heritages are fully preserved
we
could enjoy
the beauty of diversity
from many flowers in one colourful but unique garden
O’ Canada
the land of pacifists
she has been well-loved
by
many peoples around the world
her flag of a red maple on white ground
could be found on the backpacks
of many American tourists’
overseas
O’ Canada
how lucky and happy for you and me
to
be
her citizens
Thao Chuong
2015-07-01
8 Years Ago
The Essential of a Comma
my life
without her love,
is
only
piece of junk
my life
without her,
love is only a piece of junk
without
a comma
at the right spot
no one would ever know
between my life and love which one is a piece of junk?
anyway
without her
everything is just a piece of junk
Thao Chuong
2015-07-02
8 Years Ago
My sundry thought of the day
The Essential of a Comma
my life
without her love,
is
only
piece of junk
my life
without her,
love is only a piece of junk
without
a comma
at the right spot
no one would ever know
between my life and love which one is a piece of junk?
anyway
without her
and without her love
my life is a piece of junk
Thao Chuong
2015-07-02
8 Years Ago
Joke for the Day
if you fart
each time people talk about you at your back
for
sure
no air compressor,
regardless how big it is,
would be able to provide enough air intake
into your stomach
for that blow
job
just
laugh,
then ignore
and let them fart from their mouths, until they run out of their own air
why bother?
Poe Ed
2015-07-02
8 Years Ago
A lot depends upon your upbringing and those around you as to how long it takes you to realise, if ever, that nothing is black or white. Everything is (in the absence of colour) grey. Unfortunately, we seem to live in times where everyone, especially the media, is obsessed with trying to classify everything in a black or white fashion. “It is either (a) or it is (b). Which is it”? The truth is that nothing is either (a) or (b); it is always somewhere in the middle.
more here
.
http://voice-of-reason.hubpages.com/hub/Nothing...
8 Years Ago
Between Black ‘n White
there is always a tiny seed of yin
in the core of
yang
‘n
a little seed of yang
in the heart of
yin
everything seems relative
endless things could be found
neither in black
nor in white
among zillions shades of gray
what seems wrong
to you
now
could be right
in the very near future
anyhow
why
not go
beyond blacks, whites, and grays
for
the eyes to see,
and the mind to enjoy,
the beauty of colourful rainbows at every corner of the world
Thao Chuong
2015-07-03
8 Years Ago
The Poet and His Commas
the poet was furious at his wife’s criticism about his writing
he raised his eyebrows and said:
“why care about commas
I am not in coma
no
big deal
gime a break, will you?
it’s poetry
in
my
own
creative way
I can break all grammatical rules of any language
stop giving me the hard time to make my good day better”
she said nothing
in
defense,
just simply took a piece of paper,
and wrote:
“the poet said his wife is the son of a bitch”
he
read,
laughed out loud,
and nicely talked to her
“honey,
what you wrote may reflect how you’re feeling right now
but, don’t be hard on yourself ”.
she smiled and added two commas to the sentence
“the poet, said his wife, is the son of a bitch”
then
gently told him
“now
with the commas,
you know clearly,
who is the son of a bitch”
she had a very valid point
yet.
she tends to forget
so often
honest criticism hurts big ego of creative people and drives their mind into their own hell
Thao Chuong
2015-07-03
8 Years Ago
Who Knows me
Who am I
I keep my inner thoughts
They stay there buried
I live in this world
I work all day
I live in a house
I work come evening
When I lay in my bed
My thoughts run wild
I soar I fly
To where I want
For the briefest of moments
I am undone, laid bare
An empty beach
I am warm and free
I feel the warmth beneath my feet
I hear the sound of the rolling waves
I see the sun rise from the horizon
A brand new day is born
I am dancing in the wind.....
JEM 040715
8 Years Ago
Hi Jane. Thank you for dancing in the wind with me (lol). Your dialogue is very much appreciated as you make me feel that I don’t talk to myself alone on this thread. Enjoy the weekend
8 Years Ago
Dance on the Land of Poetry
( To Jane McGowan )
I don’t know
how you look like
slim or bulky?
young or old?
short or tall?
or whatever?
however
it don’t really matter
why should I care about your physical appearance
as
somewhat
I’ve already known
who
you are
by catching your thoughts from what you wrote
and
by sensing your heartbeats through the unique rhythms of your writings
no need
to meet you
in person
to know
who you are
as
you know
we both look at the same sun
we both watch the same moon
we both walk under the same sky
we both live on the same earth
especially
we both dance on the land of poetry
it is enough
for you and me
to laugh
or cry
together
in words
don’t you think?
Thao Chuong
2015-07-04
8 Years Ago
Thought of the Day
The Permanent Obsession of a Sexist
all what
a sexist
always sees
everyday
everywhere
is but
the opposite sex
the mind o’ a sexist
is permanently
occupied by
nothing
but
his or her
own sexual organ
a sexist often launches wars against his/her opposite sex
under
the flag of
self-defence
for his/her own gender
too bad
no exit
for
any sexist
so long as
both women and men
are still in existence
in this charming world
for
the love
that
pulls them
to each other
and glues them
into one entity
Poe Ed
2015-07-04
8 Years Ago
A Hot Day On Langford Lake
sizzling day
glazing sun
sandy beach
Langford lake
adults and kids
sardine-packed
some girls
pretty faces
sharp curves
sexy bodies
nearly naked
high breasts
small waists
big bums
long legs
fully
exposed
some guys
hungry eyes
thirsty minds
wild imagination
hung around
for big catch
in cool and fresh water
full of
noodles
boats
boards
different types
of floating devices
and human heads
but
no fish
no birds
talking
laughing
calling
shouting
unruly
noisy
raucous
boisterous
a hot day
on Langford Lake
too much heat
not from the sun
but from over-populated
human race
Thao Chuong
2015-07-05
8 Years Ago
Eyes WIDE Open
to Viet...enjoy your weekend too
Maybe its because we have seen things
Maybe its because we have experienced things
We walk with our eyes wide open
We take in
We digest
We compute
we realise
We see
Too many people walk with eyes closed
They see no consequence
To their life on earth
What they cause
By their want
Their selfishness
Their greed
Yes we have to live
But live with your eyes WIDE Open
Act on what you see
What you take in
what you digest
what you compute
What you realise
What you see.
JEM 050715
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jane. I welcome all artists and poets for sharing the thought on this thread.
Thank you for sharing your poetry which reflect your extensive experience and knowledge about the peoples of different countries and cultures. I believe that it come from your extensive travels around the world. .
Have a peaceful day to everyone
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day
(generated by Jane MacGowan’s Poem Eyes WIDE Opened)
Should I Believe In What I See With My Eyes Wide-opened
it’s quite logic
I must have my eyes wide-opened
to
see
things around me clearly
unfortunately
so
often
my blind mind fools me
and makes me believe in the opposite
of
what seen
by my naked eyes
clearly
I must provide my narrow mind with a wider scope of perception
about many different things
in the immense world
outside
of
my tiny den
silly me!
I often strongly believe in what I’ve seen from my naked eyes
and
keep
telling everyone
what has been really going on in the infinite universe
Thao Chuong
2015-07-05
8 Years Ago
The Lost Moment
my heartbeats
in fast rates
high pressure
in my blood
frozen ice
in my mind
choked inside
my dry throat
endless words
of love
for you
no way
to spit any single word out
also
it would be sour and bitter
to swallow them back into my acidic stomach
in your world
I’m lost
I wish
you would take my silence
better than millions of words
out of my arid mouth
anyhow
without you
what would my world be?
Thao Chuong
2015-07-05
8 Years Ago
David...shame on you :-P
Viet...
Today I will be free
If only for a short while
Commas are important
But only if you need them to be
Picture me as you will
It matters not to me
Have a lovely day all
As terminology goes....brb.
xxx
8 Years Ago
Welcome David and Jane and all types of people:tall - short, left - right, dull - bright, silly - smart, easy - stubborn, narrow-minded - liberal...etc.
Description: Leonardo da Vinci -Italian (1452 - 1519) David Bridburg -American (1963 - present) . A statement about mankind, science, and politics using Leonardo da Vinci's The Vitruvian Man.
Global Warming
climate change
global warming
or
regardless
whatever politically correct terminology
you prefer to call it
in
its nature
it means the same
same damn
thing
extreme changes
in the recent weathers
either
too hot
too dry
or
too cold
too wet
we,
mankind ain’t so kind in our blame game
of
pointing our fingers
to the left
to the right
to many different directions
for
all the shits
which we’ve deposited by ourselves
every
single day
right on our own habitat
modern humans have had no fear of, and also have never cared for,
the harsh reactions
from the mother
nature
we’ve kept marching forward – as a race
regardless
the warning light has turned
from yellow
to orange
then red
sooner or later
we will have our vehicle of humanity crashed
at a steel wall
by
the end
of a cul de sac
any hope left for next generations of human race?
Thao Chuong
2015-07-05
8 Years Ago
I was thinking about a thought to share, and growing older comes to mind.
I remember being young and how time dragged by, it may be because you are always anticipating an event or a new milestone. A holiday, birthday,drivers license,adulthood. Always something just over the horizon you can't wait to see.
As you get older you notice that each year goes by faster than the last.
Especially after your children leave the nest. I'm still dumbfounded by the how fast my kids went from diapers to having kids of their own.
The part about aging that's the worse is losing the people you love the most.
I used to see a grumpy grouchy old person and thought they had always been that way, and some probably were, but as I think about it now I think some of that is a deep sadness and melancholy. A bitterness that they don't mean to show. Some of the gloss and shine is gone from the fairy tail they were told as a child.
After losing the people you love, you keep moving forward, but there is less pep in your step, less enthusiasm, less to feel happy about. You can still feel happiness but those times become fewer and farther in between. I'm a 50 yr old man who at times feels like he is thirty, and at times like Methuselahs grandfather. I've lost all my grandparents and my father a year ago. You don't get over it ever. I'm not whining I know I have been blessed unlike a lot of people in the world. I don't really mind growing older,but the losses along the way I will never get used to, the pain never fades no matter how many times it happens. I tell my family and friends I love them whenever I see or talk to them. You never know if there will be a next time.
Ok. I'm done. Lets sell some art!!!
8 Years Ago
Larry---Excellent point. You must have been reading my mind in recent years, since I share the same sentiment. Here's what I once wrote in a blog, and then entered it in my book, Agnello by Agnello: Striking the Heart of an Artist's Confessions (Sorry if it is too long)...
…Where Is That Little Girl...
Can’t help but feel a little sentimental, even lonely, right now, as each day passes and time keeps slipping away. My daughter Victoria, away at college, texted me and informed me of a very touching song about a dad and his daughter. As she stressed, “It’s the cutest father/daughter song ever written…” She urged me to listen to it and focus on its relevance to, at this point, her hypothetical future wedding. She urged with warmth and an upbeat charge, as only she knows how.
So I tuned in to “I Loved Her First,” by Heartland, a sort of country-flavor song based in good old fashioned sentimentality about a dad’s release of his daughter’s hand to her groom on her wedding day. The song, as the title suggests, is a touching testament to a father’s look-back in time—retreating, just for the moment, to the fond memories of his daughter—from her infancy, to the growing child, to teenage development, and finally to her wedding day, a quick snapshot of time remembered with a seriousness of purpose that is unique to fathers. Dad indeed loved her first. The song speaks of happiness and encouragement, as the daughter is effectively celebrated for her move to a new level in life. But the dad, too, is to be celebrated, saluted for his years of devotion to his daughter’s well-being, a seasoned care that could not waver, even under the most difficult of times. That the song is cloaked with a touch of melancholy is not so surprising. The dad, after all, reconciles before him what is only inevitable, a bittersweet reminder that his little girl, well, she just doesn’t need him the same way anymore.
I began to trace back my own steps in time, and realized just how short the passage is—it seems like just yesterday that we went from diapers, to book-reading and story-telling, to playing sports and games together, to watching her develop, and to witnessing finally her move from me to her friends and boyfriends. She is 18 now, and I began to cringe; could it really be 18 years? What dad hasn’t said those words as he watches the reality that his children are no longer children? The days of serving as role model and entertainment-master are gone; I no longer need to hold her hand for the same reason. In the process, a cold reality sets in: children evolve, dads age. As time marches on, the dad is more relegated to the sidelines, a bystander on the outside looking-in, thereby locked into sudden aloneness.
An ironic twist of life is harbored: once elated while bouncing my baby girl on my knee, by holding her hand while walking with her for her first day of school, and by teaching her to throw a softball or to hold a tennis racquet, I am now deflated by the loss of that same little girl. Maybe somewhere in the end there is a meaning to all this. Maybe it is found in looking forward and not behind me. Maybe, just maybe, I will believe that someday.
Maybe that song was written for me.
8 Years Ago
Tick Tock
Time marches on
in a ruthless goose step.
Relentlessly crushing
our emotional moments underfoot.
Leaving poignant memories
in the wake of its eternal
forward stride.
Karen Newell
7/6/15
8 Years Ago
Great story Kenneth.
Time does march on Karen.
I believe that's one reason among many I paint. My legacy, my children and my art. It's a sad thing that recently I acquired several paintings by my great aunt Goldie. She lived a long life and painting was one of her hobbies. She lived far away and I rarely saw her. I didn't really know her at all. When my grandfather passes she was at the visitation and funeral, he was her little brother. I could tell she was devastated. She was gone a year or two later. After my grandparents both were gone my mother and aunts went through a storage shed full of photos I had never seen. There was also several wonderful framed paintings by aunt Goldie. No one wanted them. My family isn't in to art, so since I paint they asked if I wanted them. I have a stock pile of my own work and didn't really have the room, but they are mine anyway. I don't hang my own work in my studio, but aunt Goldie's does. I want to sell all my pieces before I go, so they hopefully don't sit in a shed somewhere unloved and unwanted.
8 Years Ago
Larry, Kenneth, Kasren, and Juergen, Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts, your dialogue, your poem. Have a good night.
Larry Lamb: "The part about aging that's the worse is losing the people you love the most." -. Your sharp words hit right at the core of the issue. Here is my response to your thought
Kenneth: I like your writing as well as your art.
He –Who Stays
he
who stays
after every farewell
always copes with loneliness and sorrow
from the feeling of being left behind
or deserted
by
the one
who leaves
not his own death
is
what
he’s afraid of
but
the unbearable suffering from the mourning grief
each time one of his loved ones passed away
he sees no point to live alone
after
everyone
whom he knows or loves
has gone away
one by one
it’s why
he has never dreamed
of
being immortal
Thao Chuong
2015-07-06
8 Years Ago
Another thought generated by McGowan’s poem Eyes WIDE Open
Of humans and Wildlife
1- From Humanity’s Perspective
oh my dear
my deer
turn around
look at me
by your innocent eyes
I am going to shoot you
right at your own home
while I am in the wild
but
please don’t’ be so fearful of me
I can assure you
there’s no harm
you feel no pain
by the way
I’m a photographer
shooting for art
not a brutal hunter
killing for meat
as soon as
I get some good shots
I’ll leave you
and your loved ones
alone
2- From the Wildlife’s Perspective
oh my..
my dear human
whether
you're a photographer or a hunter
what
would you react?
if I tiptoe into your own bedroom
to take photos of you
while you’re
having sex with your spouse
or doing self-satisfaction from masturbation
you see!
humans built houses
in the wild
yet
each time
our hungry deer come to your yard at night
and munch some of your roses and vegetables
you’re so furiously mad that you erect laws
and carry out sophisticated plans to cull all deer or any other wildlife
that you perceive
as a threatening issue
to your modern habitat
Thao Chuong
2015-07-06
8 Years Ago
Her Own Climate Change
she has a high fever
her body temperature keeps rising
an increasingly burning sensation is torching inside
thousands of fire bugs crawl under her skin
and try to find
their way
out
she
knows for sure
thru her own experience of recent years
via extreme changes in her living environment
her own global warming
on a personal scale
whenever
she is in heat
and urgently in need of his minor cooperation
he is no longer able to response timely to the climate change
practically, he’s useless
like
a man
in the dark
knows not how to turn his light switch on
she wants to hang him dried
while she is using a do-it-yourself kit
and dreaming of a handsome fireman
who
could raise
his water cannon high
sprays it hard and fast
to chill her
off
Thao Chuong
2015-07-07
8 Years Ago
Hi Kenneth! I wonder what was your thought that led you to paint this provoking piece.
Your painting makes me think of those feminists who obsessively want to get rid of all men. I think that those feminists must have bad experience with men in the past -mostly being abused by the ones they trusted and loved such as abusive fathers, brothers, ex-husbands.etc.
8 Years Ago
Viet,
How are you? Nice striking poem about that painting, "Hang-Man and Self-Satisfied." For some reason it gets a lot of attention in views (though, unfortunately, not realized in sales).
Here is my take: First, your poem centers on the gist of the concept. As always, I admire your interpretations, expressed through your own articulate poetic thoughts, of my work; they extend another dimension beyond the artist's own focused thought. As I have stressed in my book, Agnello by Agnello, for art all "story" art to be successful, it is critical that the drama transcends the artist's personal intention to a broader level; a visual art that is cutting-edge must invite varied interpretations, spring-boarding off the artist's specific idea to a higher order of universal meaning. Your poems offer that alternative.
That said, specifically, if I must trace back the germ of thought at the time of the painting's conception, I confess that I was going through a painful divorce circa-2000. The concept of the woman pompously dismissing the man in preference for "self-satisfaction," reducing the man's role--for personal and emotional as well as sexual purposes--to that of an upside, appendage, casted-off as yesterday's rubbish. Your understanding fits the idea on an effective universal level. Good work!
8 Years Ago
@ Ken: You're very articulate in expressing yourself. Thank you very much for sharing your insight about your personal circumstance that let to that daring painting.
@ Dave. How are you feeling now? Have you yet gone out of the labyrinth of your own thinking process?
Here is my thought of the day generated by your two recent posts.
Enjoy a restful day.
Oh Man!
It’s a Roundabout
he thinks
he has gone thousands of miles from the starting point
and doing great in his race
seeing nobody around
he believes
he’s
far ahead from everyone else
he silly expects
he would be the first one reaching the finish line
he’ll get all what he wants
fame
glory
money
beauty
regardless
of his best effort
and how fast he’s been running
no progress has been made
let
alone
the success
he ain’t recognize
that
he’s still jumping at the square one
as
he has gone around
endless rounds
in a roundabout
like
a dog keeps chasing his own tail
Thao Chuong
2015-07-08
8 Years Ago
Greeting Etiquette
(For those whose English is the mother tongue)
“hi, how are you doing?”
this greeting is probably most common in the English language
but
it doesn’t mean much
the speaker often says such and such
for the sake of saying something
to notify you about his existence
or to let you know
he sees you
passing
by
basically
he don’t really want to know
if you’re well
or badly sick and about to be hospitalized
that’s it
no more
no less
as a matter of fact
the odd verbal social etiquette usually confuses peoples from other cultures
as
it makes
them wonder
why native English speakers often ask such a personal question
that has nothing to do with them
and they practically don’t pay any damned care
whether you're alive
or dead
Thao Chuong
2015-07-08
8 Years Ago
Thanks David
The Heart Of the Matter
I feel so lucky
when I rub my eyes every early morning
and
become aware
I still have an another day in life to enjoy
it doesn’t matter much
whether
it’s rainy
it’s snowy
it’s windy
it’s stormy
it’s gloomy
it’s painful
it’s miserable
and
even if
I would find myself
inside a prison cell
or on a hospital bed
I’d rather enjoy my life as is
to live is good enough for me
so long as
I’m alive
I can still retain my hope for better days
I know
for sure
they would come sooner or later
the sunshine
the moonlight
the blue sky
green leaves
blossoms
bird songs
her sweet smiles
and anything else
whatever
I am holding in my own hands
I’m happy to enjoy fully
while I’m still alive
Thao Chuong
2015-07-09
8 Years Ago
Viet!
I just finished my last couple of classes, one of which was a poetry workshop. It made me think of you.
One of the assignments was we all has to post either a word or phrase and then we had to write a poem that contained all of the words/phrases. It was interesting and fun.
8 Years Ago
Hi Roseann. It's nice that you've dropped by and sharing the your poetry workshop. It's amazing how to play with words in poetry. Would you mind sharing with us some poems that you wrote during the workshop. Have a good night. Regards.
8 Years Ago
Description: A political cartoon of the gov. Listening to private phones.
Privacy In the High Tech World
politicians work hard
for more votes
bureaucrats
are so busy
to chat online
no one has time
to hear the people’s problems
it is why
citizens’ complaints
fall into deaf ears
written requests
ended up
in trash cans
but don’t worry
we are not forgotten
our voice is always heard
loud and clear
big brothers
and big sisters
always watch
at our backs
for daily check
of
every step we take
and all the moves we make
to ensure
we’re safe and sound
we behave well
and we don’t hurt ourselves
in those stupid anti-government protests
in the high tech era
those old secret tricks
of taping landlines
no longer needed
as
we all volunteer
to provide our privacy
on wireless frequencies
through
laptops, ipads, iphones. and so on…
nowadays
our government is more relaxed
sitting on its sundeck with a beer
while recording our interesting talks
keep complaining
our government would love
to know in details about
our honest thoughts
Thao Chuong
2015-07-10
8 Years Ago
It's gonna be a wonderful day
don't hesitate it for a while
Don't fight against the world,
use it's energy to project yourself
to a creative universe
Learn something new, make a new project, smile to someone you don't know
So many things to do...
Be adaptive, be unique, be you
8 Years Ago
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Hmmm. Thinking, thinking.
Keep in mind that I don't view myself as good as you.
I developed a fondness for the Tanka style. 5-7-5-7-7
Kitten
Sprightly, sweet feline
Pouncing, stalking, catching toys
Get-up-and-go, gone
Sunbeam calls out, I curl up
Weary now, my time to rest
8 Years Ago
Good morning. Many thanks for sharing your poetry
@ Perdo: "Be adaptive, be unique, be you". I love it. Your words of wisdom is very much appreciated.
@ Roseann: Woow! It's a really good and very interesting poem. Would you be willing to share other styles of poetry which you've gone through the whole workshop. Like other short forms in the Japanese poetry, Tanka style is a very challenging form of poetry to be written, especially in the English language.
Enjoy a restful day
8 Years Ago
Thanks Roseann.
I haven't written in Tanka style for awhile. Your poem has inspired me to get back the short forms of poetry today.
Lost In the World of Blue
middle of nowhere
infinite sapphire high up
navy blue around
to limitless horizon
where the ocean and sky meet
Thao Chuong
2015-07-10
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day
Why Care to Save the World?
“problems become too big
out of our tiny hands
no single human
could handle them
nothing could be done
don’t waste time
to do the impossible
focus on yourself
why care so much
to save the world?”.
I’ve heard
such hopeless
messages
endless times
on a narrow scope
I fully understood
the good thought
of focussing on individual
and making changes
on a smaller scale
however
on the other hand
I could sense
the disheartened feeling
the withdrawal mood
and
the uncaring attitude
toward the broader space
in which we’re living
so far
for better or worse
endless changes have been made
much progress has been already achieved
from
darkness of feudalism
to the light of democracy
and equality for humanity
the main driving force
for the caveman
to make his quantum leap
from the Stone Age
to this Modern day
certainly
not
those naysayers
who always sit idle
keep their mouths shut
do nothing
except
to save their own skin
but
those daydreamers
whose deep compassion and daring thought
have made everything possible
to save the world
Thao Chuong
2015-07-10
8 Years Ago
Hi Viet,
Thank you. I enjoy those styles because I feel they challenge me more. You have to say what you can within the limited parameters of the poetic form.
My friend brought her two ten week old kittens to visit. So very adorable. They play and chase everything, until they've run out of steam and then look for a spot to snooze, preferably in the sun.
I will share more. I'm cleaning a few up. I'm also submitting them to a few publications.
8 Years Ago
Good Morning
@ Roseann: Thanks. I love to read your poetry more frequently. I think there are both pros and cons about following strict rules in poetry. Most Oriental forms of poetry have certain requirements to be met. It could take away the creative moment. Poets have less freedom to roam in term of expressing an instant feeling. On the other hand, it could FORCE poets into deeper thought and better selection of words, rhymes, rhythms, etc.
@ David: Thank you very much for sharing your provoking thought.
To all: Enjoy the restful weekend.
8 Years Ago
To ease the dark tone of blue from Roseann’s rain, here’s the light for the weekend from David’s thought of roaming fruitlessly to the refrigerator.
A Quick Laugh
(in Tanka form)
stomach loudly growls
he runs around, looks for food
nothing! fridge’s empty
really angry, so hungry
he would eat his leather shoes
Thao Chuong
2015-07-11
8 Years Ago
Viet - wow! That was very poignant. If i want the freedom to express without limitation, I will go to Free Verse or even Ekphrastic. But for Tanka and Haiku, I prefer to stick to the format for the reasons you said. The challenge of deeper thought and better word choices. Plus it might get me to use different words than ones I normally reach for. Dictionary.com also has a thesaurus which I feel is important for me.
8 Years Ago
A Heathnut
Once upon a time, I was getting larger,
then my mentor taught me about food.
Now I am getting smaller, but I have made
some turkey chili. Why turkey? To cut back
on red meat. As you know.
So now the refrigerator calls, my stomach growls,
this poem grows long, and I take leave.
Dave
8 Years Ago
Thanks for the good point, Roseann
He he,.. Thank for the laugh, Dave
More Joke About Food
(in Tanka)
mommy, i’m hungry
take away such tiny plate
no diet, today
extra food and bigger dish
no gravy - more turkey, please
Thao Chuong
2015-07-11
8 Years Ago
Morning Walk on Muddy Trail
My bare toes squishing
through the slop of soft, wet mud
Hard Summer rain drenched
the raw earth between the trees
where my feet have worn a path
Karen Newell
7/11/15
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your awesome "Tanka" moment. Tanka is a very old form of poetry dated back over 1,200 years.
8 Years Ago
More joke for the day
Not About Sex
I moved ups and downs
in the most back-breaking job
I was out of breath
she asked why it took too long
poor me! de-mossing the roof
Poe Ed
2015-07-11
8 Years Ago
@ Jim: Who knows?
Here is the conversation recorded just a second ago by the Phone Screening Department at the CIA's Headquarter in Langley.(lol)
- Hello!
- Hello.. hello...
- Do you hear me?
- Yeah! Clearly! What can I do to help ya?
- I am alone on the roof. I need a helping hand
- Perfect! I do offer exotic escorting services to lonely men like you
- I'm sorry. I'm afraid I got the wrong number
- Yeah. You're calling to the right place,sir. You've just said you need a helping hand on the roof. Sure! my escorting services can be done anywhere you want. In this case, you have to pay extra money for the risk of falling down from the rooftop.
- Oh no. It ain't about sex.
- Now I know! So I'll give you a 50% discount for my escorting service without sex.
- What the heck! I'll take your offer. You make my day! Come here with your helping hand!
8 Years Ago
Description: WHO AMONG YOU IS REDUCED TO THIS?, 2000, oil on canvas, 72.25 in. x 50.25 inches.
******Power is woman who defeats fatherhood with the best of weapons--slanted laws, designed to protect children, are carried out by false-hearted judges, extending a license that declares "thou shall take..." And the children gaze, watching the melt down from fire-red to pallid despair.
Breakup - the Doomsday of His World
it is not unexpected
he has known
sooner or later
he would face
his worst fear
in some days
very near
now
it comes
utterly devastated
like
a tsunami washing away a whole city to the open sea
a tornado swallowing everything on its path
an earthquake destroying an entire town
he’s in agony
he’s in despair
on the doomsdayof his world
his mind’s in distress
his heart’s wrecked
his soul’s shattered
his life is lost
he’s moaning
“oh god!
it’s not real
why me?”
he’s still alive
but he feels worse
than being dead
Thao Chuong
2015-07-12
PS: Good morning Ken, I think your description for the artwork is somewhat bitter. It clearly reflected the awful feeling and the dark thought of a man who had gone through the painful process of a breakup. You painted this work in 2000. I am wondering how you think about the description when you read it again in 15 years later? Would you still think that the justice system (and particularly trial judges) in USA are in favour of females in the legal proceeding for those divorce cases? Please ignore my thought, in case you feel uncomfortable about it. My apology, if you think that I’m digging too deep and violate your own privacy. Have a nice day.
8 Years Ago
As me old Irish Grandmother might have said,
"left is as good as right in a squeeze".
Dave
8 Years Ago
@ Juergen Roth. “You don't take a photograph, you make it.” ~ Ansel Adams
Terminologically speaking, there is big hole in the above quote. Photographers don’t MAKE photographs. Those cameras make them and photographers TAKE photographs from cameras.
@ David Bridburg: Wow! What’s a thought of wisdom! It accurately reflects US modern politics: practically no difference between the Democrats and the Republicans in the currently squeezed democracy. Oh, no. I must not violate this site’s forbidden politics (lol)
Have a restful evening.
8 Years Ago
“This is so beautiful Juergen; I really love the diagonal line of the water meeting the beach....the lighting is wonderful and gives off a sense of a spring storm approaching...I can almost smell it in the wonderful salt air - the lone rock looks as though it is the keeper of the beach and in protection mode.....jd”, comment by Digital Photographer Joyce Dickens
Haiku
waiting for high tide
a lone rock sits on wet sand
in need of a bath
Thao Chuong
2015-07-12
8 Years Ago
Viet,
No sir--I never think you are probing too deeply. The opposite is true: I applaud your interest. I would not have painted such a piece accompanied the work with such description if I were afraid to "reveal my feelings." As usual, meaningful art works best when a personal experience is transcended to a greater universal message.
To quote what I wrote in my book in reference to this painting and others of the same genre: "Today, I look back at the works from this time period and still feel the emotion that ran through their mindset, but the fire is less, if not fully extinguished. Like I said, the scars of destruction are life-long. The years move on, and things begin to make better sense when we can see them receded in perspective. What looms large close-up is seldom that big in the distance. I have reconciled within me this heavy damage..."
As to the unfair rulings of the American divorce laws--yes, I am convinced that until men are given the same options as women when sitting around the divorce table with lawyers that men are at a disadvantage. Women are told, "you get the kids, you receive monthly money." Women measure the "success" of their divorce by what they profit; men measure it by how they can minimize their losses. That said, to contradict myself, my mother was a single mom, who was shafted by my father--he who skipped down, scarcely to be heard from again. In the end, philosophically speaking, I guess the one who never called for the divorce--man or woman--is the one who feels cheated. There is undeniable power in the one who makes the decision to end the marriage. .... I hope I haven't said too much...lol... Best, Ken
8 Years Ago
Good morning, Ken
Thank you very much, sir. You have amazed me not only with your art, but also with your articulate writing. You’re a thought-provoking and open-minded artist. It is very challenging to write poetry that could unearth the hidden messages in your art. Have a fruitful week
Regards
8 Years Ago
David Bridburg
15 Hours Ago
As me old Irish Grandmother might have said,
"left is as good as right in a squeeze".
My thought of the Day generated by Mr. Bridburg’s smart thought above. Thank you very much, sir.
Not Much Difference Between Having Sex and Enjoying Freedom in USA
he truly believes
he has privileges
to explore her further
as she has invited
he opens his eyes wide
yet
he still don’t see much light
in her world of freedom
that has been increasingly shut
and becoming too tight
no room
to turn his head
to the left
nor
to the right
no way back
not much
he could do
but
goes straight ahead
takes the middle path
pushes harder and deeper
to make his way in
she keeps moaning
while squeezing her both legs tighter
he
feels stuck
desperately hopes
she would soon reach orgasm
becomes more relaxed
to release her thighs
a little bit wider
for
him to breathe
he has ever expected
there must be a costly price for whatever she offers
Thao Chuong
2015-07-13
8 Years Ago
Description: Cape Cod Bay sunset photography near Sesuit Harbor in Dennis, MA by New England based award winning photographer Juergen Roth. Sesuit Harbor is easily reached off Route 6A and provides beautiful sunset and seaside photography opportunities if one combines a lovely beach walk with nature photography. This Cape Cod photograph shows an orange sky on fire with a fishing boat and was taken on a beautiful night at dusk. Good light and happy photo making! My best, Juergen
Haiku Sunset
on the horizon
a red sun’s slowly submerged
gone another day
Thao Chuong
2015-07-13
8 Years Ago
My Early Morning Walk (in Tanka)
the sun’s behind trees
spots of light through canopies
dance on rural path
whenever breezy wind blows
what’s a peaceful morning walk!
Thao Chuong
2015-07-14
8 Years Ago
A Self Reminder: Instant Moment (in Tanka)
it is up to me
to live at instant moment
why wasting my time
to regret about the past
or dream of the bright future
Thao Chuong
2015-07-15
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day....
Go to beach,
get suntan,
use 30 sunblock.
Come home rested,
have a great meal.
Come back to my digital art on Friday.
Dave
8 Years Ago
Thanks David .
Thank you very much for sharing the thought about your relaxing day.
“Love the sea mist on the shore in the distance. And you're right about the walk and it seems this was a morning walk at that. Well done my friend.” - the coment of phographer Skip Willits - Cayce, SC - United States
The Thousand-mile Journey
where does it come from?
in its thousand-mile journey
like a human’s fate
the lonely piece of driftwood
to where would it be ended?
Thao Chuong
2015-07-16
8 Years Ago
Description: This drip painting illustrates the proverb: even the journey of 1,000 miles begins with a single step
Tanka; Journey of OneThousand Miles
journey to unknown
thousands of miles far away
would he reach somewhere?
without taking his first step
how would humans’ lives look like?
Thao Chuong
2015-07-16
8 Years Ago
Hee. Dave. I'm on the same path of your thought. Have a good night
Love Online – Home On Fire
with endless chats for days and nights
love online
is far more fantasized
than
love in life
but
a home online
is worse
than
a home on fire
without little time at home for her
she always feels neglected
during power outage at night
internet’s down
communication’s lost
bored to death in an isolated room
know not what else to do
in the dark
except
begging her for sex
what’s the heck would love be for a home online?
Thao Chuong
2015-07-16
8 Years Ago
Within You and Without You
1- WITHIN YOU
love is a paradise of
joy
delight
ecstasy
pleasure
‘n happiness
but
also a hell of
pain
headache
frustration
bothersome
and annoyance
2- WITHOUT YOU
love is the whole world of
peace
serenity
calmness
tranquility
composure
but
also a burning hell of
despair
insolation
loneliness
emptiness
meaningless
therefore
I’d rather die for love
within you
than
live for nothing
without you
Thao Chuong
2015-07-16
8 Years Ago
There are moments on a Friday afternoon of panic,
then lunch, then a shower, then some work online,
and then off to a manic restaurant for the evening's work.
Make that money, tote that barge.
Dave
8 Years Ago
I was reminded again today of my mortality. I have disease that is under control but occasionally pops its head up to remind me it is there. Today was one of those days. Luckily just a few bruises to show for the collapse this time and nothing broken, but nevertheless, as a Buddhist it reinforces for me the teachings about impermanence and death!
8 Years Ago
@ David: It's likely you have been enjoying a good time. Keep doing what you enjoy before you're forced to do what you dislike (lol)
@ Dorothy: Good to be reminded about how fragile a human's life is.
Buddhism always officially claims that it is not a religion - but a way of living. This makes a lot of sense in term of belief. Buddhists believe that when they –who make a mistake or commit a sin - must take their own responsibilities and reform themselves.
Buddha didn’t believe in God. Unlike all other religion prophets, Buddha claimed that he was just a human who found his way out of the sea of sufferings through enlightenment.
8 Years Ago
If Tomorrow Is My Last Day On Earth
days and nights
I’m fooling around
in the labyrinth of life
trying
to
achieve as much as possible
and get as best as I could
I’ve already known
I’ll die sooner or later
yet, I ain’t so sure when I’ll be running out of time
I often wonder
if
tomorrow is my last day on earth
would I slow down
and
relax
to enjoy my day
or
would I act
like
an ant-in-panic
trying to jump off a frying pan?
Thao Chuong
2015-07-17
8 Years Ago
SPAIN
I have been away to Spain
I travelled
from Malaga
to Granada
to Lanjaron
to Granada
to Jaen
to Baeza
to Ubeda
to Lanjaron
to Malaga
Everywhere you look
Everywhere you see
There are fields and olive groves
For miles and miles and miles
If there are no fields there are houses
If there are no houses you can see
there is only room at the top
the very top
Of the mountains
for the native
wildlife
Penthouse living only
8 Years Ago
My thoughts have been dominated by four U.S. Marines...four UNARMED U.S. Marines murdered by a coward.
A coward who would never have had the guts to even think of taking on these four if they had, themselves, been armed.
May the Marines rest in eternal peace. Semper Fi.
May the coward burn in eternal hell.
Bill Tomsa
8 Years Ago
@ Jane McGowen: Wow! It's an awesome poem. It is always for me to read your provoking poetry.
@ Bill Tomsa: It was a sad day with the shocking news. My heart goes to the loved ones of the four US Marines who were shot when they were unarmed. May they rest in peace.
8 Years Ago
Description: A peaceful image of Buddha, emanating calmness and tranquility. In a busy world with so much violence and stress, images such as these can bring feelings of peace and tranquility into the office or home.
Let Go
Buddha once said
“being born
growing old
getting sick
life is a sea of sufferings
get rid of these roots of miseries
by
letting go everything for enlightenment”
ironically
most Buddhist masters do the opposite from what Buddha taught
they've built huge temples with gigantic statues
what do they achieve by collecting more followers?
if
not
more headaches
and less harmony
let alone
inner peace
and enlightenment
let go
easy to talk
challenging to do
let go…
let’s go
to nowhere
Thao Chuong
2015-07-17
8 Years Ago
My thoughts have been dominated by four U.S. Marines...four UNARMED U.S. Marines murdered by a coward....- Bill Tomsa 4 Hours Ago
The following poem was generated by Bill Tomsa's post
In Memory of Four US Marines
(who were slain recently in Chattanooga, Tennessee)
you were shot
not
at the battle front
while fighting face-to-face
with your enemies
but
at your back
while unarmed at home
flags
at Chattanooga, Tennessee
flying in half staff
to honor four of you - US Marines
whose lives were lost
in service of your nation
you’ve left for another world
rest in peace
forever
but
you still remain
as
heroes
in the hearts of American people
you have been missed
by
your comrades
your friends
and your loved ones
farewell to life
going back home
where you originally came from
we
wish
you would see the gate of heaven at the immense horizon
Thao Chuong
2015-07-17
8 Years Ago
Viet thank you for your thoughts - yes you are right, Buddhism is not a religion but not many people get that.
From your first poem:
"I often wonder
if
tomorrow is my last day on earth
would I slow down
and
relax
to enjoy my day
or
would I act
like
an ant-in-panic
trying to jump off a frying pan?"
That is a great question and speaks to the point about learning to control your mind and understand that it is not the situation it is how you respond to it that counts.
The second poem relating to my image (for which thank you) - yes, sad but true that many of those 'at the top' in Buddhism have lost the point of it.
8 Years Ago
Viet-
Thank you for Thao's words which have presented my thoughts much better than I did.
Bill Tomsa
8 Years Ago
Sundry Thought About My Art and My Own Death
as
an artist
I do enjoy the creative process
I have never worried too much about the outcomes
my art,
if any good,
is just a bonus
for other people to enjoy
when life gives me its final kiss
I would let go everything
myself
my loved ones
and all what I’ve owned
no
big deal
art is like anything else in my life
no more
no less
I’ve already made myself ready for that day
when the bell tolls
telling
me
it’s my turn
at
that
instant
moment!
I’d rather think of the best time in this world with my loved ones
simply smile
then say bye
‘n let go
Thao Chuong
2015-07-18
8 Years Ago
Thoughts of Death
Why waste time on thoughts of death
When we should spend it on living.
Death will take care of itself
We need to take care of living
Live life to the fullest
see, hear, touch, smell, taste
Experience as much as possible
waste not a moment on the inevitable
JEM 190715
8 Years Ago
Feeling Alive
Standing there on the shore
A morning storm on its way
Breathe in the ocean spray
Smell the oncoming storm
Intoxicating, invigorating
Breathe in breathe out
Arms outstretched
Eyes closed tight
Drops of rain on the face
Cooling, cleansing, refreshing
Taste the salty drops
of rain and sea spray
Wind whips the clothes
Rain stings the legs
Waves pound the shore
Lightning and thunder
Feeling Alive
JEM 190715
8 Years Ago
Thanks for the nice treat of today, Jane.
Your poetry always makes me think hard. I like both of your poems. You have raised a very good point in your poem Thoughts of Death. I'll get back with my thought about this issue.
Enjoy your exciting trip!
8 Years Ago
Description: FLIGHT OF DEATH, 1988, oil on canvas, 80 in. x 87 inches.
Spiritual flight leads to nowhere in particular, drifting as only it must. Somewhere there is an answer, they thought. A large expansive format is open to vibrant color, painted with both thick impasto and thinner, fluid color, employing both knife and brush. Landscape and towers are left behind, swayed and curled like hammocks on a tree.*****Gravity is a vacuum; everything is in motion, unstable. But, then, how does the sun hold its place, anchored in the sky? By Kenneth Agnello.
An echo to Jane's poem Thoughts of Death
Why Do I Often Think About My Own Death?
unlike
cats of nine lives
or
children playing on ipads
when a game is over
they can play it again as many times as they’d like
regrettably
each human being has only one life
when he makes a fatal mistake
his life is terminated
it’s finished
it’s done
it’s gone
no way to gain it back
impossible to try it again
ironically
he often wastes too much of his joyful time
to bury his mind and heart
too deep
into
fear
anxiety
stress
depression
melancholy
and other emotional hogwash
human is so afraid whenever he thinks about his own death
therefore, he prefers to ignore the inescapable
and keeps living as if he were immortal
the
regular
thought
about one’s own death
would help him remind himself
about the most fundamental fact
of
how vulnerable and fragile his life is
and nothing really matters so long as he’s still kicking alive
at least,
this exercise has helped
me
myself
joyfully live at,
and highly appreciate for,
each instant moment
of
mine
while I am so well alive
Thao Chuong
2015-07-19
8 Years Ago
Jane!
I have read your poem Feeling Alive for a couple of times. It’s so peaceful and restful. I think it is one of your best poems which I have read so far. You've captured the perfect moment of you in harmony with nature. It makes me feel fresh and want to run to the beach!
8 Years Ago
I want to run to the beach too, good idea, i will do that this afternoon.
I applyed for a job as a night auditor in a four star hotel on the shores of lake Geneva.
If they take me, I believe that i will have time to think during the night. in the morning i will go home and paint or draw comics about my toughts of the night. Night time is a good source of inspiration in my opinion, i had the ideas for this one during a night where i could not sleep. In a small hotel where i stayed once, in a small port in scotland.
Viet, is that your son on your profile picture? I have a nephew, he is not a year old. he says "AP" fot the light switch and other positive things.
las time i saw him he also said "Blobloblabli". I dont know what he means by that yet.
Is it also too hot where you live? we had an absolute record of 39.8° C in Geneva recently.
8 Years Ago
Good morning Georg.
Thanks for sharing your thought and your painting. I feel that somewhat I have connected to your thought of: "Night time is a good source of inspiration in my opinion". Good luck with your job application. I hope you will get the job.
FYI: The toddler is my grandson. I have a lot to learn from the innocent way in which he talks and behaves. My two grandsons have brought me back to the best time of my childhood. Have a nice day
8 Years Ago
An echo to Jane McGowen's poem Feeling Alive
Her Peaceful and Restful moment (in Tanka()
it’s her good moment
in harmony with nature
she feels so alive
storm, thunder, lightning - chaos
yet she gets her inner peace
Thao Chuong
2015-07-20
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day was generated by Georg's painting Sleepless Night Composition...
His Insomnia
too hot
over 39 degree Celsius
he strips himself naked
he turns ups and downs on his bed for many hours
he
increasingly feels
as if he were a piece of beef steak
being burnt too long
well-done
over cooked
and left forgotten on scorching heat of a barbecue
his mind continues wandering around to different places
from somewhere to nowhere
from
past
present
to future
and swinging back and forth
like a tireless pendulum
still
he couldn’t sleep
dammed it!
every fifteen minutes
the grandfather clock keeps adding more salt to his fresh wound
the cuckoo bird challenges him
by popping its head out
singing its boring song
and consistently
reminding
him
it’s time to sleep
so tired
too exhausted
fed up with his struggle
he’s dreaming of plunging down
from a high rocky cliff
into the fresh water
far below
'n
during
that free fall
he would let himself be sunk
deep
deeper
deepest
into a timeless sleep
and never wake up again
Thao Chuong
2015-07-20
8 Years Ago
Georg - Good luck with your job application, and I can understand how you would paint that picture being in Scotland - where were you?
Viet - You have me yawning reading your response to Georg. - I think I will have to memorise it for next time I cannot sleep. I am happy you like my poems - I think I am being taught well by yourself :-)
8 Years Ago
Jane. Oh, no. My ego is going to be exploded, because your words have pumped too much air into it (lol).
I have been inspired by, and have learned from, the diversified perspectives of artists/poets those who have dropped by and shared their interesting thoughts. You have also taught me well with your provoking poetry and your unique writing style. Without interaction with other human beings and the outer world, it would be impossible for me to write.
Thanks all of you for sharing your thoughts. Have a good night
8 Years Ago
Thought of the day? Simple, and I run this phrase in my head every day to help me be a better person. The thought is "live today like you want to be remembered tomorrow".
8 Years Ago
"live today like you want to be remembered tomorrow". John Wills
Thank you very much for your inspiring thought. Have a peaceful evening, John.
Description: Hello here I have depicted an ancient and mystical pond swirling with yin and yang energy. The energy creates life, and a beautiful koi fish emerges from between the magical spheres, a child's wish coming true from one of the passing floating prayer candles...
My thought from Jon Wills’ inspiring thought
Of Yin and Yang in Life and Death
a tiny seed of yin
always stays in the core of yang
at the opposite end
a petite pit of yang
permanently
hides
inside
the heart of yin
no difference in a human’s life
the seed of death is fully planted
at the very beginning of every birth
soon
geminated
and growing
into an old tree
yesterday’s gone
for
today
to be born
when
today’s gone
it immediately becomes the past
when
future comes
it always becomes today
practically
there
is
no
tomorrow
a man can only live one day at a time
absolutely
it is today
and
not
any other day of his living process
if he wants to be remembered
he’d better live at his best
today
Thao Chuong
2015-07-20
8 Years Ago
The Wonders of Nature
trillions of twinkle stars
buried
in an opaque sea of navy blue
somewhere from dense bushes
fragrance of blossom
diluted
in fresh air
concerto of nocturnal insects
vibrated
the stillness
wonders of the night
in the wilderness
lullabied
nature into its sound sleep
with
his resilient desire
of taking over the wild
how much longer would human allow his Mother Nature to keep her little peaceful dream?
Thao Chuong
2015-07-21
8 Years Ago
My sundry thought today
The Modern Living
more materials
less spirit
more sex
less love
easy lives
no sweat
least labour
best accessibility
freeways
fast cars
mega malls
big boxes
fast food outlets
endless convenience
create
fat bellies
heavy weighs
high cholesterol
high blood pressure
high sugar
high anxiety
less health
more sickness
for
the body
much tension in the mind
less compassion in the heart
what has a civilised man achieved for his modern living?
Thao Chuong
2015-07-21
8 Years Ago
Tanka Romance in the Rain
strong wind in monsoon
their red umbrella blown up
two lovers get soaked
sunken shoes on muddy path
not much romance in the rain
Thao Chuong
2015-07-22
8 Years Ago
Restful Scenery
sunny beach
calm waves
low tides
fine sand
like
white sugar
tanned skin
as bronze
both wet
at
water edge
Thao Chuong
2015-07-22
8 Years Ago
ten little toes
on a hot beach
each just a titch
each with a twitch
twitching toes, tip toe the beach
wheech beach does the big toe dip?
tip to top
the lil toes teach
the twitchy twitches
twitching toes
on a tip top beach
im just a toe twit
yeah that bit
twitches
on a sunshine beach...
(c) toe tipp tun
8 Years Ago
Mmmmmm Viet...wonders of nature and modern living...just beautiful. Really like your restful scenery too. Will make time to tonight to sit down.
Jason Ten toes a nutty poem love it made me smile :-)
8 Years Ago
Before the thread moves to far thanks for another fine poem with my image!
Also Modern Living!
First spontaneous thought upon seeing the image was the song by Marc Almond
Well, I slept last night in the open
Down by a redwood tree
Yes, I slept last night in the open
Just to let, just to let, just to let my soul free
I don't want to know, I don't want to go,
I don't want to go back into the city.
It's just a long long long lonely taxi ride
Going nowhere.
Well, I slept last night in the open
(It gets so hot in the city)
Down by a redwood tree
(It gets so hot in the city)
Yes, I slept last night in the open
Just to let, just to let, just to let my soul free.
I don't want to know, I don't want to go,
I don't want to go back into the city.
It's just a long long long lonely taxi ride
Going nowhere.
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Nice job again. "Flight of Death" is a too-large painting, 80 inches X 87 inches, painting in the late 1980s when I concentrated on large-scale work--to hit the viewer over the head, so to speak. Unfortunately, large work like this has become extremely restrictive--limited display opportunities, difficult to transport, and most difficult to sell. Your poem, as usual, is exquisite.
8 Years Ago
Thank you for sharing your thought or your feedback.
@ Jason Christopher: Nice to see you here with your creative moment and your unique exploration in words of the English language . It's amazing how a poet would express his humorous thought about toes on a beach. You did very good for toes as they are often not a popular topic for poetry.
@ Jane McGowen: Thanks. I'm waiting for more poetry of yours.
@ Jim Taylor: Thanks for sharing the awesome lyrics. You have a kind heart and a soft and humorous style in your art .
@ Kenneth Agnello: I always appreciate your feedback. Your art is very thought-provoking. It often draws me into the dark side of life and a hell of suffering. It's very challenging and takes time to absorb your art for my poetry.
Thanks again. Have a restful day to you all.
8 Years Ago
A Hot Summer Day On Huntington Beach
sizzling day
dried summer
blue up high
cloudless sky
bright sunshine
pouring down
dancing on
aqua waves
along the shore
a colourful sea
of
beach umbrellas
and bath towels
sexy curves
in bikinis
mixed
with
beer bellies
in shorts
human bodies
different sizes and shapes
scattered
on hot sand
like
fish
already
scaled, cleaned, and salted
being dried
right
under direct sunlight
Thao Chuong
2015-07-23
8 Years Ago
Just posted this quote on another discussion and thought you and your readers would be interested in it too.
"Be tender with the young; compassionate with the old; sympathetic to the striving
and tolerant of the weak and the wrong, for in your life, you will be all of these."
~Unknown
Bill Tomsa
http://billtomsa.blogspot.com/
8 Years Ago
Message in a cookie
Well that was a good Chinese dinner
spices awakening my dumbed down senses
pleasantly surprised by a message in a cookie
how those simple words rang true
I carefully placed it in may pocket
I read and repeated them on the way home
it’s a keeper pinned to my studio bulletin board
like a friend pinned amongst friends
Jim Taylor 7/23/15
8 Years Ago
“Wise men speak because they have something to say; fools because they have to say something.”
― Plato
8 Years Ago
@Bill Tomsa: Thanks for the sharing your quote of compassion.
@ Jim Taylor: Your nice poem about Chinese cookies has reminded me about oily Chinese food and cheap Chinese commodities flooded North America (lol)
@ Ricardo Almeida: There is a ceretain level of wisdom in the Plato's above quote. However, I believe that wise men often DON'T speak even when they have something to say.
Have a good night.
8 Years Ago
Talk and Listen
a smart man
full of knowledge
who has a lot to say
yet he only talks
whenever needed
as he wastes no time
in defense of his perspective
a fool usually knows
nothing to say
yet he talks a lot
to silly prove
he knows
something
a master of wisdom
listens to the whispering sound of wind
then lets his thoughts
sink into silence
Thao Chuong
2015-07-23
8 Years Ago
LIFE IS SHORT WORDS ARE LONG
Why?
Why do you do things to be awkward?
Why do you do things to waste my time?
Why do you say things to make me unhappy?
Why?
Why?
Why can you not be considerate?
Why can you not be helpful?
Why can you not be kind?
why?
Our day would run much smoother
We could all go home on time
Those jobs would get done quicker
No need for that glass of wine
Lets be nice to those cold callers
At least they are doing a job
Their mum might have just passed away
Whilst you rage like an angry mob
Think on is all I ask
Its not a difficult task
Before those words come out
Think, be considerate, be helpful and be kind.
JEM 240715
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jane. Thanks for sharing your poem. I think that creative people such as artists, writers, poets, etc. offer their unique works as they often think out the box.
Here is my thought generated from your provoking poem but at a different angle.
Have a nice day.
What Are Out Of Our Control and What Remain In Own Palms
we often whine
at
either end
too hot - too cold
too bright – too dark
too long- too short
too close - too far
too high - too low
too big - too small
too much - too little
too noisy - too quiet
and
so on,..
on the infinite list
what’s happening around us
and
whatever others write, talk, act, or do
unquestionably
not
under our control
don’t like them?
it’s
best
to ignore
why bother so much to torture ourselves?
nothing can be done
to
reform
endless things happen outside
to the way we want them to be
but
what going within ourselves
our emotions
our thoughts
certainly
can
be
firmly held
inside our own palms
it's totally up to each of us
to decide what we want to change
Thao Chuong
2015-07-24
8 Years Ago
Good Evening / Morning Viet
Thank you for your response. Just sometimes you wish people remember that what they are mostly working for is to pay for their holidays, mortgages, lifestyles etc, Just the same as everyone else, and we would love to think that we will even enjoy working along the way. So why make everyone' life a misery - lets just all go home on time and spend the rest of the day doing what we want to do!
Hard Times
Work is short
Money is too
What's mine is mine
and what's yours is mine
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane. Here is another thought of mine
Sundry Thought About Relationship At Work
nothing wrong
to ask our colleagues
to be
nice
kind
and considerate
or
at least
cooperative
while doing the jobs
in reality
it often happens
contrary to what normally expected
impossible
to know about specific problems
of our coworkers'
such
as
the guy
who shouted at your face yesterday
like
an angry mob
his mom has just passed away
a couple days
ago
the bitch
who often looks over your shoulders
has gone through her menopause
those
gossipers
who regularly talk behind your back
for only sole purpose of easing loneliness
from own problems
at homes
wouldn’t we better mind our own tasks
and leave them
alone
Thao Chuong
2015-07-24
8 Years Ago
Thought from Jim's good dinner at a Chinese Eatery
Chinese Cheap Food vs. American Fast Food
exotic food
variety dishes
affordable prices
at popular restaurants
in Chinatown
around the world
cheap ingredients
skillfully cooked
with much
salt
sugar
mono sodium glutamate
so
yummy
luscious
nice smell
good taste
full stomach
too
oily
greasy
bad cholesterol
for
fatty bellies
heart attacks
no better
than
donuts, French fries, chicken wings, burgers, Big Macs
at
Tim Horton, KFC, McDonald, Burger King
or any other American fast food outlets
da-ya wanna bet
between USA and China
which one would win the war of food?
Thao Chuong
2015-07-24
8 Years Ago
Hee..hee. Jim. You still look skinny as a bony supermodel (lol)
Over-Weigh - A Weekend Joke
fast food rats
couch potatoes
on sharp rise
higher than the tallest skyscraper in Dubai
so much weigh
for the earth
to carry
too heavy
to rotate
for sure
it’ll soon slide
out of its orbit
Poe Ed
2017-07-25
8 Years Ago
My Thought on Fast Food
Fast foods joints
Backed by pharmaceuticals?
Keeps you sick
Lifts cholesterol
Raises blood pressure
Blocks those arteries
Fried foods
Grease
Fat
Oils
Transfats
Sugar
Overdoses on salt
keeps you hooked
lots and lots of tablets
JEM 250715
8 Years Ago
Are you saying fast food is bad for you? And me as well?
I am totally shocked.
Totally unbelieving.
Totally not happy any longer.
And on a diet.
Oh and now I am happy again.
Thinner and thinner for weeks now.
And exercising.
But now a fond farewell, for bed awaits.
Dave
8 Years Ago
A Weekend Laugh
IMO
oh my
my god...
you're wondering
what the heck
a fact is
in my opinion
if you hold
too many facts
or non-facts
in your mind
very soon
your head will be exploded
like a watermelon
hand-chopped
by a karate kid
in my opinion
(again, isn't it boring )
if you vomit
too much IMO
your keyboards flooded
your fingers numbed
your vision stuck
in a bottle neck
in my opinion
(again! it becomes annoying!)
with too much imo
many minds ached
many lives poisoned
I must stop my own imo
to save the world
imo
a weapon of mass destruction
keep 'em in your safe
but don't press the button
in my opinion
...
..
.
oh no
i must stop
my damned opinion
Poe Ed
2015-07-25
8 Years Ago
Good morning.
Thank you - Jim, and Jane - for sharing your humorous poetry.You have lightened up the weekend.
@ David Bridburg. I've read your writings at different threads, I would say that you are a thought-provoker and a very good debater who could irritate others in an argument with your unique debating strategy. I believe that you would be a damned good lawyer, if you want to pursue a career in the legal field.
Have a nice weekend to all
8 Years Ago
I got the following piece of gold from the sea of thoughts in another thread
“Life is what you make of it”, posted by David Bridburg about nine hours ago
...And my thought of the day inspired by the above quote
Sundry Thought of Life
life is
not
what you make
but
what you take
and
how you get
the best from it
but you understand
you must stop
when it’s enough
for your share
no more no less
then
you considerately leave
the rest entirely intact
for the others to claim
their own portions in full
in that sense
life is
no
longer
what and how you take from it
but
what you make out of it
which
brings peace and happiness
to everyone around you
including your own self
Thao Chuong
2015-07-25
8 Years Ago
Your brain is the receptor for alternate realities and your beliefs & behavior fine tune which world you live in from moment to moment.
Change your thinking, change your world.
8 Years Ago
"Change your thinking, change your world." Chuck Staley
Thank you very much for sharing your thought of wisdom. I'd like your thoughtful quote about changing "our own world"- not the world in general. If each of us could change one's OWN world. The planet earth would be a perfect place for all for us .
I think it is troublesome that many people prefer to change the "hole world" in general - before they could change their own little world.
Have a good night
Of Great Humans Who Change the World
it could be a social activist
who wouldn’t resist
to battle against
unfairness
to
the poor
the weak
and the unfortunate
it could be an environmentalist
who always punches
with bare hands
against
big corporations
and well-establishments
to prevent further destruction to his Mother Earth
it could be a feminist
who
fights
tooth and nail
in her holy war against the world
dominated by
males
regardless
of genders
and
whoever they are
whatever they fight for
wouldn’t it be better for everyone else?
if they would recognize
that
any great human who’d like to change the whole world
must change the thoughts
to save his or her
own breaths
first
Thao Chuong
2015-07-25
8 Years Ago
“Time Is What We Make. Why Do Humans Often Slave For It?”, today quote by Viet Tran
Of Man and His Time
-what time is it?
he
asked
while in half-asleep and half-awake
“around eight past eight
I guess”.
she said
he didn’t question
how she could know so accurate about the exact time
without looking at her wristwatch
as
her answer hit his panic button
and numbed his mind
“oh no
not much time left for coffee
we’re late
hurry up”
as he was about to jump out of bed
she pulled him back to the warm blanket
“honey!
for what?
too early”
utterly confused
he automatically replied like a robot
“about
the appointment
we made at nine past nine, today”
he paused a second for a clear thought
then asked
“by the way, what’s day is it today?”
she rubbed her bare beasts against his hairy chest
and
replied
in a luring tone
“honey
relax
it’s Sunday
let’s have sex
to cool you down”
time
no longer
in existence
as both fell down into a sizzling hell of deep moans
in
their
fast movements
much faster than Einstein’s absolute light speed
Thao Chuong
2015-07-26
8 Years Ago
Point or No Point in an Argument
most of the time
during the exchange of words
he raised his voice
but suddenly dropped
into
dead
silence
for a brief moment
like
a piece of rock
that makes a big noise
when thrown into water
and sunk down
to the unknown bottom
his face looked red
in frustration
he bent himself
close to my ears
and murmured
“excuse me!
I got a blackout
and totally forget
what I’ve just said
where I stopped
would you please repeat it for me?”
at his request
I simply replayed exactly like a record
of
what
he has just said
he angrily shot back
“now
I fully recall
it is not what I’ve said in my own terms
there is neither truth nor fact
in what you’ve repeated
don’t
put your words into my month”
too tricky to debate
even face to face
with other folks
in the real life
let alone
in defense of
your own opinion
valid or not
through endless arguments
with those faceless humans
on a simple plane of only two dimensions in a surreal world
Thao Chuong
2015-07-26
8 Years Ago
Art, Coffee and Donuts
Standing there staring at a work of art
Made from a thousand pieces of paper
Trying to see what is on each one
Staring hard, staring staring staring,
falling, falling, falling into the picture
Faces everywhere, faces and more
Bridges, trains, cars, sea, boats, ships
war, peace, guns, tigers, dogs, cats
overwhelmed by everything rushing past
Slammed into a wooden chair surround by art
and coffee
and donuts
I enjoyed the ride Viet
JEM 270715
8 Years Ago
No Milk Today
nearly empty
left inside the jug
very little milk
barely enough
for his meal
the toddler doesn’t comprehend
why
he gets the apple juice
instead of milk
as usual
really upset
he refuses to drink
and starts crying
no milk today
no big deal!
but
impossible to explain
to the little one
how lucky and luxury to have the juice with his food
while millions of kids around the word are starving
not only that
the grandad himself also frustrates
as he refuses to take plain coffee
without coffee
he has a mental setback
just few drops of thought
flow in his hollow mind
barely enough
to spit it out
into one or two words
no poem today
no big deal
no silly verse
more peaceful
anyway
the poet must ask himself
with an empty stomach
who need poetry?
Thao Chuong
2015-07-28
8 Years Ago
CECIL
A MAGNIFICENT MANE
GOLDEN EYES
MALE PRIDE
ROAMING WILD
STRENGTH ABOUNDS
CROSSBOW FLIES
CRIMSON FLOWS
SUFFERING
WEAKENING
DYING
GOLDEN EYES DIMMING
SHOT
SKINNED
BEHEADED
MAGNIFICENCE REDUCED TO NOTHING
WHY
WHAT REASON
TO TAKE THIS LIFE
MURDERER
BIG PRIDE
MALE EGO
COWARD
JEM 290715
8 Years Ago
Thanks, Jane. it's very unfortunate that hunting those magnificent creatures is still permitted in most countries. However, I think Cecil's death was not wasted as this high profile case has raised the awareness around the world. Hopefully, this is the last drop spilled out of the full cup of senseless Safari hunting. Thanks for sharing your poem.
8 Years Ago
Sport Hunting
(you can close one eye—but can you wash your blood stained hands – quote by Neo-expressionist Kenneth Agnello)
the wildest being
of
two feet
two hands
with
a weak body
a rotten heart
but
a smart mind
the bizarre desire
the satanic instinct
for
the love of killings
running deep in blood
the worst savage beast
on earth
the so-called mankind
not so kind
in his sport hunting
senseless killings
just for fun
beheading
skinning
cutting animal parts
en masse
for
fur coats
jewelry craft even in art
or solely for trophies
it’s quite ironic
there’s too much brutality
in the humans’ self-claim
as the most civilized being
on this planet
Thao Chuong
2015-07-29
8 Years Ago
Great poem Viet unfortunately so true..we are the savages.
Kenneth love your art so expressivet :-)
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Thanks again for your written attention to my work. Your poem is strong, cuts to the point. Good job!
Jane: thanks for the good words!
A little note relative to this large painting (89 inch X 99 inch):
I was once asked if the animals contained within the closed-in, deep geometric environment are “rabbits in a cage.” They may well be, but, more generally, I sought to portray these animals as caged-in "commodities," generic symbols devoid of identity, metaphors for the exploitation of animals funneled through the fur trade. They are like silhouettes—a reference to a real thing, but somehow veiled from specific identity or type, an overview of an animal concentration camp that seemed more meaningful than a representation taken from a photo-journalist news reel of a specific event.
8 Years Ago
Days are long but Life is short. Make the best of the time you've been given.
Have a wonderful day Viet Tran
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much Jane, Kenneth, and Julie for sharing your thoughts by which I am inspired for my further thoughts. Enjoy a restful and fruitful day.
8 Years Ago
Description: This shot was a pure accident. I was setting my aperture using the bird, when my lady walked into the shot. I loved the result - I hope you do too?
What a great shot that promotes an harmonic connection between bird, human, and nature! I love the bright light in the background.
Bird On a Concrete Wall
above
her head
cloudless sky in deep blue
under
her feet
endless rows of roofs in different sizes and colours
she doesn’t see many trees
not much green space left
birds
in a modern city
not enough insects
not much seeds, weeds, wild berries for food
she has to build her nest on rooftop
and hangs around
alleys
city parks
town squares
shopping parking lots
to pick up bread crumbs
or whatever edible
left over
by
humans
in exile
right on her homeland
now becoming this human’s modern city
she misses the infinite green
oh, old-growth forest
forever
lost!
Thao Chuong
2015-07-30
8 Years Ago
Thank you Viet :-) A very emotive poem...... And the concrete jungle continues to grow...
8 Years Ago
You're very welcomed, Jane. Your work is the source of inspiration for the poem. I must thank you instead. Have a good afternoon or morning or whatever it is now at your time zone..
8 Years Ago
(Double entry removed)
It's very odd. I recently tend to double my post as a broken record. (lol))
8 Years Ago
“I was once asked if the animals contained within the closed-in, deep geometric environment are “rabbits in a cage.” They may well be, but, more generally, I sought to portray these animals as caged-in "commodities," generic symbols devoid of identity, metaphors for the exploitation of animals funneled through the fur trade. They are like silhouettes—a reference to a real thing, but somehow veiled from specific identity or type, an overview of an animal concentration camp that seemed more meaningful than a representation taken from a photo-journalist news reel of a specific event.” Kenneth Agnello
Kenneth, you put another nail on the fur trade,
Description: "The Mass Process of Meaningless Animal Slaughter," 1986, Oil on Canvas, 69 in. x 80 inches... Feel no pain, so long as you are comfortable. Insulate yourself with the dark shroud you endorse. Superficial wealth is here reminded of the greed it nurtures. The stage is set; the players are clamped-in. Roles are tightly defined. Negotiation holds no place.
The Fur Trade
she
smiles
at the pretty woman
inside the full-length mirror
then
slowly turns around
and examines every angle
to see how the stylist coat would look on her body
she smiles again
and murmurs in great satisfaction
“perfect!
what a great choice
I’ll blind many eyes of men’s
also other ladies would be jealous at me
this coat would make me look like a star
at this special fundraising event tonight”
celebrities
or gentle ladies
and rich men of the top class
those who love to cover their bodies with animal fur
would be either heartless or mindless
otherwise
how
could they not know
the cruel
fact
endless
defenseless
and innocent beings
have been continuously trapped, clubbed, and skinned
for the infamous fur trade
Thao Chuong
2015-07-30
Note: Those animals often suffer a slow death, simply because shooting them (for an instant death) would destroy the fur.
8 Years Ago
Days are long but Life is short. Make the best of the time you've been given. – the quote postedby Julie Senf 22 hours Ago
Thank you very much, Julie Senf.
Here is a humorous thought of mine generated by Julie’s inspiring quote for your restful weekend
Waiting Is Killing
Even “Just For a Sec” as She Always Requests
hour
after hour
impatiently waited
I
felt
as if
time was dead
it was quite late
I was afraid
she would forget
almost gave up
about to leave
but
lucky me
lastly she came
for our first date
seeing her smiles
my worried mind
became blank
my excited heart
stopped beating
my lifeless life
alive again
since that time on
she has made my days long
way too long
and much longer
than they would be
sometime longest
likely I’m stuck
with her favorite quote
almost daily
“wait for a sec”
life is too short
I’m happy
to take its best
and so pleased
having my days
stretched longer
so I’ve learned
how to make
my day better
in endless waits
either for “just a sec”
or for her sex
Thao Chuong
2015-07-31
8 Years Ago
Description: This is a drawing of my daughter! She is one of my favorite subjects! She is now a grown woman but will always be my little girl She is a dreamer and my big adventurer! She has grown into a beautiful and wonderful woman! This 8x10 was done on Strathmore drawing paper with Berol Turquoise 2H pencil gradually moving through the ranges and finishing the detail with 4B
8 Years Ago
Weekend Laugh
(To the dentist who can’t fix his own toothache)
like
Wild-Wild West
of lawless land
the good old days
in United States
heartless bandits
this modern day
roaming around
killing for fun
the worst coward
of all bandits
after shooting
fled the scene
hides in his den
the "poor" dentist
nothing
more pain
than a toothache
lions world-wide
roam in the wild
soar in anger
“we need neither
his mindless head
nor the thick skin
from his emotionless face
bring him back
alive and well
we're in need
of seeing him
for good clean
of our itchy teeth”
Poe Ed
2015-07-31
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Another great poem--always appreciate our collaborations. It's nice to see that in the face of your apparent sensitive, kind outlook you can still look at horrors and injustices with an objective eye. I, too, try to follow that path, if not as optimistically as you. "The Mass Process of Meaningless Animal Slaughter," 1986, was the first large-scale piece I did on the subject--it has been exhibited just once--I tend to get resistance, especially in places where the marketing of art is aimed at wealthy people, who may perhaps own those very same furs I condemn.
In my book, "Agnello by Agnello," I wrote, "Here, certain animals assume the look of dogs, but they appear other-worldly, with unnatural, inventive coloring, born from an unrecognizable species. White furry animals hang in the background, eyes blackened with death. Blood drips from paws, feet, and hands, staining walls and floors with the mark of crucified life. The frontal woman’s white fur remains “unharmed,” clean and preserved for formal dress. Her stoic facial expression with closed eyes, capped with a short butch hairstyle, ices her detachment from the carnage that fuels the symbol for egotistical wealth occurring behind her."
8 Years Ago
Wow! Ken,
I always enjoy the deep insight about your related work that you've provided. Thanks
8 Years Ago
"It Was So Hot Today, Even The Clouds Were Sweating"
by Michael Hoard
Cheers, Michael Hoard Principal Actor, Artist and Photographer
8 Years Ago
Good morning Michael
Thank you for sharing your humor that lifted up my mood last night. Here is my joke inspired by your thought. Have an easy weekend, Michael
Photography Description: Copyright Warning Do Not Alter My Photographers Notes:This amazing photo was achieved by using a hand held lens and manually focussing until I obtained the image as you see it. It does have a surreal feeling about it. The dark shadow in the mid right section of the photo is the actual piston of the flower, it was an extreme sunny day and the sunlight was filtering through the petals. At that particular time I was unable to obtain a macro lens so I had done some experimental attempt of actually having one attached to the camera. The particular photo also had a celestial appeal to it. The photo also has a abstract look to it. There are many variety's of the Canna Plant. The blooms are delicate to winds and rain. They bloom shades of peach, to yellow to reds and are multi-colored as well. This is one of many personal favorites.
WARNING: Joke ONLY for ADULTS. Nudity and coarse language. Readers’ discretion is advised -LOL
So Hot Last Night
too hot
last night
like an oven
setting in broil
the bed in high heat
even the top sheet
soggily sweated
both were naked
turned back and forth
couldn’t sleep
for many hours
two pieces of meat
well-done
over-cooked
to charcoal burnt
still awake
she
started
complaining
“when would this end?
we must stop it”
then
pulled my hand
put on her thigh
moved it inside
further inside
'til it got wet
and said to me
“doncha feel it?
too hot, honey!
I’m in heat
so are you
in high fever
why not do it
to cool ourselves ”
many hours later
the bed was wet
both were sweated
turned up and down
too tired to breath
still too hot
awake whole night
I asked myself
“more heat added
how would it end?
Thao Chuong
2015-08-01
8 Years Ago
“you can close one eye—but can you wash your blood stained hands?” – quote by Neo-expressionist Kenneth Agnello
Noble Reasons For Mass Killings
you could ignore the suffering hell of someone else’s
and sleep well
every
night
by
having your eyes tightly closed
and
refuse
not to see unbearable sufferings
having yours ears completely shut
and
decline
not to hear moaning sound
echoed from tormenting hell
from those dying victims
of your killing
spree
you could carefully clean your hands and clear your conscience
to
deny
you have nothing to do with what’s going on
also
you could convince yourselves
why you must do this or do that
with millions of noble reasons
such as
in self-defense
for the need of survival
for protection of freedom
in best interest of your nation
in the name of your God
or for whatever that fits you the most
however
it’s impossible
to remove blood spill
already
mixed into your food and drink
permanently tainted your own blood
and contaminated your entire life
Thao Chuong
2015-08-1
8 Years Ago
Summer Moonlight On Langford Lake
up
high
in clear sky
a silver moon’s shining
in the cold water
another moon’s downing
deep down
to
the
dark
bottom
a lone canoe slowly glides on the silver surface
its paddling sound intermittently breaks
the mystic silence
on Langford lake
late
at night
probably
feels annoyed
a fowl bird raises its sharp voice in protest
then flaps its wings to gain the momentum
and quickly
takes
off
does
any human
who regains a brief moment for his inner peace from the hectic modern living
have any light thought about
potential impacts
on others
from
what he does daily?
Thao Chuong
2015-08-02
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day
Art Of the Extreme
hate or love
let
art go
with its own flow
feel free
to call an artist
a genius
an insane man
or whatever you prefer
but
please
leave art be as is
no border line
should
be
drawn
for a creative mind
no limit
should be set
in the infinite universe
for wild imagination
otherwise
the world could only view mass production
commercialized
and created
by
those minds
accurately formed
from the same artistic molding
Thao Chuong
2015-08-02
8 Years Ago
Love your summer moonlight Viet.
Surge Ahead
Office blocks laying empty
More built, company' move
Whole commercial blocks
desolate, bare,
Ghost town
Demand for affordable housing
Carving up the green belt
Rare newts and endangered bats
moved, into
smaller
spaces
Affordable houses built for the rich
Or schemes for shared buying
More houses needed
More green belt taken
brown belt
still a silent
ghost town
More modern office space required
The last lot built are emptying
like a bucket with a hole
All moved into the modern
Sleek, designs
More affordable housing needed
More green belt gone
Foxes and their dens
buried in their silent graves
Rabbits in their burrows
trapped, dug over.
Pushed to the tops of the mountains
Or pockets of uninhabitable land
by humans
left, as
their only
shelter.
JEM 020815
8 Years Ago
@ Natalie Holland Thank you very much. We haven't contacted much after we published our book of collaboration: Exotic Dreams. Nice to have you dropping by with your nice words. Enjoy a good summer in New York.
@ Jane McGowen: Thank again for sharing another provoking poem of yours. You have generated some thought for my empty mind (lol). Have a good day!
8 Years Ago
A Moment of Loss from a Blackout
power outage
buries
me
my
body
myself
my mind
in darkness
I become utterly blinded
so
I can
see nothing
but only black and black
surrounded
me
I
totally
get lost
somewhere
inside a labyrinth of thought
I really wanna get some help
to find my way out
now
nonetheless, I don’t know
what’s the damned word
I’m looking
for?”
how
could
I spit it out
to ask everyone
for the right direction?
Thao Chuong
2015-08-02
8 Years Ago
My Sundry Thought After Taoist Chuang-tzu’s Thought
when you win a debate
and I lose
it
may not
be necessary
that you are right and I am wrong
on
the contrary
if I’m lucky to be the winner
no
guarantee
that I am right and you’re wrong
regardless
the outcome
of our argument
it could be possible that both of us are wrong
but
who knows
both of us could be right at the same time
simply
because
each of us could look at different angle of the same issue
regardless
who win or lose
the truth is what it is
neither the winner nor the loser can change it
to
fit
into
his own agenda
in that regards
I’d prefer to retreat and lose a debate for my own inner peace
you could call me
selfish
cowardice
or whatever you’d like
I’m sorry
I never wanna win a war in my entire life
Thao Chuong
2015-08-03
8 Years Ago
Axe Murderer
Look out!
Run!
Here he comes
dragging his axe.
He drags it because
he is so evil & stupid
he cannot hold it up
Unlike the whistling woodcutter
who lives in the little log house.
Chop chop, chop chop
goes the axe.
Eek! O my God!
Say the trees and the women.
All this goes on
in the forest.
So you can relax.
Sharon Thesen
@ 1999
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane. Always nice to have sweet dreams
My thought of the day
Of His, Hers, Theirs, Yours, or Mine
taking time off
from the hectic world-on-line
not
being alone
as we share the deck
but quite a peaceful retreat!
absolutely
no conflict
I rest on my back
he lays on his belly
I enjoy my beer
he loves his bone
very relax
no war of words
we say nothing to each other
all of a sudden
here
comes
the neighbour’s cat
hopping down from the fence
he barks
and rushes to chase her
he knocks the beer off my hand
the shattered sound of glass against concrete serves as a warning signal
that
another war has just started
like any other wars
it takes away my peaceful time of the day
I’m tired of witnessing someone else’s fight
I’d
rather
get back to my own bloody dog-and-cat battle
in one of those regular wars
of endless words
online
Thao Chuong
2015-08-04
8 Years Ago
Weapons Plead Not Guilty In Any Slaughter
for
an arrow
to penetrate into flesh
a bow must be pulled and released
for
a bomb
to be dropped and exploded for mass destruction
a button
must be pressed
a trigger
must be squeezed
for a bullet to hit its target
all
of those above
always require a human’s hand and his intent to kill
otherwise weapons would sit idle and could do no harm
nonetheless
whether, a weapon is guilty or guiltless for its role in a killing
is another separate issue
totally up to
you
to judge
Thao Chuong
2015-08-04
8 Years Ago
Harvesting the Crop Of the Wild
I- The Berry Picker
thorns stick into his flesh
it hurts
the child cries
he sucks his sore fingers
then
licks
both hands
to clean pinkish blood stains from juicy blackberry
Thao Chuong
2015-08-05
8 Years Ago
Harvesting the Crop Of the Wild
II- And the Trophy Harvester
he smiles then pulls the trigger
his
ego soars
each time a target of his gets hit and falls down
he chops
he skins
he harvests the trophy
he leaves the meat rotten, b’cause
he kills for fun
not
for food
he
the grim reaper
who has no brain
feels no pain
who has no heart
has no compassion
his eyes blinded
his brain dead
he don’t see
he don’t know
his hands fully painted with the blood
from his senseless and endless killings
Thao Chuong
2015-08-05
8 Years Ago
Today we remember Hiroshima, the 70th anniversary of a ghastly event that helped end the horrific war in Asia in which millions had died, WW2.
The Bomb
First there was light
sound
and fire
as the blast tore...
"A bomb was dropped!!"
One big monster
The bomb of bombs
The bomb of all
Bloody wars
A city gone
destroyed by wind
and fired sin
http://rationalexaminer.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/07/Hiroshima.jpg
This story is
of human kind
a history
remember it
deeds to shun
to leave behind
the endless
endless wars
of human kind
the bitter minds
Paths of rubble
mankind's wars
conflict
endless troubles
killings of the killing minds
torrents from
the demons
this darkness seems to darkly shine
With hate in souls
The malice
these chains -
with us
the slaves
chains of war so intertwine
Give peace the chance
Share the peace
And share the wins
Leave behind the
Monster's sins
The Wins of Peace
Outweigh
The winds of war!
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Thanks for your reminder, Jason. You give me a lot of somber thoughts for today. (Enjoy a peaceful time).
Another lesson forgotten.
A Lesson To Remember
(The rerun of Vietnam War peace talks)
they absolutely didn’t need to lift their fingers up
as
the thermostat took good care of the job
turning the heat on when it was cold
and switching to air-conditioner when it was hot
someone always served coffee, tea, wine
and whatever required
before they
asked
the room
was
so
fresh
with fragrance of flowers in the air
so
cozy
with comfy chairs around two square and a round tables
they were very safe and sound in Paris
too far away from fierce battles in Vietnam
they had had no reason to be in a hurry
and no motive to speed up
the process
they drank, they smoked, they talked about peace
they sat the opposite side
so
close to see winkles on each other`s face
but they were thousands
of miles
apart
they were worst enemies
yet they still shook hands
and smiled like
good friends
after a long time
no see
it had taken them over a half year to discuss and agree upon what type of table that could be used for the talk
negotiations had been on and off for many years
while the war kept
accelerating
at its high
speed
indeed
as peace talkers
they didn’t worry too much
as fighting the war was someone else’s job
moreover
neither
they had heard popping sounds of riffles Carbine, M16, AK47…
exploding blasts of claymores, grenade launchers, heavy howitzers, missiles…
rumbling sounds in the sky by SkyRaiders, DragonFlies, Falcons Phantoms, B52, Cobras…
nor
they had experienced anguishes of the dying, the wounded, and the loss of lives
they did not witness blood, body parts, dead people scattered everywhere
they
neither saw burning the sea of Napalm on jungles, mountains, rice fields, and destruction of houses, villages, towns, cities…
nor felt the sufferings of millions of refugees on their own homeland
regrettably
for
-about a half million Vietnamese civilians
-nearly three hundred thousand soldiers of the South Vietnamese Army
-over one million combatants of the North Communist Junta
-and fifty-eight thousand two hundred and twenty American troopers
it was too late for them
to know how peace
really
was
when the Paris Accords were reached
if the war had been ended sooner
majority of the dead must have been still survived
and might have enjoyed
their peaceful lives
up to
now
a lesson to remember
whatever war for any reason is never a solution
and absolutely not
needed
Thao Chuong
2015-03-8
8 Years Ago
Wars - Can any lesson be learned?
My sundry thought of the day.
Darkest Moments of Man
( August 6 & August 9, 1945)
louder than thunder
brighter than lightning
hotter than the hell of god
worse than the doomsday of man
no
human's language
would have enough words to describe destructive horrors
when atomic bombs
detonated
over
Hiroshima
then Nagasaki
a new order had to be re-established
the world map must be re-drawn
for
the newly rising
Roman Empire
as always, the winner has kept his strong grip of justice
therefore
those devils-in-command
who committed those cowardice acts of genocide
have never been tried for their worst war crimes against innocent civilians in the mankind’s history
Thao Chuong
2015-08-06
8 Years Ago
Question Without Answer
Everyone dreams of peace
Most of us prefer
to make love
not war
Nonetheless
blood has been continuously spilled on earth
Would one day man achieve his dream?
Thao Chuong
2015-08-06
8 Years Ago
Viet, Very moved by your poem A Lesson to Remember, and knowing how close to your heart the conflicts were/are.....never to be forgotten.
Have a relaxing weekend 😉
8 Years Ago
Maria. Thank you very much for dropping by and leaving your thought. Sometimes, I lose my desire for poetry as I feel no words could be used to express human's sufferings from wars. Have a ncie day.
I re-post a poem of mine written about the two atomic bombs detonated over Hiroshima and Nagasaki.
The Road To The Nuclear
(Nuke 'em Dead)
Killing unarmed civilians “en masse”
with a weapon of mass destruction
is
a war crime
against humanity
So far
fortunately
it has happened only twice in the human’s history of wartime
It was the doomsday of man
in
combination
with the hell of god
the blast of blinding light engulfed the earth
followed by a huge mushroom of smoke blackening sky and the sun
no one survived
and nothing left
on its path
Hiroshima
eight fifteen a.m.
August sixth nineteen forty five
eighty thousand civilians
instantly exterminated
three days later
Nagasaki
eleven o two a.m.
about forty thousand residents
immediately
slaughtered
at once
after
the genocide
at the Pentagon
they raised the glass and cheer aloud
for their successful tests of the newly developed weapon on live human beings
Truman
U.S. President proudly announced to his nation and the world
“It is an atomic bomb. It is a harnessing of the basic power of the universe.
The force from which the sun draws its power has been loosed against those who brought war to the Far East.”
however
Robert Oppenheimer
the "father of the atomic bomb
regrettably declared: “Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds”
nowadays
with over 16,000 nuclear warheads
much more than enough to wipe out everything on the earth
is
there
any hope left
for mankind’s survival
on the road of self-destruction?
Thao Chuong
2015-04-30
8 Years Ago
Man and Mouse
Your fate is in my hands
I am bigger and stronger than you
you have no choice
I am in full control
I have earned my title of King
I have spent my every waking hour on developing my power
I can crush you like a little mouse in my hand
The mouse has a different fate in the hands of the gentle warrior
Jim Taylor 8/10/15
8 Years Ago
Thank you for sharing your poem Jim and your thought Karyn Robinson.
Description: I will leave this up to you. Is the sun about to rise on a new day, or is it kissing the desert goodnight?
I've lived in Arizona for nearly 25 years and the beauty of the desert continues to stir something inside me. I suppose it's an acquired taste, but I do believe we have some of the most beautiful sunsets in the world.
I tamed the orange, pinks and reds of an Arizona sunset down in this painting. Here I tried to capture the love affair between Heaven and Earth. The hot blooded sands of the desert floor are cooled by the billowing clouds overhead and in the twilight of the day the coyotes, snakes and lizards rejoice.
Drought
It’s too dry
The ground becomes powdery
Wind blows and throws dirt all over their faces
They haven’t taken a bath or any wash for many weeks
All have been patiently waiting for its turn
They could see it from the distance
slowly moving closer and loser
from a long line-up
of
row
and row
of sunny days
Finally
thirsty trees
and dried bushes
also brown lawn and vegetable beds
joyfully cheer
here
it comes
But
not exactly
as expected
only a slight shower
spaying less water than from a garden hose
barely
enough
to wet dehydrated leaves
They sigh
and
have no choice
but continue to await
would they survive until a heavy downpour arrives?
Thao Chuong
2015-08-10
8 Years Ago
Medusa
by Carravagio
My thought for today (true free speech)...
In humanity, is there ever a truly good vs evil conflict? or a completely right vs a completely wrong situation? perhaps, in fact - it is dangerous to think in such fake "pure" terms? - that take us nowhere...
How did the middle east end up in such bloody disarray with the possibilities of endless escalations?
Who, what and why is a terrorist?
History is important to help us understand where we are today, we cannot understand the paths to the future without knowing what got us here...
All moves from conflict to peace require changes in understandings and a mutual desire... and ultimately a mutual interest in mutual success.. could you envisage Europe in close co-operation as it is today after 2 world wars? tens of millions killed?
Important points about the middle east - terrorists change from time to time
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Balfour_Declaration
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jewish_insurgency_in_Palestine
(just to add, the arabs actually were our allies in defeating the axis powers!)
The rest is modern history...
Beliefs
Believing everyone else is evil
is not a solution
it is simply a factual pollution
All children cry
Children, thousands, have died
Humanity - Endless wars
the endless revolutions
Mass executions
Persecutions
and persecutions....
DO you wipe away all peace
like the tears of night?
the peaceful solutions?
belief in beliefs that are lost in themselves
as populations of hate begin to swell
where will a peace now ever dwell?
have the seeds for endless wars been sown and grown?
Evil beliefs, on all sides, begin to re-grow?
Beliefs in beliefs of beliefs
self righteousness
- a lack of true courageousness?
a peaceful integrity
Human basic necessities
the will for peace
Justice
A two state reality
United in federation
understanding
policed together
for the common peace integrity
a common survival
a common good
a shared success...
could this become reality?
Or do we slip and slip
into the war of all wars
catostrophes
Should we see the ways it could be?
------------
my comment on those who see evil
There is no real face of Medusa
just the face of real people, the world in confusion
Am i right?
or am i wrong?
Are u right?
or are you wrong?
do i know?
do u know?
Free will requires free true desire
for peace
For peace to be...
Unless YOU simply are Medusa!?
©Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
I don't care......
I don't care how beautiful you are
I don't care what religion you are
I don't care what shape you are
I don't care what colour you are
I don't care how smart you are
I don't care how rich you are
I do care
if you don't care
about
people
animals
nature
our environment
our world
LIFE
Love
nurture
empathy
hope
JEM 110815
8 Years Ago
@ Jason Christopher: Thanks for sharing your poem and your unique thoughts on various issues. I myself don't think that there would be any "true free speech". While free speech itself provides freedom for the speakers to express their own thoughts or feelings, free speech doesn't reflect the "truth". In addition, speakers don't always speak freely from their own minds for fear of being judged and boycotted by a powerful group of the public (For example: Mel Gibson -a well-known American movie star had a hard time to mend the fence with the most powerful Jewish community in US for freely expresing from his mind).
Citizens in various democracy countries in the West have been monitored by secrete police for freely expressing their political view points that aren't in line with their governments. FYI: This is my own observation. P{lease be advised that while you are welcomed to share your thought about this issue. It is not an invitation for any further discussion) - Dear Lady Isabel. I am willing to remove this comment of mine , in case you think that the related comment would be interested as a discussion about politic.
@ Jane McGowen: Thank you for sharing your provoking poem.
Have a good time to all.
8 Years Ago
About a Nation’s Allies and Enemies
And of the People’s Friends and Foes
On a broad scope
between different nations
friendship
is absolutely relative
it keeps changing on an unpredictable basis
and mainly depends on the best interest at each period of her foreign policy
unlike
the regular practice
of a woman in the routine of her own monthly period
for
each country
her best allies in the past could be her current worst enemies
whom she wants to terminate badly
On
a personal level
we are neither friends nor foes
as
strangers
you have no clue about me
and I know nothing about you
let
alone
to hate and love
or to be against each other
you could be a tourist in my home town
we would sit at the same table in a pub
raise a glass
and cheer to our health
however
we might do the opposite
as
citizens
of two nations at war
we would have no choice
but
fight
face to face
and shoot to kill in a battle
it’s very obvious
that
you and I
as normal people
are merely the victims of those devils-in-power
who put our nations at war for the best
interests
of
the rich
the governing class
and their own greedy selves
Thao Chuong
2015-08-11
8 Years Ago
whilst we're on truths lets have a complete mind dump...
Truths, truths and truths...
Absolutely Viet, free speech that does not give us the full intricate truth, is a bastardisation of free speech! Having said that, elucidating truths can be painful and delicate and people might often scream out in pain "lies"... perhaps even some have their own agendas to distort and fabricate "free" speech.. history should never be distorted... i listen to and read many different sources of information.. how we step through the minefield will decide how we make it to the other side. Truths or a quagmire of deceptions? How do you the reader see yourself? truth monger or fool monger?
The common man stands up and speaks -
"i can listen to all points of view and research truths for my self, i have a well balanced and objective mind, i shun all prejudice and shall root it out from within myself where ever i find it, i don't need to have pr, synthesised truths nor groups of people dump their crap on me to get a way scot free in their own schemes and prejudices".
Intelligence services/secret police have a job to do, but say some members have other affiliations be they religious or political or personal and abuse the trust and power they have? Its one thing fighting terrorism, corruption, crime for which we praise them, but who polices the secret police if they become corrupt or sinister and run other agendas?
But equally, are there other operations, other secret bodies of people who snoop through the internet, sharing their tactics and information, perhaps a mass of people who act against an individual or government and take delight in doing so? How repugnant would that be.. Even treacherous? Who watches them?
Jane - you capture and show the hearts of most people in an educated modern age of near enlightenment
8 Years Ago
The latest truth on margarine?
apparantly it increases heart disease according to a news report from an article in the British Medical Journal, whereas Butter and eggs do not! (to be verified of course)
well oh well. everything turns upside down, then back over, who knows, but i need to find out as i like eggs and cant stand margarine and luckily dont eat it, i like butter but avoid it more than once a week..
just a thought for today
8 Years Ago
Before Pharmaceuticals and Shares
There was no need to reinvent the wheel
Food did what it should
Before Pesticides
Before steroids
before Antibiotics
before being genetically modified
Now you need double the dose
to get the nutrients you need
Whilst you have your fill of
Pesticides
Steroids
Antibiotics
and God knows what
You are addicted to sugars
and transfats
You are sicker than you used to be
Cancers are one in two
while they are making money
they will not stop
Going back to organic, natural
Food contained exactly
what we needed
But they needed to make money
and so made us sick
JEM 120815
8 Years Ago
@ Jason. Thank you very much for raising different issues from the freedom of speech, beliefs, war and peace, conflicts in the Middle East, the truth, etc. Your unique perspectives on those issues have made me think a lot. I appreciate your time for doing it. I have learned a lot from other poets/artists who are thought provokers. I always enjoy reading their points of view or their thoughts. whether I share the same points of view with them or not.
@ Aimee L Maher: Sorry to hear about your friend’s short line on earth. Thanks for sharing your nice poem.
@ Oh Jane: Another poem of yours has blown the hat off my bald head (-lol). What can I say when I am taking those pills everyday to keep myself alive (lol)
Have a good night to all
8 Years Ago
Hi Aimee.
Here is my thought about your friend Karl.
Dream of a Butterfly
(my thought after Taoist Chuang Tzu's dream of being a butterfly)
he is a butterfly
living in a world of multi-dimensions
one day
in his sound sleep
he dreams of being a man
wandering into this life
having fun
for awhile
suddenly
his dream is interrupted
he
wakes up
flaps his wings
looks around
and murmurs:
“what an amazing dream!”
then
he sighs and exclaims
“oh
it sucks
back to nectar again
I’m tired of it
no more morning coffee
how could I start a good new day?”
Thao Chuong
2015-08-12
8 Years Ago
@ Maria Masella: Music is a good medicine for stress. I could imagine how hard you job would be as nurses often work long shift and have to witness the other people's sufferings. I could see that your art has been used as a way of meditation for you.
@ Saigon: Long time no see, brother. How has life been treating you and your family?
8 Years Ago
"whilst we're on truths lets have a complete mind dump...
Truths, truths and truths... " Jason Christopher
Here is my late reply to your thought about Truth
The Truth
Truth is not what you believe it is
but
what really is in its own nature
Truth is more attractively luring
than
a sexy lady in a two tiny piece bikini on a sunny beach
Both
generates
a great temptation
for further exploration
until everything is fully revealed
However
while an unclothed woman is perfect for sex
The naked truth would do more harm than good
why on earth does everyone of us demand the truth
and nothing
but
the truth
Thao Chuong
2015-08-13
8 Years Ago
Medium: Painting - Acrylic On Canvas
Why’s So Serious?
stress
depress
good luck
bad luck
and
everything else
in this life
at home and at work
come and go
at the flow of time
even ourselves
eventually
Why’s so serious?
what’s happing
in an office
in a bedroom
in real life
or online
seems very important
at this moment
yet it won’t be that bad
within the next hour
Why’s so serious?
the sky is not falling
it ain’t the end of the world
take a break
and relax
Why’s so serious?
don’t let it take your days away
by the way
say cheese
with a big smile
you’re on camera
Thao Chuong
2015-08-14
8 Years Ago
My sundry thought today
Why Must I Not Criticize Someone's Mistake?
whenever I'm aware of someone's grave error in his judgment
I often try to find something
valuable to learn
from
it
I
consider
those who have given me
lessons at free of charge
as my best teachers
'cause
they have helped me save my time
especially
my own sweat and blood
I wonder
why
sometimes
I become too blindly excited to criticize someone for his own mistake
instead
shouldn't I provide him with my thanks and appreciation
for giving me his precious lesson
that has helped me save
my own
skin
Thao Chuong
2015-08-15
8 Years Ago
The Most Urgent Moment
he has been walking around
in downtown core
for
about
a half hour or so
he could hear the wailing sound of an ambulance
coming closer and closer at his back
it's an emergency
unfortunately, he has yet found
the place
that
he's lookin' for
the load has become too heavy to carry
he's profoundly sweated
and feels
as if
it would have lasted forever and he would no longer be able to hold it back
he's about to give up
luckily
he sees the right place at the end of the block
he sighs in great relief
and runs as fast as
he could
he
stops
in front of the old brick wall
inside a narrow alley at the back of a Chinese restaurant
all of a sudden
before he could unzip, take it out, and spray freely
the cracking dam could no more hold onto itself
water's busted out
flooded
all
over
he feels his hand warm and his pants wet
what a joyful relief!
way much better than an orgasm!
he soothingly whistles his new song lyrics
"nothing is more urgent
than the call
of nature"
Thao Chuong
2015-08-16
8 Years Ago
Good evening
I'd like to share with you six short stories which were sent to my personal email account today. Have a good time.
SIX LITTLE STORIES
{1} Once all villagers decided to pray for rain. On the day of prayer all the people gathered, but only one boy came with an umbrella.
That's FAITH
{2} When you throw a baby in the air, she laughs because she knows you will catch her.
That's TRUST
{3} Every night we go to bed, without any assurance of being alive the next morning but still we set the alarms to wake up.
That's HOPE
{4} We plan big things for tomorrow in spite of zero knowledge of the future.
That's CONFIDENCE
{5} We see the world suffering, but still we get married and have children.
That's LOVE
{6} On an old man's shirt was written a sentence 'I am not 80 years old.... I am sweet 16 with 64 years’ experience'
That's ATTITUDE
8 Years Ago
Of Faith and Belief
you've openly declared endless times
you
strongly
believe in God
however
you have constantly sent your prayers to Him
and request for His personal intervention
each time
you're in sickness
you're distressed
you're depressed
or you have a minor problem
is it your greed or your insecure need?
which drives you so insane
to bother Him and disturb His peace
on
a regular basis
why would strong believers like you
have lost so much trust in your God
and often
forget
that
you are always safe and sound in His almighty hands?
in despite of your belief
it is likely
you
have
no faith
in God at all
Thao Chuong
2015-08-16
8 Years Ago
Freedom
The sky was crystal... clear ..... blue....
The sun was warm......soothing.....healing...
Hills and moors all around,
Purple heather,
brilliant green ferns,,,
Streams bubbling....babbling brooks
Breathe........, in.........,
Breathe........., out..........,
Breathe......, in........, deep......
Your lungs are filled .....with
Pure....., fresh ......, clean....., clear......, air.
JEM 170815
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing the peaceful moment with nature, Jane, Have a restful day
Here is my Tanka that echoes your natural freedom
A Summer Morning (Tanka)
wind's in canopy
sunlight's dancing on treetop
joyful song lyrics
echoed in fresh morning air
birds celebrate their new day
Thao Chuong
2015-08-18
8 Years Ago
Another echo to to Jane poem Freedom
Tanka: Her Peaceful Moment
patches of white cloud
like cotton on blue ocean
up high in clear sky
freely flow into nowhere
she lets go even herself
Thao Chuong
2015-08-12
8 Years Ago
Good morning Viet,
thank you for the poem, that has relaxed me nicely for the day ahead.
Have a good day yourself.
Relax
Take it easy
Enjoy the moments
X
8 Years Ago
I am listening to a man who had an american flag
thrown in his face
before it had been set alight
by a sub incontinenal indian summer cum laude
boston:two lovers walking hand in dog
along the beach noticing an old hotel
gonna pull it down just as well anyhow
foreign tourist with chicago in ears
peter's there a man in me
no that was north career
competition between new york and salem
3000 to 3 so far
say god bi to holy wood my baby
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jane and Campbell. Have a restful day.
@ Campbell Bailey: Thanks for sharing your poetic writings. You have reminded of poet Jason Christopher who has the similar way of twisting the English language.
8 Years Ago
I am listening to a man who had an american flag
thrown in his face
before it had been set alight for
by a sub incontinenal indian summer cum laude
posted by Campbell Bailey - 7 hours ago
Here is my echo (sorri Jason for mi infringement of yur copyri- lol)
A-mare- irked -cans' f 'legs
I sea a man in the see of a-mare-irked-cans' fl'eggs
He wairs a peace of rag
with stars and stripes
on his ass
d'ring
e rally
4
piece
Poe Ed
2015-08-19
8 Years Ago
I am liking the language use here...
it is no wonder it is said that the English language is one of the
worst to learn
With its
Threw the basket went the blew ball
Which he court on the caught
and
He said the mine was mine
Whilst he carried the arms in his arms
and
Whilst the son shone on his sun
He nose his knows is large
and
He capers with his capers
and taps his taps
then
he gets site of his sight
and picks his picks
he
Cheques his checks
and leaves his leaves
oh my what a tangled web we weave lol
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jane. Thanks for sharing your humour. I "red"(read) your poem yesterday and I "read" (read) it again today. This simple verb read makes me think how tricky spelling could be in the English language.
Have a nice day and nice ni
8 Years Ago
Mi joke of todie about spelling in English
Their Plight on a Flight
first
they thot
they cot a cold from the cold
while slept on a caught a under a beach tree
by the sandy beech
instead
they got that worst flew
maybee,
the virus came from a fly that flu on same the flight
when they flu
from Nu Yuck to Tax-ass
two bad
after dad
they coughed so hard
and they new four sure
it wasn't a good knew four for of them
at
two -to-two to two-two am
they
through threw their car windo
a playboy magazine full of nu
then tuke the holy buke
and red four- hundred times four the hole weak
they hop god has never forgod to save there sinful soul
why not let it bee wot it wud bee?
Thao Chuong
2015-08-20
8 Years Ago
Sea I new you no what I was talking about.. Definitely worse wid a code in de node. When you ale flew is know good . You sheik all over and poor sweat. You feel like you are dyeing.
you knead to take yourself to bed with a tablet and a tablet. x
8 Years Ago
Right and Wrong
neither a matter of right or left
nor an issue of wrong or right
it's alright
as he has all rights
to
decide
which path
he prefers to follow
after
holding his fate
in his own hands
by turning either left or right
he'd better accept whatever consequence from his own decision
otherwise, it becomes a matter of right and wrong
no longer alright
for his rights
to point the middle finger at, and blame, someone else
for
his
own
action
also
he'd better learn how to correct his own mistake
instead
of sending
endless prayers
to beg his God for forgiveness
Thao Chuong
2015-08-21
8 Years Ago
If there is a God.....
If there is a God
Looking down on each of us
What would he feel
Hope
or
dispair
Would he be pleased with what we've done
With what we have achieved
With what we have created
Would he see
love
and
nurturing
Caring
and
sharing
or would He see
wrath
greed
sloth
pride
lust
envy
gluttony
All the seven deadly sins?
JEM 210815
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane. You've made me think about religion. I'd better find my lost god (lol). Have a good day
Uniqueness of Each Human Being
whether a man is smart or silly
there
is always
a valuable lesson
that could be taken either from his wisdom
or
even
from his silliness
wouldn't it be nice to acknowledge each human for his own uniqueness?
Thao Chuong
2015-08-21
8 Years Ago
Description
Emergence of God the Father; 2014, oil on canvas, 50 inches x 33 inches.
Do you really know the right God, or are you just a sponge for all you've been taught by blind tradition? Perhaps the spirit of a better life is all around you, can hit you by surprise, catches you half-naked, grabs you unprepared through its onslaught, but falls within no political denomination. Religious wars, religious righteousness, they are pompous, silly in the real scheme of things, or they not? In the end, what does it matter--the shirtless man in the picture will be entombed and covered with the same dirt as he who follows.
Look up, look around. Instant Karma awakens us all, perhaps rudely. By Kenneth Agnello
My thought from Kenneth Agnello's art and an echo to Jane's poem If There Is a God...
There Must Be a God
somehow i think
deep inside the hearts
of those believers
there must be a god
for them to adore
for them to trust
for them to respect
for them to worship
somewhat i assume
at least inside the mind
of those believers
there must be a god
for them to dream
for them to imagine
for them to hope
for them to expect
Yet
i have witnessed
many believers
have no faith at all
believe it or not
the belief they hold
Nothing about God
Just
About Themselves
for their own greed
for their own skin
for their benefit
for their own interest
it makes me believe
whether true or not
inside those believers
there must be no god
But
Only a Satan
to whom they've sent
their endless prayers
to exchange their souls
for His forgiveness
of their daily sins
Thao Chuong
2015-08-22
8 Years Ago
My weekend's joke
Where Are You Poets?
long time no hear
long time no see
long time no talk
long time no read
long time no write
what's going on?
are you lost
in the wood
or in the labyrinth
of mystical words?
or
do you hit
your head hard at,
and get stuck in,
the writing block?
it's likely
poetry is dying
where are you poets?
throw some of
your wet words
into the dried poetic well
please wake up
from your long hiatus
otherwise
poets would be considered
an endangered species
of modern poetry
Poe Ed
2015-08-22
8 Years Ago
Viet my poetic friend
lets’s pretend
for the moment
that i'm a poet too
and not just a fool
that scribbles this
and scribbles that
when it’s my turn up to bat
in this game of words brought
from inner thought
by me you see
into the light of day
because of what you say
so all that read may
know me more
much less
probably for the best
so here am i
just passing through
as i sometimes do
i read your thread
and the question you pose
where’s the poet and his prose
then realized i have no poem
to contribute to your tome
so i looked to the past
and found the last
one written i fear
January of this year
so if i may
here it is i say
revised a bit to fit
your question of the day...
having not written for some time
as i was not inclined
to do just that until today
so i type away with nothing to say
and here it is my first attempt
to represent
what cluttered thought
you have brought
to the surface of my mind
i thank you many times in kind
my mind roams free
as it will be
gathering thoughts
too jumbled to sort
will it be love
is it war
or just a sport
in this poem
if it can be called such
it isn’t much
difficulty trying to rhyme
all the time
but to find a sign
of what’s in my mind
that needs to be said
about the truths i
dread one by one and all
upon the path i chose
fearing to lose
all so near so dear
but not so so clear
as to define my being
from this moment gone
from my seeing
the truth as it is
here at hand
my plan
did not
work
no...
i'm so sorry Poe
don't you know
it's the best i can
do
Ed Meredith
moments ago...
8 Years Ago
Welcome Ed - My Poet
my dear poet Ed
it's likely my...
...damned joke
on weekend
might scratch
on your itchy back
you've yawned
and said " dammit
- no fun at all"
then shouted aloud:
" who lets the dog out
to bother my god!"
it was me
the silly fool
who woke you up
nice to see to you
welcome back
to your own world
of lively words
at least
another poet
has just taken his name
off the damned list
of endangered species
who dares say poetry is dead?
Poe Ed
2015-08-22
8 Years Ago
Viet, your grandson's photos are a DELIGHT!!
Echo to Poe’s; Weekend's joke - "Where Are You Poets"
slumbering
i let all the words run out onto the floor
of inaction
only to be awakened once again
by the keeper of the medium pointing
to the jumble of letters
that lie at my feet
"place them where they belong"
he said gently
"and let me help you
find the way… have you heard the one where two poets go into a bar and…”
Ed Meredith
2015-08-22
8 Years Ago
Another Epitaph
. Only the Poet is Dead
. . Not the Poetry
Here lies the poet
may he rest on his laurels
for he died trying
to think
of a way not to
Ed Meredith
2015-08-22
8 Years Ago
Haa...A lot of fun today, Nice weekend my friend poet Ed.
Poets Ain't Dead
I naively wonder which one is on life support
in a hospital bed
those poets
or poetry
or both?
don't
lie to me
you're well alive and quite happy
you lie somewhere on a sandy beach
all
you're thinking of
at this moment
is
about
the absolute silence
in your mind
no thought in words of any language
but
calmness
stillness
serenity
harmony
tranquility
for
your own inner peace
now I know
neither the poets
nor poetry
is
dead
it's only perceptive
of
my
silly mind
about the reality
Thao Chuong
2015-08-22
8 Years Ago
Poetry Words
Nothing but a load of words
Letters like flocks of birds
Flapping around
making a sound
Stick 'em in a line
Hope it will be fine
The words are all mine
Caught just in time
Hope they all rhyme
Someone may read
it may plant a seed
Let it be said
Poetry is not dead
JEM 220815
8 Years Ago
Creative Coma
My pen lays
lethargic
upon empty paper.
My words are clotted
curdled clumps
clogging up Creativity.
Sour milk
in a stagnant mind.
Karen Newell
8/23/15
8 Years Ago
Thank you Jane and Karen.
The Good Old Days
they always say good about
"the good old days"
not easy for me
to
know
what they really mean
when saying it
and how they define "the good old days"
as
i'm getting older
everything is faded
into the far side
of my foggy mind
I often forget
"what's the date today"
for
sure
someday
everything will be sucked
into the black hole
of my own memory
maybe
one day
no longer
I remember
my own name
and who I am
let alone about
"the good days"
by the way
"what day is today?"
Thao Chuong
2015-08-22
8 Years Ago
My Sunday's joke in response to Karen's poem Creative Coma
Is Your Poetry Really in Coma?
I truly believe
it's
neither a comma
that indicates a brief pause in a sentence
nor a coma
that pushes your mind into a rest in peace
and
certainly not an arrest
that leads to a death sentence
for
your
poetry
unlike
a sentence hits its full stop by a period
it's
only
a comma
which temporarily paralyzes your words for a short period
nonetheless
it's the same
as
your monthly period
which often makes you feel uncomfortable for a sec
whenever it's related to sex
it
ain't
about poetry in a blackout
but about a mind in a short pass-out
during
a power outage
without any power left inside the drunken poet
otherwise
it's fine
with the little fine
that costs you no money
but some poetic moments
anyway
unlike
a train
badly derailed
at its emergency brake
poetry is still fully intact
b'cause it has been hiccuping by a some commas and not by a lethal period.
Thao Chuong
2015-08-23
8 Years Ago
Why Is Modern Art So Bad?
Art
IS
rarely
treasured
by people living in its creating time
Art
created
by those old masters
was either harshly criticized so bad
or rejected as rubbish
in
the past
nowadays
it's worth tons of money
same...
same damned old story is happening
with
Contemporary Art
even
if
you could ride on a time machine
to go much farther into future
you would still hear the same
same
damned
old criticism
"why is Art so bad?"
about whatever created in the time zone you are arriving in
the beauty
of
Art
could only be appreciated
after a couple of hundred years later
when the tsunami of time washes away all rubbish
and all dirt is clearly settled down
to
reveal
some real pearls
and rare diamonds in the world of art
maybe
it's the sole reason
why only those DEAD artists could make billions of bucks
Thao Chuong
2015-08-23
8 Years Ago
Chasing Words
Why do all the good words come while in the shower
Tunes and thoughts seem to flow like the water
I better get out of this sensual sanctuary
Hurry to the nearest paper and pencil
Yes before they disappear into the universal mind
Only to be lost or claimed as anothers find
don’t want the big fish to get away
or the pretty woman to stray
writing with dripping hands with a water soluble graphite pencil
if the words aren't good it may be a nice watercolor grey picture
Jim Taylor 8/23/15
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Nice poem to my "Emergence of God the Father," offering additional words of meaning to my visual presentation. As usual, your attention is most appreciated; your words extend another dimension to the finished product.
Best,
Ken
8 Years Ago
Jim, yes indeed... we take what we can get...
the missing poet
when last seen
this poet kneeling
over a box brimming
of used words
held them high
one by one
only to let them fall
into meaninglessness
Ed Meredith
2015
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jim, Ken, Vanessa, and Ed. Thanks for dropping by to share your unique perspectives which have helped me get out of my tunnel vision of today.
@ Jim: Love your poem Chasing Words. Keep writing and sharing
@Ken: I've been away from your art for awhile. It helps me refresh my perspective about your works.
@ Vanessa: I'd like your art works. They are good and thought provoking
@ Ed: Always nice to interact with you, my friend. I hope to see you more often as in our "good old days"
Have a peaceful day to all
8 Years Ago
Here is my echo to Jim's Chasing Words and Ed's The Missing Poet
The Lost Poet Found -Yet His Poetry Is Still Missing
according to the police report
a one-eyed eye-witness saw the drunken poet leaving the pub
with a long legged
sexy
girl
that night
at two o'clock
the autopsy report has confirmed
the naked corpse found inside the food dumpster
in the dark alley
at the back of a restaurant
in Chinatown
is
not the remains of the missing poet
meanwhile
he is alive
naked
and happily whistling alone
inside a shower stall
of a hotel
at a luxury resort
somewhere in the sunny Caribbean
the poet has been chasing his missing words
from U.S.A., England, Australia, China, and back to Latin America
yet he hasn't found
his lost world
o'
words
maybe
he could find his missing poetry inside himself
instead
of
chasing it
around the world
Poe Ed
2015-08-24
8 Years Ago
Thank You Vanessa.
Always good to see you Ed and another good writing.
Thanks Viet and I always look forward to your writings and echo's.
Good point that your guy finally found his words right inside.
Water soluble graphite pencil work.
Something Fine
First line of a Jackson Browne song.
The papers lie there helplessly
In a pile outside the door
I've tried and tried, but I just can't remember what they're for
The world outside is tugging like a beggar at my sleeve
Oh, that's much too old a story to believe
8 Years Ago
Why Is Modern Art So Bad (2)
Painters of the old days
had to totally
rely
on
pens
pencils
paint brushes
painting knives
colour palettes, easels, canvases
Also
they must acquire a basic knowledge and skills
in painting techniques, anatomy, etc.
Nowadays
not so complicated as it was
somewhat it's easier to create art
as high tech provides more magic tools
to
assist artists
in their creating process
thus it gives the same chance
to everyone in the roulette game
of
becoming
a modern artist
Here's what needed
at
least
a camera
or a laptop
and any other fancy hardware and innovative applications
it's
more
than enough
to help someone wake up
his sleeping artist inside himself
Consequently
the contemporary art world has been flooded
by an increasingly growing crowd
of
millions of folks - the wanna-be-artists around the world
Those "modern artists"
have
no talent
no artistic eyes
no wild imagination
no clue about art in general
except the amazing technical skills to use those new toys
What they've created might be good enough
to be printed en masse
and sold at the most affordable cost
for
the sole purpose
of filling in blank walls
for mega-businesses of household decoration
Certainly
it is required a very sharp eye
to recognize where the beauty lies
as pretty diamonds always hide inside bushy, tall grass
when a stunning flower garden
is taken over
by
wild
weeds
In
that regard
Modern Art still retains its gorgeous magnificence
Thao Chuong
2015-08-24
8 Years Ago
Maud.
The twenty minute sketch
Intense,
Intensely utilising the collaboration of the senses.
To feel the folds of skirt
Softly on the skin
Underneath
To follow the lines of the physical
Whilst willing the unconscious to express
The innermost
Out there, into the outermost regions,
Of space and air and light,
From out of the charcoal darkness
The graphite marks the way,
I smile at the finished piece
I almost see my soul
Buried there
In the tones and marks
And the beautifully rendered shoe
Of the woman waiting
And her restless foot
Inciting.
Maria Disley 2015
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jim… you too.
Viet, after reading your Bad Art #1 and #2, i returned to the thread that inspired those two poems…
then went off to view the artworks of Robert Florczak the man who makes the accusation that Modern Art is Bad Art…
i will refrain from commenting on his art, but i will say i now know why he takes that position…
To Artist Robert Florczak: The Critic
Mr Critic please, how shall i creatively express myself
in art
you say it should be in the manner of our ancestral artists
not mine
how far back must i go in order to create what you consider
good art
should it be Renaissance - Gothic- Byzantine - Roman - Greek
the cave
to whom shall i listen to tell me what’s right or wrong in creating Art
certainly
not
you
Ed Meredith
2015-8-25
--------------------------------------
A Petite Rant
am i
to be stuck
in the past and view
the world as the ancients
with no new form of self expression
am i to ignore the changes in my culture
and the dynamic events of global urbanization
shall i turn a blind eye to technological advancements
and our first steps into the stars to live an agrarian life style
shall i removed myself from the events of the day and their effects
upon me
shall i
now
Ed Meredith
2015-08-25
8 Years Ago
Good morning Maria and Ed.
@ Maria: It is nice to see you back to the world of words from the world of colours. Thanks for sharing your poem and the new drawing. Keep your artistic momentum.
@ Ed: Ha.. I like your sense of humour. I have no comment about the artworks of Robert Florczak. However, I think that his ultra-conservative perspective in modern art would probably reflect his lack of imagination.
Have a restful day to you all.
8 Years Ago
Viet, i concur... . =>))
Hi Maria, your lovely poem ‘Maud' and ‘Waiting' sketch inspired an echo...
Maria
her world today is black and grey
with dust formed swirls
and charcoal lines
with the beauty they define
separate and one like the lover’s troth
the sensuous touch of skin and cloth
deftly captured by the artist hand and eye
fabric caressing the curvaceous thigh
with silken tones of light and dark
found in the graphite strokes of the artist's mark
Ed Meredith
2015-08-25
8 Years Ago
It's joyful to see your poetic moment Ed. Here is my response to your poem To Artist Robert Florczak: The Critic
The Art Critic
He is trying to look at the immense sky above
through
a small hole
on the ceiling of his tiny cave
Blinded
by
the sunlight
pouring into the same spot
he sees nothing
But
through
his poor imagination
the sightless critic seems enjoying his fun time
to convince everyone
by his deep thought
of
how
low and black
the sky actually is
He ain't better than a one-legged, blind man
who is trying hard to teach others
how
to
walk
to jog
and to run
no
surprise
why he always stumbles on his own feet
each time he tries to walk his barking dog on rough terrains in the jungle of Modern Art.
Thao Chuong
2015-08-25
8 Years Ago
HAHAHaaa... Very good my friend
"He is trying to look at the immense sky above
through
a small hole
on the ceiling of his tiny cave
Blinded
by
the sunlight
pouring into the same spot
he sees nothing"
Thao Chuong
i could not have said it any better... LOL
------------------------------------------------------
art killed the buddha senryu chain
creative rains falls
the artists are soaked clean through
a very good DAY
DAY at the MOMA
is it good art or bad art
‘creativity'
‘creativity'
searches for the elusive
something for 'nothing'
‘nothing' just happens
paper canvas clay and stone
emptiness fulfilled
Ed Meredith
2015-08-25
8 Years Ago
balls balls
s/he crushes those balls
bounce, bounce, bounce
kick
(Posted by Jason Christopher about one hour ago)
An echo to Jason's fun time,,. And here is my joke of the day
His Stuttering Moment
kick
hic...hic... hic...
he kicks the bouncing ball
to a concrete wall
how.. how.. how
fast...fast... fast
wow..wow..wow.
hard...hard...hard
it's bouncing back
so fast...so hard
oh n o..oh no..oh no
it hits him down
to the ground
and crushes his two balls
ouch ..ouch.. ouch
shout
Poe Ed
2015-08-25
8 Years Ago
double entry (add-on)
Poetic Hiccups
o o o
wot he seas
ease only woz
nothin'
but woz
along
the long
Great Wo
"wot? wot? wot?"
o what he ass
with his strong English ache cent
when he heres
boom boom boom
as she iz back
to smash
his ass
into ashes
dead
silence
Poe Ed
2015-08-25
Note: o=all; seas=sees; woz=walls; wot=what; ease/iz=is; heres=hears
8 Years Ago
To the Galileo's of the poetry threads
Alls he wanted was for the Doge
To look through the magic tube
And see the mountains on the moon
Which caused The Cardinal to faint.
To think that the earth moved!
God forbid!
Galileo saw how some looked and some just gawped
The lookers and the seeing simmered in doubt
The gawpers in disbelief could only rail about
Faith.....as fixed as stars....as still as the solar system.
Just look! He asked the Doge,
And when at last he looked with open eyes, with no sunlight blurring his mind,
He saw, and doubted and believed, and sank his heart did, yet soon did burst
To think his feet were not firmly on the ground
But moving along with all the universe
And there grew a thirst,
For another Apple from the tree of knowledge.
Maria Disley 2015
8 Years Ago
Thanks Ed and Jason for the fun time yesterday.
Wow, Maria. Thanks for sharing for perfect moment. It's one of the amazing poems about belief which I have read so far. Very thought-provoking and pretty written I've enjoyed it very much. Nice to see you back fresh and articulate in both art and poetry.
Have a nice day.
(The Add-on - Only for my own record)
Over Her Confusing Moment
she thinks over
so much longer
over and over
about his offer
to come over
as her lover
undercover
she thinks over
as his offer
to be her lover
really bothers
nothing for her
she'd be over
now it's over
for her
not to think over
Thao Chuong
2015-08-26
8 Years Ago
My Long Wait For You to Come
for now
Summer is still around
your turn won't come
until
about
another month
you walk slowly
then stop by a sidewalk cafe'
and sit back
to relax for awhile
hot
coffee ready
inside a warm cup
vaporizes misty aroma into breezy air
not in a hurry
you leisurely take time
enjoying every sip
to make your day
come
on
Autumn
please hurry up
come and dump your heavy rain
to save my garden from the long drought
Thao Chuong
2015-08-26
8 Years Ago
Description: Woman in a dream. Charcoal drawing.
Her Rush at the Unwritten Moment
(A Woman In Her Nightmare)
In Melbourne, Australia
it's
still
wintertime
Outside
extremely cold
the chilly draft somehow sneaks itself
through the single-pane windows into the room
Under bulky layers of a top sheet, a thick comforter, and an electric blanket
it's
very
warm
and cozy
He lies beside her
curls himself like a worm
and snores louder than a train whistling while leaving its station
She's unable to sleep
turning ups and downs for many hours
feeling so hot that she has to undress herself
fully naked
ready
for
his service
she's trying to shake him up for a couple of times
He
stays still
in his sound sleep
like a Zen master in his deep meditation
he's useless
as
usual
not much help
She is dreaming of a dri-thru station
where she would simply drop in for full-serve
instead of serving
herself
What the heck is a marriage?
not only love
but also
sex
totally lost in it!
Thao Chuong
2015-08-25
(add-on for my own record)
8 Years Ago
A Question for All Poets
(Oh Poets, Your Poetry, and Hungry Kids)
Oh
my dear poets
daydreamers
your world full of words
the whole ocean of words
the beauty of poetry
is
Only for you to enjoy
for many countless suffering children around the world
your words are only words
void
blank
vacant
and meaningless as they are
Oh
my dear poets
you've witnessed day after day
Millions of little kids
living
in poverty
and dying of malnutrition
Millions of innocent kids
spending
their entire lives
in war zones or refugee camps
Not
so lucky
as you're
they don't go to school
they don't recognize alphabets
how could they tell the world
about
their sufferings
in written words?
Oh
my dear poets
daydreamers
don't you sometimes feel hopeless
submerging yourselves
in a world
full
of
words
words and words
like countless leaves on a tree
or abundant trees in a forest
Oh
my dear poets
your poetry cannot bring bread and butter
your poetry cannot create a roof
your poetry isn't medicine
Yet
you know for sure
through
your pens
words are much sharper than swords
words are extremely more lethal than any weapon of mass destruction
Oh
my dear hopeful poets
it's you- not anyone else
whom those innocent kids could rely on
in your fight
for their
better
days
Could you give those little ones some hope, my dear poets?
Thao Chuong
2015-08-27
8 Years Ago
Tanka: Glen Lake At Night
stillness on Glen Lake
shattered by a drowning sound
I stood on the dock
wondering who threw that rock
ruining my serene moment
Thao Chuong
2015-08-27
8 Years Ago
Tanka: My Lost Moment On Glen Lake At Night
all quiet around
sudden sound of something drowned
echoed on water
my dreamy moment shattered
back to reality - sucked!
Thao Chuong
2015-08-27
8 Years Ago
He complained endlessly
So pained!
What kind of life is this!
There's no teabags!
Her heart sunk
Never before so low
As she left to
Convince life was worth living
To those beautiful young things growing out there.
To ease the pressure of competitive education
Of making friends
Of being accepted
Of the fact that everyone is different
And difference is beautiful even though it's not stamped with an 'A'
Her heart sank
Quite low,
As she recalled
That life was Unreachable
For the uneducated
The unfed,
The unwashed
The unloved
The 'A' students in the University of life.
She bought some teabags on the way home
The drink left a bitter aftertaste in her mouth.
8 Years Ago
Of Love and Sex
it ain't about love
but purely
sex
that his mind is fully occupied
whenever he goes after a sexy woman
it ain't about sex
but purely
love
which her heart is fallen into
each time she makes love with the man
who
only enjoys
her sexy legs
why the heck are they always too far apart as the North and the South Pole?
he only looks for sex while in love
on
the contrary
she always looks for love while in sex
maybe
the answer
could be easily found
in the yin and yang nature of their sexual instinct
it is
clearly
he likes to rest at the bottom of a hole
and she loves to sit on the top of a pole
Thao Chuong
2015-28
(re-post for my own record)
8 Years Ago
Goose Trail After Last Night's Rain
late
last night
I could hear endless cheering sounds
echoed through the bay window
when
the light rain came
and kissed thirsty leaves during the summer's long drought
early
this morning
in the routine walk with my loyal friend
(just for you to know I don't walk my dog as most people do)
I
could
feel freshness
everywhere in damp air
I also saw trees along the Goose Trail happily dancing in the breeze
the sun was still in deep sleep
green canopies shook their heads in disbelief
and threw tiny drops
on wet ground
and all over
my
head
and shoulders
he walked beside me
joyfully barked and shook himself hard
and gave me
a good morning
shower!
Thao Chuong
2015-08-28
8 Years Ago
He complained endlessly
So pained!
What kind of life is this!
There's no teabags!
Her heart sunk
Never before so low
As she left to
Convince life was worth living...
Maria Disley
Thank you, Maria . I've read your poem for a couple of times. I enjoyed chewing the yummy food and slowly swallowing it into my empty stomach (lol). You've said it all what in my mind about the luxury life in the heaven-on-earth of the Western world.
May I borrow a line from your poem for the title of my echo below? Have a restful day
What Kind of Life Is This!
looking into the jar
very little powder left inside
he can't believe his eyes
and
feels
irritated
as if his day has been already ruined
no
big deal
not the end of the world
he could either walk or drive to the dri-thru Tim Horton nearby
only
a half block
away from his home
to get a cup of hot coffee for his morning craving
he is losing his temper for nothing
at
that
instant
if he would think of millions of hungry kids
with
neither food
nor any basic necessities
he would joyfully appreciate any "bad" moment in his luxury living
Thao Chuong
2015-08-28
8 Years Ago
When did money become greater than love ?
When did heart breaks become frequent and disposable ?
And when did my soul become so cold ?
One may never know ....
8 Years Ago
Viet, thank you for the Tanka 5-7-5-7-7 exercise…many pleasant and wonderful moments to you my friend...
Here are my Tanka echoes and answers to your, 'Glen Lake At Night’ and ‘My Lost Moment On Glen Lake At Night’
Separate Realities:
stillness of waters
broken by the thrown pebble
two realities
creating a third
ripples of infinity
Once in a Lifetime:
a serene moment
sound of pebble and water
splashes in my dream
once in a lifetime event
never to happen again
No Moment:
mind and still water
oneness with the universe
shattered by vandal
serenity is fleeting
grasp it and it vanishes
and finally;
Two Confessions:
#1
stillness of waters
broken by the thrown pebble
creating ripples
reaching for infinity
i have to throw another
#2
one's meditation
skipping stones across the lake
disturbed Viet's dream
shattering his calm moment
it was me that threw the stone
Ed Meredith
2015-08-29
8 Years Ago
Teirra Fuller: Thank you very much for sharing your thought about money, love, and broken heart.
Ed: Oh my friend I am overwhelmed by your Tanka momentum. I enjoy them all. I am looking for more of your Haiku and Tanka.
Tanka: Morning Beauty
gone the last night rain
that left behind on green leaves
watery droplets
under bright morning sunlight
oh how beautiful they look!
Thao Chuong
2015-08-29
8 Years Ago
It been a great day. I was honored to find that I sold some art on FAA. My thought was not a thought today but a great BIG Smile. Doing the happy dance..
8 Years Ago
Thank you Viet, as usual you are resposible for pushing my Poetic Button... lol
Good for you Michelle... enjoy the high, and thanks it's contagious... . =>))
Welcome Teirra, to FAA and our little world of poetry… Another Tanka echo to your poem…
‘No Answers:
lacking this or that
everything a bit askew
a soul asunder
questioning all that may be
finding answers elusive
Ed Meredith
2015-08-2
8 Years Ago
Viet, thank you for this Morning's Tanka… it is indeed a Beauty...
and needs to be read again.
Tanka: Morning Beauty
gone the last night rain
that left behind on green leaves
watery droplets
under bright morning sunlight
oh how beautiful they look!
Thao Chuong
2015-08-29
8 Years Ago
Welcome Michelle Reid. Many thanks for dropping by sand sharing your thought
Thanks Ed for taking me back to our good good day and also for pulling me back to Tanka again. You've made my day, my friend. Enjoy a restful day.
When did money become greater than love ?
When did heart breaks become frequent and disposable ?
And when did my soul become so cold ?
One may never know ...
poem by Fuller Teirra Fuller posted 12 hours ago
Here is my echo.
Tanka: Her Lost Love
her heart - so fragile
dedicated as glassware
who played rough with it?
now broken into pieces
how could she find her lost love?
Thao Chuong
2015-08-29
8 Years Ago
While dining in a restaurant for lunch today, couldn’t help but to overhear, OK eavesdrop if you will,
a conversation between a Tai Chi student and a another of Tae Kwon Do, They were seated at the
next table debating and talking about their personal choice of Martial Art and the idea of the Buddha…
So Buddha and i
began to play
and on a napkin
we had this to say:
happy Buddha
sad Buddha
mad Buddha
glad Buddha
made in China
Buddha
just turn him over and you’ll see
printed on his plastic ass
no warning of toxic paints
or the expulsion of poison gas
the only thing you’ll find there
is the only thing to be seen
those three famous words
Made in China or fabriqués en Chine…
Ed Meredith
2015-08-29
8 Years Ago
Thanks Ed and Viet for the echoes. How long is this poetic chain now? Each echo a link.
I'm hearing birds
As he ruffles the dog's scruffy fur
Blasphemes at it playfully
Like men do
You little shit
He says as he throws her a soft ring to fetch.
Back and forth
Back and forth
Banter and play.
I'm scrolling through images of dead stares
Being washed up on beaches
And suddenly hate the hours I spent on my painting last night!
Even art, mostly art, seems shallow,
When children, are washed up in the bubbly surf.
He finishes his bacon and eggs and whistles
Even the stupid specially selected cushions colourfully stare at me blankly, lifeless, meaninglessly.
He lands a kiss on my cheek
A kiss I want to share,
It is made of work, and energy, protection, determination, loss, heartache,
It's a kiss with its head above water,
With shadow and light
And moments of pleasure, security, and tough decisions,
And a sprinkling of selfishness,
For I know he has a heart,
The dog jumps up onto the back of the chair
Seems to sigh
Listening to me tap away,
As though I should be doing something more meaningful
Like feeding her or playing
She listens to the rhythms of life
That we can't comprehend,
Her ears twist
To sounds beyond me,
Though my heart seems aware.
The large white wings of cockatoos swoop up into the trees
We all know that means rain
Soon,
And that the pitter patter will play echoing on the spring grass
And bodies on the beach caught in the downpour
8 Years Ago
@ Ed. Today is your poetry day.
@ Wow Maria. It's another nice poem. I love it. Have a good night
Since you've written about Buddha, you have pushed my religious button (lol)
The Road to Enlightenment
Oh
Buddhist monks
you have followed the Buddha's steps
on
his road
to enlightenment
May I ask you?
Who have to submerge themselves in the living sea of suffering
who have to work like hell from dawn to dusk?
so
endless temples could be built
you could be fed
you could be clothed
you could feel relaxed
in a stress-free environment
for
meditation
to put your own minds into stillness
May I ask?
Why
anyone else
except yourselves
must take the headache for your daily living
and carry your own cross
for you to have free load
on
your road
to enlightenment
Thao Chuong
2015-08-29
8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Viet, the Martial Art guys started my Buddha thought and you have continued them… LOL
Good night my friend and enjoy the dreams of your waking state.
Killing the Buddha - in six Senryu:
....................or........................
The Buddha is Already Dead
Buddha has been killed
very serious matter
laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh
do not play with food
never play with the Buddha
beware of strangers
fat laughing Buddha
wrote down Indian sutras
no ritual robes
many zen riddles
do not believe in themselves
nor in the Buddha
sex and a good meal
daily zen meditation
sensible Buddha
i killed the Buddha
i keep killing the Buddha
he keeps coming back
Ed Meredith
2015-08-30
8 Years Ago
Good morning Ed. Have a nice day my friend.
The religious button is still on. Thanks for holing it. Here is another echo to your chained Senryu
The Made-in-China Buddha
He
Whom you chant mantra and worship days and nights
the Buddha sitting stillness
in deep meditation
on
your altar
Is
Not
the true Buddha
But
only
a terracotta statue
cheaply
Made in China
Why not kill any Buddha whom you meet on your road
and
enlighten the Buddha
within
Your inner
Selves
Thao Chuong
2015-08-30
8 Years Ago
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Description: This work - the last collage of my Victoria church series – is created from 100% paper cut & torn from magazine. In the collage, I gave up my chaotic collage techniques and adapted mainly “oil painting” techniques as I was trying to capture every details of this beautiful building.
I intentionally used pieces of magazines that have printing words on them for viewers to distinguish the work as a collage and not a painting in oil or acrylic. The mystic and dramatic sky was created to enhance the collage and reflect the surreal and spiritual environment of the cathedral.
The St. Andrew’s Cathedral is located in the heart of downtown Victoria (at the corner of View St. and Blanchard St). The building was designed as a duplicate of a parish church in Vaudreuil, Quebec by Montreal church architects Maurice Perrault and Albert Mesnard.
The church was built in 1892, restored and renovated in mid-1980s. Renovation and changes maintain and respect its original Victorian architectural design.
8 Years Ago
Sunday - God's Formal Day Off
Everyone likely enjoys Sunday
a day
off
(a very short break)
after working for a long week
like slaves for a living
(actually
no
time
to live
during weekdays)
They would be mad if someone asks
them to go to work
on their day off
without
pay
Today
is Sunday
also His day off
like
anyone else
enjoying their time off
maybe
He
is
also
taking a nap
to recharge His energy
It doesn't sound right
for
any crowd
of sinful guys
gathering inside His holly house
waking Him up for overtime work
to save their own problems
on His
only
day
off
May I ask?
Do you really know your God
and
whether He is in need of your prayers?
Thao Chuong
2015-08-30
8 Years Ago
An Americanized Asian Woman
he carefully takes the very tight yellow outfit off
joyfully licks on fleshy tissues
and lets sweetness
of
the yellow banana's
white flesh
slowly
absorbed
into his throat
She looks one hundred o one percent Asian
but she often drives him insane
as
she keeps acting exactly
like any American
woman
with
whom
he has dated so far
He
swears
to his god
under oath
someday he will unclothe her fully
so he can feel, kiss, lick, and taste
the freshness of
her flesh
to
see if
under
her yellow skin
she would reveal her flesh
yellow
or
so white as a banana's flesh
after having its skin fully peeled off
Thao Chuong
2015-05-30
8 Years Ago
Response to Ed
Shopping
New plates are needed for home
Time for shopping
Searching endlessly
China made in China everywhere
I want to buy made here at home
JEM 310815
8 Years Ago
Good morning
@ Carolyn Weltman: Thank you for taking me to your exotic world in harmony of lines, contours, shapes, and movements.
@ Jane: Haa.. "China made in China everywhere" . Yeah. very true! Which country in the West could compete with China's cheap labour and unreliable products
WARNING: Nudity For Adults Only -Viewers' discretion is advised
A response to Carolyn's luring thought of: "Riding the train. Can be very intimate." CW 2015
In Silence
Riding the train at night
thru rough terrains
in
the dark
to unknown destinations
Under dim light of the shared cabin
two strangers sat on opposite side
in
silence
while trying to push themselves farer apart
it's
so odd
the tiny space physically made
them feel
so
close
to each other
He
could hear her heartbeats
in
rhythms
with the sound of metal wheels
running smoothly on the tracks
he could feel her body heat increasingly radiated in the air
She
could see
a wild desire
clearly embedded in his eyes
she could sense his intent clearly expressed through his body language
Both had lost their romance for a long time
too
thirsty
as two travelers
wandered in a desert without water
they hurried for the drink
In
silence
how it started and ended
not
in love
but high on sex
ups and downs
more ecstasy than high on cocaine
cries and moans for the whole joy ride
At her final destination
they said nothing
just waved
good
bye
In
silence
Thao Chuong
2015-08-31
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your Un-moment, Jason.
Throw away all the Uns such as ..Unhappy, unsatisfactory, unpleasant..etc... And most importantly don't undo your day!
Here is the response to your Un..
His Unpleasant Moment
his underwear
already
taken
off
not
ready
still undressed
she locks her thighs pretty tight
too bad
he feels as if he's drowning
down
under a thick ice sheet
impossible to unwire his mind
really mad
but too scared to swear
he simply rushes to the bathroom for own satisfaction
he must know her better
all what she is in need of
is
love
and romance
instead
he keeps giving her
more and more of his shitty sex
but less and less romantic love
Thao Chuong
2015-08-31
8 Years Ago
The Unforgettable Moment
Let's
waste no time
to undo
the already-done
give less time to the well-known
pay more attention to the unknown
leave atone the well-fed
and reach out to the unfed
appreciate the well-done
but focus on the undone
As
always
what already done
gone with the wind of time
impossible to be undone
So
enjoy the best from happiness
forget any moment of unhappiness
Thao Chuong
2015-08-31
(Re-post from other poetry thread for my own record)
8 Years Ago
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It took me six months to complete this work which is from thousands of tiny pieces with many layers on top of each other from coloured paper ripped or cut from magazines. I visited thr Church nearly every day to capture and memorize every detail of the structure duirng the creative process 100% paper collage -Not mixed media.
8 Years Ago
Tanka: Morning Walk
only he and I
no one around on the path
it's very quiet
so damp and cold in the air
Autumn's about to arrive
Thao Chuong
2015-09-01
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Nice poem on my "Do You Really Know Your God" painting. The wonder is in the title...we all believe in different religious orders, but how much is real learned connectivity or merely passed down as blind faith? Cynical? Blasphemous? Perhaps. But maybe its just sensible intellect trying to reconcile the illogic behind mysticism.
On anther note...how is your book of collaborative art-poetry coming along?
8 Years Ago
crrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee...e..e.e.e.e..e..eeeek... . .
the lid opened
as moth flew out...... . flutter
and a giant bat shook its wings
to go for a midnight piss.....
slam, the lid shut
it went back in
relieved
©Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Good morning Ken, Monsieur, and Jason. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
@ Ken: Appreciate your feedback. The collaboration is still going on - but at a slow pace .
@ Monsieur Danl: Beautiful paintings and nice thought
@ Jason: Interesting!
Nice day or night to all
My echo to Monsieur's thought
Faith
What will be
for
sure
will be as is
Faith can't change
what will happen in the future
But
at least
it gives some hope
to help us keep marching ahead
while
inside a dark tunnel
at this uneasy moment
Thao Chuong
2015-09-02
8 Years Ago
Sundry Thought About "Let-Go"
what happened in the past
impossible to change at this instant
but
don't throw
that baby away
as endless lessons could be drawn
from yesterday
for
today
and tomorrow
in
that sense
no need
for me
or anyone else
to let go those rough moments of the past
Thao Chuong
2015-09-02
8 Years Ago
Today an image of a dead boy, floating on a beach, disturbed me greatly... God bless his soul
The Boy on a Beach
The boy on a beach
who killed him
was it the seas
the hope
the war
the traffickers
the hate?
the unrelenting hunger
who strives to find the peace?
who loses all
who wins with words
who kills the world
who blames and blames...
and drinks his wine?
Was that you or i?
the world of Everyone! and every I ?
and every lie?
has everyone killed him!?
the Children of Abraham?
the Muslims
the Jews
the Christians?
Who will win the gifts of life
who will keep and
who will cry and
who will die
and die
and die?
Children cry
and then they die...
Did you all make them cry?
Did you all make them die?
Questions endless, yes but did we all really try?
maybe we already died
died
endless are the children's cries....
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
edited
8 Years Ago
Emotional poem, Jason. Keep your momentum
Echo to Monsieur's thought about: "Accept what is"
I Only Accept What I Can't Change
I cannot change
what has been already done
in the past
or
what will happen
in the future
But, right now
at this present time
is
the only time
that I can change
what is still held in my hands
I prefer not to accept what it is
at this very moment
before my best tryouts
to make it
better
However
only after I fail
I must be happy
to take it
as it
is
Thao Chuong
2015-09-02
8 Years Ago
Objet Trouvé
in early morning
a red sun
is
riding on high waves
floating up on blue ocean
and clearing up foggy horizon in the far distance
on sandy beach
scattered
seaweeds, broken seashells, and driftwoods of different sizes and shapes
left
by
the last night windstorm
a scavenger is wandering around
searching for
interesting
pieces
of
objet trouvé for his art
Thao Chuong
2015-09-02
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much for sharing your thought that brought me to your portfolio.
You have a very interesting artist's alternative photographic process with well-written artist's bio and statement. I'd like to share it with other artists/poets who view this thread, Have a nice day.
About Jane Linders by Jane Linders
My current passion is an alternative photographic process called Polaroid transfers. Each transfer is hand-made by the photographer using specific materials and equipment to achieve a desired effect. A transparency is projected on to professional Polaroid print film and as development begins, the print and chemicals are prematurely separated. The image is transferred on to dampened watercolor paper for a unique image which has a dated, artistic photo-painting appearance. Exposure, pressure, time, paper and other variables make each print an original mono-print.
Prints for sale in my Etsy shop too: http://www.etsy.com/shop/jalinde
I am fascinated by the unpredictability of Polaroid transfers and I love the freedom of experimentation and “lucky mistakes.†I like the uniqueness of each piece and the painterly quality of the finished transfer. The flexibility and mobility of this photographic medium lends itself to spontaneous exploration. The added possibility of reworking my images using watercolors or pastel pencils , adds another dimension to this alternative printing process.
I have exhibited extensively in St. Louis (The Mad Art Gallery, Art St. Louis, St. Louis Artists Guild, The Foundry, 3rd Floor Gallery, Natural History Museum, Missouri Botanical Gardens and Chesterfield Arts Center) as well as nationally (Smithsonian, Sleeth Gallery, and Parks Gallery). Publications include, St. Louis Seen and Unseen,
52nd City, Smithsonian Magazine, St. Louis Magazine, Art D Magazine, The Riverfront Times, Cream City Review, Kansas City Star, Art and Artists and Midrivers Review.
http://www.freewebs.com/janelinders
http://www.etsy.com/shop/jalinde
8 Years Ago
Find the Open Road! -posted by Jane Linders - 2 hours ago
Here is my response
The Very Wide, Quite Worn Road
I've been told many times
"every road leads to Rome"
it doesn't really matter much
which path I take
which way I go
which freeway I roam
in
the end
I'll hit the same
dammed old destination: "Rome"
why
the heck
do I waste my sweat
to try a new path -unworn and never travelled by anyone else before
yeah
as usual
she is always right
I must take her wise advise "to keep my open road"
I fully understand
she really means
no
need
for me to
find a new one
it's likely
for
the rest
of my life
I'm stuck with her - the very wide, quite worn road
on which I've been already roaming for many years
Thao Chuong
2015-09-03
8 Years Ago
Why do men break wind more often than women?
Because women can't shut up long enough to build up the required pressure
8 Years Ago
more and more I am realizing that people live their lives and do what they do because other people tell them to - when was the last time people did things because they wanted to? I am starting to live my life more for me, and if you like it cool, if not be on your way.
---Shawn Dall
ShawnDall.com
8 Years Ago
Good morning Monsieur, Ed, and Shawn.
@ Monsieur. Oh no I felt bad about what you've just posted this morning. While I think that you have the total freedom to express your own opinion. I believe that your thought is inappropriate (even if it was intended as a joke). I could clearly see the sexist's smoke steaming out of your words (toward women in general) and polluting the fresh air.
@ Shawn: I like your thought of the day. I hope I could get back with an echo, if I would have time
@ Ed: Ah my dear friend, I like your instant reaction. Your poem and your sculpture.
8 Years Ago
Monsieur - Made me chuckle - however in my experience in the circles I travel, I have found men pass more gas at both ends :-)
In response to Jane' Open Road.
Give me an old fashioned map book
Not a sat nav
Give me an old sixties blue Landy
Not a red Ferrari
Give me a dirt road in Africa
Not a motorway anywhere
The smell of the warm red earth
The scent of the grasses
The warm breeze ruffling your hair
The cacophony of insects
birds
mammals
Grunt of a hippo
Laugh of the hyena
I am home
JEM 030915
N.B. We appear to have a lack of photos of old blue Landy' :-(
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane, Your poetic thought is always welcomed and appreciated. Have a nice day.
Here is my echo to Shawn's nice thought posted this morning. Have a good night, Shawn
Is My Personal Freedom Infinite?
I know
I am not totally free
to live the way I'd like
to do what I'd want
to go wherever I'd prefer
my big brother always puts me under his full control
he has too many laws, bylaws. regulations, and rules
which I remind myself all the time
I must abide by
otherwise
I would find myself in big troubles
with
his taxmen
his policemen
his law enforcement officers
and his powerful system in general
even
in the tiny den
at my home-sweet-home
I am not really free to do whatever I want
simply
because
I'd better live
in harmony with my loved ones
by restraint myself from doing
what would intrude their privacy and freedom
also
what might jeopardize their own lives
it would be nice
if no one tells me what to do or not to do this and that
against my will
however
I wouldn't mind making any necessary compromise
for peace of mind
of everyone involved
in
my life
Thao Chuong
2015-09-03
8 Years Ago
Greetings Viet, oh brilliant mind!!!!! I thought I would share a quote excerpt from my future book release "In The Hands Of The Beholder"
excerpt "We are created to take part in the pleasures and experiences of life good and bad, we live and share. We live to die, everybody, every second, every minute, every hour, every day, every week, every month, every year an entire lifetime for death is only the beginning of a new state of awareness and consciousness. A dimension between thoughts and dreams the micro moments of reality but of a different type of existence"}
Disclaimer: Photo and Book Cover Design by Michael Joseph Hoard All photographic images and written dialog "blogs, discussions, including personal concepts or ideas" are "Rights Protected" in accordance of Copyright Laws. "In The Hands Of The Beholder" my near death encounter as a toddler" "Memoirs And Dots" The Power To Connect Dots To The Circle Of Life (a future publication release) No electronic reproduction permitted without the explicit permission and granted by the Artist, Photographer and Writer. Michel Joseph Hoard 2015
8 Years Ago
Greetings Michael. Thanks for your nice words and for sharing the update of your coming book. The title is very unique. If possible, please provide the link for preview as soon as you have the book officially released. Have a good night.
8 Years Ago
After Midnight's Joke on Spammer's worst attack
quite
a nightmare
when FAA is under a spammer's attack
it is worse than the world
invaded by
aliens
totally chaotic
as if it has been shaken by
an earthquake
a tsunami
or a cyclone
.
every thread is collapsed under rubbles
all artists are buried in dense fog
while the hacker is hysterically laughing
in his fun game
Poe Ed
2015-09-04
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Bob. I appreciate your time. Have a restful weekend.
My Sundry Thought About Law and Order
when a ruler loses his firm grip
his world is out of control
and becomes
chaotic
as
a result
no law and order
it doesn't really matter?
how many sets of laws, rules, and regulations which he has made
to control his
citizens
or
what type of weapons he holds in his hands
to protect his
kingdom
regardless
how perfect it is
each system has its own fatal defect
his security could be fully compromised
his empire would be collapsed
his own life might be jeopardized
by
just
a couple
of troublemakers
who decide not to comply by his governing style
laws are made for criminals
unfortunately
only
law abiders
all good citizens of a nation
could be caught in her legal net
while her rebels can do whatever they wanna do to challenge her system
Charles Dickens once wrote:
"the law is an ass"
how true this statement is!
doncha agree?
Thao Chuong
2015-09-04
8 Years Ago
Thanks Bob.....saved me trying to find Viet again :-)
Lost
Myriad of signs and symbols
Head spinning
Eyes unfocused
Lost in this world of jumble
A mischievous elfin
Spinning his web
Entrapped in lines and curves
JEM 040915
8 Years Ago
an echo to Lost by Jane...
Found
through the spam
words of meaning
"truth is never lost
only buried"
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane and Jason
Here is my echo to your poems
Lost and Found
lost
somewhere
peace on planet earth
found
only wars on the ravaged land
would it be possible for human
to reject war
and claim
peace?
Thao Chuong
2015-09-04
8 Years Ago
My minds on vacation
My mind took an unscheduled vacation
it left my body for its own recreation
same little beach cabin it knows so well
a place with solitude to sometimes dwell
a fast trip down that inner highway
between the paths of my dreams
sitting by the sea on a big boulder
no one looking over my shoulder
ocean spray a nice get away
don’t know how long I’ll stay
just relaxing the tired mind
leave the physical world behind
an outa body experience
or just a mind on vacation
Jim Taylor 9/4/15
8 Years Ago
Here is my echo to Jason's emotional poem The Boy on a Beach
Fates of Failed Asylum Seekers
Hearts sunken
Tears fallen down
around the world
Showing
on
the news
disturbing images of a little child
in red T shirt, navy-blue shorts, and black shoes
washed ashore
at the water
edge
The three year-old toddler Aylan Kurd
lay
lifeless
face-down on the surf
Also
found
on the same Turkish beach
his five-year old brother Ghalib and his mother Rehan
died after their boat capsized
Too late
to save him
or
to cry for his death
But
more than enough time
to open your generous arms
and provide
an asylum
for
many
other suffered refugees
Thao Chuong
2015-09-04
Note: I repost Jason's poem for your reference
The Boy on a Beach
The boy on a beach
who killed him
was it the seas
the hope
the war
the traffickers
the hate?
the unrelenting hunger
who strives to find the peace?
who loses all
who wins with words
who kills the world
who blames and blames...
and drinks his wine?
Was that you or i?
the world of Everyone! and every I ?
and every lie?
has everyone killed him!?
the Children of Abraham?
the Muslims
the Jews
the Christians?
Who will win the gifts of life
who will keep and
who will cry and
who will die
and die
and die?
Children cry
and then they die...
Did you all make them cry?
Did you all make them die?
Questions endless, yes but did we all really try?
maybe we already died
died
endless are the children's cries....
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Quite a sobering contrast between my feel good poem about the beach, and Viet's and Jason's real life tragedy on a beach. How this happens in this day and age is truly tragic.
8 Years Ago
The older I get the more I realize that the things that cost nothing, hold the most value.
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your thought Jim and Monsieur. Enjoy a restful weekend.
To lighten our weekend. Here is my joke in response to your peaceful poem, Jim.
Life Is But...
He
lies still on his warm bed
closes his eyes tight
shuts his mind down
and takes a trip
into his
own
self
Unlike a Zen master
in
mediation
gaining peace of mind
He reaches a secluded beach
somewhere he has never been before
very
tropical
sky is high
sun is bright
ocean is blue
beach is white
girls are hot
He
runs naked into the aqua sea
laughs
swims
and jumps on the waves
All of a sudden
his fun time is interrupted
he sees a shark coming
and feels the biting pain
After
he shouts aloud for help
he hears an instant
response"
"wake up
you snore too loud
I can't sleep"
he sees
his wife is pinching hard with her sharp nails
and trying to full a piece of flesh from his inner thigh
it's
quite
a nightmare
who dares say "life is but a dream"?
Thao Chuong
2015-09-04
8 Years Ago
I was really imagining myself on your virtual beach
My kind of place
There really is a perfect life
Think I'll hang out a while
No worries
Yes there are worse things than shark bites??!!
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jim.
Another weekend's joke of mine in response to Monsieur's philosophical thought.
There I Go With My Time
(Young Then Old)
when I was young
I used to go
after
money
power, glory and fame
also prettily looking and sexily hot girls
as
I'm getting older
no
longer
I have enough energy for those
now
I know
time might cost me nothing
but it holds the most value of my life
'cause
simply
I
don't
have much left to waste
I would be happy to trade
my money
my fame (if any)
and anything else
for
your time
I'm really sorry
for not to include everything in the deal
as I've lost all my hot girls
you
must find
by yourself
those long legs for yourselves
Thao Chuong
2015-09-05
8 Years Ago
Double Entry Removed
recycle this blank, boring space for self-promotion of my paper collage
Description:
Christ Church Cathedral Victoria BC is at the corner of Quadra and Courtney. I visited the Church nearly every day to capture and memorize every detail of the structure during the creative process.
It took me two months to complete this work which is from thousands of tiny pieces with many layers on top of each other from coloured paper ripped or cut from magazines. 100% paper collage -Not mixed media.
8 Years Ago
To Artists Those Who Love Plato's Quote: "Art Lies in the Eyes of the Beholder"?
All
of you
those artists
who lack of talent and confidence
often
take one of Plato's common quotes
as
a shield
in self-defense of your
crappy
art
It also serves as a sleeping pill to help
ease your minds
in
high
anxiety
whenever you cannot cope with harsh criticism
Oh
artists
don't fool yourselves
with such a rubbish thought
you should know
better than
anyone
else
through your creative process
"Beauty of art always lies
in
your
own hands
as the maker
Not
in the eyes
of any blind beholder"
Only
you - the almighty creator
who could make your art
look good or bad
pretty or
ugly
Thao Chuong
2015-09-05
Note: Repost from other thread for my own record
8 Years Ago
Good morning Mike. Thank you for your time to unearth me from the deep ground of spams. Have a nice day.
Spammers
It is likely
my little grandson would feel immortal
whenever he plays with his ipad
it
gives him
endless lives
each time he's dead
he jiggles and simply presses the Start button
he is back immediately
and plays a new life
again and
again
until
he's so tired
and falls asleep
Unlike
my little toddler
who is easily getting worn-out
those adult psychos have full of energy
that could have never been fully drained out
they
ever give up
their sadistic games
They're much tougher than cats of nine lives
and very difficult to be
gotten rid
of
they keep
coming back
walking like zombies in a movie
as soon as they're terminated
What the heck is a life for those spammers
who are more electronically addicted
than
a kid with his little fun
playing a game
online
Thao Chuong
2015-09-06
8 Years Ago
Happy Daze everyone...
A Spamming echo to Viet’s… ‘Spammers'
i AM SPAM I AM:
damn…
i am spam
put back in the can
told by a node
that spam is what i am
or am i a troll
deep in my soul
out to abuse
the forums i use
damn spam
i’m so confused
but i can't resist
i must persist
spreading my happiness
by indulging my spam-ness
again and again
i’ve been told and told
by the controlling node
to shut up and listen
but that's not my mission
damn spam
I AM THE SPAM of it all
submission is NOT your call
I shan't give in
or quit on a whim
nor stop at your will… until
all the threads
reach their FILL
I AM SPAM
2015-09-06/07/08/09/10/11/12/13- on and on... etc, etc...
8 Years Ago
Haa...Ed. You've make me laugh, my friend.
By the Way. I''d like to re-post another humorous poem of yours about Buddha Made in China and a response from Jane McGowen about China (ware) Made in China
MADE IN CHINA
Posted by Ed Meredith on 2015-08-29
While dining in a restaurant for lunch today, couldn’t help but to overhear, OK eavesdrop if you will,
a conversation between a Tai Chi student and a another of Tae Kwon Do, They were seated at the
next table debating and talking about their personal choice of Martial Art and the idea of the Buddha…
So Buddha and i
began to play
and on a napkin
we had this to say:
happy Buddha
sad Buddha
mad Buddha
glad Buddha
made in China
Buddha
just turn him over and you’ll see
printed on his plastic ass
no warning of toxic paints
or the expulsion of poison gas
the only thing you’ll find there
is the only thing to be seen
those three famous words
Made in China or fabriqués en Chine…
Ed Meredith
2015-08-29
Posted by Jane McGowen on 2015-08-31
Response to Ed
Shopping
New plates are needed for home
Time for shopping
Searching endlessly
China made in China everywhere
I want to buy made here at home
JEM 310815
8 Years Ago
Echo to Ed's and Jane's Made In China poems (lol)
America Made In China
Nowadays
Americans hardly find any product
Made In U.S.A.
inside corner stores, food stores, dollar stores
and even on massive shelves of those super boxes
such
as
Home Depot,
Wal-Mart,
Target
Costco,
and so on...
nearly
all what
Americans need for their affordable livings
made in other countries
(from an electronic device to a toothpick or a roll of toilet paper)
the house they live
the clothes they wear
the food they eat
the toilet they deposit
the bed they make love
et cetera
America is mostly flooded
with commodities
low quality
and
cheaply
Made In China
including
those national flags
proudly
flying
at the White House
and in front of all households
for their noisy celebration of her Independence Day
Psychologically
US citizens could easily find the high pride of, and deep patriotism in, their nation
hidden inside their minds
and their hearts
Materially
only
when
they strip themselves off - fully naked
they could truly reveal themselves
in
flesh
and bone
as truly untainted Americans
originally
Made In U.S.A.
Thao Chuong
2015-09-06
8 Years Ago
POWER
We vote them in and entrust them with our future
Our lives, our money, our homes, our jobs, our care
A handful of these stay true to their word
The remainder are driven insane with the feel of power
Money, houses, possessions, greed, madness ensues
What makes a despotic leader?
He primes his armies, with chants and rituals
Promises of what could be
He uses his God as an excuse
To cleanse the others out
Does he know what his end goal is?
When will his madness cease?
When does normality return?
What do the outside rulers do?
They evaluate
Does he have minerals we need
Does he have oil we need
Is he sitting on a mountain of gas
If the answer is yes we intervene
If the answer is no
They are left to sort it out
and sort it out
and sort it out
We see images of Aylan Kurd
Hs brother Ghalib
His mother Rehan
Would these people be laid on that beach
If Bush and Blair hand in hand had left Iraq alone
Where and when did all this madness begin?
Does anyone know?
JEM 060915
8 Years Ago
In irony
My jeans are American
my laptop
my ipad
my iphone
my software
my tshirt
some of my music
is American
And much else
is Japanese
Perhaps i am thus a traitor
to being British?
but not to tea
great music
my clothes
invention
a free mind
my values
and loyalty
i am a Brit!
Are you a traitor to freedom?
Still
you cant buy me
nor coerce me
full stop.
whom ever you are
my thoughts are free and freely mine
and they shall sail
with the freest breeze...
until you own the wind
then i shall play
in the mud
but free.
Or is this mud oil?
i shall paint myself black
and then
u might own me
But the oil
is refined
and the engine runs well
as the shots fire
Only the dead sleep these days
but i am free
to be
No traitor to freedom nor free speech
and i shall defend u
as u defend me!
Democracy and Freedom!
So do not piss on me
i most surely
do not
piss on you!
True Brit
True Grit
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
free
8 Years Ago
Good evening Jane, John, Jason, and David. Thank you very much.
@ Jane: Your poem Power is very powerful. Your questions are bold answers that reflect the reality
@ John: Your comment is so true. Somehow I could sense your bitter moment about it. (For Your own Information,John: I don't really want to generate any discussion in politics on this thread. However, I could feel the same when the United States of America betrayed her South Vietnam Allies during the Vietnam War. Actually, USA has had a very thick records (in her short history) of betrayal). If you are interested in more information about your country's records of betraying her comrades those who have fought alongside with her, please send me a PM, I'll let you know.
@ Jason: Wow! What a perfect and genuine response. I love it.
Have a good night or day to all.
8 Years Ago
Happy Labour Day!
My today's thought is an echo to John Wills's thought: "An enemy can attack... but a friend can betray, and betrayal is far, far worse." (posted 16 hours ago)
Between Individuals and Their Nations
Relationship between two countries is absolutely relative
there're neither true friends
nor real enemies
an allies today
could
become
a foe tomorrow
Maybe, you would shoot at me in a battle
if your country is at a war with mine
However, I am not so naive
to convince
myself
that
you hate me
don't be so silly to believe
that
I
hate you
As individuals, you and I could meet each other
and become friends
in the peace
time
Your people and my people both hate war and love peace
why
keep
being
the suffering victims?
Why don't we work
together
in
our fight
against those traitors in power who put our two nations at war
Thao Chuong
2015-09-06
8 Years Ago
Very good Viet, that about sums up individuals and their duty to oblige their specific government in war time.
8 Years Ago
Thanks John. I appreciate your understanding of my point of view. Let's hope we would never shoot at each other in any battle. Have a restful day.
8 Years Ago
Tanka: End of Summer
it was cold last night
under sunlight this morning
crystal dew's sparkling
like diamonds on spider's web
heat retreats - autumn's coming
Thao Chuong
2015-09-07
8 Years Ago
I don't want to go back to work. Three days in my studio has spoiled me. I wish I could just support myself as an artist!
8 Years Ago
Haa.,,Karyn! Who wanna go back to work? Maximize your restful afternoon (lol).
My sundry thought on Labor Day - a response to Karyn's somber thought on long weekend.
Live to Work or Work to Live
No sweat from hard labor
on long weekend
of the Labor Day
too much rest
too much beer
too much fun
becoming
too rusty
too lazy
to
get
back
to see those bossy faces
Who wanna endure gross abuse
in return
for some shitty pieces of paper
to
exchange for
food
shelters
and other daily necessities
It is very sarcastic
and really the same shit
either
you work to live
or you live to work
you have no way out of the vicious cycle
Basically no life without work
unless
you live on the streets - without work
but being homeless also means no life
or
unless
you're free like me
on my little retirement pension
All my working friends
You have no choice but to work
work and work like a horse
'til you drop dead on your feet
or be disposed like me
in my worthless old ages
Like it or not
you'd better be psychologically happy
and physically ready for work
after any day off
for your living
Thao Chuong
2015-09-07
8 Years Ago
How Hairy
How hairy?
Very hairy. like the orangutan. i prefer to be orange in the jungle.
black at night
and white in the storm of snow....
The blue monkey sailed with Noah....
once, in seas that rised up high...
and then the land turned green...
As flowers grew, the monkeys lost their hair..
flowers and wool... skins and leaves...
so much more - the fashion flare!...
So comfy to wear.. the occasional fray and cotton tear...
Hows to day - your monkey wear?
or are u hairy?
somewhat clumsy
biting
gnawing
a grizzly bear?
time to shave and get some clothes
chuckle
more nonsense
flows
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jane, Jason, and Monsieur.
@Jane: You've reminded me of the hairless, soft, and fine skin (lol)
@ Jason: Nice to see your poetic momentum and your fun today
@ Monsieur: What's a thought of wisdom
No more fun. Welcome back to work. Have a fruitful day.
8 Years Ago
Description: By Karyn Robinson, Gilbert, Arizona
The only thing worse than having to leave the Arizona high country after a wonderfully cool weekend is facing the traffic coming back into Phoenix. If you live here you know what I mean. Inching your way down the big hill. Becoming increasingly aware of the rising temperature. Watching the temperature gauge on the dashboard and praying your rig won't over heat.
You are living The Zonie Life.
This is my latest painting inspired by my life in Arizona. I do love it here but moving from the Midwest to the land of the 'Dry Heat' is a bit of a culture shock.
If we had visited my parents in June, July, August, or September I doubt we would be living here, but no, we came from Michigan in the dead of winter and my husband and I were jubilant at the prospect of wearing shorts and t-shirts in December. Having lived here for 25 years now I shudder at the thought of dressing so lightly in December. I guess I'm an official Zonie now!
Here is my response to Karyn's painting
After the Long Weekend
on
the way
back to their hectic lives in a big city
from the peaceful environment in the wild
after
a short hibernation
during the long weekend
in front of them
a lengthy line of all types of vehicles and trailers
slowly moving bumpers to bumpers
at a speed much slower
than any sluggish snail
they're yawning and whining
as they feel bored of getting stuck in the traffic jam
for such a long time
how ironic it is
for
man
swinging
in between
his strong desire for conquering nature
and his sweet dream of enjoying his peaceful time in the wild
while he continues
chopping off every tree in forests
blasting rock of every mountain
levelling rough terrains
and destroying wilderness
to replace with miles and miles of roads and highways,
and countless facilities
and modern cities
to
make in his living
more convenient
on the other hand
he prefers to escape from his stressful life in human's crowded habitats
and retreats into the wild
whenever possible
for his peace
of mind
could man slow down his rapid expansion in the so-called civilization
and leave Mother Nature alone
or at least give her enough time
to recharge
her energy
and
to recover herself from serious injuries inflicted for a long time
by abusive human beings
Thao Chuong
2015-09-07
8 Years Ago
My echo to Janes' hairy thought (lol) and Jason poem How Hairy?
The Backward Evolution
hundred thousands of years
a very long painful process
too much
time
for hairy apes to evolve into hairless modern beings
yet
it
only takes
a minute or so
for humans to get back to hairy apes
when, a tiny finger accidentally presses on a button
and unleashes most destructive power
from
huge stockpiles
of weapon of mass destruction
the outcome could be worse
the earth could go back to billions of years
a single life form
might somewhat be created
and to start from the scratch
even
God have to work much harder than before
to re-start his new creation again
Thao Chuong
2015-09-08
8 Years Ago
My everyday thought.
Just grab a pen or a pencil. It's what you do with it that really matters.
8 Years Ago
Welcome Marcus Beronilla. Thanks for sharing your everyday thought
Here is my instant response
Your Need Is Not Mine - Likewise
A pen or a pencil is really needed
for
any child
at his first day back to school
In fact
it is utterly useless
for many hungry children
who have been busily searching for something
to fill their empty stomachs
from
leftovers
buried under huge piles
at garbage dumpsters
Remember
what
really matters to you
might not be so important for me
and could be nothing for others
Take
good care
of yourselves
don't sweat to your death to worry for others
since everyone else knows what he really needs.
Thao Chuong
2105-09-08
8 Years Ago
Jason - love your humorous response to my thought:-)
Viet - a sobering response to my thought..All we need is a despotic leader...but which one...? Ours or theirs?
We are economic consequence.
8 Years Ago
@ Marcus Beronilla. Nothing is in perspective, my friend. Life is always chaotic. It doesn't sound right, when something is in good order (lol).
@ Jane. Here is my response to your thought: "All we need is a despotic leader...but which one...? Ours or theirs? "
After Each Revolution
Any leader
regardless
how vicious
how brutal
how cruel
how evil
how bad
he is
and whether
He is
an oppressor
an autocrat
a dictator
a tyrant
He could be disposed
by the people whom
he governs
However
in their nature
All leaders are the same
Why should people spill their blood to overthrow an evil
and replace with a new Satan
After each revolution
the situation is often more chaotic
and far worse
than
the current one
Thao Chuong
2015-09-09
8 Years Ago
Good morning Viva and Monsieur.
@ Viva: Steve Jobs died of cancer nearly four years ago (on Oct. 5 2011 at the age of 56). Nothing new about his death -except a film which is heavily advertised. The drama movie - based on Steve Jobs' life - is scheduled for release on October 9, 2015. I think it is more about money-driven Hollywood's drama than about the life and the inspiring struggle of Steve Jobs' - an amazing and talented human being.
@ Monsieur: I like it. What's a great idea! Let's change the clock.
Have a restful day
8 Years Ago
If clothes had not been invented how hairy would we be? posted by Jane McGowan one day ago
My echo to Jane's hairy thought (lol)
Hairy Fur Coats and Your Hairless Body
you often shave
to make your skin look finer
and your body
sexier
and more luring
then again
it's quite sarcastic
you enjoy your charming look
in those hairy coats
made
of
animals' furry skins
I'm
confused
not knowing
whether you love or you hate my unshaved face
when I run my lips on your tender breast?
Thao Chuong
2015-09-09
8 Years Ago
Have you ever listened to someone for a while and wondered...."who ties your shoelaces for you"
8 Years Ago
Cut Short:
i had perspective
once
and expressed it very well
or so it seemed
to those around me
most disappointed
in my words
as to reveal
my thoughts
to the oh so fear...fully
in charge
that they deemed it fit
to silence m….
Ed Meredith
2015-09-09
8 Years Ago
... . ..... .. ...
or
.. .. . ..... ?
oh mudder
oh fudder!
wheres does
we shudder?
i budder
believe it
8 Years Ago
an echo to Jason’s; 'God bless the Queen this longest reign’
Queenie
she watched 'Queen for a Day’
back in Television's
Golden Age
and even though
she never was
rewarded her Dream's
thoughts of how it would have been
to wear the crown of tin
and glitter
not bitter
that one should sit
upon the throne of privilege
for life
and never
dream of her…
Ed Meredith
2015
8 Years Ago
An instantly bitter/humorous echo inspired by recent poetic flow between British poet Christopher and American poet Meredith (lol).
The Old Queen of England and the outdated British Monarchy
Long Live the Queen!
a politic antique
displayed so long on the rusty throne
oh the outdated British Monarchy!
Long Live the Queen
and her British Empire
both on the verge of collapse
however
she's tough
much tougher than any ruler before
she
never resigns
ever dies
still
reigns
the old empire in the new era
as she always did
in the good old days
Long live the Queen!
still
maintains
her charming look
for
monarchists to love
Britons to adore
and Americans to envy
Long live the Queen
no longer young
under her royal outfits
she must look same
as an old witch
God bless the Queen!
Go to hell all of you
those
who wait for your turns
in the long line
to take over her reign
stop your daily prayers
as her days could never be over
go to hell with your fancy dream
God bless the Queen!
Thao Chuong
2015-09-09
8 Years Ago
I'm launching my new global currency.
I've had it with inflation, deflation, and big bank deregulation.
The Federal Reserve needs a little competition and frustration.
Dollar, Euro, Yen, Franc, this isn’t a prank
Rand, stick your head in the sand
Pound, go pound salt.
Killer high interest credit card melt down
8 Years Ago
Monsieur....daily ....only I wonder..."and you are allowed to switch a kettle on!"
When we all end up one colour what will it be?
8 Years Ago
Hello Jane
----------------------------------------
Blue!
the colour of the oceans....
of sadness
and of reflection
but the rainbow, is always beautiful!
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
echo to Jim
The Currency of Zero
A zero-millionaire
let us all rejoice in our plenty...
drawers full
pockets full
cupboards full!
the zeroooooooos are just everywhere 00000000000 0 0 0 0 0 00 0... . .
The currency to share endlessly!?
may we share our shoulders
our words of comfort
our efforts
and our praises
it costs
ZERO!
May we take a stake
in this offer! in the heart
of malice
And those others
who rejoice in smaller things
do you really feel blessed?
Dollar milionaire
Pound crazy
Euro hero
Zen master?
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jim, Jane, Jason, John. Good health and good day to all Js for sharing your thought.
@ Jim: I like your provoking verse and your well-done drawing. Maybe someday your creation would become the global currency and you might become a trillionaire (lol)
@ Jane: It does 't matter what colour it could be, simply because I am colour blinded (lol)
@ Jason: You've just hit the blue note. So be aware of your poetic fate (lol)
@ John: Hee.. what relationship you are that is so erotic to be kept secret.
8 Years Ago
Have you ever listened to someone for a while and wondered...."who ties your shoelaces for you" posted by Monsieur Danl 23 hours ago
An echo to Monsieur's quote of doubt (lol)
A Tale of Two Lives
living
in Paris
the capital city of light
he wears suits, necktie, and shiny shoes
too much stress and high anxiety from his daily living
he
often
worries about
very tiny things
such as how to tie his loose shoe laces
whenever he accidentally steps in
one of the many Paris' infamous landmines
of dog poops on narrow streets
not much clothes
no shoes needed
a Zulu lives in the wild
nearly naked
on bare feet
he doesn't mind stepping in thorny bushes
or wading his toes into deep mud
his life is stress-free
nothing to be worried about
why the hell do those city guys often believe
their modern living
is
much better than
that of bushmen's in jungles?
Thao Chuong
2015-09-10
8 Years Ago
@ Ed. You've knock my mind off my head -lol.
Here is my echo to Jim's Global Currency and also to Jason's The Currency Of Zero
The Cancerous Heart of Capitalism
the rich is richer
the poor is sinking deeper into back holes
continuously shoots up into infinite space
the already skyrocketing cost of living
clothes
shelter
food
water
and everything else in human's basic need
on the opposite
the pride
the honour
the honesty
the integrity
and whatever belong to human's spirit are sinking down
farther under
ground
zero
same as the global stock market
being
drowned
and melted down
at
the collapse
of capitalism's most sophisticated pyramid scheme
would human be economically survived?
Thao Chuong
2015-09-10
8 Years Ago
Haa.. Love it. But stop counting your zeros, Jim. (Sorry for stealing your original thought of shelter, food, and water from your drawing World Currency)
Here is another chop to Jane's soggy thought: "When we all end up one colour what will it be?"
Colourful Human Beings
You're wondering
when all humans end up in one single colour
which would it be
white?
black?
red?
yellow?
Don't you think
it would be very boring
if all flowers in your garden suddenly change into same colour
I believe
different skin colours
don't
divide
human beings
as a matter of fact
it helps make every of us unique and interesting
It's the mind
of any
guy
who loves or hates other humans
purely
based on
his prejudice
against a specific skin colour of another being
Thao Chuong
2015-09-10
8 Years Ago
Instants.
Do not look down on the seconds. Why?
The time will come and you will see the reasons:
like bullets at the temple they flow by,
the instants
the instants
the instants
Each instant has its own cause and aim,
its own bells and marks,
its own colors,
the instants give some people
painful shame
disgrace and immortality to others
The instants are well pressed into the years,
they are compressed and pressed into the centuries
I cannot understand
where the first
and where on earth
the final instant is.
The momentary instants weave the rain,
and water falls from heaven in a torrent.
At times for many years you have to wait
to see your very last and final moment.
It will arrive as big as gulp some day
in summer when your thirst is so insistent..
And yet we should remember
anyway
our duty from the first
to final instant
Do not look down on the seconds. Why?
The time will come
and you will see, as imminence,-
Like bullets at the temple, they flow by,
the instants
the instants
the instants
-- Robert Rozhdestvensky
8 Years Ago
An echo to Vlad's post of Rozhdestvensky's "instance" and Viet's "meltdown" echo to the above echo of me (Jason) about my echo "zero" on Jim's piece on $000 and Janes "Hello"
Meltdown
Can an "instance" of imortality exist?
Are we imortal in every instance we choose
i claim my piece HERE
this piece of 10s time
this place of calm
quiet
gentle
PEACE
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Before the hum drum
racket, the shouts...... ~SCREAMS
MayHEm
uTTER heLL of
saying "hi"
kicks in
Hello.
now the meltdown
M
e l
Ts... . .
d
o
w~.,n
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
melting
8 Years Ago
an echo to Maria's perls
echoo-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-oo-o-o-o-o-o-o--o-o-o-o--oo-o-o-o-o-oo-o-o-o-o-o-oo o o oo o . . s
(..o..)
the necklace
and the perl oyster
let's be strung up
roped in
hung together
the beauty of life...
poetry
and
Love
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing, Jane, Vadim, and Jason.
@ Jane
To you and I we're flowers under the sun
To others it is a reason to hate
to ethnic cleanse it is a bait
All one colour? One excuse...gone.
As usual, you hit right at the blue note again, Jane.
@ Vadim Levin: Wow! Robert Rozhdestvensky's poem is amazing. I like his Instants.
@ Jason: Nice to see you joyfully surfing on the poetic waves.
8 Years Ago
Double entry removed
Blank space recycled for my thought of today
Inspired by Robert Rozhdestvensky's poem Instants
Living In the Drive-by-shooting Time Zone
Not
possible
to catch flying bullets
victims either died instantly at the crime scenes
or cried in pain in a hospital's bed
Unlike
those slow bullets
Instants of life fly at the speed of light
Time itself has no time to wait for anyone
as always
it
goes
in a hurry
Like
those victims of drive-by-shootings
no man could catch those instants of life from the drive-shooting time
either
would he die right away
by an early
checkout
or
would he be slowly dying in endless sufferings
I'd better
forget
and let go
all instants of life
for the free flow with each immediate living moment of mine,
wouldn't
I
?
Thao Chuong
2015-09-11
8 Years Ago
I just finished a painting about Native American War Paint. And it made me realize even in todays world we wear our war paint. For example our clothes, makeup, accessories etc. We use this nonverbal communication to fight for ourselves and protect ourselves in todays world. A little something I discovered after I finished this painting
8 Years Ago
Put your painting up Angela! they bring your wourds to life (if thats allowed)
Looks like Monsier got terminated by those shots Viet.. . i thought it was all a misunderstanding on the other explosive thread.. ? just what is what these days..
here was a take on it
a google box laugh that might have gone wrong?
we just
wine n whine n wine n whine n wine....
oops
8 Years Ago
ONE GOD
Call me simple in my thoughts
But this is what I was taught
Butcher, baker, candlestick maker
Muslim, Jew, or any religion taker
We are taught to love thy neighbour
Bad thoughts and evils do not harbour
caring and sharing
Loving and giving
This for the majority goes
Distortion as the evil shows
Why? who can say
that they should be this way
The mad men sit on the thrones
making ripples with their stones
As the ripples grow in size
Peace and loving dies
We need to stay true to who we are
And these despots will not get far
They are but one to set the madness
Let them not cause this sadness
Let them not cascade this evil
and cause this mass upheaval
Remember what we were taught
Peace and harmony why we fought
JEM 110915
8 Years Ago
Jason. Thanks for your update about Monsieur. I hope you're right in your thought about the other explosive thread that made him leave. I don't know whether my poem "A Tale of Two Lives" would have had any impact on his decision.
He is a awesome artist, a thought provoker, and an intellectual. I felt bad that he rolled up his tent, packed up all his belongs and left the camp.
Enjoy a restful weekend.
8 Years Ago
Here is my instant echo to Jane's awesome poem.
Only One God and Many Different Satans
Man
has fought
has raped
has burnt
has killed
has slaughtered
has been at wars
In the Name of their Gods
or in defense of their religions
There must be Only One Creator of the whole universe
regardless how humans would call Him
in
many
different names
He must be the same God
the only one God
It is actually not about God
but
about human beings
to satisfy their greedy needs
by
creating
and worshiping many different Satans
inside their sinful souls
Thao Chuong
2015-09-11
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jason. I appreciate your time for clarification. I feel better for knowing the reason why he left. I have had no clue, because I didn't follow the thread you mentioned at all. Online communication is always problematic. Anyway, it's quite normal that different people communicate, interact, act, and react differently. It's an unavoidable matter of life. Isn't it more peaceful to keep going with the flow of each day?.
8 Years Ago
I paint these Native American Warriors because I can relate to them. They are people who fought for a way of life that was worth fighting for. They are a people who had their own medicine, government, and spirituality. They hunted and grew their own food and clothing. So these warriors fought for a entire way of living. This resinates with me to always fight for my life and how I want to exist in the world. And to do it like a true warrior. Their people were here before us and should be remembered and respected in the highest regard. By Angela Bell.
Description: The Great White Spirit and the Buffalo stood on the same plane. Because the white buffalo provided them with everything they needed. For example the flesh, the skin, and the bones. The white buffalo was rare and when seen it was a sign of positive change. The great white spirit was a representation of all of the love, goodness, abundance and all that comes with that. And today we all want this for ourselves and family.
8 Years Ago
About Angela Bell
.
Getting to where I'm at now with my art has been a lifetime process. As a child I liked nothing better than to color birds and eagles. Of course I only chose the bronze and brown colors in my Crayola box (like every good child artist would do hahaha). I also loved to make sculptures made of mud and I of course thought they were museum quality as I displayed them on shelves. In school nothing made me happier than when the teacher said were going to collage today. I would think finally something worth doing at school. So time went on and I ran into Bob Ross on Sat. mornings. Oils were difficult so I used his techniques with cheap acrylics. But the importance was learning the techniques not the medium. After that I experimented with painting all sort of things. Especially native American art. I was never professionally trained. I picked up things from books, other artist, You Tube, and practice. So finally, finally I have arrived with my own style! And I could not be happier.
Description: The Cheyenne Dog Soldier's were fierce warriors. These men many times acted like a decoy to help their tribe escape from harm. The Cheyenne Dog Soldiers should always be remembered and respected for their bravery. And for the many times so willing to sacrifice their own life for those of their tribe.
8 Years Ago
An echo to Jane McGowen's poem Power
As Always Peace - a Sweet Dream & War - the Suffering Reality
Foreign interventions
and
armed conflicts
have pushed racial hatreds deeper
and escalated the so-called civil war in Syria
This country has been badly damaged
since over four years ago
With
on-going fierce battles
between
the government
supported
by Iran, Russia, and ISIS
and
the rebels
backed up
by Turkey, Qatar and Saudi Arabia. France, Britain, and USA
The land has been soaked with blood
scattered
with flesh and bones
from the Deaths of over Two hundred thousand civilians
Six and a half million refugees have been displaced right on their own homeland
another Three million Syrians have fled from
crossing borders to other surrounding neighbour countries
What a hell of a new Vietnam War!
with outside intervention
which forces bothers to kill brothers
Who
should
be Blamed?
for the deaths, the injured, and the influx of refugees
also for burned villages, collapsed cities, ravaged land
Iran? Russian? or the US-led coalition?
It doesn't make any difference to those foreign countries
war is far away from their homes
They Don't Really Care
who die
who's wounded
how many deaths
how much devastation
so long as interests of their nations are better served
Unfortunately, the ones who bear highest cost and most loss are civilian Syrians
those helpless victims can't do anything
to restore
peace
However
as peace lovers
around the world
you could make a huge difference
by raising your collective voice against this bloody war
Thao Chuong
2015-09-12
FYI:I cut and paste her poem for your reference.
POWER
We vote them in and entrust them with our future
Our lives, our money, our homes, our jobs, our care
A handful of these stay true to their word
The remainder are driven insane with the feel of power
Money, houses, possessions, greed, madness ensues
What makes a despotic leader?
He primes his armies, with chants and rituals
Promises of what could be
He uses his God as an excuse
To cleanse the others out
Does he know what his end goal is?
When will his madness cease?
When does normality return?
What do the outside rulers do?
They evaluate
Does he have minerals we need
Does he have oil we need
Is he sitting on a mountain of gas
If the answer is yes we intervene
If the answer is no
They are left to sort it out
and sort it out
and sort it out
We see images of Aylan Kurd
Hs brother Ghalib
His mother Rehan
Would these people be laid on that beach
If Bush and Blair hand in hand had left Iraq alone
Where and when did all this madness begin?
Does anyone know?
JEM 060915
8 Years Ago
Autumn's Coming
heavy down pour
of
late
rainfalls
after the long drought
has gradually turned brown lawn
into green patches
summer won't leave until about another week or so
it's still hot during the day
yet
at
night
it's colder
as temperature sometimes drops to single digit
getting tired
after holding too long on heavy branches
they happily dance in the wind
and let go
off
themselves
onto the soggy ground
scattered under fruit trees in my garden
apples
of various types
Gala, Fuji, Jonagold, Granny Smith
in different sizes and colours
they're anxiously waiting for falling leaves
to help them weave
a colourful tapestry
in Autumn
Thao Chuong
2015-09-12
8 Years Ago
Money and Decent Humans
The world of capitalism mainly focuses on materialism
in
which
Money is worshiped
as
an almighty god
with an absolute power
Money
is the ruler
governing humans' livelihood
measuring their values
defining what's success and what's failure
and eventually deciding a man's fate
Money
could
trade peace for war
replace love with hate
change black to white
make wrong to right
turn sinful men to saints
Money
is even believed
it could be used as bribery to God
for a first-class seat in His heaven
Money could take away
any man's self-respect,
his honour,
his honesty,
his integrity
his pride
Money
the worst tsunami
has been washing all decent humans to the modern sea of extinction
Thao Chuong
2015-09-13
8 Years Ago
Thank you Viet for the repost - and the response.
Why do humans make life so difficult, even from driving on the road, to the wars we have to suffer,
what on earth is wrong with us? Life could be so simple :-) No wonder I love animals, there are no hidden
agendas :-)
8 Years Ago
Of Wants and Needs
All
what
I really need
a roof over my head
clothes to cover my body
clean water to drink
fresh air to breathe
two meals a day
a warm bed at night
sufficient
enough
for me
to
enjoy a decent life
it's really odd
I am not always satisfied
with
what I'm holding in my hands
I often waste my living time
to chase endless things which I want
but I am not really
in need
of
Thao Chuong
2015-09-13
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: So do I, I love animals too, However, I love human beings more regardless what and who they are or how they act. Simply because I belong to this superior animal group. I might act the same without full awareness of my own thoughts, behaviours, and actions. Have a nice week to you. my friend.
8 Years Ago
Haa.. Jim. You've blown my hat away for the rest of the day.
Under a Dog's Perspective
as
a dog
I often laugh at the bitter slogan in the back of vehicles
"The More I Know People
The More I Love My Dog"
I know
why I don't like other dogs
as they're stupidly barking at me
to
show
their masters
how loyal they're
and let their masters know they're safe under full protection .
I really don't comprehend any reason
why people hate each other so much
to
show
their bitterness
in such a brainless slogan
at least
it's nice
they love dogs
they give us food
they walk us daily
they even scoop our poops on their well-manicured lawn
I can tell ya
the more I know dogs
the more I love those silly creatures
Thao Chuong
2015-09-13
8 Years Ago
Thanks Viet for the insight into the mind of the canine.
I read it to my dog and he gave it a little howl of approval.
The more snakes I meet
the more I love people.
8 Years Ago
after watching a video on the oppression of women this morning.
Humanity is failing
when no one is willing
to understand
what the other is feeling
hate for you
hate for me
a never ending theory,
it's all pretend
the hate will end
the gears of war
always turning
We need to see
it's not all about "me"
and from this day forth
see value in others' worth
So stop your imposing
what you feel to be true
on the rest of the world
for the sake of "you"
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jim, Jane, and John. Enjoy a fruitful week
@ Jim: My thanks and best regards to your dog for his approval and to you for giving your fun time .
@ Jane: I appreciate your time and your poem written for free promote of my collage.
@ John: Thank for your thoughtful flow in the nice poem. I like it.
8 Years Ago
Jane. Now I know why you have a cat (lol)
Of Humans, Cats, and Dogs
(To all dog-and/or-cat lovers)
Much smarter than dogs
Cats have no masters
loyalty doesn't matter
they serve no one but themselves
Cats know for sure
what they want
how to get them
without losing any sweat
neither would they work as a bodyguard in daily morning walk
nor would they run around as a security guard at night to protect the masters' property
Unlike stupid dogs
often on the leash
as
a bad deal with humans' unfair reward
for their hard work
and loyalty
Cats are free
to do whatever they'd like to
to go whenever they prefer to
they could stay inside to lazily lie
on cozy beds,
in warm laps of cat lovers,
or by the fireplaces in cold winter
they go outside
to
fool around
and secretly hide their poop in any neighbour's flowerbed
Better than those sneaky politicians
who have to cope with grave consequence
whenever their hidden agendas accidentally exposed to the public
Cats
take no responsibility at all
when their buried secrete unearthed
the neighbour has to deal with the filthy mess
and the owner must get the blame
Between
humans, dogs and cats
which one is sharper, wiser, smarter, cleverer, and more intellectual ?
Thao Chuong
2015-09-14
8 Years Ago
I have 2 dogs and 2 cats and the cats are super easy comparatively speaking, but I have more fun with the dogs as they are attention seekers and are more interested in partaking with the strange beings in the house with only 2 legs that walk upright. :)
Viet that was a fun poem, and it sounds like you know a lot about poopoo activities, perhaps you were on the receiving end a few times of a cat burgling their poo into your garden... yes? lol
My 2nd thought for the day deals with being overwhelmed. A year ago I started out on an epic creative journey/business adventure to create something new and bring it to market. Now that the creative part is over, it's all business related and marketing related things that have my head spinning on which steps to take first... I am trying... but I can't seem to put it all into focus at the moment. Maybe this huge glass of wine will help...
8 Years Ago
John
I always find a large glass of the red stuff helps :-) I must ask if you find an answer to this marketing thing, prey do tell, my other half has invented something but is now struggling too to "get it out there". It is also driving him (and myself) insane. !! I hope you gain some inspiration from the glass.
8 Years Ago
Good morning John, Ed, and Jane.
@ John. I have only one dog now. Sometimes I feel as if I have to deal with another child at home. However, he is an insurance for my health as he forces me to keep my healthy habit of walking daily (lol). We had an outdoor/hunting cat before. At that time, I had a strained relationship with my neighbors for letting her mess up their gardens. After she died, we don't. have a cat anymore. I prefer not to imprison any animal inside the house. Unlike human beings, animals love to be free outdoor. It's amazing that you have enough energy and time to take care of two dogs and two cats in your home,
@ Ed: I enjoy your i Satyr. You've reminded of my own sins (lol)
@ Jane: Nice to see you here.
Have a nice day to you all
8 Years Ago
My joke to John, Ed, and Jane
Stress Release & Alcohol
I
drank
some wine
the first glass for your health
the second for everyone's
the third for my wife's
the fourth for mine
Still
not enough to cheer myself up
I kept taking more
the fifth
the sixth
....
and the...
after that
I lost my count
I didn't remember much
as the sea of alcohol drank me
wallowed me in
and drowned me down to its bottom
Next time
for peace of mind
no
more alcohol
I'd better 'make love not war"
however
I wonder
if sex would give me the same drilling headache
as I usually get from my drinking aftermath
Thao Chuong
2015-09-15
8 Years Ago
In response to Viets Stress release and alcohol
Through Beer Goggles
Twixt the lips a sip a sup
Just to help loosen up
Twixt the lips a sup a sip
Lets have just another nip
Inhibitions start to go
Conversation starts to flow
Another glass filled and passed
Life becomes one big blast
Things begin to look so clear
Pass me just one more beer
Twixt the lips a sip a sup
Think I'm going to throw up
Twixt the lips a sup a sip
Now I really feel quite sick
Take myself right off to bed
Wake up with a pounding head
Twixt the lip a sip a sup
Out of my coffee cup
Twixt the lips a sup a sip
Think my mouth needs a zip!
JEM 150915
8 Years Ago
I like your flow when you swim in the pool of alcohol (lol)
An echo to the sex part of Ed's poem i Satyr.
Make Love as Hard as You Go to War
close the eyes
lick the lips
lock the mouths
twist the tongues
suck the sweet
hiss a kiss
Unwrap two bodies
thrust in
pull out
lift up
push down
go left
turn right
twist
spin
roll
rotate
entwine
move around
Let's cry
let's laugh
let's moan
let's dance
let's fly
let's soar
let's roam to the top of joy mountain
Let's drop
let's dive
let's drive
let's sink
let's drown '
let's lost
let's die in the hell of orgasm
Thao Chuong
2015-09-15
8 Years Ago
Description "Do What You Must, but Don’t Forget the Children," 2002, oil on canvas, 60 in. x 42.13 inches. In the end, satisfy your urges. With eyes closed, remember, however vague, what you set in motion, the living you produced. Responsibility is yours till the end, or yours to end. And in the end, too, your once colorful world of depth and compassion may darken to the one-dimensional gesture of physical stroke. Squint, reach-out in whichever direction. Someone is out there. Their path is the end, but it may no longer be there for you to share. By Kenneth Agnello
Gender Equality and God's Creation of Humans
No man knows how you feel as a woman
unless
you tell him
about his unfair conduct
and his bad behaviour that hurts you
Otherwise, he continues abusing you
your silence is normally interpreted
as
a sign
of a non-verbal consent
Practically
most of the time
you have to raise your strong voice to reject his ill-treatment
also you must fight
for
your rights
of being treated with respect
Unfortunately, the social, religious, and legal system
was created
and has been firmly controlled by men
to serve only male self-interest
Men have made women believe for many centuries
until today
at this very modern moment
that Women are but only a sparerib of Men
in God's original creation.
as
written
in those bibles
No way
to achieve
Gender Equality
so long as any woman
especially those feminists
still believe in the status quo of this religious bullshit
Thao Chuong
2015-09-16
8 Years Ago
Succinctly put Viet - thank you :-)
When I eventually retire I think I am moving to warmer climes.
Have a great day everyone. May the sun shine.
8 Years Ago
Rejoice,
Ponder,
Renew,
Talk to yourself more......
Change....
your train of thought!
Move,
Love,
Hug,
Explain,
Understand,
Who you are....
And others!
Age will....
Grasp you,
See it,
Remember more,
Walk and travel,
Stand up,
Yell,
Sing,
Sleep,
Rest,
All you can.
Always be,
Who you,
Must be....
to stay Alive.
Create!
MJOA - 2015
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane and Mary
@ Jane: Retirement is but an illusion. You'll certainly get there sooner or later. It might not be as fancy as you're dreaming now (lol)
@ Mary: Thanks for sharing. I'd like your inspiring poem.
Have a nice day to all
8 Years Ago
When I eventually retire I think I am moving to warmer climes. By Jane McGowen
Here is my somber echo to your sweet dream
Life Is But a Dream
When I was young
I dreamed of getting older
No longer a child
becoming a teenager
the world around me suddenly opened to the infinite
however everyone still told me what to do
and treated me as a little kid with same damned old fucking restrictions
I was so mad
that I disregarded those rules and smashed all walls of limitations
Quite sardonic
while I were rebelling against the grownups
I dreamed of being an adult
with
all the Rights
and Freedom
to smoke, to drink, to have sex, to commit every my sin I like to
However
not as I had expected
after I entered it
I recognized
the world of adults was always hungry
for money, fame, glory, authority, power, and much more shits
which
I didn't need
for a decent living
It was
so mean,
so unkind,
too nasty,
too vicious,
too merciless,
too malicious,
too competitive
I was tied up by duties, responsibilities, obligations, and so on
it was so odd
I had to sell my living time to make a living
Disenchanted
by that concept of life
I dreamed of my wonderful retirement
without job
no more stress
and full freedom to use my time for whatever I prefer to
Now I am retired
no much energy left
my body is no longer strong as it was
my mind is not as sharp as it used to be
I
have
no dream left
except for an easy ticket to the unknown
Life Is But a Dream
Thao Chuong
2015-09-17
8 Years Ago
Aging - In response to Viet
Teens and twenties were hell
Just finding who you are
How smart or dumb you are
How pretty or ugly you are
How fat or thin you are
Thirties you have discovered yourself
You know who you are
What you want
Where you want to go
And some of the knowledge to do it
Forties you don't give a shit
You've either got where you're going or still striving
You don't care what people say
Because you are who you are
and you ain't changing for no-one
Just reached my fifties so still deciding
As my body no longer likes cold
Work takes up too much of my time
I have too much I want to do
I have too much I want to see
My needs will be just few....
The other half
The time
The money
The motorhome
The camera
The fitness.......
sigh.....
The youth
Jem 170915
8 Years Ago
Wow to your flow, Jane! I love your humour. Keep your momentum.
Here is my second poem today.
Description: Man and Woman, Pregnant; 2014, oil on canvas, 35 inches X 20.25 inches. Presently stretched, but can be rolled for, if needed, for easier and more cost-efficient shipping.
Of Men & Women
Was it fate or karma which clicked them together under one sheet?
She was so sure
it was love
which he was injecting into her heart
He knew
in no doubt
it wasn't love
but he never let her know
she was only an exotic chick for his thirst of sex
no more no less
Somewhat
both believed
they had the same need
which was romance
and how lucky they found the right mates
As a guy who played with fire
someday had his hands burned
he
who
enjoyed sex
eventually had his chance roasted
he accidentally planted a living seed
yet he was not ready to take any of his responsibility
She rubbed her tummy
feeling each of its kick inside her body
she convinced herself
her pregnancy was the fruit of love
until
she knew
he had mounted on a wild horse
and rode away as quick as he could
She felt
as if a victim of robbery with rape
not only did he stole her heart
but also he left
a seed
of
bitterness and hatred
rapidly growing inside herself
Women always pay for the full cost
they bear the consequence alone for a lifetime from the lost love
while men are free to fool around for rotten sex
like a blind beggar who uses his stick to feel holes on the streets
just for his sense of security
during his walk
in his forever
darkness
Thao Chuong
2015-09-17
8 Years Ago
When an Artist Calls It Quits
The artist admits
he's an addict
he calls it quits
he decides to relinquish his addiction
it's time to pack up
it's time to leave the busy camp
it's time to go home for an eternal sleep
Or for full rehab
he'd better recap
why he is doing it
like Karl; Marx once cleverly wrote "religion is an opium to the mind"
he insanely believes "art is poisonous to his life"
How could he forget?
creativity is embedded in his blood
flows in every vein of his entire body
as oxygen provides essential supplies to his heart and brain
Wherever
he goes
so long as he lives
he carries it with him for his entire life
No way
to get rid of art
unless he would take a fully loaded revolver
puts into his mouth
and presses the trigger
as Hemingway did to terminate his suffering
Regardless
what da hell is he thinking of
or how da heck he comes to his silly decision to call it quits
If
he wanna be alive
and have fun
he'd better continue running after the flow of art
Otherwise
if he wanna give up
he'd better write a suicide note
then draw on a blank wall
his drained remains
prior to his call
it
quits
Thao Chuong
2015--09-17
Note: Copy and paste from another thread for my own record
8 Years Ago
A thought echo of that other thread and Viet's; 'When an Artist Calls It Quits'...
Artist Angst
always a good story
this artist in angst
easy to embrace a little too much
a stereotype so strong
often faked
for acceptance
into the artistic community
Ed Meredith
2015/09/18
8 Years Ago
Tanka;
Is It Art
is it really art
when destroying one’s own works
is it performance
or Tortured Artist Syndrome
creation in destruction
Ed Meredith
2015/09/18
8 Years Ago
Some kind of phoenix syndrome?
I must admit
at 16, i burned all my school books
those words of mine
enjoyed it completely
watching the flames of words
rise up high
licking the sky
burning my face
turning the ashes...
i salvaged one
for my tearful mother
i found it profoundly rewarding
the burning...
...and the salvage
such is life!
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
NB dont ever burn your work!!
i did delete a few of my poetry books
but ive always got the files to rework
8 Years Ago
an echo to Karen's "The Other side of the World"
loved those lines Karen
"I never really contemplated
September meaning Spring,
until I met you. "
hope you dont me borrowing their content in an echo...
Walk in to September...
Some swans have flown
in clouds they found their wings
and there they gave their hearts away...
Come... let us re-walk through trees...
as feet leave prints in sunken mud and wallow
and deeply lost - the tread in Winter snow
or gentlest sallows, such treads on desert sands?
do not falter
oh mellow walked on pastures, Spring time dew...
I remember those walks
that love
that spirit was of you...
guiding spirit of the paths and endless roads
Fleeting, restless you
in September walks
flowers blossom
where your feet tread
amongst the fallen
the early wounded and ancient dead
the turning windswept tides
the coming foretold dreads...
Just for you, September springs...
where winds are heard to hum in quiet strings
and the flute is heard to play...
"I never really wished before
this September bringing Spring,
until I thought of you"
Flowers, always, Autumn flies
in brisk treads of fall
just for you...
Spring in September!
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Nice job on the last two poems relative to my paintings--"Do What You Must..." and "Man and Woman, Pregnant." The latter is a concept I've played with for years--the general flipside to all the advertisements and promotions of pregnancy as something glorified. I figured, "why not show the other side, where pregnancy is something feared and questioned?" A controversy always wets my artistic whistle. The notion that to visually desecrate the mother-with-child, childbirth, etc. genre in a framed, isolated context satisfied my perverse nature. Viewers must remember, however, that paintings like “Man and Woman, Pregnant” are not anti-pregnancy or anti-motherhood statements; they are, put simply, a focused look at an issue that is free of the candy-coated cover of a sacred issue, exposing in the process a not-so-desired dream.
8 Years Ago
Good morning Ed, Jason, and Ken.
@ Ed: Ha.. I enjoyed your sense of provoking thought in your echo and your Tanka
@ Jason: Wow to both poems of yours. You have ridden on the waves of poetry.
@ Ken: Thanks for revealing the insight about your work.
Have a nice day to you all
8 Years Ago
Echo to Ed's Artist Angst
Thirst For Public Recognition
the artist makes noise
for the public attention
he acts like a kid
crying for his mom's breast milk
hasn't been fed what he needs
he's drowned in mental breakdown
Thao Chuong
20150-09-18
8 Years Ago
An echo to Ed's poem Is It Art
The Syndrome of Mental Illness
What an artist has already created
whether he thinks
it's
art
or a piece of shit
when he enjoys destroying it
It
could be
Either
an act of vandalism and destruction
a moment of madness and despair
Or
a prank
an addictive game
To attract more sympathy and attention from the public
Either way
he is mentally sick
emotional support from your compassionate heart is poisonous
the more he takes the stronger dose he needs
Stop giving him your fatal remedy
let him see a psychiatrist
Thao Chuong
2015-09-18
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8 Years Ago
From Ed's thought of dragonfly
Tanka First Sign of Autumn
some brown maple leaves
and a lifeless dragonfly
on the soggy deck
left by the cold wind last night
first sign of coming autumn
Thao Chuong
2015-09-18
8 Years Ago
Awesome stuff in here!
A new drawing and a poem..
Profound in their belief,
that we are not alone,
stands humanity,
ever searching the unknown
For mankind is small,
among the planets and the stars,
impossible it seems,
that we'll ever know them all
Let me share with you,
a creation of what could be,
it's an alien being,
from another galaxy...
john w. 2015
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your new work and the poem, John.
It is believed that God only created Adam, Eve and other beings on.the planet earth- no alien on any star. In addition when God created it. the earth was flat. Somehow a crazy scientist has turned it round. The Church would hang any insane scientist who could contact with alien beings (lol). Have a good night.
8 Years Ago
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Recycling this space for an instant poem in response to John's creation of alien beings. John must be a god (lol)
Of God and His Creation
Believe it or not
the earth was flat
when God created it
the sun moved around this center of universe
God created the sky
and put His Heaven on the top of it
as the best reward to those who worship Him
He also created the burning Hell
far well below
under
the bottom of earth
as the scariest punishment for those who do not believe in this religious fantasy
Too bad
some crazy scientists have turned the earth to round
and made it move around the sun
days and nights
until now
It is the reason
why
the worst enemy of religion
is
science
and absolutely
neither Karl Marx
nor those sinful atheists
Thao Chuong
2015-09-18
8 Years Ago
Maria Disley
5 Hours Ago
I heard he burned his books, the boy
Letters trashed to ash,
Ignited thoughts, put to paper
Only to be returned to their beginnings,
Fire!
My face flushes,
In disbelief
I cannot throw away a word,
And even grieve those I did not write,
Or salvage from my childhood hand and mind,
What kind of boy would burn his books,
His words, his childhood mind and hand?
No less beauty than breathes his man words.
I cannot understand.
8 Years Ago
Thanks Maria. Nice to see you dropping by with such a nice poem
Have a restful weekend to all
An echo to Maria's poem
The Cobweb of Justice
Who is the worst evil?
The teenager
who is in his identity crisis
burning his textbooks
to revolt against the tight control of the adult's world
The arsonist
who is mentally sick
too addicted to the glory of fires
he runs around town
torching houses
or
The leader of a nation
who decides to send his troops overseas
invading
other countries
burning cities, villages
killing innocent people
creating millions of refugees
ravaging other countries for natural resources
Regrettably
we - humans
often
blame
condemn
and bring to justice
both the silly teenager and the mentally-ill arsonist
Not only have we followed our leader like sheep
but also
have we been paying our respect to him for serving our country very well
Justice
is
like
a cobweb
which could only catch small flies
while the powerful eagle keeps soaring high
and terrorizes the peaceful sky
Thao Chuong
2015-09-19
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8 Years Ago
I like that one Viet. Nice job. In response...
To arms, to arms,
your country needs you,
to fight the enemy
trying to destroy you
We are told we must kill,
and so it has always been,
to disobey that order,
is a military sin
Pushing their agenda,
the elite play their game,
sacrificing it's people,
for financial gain
Recruiting the young,
the strong, and the brave,
for the youth have no thoughts
but obey, obey, obey
You'll do our bidding,
we trained you well,
now prepare for the fight,
as we bid you farewell
8 Years Ago
My sentiments echo John’s poem of what the recruitment posters never tell you…
This is an older poem of mine written on the day the United States invalided Iraq in March 2003,
the painting was from the same sad day…
My apologies for dipping into my past work but John's poignant poem touched that spot within me.
The Unicorn’s Forgotten Bones
Our tale is told with empty words lingering on deeds
that never crossed the distance and found shroud still
Like a thousand killing cuts we watch yesterdays
one by one in silence along the passage of desolation
only to find there our stories without journey or end
Stories where ancestral voices pass unheard
whispering secrets obscured by thoughts
not found in the soul’s dream
A dream where Hummingbird wings can rest
and the Waterfalls sing while Unicorns play raising
the spirits of the children - first voices to laugh
echoing forever
But youthful wings too soon clipped
never notice the Unicorn’s forgotten bones
So with eyes wide shut and wilted hearts
we gather around patriot graves without resurrection
while our good guardians pretend their morals
and litter the fantasies of our children
who play upon the dead...
spreading the disease of war
Ed Meredith
March 2003
8 Years Ago
@ John
Wow John! You summed it up perfectly. I love it, man.
You'll do our bidding,
we trained you so well,
now prepare for the fighting,
and we bid you farewell
@ Ed.
It is not the first time I read it. But each time I read it, I could feel a strong impact from your words. Ed
So with eyes wide shut and wilted hearts
we gather around patriot graves without resurrection
while our good guardians pretend their morals
and litter the fantasies of our children
who play upon the dead...
spreading the disease of war
Here;s my somber echo to John's poem and Ed's poem about war
Pawns of the War Game
Like
their ancestors
those poor peasants
(who walked with bare feet on their land in the past)
and always served as foot soldiers at battlefronts
to
protect
the king,
his queen,
and also his kingdom
Nowadays
young men and women from lower class
often have to serve as pawns in the modern war game
They're recruited and trained to be effective killing machines
that only know how to kill
by following strict orders
without any light doubt
without question asked
Modern day
has no more kings and queens to be served
those foot soldiers believe they fight to protect their people
and die for their nation
Alas
only
the rich
the fat cats
the upper class
the multinational corporations
could get the best from their loyal service
For their own survivals
warriors at war have to kill indiscriminately
so often
they go back home as heroes
in body bags
on stretches
on crutches
or in mental wreckage of postwar syndrome
many
of 'em
commit suicide
or become homeless right on their homeland
The traitors of a nation are the governing class
that conducts endless wars
and
not those young men
nor young women who refuse to participate in those bloody games
Thao Chuong
2015-09-19
8 Years Ago
Tanka The Sound of Autumn
somberly echoed
somewhere up high in the sky
noisy farewell
first flock of Canadian geese
leaving home for the warm south
Thao Chuong
2015-09-19
8 Years Ago
Good morning Danl. Glad to see you back. Thanks for sharing your thought. Enjoy a great day
Here is my response to your thought.
Not What You Give - But How You Give It
When you look down
on
someone
you'd better leave him alone
No one needs your help
unless you offer it with your compassion
and with your respect
Not what you give
but
how you give it
which makes others feel good or bad
it also defines what type of humans you really are
Thao Chuong
2015-09-20
8 Years Ago
Very nice Ed and Viet, great stuff, good to see you guys are awake. ;)
To segue from Viet's autumn poem.. my own brief version...
Autumn's Challenge
Silent is Autumn
which transforms the land,
what once flourished with life,
can no longer stand.
Gone is the warmth,
of summer days past,
replaced with chilled air,
and frost on the grass.
And how does Autumn rise
to such a momentous task,
to extinguish verdant life,
and never look back?
John W.. 2015
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your nice Autumn poem
Here is my echo
Autumn Romance
It drizzled
the wind blew
a little bit cold
watery needles slapped at my face
I pulled up the collar to cover my neck
I was dreaming of her
it would be amorous
if she walked with me
hand
in hand
under the misty blanket
After the long walk
we were soggy
he shook it off
I felt miserable and lonesome
The dog and I
we walked
side
by side
like two lovers
in their romance under light rain
Thao Chuong
2015-09-20
8 Years Ago
My Dear Friend
Your life is teetering
on the brink of a mind
sinking far below
Today we may smile
tomorrow we only may remember
the slivers of oblivion
Dear friend, person, partner,
come hold my hand
be within and without
Our days bend low now
for so often we had
the songs of love and adventure
Come one more time
before the mind is gone
hold me tight onto what we call
LIFE!
MJOA —2015
8 Years Ago
Thanks Mary for sharing your poem. I hope my life would go away before my mind is gone (lol). Have a fruitful week
8 Years Ago
Description: THE COUPLE, 2001, 72.25 in. x 41.17 inches, oil on canvas
Of Love & Sex
she knows very well
"meat without seasonings would taste very plain"
it's why
she applies the art of cooking
by marinating her love with sex
to
add
her aroma
for better flavour
quite
disappointed
and discouraging
as those men who have chasing her so far
haven't been lured by the savour of love
but
purely
by her spicy sex
she really wanna now
why men are so dumb to enjoy licking only seasonings coated on the surface
of her fresh
flesh
but
not so keen
to sink their teeth deeper
into the best part of her food
of
love
colorfully blooming in her heart
Thao Chuong
2015-09-21
8 Years Ago
You should sit in nature 20 minutes a day
Unless you are busy, then you should sit for an hour
8 Years Ago
Totally agree with Ed. Smart thinking Danl. I'll do it now. (lol) Enjoy a restful day.
Here is my response to your thought, Danl.
Time to Live or Time to Waste
"sorry
no time
I'm busy"
what's wrong with those who always say that
they have the same amount of time as anyone else
twenty-four hours a day
seven days a week
it's bizarre
they don't have
a second
to smile and to say hi
or a couple of minutes
to interact with other humans
in a hurry
as always
they act
as if
the sky would be going to fall
and their lives would be about to come to an end
If they're smart enough
they would slow down
sit back
relax
they might find much more time
not only to live but also to fulfill many things in their life
than
to do them in a hurry
Thao Chuong
2015-09-22
8 Years Ago
Are you sure. Jane? I doubt about it (lol)
My Joke in response to Jane's
Do Less - Gain More
the longer you sit
the bigger your belly
the rustier your heart
the foggier your mind
the heavier your body
the lazier you are
don't
stay too long
at one place
unless you're in meditation
trying to reach your inner self for peace
move your butt up
do
something
to raise your heartbeats
otherwise you gain nothing
but more
weigh
like a couch potato hardly moves in front of a TV
except to flip the channels
Thao Chuong
2015-09-22
8 Years Ago
Haha You made me chuckle this morning Viet.
Among the green
I sit here, still,
On the grass
Among the leaves
Of the tall trees
Quietly
Watching
Listening
Feeling
The song of birds
The crack of a twig
A beetle scurrying
Over my hand
Breathe
Quietly
Fresh
Damp
Air
A startled deer
A birds warning
A spider spinning
A new dewy web
Calm
Tranquillity
Inner
Peace
The longer
you sit
the more
You see
The more
You gain
JEM 230915
8 Years Ago
Always tell someone how you feel because opportunities are lost in the blink of an eye, but regrets can last for a lifetime.
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane, Tomi, and Jane. Have a nice day.
@ Jane:
The song of birds
The crack of a twig
A beetle scurrying
Over my hand
Breathe
Quietly
Fresh
Damp
Air
Nice flow. Your excellent moment of harmony between your inner self and the outer universe.
@ Tomi: Welcome to the fantasy land of the mind - the wold of illusionists (lol)
@ Danl: Another good thought of yours which is contrary to my normal belief, b'cause I somehow believe Americans are more practical and Frenchmen are more romantic (lol)
Have a restful day to you all.
8 Years Ago
Tanka Autumn Crescent Moon On Glen Lake
a half moon's shining
up high on the azure sky
another half moon
drowned at bottom of Glen Lake
who chop the round moon in halves?
Thao Chuong
2016-09-23
8 Years Ago
@ Tomi Palonen: Very interesting. I hope you wouldn't mind me promoting your art on this thread
Here is my thought of the day inspired by Tomi's Grave
The Grave
who lies quiet inside this grave?
the warrior who was missing in action
in protection of his own people
also in defense of own country
far away from
here
the hero who dropped bombs to burn cities and villages
his jet was crashed
but his remains were embraced
by the foreign land
he ravaged
or
the martyr who wrapped with a homemade bomb
and blew himself up at a crowded market
to kill
his own people
whom he considered the supporters of enemies
those infidels that were invading and occupying his country
whatever they called him
whoever he was
no longer matters
it's over
however
his grave is still here
to serve a sad reminder
for those who are still engaged
in any nonsense war somewhere on earth
Thao Chuong
2015-09-23
8 Years Ago
My fantasy of peace of mind brought on by Danl. Jane and Viet's thoughts and poems of sitting in and out of nature
and the fact that i have heard the grass grow...
A five Tanka chain...
AHA
i sat and listened
to my mind playing it’s games
grasping at silence
i suddenly heard a song
in the rhythm of my heart
i began to dance
to the ancient melodies
found in all that is
known and unknowable
until my mind swept away
sensing inner peace
and a joyful frame of mind
opened many doors
wrought with bias perceptions
so comfortable in my thoughts
worlds within and out
caught in self-made paradox
met as land and sea
emotional tsunami
left me frightened and humbled
all is quiet now
my mind is but a vortex
to what is and not
physical-spiritual
different and one-in-same
Ed Meredith
2015- 09-23
8 Years Ago
@ Ed: Haa.. Love your chained Tanka, ,my friend.
@ Tomi: Thank for not giving me a hard time to remove your work (lol)
@ Danl
My joke to Danl
Politician and Global Warming
He's on the left
while his target is on the right
yet,
as a politician always says
he's right on the target
He's so confident
he knows what he's talking about
he has an extensive experience in dealing with the issue of global warming
Saying
that
he certainly refers to his wife
whenever she gets hot
boiled in high heat
like
a car engine
leaked its antifreeze
and overheated on freeway
he's always able to cool her down
Trust him
stop worrying about global warming or climate change or whatever you call this type of heat
everything under his control
until
he becomes aware of her adultery
as a clear sign of her
not
getting
enough water from him
to douse down her heated desire for sex
Thao Chuong
2015-09-23
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8 Years Ago
Viet my poetic friend, a Tanka echo to your as always poignant Grave Questions...
Lost Promise
our future promise
lost to the insanity
of the love for war
so many sons and daughters
lie still unknown in their graves
Ed Meredith
2015-09-23
i think in recent history this applies more to the countries and people of the land were the war/carnage has taken place
than for the liberators/invaders (depending upon one's perspective) such as the USA that tries to claim and identify every-body of their's...
8 Years Ago
@ Ed: I enjoy your poetic flow, my friend. I always feel that you and I have close connection in poetry, Ed.
It is brave of you to openly share your view on the war and peace issues that may upset those ultra-right wing extremists, especially the so-called born-again Christians in U.S.A. (Note: This observation is for Ed - not an invitation for discussion about politics on this thread).
Have a good evening everyone.
8 Years Ago
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Description: The fishermen of Inle Lake in Myanmar (Burma), actually build houses on stilts in the lake. They use the weeds to build a platform from which they grow vegetables. When they fish, they balance on one leg, whilst rowing with the other and use both hands to cast the nets and fish. Once a year they have a leg rowing competition.
8 Years Ago
My echo to Ed's Senryu
inside and outside
the grass grows and so do i
just sit and listen
Ed Meredith
now
Grass Always Looks Greener on the Other Side of the Fence
So strange
whatever I order
food on others' plates
always look much better than mine
Like
grass
looks greener
on the other side of the fence
or
wives
of other guys seem
more attractive than mine
or
husbands
of other women are better than hers
What have been seen by my naked eyes
always imperfectly interpreted by my partial mind
it's in my greedy nature of being a human
which
makes me
thirst for what
I don't have in my hand
Thao Chuong
2015-09-23
8 Years Ago
Thank for giving me the inspiration by haring your daily thought, Danl. Have a great day.
Here is my response to your today's quote
Nice day to you all
Of Clock, Time, Human's Destiny
it's done
it's gone
no
way
for you
to turn back the clock
impossible to change the mistake you've made
don't whine
no need to regret
there is always a better way to deal with it
either
to fix it
or to start all over again
practically, you can change the tide of time
and make a difference
anytime
you'd like to
isn't it the beauty of life
that you can always control your own destiny?
Thao Chuong
2015-09-24
8 Years Ago
Common sense is not a gift. It is a curse. Because you have to deal with everyone who doesn't have it.
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jane and Danl
@Jane: Why? 'cuse I luv you (lol).
@ Danl: Thanks for your offering me anew challenge today that made me chuckle. You're a thought provoker.
Have as restful weekend to everyone.
Here is my response to your quote: "Common sense is not a gift. It is a curse. Because you have to deal with everyone who doesn't have it."
Of Genius and Madman
he often complains
everyone whom he has met and dealt with so far in his life
no
one has
any common sense at all
he sounds too proud of himself
in his own belief
that
he's the only one
who is commonsensical
on the other hand
he also sounds very bitter
as
he always denies
it is not a gift
but a nuisance
which makes him feel unpleasantly different
from the crowd
around
him
absolutely, he doesn't have the same common sense
as that of everyone else's
whether
he's a genius
or a madman
it's
likely
he's suffered from mental illness of loneliness
Thao Chuong
2015-09-25
8 Years Ago
Autumn or Fall?
rain on colourful canopies
leaves start falling down
in the cold breeze
I sneeze
it reminds me of the flu season
I know why
Autumn - joyful time for love and romance
is also
called
Fall
it's the season of sufferings
for
both
dying leaves
and coughing humans
Thap Chuong
2015-09-25
8 Years Ago
Luv ya too Viet :-)
Yaaaaay its the weekend.
Pop the cork
Pour a glass
Fridays here
lets have a blast!
8 Years Ago
静夜思
— 李白
床前明月光,
疑是地上霜。
举头望明月,
低头思故乡。
Nostalgia
(English version from the above poem written in Chinese by Li Bai)
silver light beside my bed
as if frost on the ground
cocking my eyes up, I see a moon glowing
turning my head down, I drown in homesickness
Thao Chuong
2015-09-25
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8 Years Ago
"The five colours make a man blind, the five tones make a man deaf,’ because if you can only see five colours, you’re blind, and if you can only hear five tones in music, you’re deaf. You see, if you force sound into five tones, you force colour into five colours, you’re blind and deaf. The world of colour is infinite, as is the world of sound. And it is only by stopping fixing conceptions on the world of colour and the world of sound that you really begin to hear it and see it"
-Lao-Tzu
8 Years Ago
WARNING
WARNING
WARNING: Nudity for Adults Only - Viewers' discretion is advised
In response to Ed's response to the question "what keeps you awake at night?" in the other thread.
Sex Keeps Him Awake All Night
tic tack
tic tock
the pendulum's swinging back and forth
the bird pops its head out
and
shouts
at his ears
every fifteen minutes
it keeps reminding him
"it's time to sleep
no more
sex"
he lost his count
of
how
many hours
and how many rounds
he has fooled around with her in bed
without any little rest
worse than a marathoner
on his way
running
up
to the summit
of a high mountain
he's exhaustedly panting
and wanna drop his back down for a break
like
a wild fire is glazing
by the strong wind in a burning forest
she's still burning hot
he couldn't stop for a break
he keeps swinging with the pendulum
until
she asks him
to go make her morning coffee
Thao Chuong
2015-09-25
8 Years Ago
It blinds my mind, Jane (lol)
The Art of Drinking
breathe in deep
gently pour
turn the glass
close the eyes
snip the flavour
dip the lips
take a sip
let it sit
in the mouth
let it absorb
in the tongue
let it sting
'til it sinks
in the throat
swallow it slowly
bottom up the bottle
empty your mind
let yourself die
in deep sea
of alcohol
Thao Chuong
2015-09-26
8 Years Ago
Viet - love the slow flow, like the sinking slowly into the abyss of the bottle or like floating on your back in an endless ocean at midnight.
hmmmm there is another poem in there somewhere lol.
Danl - I was enjoying floating in the sea of alcohol....now I just want to drown in it lol. You need the happy pill by James W Johnson
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: Tell me wot you wud prefer . I could offer you another version of mine with a very fast pace (lol)
@ Danl. Glad to see you around. I thought you were packing up and heading to Mars. (lol)
Here is my response to your today's quote: "Life's darkest hours are just before dusk."
Dark or Bright - It's Just a Matter of Your Own Attitude
what's going up
must go down
after
it reaches its summit
what's going down
won't go up
'til
it hits
its bottom
sooner or later
this must happen
it's a matter of time
unfortunately
it takes forever to slowly move up to the top of a mountain
yet it requires only a couple minutes to fall back down to the ground
remember
after a period of heavy downpour
the sun always appears to shine everything up
including your gloomy mood
buried
too long
in darkness
don't lose
your hope
whenever you're at your darkest hour
it's a good sign
that you've already hit the ocean floor
and
about
to bounce back
onto the surface
to see the dazzling sunshine again
enjoy as best as you can
whenever you're reaching your peak
but
be well-prepared
don't look down on others
so
at least
on your downfall
you don't hear mocking laughs
when you're drowned into your own shit
Thao Chuong
2015-09-26
8 Years Ago
Viet...slow definitely slow :-)
Danl - I can't disagree with you there :-)
night everyone - Sleep well
8 Years Ago
Nice to see the dialogues between Jane and Danl. Have a good night. Sleep tight
Warning: For Adult Only. Sexual content and coarse language. Readers' discretion is advised
@ Jane: Viet...slow definitely slow :-)
Haa..I get it now, Jane. Here is my response to your luring words. I swear to my dog, I am not chasing you. It's a crude joke. Don't run away. (lol0
I'd Better Go With Your Flow
now
I know
you love
my slow
rhythm
to start with
I would tiptoe
my warm nose around your neck
my dried lip on your check
my wet tongue in your mouth
my rough hand about your nipples
my face down into your secrete
until
I could feel
your high heat
you're hotter
than a sand dune
under the glazing sun
you're thirstier
than any traveller
lost in the middle
of a desert
I could see
you're visually
bending
curving
curling
twisting
coiling
twirling
winding
weaving
panting irregularly as if you're about to be out of air
then
I would recognize
you are desperately in need of my fast tempos
yet I would still keep my slow pace
unless
you moan
and urgently ask me to do it quick
so
you know
I could always follow your rhythms
not only
in your life
but also
what you like in sex
last but not least
I do hope you could comprehend
what the heck I am taking about
Thao Chuong
2015-09-26
8 Years Ago
hahahahaha now you definitely made my eyes water Viet lol. No offence taken.....All in the best possible taste ...for poetry' sake of course. ;-)
Ed - Your pictures are not doing Viets heart any good lol
I pull my scarf tighter round my neck
And lift the collar of my coat
Wishing I could lift my mood as easily
Against this cold damp weather
My fingers are stiff and cold
My legs and feet are damp
Wishing it would soon be spring
And feel the warmth of the sun
JEM 270915
8 Years Ago
Good morning, Jane: Good that you laughed at the back humour. Thanks for sharing Danl's painting and your poem. Ed Meredith is a thought provoker, an awesome artist, and a great poet whose poetry irritates the minds of those religious radicals and ultra-right wing extremists in US.
8 Years Ago
WARNING
WARING
WARNING
Warning: For Adults Only. Erotic Images, sexual content, and coarse language. Viewer's/reader's discretion is advised
The Art of Making Love
Lock two bodies
entwine them
breast to breast
face to face
mouth to mouth
firmly press
close the eyes
seal the lips
lick the sweet
taste the flavour
twist the tongues
suck the juice
let it bloom
let it boom
let it blast
in the throat
gulp it down
'til the hearts
sink into
nothingness
Let the hands
go explore
from the top
to the bottom
leave the finger
run free
force it in
move it around
pull it out
let it sink
deep into
the volcano
'til it soaked
with sticky juice
from hot lava
When it boils
lock the legs
close the hips
let's get high
let it rise
thrust it in
yank it out
weave around
let it bang
deeps and shallows
fasts and slows
downs and ups
endless rounds
cries in joys
moans in pains
'til both emerge
into oneness
keep going
until the souls leave the bodies
and both die in the hell
of exotic sex
Thao Chuong
2015-09-27
8 Years Ago
"Ed - Your pictures are not doing Viets heart any good lol " -- Jane
i don't know about Viet's heart, but his poetic libido seems to be in high gear... LOL
Thanks for the art feature Viet...
'Dancing With The Beast' was inspired when i discovered the most interesting facts about the source for the Beauty and the Beast story:
Beauty and the Beast is generally thought of it as an anonymous story handed down from the distant past, in fact, the tale is a literary one, created by the French writer Madame Gabrielle–Suzanne de Villeneuve in 1740.
De Villeneuve was part of the "second wave" of French fairy tale writers (Madame D'Aulnoy, Charles Perrault, and other salon fairy tale writers comprising the "first wave" fifty years earlier). When she sat down to create Beauty and the Beast (a novella–length tale first published in La jeune ameriquaine, et les contes marins), she was influenced by the work of "first wave" writers, by the story of "Cupid and Psyche" in Apuleius' Golden Ass, and by the various Animal Bridegroom legends of folklore. The story she came up with was uniquely her own, however, and addressed issues of concern to women of her day. Chief among these was a critique of a marriage system in which women had few legal rights — no right to chose their own husband, no right to refuse the marriage bed, no right to control their own property, and no right of divorce. Often the brides were fourteen or fifteen years old, given to men who were decades older. Unsatisfactory wives risked being locked up in mental institutions or distant convents. Women fairy tale writers of the 17th & 18th centuries were often sharply critical of such practices, promoting the ideas of love, fidelity, and civilité between the sexes. Their tales reflected the realities they lived with, and their dreams of a better way of life. Their Animal Bridegroom stories, in particularly, embodied the real–life fears of women who could be promised to total strangers in marriage, and who did not know if they'd find a beast or a lover in their marriage bed.
De Villeneuve's Beauty and the Beast is over one hundred pages long and published for adult readers, it is also somewhat different than the shorter version we know today.
Beauty's destiny lies in the hands of her father, who gives her over to the Beast (to save his own life) and thus seals her fate. The Beast is a truly fierce figure, not a gentle soul disguised by fur. He is a creature lost to the human world that had once been his by birthright. The emphasis of this tale is on the transformation of the Beast, who must find his way back to the human sphere. He is a genuine monster, eventually reclaimed by civility, magic, and love, and it is only then that Beauty can truly love him. Beauty's nightly refusal of the Beast and the slow awakening of both her attraction and her sexuality are contrasted with the Beast's struggles to contain his own animal nature. In this story, the final transformation does not occur until after Beauty weds her Beast, waking up in her marriage bed to find a human Prince beside her.
Beauty's task is to look where others would not, and to perceive the man within the Beast.
The Beast's own task is patience, and the reclaiming of the human within himself.
8 Years Ago
A Late Night Riddle:
what is up and never down
stays in one place
and moves around
when seen from afar
it’s really near
never to be touched
but held so dear
we all have it not
but yet we do
i can’t figure it out what it is
can you
Ed Meredith
2015-09- 28
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: Relax. Your Monday is almost over.
@ Danl. Haa... I like your black humour about guys how mention women's big backside. Nice that you have no assignment for me to do on Monday (lol).
@ Ed Thanks for sharing your insight about your painting 'Dancing With The Beast' . You poem A Late Night Riddle made me think
Have as fruitful week
8 Years Ago
Here is my echo to Danl's black humour: "Studies show that women with big backsides live longer than men who mention it."
Her Nightmare of Gaining Weigh
she gained weigh
her face was rounder
her smile was as attractive as that of Mona Lisa's
it was not what he needed
like any art collector
he wanted Leonardo Da Vinci's million dollar panting
but the authentic original
not a faked copy of it
regrettably
she was no longer the skinny woman whom he adored
his mind was increasingly fantasized
by
those
starving
bony super models
recently
whenever
they had sex
he foolishly insulted her
by
saying
he felt her soft and comfy
as if he were jumping on foam mattress
or resting on a couch
it was too much for anyone
to take this type of mental abuses
it drove her insane
in the police report
from
the autopsy
he died of an overdose of sex
engraved
on his tombstone
"Here
Rests in Hell
the Rotten Soul
of an Abusive Man
who used to call his wife a fat cat"
never underestimate a woman's strength when she gains weigh
Thao Chuong
2015-09-28
8 Years Ago
Here's part of the story we never hear... the epilogue:
Beauty and the Beast, the Morning After:
When Beauty's kiss turned the Beast into a man, she complained: "You should have warned me, here I was smitten
by an exceptional being and all of a sudden... my fiancé becomes an ordinary, distinguished young man.
I didn't sign on for this".
8 Years Ago
Hi Ed. Danl doesn't give me any assignment today. So I use my spare time to find the answer for your questioning poem which even you - the author can't figure out what it is
Have a good night
I re-post your poem first to refresh your memory (lol)
A Late Night Riddle:
what is up and never down
stays in one place
and moves around
when seen from afar
it’s really near
never to be touched
but held so dear
we all have it not
but yet we do
i can’t figure it out what it is
can you
Ed Meredith
2015-09- 28
And here is my answer
The Beauty of Being Born-again Christians in U.S.A.
you've asked me
to find out "what is up and never comes down"
it's
quite
a challenge
to figure out the exception
for a general rule of the natural cycle
"what comes up must comes down"
if I were a born-again Christian
I would easily find the right answer for you
it is the soul of a believer
that
leaves his body after death
flies straight up to his God's Heaven
goes around like in a roundabout
stays there forever
and never falls down into the Satan's hell
i don't believe it
but they could see it so close to their nose
really near
so clear
so dear
yet they could never touch it
I am afraid to say that "we all have it not" (*)
"but yet we do" (*) according to their strong belief in God
you and i
and those who are
idiots
atheists
and non-religious folks like us
must know it is the fancy afterlife
of
those
born-again Christians
when their bodies leave their real heaven on earth in United States of America
and have their souls entered the Holy Heaven of their Almighty God
Thao Chuong
2015-09-28
(*) These two lines come from Ed's above poem
8 Years Ago
Haha Viet, i see the hook is baited and line set, but it is the experienced fish that can take the bait and not get caught…
and the fisherman should keep an eye out for the game warden wanting to see his license for fishing in forbidden waters…
Pleasant dreams and do not capsize the boat... lol
Blasphemer:
been to heaven
within
without
on my way to hell
looking for the escape clause
in the contract
i never signed
itsaid i sold my soul
for nothing
and that was pretty cheap
at the time with it’s no return
no money back
no guaranty policies
wonder where they keep them
souls
elusive little things
mine wore plaid i was told
when last seen
begging for attention
it’s God’s undoing that put me in this place
so if anyone could be blamed
it should not be me
i never set the rules
oppressive
controlling
mine would be more colorful
cheerful
permissive
a bit more like you
and me
Ed Meredith
2015- 09- 28
8 Years Ago
Viet, your robust 'Art of Making Love’ has aroused a trio of Tanka echos…
Making Love Tankas
lovers intertwined
on a cloud of satin sheets
in orgasmic bliss
exhausted from making love
again and again
soft touch of her skin
excited every sensation
of mind and body
lost in cosmic metaphor
he fell spent in ecstasy
the warmth of his breath
across the nape of her neck
raised expectations
of electrifying waves
and total abandonment
Ed Meredith
2015-09-28
8 Years Ago
Schimuzzle....that was a long Monday - hope Wednesday is better ...
I need a space to call my own
A little space with the sun
A tree or two would be nice
A bird or two singing songs
The sound of water tricking
Rising into a crescendo
a huge magnificent waterfall
you can see the spray for miles
Some hills, some plains
Some animals, a deer or two
A magnificent Kudu
A cheetah scything its way
through the grassy veldt
A Springbok kicking up dust
the sound of the elephant
A hyena too
Just a little space
would be nice
JEM 290915
8 Years Ago
big bang! ( echo to Danl s observation and my agreement that in the biggest explosion, order came to assemble)
fear the big squash, u dont know who u might be squashed up against... you know who...👻
chuckle, chuckle
creeeeeeek
the lid slammed shut!
as the coffin farted
and a spider skuttled by... choking
(not a poem, just a moment, or is it? lol)clear? poements..
edit: loved your poem Jane
8 Years Ago
Jane, Schimuzzle… HAHaaa…
i haven’t heard or seen the word ‘veldt’ since i read Ray Bradbury’s short story "The Veldt" in the 1950s…
i guest i just don’t hang around with the veldt crowd enough… lol
love the poem...
8 Years Ago
Thanks Ed, Jane, Danl, and Jason. Have a nice day to all
FYI: I'm sorry for being unable to interact with you because of an individual matter . I'll keep my regular interaction with you as soon as I have my feet getting back on the ground,
8 Years Ago
Tanka Autumn Nostalgia
the morning birdsong
echoes the sorrowful time
about her lost love
concealed in the lonely heart
since he left her last autumn
Thao Chuong
2015-10-04
8 Years Ago
The older I get, the more I come to realize that I just don't care what the hell anyone thinks.
8 Years Ago
i hope all is well with you and family Viet...
i don't want to do hospital echoes, but here's one just in case... lol
Fashionable:
i can’t walk around
in this hospital gown
the back is so ill designed
with ties so short they unwind
and constantly exposes my behind
Ed Meredith 2015-10-3
8 Years Ago
@ Danl. I'll get back to your sombre thought when I have time
@ Ed: Thanks for your poetic humor, my friend. Cheer to your health
Here is my response to your Joke
Sundry Thought While Waiting in the ER of the Victoria Jubilee Hospital
unlike billions of other guys
already dead
or dying
I felt how lucky I was
still
kicking alive
in a crowded emergency room
the line was too long
but not bad at all
I knew for sure
I could have lived at least for the next four to six hours
until an ER doctor would advise me
either
to see
a funeral director
or to keep going on
until I'm tired of life
I would be fine with either way
nobody could shred his own skin to live forever
so the sooner to get the hell out of here - the better for me
b'kuz
all seats
in God's heaven could be fully occupied before I get there
it's why
I prefer to live free while I'm alive
and
to die well
whenever I leave here
Thao Chuong
2015-10-04
8 Years Ago
"The older I get, the more I come to realize that I just don't care what the hell anyone thinks." By Danl Art three hours ago
My response to your thought. It's my provoking thought -not about you - but about the general situation that might not reflect your unique thought of wisdom that you just don't care what the hell I think.(lol). Have a restful day, Danl.
Human Often Talks About What He Cares
it's in human's surviving instinct
that
makes
him dream of
what not in his own hands
or
talks
a lot about
what he lacks of
like
the rich complains about time
the poor criticizes money
he
regularly
mentions
peace during wartime
health when in sickness
happiness when in sorrow
freedom under dictatorship
therefore
whenever I hear
someone
saying
he doesn't really care what others say about him
I could immediately recognize his urgent need of self-assurance
to drive his suffering mind away
from the negative impact
on his bothersome ego
at
that
specific moment
Thao Chuong
2015-10-04
8 Years Ago
Schimuzzle....that was a long Monday - hope Wednesday is better ...
I need a space to call my own
A little space with the sun
A tree or two would be nice
A bird or two singing songs
The sound of water tricking
Rising into a crescendo
a huge magnificent waterfall
you can see the spray for miles
Some hills, some plains
Some animals, a deer or two
A magnificent Kudu
A cheetah scything its way
through the grassy veldt
A Springbok kicking up dust
the sound of the elephant
A hyena too
Just a little space
would be nice
JEM 290915
A very nice poem, Jane. It's been nearly a week old. Yet, it's still very fresh to read it (lol). Here is my late response that might sound sour
Not Much - Her Simple Need as Usual
you've told him
you don't need much
just
a tiny space
for your own privacy
it's good enough to define your own territory
then you've added
such as tiny place must be furnished
with
sunshine on wild flowers
moonlight on wide pastures
a green canopy of a couple trees
the tricking sound of a waterfall from a high mountain
some songbirds for your morning music
a cheetah chasing deer and kudus up and down hills
a springbok racing in front of your eyes
mixing sounds of a trumpeting elephant and a laughing hyena
he must conquer the whole continent of Africa
to get enough supplies
for your little need
above
every king
his charming queen
whom he loves to please
it's why those aggressive men always conduct wars
to conquer the whole world
simply
for her simple need
of a tiny space
Thao Chuong
2015-10-04
8 Years Ago
i don't want to do hospital echoes, but here's one just in case... lol
Fashionable:
i can’t walk around
in this hospital gown
the back is so ill designed
with ties so short they unwind
and constantly exposes my behind
Ed Meredith 2015-10-3
Haa...Ed
Here is my black response to your joke. Have a good night, my friend.
Tanka His Fashion
the hospital gown
made him look somewhat sexy
he didn't know it
so he often turned around
showing his butts to the world
Thao Chuong
2015-10-04
8 Years Ago
How many songs have been written for love?
Songs of love, life, relationships, wrath, sadness,
What do you feel when songs are written about you?
Has a song ever been written for the songwriter?
Will she ever know if anyone wrote a song for her?
8 Years Ago
Viet - Hope everything is okay with you and yours :-) You make me laugh - I think you must mean Helen of Troy not me and my little need (note... not a want but a need lol)
All this talk of hospital gowns and flashing butts is giving me too many mental images.......old bums, baby bums, saggy bums, wrinkly bums, pert bums, spotty bums ......WOAH!
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your thought. Enjoy a fruitful week.
@ Lalhmunlien Varte: I like your painting Alien Nights 1 & 2. You have raised some interesting questions about songs. Are you a songwriter?
@ Jane: Thanks my friend. Oh..the want is worse than the need. BTW: Your tiny want could make you a modern version of Helen of Troy (lol)
@ Danl: Nice would be nice. But when it hurts too much, it'd better be nasty.
Here is my nasty thought in response to your nice one.
My Radom Thought of Barking Dog
any guy
who tries to make others look bad
must have a serious problem
with his overinflated ego
by
doing it
he wanna prove
he is better than anyone else
it's very annoying
however
no
point
for any argument with such a being
it'd better ignore 'im
and keep marching ahead
maybe
you don't care
or you could think "a dog that barks doesn't bite"
but when it becomes too abusive
why not stop for a minute
to
kick
at his jaw
otherwise 'e would bite at your calf
Thao Chuong
2015-10-05
8 Years Ago
I do not have an ego
I'm just better than everyone else
And who are they following
When I am ahead
I don't have an ego
I'm just better than everyone else
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day
Of Man and His Ego
egos to men
as
sails to boats
motors to machines
engines to vehicles
without those driving forces
everything would be stalled at one place
ego is the motive for progress
no wonder
why people those who claim they have no egos
they go nowhere
in what they've been doing
the only problem
when one lets his ego psychotically over-inflated
he'll be exploded
and mentally collapsed on his own feet
as soon as he is beaten up by the shitty reality
Thao Chuong
2015-10-05
8 Years Ago
My sundry thought
Relative Concept of the Good, the Better, and the Best
one must be either a genius or an idiot
to
believe
he is better
than anybody else
over
the summit
of Mount Everest
the highest mountain in the world
white cloud keeps floating and ever rests
and
above it
the sky's unlimited
unfortunately
a frog
that sits at the bottom of a well
could only see the sky as big as a huge dish
Thao Chuong
2015-10-05
8 Years Ago
A purpose
Everyone is good at something,
everyone has a purpose -
some of us are still looking for it
Others are multi talented
No one is better than the other
in Life
We are still growing
still learning
still thinking......
Whilst I am just needing lol
8 Years Ago
Oh no, Jane. You keep stirring it up when the dirt was about to be settled down (lol)
Here is another echo
Living Is an Art - Not a Contest
impossible to know
whether someone is better or worse than anyone else
no ground for such a nonsense comparison
unless
through a contest
however contest isn't an accurate tool
to measure an individual's skills and talents
furthermore
winning a competition only means
at
that
very specific moment
and for that event only
you're somehow the best amongst those participants
However how could you say
you're better than
everyone
else
when
billions of other talented folks
haven't joined in the same game with you
go ahead
keep
that belief
or whatsoever
that could make you feel good about yourself
but
don't show it off aloud
otherwise someone else may laugh at the silly you
until all teeth
fallen off
Thao Chuong
2015-10-05
8 Years Ago
i guess this could be an ego echo...
Reflection
when last i looked
into the mirror of time
youthful virility was still my name
but as i wiped away
the haze of vanity
aging frailty stared back
with it's mapped face
smiling in truth
Ed Meredith
2015-10-05
8 Years Ago
@ Jim: How has ego become a popular topic today?
@ Ed: Your reflection has added more somber thought to my mind
Have a restful evening to all of you
An echo to Ed's Reflection
Self-reflection
I am no longer who
I think
I'm
as
time flies
I keep changing at every instant
the old guy inside the mirror smiles at me
unbelievable
yet
undeniable
he is my new self
no
absolutely not
I am not better than I used to be
the older, I'm
the duller, my mind
the more emotional, my heart
the less flexibility, my body
I
dun
wanna
fool myself
that old age is my age of wisdom
I'd better be content with whatever left in my hands
and enjoy as much as I can
prior
to
my own
doomsday
Thao Chuong
2015-10-05
8 Years Ago
Viet I suppose one thought echo's or bounces off another. Isn’t that the way the world goes round and round.
I needed to get my mind off those hospital garments as mentioned.
You people are cracking me up.
8 Years Ago
Jim, i like your poem and image, both Alter Ego... it does have away of sneaking up on you doesn't it...
Viet, sorry for the somber vibe my friend, maybe this Tanka will lighten your mood a bit...
The Dao/Tao of Drinking
four drunken sages
at Lao Tzu’s Tao te Ching Bar
debate the meaning
of their empty wine glasses
while the full moon danced in mine
Ed Meredith
2015-10-16
8 Years Ago
HI Jim That's what I love about this thread...The honesty...errrr except when we are fooling ourselves lol.x great poem.
Viet love your age poem too
Ed great tanka Can I use that one...love the positiveness.
8 Years Ago
LOL... Jason no aliens found in my echo, but the need of a toilet when traveling, in space or not, and the image of the volcano,
was found this not so humorous ditty;
Consequences:
On the road to Scone Mountain
i watched a bird bathe in the stream
as i feasted upon a habanero
expecting later sufferings of the cautery
Ed Meredith
2015-10-06
8 Years Ago
Jane you caught me off guard… lol
it caught me off guard with a bit of surprised
when suddenly there before my eyes
a Cyclops stood staring at me
with an eye like a knot of a tree
and there was his incredible grin
laughing with both hands upon his chin
this joyful image seemed to pop from the page
it was posted by Jane (thank you) with her poem of a sage
and that’s all i got… lol
Thank you Jane
8 Years Ago
cocka
i breathe easy
as a pretty tree
knowing
that we are safe in the pants
of utter loonacy
bark bark
said the tree
as a dog pissed
endlessly...
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jim, Ed, Jane , Jason and Danl.
It's nice to see you and read, your thought.
@Jim: You are a a nice and a fine man. However your last provoking poem would make you sound as nasty as I am (lol).
@ Ed: Your poem The Dao/Tao of Drinking is your best Tanka so far. I also like the version of yin and yang in your painting
@ Jane: Ah, your poem The happy cyclops tells me that you're still stuck in your labyrinth of wants and needs (lol)
@ Jason: Haa....Have you been in Mars? Don't you know that Mars only take any being that doesn't dump the body waste?
@ Danl: I would feel really bad and guilty if not seeing you around. Quite a relief to see you here this morning with another quote.
Restful day to all
8 Years Ago
How many songs have been written for love?
Songs of love, life, relationships, wrath, sadness,
What do you feel when songs are written about you?
Has a song ever been written for the songwriter?
Will she ever know if anyone wrote a song for her?
Posted by Lalhmunlien Varte
Description: The dark night, alien sky, deep, dark, mysterious is beautiful
Of Song Lyrics
endless songs have been written
about love for her
and about her for love
sonatas of romance
for everyone
while
in the rain
under moonlight
with falling leaves
or under flurries
also somber concertos
about
lost love
broken souls
shattered hearts
for you and I to moan and cry
during the dark time of our own alien night
when a songwriter composes his lyrics about love
for you
for her
or for anyone else
he actually writes about his joys and pains in romance
just for himself alone
Thao Chuong
2015-10-06
8 Years Ago
An echo to Ed's poem The Dao/Tao of Drinking
Tanka Dao (the Way)
a jar full of wine
no room for another drop
a mind full of thought
could not take anything else
for more - let me empty both
Thao Chuong
2015-10-06
8 Years Ago
Viet my mindless friend...
HAHAhaa ... your may find that they both achieve the same results only one is easier and one can be more fun but temporary...
Two Schools of Thought
two ways of thinking
empty mind empty bottle
which one works the best
proven by years of study
one almost good as other
Ed Meredith
2015-10-06
8 Years Ago
Ed: My clarification on a one-way street thinking (lol). I enjoyed the interaction with you. Have a good night, my friend.
Tanka My Vacant Mind & Empty Wine Jars
neither my blank mind
nor many vacant wine jars
could be worth more than a cent
yet I have emptied them all
just for my refill purpose
Thao Chuong
2015-10-06
8 Years Ago
whirrrlywhirrrrrrrrrrrrllywhirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrllllllllllllllllllllllllllohwhirlywhirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrlyyyybirdy.....................................wha?
8 Years Ago
Just doing a spread sheet at work and used the undo button ........ what would it be like if we could use this in life.... ??
8 Years Ago
cough.
Danl, i cant comment. This is not a comment; implicitly or explicitly, this is most certainly not a comment. "No comment" . Absolute. I am.
8 Years Ago
cough
Jane.
undo undo undo undo. Is that a different way of deleting? deleting without a memory? what did i undo? delete undo? undo the undo,, do the do. do the undo, undo undone redone, redo undo, redo, the undo and do it again.. lol
pause.
Creation. Delete.
Creation. Undo.
what a relief, but
what a choice.
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....
Big g.
lol
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
when you cant even make no comment, wthout that being a COMMENT!!!?? huh? wha?
wtf does that mean?
silence speaks
8 Years Ago
The highest form of ignorance is when you reply to a comment that you know nothing about....but only insist you know.
8 Years Ago
Good morning Ed, Danl, Jane, and Jason.
I could feel the heat radiating in the morning cold air. Who has accidentally turned my natural-gas fireplace on? (lol).
Have a restful day to you all.
There's Always Another Day
yesterday's already gone
no
point
to regret
or dream of going back
and undo what done in the past
regardless how bad they were
at this moment
a fresh morning just begins
hot coffee is steaming from a clear glass
its luring aroma fills into my nose
today is
ready
for
a new start
optimistically, I always have another day in life
I could change whatever done wrong before
or
I can do
what I' like to do anew
until I'm out of here forever
I'd better take this beauty of my living time
to enjoy my new day
Thao Chuong
2015-10-07
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day
Of Human's Instinct
isn't
peace
that what
I always dream of?
yet
very sardonic
I tend to pick up a fight or over a compromise
whenever any tiny friction arises
which I could ignore
for
peace
of mind
maybe
it's
just
an accurate reflection
of the human's instinct flaring inside myself
without
wars
how could I keep my fancy dream of peace alive
Thao Chuong
2015-10-07
8 Years Ago
The Game I Often Play
I often point my sharp finger
at other guy
for my
own
mistake
likewise he does the same game as mine
to cover
his
own
shame
the single trouble becomes doubled
it's
not
about
who's right
or who's wrong
but about who's willing to sort it out
by taking one's own responsibility
when I'm engaged in a fight with someone
silly me
not the one
whom I'm trying to blame for my own fault
Thao Chuong
2015-10-07
8 Years Ago
Viet you made me think this ...
Anger and Aversion
a pissed off buddha
lets others punish themselves
by forgiving them
he may seem rather brutal
while choosing to do nothing
Tanka
Ed Meredith
2015-10-07
8 Years Ago
And this... lol
Equitable Solution
ten paces
turn and fire
both men
shot
d e a d
dispute
resolved
Ed Meredith
2015-10-07
8 Years Ago
Everglades Moonlit Walk
stepping cautiously
in bubbling black water
the smell of swamp gas
rises through the night’s sweet air
as unseen crocodiles hunt
Tanka
Ed Meredith
2015-10-08
8 Years Ago
co-existence
sunburnt yellow grass
between snow capped mountains peaks
a lone water hole sits
where creatures come to nourish
drinking temporary truce
Tanka
Ed Meredith
2015-10-08
8 Years Ago
Good morning Ed. You have gotten back your poetic momentum. Also you have had a lot of fun with it. Enjoy a restful day, my friend.
8 Years Ago
cocka
i breathe easy
as a pretty tree
knowing
that we are safe in the pants
of utter loonacy
bark bark
said the tree
as a dog pissed
endlessly...
By Jason Christopher - 1 Day Ago
Good morning Jason. It's an interesting poem. Here is my late echo
WARNING: Violence and coarse language - Readers' discretion is advised
A Road Rage
at this moment, I am under huge pressure
I want to vent it out
so please turn
your face
away
don't
look at me
otherwise, you might get caught by my own action
and your mind could be
blown
off
I lift my leg up
not for a kick
but to reveal my hidden gun fully loaded
then
I take it out
and aim at my target
it ain't a show off in a heated road rage
but
the real action
I shoot for sure
until the whole clip is emptied
then leave the scene immediately
lucky me
without much altercation
no police siren
only
my dog barks as usual
the victim isn't dead - but still remains silence
regardless the bark
on its trunk
soggily
wet
as I piss on it
Thao Chuong
2015-08-10
8 Years Ago
Now a WOW back to you Viva!
My humorous echo to Viva's WOW ED! I hope it will ease any friction of the day (lol)
Your Beauty
early
morning
in the cold air
you still look very hot
even hotter than my steamy coffee
not
only
would you look hot
but as pretty
as sexy
as
the look of Cleopatra's
tell your lucky Cesar!
he'd better build a strong fort to keep his queen in
otherwise
his kingdom
would be ruined
by many modern Antony
as those who fall for your splendour
they would march their strong armies
into his forbidden city
for me
a poor chap
who can only play with words
at
best
I could
only sip
my hot coffee
and let my mind go wild
into a sweet dream of having my drying lips
dipped really deep
down
deeper
to the bottomless depth
of your hot salsa sauce
Thao Chuong
2015-10-08
8 Years Ago
Good Morning VIVA… Vivian your looking bright and beautiful…
And good morning to you too Viet, i will be traveling soon and thought i would fill my quota while still on-line…
off to visit friends in Hong Kong and enjoy the hustle of the city…
For Vivian:
standing on tip-toes
reaching for the night sky’s stars
that fill the darkness
i gather them one by one
like fireflies in a jar
Tanka
Ed Meredith
2015-10-08
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For Viet
Sorry Dad…
married to Mary
and content making crosses
Jesus tried to quit
working the family business
disappointing his Father
Tanka
Ed Meredith
2016-10-08
8 Years Ago
For Jason:
An Old Joke
When
O
N
E
B E L I E V E S
that
consciousness creates matter
WHAT'S
T
.H
.E
. . . MATTER
hit self
...hit self
…...hit self
on the HEAD-KNOGGIN _-_ (wit)
A BaseBall Bat
and observe … LOOOK …. take note
that the
M
O
R
E
MATTER = U LOSE
the less
conscious you become
Not Tanka
Z ZZZZZZZ
2015-10-08
8 Years Ago
your on full power Ed, Edward, Edith, whomever the spirits say.... 👻
was u connected up? i used to electrocute myself as a kid, did u? lol
bzzzzz zzz bzzz... bzzzzzzzzzz zz...
8 Years Ago
echo to Viet and cocka
Never piss on a live tree or pole
it may explode your balls
or cause sudden massive ejaculation(s) if the balls don't explode first
either way
its a mess for the tree
souns hilarous to try though...
8 Years Ago
Wow lots of word going down!
Whiskey with Ernest and Charles
Sitting at a table in an old town bar
sipping a beer with my thoughts afar
strolling over towards my table
a white bearded distinguished man sits down
did you just get off a boat I asked
he flashed a mysterious half smile
Up walks a pot faced intensely interesting character
sits down with a bottle of whiskey
have I met you guys before
as the whiskey began to pour
I thought to myself Hemmingway and Bukowski
They began exchanging poetic words
in their own friendly unique conversation
Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead. Charles
An intelligent man is sometimes forced to be drunk to spend time with his fools. Ernest
I rarely drink whiskey and sat leaning against the wall taking it in.
Jim Taylor 10/8/15
8 Years Ago
Jason “bzzzzz zzz bzzz... bzzzzzzzzzz zz…”
yes i've been buzz-cut a few times but not from the blade…
just remembered those penny machines when i was a kid…
had two round knobs that you held onto and turned which increased the electrical charge
until you either quit or your elbows would knock together… LOL, and all for one cent… those were the Daze…
Jim, great poem, sounds like a grand day… Bukowski rocks!!
8 Years Ago
One could be forgiven
to thinking
they are not on this world
Viet' page
Words of alienisms unfurled
Strange goings on with
trees,
toilets
electricity
balls,
canons,
dogs and
sharp fingers
People drinking in Chinese bars
Pot faced people with whiskey jars
I must put a tablet in my belly
to stop my mind turning to jelly
buzzzzzzzzzz zzz bzzzzzzzzz zzz
JEM 081015
......................................................
8 Years Ago
Jane, i must apologise, today is national poetry in the uk and Jim has christened it well
we have created slum land
slum poetry
in the bath, by the trees, everywhere, apologies Viet
i cull this madness. now.
well jusy for now. not tomorrow, not never ever forever, just now
tho i must say, Viet's road rage has me pissing myself
and Ed always frolicks neked
aversion of the laughter is to sleep all day with the cattle, i say i say, lol
-----
8 Years Ago
Thank you everyone
@ Ed: Have a nice trip to Hong Kong - one of the most crowded cities.
@ Jason: Oh no. My apology for unknowingly soiling the UK national poetry day. (If I had known about it, I would have held it until tomorrow -lol). Salvage the rest of your good day, mate.
@ John : This popular quote has a big hole at its bottom (lol) - I'll tell you why.
@ Jim: Wow! I love your the poem Whiskey with Ernest and Charles. It is one of your best so far
@ Jane: Glad to see you - safe and sound - wading out of the muddy moment of those crazy poets.
8 Years Ago
A send off to Ed going to Hong Kong.
Although I think of this in the desert Southwest USA.
Close enough???
Neon Dreams
What a cheap motel
but it sure has a nice neon
bedding down in flashing mellow color
no one wanted the last room next to the flashing neon
it would have been my first choice being a little eclectic
Awakening in the morning feeling orange
Jim Taylor 10/8/15
8 Years Ago
"The pen is mightier than the sword, and considerably easier to write with." posted by John Wills 5 Hours Ago
Here's my echo.
Between Words and Swords
of course
in the mind of a writer's
his
words
are always
almightier than swords
unless
when a samurai draws his lethal blade
and
presses
it
against his throat
the sharp pain
from cold metal
might change the writer's mind
it would also make him rethink
between
his pen
and a sword
which one is actually sharper
Thao Chuong
2016-10-08
8 Years Ago
Wars of Words
if pens are sharper than swords
the United States of America would not arm to her teeth
she would use influential words
from her foreign policy
instead
of
sending her powerful army
and having raw blood of her citizens
spilled on strangers' soil
it would be easier
for her
to
obtain
raw materials
and expand a huge consuming market for her economy
through peaceful negotiations
not
costly wars
as she has been doing so far
if words are almightier than guns
no weapons of mass destruction needed
Russia, China, England, France, Australia,
and all other countries on earth
would have huge stockpiles of pens
wouldn't it be better?
man could only spill
his man-made ink
instead
of
his own blood
however
I wonder
what would happen to mankind
when those crazy poets and insane writers become top generals
to
be
in charge of
any world war of words
Thao Chuong
2015-10-08
8 Years Ago
Equitable Solution
ten paces
turn and fire
both men
shot
d e a d
dispute
resolved
Ed Meredith
2015-10-07
Response to Ed's Solution
Constitutional Right for Every US Citizen
(written for gun lobbyists in US)
they have been fighting with teeth and nails
to maintain their constitutional right
of owning firearms
they've argued
that
gangsters have roamed free on their streets
shooting wild in their neighborhoods
gun control
would make their problems worse
they
would
be unsafe
and more vulnerable to criminals
they've asked
why
do
US citizens
have less constitutional right
than those criminals?
regardless of the fact
Americans own tons of weapons for self-protection
if
combined them
into one stockpile
it is much bigger than that of citizens
of all other countries in the world
every year
ten thousands of innocent people
in U.S.A.
get
killed
at homes
at works
at schools
in churches
in daycare facilities
and at other public places
by
homemade madmen
yet none get shot by a foreign terrorist
gun culture has been embedded too deep inside the blood of those Gringos
who have watched too many Hollywood movies about the old Wild West
it then becomes make-believe
they are modern John Wayne
who
could take
laws and orders
into their own hands
Thao Chuong
2015-10-09
8 Years Ago
Thanks everyone for your Bon Voyage cheers...
Good Morning Viet, my provocative poet friend...
A responding Tanka echo to your response (Constitutional Right for Every US Citizen ) of my (Solution).. so on and so on... lol
Self Appointed Public Guardians
zelot patriots
dressed in second amendment
knowing what is best
on how to protect our rights
so that we won’t harm ourselves
Tanka
Ed Meredith
09-10-2015
8 Years Ago
I live one day at a time
Time flies by like the speed of light
Ended up turning left and wished I could've just turned right
Trying to learn to flow with it
But realize I don't believe the first line one bit
Yeah I know I'm a hypocrite.
Trying to learn how to go with the flow
But my mind tells how to speed up
My priorities wrong
I hit that gas pedal and end up
Back in those trenches
Digging my mental grave.
I'll start believing by doing one day at a time
But first, I gotta start believing in myself.
8 Years Ago
Sorry for all the blank entries, but something went wrong. A battle between me and the keyboard.
8 Years Ago
Thank you Ed, Tori, and Danl.
@ Ed: Enjoy the cheap hotel, good food, and....(you know what i mean for a poet/artist -with great imagination - who travels alone lol)
@ Tori: Awesome poem. I like it. I am looking forward to reading more of your poems
@ Danl. Wow! It's excellent. I like your brushwork, movements, lights, colours, and your provoking quote.
8 Years Ago
To Jason Christopher: A late poem written for the UK national poetry day (yesterday)
After Li Po's renowned poem Invitation to Wine
the yellow crane
drunken poet Li Po
and billions of men before and after him
already
blown
away
by
the wind of time
next
ones
would be you and I
why not take the joyful moment under moonlight?
bottom up
empty the wine
to your health and mine
before our own fates
faded
into
dim shadow
of the unknown
oh blissful farewell to life
leave the moon here
for endless human beings
to enjoy their living
for
the coming
thousands of autumns
Thao Chuong
2015-10-09
8 Years Ago
Thank you Viet, the spirit of poetry lives within you! like a lighthouse in the dark!
Farewells.... to the Moon
i just noticed the moon... in morning skies.... was she close to the goddess Venus? the goddess of love?
a union of celestial minds? or does she hide in cloaks of clouds
as Mars grows strong, the god of war?
Perhaps an onward journey, was begun a billion years ago, or more
for our moon travels away each year, away, away... her endless journey in to deeper heavens..
has just begun... she slowly bids us farewell, inch by inch
And our tides shall slow, and seasons shall deepen
and the days shall lengthen and lengthen, by many hours
her offerings to mother earth
may change
from her heavenly showers...
So smile with the moon
enjoy her midnight shine
for imortals know
she is destined, fighting with time
for she must leave
our long hard embrace
a sister destined
for deeper celestial space...
The tides she bring us
they flow ahead
and give her the energy
to break our once... eternal wed
A toast to the moon
a sister slowly freeing her self
perhaps from harm
or maybe far away, lies greater, immortal wealth
Drink your wine, enjoy the moon
her glisten.... .
her ancient wisdom!
her new found mission.. .
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
editted
8 Years Ago
Morning all ;-)
Wow Jason, Viet and Tori love those poems....poetry certainly is not dead on this page. Will b r b .x
8 Years Ago
Viet, the hotel is very cheap, staying with friends at their apartment...
Autumn's Midnight Walk
walking in midnight's autumn chill
i saw dewdrops turn to diamonds
adorning golden leafs and grass
and upon the ground lay
silver moons
frozen
motionless
in ponds of jade
where once
tadpoles played
Ed Meredith
10-10-2015
8 Years Ago
Tori, i agree that “Slams” are fun... but “live" they can be intimidating especially if your on stage… lol
i was at a poetry slam a few years ago, it was the usual life is hard and things suck but i'm strong and will overcome the bullshit and be true to myself stuff and other personal angst...
The last few poets were environmentalist and did the; world is coming to an end and everybody is the blame for letting it happen so the fat cats can keep getting fatter thing, but no thoughts on solutions... The last poet finished with a poem of how bleak everything was... and then the MC offered an open mike for a few minutes... there were no volunteers and at the very last minute i threw back my tequila and took the mike, (something i have never done before and probably never again... lol), and rattled off some angry old guy crap. Oh by the way the age of the audience and poet's were about 21 to 40… i was 73 at the time and was the only white hair in the bar.
And it's a good thing someone was taping the slam so i could hear what i said off the top of my head... i'll never do that again... LOL
Hear it is;
F%#k this
screw that
who give a sh@t
who gives a crap
use it up burn
it down
fowl up the air
kill the ground
poison the waters
the lakes and streams
don't forget the oceans
and all of our dreams
my time is short
my end is near
only thing left
is a sad sad tear
so as i said
many times before
who cares
i'm finished
i'm gone
i'm out the f%#king door...
it's all yours
do with it what you will.
Ed Meredith
2011
8 Years Ago
Cocktail Lounge
Red as ruby and twice as nice
Golden and pale as the sweetest honey
or dark, as dark as molasses
Rosy as a young loves blush
or black, black as night with twinkling stars
Opalescence
or
As green as the darkest emerald
or
Blue as the deepest lagoon
Pour me a drink
And I'll tell you a tale
However it comes
It matters not to me
A warmth in the belly
A rush to the head
Lifes trials and tribulations
Are seen through the foggy haze
of those tranquil beer goggles
JEM 101015
8 Years Ago
Tori. Oh yeah i have no problem with that, i live out of my "comfort zone" often... if not a lot...
and have been punished a few time for doing so... LOL
Just saying, that stage is not for me anymore... unless my fans call for me or if coin of the realm is involved... HAHAha
Jane, your poem reminds me of when my wife was off working in the UK and weekend holidaying around Europe,
she sent me photo's from Munich of her and friends sucking beer steins, holding them aloft on their faces... no hands...
and there was me in the States, circumstances keeping me home and wishing i was there.seeing the world thru Beer Goggles ... LOL
8 Years Ago
Maria Disley10 Hours Ago
Viet and Jason two beautiful, moving poems, which will always make me think of the moon differently. So too Ed and slam followers :)))
He watches her,
His white bald head and mourning mouth, agape,
Mother Earth
Holds her children close
Like ants they crawl across her flowered apron
Full of blue spaces.
He is there every night, shrinking before our blindness;
Happy exploring the curves of our Mother Earth.
Like a child's lost balloon, he gets carried away, by nature's relentless march.
In the silence, if you listen hard enough,
You can hear him, his timeless echoes...
Maria Disley. 2015
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and poems, Jason, Jane, Tori, Ed, and Maria
@ Jason: I've read your poem a couple of times. It's a big bang of your thought about the mystical outer universe and human's inner self.
@ Ed: I enjoy your Autumn's Midnight Walk. and Laugh aloud by the instant reaction of your poetry slam
@ Jane: I could get drunk the whole weekend with your Cocktail Lounge (lol)
@ Maria: Thank for your poetic response
In the silence, if you listen hard enough,
You can hear him, his timeless echoes..
Thanks for offering the peaceful moment
Have as nice weekend to you all.
8 Years Ago
vague vibration from Ed's poem Autumn's Midnight Walk
Autumn Tears
shining
under sunlight
morning dew on clothesline
as pretty as sparkling diamonds on her necklace
a songbird's landing
the line is swinging
crystal droplets fall down on wet ground
so
fragile
salty tears drop off
her lost love
rotten
under a big pile of autumns leaves
Thao Chuong
2015-10-10
8 Years Ago
Farewells
echoed sorrowful sounds
of
goodbye
up high in the sky
migrant birds fly thousands of miles
in their long flight
to the warm
south
dancing
in
the breeze
autumn leaves flurry in silence
in their farewell to short life
down
to the ground
she's gradually vanished into the dense mist
moaning sounds of foghorn
floated back in cold air
and gradually
faded into
dead
silence
he
knows
those migrant birds will be back next year
and dead leaves will be decomposed
he isn't sure
whether he ever sees her again someday
all of a sudden
he
hears
inside himself
someone singing
a
sad
ballad
"oh farewell to you - my love"
Thao Chuong
2015-10-10
PS: Copy and paste from the other thread for my own record
8 Years Ago
WARNING: NUDITY! Viewers' discretion is advised
The Savage Animal
she was an innocent,
young
girl
in love
she trusted him
and always felt to be safe and sound
under his protection
wherever she was with him
that night
she slept over
and drank with him at his condominium
the hangover
the drilling headache
she was too drunk to remember
in
details
what had really happened
left
on messy white sheet
milky stains
and in between her legs
sharp pain
she was shocked and utterly confused
about his very rough act of a savage animal
in his mating desire
while
she was
almost passed out
her love shattered
and her innocence lost
the first time she had it
she felt
it was absolutely not making love
nor having sex
but being
raped
with this trauma
she could never trust any man
for the rest of her life again
Thao Chuong
2015-10-11
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your thought, Danl. Have a nice day.
Spiritual Free Ride
in
good spirit
and high pride of his skills and talent
whenever he succeeds
he
thinks
it is he - himself
in full control of his fate
no other factor has any light impact on his triumph
as soon as he hiccups on his way
loses his balance
falls down
and
has his face
buried deep in mud
he blames karma
also he convinces himself
that
success
or failure isn't about talents
but purely a matter of bad or good luck
losing trusts
in his own
ability
he reaches out for help
he turns his belief to sacred God for a magic solution
without
God's almighty hands
how could man be survived
whenever he no longer believes in himself?
Thao Chuong
2015-10-12
8 Years Ago
Hahaha Danl - please explain why I always get the nutters crossing my path lol - maybe they are there to keep me sane?
Metamorphosis
Lady nature prepares us for winter
She gives us the last hint of heat
glowing with warm colours
Yellows, oranges, reds, maroons
just for the briefest of moments
than all is gone
left bare
ready for those icy fingers
to wrap themselves around those naked limbs
Which seem to wait endlessly
for the first hint of spring
Awaiting their new metamorphosis.
JEM 121015
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: It's another nice poem of yours
@ Danl: Here is my homework for your challenge: "We don't meet people by accident....they are meant to cross our path for a reason."
There Must Be a Reason
by
accident
I have crossed path with
so
many
people
who left no trace in my life
they were like wind
blowing through a dense forest
then going away
and leaving nothing behind
except you
when I met
I felt
as if
I
was
swallowed by a cyclone
shaken by an earthquake
swept to high seas by a tsunami
there must be a reason
why my heart
sunk
for you
not for anyone else
I knew
it was neither karma
nor any spiritual force above
but
it was you
or something within yourself
that entwined our fates together
Thao Chuong
2015-10-12
8 Years Ago
The Final Destination
heavy rainfall
on
soggy ground
water's running
dead leaves are washed away
who knows
how far they'd go
where their final destinations would be
same
destiny
as that of those mankind's
who have been blown by the wind of time
in
the end
they'll be decomposed
back
to dirt
the original home
where they came from
Thao Chuong
2015-10-13
8 Years Ago
... . paths cross +
sometimes galaxies cross paths, collide...
and form supergalaxies.. . ?
Andromeda comes to cross our Milky Way...
in just 3.7 billion years
A final destination? or
a nucleus of endless creation
Paths always cross along winding roads
where the alpha
and the omega
are created in one..
8 Years Ago
"I dream of painting and then I paint my dream." Vincent Van Gogh
My favourite artist - I never tire of his art or quotes.
Diane
www.handonart.com
8 Years Ago
When you are waking up someone is taking their last breath
You have again cheated death
Cherish it.
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your thought, Jane, Jason, Diane, and Danl.
Here's my response to Danl's thought.
The Mortal Man
regardless
how talented you're as a con artist
even you could deceive everyone
including your god
impossible
for
you
to cheat yourself about own death
like any other mortal being
you're dying
bit
by bit
at every instant
while you're inhaling and exhaling
stop
cheating yourself
with the fancy thought
that you could live forever
enjoy
your life as is
so long as you can draw air into your lungs
don't wait
until your last breath to regret
Thao Chuong
2015-10-13
8 Years Ago
The Most Vital for a Man's Life
every morning
I open my eyes
and see the sunshine
or hear the rainfall outside
I
know
how fortunate I am
still
alive
and well
to enjoy another extra day in my life
while many other people are taking their last gulp of air
what is more vital
than
having oxygen
constantly pumped into my lungs?
cheer to your health
all
of you
all living beings
those who are as lucky as I am,
Thao Chuong
2015-10-13
8 Years Ago
@ Jason: Thanks for sharing the amazing information about computerized stimulation of Andromeda / Milky Way collision. Enjoy your night, mate
My Thought About Milky Way Collision
in comparison with the infinite flow of time
one hundred years of man's life
is extremely shorter
than the blink
of
an eye
except
for scientific knowledge
no point to worry about the prediction of milk way collision
estimated to happen in about four billion years from now
maybe, it won't take place at all
on the other hand
the earth is dying
human won't survive that long
as
he keeps
spraying his urine
spreading his feces
piling up garbage
right
inside
his own bedroom
he
also
continues
polluting fresh air
contaminating clean water
and poisoning natural food
man's serious collision with his Mother Nature
will
drive him
much sooner
to his own man-made doomsday
before a meteor collides and destroys his habitat
or the sun cools down to put him in an eternal hibernation
why waste my living time for the nonsense?
I'd rather enjoy the best of each day
while still kicking alive
Thao Chuong
2015-10-14
8 Years Ago
I'd like to share with you the following joke from an email that I got this morning.
This comes from 2 math teachers with a combined total of 70 yr experience.
It has an indisputable mathematical logic.
It also made me Laugh Out Loud.
This is a strictly ..... mathematical viewpoint.. and it goes like this:
What Makes 100%? What does it mean to give MORE than 100%? Ever wonder about those people who say they are giving more than 100%? We have all been to those meetings where someone wants you to give over 100%.
How about achieving 103%?
What makes up 100% in life?
Here's a little mathematical formula that might help you answer these questions:
If the 26 alphabets :
A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z
are represented in numbers as:
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26.
Then:
H-A-R-D-W-O-R-K
8+1+18+4+23+15+18+11 = 98%
And
K-N-O-W-L-E-D-G-E
11+14+15+23+12+5+4+7+5 = 96%
But ,
A-T-T-I-T-U-D-E
1+20+20+9+20+21+4+5 = 100%
And,
B-U-L-L-S-H-I-T
2+21+12+12+19+8+9+20 = 103%
AND, look how far ass kissing will take you.
A-S-S-K-I-S-S-I-N-G
1+19+19+11+9+19+19+9+14+7 = 118%
So, one can conclude with mathematical certainty, that while Hard work and Knowledge will get you close, and Attitude will get you there.
Its the Bullshit and Ass Kissing that will put you over the top.
Now you know why some people are where they are!
8 Years Ago
Hahaha excellent Viet, and actually achieving that brown tongue gets you to ...trying to quickly do it in my little head.... 154% ? Wow must change my tactics at work.... stop challenging and start with some SERIOUS Ass Kissing. Lol .
Enjoy your day everyone.
Be grateful for what you have, not greedy for what you haven't.
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane.
Her Tough Job
her job requires neither talents nor hard work
also it isn't about good or bad luck
but
purely
about beauty
and youthfulness
of those pink flowers blooming in spring
now it's autumn
green leaves turn brown and about to fall down
her time is over
she's no longer
young
and pretty
as she used to be
she can't compete with those pretty and sexy girls
in their early twenties
serving
drinks and sex at stylish bars
or working for exotic escort services
in her early thirties
she has no choice but to be self-employed
she
operates
her own business
to serve blue collar workers and backpacking tourists
at the most affordable rates
how hard life is for the women
who waits and comforts strangers
right
on site
in dark alleys
or side streets at night
Thao Chuong
2015-10-15
8 Years Ago
Posted by Diane Griffiths - 2 Days Ago
"I dream of painting and then I paint my dream." Vincent Van Gogh
My favourite artist - I never tire of his art or quotes.
Diane
www.handonart.com
Why Is Contemporary Art So Bad?
the urge
for
creation
flooded his heart
the lust of wild imagination scorched his mind
he
mixed his life on a palette full of colours
then painted his dream
The Starry Night
Wheatfield with Crows
Cafe Terrace at Night...
van Gogh
Paul Gauguin
and most Old Masters
whose living was for creation
not creating to make a living
most
essentially
they sacrificed their lives for art
on the contrary
modern artists always focus on what can be sold
they create mainly to meet
the need of the general public
for home design and household decoration
nowadays
many professional creators usually consider
art
is but
a fishing road for bread and butter
millions of amateurs join in the art league
for
their wild dream
of becoming renowned and rich
so long as
the global market retains as a main driving force
that dictates an artist's inner urge and his inspiration for creation
imagination is ruined
art is dead
Thao Chuong
2015-10-16
8 Years Ago
Tanka Autumn Chrysanthemums
golden, auburn, brown
dance with chilly morning breeze
in sallow sunlight
oh yellow chrysanthemums!
autumn leaves are landing on
Thao Chuong
2015-10-17
8 Years Ago
Good evening Danl and Jane
In response to Danl's quote
Tanka Common Sense in Art
it ain't common sense
but wild imagination
artists need the most
for the creative process
unless they don't have good taste
Thao Chuong
2015-10-17
8 Years Ago
A joke to Danl's quote about common sense and deodorant
Tanka Common Sense in Life
he smells like dead rats
common sense tells him
without bath for many weeks
no deodorant could help
he'd better take a shower
Thao Chuong
2015-10-18
8 Years Ago
Tanka Common Sense In love
blind mind - sightless heart
as soon as he fell in love
his common sense lost
too late to know about her trap
he got caught for a lifetime
Thao Chuong
2015-10-18
8 Years Ago
Thanks Edward. Is it snowing in New England today? It's early autumn here in Victoria, British Columbia.
Description: A glorious morning of fresh fallen snow on the farm featuring a classic red New England barn and snow covered tree branches. Fine art photography by Edward M. Fielding - edwardfielding.com
The New England Barn was the most common style of barn built in most of the 19th century in rural New England and variants are found throughout the United States.[1] This style barn superseded the ”three-bay barn” in several important ways. The most obvious difference is the location of the barn doors on the gable-end(s) rather than the sidewall(s).
New England barns are usually a type of bank barn, built into the side of a hill giving ground level access to one side, but a ramp or rarely a bridge were used to access the doors. The roof form is typically a gable roof but some New England barns were built with a gambrel roof.
Last Snowfall In New England
it was falling
flurries filled in the sky
with
rainfall
of white flower petals
the hill
the trees
and the farm house
were fully covered by a thick blanket of soft cotton
the field
was also buried
in knee-deep snow
inside
by the fire
it was warm and comfy
she
listened
to a sorrowful lyrics
about farewell to love
while humming after the moaning singer
she turned off the radio
it was all quiet on a day of heavy snowfall
except
the cracking sound
from inside the burning wood-stove
and vague noise from the wind tapping on frosty glass panels
Thao Chuong
2015-10-18
8 Years Ago
Collateral Damage
the humanitarian nonprofit organization
Doctors Without Borders (Médecins Sans Frontières - MSF)
well-known for providing medical services to humans in crisis
has
suffered
the worst tragedy
in its forty-four-year history in operation
twelve of its staff and ten patients including three children killed
plus thirty seven injured
during
consecutive
and precise air strikes
on its hospital in Kunduz, Afghanistan
as usual
the act of terror was defended as a mistake
the
injuries
and deaths
of those innocent civilians were but collateral damage
no one in the US government
neither
the peaceniks
nor the war hawks
wanted it to be happened at the critical time
just days after President Obama warned Russia about civilian casualties by its airstrikes in Syria
while
Syrians have been suffered
a great deal from the on-going bombing campaign by US-led allies
in fact
to make it safe and free
for every US citizen to live
the Global War On Terrorism has killed about four millions of un-armed civilians since 2001
many
of them were
harmless women
and innocent children
as Americans
how would you feel or react?
when a foreign bomber violates US airspace
accidentally destroys non-military targets such as homes, hospitals, shopping malls...
and kills your fellow countrymen by mistake
could you have ever imagined massive destructive outcomes
of those dirty wars
in which your nation has been actively involved so far
or maybe you don't give a damn
so long as wars serve your nation well
without any direct impact on the soil
of your peaceful country
the United States
O America!
Thao Chuong
2015-10-19
8 Years Ago
TOO COLD
Its too damn cold
Have not even got to winter
but its too damn cold
I don't like the cold
The cold doesn't like me
My muscles ache
My bones hurt
I can't get warm
It's too damn cold
I don't like central heating
I don't like log fires
Its too damn cold
Give me natural warmth
the rays of the sun
The warmth on my back
Snug to the core
It's too damn cold
Don't want to be swathed in clothes
Like a mummy anointed
Give me a vest and shorts
It's too damn cold
JEM 191015
8 Years Ago
We are all the same
Here she sits with baskets and cigar
Waiting for the tourists to take their snaps
One dollar she shouts
as she runs after you
She takes home her pay
to keep her family
to clothe them
to feed them
She has aspirations just like you
High hopes for her family
A sense of humour when she needs it
And control when it is required
She keeps house
Washes their clothes
Cooks their food
And nurtures them
Who is anyone to think they are better
Who is anyone to think they are superior
Who is anyone to think her beliefs are wrong
We are the same you, I and her.
JEM 201015
8 Years Ago
DANL: They are only useful if it affects their own little world and even now that is becoming more doubtful....
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane, Vivian, and Danl for sharing your thoughts. Have a nice day.
@ Jane: Too Cold is another nice poem of yours. Your poem "We are all the same" has made me think of human's fate
@ Vivian: My own horrible experience from the war in Vietnam has made it hard for me not to feel terrible whenever I think or write about war
@ Danl. Haa... An astray on motorcycles serves no purpose at all. Yet, some human beings, regardless how bad or evil they are, at least they're useful to some.
8 Years Ago
Here is my thought of today in response to Jane poem "We are all the same"
Why We - Humans - Are Not the Same
in
flesh,
blood,
and bones
we're the same race
we're supposed to be equivalent
regrettably
so
much
difference
between us
depending
on
the way
in which we look
how smart or dull
how pretty or ugly
how tall or short
we really are
on
the families
that we were born into
kids of rich families
are certainly luckier than babies in poor households
princes and princesses have silver spoon on their mouths
while homeless kids have nearly nothing
also
countries of birth provide better chances
absolutely
more freedom
for Americans, Australians, Britons, Canadians,
and citizens of many other democratic countries in the West
than
for Afghans, Iranians, Iraqis, Chinese, North Koreans, Vietnamese
and those countries governed by tyrants, autocrats, or dictators
it isn't about the effort, the hard work, or the attitude
but the primary inequality at birth
that
defines
the fate and destiny
of every of us as a human being
Thao Chuong
2015-10-21
8 Years Ago
I wrote this poem as a description to this painting:
THERE IS...
The flowers, mountains, oceans and the sky
Are part of our beautiful Mother Nature,
We should enjoy every part with open eyes
As I am speaking and in the future.
We don't pay and aren't asked anything
To smell the flowers and feed the birds,
There will always be a free, valuable, thing
To enjoy and understand without words.
Just think about the Sun over the Sea
At sunset shining with his unique power,
Visualize a baby donkey running free
In fields of love, immaculate, at any hour.
So, wait a minute, you don't have to be rich
And don't need a pass to walk in a park at night,
To love the sunshine sitting at the beach;
Please, tell me, am I wrong or right?
Gina Nicolae Johnson
October 15 2015
8 Years Ago
Good morning Gina. thanks for sharing your painting and your poem.
an echo to your poem THERE IS...
About the Beauty of Nature
blue sky,
sunshine
moonlight
starry nights,
running rivers,
aqua ocean,
green forests,
high mountains,
and many attractive land/seascapes
always
available
at no cost
for every human to enjoy
no
need
to be rich
to enjoy the beauty of nature
however, when one is so hungry
his
only
dream
is not about lovely flowers in springtime
but about some food he could fill in his empty stomach
for
those
who have dragged their tiring feet on streets
for many days without a shower
and have bad smell like a dead rat in a sewer
they probably couldn't enjoy the awesome aroma of tea roses in hot summer
now
you know
why not all people often pay attention to the beauty of our Mother Nature
Thao Chuong
2015-10-22
Paul W Faust - Impressions of Light
8 Years Ago
The only thing you really need to remember each day is,
"Life is short so eat dessert first"
8 Years Ago
You know you are good at being crazy when you can put your straight jacket on all by yourself.
8 Years Ago
Good Moaning people
a repost...
Mary Poppins
Mary Poppins, catch the breeze and fly up high...
and then these tears shall fall
like rain from lady's skies...
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"but when the mysteries are solved... will we believe the answers? "
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Good morning Paul, Danl, and Jason.
@ Paul: Good thinking. Sweet stuffs (coffee and dessert) are yummier than the salty one (main course).- lol
@ Danl: Yeah, I'd better do it myself -and not asking anyone else help me do it
@ Jason: Wot R U thinking abu, mate?
Have a restful day to you all
8 Years Ago
When i wrote it Viet? i cant remember, it was 6 months ago, bouncing off walls, off Maria, who knows, prob Viv, usually thinking of 3,4 or 5 different things, but it seems suitable as a repost, an anecdote to Viv's tears at collateral damage... and some comments are quite echoless as they resounnnnndddddddddd.... . . unless u have a straight jacket poem... lol
in terms of mysteries... marypoppins was a wonderful mystery of childhood... and the answer was pure indulgent theatre! or cinema rather, er.. was it masterful hollywood? Lol
no idea, its scarey - the minds of others, isnt it? 😜 wohohahahaha... but maybe more scarey are the masters who control and ilicit such madness... . wohohahahaha... wohohahahaha...
im off, have a great weekend everyone, i love Autumn, Hyde park had a really calm atmosphere last weekend, 1000s of gulls just circled overhead as the low light made tranquility pour off the Autumn yellow gold leaves...
tranquility is a place to love and nurture
ps in no way do i mock mental illness, i have had severe bouts of ill health myself, sometimes to laugh is a tonic.. . unless you arre so caught up in distress you cant, then seek tranquility and calm and find peace in nature..
8 Years Ago
My sundry thought generated by Paul W Faust's quote about short life and especially by his art below
Hi Paul: Please let me know (within 24 hours of FAA's edit time frame), if you wouldn't like your work posted on this post. I am happy to remove it from here. Many thanks for your help.
Of Soldiers, Warriors, and Heroes
soldiers often take alcohol, drugs, and sex
as
anti-depressant
to ease their high anxieties and nightmares
prior
to entering
fierce combats
and after going back to cities from battle fronts
in their own nature
warriors love to fight
they keep charging and never leave a war
until they win
heroes of a nation happen to be the ones
who
do not
have any other choice
than
taking an early retirement
and going back home
except
a medal of honor
engraved on their headstones
nothing else left for those dead warriors to enjoy
at
least
they could rest in peace
side by side
in
endless
rows of tombs
on well-manicured lawn
as if they were in concise combat formations during a military parade in their good old days
life is too short
I myself don't want to make it shorter by being a hero for any nation.
Thao Chuong
2015-10-23
8 Years Ago
@ Jason: I appreciate your response, my friend
Here is an echo to your quote: "but when the mysteries are solved... will we believe the answers? "
We Both Gain From Mysteries
(I Keep Dreaming About Reality and You Hold Your Own Belief in God)
as science has continuously demystified the universe
endless answers have been found
man's more exposed to hard facts
the more mystery solved
the closer the painful reality
the less wonders
left
for us
as human beings to imagine
even
the holy belief in god has gradually become rustier
like
a metal sheet
under direct rainfalls and sunshine
as time flies by
life is cruel as usual
why makes it more brutal?
let me fool myself as long as possible
with
my wild dream
and with the unknown reality
I prefer my own version
of hallucination
about
beautiful nature
mystical life
and untainted love
please keep the right answer for yourselves after you find it
I'd rather rely my living
on
the unknown
and the unexpected
Thao Chuong
2015-10-23
8 Years Ago
My we are all getting quite deep and profound here
Viet - thank you kind sir for your free advertising :-)
Who
We sit and weep at the crisis in Syria
We watch in despair at the wars and atrocities
That occur across the world
The mindless killings
the land mines
the bombs
the deaths
go on
and
on
Wait!
Stop!
Wait a minute
Who is the supplier
Who is manufacturing
From which back door do these things come
What murderer is supplying these weapons of destruction
Lets look closer to home
No closer than that
Lets get real
lets think
Ah!
The penny has dropped
JEM 231015
8 Years Ago
Good morning Joe and Jane.
@ Joe: Awesome painting. I like the reflection of the military helmet and the title Us and Them. You are also very good in words. Your poems are often short, but your poetry often carries a lot of thought and strong message.
@ Jane: You have brought me back to my bad experience in the seventies with your poem about wars in general and about the crisis in Syria. I like the ending: "The penny has dropped"
Have a restful weekend to you all
8 Years Ago
A response to Jane's poem Who
Of Civil War with Outsiders' Supports
In general
under a dictatorship regime
fates
of all people's
living in the country
are firmly held in the hands of her tyrant
An internal crisis easily arises
whenever
the oppressor uses his police and army
to brutally crackdown
on protesters
As in a tango
it requires two sides to engage in the dance
when an arm conflict starts
it leads to a civil war
so
often
both sides request for outsiders' supports
the war is escalated rapidly with foreign interventions
In particular
Syrian arm conflict is a complex matter
All foreign countries involved in the Syrian war
must
share the same blame
for their brutal acts
Most
importantly
those Syrian leaders on both sides
must be held responsible for treason
and tried on war crimes
of
genocide
killing madness
colossal destruction
and the plight of millions of innocent Syrians fleeing from their war-torn homeland
Anyhow
not only does the blame game not mean much
but also it does nothing
for
the dead,
the injured,
the uprooted
and the ravaged country
Thao Chuong
2015-10-24
8 Years Ago
A response to Joe's thought about "freedom of choice and freedom of voice". that serves as a joke to ease heavy impact on the thought of wars.
His Absolute Freedoms
every single man can retain his absolute freedom
until he's too silly
to give
up
the freedom of choice
allows
him
to
fool around
with many girls
whom he meets
the freedom of movement
enables
him to wander anywhere
and go home anytime
even
after midnight.
without any guilt of disturbing her sound sleep
with freedom of expression
he can talk out loud
about
long legs
and naked bodies
in tiny pieces of bikinis
and how sexy they look
without having his ears tortured by her harsh speech
the freedom of religion gives him a choice
whether
to worship her
over
his god
without fear of being burnt alive in a living hell
worse than under any brutal dictatorship
he loses all of his basic freedoms
soon after he ties the knot with her
nothing left
for
him
to enjoy
in a marriage
Thao Chuong
2015-10-24
8 Years Ago
My Holy War Against the Infidels
God is Great
God is Greater
God is the Greatest
Allāhu kabeer
Allāhu Akbar
Allāhu alakbar
My God is better
than
yours
or all other gods
my God is the best
I hate you
I hate him
I hate her
I hate them
I hate those who don't share the same belief as mine
I
vow
to blow myself
and
execute
not only those
who do not worship Allah
but also those fellow Muslims
who don't worship the same way as mine
I never stop my holy war against all religions other than mine
'til
I kill
the last standing infidel on this earth
What hope is left for the survival of mankind?
when my mind is totally blindfolded by such a sightless belief
and my heart is tainted with so much hatred
against all people
of
different
cultural and religious backgrounds
Thao Chuong
2015-10-25
8 Years Ago
Viet - How true and how incredibly sad. I cannot imagine for one minute having a heart filled with so much hatred, but they must to do what they do. I wonder how many of these people were perfectly loving caring human beings before they became indoctrinated?
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: You wrote: "..but they must to do what they do". I think that at a certain level, every human has a choice, when one decides to do something, especially when risking one's own life.
About your question: "I wonder how many of these people were perfectly loving caring human beings before they became indoctrinated?" I don't think that I could have an answer for it. However, I have some thoughts which I prefer to share them in the form of poetry - not to generate a discussion about politic or religion
I'll post my poem related to your question as soon as I complete it.
Have a good night.
8 Years Ago
We cannot go back and make a brand new start
But we can start now
To make a brand new ending.
8 Years Ago
@ Danl. Thanks for sharing your thought. Have nice day.
@ Jane: My response to your thought
Description: DROWNING OF TWO SIDES OF ORGANIZED RELIGION, 1990,Oil on Canvas, 87 inches X 80 inches. * **Will accept offers to purchase...no set price***
Religions - Roots of Intolerance and Hates
Born
and grown up
in a religiously infested environment
those unlucky babies have been brainwashed
constantly programmed and injected on the daily basis
with strong doses of religion
the
opium
of the minds
The older those kids grow
the blinder the faith they sow
when they've reached their teenage
then
they are ready
to be used as pawns
by those masters in the religious chess game
The more mature they are as adults
the harder core they become
in
their firm belief
those - who do not worship their God - are infidels
whom they must eliminate
No
respect
for their own lives
they often use their bodies as a destructive weapon
to commit mass killings and terrorize the world
It seems impossible to convince them
to
live
in peace
and in harmony
with other people of different beliefs
Thao Chuong
2015-10-25
8 Years Ago
Making a big change in your art is scary.
Know what is even scarier?
Regret.
posted by Danl Art - 8 hours ago
It's so true, Danl. I can't disagree with your smart thinking. It ain't easy for anyone to get out of his comfort zone. Those artists, who cannot think out of the box, don't go very far, don't they?
However, my following response to your thought comes from an opposite angle
To Live Or Not To Live that Is the Question?
no pain
no gain
for better or worse
he enjoyed taking challenges and exploring new paths
he wasted no time
so many tremendous changes had been made in his life
luckily
he gained all
what he had been chasing
until
one day
he was collapsed on his own feet
nearly dead
he has become wise enough to recognize
that nothing is more precious than his living time
fame
glory
money
beauty...
are useless for him now
while he is resting his back on a hospital bed to count his last days.
too bad
to wait until the last minute
it's too late to regret for not enjoying fully his life
when he was
still
healthily
kicking alive
Thao Chuong
2015-10-25
8 Years Ago
Danl / Viet
Regret not
Wrapping round the multi-coloured scarf
Hidden within,
a life taker
not a single life,
but many lives
She carefully tucks in all the edges, safe,
safe from view,
from all those..
prying eyes
telling lies
She sees her children laughing on a swing
steel eyes
staring
narrowed
hardened
She sees the object of chosen destruction
a school bus
local children
discussing
exchanging
stories
She quickly looks back at her own children,
a choke
a sob
she falls
broken
**She cannot go back and make a brand new start
But she can
start now
To make
a brand new
ending.
JEM & **Danl 261015
8 Years Ago
Great poem, Jane.
An echo for the lost soul who follows through...
Broken Eggs
A hungry mind
That must be fed
It screams for change
Seeing red
It lashes out
From fear of regret
A bloody omelette
Of broken eggs
Joe Burgess
10/26/15
8 Years Ago
The Fight For Right
I'm not right
Don't you see
The truth is not
That easy
It's not defined
By black and white
But a gray spectrum
From dark to light
Choosing sides
Only serves
To create conflict
A war of nerves
I hold out hope
That this may cease
Forgo winning
To foster peace
"They're a disease"
You might say
"Kill them off"
And you may
But they'll be back
And what then
Kill them off
Again and again
Again and again
The bombs will fall
Fueled by fear
Destroying us all
Into eternity
You will fight
Against a foe
Who's just as right
********************************
God has never asked for this
But in that name, it exists
Joe Burgess
10/26/15
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: How sad it is to read your amazing poem Regret Not. I like your smart approach of incorporating Danl's thought into the poem and making it a perfect conclusion. Good day
@ Joe: A lot of thoughts about war and enemy. My mind has been pulled back to the path of war. I might have another echo to your poems later.
Have a good night.
8 Years Ago
An echo to Joe's The Fight For Right
You're Somewhere in Between Your God and Satan
no God would ask his worshipers
to
hate
and revenge
instead He would demand all sinful men
to
forgive
and forget
only
Satan
would encourage
voluntary deaths and mass killings
for his collection of those rotten souls
if
you believe
it is right to fight and kill for your God
then you certainly betray Him
'cause
when
you bomb to destroy from your airplane
or commit suicide to take other lives away
Satan would be happy to welcome your lost souls to his burning hell
Thao Chuong
2015-10-26
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane.
Have a peaceful night or good day to all
Another echo to Danl's thought about changes
Within My Comfort Zone
a red sun emerges on distant horizon
nature's waking up for a fresh day
nothing new for me
in my daily habit:
coffee
morning walk
quick shower
and so on...
I let the rest of the day naturally goes along well
as usual
in
my dammed old routine
of twenty-four hours a day
and the three hundred and sixty five days a year
today
maybe
I could see
my last sunset
and I would never view a new sunrise again
also
this instant
could be my last breath
why would I keep trading my most valuable belonging
the living time
for
glory
and money
or anything else
I know
what I'm holding in my hands
are good enough for a joyful life
I prefer to stay within my comfort zone
and
leisurely
flow with my daily rhythms
Thao Chuong
2015-10-26
8 Years Ago
Emotions can be forming, piling up on us until we explode. The relief of this explosion is tremendous and yet so soothing. Finally letting go of everything, feeling light and free like water, that has no emotion can be formed to anything, helps anything and everyone, and yet is pure and clear like no other. ~ AR Annahita
8 Years Ago
Jane - I gave JC and Abbie the heads up in a discussion about this loser. The account is already gone. YAY!
8 Years Ago
I was recently reminded of one of my favorite quotes by Eleanor Roosevelt
"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent."
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jane, AR Annahita, and Roseann. Thanks for sharing for thoughts. Happy day to you all
@ Jane: Your quote: "Regardless of the religion, they all teach us the same basic rules." has brought my mind into as labyrinth of thoughts. I am still running around to find what those basic rules are. I'll let you know after I find my way out (lol).
@ AR Annahita: Pretty image. Your poetic writing flows as smoothly as water.
@ Roseann: Nice to see you here. I think that artists aren't the type of people who would feel inferior. It's raining now. Your post reminded me of Tanka.
Tanka Morning Downpour
it rains cats and dogs
whole nature is getting soaked
inside - warm and dry
I cancel our morning walk
my dog whines- but I am happy
Thao Chuong
2015-10-28
8 Years Ago
Viet, always nice to interact with you. And I love Tanka!
The rain is on it's way here and we're expecting it to start within the next hour or so.
And unless your dog likes getting soaked, he/she may be happy you decided to stay in! :-)
8 Years Ago
Good morning Danl. Are you sure that "falling waters never return" ? I'll let you know my thought about your quote later. Nice day,
8 Years Ago
Roseann: Likewise, it's nice to interact with you. Most Westerners are not in favor of Haiku, Senryu, or Tanka.
Haa...My friend/companion loves water. He always enjoys walking with me as two lovers under heavy rain. Enjoy your coming rain, my friend (lol)
8 Years Ago
I spent some time in Okinawa. :-) I like Haiku, as well. I'm not overly familiar with Senryu, so I now have a learning opportunity. I also like Ubi Sunt.
8 Years Ago
Thanks Roseann.
I think it is much harder to writer short poem that could create a strong impact on the reader's mind or emotion.
A Senryu for your reference
Of Man's Life and of Autumn Leaves (Senryu)
yesterday - still green
today - decomposed in ground
how short a life is!
Thao Chuong
2015-10-28
8 Years Ago
Many thanks Roseann
An echo to Danl's thought. "Falling waters never return"
The Endless Journey
rain falls down
water runs off high mountains
jumps on soggy ground
crawls through rough terrains
rushes
down
on
canyons, and valleys
swims in ravines creeks, streams, and rivers
and comes to the immense ocean
heated
by sunshine
water's vaporized up to high sky
and transformed into clouds
then
again
rain falls down
for another voyage anew
water indefinitely repeats its journey to and fro from sea to sky
wouldn't it be exhaustively bored
for
you and I
as mortal beings
to go through the same cycle of reincarnation?
Thao Chuong
2015-10-28
8 Years Ago
@ JIm: I like the following description of your water-color painting posted above. You sound as if you were in Rip Van Winkle's sleep. Have a good night
Description: Early one Autumn morning I wandered deep into the backwoods. I soon lost track of in time. I had seen some unusual animals that are not often seen. It really inspired me to hike on. After a while I came upon a hollow log and sat on it to take my rest. It was a chilly fall afternoon so I crawled inside for a better rest, but not meaning to fall asleep. I awoke from a vivid dream the next morning startled not remembering where I was at first. The dream was about the animals I had seen the previous day. They said they were there to help me move into the next dimension when my time comes. By Jim Taylor
8 Years Ago
Good Morning Everyone
Viet, like your response to Danl' quote, however surely for us humans would it not depend if you ended up in the same water flow? Surely the Amazon would be totally different to the mighty Zambezi, or the dead sea to the Mediterranean? Bit like being brought up in Saudi compared to Ireland? So may be quite an exciting adventure...what do you think?
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: I have just got out of your religious labyrinth. No more thought for tonight. It's midnight. Another day just starts. I need no nightmare in my sleep - LOL. Have a great day, my friend.
"Regardless of the religion, they all teach us the same basic rules." Jane McGowan -1 day ago
An echo to your quote, Jane
Religions and God
too many different religions
only
one God
however, every religion on this planet has already claimed,
that
their God
must be the authentic One
not only
each religion has taught its followers
that they must worship their God
for
their souls to be saved
and their next lives to be in Heaven
but also
every religion has tried to convert as many as believers from other religions
with the same damn old scary tactic
that
those human beings
who worship any God other than theirs
must be burnt eternally in a Hell for serving Satan
there could be a great possibility
none of those religions has the right God
as the almighty creator would demand all humans
to
love
and live
in harmony with each other
not to fight,
not to kill,
nor to die,
for those man-made religions
Thao Chuong
2015-10-29
8 Years Ago
Thanks Roseann. Have a nice day
It was raining when I dropped off my daughter at the Victoria's B.C. Ferry Terminal.
Here's another Senryu
Raining During My Morning Drive
wiped off from windshield
dead leaves and my sundry thought
by two dancing blades
Thao Chuong
2015-10-29
8 Years Ago
Yesterday and today
Too much fog
too much rain
Only 13 days to work before I get my sunshine
Viet you are my sunshine on wet foggy days :-)
I only have one thing to say to your response on the religion theme - Amen!
8 Years Ago
JEM does a double take lol ......Did you say you dropped your daughter off at Victoria BC ferry Terminal? My uncle lives on Vancouver Island...small world Viet :-)
8 Years Ago
Thinking Out Of the Box About Troublemakers
(On a financial perspective)
the more often, the system broken
the more services, the people need
less
criminals
more police out of work
without hackers and spammers
many folks would lose their cyber jobs
on an economic perspective
trouble makers are good for business
as they nurture employment
and bring more prosperity
to
our
society
while they make you feel frustrated
they
have brought
more bread and butter to your dinner plate
be nice
giv'em a short break
why not?
Thao Chuong
2015-10-29
Note: Re-posted from other thread for my own record
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: I live in Victoria. Does your uncle live in Victoria, Duncan, Nanaimo, Parksville, or... ? Nice day,
Tanka Walk in the Morning Rain
on the path - we walk
side by side like two lovers
under misty rain
my dog and I - no romance
oh my dear! when would you come?
Thao Chuong
2015-10-29
8 Years Ago
About 30 mins north of you Viet...in Sidney. If we go over next year we will have to make a plan :-).
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: Sidney belongs to the Greater Victoria - a beautiful town by the sea - very convenient in term of transportation (less than five minutes to BC Ferry Terminal and about five minutes to Victoria International Airport.)
Victoria has many beautiful seascapes and landscapes and a lot of tourist attractions, especially the well-known Butchard Gardens. The Greater Victoria is a Mecca of tourists from China, Japan, Koreans, and Americans. It is also a popular port for cruise ships.
Description: Silver Spray with winding roads along the coast. Unfortunately, this place has been gradually losing its pristine and beauty to new housing development. -Medium: 100% paper from magazines
Description: To have a better view, please move back away about three feet from the work.
Afternoon on Ogden Point Break Water, Victoria BC, Canada - Medium: 100% Paper torn from magazines glued on paper board
8 Years Ago
Good morning Viet and Jane
enjoying your senryu and haiku and tanka, the walk in morning rain made me smile
Jims piece - it made me feel life as it is... the clamber of humanity in its quests and needs.. . and a need for peaceful rest at the end of a day's toil
Gold Rush
There's gold in them hills
as the quest took hold...
At day's end
He slept in a tree
and found golden leaves...
a blanket for night
And there he slept
until God found him...
and gave him a steadfast home
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jason. It's a nice echo to Jim's poem. Keep the poetic flow in your heart and a sweet dream in your mind. Sleep tight.
Another Tanka echoes to your poem Gold Rush
Tanka the Homeless
home in city park
he lays his back on a bench
same place for bedtime
will he wake up tomorrow
or wait 'til God save his soul?
Thao Chuong
2015-10-30
8 Years Ago
Whenever I look to see who is viewing my art on FAA it has for a very long time now been repeating daily a certain same city and state, not my own, and I do not know anyone in these states, neither of these states have anything to do with my tag words either. Of course various others. These repeating cities and states do not lead to a sale though. I have to wonder why this is. Is it possible to print from FAA and sell without permission from FAA?
8 Years Ago
@ Barbara Barber: I've posted tyour awesome painting and your description about the sad love story for the Halloween. Thanks for dropping by.
Description: Borley Rectory was said to be the most haunted house in England, as so the book by the same name written by Harry Price says. The rectory was built by the Rev. Henry Bull in 1863 Essex, to house himself, his wife and their 14 children. The rectory burned down in a mysterious fire in 1939.
It's thought that the rectory was destined to be a haunted house from the start due to the events that had occurred on the site many centuries before.The foundation was an old Priory on land that contained a 12th century Church. A.C. Henning, the rector in 1936, discovered that the Doomsday Book told of a Borley Manor prior to 1066, so he concluded a wooden church was probably also built around that time. The foundations contained underground tunnels and a complex of vault rooms.
The most popular story to the background of Borley was that in 1362 Benedictine Monks built a monastery on the site which would later hold the rectory. Legend told of a nun from the Bures convent, 7 miles southeast of Borley falling in love with a monk from the monastery. They had decided to elope to be together, but the elders discovered their plans. A friend of the monk was to drive a carriage to help them escape. On the fateful night they were captured by the elders. The coachman was beheaded, the monk hanged and the nun was bricked up alive in the walls of the vaults beneath the rectory. Her ghost has haunted the site ever since, seen in front of the rectory during the time of its existance and on the grounds behind it. There was a path where she walked named 'nuns walk' after she had been seen so often.
8 Years Ago
Hi Everyone - Viet, Jason Barbara et al :-)
Viet you make V.Is. sound very attractive :-) Mum has been many times - she loves Butchard gardens. It is definitely on our list - my uncle would never forgive us if we did not go as he has been over here many times and it was his 70th this year. Sounds like my camera needs an excursion :-) My problem is I am more attracted to un-touristy areas but I must make an effort -or so my school report used to say ;-)
Have a lovely evening everyone x
8 Years Ago
The best things in life are free :-) posted by Jane McGowan 3 days ago
An echo to Jane's
The Best Things in Life
No job to do
no money to make
my ancestors had the best things - absolutely free for their living
They went fishing and hunting,
without paying any fee
for licenses or permits
they also
picked fruits in the wild
drank water from rivers and lakes
and built their huts wherever they liked
Nowadays
those things are no longer free
not only
the food, I eat
the water, I drink
the wood, I make a bonfire at night
but also
the ocean view
the mountain view
the valley view
the whatever view...
I have to pay nearly for everything
The cost of living has been increasingly going up
while the value of life
has significantly
dropped
down
below
zero
Luckily
air is still free
I am breathing at no cost
I hope
they won't attached a meter onto my nose
any time in the near future
to charge me a fee
for amount of air
I take into my lungs monthly
How sad it sounds!
the more civilized - the greedier
the mankind has become
What is good for the savage ape during his evolution
into the highly sophisticated modern being?
Thao Chuong
2015-10-30
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: Besides those attractions for tourists, there are many places on Vancouver Island for nature lovers such as inlets, lakes, rivers for boating, kayaking, canoeing, beaches, and miles and miles of trails in for hikers to explore the wild. The locales always go to those wonderful places, while most tourists are often fooled by the "wonder-fool" advertised through Tourism Victoria - LOL.
Have a nice weekend.
8 Years Ago
Life is like a camera
Focus on what is important
Capture the good times
Develop from the negatives
And if things don't work out
Take another shot
8 Years Ago
Nice one Viet echo of life's freebees. Always like the serious humor with the air meter.
If a big corporation could pull it off they definitely would.
They taxed my seat
so I stood to walk
then they taxed my feat
I may as well die
you certainly cant afford that
8 Years Ago
Viet - I obviously need the experts to show me around :-)
Viet /Jim - so true everything is taxed -agree with Jim just love the vision of the air tax lol.
Danl - sometimes you have to take a bad shot to appreciate the good shots :-)
Enjoy your weekends xx
8 Years Ago
Good morning Danl, Jim and Jane.
@ Danl: Smarting thinking of taking another shot. I love it. So I do hope that she would allow me to do so (lol)
@ Jim: Haa.. Rainy and gloomy today. You've brightened my mood. Great humor - big laugh.
@ Jane: You're lucky to have your uncle living here. He will be a great local resource for you.
An echo to Danl's verse and Jane's quote of wisdom: "sometimes you have to take a bad shot to appreciate the good shots :-)"
The Negative - Good Compost for My Living
the royal-looked lotus has its roots deeply dipped in mud
grass is always greener
on
a septic field
grow better from putrid compost
trees,
plants,
shrubs,
and colorful flowers
same for me
I would do best in my living
only if I know how to use
the rotten,
the decayed,
the decomposed
as
good fertilizers
it's up to me
to make my own choice
either I grow stronger on the decomposed
or I let myself rot in my own smelly shits
Thao Chuong
2015-10-31
8 Years Ago
A humorous echo to Jim's black humor about taxation. Enjoy a restful weekend
Mortal Man - Immortal Tax
We vote them into office
to
serve
us and our country
As always
those big bothers and big sisters betray you and me
as soon as they come into power
they make us their working slaves
and also rob every cent we've earned
What we consume and deposit
they tax all
from
the top
to the bottom
from inside out
and from birth to death
Without
any exemption
the junk food, I stuff into my mouth
the toilet paper, he wipes his butt
the tampon, she applies to soak her menstrual blood
the diapers, you use for your babies' poop and pee
Our government is chasing us to the end
even worse
after our death
tax is still alive
and well-fed on annual fees for our buried plots
It's the damned reason
why
nowadays
many people prefer
to have their remains cremated
for the sole purpose of terminating the immortal taxation.
Thao Chuong
2015-10-31
8 Years Ago
Duck Down
Our leader is a duck
stay in line and don’t lag behind
look straight ahead and not around
you may look down at your phone
tuned to the approved program
dumbed down lambs marching to the slaughter
feeding the pigs at their overextended table
Idiot celebrities followed by the masses
Fame seems to follow waist and excess
wasteful throw- away consumer goods
shipped across vast oceans to feed landfills
Jim Taylor 10/31/15
8 Years Ago
THERE IS...
The flowers, mountains, oceans and the sky
Are part of our beautiful Mother Nature,
We should enjoy every part with open eye
As I am speaking and in the future.
We don't pay and being asked anything
To smell the flowers and feed the birds,
There will always be a free, valuable, thing
To enjoy and understand before the words.
Just think about the Sun over the Sea
At sunset shining with his unique power,
Visualize a baby donkey running free
In fields of love, immaculate, at any hour.
So, wait a minute, you don't have to be rich
And need a pass to walk in park at night,
To love the sunshine siting at the beach;
Please, tell me, am I wrong or right?
Gina Nicolae Johnson
October 15 2015
8 Years Ago
Good morning everyone.
Gina...my depressing thought in response because we as humans are so DUMB and let business dictate what they think we need and want and MUST have....we believe their marketing hype and we read newspaper propaganda. .....
The best things in life are free
Enjoy it while we have it
Before it is
Concreted over, or
Land bare for fields, or
Walled so you can no longer see, or
Wiped out for something that is useless to us, or
Totally consumed by corporate greed to be sold for mega bucks, or..
JEM 011115
8 Years Ago
Good morning
@ Jim: I like your drawing, my friend
@ Gina: Thanks for sharing again your thought and your painting about the beauty of nature.
@ Jane: I thought that I would understand your strong reaction to the corporate greed.
Nice to be alive. The air is still free, until it's completely polluted. Then, we have to go to an air station to refill our individual oxygen tank (lol). Enjoy the day.
Under the Infinite Cosmos
her back on wild grass
trillions of stars sparkled in her eyes
she
released herself
by letting her mind float freely into the mystic sky
'til she totally lost herself
in
deep
cosmos
the outer space and her inner universe merged into oneness
Thao Chuong
2015-11-01
8 Years Ago
Inner Peace
I look into your eyes
dreaming
of
your blue sky
and van Gogh's Starry Night
I let my heart get caught
on the cobweb
of
love for you
passion to life
and desire for beauty of nature
I close my mind
searching within the realm
of my inner-self
for
peace
Thao Chuong
2015-11-01
8 Years Ago
Thanks for your poem Viet Under the infinite cosmos.
I agree with you and Jane on
Inner Peace
I need to rest up and conserve energy for my next rant.
Looking for inner piece driving down the street
I was just getting ready to click on my seat belt
sure enough at that very moment there he was parked
A California highway patrol looking for someone like me
Probably a two hundred fifty dollar ticket for no seat belt
I realize he is trying to help me save me from myself
I'm still looking for inner peace
True story from yesterday morning
8 Years Ago
Lovely, Inner Peace, Viet..............what better place to find it than in the eyes of ones beloved..............................sigh...
8 Years Ago
Had a visit from the Jehovah Witnesses one day. Sometimes they are fun to argue with, but I have my own beliefs. When they left I sat down and wrote this poem. I keep it on my fridge now to remind me every day.
Power Song
I am Wolf,
Spirit-free to choose my own truth.
I piss on your traps and poisons
-- not to warn the others, for they must find their own path
and some have an affinity for traps --
but to show that I am smart enough
to recognize the lies, even disguised as they are.
I have no need of your carrion poisons.
I can hunt my own meat,
blood-fresh and pulsing with the truth of life.
I am Old Owl Woman,
Spirit of ancient wisdom.
My wings are strong and silent;
My hands are bony talons.
I swoop down on the mouse of fear
and carry it to a higher place.
I learn by watching and listening.
I ask only one question, "Who? Who?"
Creation answers, "I am, I am, I am."
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jane, Jim, Vivian, and Shelly
@ Jane: There are always wars on earth. Inner-self is the only place in which humans could find peace.
@ Jim: Sorry to hear that you met a highway robber at his gunpoint. Why didn't you call the National Guards? (lol)
@ Vivian: Without love and romance, what would a life be?
@ Shelly: Wow. I could feel the strong impact of your powerful poem. I love your writing style. I do hope to read more of your poetry.
Thank you. Have a fruitful week.
8 Years Ago
Never give up! Even if everything seems to be against you, even if it's extremly hard and totally hopeless... there's always some way out, it just needs time to be OK again/ finally :)
8 Years Ago
@ Arletta: Thanks for sharing your thought. I think sometime it's better to give up after to many fruitless efforts.
@ Jane: "..my depressing thought in response because we as humans are so DUMB and let business dictate what they think we need and want and MUST have....we believe their marketing hype and we read newspaper propaganda. ....." Posted by Jane McGowen - one day ago
My silly echo to your thought about dumb humans (lol)
My Wants - My Needs - My Greed
I often wonder
whether I actually need
All
what I want
or
I'd better want
Only
what I need
I ruthlessly criticize the corporate greed
while I'm dreaming of taking over its magic wand
to
get all
what I want
even I do not need much
Instead
of
a small hut
with no window
somewhere in the bush
I want a huge waterfront mansion
with a stunning mountain view
right in downtown of a big city
Rather than
walking
riding a horse or a bike
or driving a regular vehicle
I want fancy limousines, luxury yachts, and private planes
Simple lifestyle is all I need for my whole life
however I always want a very luxury living
The more I get - the less I need - the more I want
Why am I always so blind not see my own greed?
Thao Chuong
2015-11-02
8 Years Ago
Never give up! Even if everything seems to be against you, even if it's extremly hard and totally hopeless... there's always some way out, it just needs time to be OK again/ finally :) By Arletta Cwalina posted 22 hours ago
My sundry thought about Arletta's quote of common sense
I'd Better Give Up
sometimes, it needs only one strike to bring me to success
many other times, I put
all my best efforts
but
no avail
whenever
I'm lucky to do well
I always trust myself
and take high pride in my talents and skills
as son as
I run out of luck and fall down
I often point my finger
to something else
but myself
why should I keep hitting my head on an iron wall
'til
I am
totally lost
and collapsed on my own feet?
wouldn't I better give it up for a nice break
then
try again
with other endless options and possibilities?
Thao Chuong
2015-11-03
8 Years Ago
hehe Excellent response Viet -
Just off to bed
Let it be said
A good nights sleep
Without a peep
Repairs the body
(No hot toddy)
And heals the mind
So let us find
those
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Sleep tight :-)
8 Years Ago
WARNING....CORPORATE GREED ISSUE. ...
My partners mum has dementia and is in a Bupa care home. She can be loving one minute and aggressive the next. He took a call two days ago to say that she had been punching people ..All four foot 10 of her. They said they needed permission to give her a drug. We always check them out first. This one we find is a Glaxo drug and they are currently under a two billion dollar lawsuit for not fully testing and authorising for certain uses like dementia when it could potentially kill her.
Go figure.....
Always check out the drug you are given and derivatives of...
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jane. Thanks for the warning. Sorry to hear about your mom's health. I hope you could find the most appropriate drug for her. Good heath to her. Have a restful day.
8 Years Ago
Real friends come and go
Like the waves of the ocean
But true friends stay
Like an octopus in your face
8 Years Ago
@ Danl: Thanks for your humorous verse.
My joke of the day - an echo to Danl's verse
Of Friends and Foes
in deed
everyone is in need of a true friend
for the good and bad time
to go ups
and
downs
together
from the beginning to the end
no complaint
but a true friend
could
be
pain in the ass
stink on the face
now and then
worse than a foe
sometimes
it takes less headache
to fight face to face
against a bitter enemy
than
to be side by side
with a sweet buddy
Thao Chuong
2015-11-04
8 Years Ago
Today, I'm speaking my mind
Connecting with my soul
Taking center stage
All humanity must see
A different side of me.
Pretty short, but decided to come up with something. Viet Tran, you're so inspiring other people to let their inner poet out.
8 Years Ago
As I get older, I am becoming more selective
Of who I consider a friend
I would rather have 4 quarters
Than 100 pennies
8 Years Ago
Goodbye Hilary
Last week I lost a friend
As young girls, all six of us,
We would raise the roof
Have a blast
Holiday
Live life
Love Life
As we got older, got involved
We went out separate ways
Keeping in touch
with a card
an email
a text
Hilary, our leader of the pack
The strong one of the group
Found the wrong one
And found comfort
hidden deep
in the bottle
often
She was funny,
made us laugh
Pinched our bums
cos hers was flat
planned our holidays
booked our flights
I feel I let her down
In these passing years
We all tried to keep in touch
Visited at times
but life goes on
and you hope
for the best
Miss you Hilary
We had a blast :-)
JEM 051115
8 Years Ago
Good evening Tori, Danl, and Jane. Thanks for sharing your poems.
@ Tori: Welcome to the land of poetry. It is nice that you woke up your inner poet and let your thought transform into poetic words. My inner poet is taking a long nap (lol).
@ Danl: Smart thinking as usual.
@ Jane: It's hard to cope with the loss of a loved one. Poetry and art could help us ease our pain and stress during the mourning process.
8 Years Ago
A thought to Tori's Artwork The Value of Human Life
The Value of Life
I really don't know
whether it's a common practice in human's culture
that he's armed with guns
and kills
for fun
or
for his exotic collection of trophies
I somehow think
in his bloody instinct
man
pays no regard
for any living being at all
either in the wild or in a big city
unfortunately
it becomes horrible
when he decides to go for big profits
he's
willing
to take as many lives as required
it's absurd to witness
the beauty of art is measured by money
same as the value of lives
when
he puts
them on a scale
and weighs to estimate
how much profits he could make from his kills
Thao Chuong
2015-11-05
8 Years Ago
A Thought in response to Danl's poem
Of Coins and Friends
no difference in cash value
between
a dollar coin,
four quarters,
and one hundred cents
he knows for sure
the more coins, he keeps in his pocket
the heavier load, he has to carry
he lets his thought travel further on this path of logics
to develop a strategy
for his friendship
in life
he
has
convinced himself
he'd better get great support from only one true friend
than the wishy-washy talks from one hundred people whom he knows
he
tends
to forget
one hundred guys always make a bigger noise
than
done
by only one person
regardless how hard this man claps his hands to applause him for his success
Thao Chuong
2015-11-05
8 Years Ago
The human ego makes us the center of the universe --
the center of the cosmos even --
God's chosen,
when in truth
we are a fleeting speck
in an incomprehensibly enormous universe,
which itself is a minuscule speck
in the tremendous well of energy
that makes up the incomprehensibly vast cosmos
of spirit and matter.
We scratch at the surface of Mystery,
calling ourselves homo sapiens sapiens,
or wise, wise man,
but we have no real comprehension
of how pitifully small
and unimportant we really are
in the divine scheme of things.
Or maybe the human ego just refuses to accept
that in the span of universal time
we will eventually disappear as if we had never existed
leaving less evidence of our existence
than the dinosaurs,
and nothing we do, for good or ill
will matter in a million years,
nor will there be anyone left to remember.
8 Years Ago
Hi Shelley - well that has certainly put everything into perspective and I think you are absolutely right!
Mere Neutrinos
We could be a mere neutrino
floating through space and time
which could be the depths of a giants pocket
or the insides of a mega mansion
the monsoons are mere humidity
the snows are passing through freezers
The hurricanes are sneezes
And droughts are sailing past heaters
God help us if we get breathed in
We could shoot back out at 70 mile an hour
Or even worse we could be swallowed
and come to a sticky end
A mere neutrino we will remain
floating high on the breeze
Passing through time and seasons
until we burn ourselves right out
JEM 061115
8 Years Ago
@ Shelley: Thanks for sharing another poem of yours. Nice to read writing from the deep thoughts of a fellow Vancouver Island poet.
@ Jane: You wrote a good poem presenting the big ego under a micro-perspective.
A black humour in response to Shelley's poem about human's big ego
My Self-inflated Ego
The outer space has been expending to the infinite
so does my ego
it
grows
faster and bigger
than the entire universe
it makes me believe I am the best of the bests
Billions of folks around me
but I could see
only
me… me …me…
Who else is better than I am?
even the almighty God did make
a
big
mistake
in his poor creation of sinful man
Keep pumping more hot air into my egocentric balloon
to help me fly high
highs
higher
highest
into the infinite sky
or
Shut up!
let me inflate it by myself
the bigger, my ego - the better I'd feel
even if I'm going to be exploded into pieces in mid air
I would take the whole world down with me
Why would I stay low on the ground with a dejected ego?
Thao Chuong
2015-11-06
8 Years Ago
Of Human's Ego and Arrogance
a ship without a rudder would be lost on high seas
or get stranded
on a coral
reef
a car without a steering certainly hits something very soon
ends up in a culvert
or runs off
a stiff
cliff
ego
to human
as rudder to ships
or steering wheel to vehicles
it helps him drive to the right direction
without ego
an essential part
of human's psyche
man has no consciousness of his own identity
no awareness of
his own
self
thus, he'd be ignorant of the vital correlation
between
his inner universe,
the outer space, and other beings
not
the big ego
but his own arrogance
that leads him to the path of self-destruction
Thao Chuong
2015-11-07
8 Years Ago
...We are nothing more than a robot with the label "human". Like the "mechanical" robot, artists can not create new art without the proper programming...by Danl.
A response to Danl's...
Of Men and Robots
Amazing robots have been sophisticated created and intelligently programmed
to
help
humans do
many different jobs
Unlike humans
robots can work long hours
without taking a break
without making any complaint
without asking for a raise
without gossiping or creating any slight problem at a workplace
More
accurate
and more durable
than any human being
a robot makes less mistakes
and can manage so many complicated or extremely heavy tasks
which humans can't
Regardless
how intelligent a robot could be programmed
it
cannot
do anything
without a command or an intervention from an alive human being
Without
a human's mind
or a human's hand
a robot either stays still until it's fully eroded
or works as programmed until it's fallen apart
Unfortunately
Like
many lousy artists
without any creative talent
robots do not any imagination at all
Robots to humans
as humans to God
with
the slight difference
robots are selfless and loyal to work for his creator
humans who worship God - purely for their sinful souls to be saved
Thao Chuong
2015-11-07
Note: Cut and Paste from the other post for my own record
8 Years Ago
Freedom of Expression and Action Is the Beauty and Nastiness of Human Beings
at a certain level
as
a human being
you have a free mind to decide
what is right and what is wrong for you
and whether you'd better pee on the head of your boss'
and quit your job anytime
you're not so pleased
with
it
as
a man
you have a heart
to love and hate
you could become so emotionally to lose your coolness
and fuck at my face
anytime
when
I
make
you upset
there are both beauty and ugliness within a human being
without
being emotional, creative, imaginative
and unable to think out of the box
a human being
is no better
than
a robot
Thao Chuong
2015-11-07
FYI: Edited version to make the poem less provoking
Note: Cut and paste from the other thread for my own record
8 Years Ago
Hi Viet - you are being very prolific here today - you must be on a roll...
Ego
Like a great big bloated balloon
Just about ready to burst
So full of himself
Full of his own adoration
Full of his own importance
He knows everything inside and out
He is always Mr right
He looks in the mirror and sees Adonis
As he combs what's left of his hair
And puts his concealer on a thread vein
He doesn't see what he has done to his wife
She's become a mere mouse
She's lost sight of who she once was
What she once looked like
She has become what he no longer wants
She dare not to eat what she wants anymore
He always complains she is fat
She no longer cares for her own appearance
He has always told her she's not pretty
She was stunning when she met him
She could have had any man she met
She was funny, caring and beautiful
She had a figure to die for
All the curves in the right places
And then she met him
He browbeat her into believing
she was fat, ugly and useless
All to boost his own ego
To make his bullying little self feel better
While she shrank inside
He kicked her hand as he walked past
Complaining she was lazy and sleeping
Not doing a thing in the house
The bottle of pills rolled out of her hand
He did a fantastic job
JEM 071115
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: Thanks for sharing. Haa.. Your bitterly humourous poem gave me a good laugh and sour grapes.
FYI: More time for computer today as it has been raining - not ,many for outdoor activities- Unless, a short morning walk and maybe to swimming pool later. Have a good day.
8 Years Ago
Good morning, Jane: Many thanks for promoting my collage.
My sundry thought from the dark side of the bright sunlight.
Of Huge Profits and High Risks
(My devil's advocacy for the corporate greed )
You often point your middle finger to the rich for their greed
also
blame
big businesses
for chasing huge profits
Maybe
you're right
as you have every right to criticize
whatever you think it isn't right
Have you ever considered the followings?
Profit
is the main drive for business
the more profits - the better business
the better business - the bloodier competition
the bloodier competition - the higher risks of being bankrupt
On the other hand
no profit
no one wants to invest
no purpose for any business to be in existence
every mega corporation in the world would ceases its operation
all big, mid-sized, and small businesses would close their doors
Consequently, no contractor, no builder, no producer, no distributor, no seller, etc.
no employment
what would happen to economy?
to your country?
to your home?
to your food?
and to you?
Practically, business people often pay a throat-cutting price for chasing big profits
high anxiety
unhappiness
high level of stress
endless sleepless nights
less time for kids and spouses
higher rates of divorce
shorter lives…
and suicide
Now
you know
making huge profit ain't a piece of cake
do you still wanna play your blame game?
Thao Chuong
2015-11-08
8 Years Ago
DANL- I like your thought provoking comment :-)
I certainly do Viet :-)
In Response to Huge Profits & High Risks.
There are many forms of corporate greed
My dislike is of lies, deceit and corruption
To push pills which have not been tested
To move peoples from their homelands
Their natural environments to compounds
Entrapment, no life, drugs and drink
Digging up swathes of natural beauty
To dig for minerals to push their latest invention
Which we neither want nor need until they advertise
The human race believes they have this need
So buy buy buy, the demand grows
We don't think of the land that has been destroyed
Nor of the indigenous peoples made homeless
The animals that have been displaced, their homes
shrinking daily, by the hour, the minute, the second
The only people who should be worried are the wrongdoers
Everyone knows things go in and out of fashion
depending on who pushes the hardest.
Corporate greed at what cost do they continue?
JEM 081115
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much for your regular contribution of your thought.
@ Danl: I like your thought of wisdom about living forward.
@ Jane: Your great response has made me hate the corporate greed (lol).
Have a nice day.
8 Years Ago
My Own Greed
(Self-reflection)
Same
as
you
and everyone else
living in this imperfect world
I hate greed and injustice
But
I have to admit
I always want
to
get a better life
bite a bigger piece of the pie
lick on the top cream of a cake
Like
all other consumers
those who have tried to get a better deal from the corporate world
whenever I buy
I look for best products
and always bargain for cheapest prices if possible
In general
I
want
to get the best in what I do
to win as many contests as I can
to be renowned around the world
to make more money for my spending
In another word
I
push
as much as I can
to make highest gains in my daily living
On the other hand
I wanna share with you about my thought of fairness
that I am sick and tired of the corporate greed
for unethically squeezing
my
little balls
for their bigger profits
Thao Chuong
2015-11-09
8 Years Ago
Viet - I love your response but I think you were already converted!
Just to give you a brief insight into my other halfs life - poor devil - think of him often Viet
and give him all your sympathy :-)
JEM HELL
Put that down its not organic!
Don't get that its made in China!
What does it say on the label?
It contains Soya....
You cant get that!
And that's got palm oil in....
put it back!
We don't need that......
put it down!
Is it necessary?
Can we make do?
Don't throw it......
make some soup!
Soya in deodorant?
To make your pits smooth?
What will they think of next?
They chop down the rainforest to grow that!
Real lemons in shower gel?
There are people starving!
What is wrong with this world?
JEM 091115
8 Years Ago
Ha..Ha.. It is nice to hear that your other half life can still maintain his own freedom choice - lol
Here is my "Made-In-China" echo to your interesting poem above.
Made In China
Goods produced en masses
no
good at all
actually in very poor quality
unsafe
and poisonous
for both humans and animals to consume
Too bad
increasingly becoming
very
popular
around the world
since consumers of low incomes
have no choice other than
to buy
products
which they can only afford
regardless how shitty these commodities are
As a result
from the East to the West
Europe, Africa, Asia, Australia, and America
all continents
flooded
by goods of no good
on every shelf of any shop - small or big
in a corner store or in a supermarket
Love'm or hate'm
nothing is better sold than
the
most
unpopular
Made in China
Thao Chuong
2015-11-10
8 Years Ago
On Remembrance Day
Lest Not Forget
Young soldiers in late teenage and early twenties
are
often sent to battle fronts
and carried back on stretches
or
in body bags
Loss of lives
highly
praised
as death of honor
other sacrifices also encouraged
as in defense of a nation
or in the name of god
Once a year
on the Remembrance Day
their nation bows her head
in
silence
for five minutes or so
to pay her respect to the dead heroes
Often being forgotten
and neglected
by
the country and the people
whom they risk their lives to serve
many war veterans are too mentally wrecked to get back to a normal life
Well-hidden behind many charming words
such
as
freedom,
patriotism,
democracy,
national security, etc
is
the
bloody
motive of war:
To
serve
a leader for his hunger for conquer
and best interests
of
the governing class
the rich
the big corporations
the weaponry industry
the mega contractors for wartime services
or those holy leaders of well-organized religions
Today - In Memory of All Fallen Heroes - Yesterday
let us not forget the valuable lesson in the past
and not repeat the same mistake
again and again
then
again
and again…
Lest Not Forget
Thao Chuong
2015-11-11
8 Years Ago
The Worst Combination
No target could be hit
no one would get killed
no damage would be done
until a man's finger pulls a trigger
for
a bullet
to leave
a gun chamber
Without the worst combination
between weaponry and a psycho mind of mass destruction
no
war
could
be launched
Unfortunately
the world
is
full of madmen
and overloaded with huge stockpiles of weapons of mass destruction
Alas! not much hope
left
for human race
as he has hurriedly raced
to his bloody man-made doomsday
Thao Chuong
2015-11-11
8 Years Ago
My thought regarding a small group of FAA artists who are always making critical remarks on the Discussion forum....
"Criticism is the suspicion of one’s own inferiority'
8 Years Ago
No, Dani, criticism is not the "suspicion of one's own inferiority." It is the reference point all thinking people focus on to separate levels and degrees of presentation. Without criticism, the world would rotate as a mindless, cardboard cutout of automatic simpletons. Criticism steers creativity. As for art, we all criticize--even self-criticize--indeed, that measure which is necessary to weed out in our own work the sense of wonder from the mundane, the uneventful.
My response to your notion of criticism is rather reversed: those who are afraid of criticism are suspicious of their own inferiority.
8 Years Ago
Good morning Danl and Kenneth. Thanks for the very short but interesting dialogues. Have a nice day.
My thought about criticism
The Mirror
unless I stand in front of a mirror
it's impossible
for
me
to know how I look like
same
as
a mirror
criticism always provides me with a better reflection of myself
however, I often reject the naked truth
whenever, it reveals
my dirty
face
it's why
so
often
I smash
the mirror
for my poor image
instead of taking its reflection for my own improvement
Thao Chuong
2015-11-12
8 Years Ago
Evening All :-)
Nice to see some banter going on here lol :-)
Kenneth, Danl
I love criticism, especially my own about my own! When it comes to others criticism, as long as it its productive criticism,
it is always welcome. How can we learn and improve without this? I agree with both of you, but it has to be constructive
not just negative for negatives sake. I do know what Danl means, but I think it is the delivery more than the intent. Just
one of the reasons face to face is better than text, or written dialogue.
People also need to ensure they know enough about a subject to make a criticism, unless it is delivered as a question to
learn from. Just my humble little opinion.
Viet - love your response :-)
Off to bed, night night, sleep tight xx
8 Years Ago
I believe Danl has been studying too many fortune cookies.
As for Jane's comment--"When it comes to others criticism, as long as it its productive criticism, it is always welcome"--a nice optimistic thought, but not a realistic expectation. Of course, criticism based in research, savvy, and knowledge strengthens any adverse position. The fact is, however, things in this large, complicated and cumbersome world are not so neat and orderly. Opinions are often impulsive, reactionary--and this is not always a bad thing. The first impression is often the most genuine. Finally, who is to determine just what "productive criticism" is? Not even Danl's fortune cookies can hold that power...
Best to all,
Ken
8 Years Ago
Thought Of The Moment
Asking an artist what he thinks about critics
is like asking a fire hydrant how it feels about dogs
8 Years Ago
A thought about change:
When the winds of change blow
Some people build walls
While others build windmills
8 Years Ago
Kenneth
My glass is nearly always half full.....I guess that's the way I rock n roll in my little world :-)
Jason - drat I knew I should have booked my tickets today!!
Back off to The Gambia on Wednesday.!
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jim, Jane, Jason, Danl, and Ken. Have a nice day/or night to you all.
In response to Danl's Thought Of The Moment
Of Art Critiques
of course
I know
I must be soaked
as
a wet
blanket
whenever I pop my head out in the rain
yet
I wish
I could gain
the same effect
when I exhibit my art in a public domain
heavy rainfall of criticism
whether
nice or nasty
gentle or harsh
is a clear indication:
my art
is
either too bad
or really good
otherwise it doesn't attract that much attention
anyway
why worry?
art critiques are like wolves howling at a full moon
for no reason
other
than releasing the mental stress boiling within their inner selves
Thao Chuong
2015-11-13
8 Years Ago
The War Categories
Two common types of wars
the war of guns
and the war of words
At battle fronts
blood spilled
body parts scattered
cries of sufferings
Generals reach higher stars
In cozy offices
dripped
on carpet
red wine darker than blood
overfilled in the air
aroma of flowers,
nice words,
laughs,
Politicians gain more power
Thao Chuong.
2015-11-13
Note: Copy and paste from the other thread for my own record
8 Years Ago
The So-called War for Peace
it provides happiness
absolutely
no
suffering
without mass destruction
it generates love
never gives birth to hate
it takes no blood to gain
requires
no
sacrifice
to maintain
either
Peace for humans
to live in harmony
or
War for mankind
to fight in blood-spattered conflict
Nothing else could be placed
in
between
those two opposite ends
no such thing
called
the war for peace
(whether to achieve or to maintain it)
just
another bullshit
well-hidden in the name of Peace
to cover the bloody hostility of War
Thao Chuong
2015-11-13
Note: Cut and paste from the other thread for my own record
8 Years Ago
Move closer and look ahead
It is coming near
It is the end of the world
And you can see it from here
8 Years Ago
When the tides of life turn against you
and the current upsets your boat.
Don’t waste those tears on what might have been
just lay on your back and float.
...Ed Norton in an episode from the Honeymooners.
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much Danl, Jason, Vanessa, and Ken. Peace for your mind.
@ Danl: I'd which I could share the hard time with you for the loss of lives by the recent terrorists' attacks in Paris.
@ Jason: It's a nice poem. Keep flowing like water.
@ Vanessa: Welcome you and your thought. Agreed! It's better to leave the rest uncovered for the imagination.
@ Ken: You are a provoking thinker - very articulate in both art and writing.
8 Years Ago
My thought in response to Joe's closed thread Us and Them
Us and Them or the Oneness
all human beings have much in common
we belong to the same race
so identical
in
flesh
and bones
we bleed in red as well
in spite of what mother tongue we talk
we
laugh or cry
for joys or pains
in the same language
regardless
major differences
in
our
colour of skin
family of birth
country of origin
and other factors
totally out of our control
yet, we have the same basic need for a living
and we tend to act alike for our own survivals
somewhat, our oneness is severely shattered
by the strong belief
in
dualism
that splits us into two opposite halves
us and them
him and her
you and me
in the end
it mainly depends on us
whatever needs
we
pursue
either air, water, and food or raw materials
it reflects our lifestyle and the way of life
and which way
we select
either
war or peace
eventually it swings back to us like a stormy pendulum
You and I,
He and She,
We and They
always
stay within the realm of oneness
All human beings are the perfect reflection of each other
Thao Chuong
2015-11-14
8 Years Ago
Tears For Paris
rainfall of tears for Paris
the Capital of Light
fell
into
darkness
on last Friday
the peaceful night
shattered by sudden shockwaves
of gun-fires
and suicide blasts
five synchronized attacks
killing the innocent en mass
is
absolutely
a satanic act of terrorism
a cowardice attack on peace for all humanity
let's
not allow
those madmen take away our love and compassion
replace them with their zero intolerance and homicidal hatreds
il a plu
J'ai pleuré
pour la triste nuit à Paris
Thao Chuong
2015-11-15
8 Years Ago
Good morning Danl. Have a peaceful day.
My thought in response to your thought about the old age.
The Aging Process
Thirty-six thousand and five hundred days in a man life
this huge amount of time sounds as if it would take him on long journey
as a matter of fact
it
is but
a blink of an eye
as time continuously flies
to
the infinite
much faster than the speed of light
Alas, I don't recognize
how quick it is to grow old
until to see gray hair on my head
Living
is
like
taking a flight to nowhere
We take off and fly around in midair of the adult world
until
we are about to run out of fuel
have
no choice
but land back on the same airport
Now
I've reached the age
that makes me confused and forgetful
I know
sometimes
I behave and act like a little kid
because I am taxing back on the runway of my childhood again
Pretty soon
my plane would make a full stop
I must get off
to
the same
destination
where I originally left
Thao Chuong
2015-11-16
8 Years Ago
Hi all :-)
In response to old age:
The trouble is you work all your life and by the time you can retire you are too old and knackered to enjoy your freedom!
May we find an end to this war.
8 Years Ago
@ Danl and Jane: More thought of old age.
Old Age - Maturity and Wisdom
it taxes no time to grow old
less hair - more gray
a clear sign
of old
age
quite ironic
it
takes
forever
for some
to become grownups
in many cases
maturity
and wisdom
need not be the inevitable outcome of old age
Thao Chuong
2015-11-16
8 Years Ago
front to back
back to front
all i see are other sides!
can you see mine?
said an old man
looking back
to front and
back!
8 Years Ago
My thought for today.... Ever been called a racist?? and are you?
i never saw colour or religion as a child. My mother's best friend was Jamaican, for over 40 years til her death, we went round for years, and her husband was Muslim Indian, she had other black friends who visited, 2 of best friends at school were half Jewish, my closest pals at university were black Sri Lanken who i shared a flat with, travelled round Europe with him and a Hong Kong pal, the others were English, brown Sri Lanken, A West Indian, a Mauritain black - one of the nicest guys i ever met , Welsh, Scottish, Irish.. etc even a few Japanese and Chinese ladies . Quite a few Germans London is a great multi cultural city. Paris, NewYork, LA, Rome, Berlin.. many great multi cultural citiesYet to confound the discussion - I too have been called racist by some people within communities!! - as its simply is a perfect weapon - a way to destroy people! Nauseating - this is the politicisation and weaponisation of fake racism accusations. They, the perpetrators, get away with it scot free and everyone suffers. I wont pretend it hasn't effect me. yeah it induces severe resentment. I almost actually do sound racist myself some days if i let it out like a pressure cooker blows steam, It can mess and FK your head up severely.. but that's the intention ive decided, its a perfect psychological weapon to destroy people that has been mastered - as have many others - and these are being disseminated...
victims too can be aggressors in the racism landscape
back to front
and front to back
just look all round and see the full landscape
confusing it can be
but dont get messed up
UNLESS U R THE REAL RACIST OUT THERE
8 Years Ago
JC
I know exactly where you are coming from. I was brought up in Rhodesia now Zimbabwe, around totally differing views, both rascist and non rascist. I, like you have many friends, different colours, different religions and we all accept each other for who we are, what has shaped us, what has made us. It is what is in the heart. And now I look back to what was a beautiful country, and even though there was segregation which was totally wrong, there was food for all, schooling for all, transport, electricity and great infrastructure, the currency was 1 dollar to the American dollar.. Now I look at it and see all industry shut, there are no schools unless the teachers work for nothing, there is no food, if you put anything in the bank it is taken, there is nothing for anyone, just corruption. There were 20,000 Matabele murdered when Mugabe was given power because they were a different tribe and buried in mass graves, the white farmers butchered and murdered or driven from theirs farms. The wildlife has been slaughtered, the minerals raped, the country has gone beyond being on its knees.
Danl - what Ian Smith did was build that wall, and hold his dreams within it but he could not live there forever, the power of world governments dictated what he should and should not do.
They decided how he should run the country he was elected to run. Who is to decide what is worse - how it was, or what it is now and how it achieved it?
I am at a loss - There is no utopia.
8 Years Ago
Thats a very honest post Jane. No fake pr reply. Which of two severe extremes would people choose, poverty with equality or discrimination with economic success? thats a tough one, glad i dont have to choose, for self respect it has to be equality.. but a person needs food to live... would you watch your family starve for equality?
utopian dreams are good for the soul...a place to strive for, to dream about - and progress towards some kind of utopia is possible, i think, and has occurred.... much less sex descrimination, much less racial descrimination, much less homophobia ... we all have pretty ok to good lives compared to a few hundred years ago. Religious understanding and tolerance? maybe we do have that, its the subjugation and indoctrination of individuals en masse by political religions that has been motivated by a few?
live a dream within a dream.. i think we all do
8 Years Ago
Good evening all. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the dialogues. A lot of valuable information for me to consume.
FYI: Sorry for being inactive for the whole day. We had a heavy rain storm today with the results of road closures because of flood , fallen trees, fallen power lines. We had power outage nearly for the whole day. No TV, no internet,: quite relaxing for me - except the little headache with my two little grand kids. They got bored to death and asked me to play a horse for them to ride on (lol).
@ Jim: A good poem that made me think the opposite - not to look back. When I have time I might get back and have a short echo.
@ Danl: While I think I understood your sour words , I don't know if I would enjoy your thought of bitterness. May peace be in your mind and love in your heart.
@ Jason: I like the natural flow of your poem back to front. You've raised a good point about racism. It's a tricky issue to be touched as it smells bad to be turned over.
@ Jane: You made me think of tribalism. It is the worst form of racism. Unfortunately, Africa and Middle East provide good fertilizer for tribalism to grow. There have been various genocides on big scales and well as many genocides on a smaller scales.
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day.
About Warmongers and Terrorists
(To those war-addicted psychopaths who always advocate more killings)
Alas
it's disastrous
when madmen fight against madmen
with teeth and nails at all costs
regardless
wherever they come from
East - West - North - South
those extremists are in the same boat
They play the same game
kill
kill and kill
more killings
more bombings
until they could see the death of their last enemy
unfortunately only the innocent pay the full price of any war
either they died at night clubs, in restaurants, inside stadiums, or at any public places in a peaceful nation
or in beds, at homes, in villages, in cities, on a war-torn country
Regardless, which side they are at
both
must be
condemned
for their horrific killings
there must be no excuse
whether
those mass-murderers have loudly claimed
they've acted
in the name of Allah
or for protection of democracy and their freedom
It's truly an Act of Terrorism
to drive millions of people away from their homelands
it's also clearly a Genocide
to kill
hundreds of,
thousands of,
hundred thousands of,
children, elderly, women, and unarmed civilians
Don't forget the war-addicted psychopaths
who
sit harmlessly in an office or in front of a computer at home
spray poisonous vermin from their hearts full of hatreds
and put more gasoline onto the fire
Tireless warmongers are psychologically and mentally worse antagonistic terrorists
than those who actually commit the mass killings
Thao Chuong
2015-11-17
8 Years Ago
"You've raised a good point about racism. It's a tricky issue to be touched as it smells bad to be turned over. "
ok flipping it again and again
oooooooooooooooooops
The fact is
a White, a Jew, an Arab, a Black, an Asian, a Gay, and of course you!
can all be racist aginst one, or other, or all!
as all can be homophobic
as all can be sexist.
but (hopefully) most, of us, are not.
accused and acuser are interesting role plays, perhaps we all are both, aren't you?
are we victim and aggressor?
(NB - this is small print - this thought was a natural flow of thought from other threads yesterday, in case others think im stoking up issues. i know alot of peope read these posts, the invisible, some in the media and other people, much of my poetry is in draft stage so please dont circulate it, well not without knowing all this, it might get edited and rewritten to some small or large degree when i compile them all, its also copyrighted, and much i write has meaning in context and semi "dialogue" with other posts, it can be a poetic echo to provoke thought, without context meanings can change and i have to address this later, i had to delete some poems, sometimes there can be 4 or 5 meanings, so please dont spin the meanings according to your own perceptions and prejudices. I write primarily on these threads to other artists incl poets, painters and photographers for artistic interaction, and get indirect feed back and give and get ideas, not for the prejudiced preconcieved malicious "fools" on an agenda lol, excuse me you racist, who me?? )
sorry for the stonker, the stinker, the utter SMELL and STINK on this thread Viet...... .. oops i farted
i shall leave this topic, it came from "acusing" and being "acused". to thee we are all wed. poetically posting here of course.
8 Years Ago
Good morning, Jason. See! I've told you "racism smells bad to be turned over". Glad to know that you put this issue back into your pocket. Have a nice day, mate.
8 Years Ago
Ive struggled to find the poetic words Karen
an echo
Oh Paris
She dreamt of Paris Spring
swimming the Seine
and finding love...
Paintings by an artist's brush
and loved so much
Swan rivers flow...
Hearts
should always flow
in peace.. .
"I never knew
how much you loved me
nor I loved you"
called out the swan.. .
Flying high in sunset skies
and midnight questions
oh Paris why?
in Autumn's grimmest rise
a tide of blood flows
as gun shots blast and people die
In misty days
and cloudy nights
the swan cried her boldest calls
some deep magic
embraced her lonely flight
returned to Paris skies
her thoughts of Springtime May
these saddest days...
A swan sheds her tears
above a city loved
In distant skies
there flew a dove
and spirits too
they sing
and here, they too cry
and here, nearby
such spirits rise in might and fly
In saddest love
for peaceful days
a lonely swan flies
Oh Paris.. .
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
edited
8 Years Ago
An echo to Jim's poem Looking Back
My Somber Thought of the Old Age
It's scary to look forward
in front of me
obstructs
a stiff cliff
at a very short distance
not much room left to keep running further
I'd better slow down to prolong my living voyage
I know
my own doomsday would come pretty soon
as soon as I reach the end of the rope
for sure
I will fall down
into a bottomless valley of the unknown
On the other hand
I don't want to look backward
my past has gradually been disappeared in the mist
I'd better let go
as I'm no longer strong enough to carry my heavily accumulating load
Either
I'd rather look onto the ground
and check
to
make sure
I don't fall down on my feet
before my time is up
Or
I'd better turn my eyes up to the blue sky above
to enjoy bright sunshine
of those last days
of my life
Thao Chuong
2015-11-18
8 Years Ago
I agree Viet.
Enjoying everyone's really good writing!
Look back insurance reassurance
Don’t look back
keep moving forward
knocked down
get back up
again again again
make the most of it
keep your eye on the prize
onward peaceful soldier
If you reach that slow plateau
body demobilized mind sill mobilized
you then have earned fine memories
to replay like a movie in your mind
challenging the new day
Jim Taylor 11/18/15
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jim. I enjoy your positive poetry and your art of naive-ism. Wow, you have the smart look of Einstein's in your deep thinking. Have a nice day.
8 Years Ago
"To survive we must build a wall around our lives
And live a dream within a dream" -by Danl Art 2 days ago
My response to Danl's quote
Man's Fear of his Own Shadow
(To live free is taking endless risks)
man tends to erect many walls around
he does it to make him feel safe and sound
and to protect
himself
from
being attacked
by his subjectively perceived enemies
Ironically, he hits his head against his own iron partition
the more walls - he builds
the more insecure - he feels
quite an addiction - not easy to quit
he has kept adding non-stop
more
and more
barricades around
to imprison himself inside his own fortress
until no one could reach his forbidden city
In
lengthy
isolation
without other human beings to interact
his life becomes so senseless and utterly meaningless
he feels desperately lonely
He would take some risks to demolish all walls
only
if he knows the worst enemy
which
robs his inner peace
and creates the unease feeling of his own insecurity
is his own fear of the unknown - not anybody else
It's nice to live in harmony with all other human beings
and to see endless smiling faces around
on a daily basis,
isn't
it?
Thao Chuong
2015-11-19
8 Years Ago
The Good News - Today
after the long downpour of whines and cries
sober days have stopped
no
more
rain of tears
the sun is back
sharing its bright light
pulling the sky up high and turning it into blue
in the air
echoed happy sounds
on the Westhills playground
kids are swinging, climbing, spinning, chasing, laughing, jiggling..
they bring back the joyful mood
and make the day lively and lovely
there're many happy and cheerful stories like this
everyday
anywhere
around the world
regrettably, the local media
only broadcast
those bad news
which
sink my hearts
and make me cry
it's why
I prefer to enjoy a good time of the childhood with my grand kids
and not to listen to,
nor
watch,
more crappy news
from the adult world
Thao Chuong
2015-11-21
8 Years Ago
A Frosty Morning in Mid-autumn
it looked saline
the thin layer of salt
sprinkled on icy roads
on the rooftops
on trees
on the lawn
the whole neighbourhood is painted in white
very early
in the morning
it was quite chilly
on the Goose Trail
very quiet and serene
only my dog
and
I
in our routine walk
not much to talk to each other
he ran about
I jogged
trying to warm myself up a little bit
slowly walked toward us
an old man
faced down
buried his head in a thick hood
and hided both hands in deep pockets
in
silence
like a zombie
no sign of being alive
except the misty smoke breathing out from his nose and mouth
my dog barked
he
ignored
I waved my hands and said hi
he looked at me, smiled, then kept walking past us
in mid-autumn
so
chilly
I could feel
as if I dipped myself in the chill of freezing winter
Thao Chuong
2015-11-21
8 Years Ago
Powerful Images Showing Where Young Syrian Refugees Sleep
Since 2011, more than 4 million Syrians have been forced from their homes in the face of the ongoing war in the country. Roughly half them are children.
Swedish photographer Magnus Wennman and twice-winner of the World Press Photo awards has been photographing Syrian refugees in refugee camps across the Middle East and on journeys across Europe as they flee a conflict that shows no signs of stopping. His photo project Where the Children Sleep captures the suffering that hundreds of thousands of children caught in bloody war have been subjected to.
Source of information: http://www.buzzfeed.com/lynzybilling/where-syrian-children-sleep#.yjnRe2bOJ
Description: Abdul Karim, 17, in Athens, Greece
Abdul Karim Addo has no money left. He bought a ferry ticket to Athens with his last euros. Now he spends the night in Omonoia Square, where hundreds of refugees are arriving every day. Here smugglers are making big money arranging false passports as well as bus and plane tickets to people in flight — but Abdul Karin is not going anywhere. He is able to borrow a telephone and call home to his mother in Syria, but he is not able to tell her how bad things are. “She cries and is scared for my sake and I don’t want to worry her more,” he says. He unfolds his blanket in the middle of the square and curls up in the fetal position. “I dream of two things: to sleep in a bed again and to hug my younger sister.”
By Magnus Wennman / Aftonbladet /REX Shutterstock
8 Years Ago
The Nature Of Our Tears
Around the world
heavy rainstorm of tears has fallen down
to weep or cry
for the loss of lives
and for the shattered peace
from the last horrible terrorist attacks on the Capital of Light
Paris is strong
certainly restores its orders
and is getting back to the normal living rhythms
On the contrary
peace is a pipedream
in Syria - the war-torn country
the fight has been escalated
More bombings rain down
on
cities
villages
farm lands
and oil fields
Also
live-human suicide bombers continue detonating themselves
inside sacred mosques
at crowded markets
on school buses
on busy streets
Over
the last
four years
thousands of little Syrians have been killed
by
cross-fires
between both sides
over two million children have been driven fled from their homes
many
died
on the way of escape
Endless heart-broken stories written by those innocent children
(with their blood and their own lives)
have
never caught
headlines of the Western media
Please shed a tear for suffered kids
in
need
the most
Around the world.
Thao Chuong
2015-11-23
8 Years Ago
he never said goodbye
but he knew he was leaving
he never took the time to say he loved us
even in that last evening
he read instructions on how to get there easily
Using ebay like I buy food
he spent hours learning and thinking
while i thought all in his life was good
he smacked around his ideas,
planning,
thinking,
working it all out
and never said goodbye
he spent days waiting for purchases to arrive
and never said he loved us, it would not have been too late
I waited though
and still i wait
they say he died quickly
like that makes it better for me
they say he went the way he wanted to
well he had it all planned you see
but he never said goodbye
they say it will take some time
I try to understand why
but it was his life and I dont even understand mine
8 Years Ago
Not in my name…
When God takes no side…
who are you to blame?
Not in my name
Your river of tears path
across faces of dust
where down on their knees
Innocent children die…
Not in my name
Your killing skies
where whole worlds
come tumbling down…
as painful kisses from France
break innocent hearts…
Not in my name
Your screaming ruble
where a fathers hand,
a bother’s arm,
a lifeless son
lie covered in blood…
Not in my name
Your weapons of pain,
death…
Your trails of loss,
despair…
When God takes no side…
who are you to blame?
Not in my name!!!
8 Years Ago
Good morning Isabella, Viva, and Xoanxo. Enjoy a fruitful week.
@ Lady Isabella: It's a very touchy poem. I could feel your sombre mood
@ Viva: What a sad moment! The sun always brings its bright light back after rainfall.
@ Xoanxo: Amazing poem that knocks my hat off. I think it is one of your best.
Not in my name…
When God takes no side…
who are you to blame?
..................
What else could provide such a strong impact to the minds of those blind believers
Not in my name
Your screaming ruble
where a fathers hand,
a bother’s arm,
a lifeless son
lie covered in blood…
.......
You brought me back my nightmare and my own horrible experience as an eyewitness and a sufferer of the Vietnam War. Those images really made me weep.
8 Years Ago
DescriptionNOT MIXED MEDIA- 100% coloured paper from magazines glue on paper board
[By Joe Devlin -The Boat People's Priest:
Each morning we would go down to the beaches and there would be bodies--men, women and children--washed ashore during the night. Sometimes there were hundreds of them, like pieces of wood. Some of them were girls who had been raped and then thrown into the sea by pirates to drown. It was tragic beyond words. We would pull them off the beaches and bury them and say prayers for them. This happened every morning. Sometimes I hated to get up in the morning, as the bodies were always there. I wondered if anyone else in the world knew...or cared. Sometimes people would somehow still be alive. They would be on the beach exhausted or unconscious.]
8 Years Ago
An echo to Xoanxo's poem Not In My Name
Your Blame Game
In the name of God
you're always right
between you and I
He don't have no choice
but must take either side
in your own game
God loves the good guy
In the name of God
whichever war you fight
you send your prayers
bribe God to your side
and serve your best interests
In the name of God
your horrendous sins
He forgives- forgets
your killing madness
All must be done
on foreign soils
high mountains of bones
long rivers of blood
immense sea of flesh
and mass-destruction
at all costs to gain
but no pain to you
In the name of God
you live without shame
and kill with no guilt
It's
your enemy
your enemy's spouse
your enemy's children
your enemy's family
your enemy's own people
your enemy's nation
all of those above
must share the same blame for being your headache
then be sent to the burning hell of God
for
you
to live
heavenly in peace
Thao Chuong
2015-11-23
8 Years Ago
Not in my name
Your killing skies
where whole worlds
come tumbling down…
as painful kisses from France
break innocent hearts…
Xoanxo Cespon
An echo
The French Kiss
deep moans
piercing cries
no more tears of joy
lightning strikes
thunders roars
sky's brightly lit
mushroom rises
French lethal kisses
goodbye to romance
for the sweet love
of
Paris
Thao Chuong
2015-11-24
8 Years Ago
Description
THE END.
At the end of the day,
There is a price to pay.
..
For me, this was so moving a sight, so significant to all of life and how neglect causes decay , of mind, and spirit.
It is testimony to my own state of mind, sometimes. But, 'progress' will be
made, and time will not stand still, here, or anywhere......a reminder of our fleeting unimportance, and disdain for truth. By Viva Anderson
8 Years Ago
My gloomy thought generated by Lady Isabella's touching poem
I Forgot Leaving a Suicide Note
it don't make any sense at all
none of you could comprehend
why
I
left
without uttering any single word
pointless for me
to
say
good bye
while I was still kicking alive beside my loved ones
my mind had been fully occupied
with the permanent thought
of an early
checkout
by
the time
I saw the exit sign
the powerful cyclone immediately sucked me into wormholes of the unknown
no time
for a suicide note
to
all of my loved ones
I'm sorry for letting you fill yourselves in
the unwritten chapter
of my life
Thao Chuong
2015-11-25
8 Years Ago
Description
IN MEMORIUM OF LOST TRUST,MUST,LOVE,HOPE
But, if the while I think on thee, dear friend,
All losses are restor'd and sorrows end.
Shakespeare Sonnrt XXX
Goodbye Donald - A tribute to the memory of my brother Donald, on this day,
International Mens' Day, I raise this image in honour....and to honour the loss when truth is discovered gone. I turn again to you, my brother, for solace,and again, "look on thee dear friend"........
Shakespeare:::"This alone I know to be true,,
To thine own self be true.....
And as night follows the day....
Thou canst not then be false to any man"..................
SonnetXXX - Shakespeare.....
""This is one of the most pensive and gentle of the sonnets. It links in closely with the previous one, both in thought and layout. The discontent with life which was expressed there still remains in this one, as the poet surveys his past life and all the sorrows it has brought him."" By Viva Anderson
8 Years Ago
Sometimes the smallest step
In the right direction
Ends up being the biggest step
Of your life
Tip toe if you must
But take the step
8 Years Ago
Nice to see to you back with more thought, Danl. Have a nice day.
Here is the echo to your thought about steps
The Giant Leap
the biggest step is always made
at
a full stop
when
no
further
step taken
my feet rest in one place
my mind stands still
my body becomes motionless
I let go myself into peaceful nothingness
then
like a phoenix rising
I take my biggest step
the giant leap
into
the freshness of my own self
and the fullness of the outer universe
Thao Chuong
2015-11-26
8 Years Ago
Ah, my friend in the truest Shakespearean sense.........I am so honoured that you chose my images to share on this, your thread.........I've re-loaded here the one missing below, because it is that important to me, and because, you 'know' this and honoured me here. What is so interesting, my poet friend, is that you left me to stand on my own, and offered not your usual perspicatious comment.......your silence is golden. Here, then, the missing image to stand with the others you chose. I thank you, in all humility. Thank you for your encouragement/one comment, truth :::
"
''@ Viva: What a sad moment! The sun always brings its bright light back after rainfall. ''
VIVA Anderson
2 Days Ago
My.......Lament...............not about the world..........about .. me................sharing..........seems to be safe to do so.........here.....................
8 Years Ago
An echo to Vivian's poem Silver Queen
Absolutely Not About the Weather
gray sky
gloomy day
wet and soggy
however I could feel how romance and pretty it was
walking in heavy rainfall
with
you
hand in hand
under same umbrella
without you
the sun still shines outside
it's bright
the sky is blue
but without you
inside my heart
gone
bright light
replaced
by forlorn darkness
no
it's
never
about the weather
that could make me feel glad or sad
so I guess
it
could
be purely
about you
who did turn my all lights off
but
possibly
it would be
just
I
who let my feeling run wild
and drove myself into starless nights
Thao Chuong
2015-11-26
8 Years Ago
Thank you Viet!!! Amazing and powerful echoes to Not in My Name...Thanks for those too!!!
Here's my tonight's little thought...
And while you accumulate
the riches of your world,
the abundance of life
might just pass you by…
And as you will never own
this poem,
this verse,
this rhythm,
this thought…
As you will never own
tonight’s stars,
the morning sun…
the wandering clouds…
You will never own
A lover’s love
A lover’s kiss,
A lover’s dream…
You will never own
A lover’s song,
A lovers dance,
A lover’s voice,
A lover’s silent smile…
Didn’t you know
That this moment in time
Was the only thing
yours forever to keep…?
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Viet................I weep in response..............thank you ........ all you say, so true............sigh.
Addendum:26/11/15 v.late there,6pm here/27th....................
To say:. Yes, Viet, I agree with dear Maria, above............"starless nights" .....is so wonderful a description and response to my post, and could not
be any better description of my momentary ennui..................I have shared your Art with a close friend, who will concur and be so moved, toooo.
8 Years Ago
so I guess
it
could
be purely
about you
who did turn my all lights off
Thao Chuong
Beautiful lines :))
8 Years Ago
'but
possibly
it would be
just
I
who let my feeling run wild
and drove myself into starless nights'
Thao Chuong
'beautiful lines :))
8 Years Ago
Inner moments...
Gazing into time... the time inside your mind
Its just a moment
the same momemt
that changes you
but its the same moment
if, oh so many ifs
if and if...
if... if you stand outside of time
if... if you walk upon the beach
and if you look again... into your slowing mind
that same beach..
..stuck to your feet
your face and skin
walk upon grains as they stick upon you
and you brush them off...
a few tiny grazes
still, some quiet pause and noisey screams...
still
u love the beach
soaking up the sun
swimming the crash of waves
freezing Spring currents
warmer late Summer soaks
soak
Then time slaps u hard
as you watch the waves
and play with sand in your hands
throwing pebbles
like a child
- as it slowly lifts you
and plays with you
as you play with time
and sand
in your quiet mind
upon the beach...
And slowly...
As if by magic
you become~
the ~ golden sandy beach~~ ~
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Spirits of Freedom
All around the world
in every conflict
in every love
a poet of life's journey
will write his day of joy
and her day of pain
their journey of life and
life's end
and ever hopes
Such spirits, never wain...
they shape our world of thoughts
and we wish them well
in their strife
and losses
and ultimate gain
tis such freedom
for which mankind
has always fought!
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Good evening Xoanxo, Viva, Maria, and Jason.
@ Xoanxo: Many thanks for sharing. My poem is an echo to your poem. Without your poetry, there wouldn't be any poetry of mine. You've planted an amazing tree for me to harvest the fruits.
@ Viva: Thank you very much for being my poetic inspiration.
@ Maria: I appreciate your nice feedback
@ Jason: Wow! Great poetic momentum
Enjoy a restful weekend
8 Years Ago
An echo to Xoanxo's poem Rich and Poor
You're Rich - I'm Poor
you and I
two humans
on the same planet
in the same city
but much difference
between
your life and mine
you live up high
in the sky
facing your eyes
an unobstructed water-view
to the infinite horizon
from your penthouse
look down
you see black asphalt
but your life is brighter
than the sunshine
far down below
I drag my feet
on busy streets
surrounded
by
a crowded sea of people
from my carton-box home
in a filthy alley
look up
I see a silver moon
but my life is
as dark as
a starless night
you're dry
while I'm soaked
when it rains
you're warm
while I'm cold
when it snows
for a human's basic need
you own way too much
I have nearly nothing
money
is
probably
the worst invention of human's
too bad
money
makes you rich and me poor
defines our way of lives
and controls our fates
Thao Chuong
2015-11-27
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing my image and your poem Viet.
Sounds like you are having a nice Autumn day.
Wonderful written and spoken word here lately.
Well, always actually. Cheers to All!
Yesterdays gone
the leaves that were once green
roll and tumble in a palette of color
Leaves of orange scarlet gold
the story has already been told
They float by as yesterdays dream
like a memory I have seen
my yesterday is gone
take me with you on a breeze
on a magic carpet ride
The greens of yesterday are the golds of tomorrow
those golden leaves create a magic carpet
turning brown lying on the ground
new mushrooms spring to life
yesterdays gone.
I will not pass that way again
Jim Taylor 11/28/15
8 Years Ago
What's a nice flow! Thank you, Jim
Here is an echo to your Yesterdays Gone
Livin' In the Faulty Time Zone
Gone - yesterday
arrives here at this moment - today
will come - tomorrow
in endless cycles
exactly
as
second
minute
hour
day
night
week
month
and year
which rolls back and forth endlessly
during the short existence of a mortal man on this planet
Is there anything afterlife?
heaven?
hell?
would he be reincarnated?
or
is
death
the end of his own world?
Regrettably
human beings have been recklessly killing each other
to protect their firm beliefs
in
their true answer
to these tricky questions
Thao Chuong
2015-11-29
8 Years Ago
Evening All :-)
JC - THANK YOU - pm on its way :-)
Poverty
You say you were poor
You were given free school meals
You were not given
a large mug of water
to drink,
to fill your belly
You say you were poor
as you did not have a t.v.
While your father went
to the pub for a pint
and your motther lit
another cigarette
You say you were poor
as you only had a mattress
while others sleep
in doorways
and on
stone cold floors
You say you were poor
as you did not have a mobile phone
While others
have toys made
from bits
of rubbish
You say you were poor
as you could not afford
the
latest
branded
handbag
shoes
clothes
perfume
car
games
charm
watch
iPhone
while others
still drink
that
large
mug
of
water
to
fill
their
little
stomachs
to stop
them crying
from
hunger
JEM 291115
8 Years Ago
Glad to see you back Jane, to see real poverty, starvation and disease, the homeless and destitute,
it must be numbing, shocking, with climate change things might get a whole lot worse, lets hope we all make the right decisions now! You rich, Im poor, by Viet, a great perspective! By many standards, we in developed countries mostly do ok in ths world, lets hope the developing world can develop or be assisted in its task, to survive, the necessary resources and infrastructures created, economic development of least harm and agricultural resiliance be implemented for the changes ahead, and that we minimise destruction of the ecosystems... action, protection of the planet, changing us might minimise the bad changes that might make poverty worse... starvation and mass migrations from new deserts,droughts, flooded coastlines, drowned islands, failing crops..
8 Years Ago
Winter Is About to Come (Tanka)
sun's brightly shining
though a thin glassy ice sheet
light penetration
at bottom of backyard pond
koi and gold fish lie dormant
Thao Chuong
2015-11-29
For my own record: Copy and paste the above echo to Karen's beautiful poem Ice Storm (from other thread)
8 Years Ago
Beautiful Ending of Lives in Autumn
they turn themselves from green
to
red,
brown,
yellow.
crimson
or multiple colours
dancing in the wind
rattling on the trees
leaves leave branches
it's the most stunning ending of lives
no sign of suffering
no cry
they go away
no way
back
but not the end of the world
sun shines
rain falls
on
those colorful leaves
that fall back to roots
and fertilize mother trees
for
young shoots
to sprout out new lives in next spring
Thao Chuong
2015-11-30
8 Years Ago
Deep well dreamer
He had always been a dreamer
sometimes lost in a daydream
he climbed deep into his well
they lowered a rope down
thinking they should help
they all pulled on the rope
hoping it would not break
sending them over the cliff
Jim Taylor 11/30/15
8 Years Ago
Morning All:-)
Lovely to be reading all this fab poetry again.
Viet I love your beautiful ending of lives in Autumn. I know I am going to be controversial here but if only we were allowed to do them same thing if in pain or suffering rather than filling the pockets of drug companies.
J C Don't get me started on that topic. Lol. Human stupidity and greed and lack of thinking out the box ...grrrrrrrr makes my blood boil.
8 Years Ago
indeed, blood can boil Jane
still we have poetry... soothing, invigorating, deep, thoughtful, playful and stimulating.. deep thoughts might sink otherwise..
could art fully speak without a poet's tragic and eloquent voice?
Walk
In your meanings
we found ourselves
Over seas, we walked
guided by your hand
Yet we failed
lost in our greed
our blinkered sight
our hatred spawns, and others' spawned
we were fools..
These fools are us, the entire, human race
until the Father found us
crying and homeless
beside a planet
we had killed
in everyway
its pillaged soils
and tarnished seas
torn forests
burning fires and dirtied airs...
Oh mother Earth, do you rest in peace?
Oh guiding Spirit... . .
find us, please
the rightful way
from which mankind
has surely strayed!
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jim, Jane, and Jason
@ Jim: Haa... What did he find inside, and carry with him out of, the well: a treasure box? or a heavy pretty woman? You're really a dreamer.
@ Jane: Thanks for the nice words. You have't filled the bottomless pockets of drug companies. It's good sign that you have been extremely healthy. I wish you would never have to do it.
@ Jason: Another great poem of yours that inspired me for an echo
Of Human's Science and Climate Change
global warming
climate change
whatever it's called
whoever have claimed
they've been experiencing it
just
bullshit
nonsense
no scientific evidence
to back up this claim
no need to be panic
no worry
absolutely
no impact
or whatsoever
on greenhouse effect
from CO2 emissions
by human activities
it's a natural cycle of changes
in
climate
which has happened
many times in the past
collected endless numbers and create logic statistics
few scientists those who work for big corporations
have been going on and on
further and further
to prove
that
any reduction of human CO2 emissions
doesn't do any good to the environment
yet
it certainly has an opposite effect
a grave impact on human living
a disaster for the world economy
as usual
what bad for business
also not good for human race
believe it or not
money can change everything
including human's exact science
Thao Chuong
2015-12-01
8 Years Ago
A Holiday candle is a lovely thing;
It makes no noise at all,
But softly gives itself away.
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your thought of the day.
@Danl: Nice to know that you've back your regular rhythms
@ Lady Isabella: Which hospital did you refer to? I've tried hard but still couldn't get it. Would you mind guiding me out of the myth -lol? Thanks.
8 Years Ago
.... I know I am going to be controversial here but if only we were allowed to do them same thing if in pain or suffering rather than filling the pockets of drug companies..Posted by Jane McGowan 16 hours ago.
Here is my echo to Jane's thought about drug companies
About Drugs and Old Age
when young
in good shape
perfect health
I was used to feel
my body
made of steel
indestructible
until I'm old
not so great
often sick
too much pain
out of control
which is best way
to gain some relief
for good sleeps:
-taking painkillers?
-inhaling opium?
-smoking dope?
-injecting drug into a vein?
each has its owns side effect
also costs money
no need to whine
no point to complain
it don't make no difference
in control of my pain
to takeheroin, morphine, opium, codeine, methadone, and other street drugs
become a drug junkie
to wreck my life
in agony
is
certainly
not an option for me
for more comfort and less pain
during my prolonged old age
I'd rather take prescribed medications
so long as
I could afford to pay to my last penny
for the throat-cutting prices
by the greedy pharmaceutical industry for its mega profit
Thao Chuong
2015-12-01
8 Years Ago
Note: The original poem Of Human's Science and Climate Change -posted five hours ago -was intended to provoke readers' minds. However from the feedback I've received from a couple of my FB friends, I've become aware that the poem was misunderstood by some readers who didn't read to its last line. I hope the edited version below would provide my readers with a clearer picture of my original version.
Of Human's Science and Climate Change
I've been told
loud and clear
endless times
"global warming
climate change
whatever it's called
whoever have claimed
they've been experiencing it
just
bullshit
nonsense
no scientific evidence
to back up this claim
no need to be panic
no worry
absolutely
no impact
or whatsoever
on greenhouse effect
from CO2 emissions
by human activities
it's a natural cycle of changes
in
climate
which has happened
many times in the past:"
actually
only few scientists those who work for big corporations
have been going on and on
further and further
to cook endless numbers
and create logic statistics
in order to prove
that
any reduction of human CO2 emissions
doesn't do any good to the environment
yet
it certainly has an opposite effect
a grave impact on human living
a disaster for the world economy
as usual
what bad for business
also not good for human race
believe it or not
money can change everything
including human's exact science
Thao Chuong
2015-12-01
8 Years Ago
I'm so happy here, among the visual poets.............I take long hours to quaff the emotive,challenging poetics..............thank you, all.................
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your thought Marty and Viva. Have a good time
"Live every day as if it were your last
Eventually you will be right."
Posted by Marty Saccone 5 hours ago
I think that I've read this quote somewhere before. While the quote promotes a positive thought of living at best of the instant, it might have an opposite effect. Following is my echo to the quote.
Today Certainly Is Not My Last Day
Isn't it mystically amazing?
that I would never know
the exact
date
when I reach the end of my rope
It would be disastrous for my entire life
if I lived with my permanent thought in mind
that
everyday
would be my last day
Maybe
I would die within the next minute
but
I'd rather be wrong
in my blind belief
that my last day on earth
Is
Not today
Not tomorrow
Not this week
Not next week
Not this month
Not next month
Not this year
Not next year...
For now
I'd
better
enjoy the instant
dream of tomorrow
hope for the future
whenever it comes
I'll take it as is
then leave here
with no regret
as I've enjoy the best
of my whole living time
Thao Chuong
2015-12- 01
8 Years Ago
Stop fighting about who crated the world and
start fighting against the people destroying it.
8 Years Ago
Good morning, Jim: Thank you for sharing your food of thought. Have a great day.
Here's my provoking echo to your thought
About the Truth of the Good and the Bad
utterly foggy
in a world
full of deception
"lies, more lies
and damned lies"
under skillful disguise
or smart camouflage
who could distinguish
the right? the wrong?
hidden in the mist
the truth
hard to be found
as always
there's a very fine line
in
between
the good and the bad
the builders and the destroyers
the defenders and the invaders
the savers and the killers
taking sides?
getting caught
in a bar fight
or in any bloody war
I'd rather not
you
go ahead
save the world
sorry!
I'm busy to save my own inner peace
Thao Chuong
2015-12-02
8 Years Ago
Good one Viet! I could hear your thinking gears moving from my house like a grandfather clock, ha.
Yes my quote was a bit simplistic.
Getting to the heart of the matter these days is quite complex.
I will leave that to some of the activists and great minds I follow who help keep me enlightened.
8 Years Ago
Canopies
Rainforest Canopies
Our life' breath
The purifier
The cleanser
The natural healer
Slashed
chopped
hacked
burned
destroyed
laid bare
for beef
soya
cash crops
coffee
banana
cocoa
For over eating
for animals
to put in toiletries
newly created coffee culture
more CO2
Quickly destroying what we need
To ensure our slow demise.
JEM 021215
8 Years Ago
Thank you Jim and Jane
@ Jim: It's your thought that has pushed my mind swing back and forth like a pendulum (lol).
@ Jane: keep writing, my friend. The more you write, the sharper your pen is.
Have a good night
Here is my response to your thought about activists. I think the work spearheaded by activists in social/political/environmental areas has had great impact on our society and the whole world . Without those "trouble makers", the world would stand still -not much progress would be made.
Should I Save My Own Skin or Save the World?
high seas
stormy water
middle of nowhere
dreadfully chaotic
utterly confused
on a sinking boat
surrounded by sharks
everyone's busy
bailing water out
I'm in panic
running around
with a cowardice effort
trying to save my own skin
selfish people
like
I
who could never comprehend the fact
to
save myself
I must lend my hands
to save the sinking boat first
Thao Chuong
2015-12-02
8 Years Ago
When you can't do
But want to
You defend yourself
To hide your vulnerability
You dictate to others
You are not in control
8 Years Ago
Echo to Jane's Canopies
Trees
Toilettrees
are the output
of a mass
"civilisation"
Green trees
are the output
of a world garden
in nature
both change the air.. .
cough
only one chokes the lungs
in its final gasps...
cough
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Good morning all. Thanks to Danl and Jason for sharing your thought
@ Jason: What a good poetic moment of yours! I luv it - the natural flow of your poem
@ Danl: You make me think as always.
A Holiday candle is a lovely thing; .
It makes no noise at all,
But softly gives itself away.
Posted by Danl Art -one day ago
Here is my late echo to your thought of candle. Many thanks for your challenge, Danl.
The Time for Love, Romance, and Sex
(to Vivian and all wine lovers)
dark night
warm room
French wine
candlelight
two souls
in romance
mouths locked
lips sealed
tongues twisted
deep suck
sweet taste
long kisses
low moans
two bodies
in heat
entwined
ins - outs
ups - downs
slows - quicks
lefts - rights
lows - highs
backs -forths
heavy breaths
low moans
wild cries
low paces
slowdowns
full stop
candle burnt out
organism
love -no more
sex - no need
two naked shadows
lying fully separated
on hardwood floor
glowing in darkness
two red spots
floating in warm air
strong tobacco scent
the room 's quiet
in dead silence
Thao Chuong
2015-12-03
8 Years Ago
Here's my latest...
Guernica Blues
2015,
Late November day
by a farnham wall,
a lonely autumn rose
speaks to a poets soul.
1937, Spring,
afternoon in the square,
another Monday’s fair,
a young man on his knees,
when church bells start to scream.
2015, Autumn,
confusion reigns,
the rose by the wall whispers,
write a love song…
She says,
a sad song in time of war.
1937,
My life,
My dream, my peace,
my comfort, my soul,
take this rose of spring,
white flower of my heart.
Take this rose,
symbol of my eternal love.
2015,
A verse a night,
on love and hate,
On peace, life,
war and death.
1937,
the sky roars above their heads.
My darling,
my love,
at this hour of our death,
let me hold you tight,
feel your heartbeat against my chest.
Hold me,
hold me,
hold me tight…
Let this rose show
that our love will never die
in the name of war
2015,
A guernica blues,
in black and white,
tell the story of two lovers fate,
of their testing ground death.
1937,
Let it pass,
just close your eyes,
Hold me,
hold me,
hold me tight.
Three longest hours,
never seemed to go pass…
madness,
chaos,
with nowhere to run,
to hide,
second by second…
home by home,
come tumbling down,
second by second…
bullet by bullet,
chop the sky,
second by second…
splatter by splatter
cover the walls
of torn flesh
and warm blood.
second by second…
2015,
Rainy autumn night,
by a farnham wall,
a solitary red rose
dances in silent cry.
1937,
Standstill…
smoke, ruble,
over there
a childless mother weeps,
over here
a motherless child cries,
at the market
two young lovers lie facing down,
from her hand
a stream of fresh blood
runs down her fingers
soaks her white rose to red…
A red rose of spring
in black and white…
2015,
Late November day
by a farnham wall,
a lonely autumn rose
speaks to a poets soul.
8 Years Ago
Xoanxo, Viet and Jason wow. You have blown my mind. Viet I think you are 'WRITE' I need to sharpen my pen to keep up with this quality of writing.
Have a good day all while I try raise my game lol x
8 Years Ago
Viet,.....Thank you, again, for your wonderful evokation of true romance, candlelight,wine...all that I cherish in my heart and soul....and some I actually remember !!!!!!!!!!
8 Years Ago
Good morning Roy, Xoanxo, Jane, Viva, and Maria . Thank you all for dropping by and sharing your thought. Have a restful weekend
@ Roy: You mentioned a quote from a TV show. I think Americans love talk-shows because they probably find fun and peace to keep A GOOD DAY. (IMO: Too much stress for everyday with mad men carrying guns in USA)
@ Xoanxo: Wow...wow..wow...What could I say to you about your amazing poem which numbed my mind? It is a time machine that takes me back to the past and brings me home to the present time zone with smooth rides. It has better impact on readers' hearts than a video clip about love and war.
@ Jane: Your pen is already sharp, my friend. I have no doubt that you're a "good cook" with words - (lol). Keep using words as a grinding stone to sharp your mind and your pen,
@ Viva: The poem came out in a smooth flow from my instant inspiration by your post on my FB page. It is impossible for me write without either an instant inspiration or a challenge.
@ Maria: Thanks for dropping by. I've been enjoying your amazing poetry thread. Nice to read your poems and poems of other poets'. In the past, there were many poetry threads on FAA forum until the rules changed and limited only two active poetry threads at a time. Poets have been gradually disappeared from FAA forum. (Thanks to Jason who is the most regular contributor - the driving force of your thread. I think that he fully deserves full credits and a big applause for it)
Here is my thought about Roy's words about a good day
Never Talk About the Weather with Your Spouse At Home
Today
as usual
early in the morning
they started talking about the weather
while waiting for coffee ready
He complained:
"Oh no, it rains again
wet and soggy
a very bad day
I hate it".
She protested
"Why are you whining?
it's a good day for me
at
least
it is not snowing, today
the drizzling rain looks quite romance
I love it".
The harmless conversation about how the day would be
somehow
turned itself into
heatedly nasty argument
on many different topics in their household
Before took off to the bathroom
she said:
"You're always good
at
making
my good day bad".
He was also really mad:
"Wait! How about you?
You...
you...
always make
my bad day worse"
Actually
nothing new
it ain't about the day
for thousand billions of years
everyday has gone the same way
it's human's perceptive mind and his emotional heart
that could make a good day bad
or turn a bad day good
How would you prefer to make your day?
Thao Chuong
2015-12-04
8 Years Ago
Self- proclaimed artists are nothing more than a cog in the color spectrum….turning and turning….stuck in a big revolving wheel.
Many work their art for eternity in hopes of success, fame and glory…working a job that offers no future.
They’re stuck in a style that doesn’t sell….mimicking the millions of other artists’ images that turn within the wheel.
Their subjects have been beaten into the ground….so everything in the wheel looks the same….a blurred swirl.
They have nowhere to go except round and round.
They are a cog in a wheel….turning, turning, turning
8 Years Ago
Reality lost within "reality"
Quick, what's on the T.V.
Turn it on and let's see
Another reality show
A load of them all in a row
Big Brother strikes again
The Voice - choose another ten
Celebrities Get me out of here
While X Factor shed another tear
On the other sides being missed
Whilst watchers are getting *issed
David Attenborough - The Hunt
Whilst watchers shout "You *unt"
The Judges get the heat of the anger
Whilst they lay hidden in their languor
The true reality is never ending
Nothing is ever left pending
True wars go on and on
Wild animals will soon be gone
Our hope for cancer cure is being diminished
Slashed and burned the plant is nearly finished
Lets all grab another beer
And give out a hearty cheer
The right one leaves " Strictly"
What's on next .let's go see...
JEM 041215
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much Viet!!! Your comments provide great encouragement!!! Have a good weekend my friend...and keep them coming!!!
8 Years Ago
ahhhh hah!! liked that Jane, 👏🏻full of energy, snappy and very true!👍🏻😜
i think Abbie is in hospital, hope she gets well soon
8 Years Ago
The Adventure
Like Alice,
I could follow the enticing stamens,
slide down the flute of a flower's trumpet shape,
can you hear that laugh of excitement, and fear!
Out of control!
bouncing between the soft prongs of a passionflower!
or into the green flesh bowl of a slipper orchid,
your calls for help, echoing across the field, arousing only birds and bees!
you've lost me, I am lost, fingers tracing
the beautiful purple wallpaper within the tubular walls of the foxglove, distracting, inspiring,
its fine fine rug of hairs saving my fall,
the tendrilled spiral staircases, an invite to explore, the joys and lairs of nature.
the bloodied thorns and velvet skirty petals of the roses, intoxicatingly scented,
the white soft cushions and flotsam smokescreens of the dandelion,
that metamorphic genius, from a bright flame to a flotsam of feathery ash
delightful enough to dream in, but too flighty to last,
the laugh wanes, momentarily,
losing the element of surprise,
And thoughts of fields of flowers trampled and muddied in war.....
the journey lasts a lifetime!
But love never dies...for sure!.
Maria Disley 5/12/2015
8 Years Ago
Thanks for reminding me of Jason's driving force on my thread....and I have just given him some earache! Haha. Even, or especially, the well intentioned get in theway of the firing line......
8 Years Ago
Seasons greetings to all who grace these threads.. cheers too! enjoying your wonderful thread, its diverse characters and great writing and poems as ever Viet
on aside
at that moment, there was a muffled thud
THUD!
by the window, a snowman stud, i mean stood, could as he would
in twinkle Christmas lights
that then shone upon the room so bright
it was like magic
abracadabra
as the mouse shot off
puff!
like smoke
and the toast fell upon the floor
and a black birds foot prints were seen
on snow by open door
as snow swirled upon the hearth
it was time
for Christmas mirth...
magic at Christmas X
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Good morning Danl, Jane, Xoanxo, Maria, and Jason. Have a restful weekend to all
@ Danl: Your thoughts have floated as water on a river. My echo hasn't kept up pace with yours. I have to combine them into one echo
@ Jane: Reality lost within "reality" is a good one. I enjoy reading it.
@ Maria: Thanks for sharing your nice poem -an adventure in the dreamy world.
@ Jason: Many wows to your poetic momentum. I could feel it from my home -lol
Here is my response to Danl's thought about
"When you can't do
But want to..." posted 2 days ago... and also to Danl's thought about art and artists
My Dream in Literature, Music, and Fine Art
Like
a child
with joyful rides
on a merry-go-round
my dreams never die
Why not turning them one by one into charming reality
when growing up
as an adult
I wanna become a writer or poet
but
at least
I must be able to read and write
I don't want to waste my time in school many years
just to learn how to turn twenty six tricky alphabets
into fancy words
I don't have a good voice to be a singer
I couldn't be a musician or a song writer
as
I'm so lazy
to learn music and those complicated instruments
Forget it
all those above require too much of my time and my effort
Why not I become a fine artist?
Quite a noble title
easily to acquire
but
nothing needed
no training required
no basic knowledge about colour wheel
no need to know how to draw or to paint
That's it
no sweat
no more nightmares
no need to look further
it's
fairly simple
a camera and a laptop with some fancy software
more than enough for me to flap my wings into unlimited sky of the contemporary art world
Voila!
my dream comes true
I am now an artist
To those who dare challenge my art
get lost
doncha* know?
"beauty is in the eyes of the beholders"
Thao Chuong
2015-12-05
Note: * doncha = don't you
8 Years Ago
Have a good day
I really always liked the quote
the old Chinese proverb
May you live in interesting times
Thank you
I do feel like I live in interesting times
Maybe not all good but interesting
I hope the author lived in interesting times
I really do assume he did and bless him
Have a good day
enjoy your interesting time
your very own moment in history
you can make it your own
interesting times call for Google
I think I should Google this well wished proverb
What your telling me its actually a Chinese curse
wishing me to beheaded
this can still be experienced in my interesting time
I feel better now
Have a nice day
Jim Taylor 12/5/15
8 Years Ago
Haa..Jim. Now, it's my turn to rant about this Chinese proverb -lol. Enjoy a good day, my dear friend
May You Live In Interesting Times
You wish me the interesting times
no thanks
enough
no
more challenges
for my ailing heart and confused mind
I'm too old for those exciting windows of opportunities
I haven't yet reached the end of my time
however, I've already gone from a to z
and also back and forth
many times
riding
on
the fast moving space shuttle
of this fascinating twenty-first century
All what I'm in need of
is
peace
tranquility
Now
I'd better
slow down
take a good rest
leisurely inhale some fresh air
and watch my day goes at its slow pace
Thao Chuong
2015-12-05
8 Years Ago
Meal of bad fortune
Starving driving home
all a lone except for
Chinese take out
sitting next to me on a throne
eat up eat hearty
that was good
time to open my prize
the anxiously waiting fortune cookie
in a kind of ritual he reads it a loud
May you live in interesting times
Jim Taylor 12/5/15
8 Years Ago
Thank you for sharing your poetic moment, Jim. May you live interesting times -today (lol).
A late echo to Jane's poem Poverty posted about a week ago
Tales of the Two Opposite Lives
(Between the Have-a-lots and Have-nots)
no basic necessities
lack of medicine
shortage of food
not enough clean water
not
much
for a human's minimum living
many places
in
Asia
Africa
Middle East
Central and South America
millions of hungry kids
so thin
only
in skin and bones
dying of malnutrition
hundred millions of people
either living on streets
or
struggling for a living
in massive slums
sardine-packed
in make-shift houses
temporarily made
from all types
of recycled materials
both adults of all ages and little kids
work under glazing sun
on a garbage dumping sites of big cities' outskirts
from dawn to dust
collect recyclable materials
or search for something edible
to stuff in their empty stomachs
while somewhere else
on the same planet earth
the same type of mankind
but
with opposite story
obesity is the worst nightmare
weight-loss is a trillion-dollar industry
the have-a-lots are the ones
who have aggressively collected
by
raping the mother earth
conducting endless wars
invading many places
committing mass-killings
nonstop
for
more
and more..
regrettably
the defenseless have-nots are often blamed and accused of wrongdoings
in their desperate struggle for the human's basic needs of survival
Thao Chuong
2015-12-06
Note: I reposted Jane McGowan's poem for your reference
Poverty
You say you were poor
You were given free school meals
You were not given
a large mug of water
to drink,
to fill your belly
You say you were poor
as you did not have a t.v.
While your father went
to the pub for a pint
and your mother lit
another cigarette
You say you were poor
as you only had a mattress
while others sleep
in doorways
and on
stone cold floors
You say you were poor
as you did not have a mobile phone
While others
have toys made
from bits
of rubbish
You say you were poor
as you could not afford
the
latest
branded
handbag
shoes
clothes
perfume
car
games
charm
watch
iPhone
while others
still drink
that
large
mug
of
water
to
fill
their
little
stomachs
to stop
them crying
from
hunger
JEM 291115
8 Years Ago
echo to fortune cookies proverb
Proverb 1
you should Remember...
Never ask psychopaths to pass a message on
for they will eat the message
and shit something else out...
that stinks
and stinks
every day
and your left
in messed up ways
Christmas cracker
proverb say
© The Proverbial Potty
Speaks
8 Years Ago
An Ode To FAA Discussions
To discuss art
Many do
Then suddenly appears
A fart in the wind.
8 Years Ago
Proverb 2
Never listen to control freaks
Because funnily enough
you end up
CONTROLLED
© The Proverbial Potty
think
8 Years Ago
Proverb 3
Never listen to mental slavers
Because
guess what
you become a slave!
© The Proverbial Potty
free
8 Years Ago
@Danl: Your verse - An Ode To FAA Discussions has made me laugh aloud. Same old- same old smell on faa! -lol
@ Jason: It;s likely you've enjoy a good time with your proverbs: 1,2,3..
Have a nice day
My Sundry Thought of the New Year 2016
here comes another year
not much time left
for me
to
fool around
about to reach my final destination
the short life seems shorter
much shorter
day by
day
no way
to buy back
any of the time
from which I've wasted to make a lot of money for the so-called "making a living"
now
even
if
I had billions of Euros
still I wouldn't be able to trade for only an extra minute
a man could live maximum one hundred years
in the infinite time
it
sounds
more of a joke than a dream
in the end of the day
no mortal man could escape
his own
death
it makes no sense
impossible
to comprehend the outrageous ending
when it comes
I'd better accept my fate and go back to dirt
than waste more time to send my prayers every single day
trying to pay
off
a ticket to heaven
wouldn't I rather shake off my grave thought about meaning of my life
and prepare to celebrate the New Year as everyone else?
Thao Chuong
2015-12-07
8 Years Ago
Viet - Love your response so true :-)
Late Again!
Red Velvet
White Ermine
Black rubber
Silver rims
A hundred and eight houses
Thirty two chimneys
Fifty nine doors
Seventeen windows
One carriage
Eight pullers
Two plates
Two Glasses
Two Cookies
Two mince pies
One warmed milk
One large brandy
Two feet dangling down
One Belly trapped tight
One sneeze
Eight loud snores
Black velvet
Black ermine
Black rubber
Black out Santa
JEM 071215
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane. Have a good day, my friend
Of Autumn Leaves and Lost Love
Rain's falling
echoed
afar
dreary sounds
sinking down into a lonesome mind
Wind's blowing
watery needles striking
against
glass panels
sorrowful lullabies
flooding a deserted heart
Like rotten leaves on the ground
love's slowly decomposed
When rain stops falling
wind's no longer blowing
nothing
left
inside
the lost soul
Thao Chuong
2015-12-07
8 Years Ago
Oh Viet - Sounds like you are in need of some good healthy sunshine to brighten you up x
8 Years Ago
Hope the proverbial potty wasnt offensive, apologies if it was, kind of satirical humour, i thought at the time...
Late again was mysterious Jane, I keep reading it, u could give clues away if you like lol but u dont have to, why should u...
echo to Viet
Next Year
Next year is still too far away
but this year is still too near to
forget
and drop
and say good bye
Hugs are free
and warm
and safe
we can hug the moments
and let them go
or keep them warm
Still
there is the poetry of yester years
todays tears
and tomorrows joy
still unfound
like most mysteries of life
they are best left
unsolved
Love is a mystery...
Keep it in a vase
with flowers
X
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Good evening Jane, Jason, and Danl.
@ Jane: Hee...It was my mood - nothing to do with the rain. We got a heavy downpour today. The wildlife sanctuary at my backyard is flooded.
@ Jason: No worry, mate. No apology needed. Actually, you're very welcome to have fun on this thread anytime you like (you can blow air, spray your yellow water...).
@ Danl: So where would you be when you die?
Have a good day or night to all of ya!
8 Years Ago
A Quick Echo to Jason's echo
"
...
Love is a mystery...
Keep it in a vase
with flowers.
X"
by Jason Christopher
It Is Silly to Believe "Love Never Ends"
flowers on a plant
always
look fresher
and last much longer
than
flowers decorated in a vase
songbirds in the wild
sing beautiful lyrics
otherwise. they would cry terrible rhymes
when imprisoned
in a small
cage
for
the living beauty
please let it be free
naturally
as is
like
anything else in a human's life
nothing lasts forever
love
comes
and goes
with its own flow
it is silly to believe
"love never ends"
when
in romance
let the heart happily flow
to wherever and whenever it ends
Thao Chuong
2015-12-08
8 Years Ago
@ Jim: Thanks for sharing your drawing Shippin' Out that provokes my thought. You have pushed me hard to violate my own quota of one poem a day only -LOL.. Have a good night.
Ship' 'Em Home !
They're very proud of being US citizens
by
birth
In their absent minds
they
totally forgot
where on earth they originally came from
If
long time ago
America had closed her borders
those first illegal aliens from Europe would have been shipped back home
none of them would have settled on the New World
How convenient it is
for
those aliens themselves
to close the door after they got into someone's house and claimed theirs
or
to
burn
the bridge
after they reached
the other side of a river
to prevent more people coming through
Nowadays
in massive rallies
they raised huge placards
and chanted slogans
on
loudspeakers
"Close Borders Now.
America Has Been Invaded
Illegal immigration Is a Crime
Send Them Back With Birth Control
Illegal Aliens Go Back to Your Homeland..."
on
and on...
I
think
those aboriginals
living on Indian Reserves would laugh and say
"OK!
agreed
no more rally
let us ship all of you all back home
for
the continent America
to reclaim its former peaceful nature"
Thao Chuong
2015-12-08
8 Years Ago
i couldnt agree more, it seems we have a polarisation of the race spectrum, black and white, obviously with black people suffering past great injustice and human rights abuse, but we never ever here about the first nations, why dont they have a preeminent place in American society? Shunned? Pushed aside? Too peaceful in their protest so who cares?? Having said that the American civil rights movement was peaceful and achieved great change. There is no utopia, but growing gross disproportions in wealth, success, health, birth rates in all developed countries etc set the scene for future socio-demographic political problems, there are simply the usurpers and usurped... ? with equality and freedom and harmony.. just utopian bullshit... ?
8 Years Ago
"@ Danl: So where would you be when you die? "
I will email you and let you know when the time comes.
8 Years Ago
Newtopia
If we can't have utopia
give us the nearest thing
some near utopia, some newtopia
Not the choice between two hells!
Nor the many hells possible in grand non-utopia
Striving for utopia is to bring us nearer
and closer...
To strive is to try to arrive!
©Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Viet I can see how my image can trigger a colonialism thought. Some ugly things have taken place throughout history across the board, with humanity and still do.
My image is based light hearted on a book I read years ago “Two years before the mast.” A true diary account of a farm boy signing onto a ship on the East coast that brings cargo around Cape Horn to California. A two year voyage all with floggings by the captain. Climbing into the riggings during storms etc. I think of mates as ship mates.
Columbus Day in this country is quite bogus. No one cares about it or celebrates it for what its suppose to represent. That is a good thing. No school that day. A paid day off for government workers. They should change it to “goof off day” and call it good
Of course Columbus didn’t discover America he got lost looking for a new route. The rest is history as they say, and not all good.
8 Years Ago
Good afternoon Jason, Danl, and Jim.
@ Jason: Aboriginals in USA and Canada have still struggled for better living conditions: such as housing, employment, and social programs. The aboriginal youth has much higher suicide rate than that of the mainstream youth. Australian aboriginals have coped with same problems.
@ Danl: Send me an email as soon as you get there, I'll send you a check of million Euros -lol.
@ Jim: Your image made me think of the irony in the Americans' thinking and living norms. What serves the interests of USA and provides benefits for Americans is always right. (FYI: Who are on the same side with USA are the GOOD GUYS. USA always strongly supports the Good Guys. For example: those same Afghans who fought against the Russia's invasion - were called Freedom Fighters - those same Talibans who are fighting against their former Master. You know the same stories in Latin America.). Sorry for raising my different perspective, Please do not consider this subjective observation of mine as a discussion about politics.
Have a nice day.
8 Years Ago
Evening All :-)
You all got me thinking today...
Who or what is worse?
Apartheid
South Africa
Rhodesia
Australia
America
All Guilty
Genocide
Rwanda
Zimbabwe
Yugoslavia
Armenia
All Guilty
Displacement
Botswana
Monsanto
Rio Tinto
Skye Resources
Guilty
The lists go on
and on
and
on
JEM 091215
8 Years Ago
Wow. Jane! Too bad, judges in those cases were/are the winners or those with power.
Here is my today poem inspired by the romantic title: My Heart's On Fire by Viva's following artwork (for a break from heavy stuff).
Description: My Heart's On Fire. Will I ever cool down, will I ever sit down, will I ever ???????
"" I want to be there with you
And give you all that you desire
To start and fuel that spark for you
That set my heart on fire....."
"Who suffers because of love, feels no pain."
Prints to 36"x31"
In My Wild Dream - Your Love Never Dies
so long as
your heart is beating
you must be still in love
with
someone
however
I
hope
I would be deadly wrong
in my pessimistic thinking
of
you
being with other guys
instead
of
being with me
I often dream
of
you fallen into my arms
I
would
rub your fine breasts against my chest
sink into the blue sky of your eyes
dive myself down to bottom of the deep sea
of your secret
beauty
in my wild dream
our romance ever dies
your love never ends
Thao Chuong
2015-12-09
8 Years Ago
@viet, nor should the Palestinians and other first nations around the world be forgotten
re:
"@ Jason: Aboriginals in USA and Canada have still struggled for better living conditions: such as housing, employment, and social programs. The aboriginal youth has much higher suicide rate than that of the mainstream youth. Australian aboriginals have coped with same problems. "
well said! my overlooking focus
failing first nations need to get the business and skills education and investment to succeed and rebuild their futures... not just social care- with their nomadic lands changed and taken early culture lost, adaptation, whilst keeping traditions, is needed, they need new business education and investment, modern homes, internet, electricity, farming equipment... etc a chance to get their new culture together again, dumping them in reservations or ghettos with no future is not the answer
edited
8 Years Ago
@ Jason: Thanks for sharing your thought, mate!
[@viet, nor should the Palestinians and other first nations around the world be forgotten]. I am totally in same page with you about these issues. As you know USA is currently in charge of the world affairs, and the Jews have their most powerful political lobbying wand that mainly drives USA's foreign policies. The flight of Palestinian people has been totally ignored by mainstream media in the West which have been mostly controlled by the Jews. So you know the rest of the story. Oop! I'd better duck before getting shot by my so-called anti-Semitic observation -LOL.
Here's my response to your Newtopia
Your Utopia - Not Mine
perfectly perfect
like
god's surreal paradise
the Garden of Eden
your heaven on earth is truly in existence
believe it or not
it's
very touchable
not in a fancy dream
the world is abundance
of
everything
for every of its residents
you've been enjoying it
absolutely no suffering
in every single day of your living
regrettably
this bliss is for you - the privileged
not for billions of folks - the regulars
livin'
in poverty
around the world
your Utopia is very authentic
but it only
exists
in
my pipe-dream
Thao Chuong
2015-12-09
8 Years Ago
Viet, just saw your Newtopia when I was posting mine. I like the thoughts and this newtopia thing from Mate Jason.
newtopia here I come ( I hope)
I just heard about this new utopia
wonderful news for sure
some how the old utopia never worked
I’m ready for this brand new model
new floor new roof new sky above
pink moon on the rise
can I purchase a ticket
I have some change in my pocket
I’m sure I wont need money once I’m there
Beam me up in that big rocket
Jim Taylor 12/9/15
8 Years Ago
Haa... Jim. Utopia, Jason's Newtopia, now my YouTopia....
My joke in response to Danl's comment: "I will email you and let you know when the time comes."
Buy My Cheap Ticket to YouTopia
take it easy
live your lives
worry free
pay me
in cash
now
then wait for me
I promise
my service
totally guaranteed
or your money
fully returned
no question asked
so you know
as soon as
I get there
I'll share
with you all
what I know
about
lives after death
I'll drop
a rope down
and pull you
onto heaven
up high
in the sky
above the cloud
make sure
you hold on the rope
as firm as you can
otherwise, you fall
into the burning hell
deep down
far
below
in the ground
keep in touch
if you don't hear
anything from me
it means
that's it
nothing
in the end
dead silence
still full guarantee
or your money back
I'll send you a check
before I'm getting
back to dirt
Thao Chuong
2015-12-09
8 Years Ago
What Would I Better Do Before I Hit My Final Exit?
whoever I'm
whatever I'd be
rich
poor
a winner
a loser
a queen in a palace
a prostitute in a dark alley
an emperor of a vast empire
or homeless on streets
In the end
every mortal being
faces same fate
I'll
leave
behind
everything I've owned
my loved ones
and even my own self
my remains will
be
either
directly cremated into dust
or slowly decomposed
to
feed worms
and fertilize soil
Instead of wasting my living time
to collect
what
I really don't need
wouldn't I better enjoy what have already been in my hands?
Thao Chuong
2015-12-10
8 Years Ago
good day peeps, indeed Viet, enjoy what you have in your hands lol
its in the long term interest of all nations to resolve long term issues, continuous wars are no answer, the terrorism started before the state of Israel was created and it was by the Jews against the British at the end of ww2- the Brits were actually fighting the Ottomans who were allied with Germany and who had occupied Palestine and the Middle East for 500 years. In these attacks 100s were killed and hotels bombed... we passed the mandate to the UN under American pressure. the seeds were sown and have continued ever since... history does not lie. Too much power can distort and intimidate free speech. I wonder how many feel intimidated by this power and to what end. It will back fire. The outcome has been What we see in the middle east and an insolvable situation that just gets worse and worse, unless all sides are bold and we help them all get there - Human rights, a seperate Palestine with joint security, including interlinked economic development for all sides underpinned by global forces.
8 Years Ago
Newtopian World
Newtopia, a place for you and me
tickets are free, within your hearts
for pristine seas
and purest air
and peaceful days
It might take a ressurection... of the human spirit!
Yet all things are possible
when we swim in coral reefs
and the fish
are angels
in the marine aqua blue
and turqiouse greens
that ripple endlesly
and the nights glow...
a moon light sheen
And mermaids sing a distant song
of peace and tranquility.. .
for the desperate needs
of failing humanity.. .
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
hoping for 1.5
8 Years Ago
Sadly John Trudell passed yesterday. An important person going back to the Native American movement in the early 70s.
Ironically today is Human Rights Day. http://www.nytimes.com/2015/12/10/us/john-trudell-outspoken-advocate-for-american-indians-is-dead-at-69.html?_r=0
8 Years Ago
@ Jason: Excellent point as usual, my poet mate. Terrorism is another subjective perception depending on what angle you are looking at.
@Jim: Thanks for sharing the updated info about activist John Trudell - an exceptional human being.
Here is my thought from Jason's post.
Silent Terrors of the War Against Terrorism
sky falls
downpour of bombs
lightning strikes
thunder roars
the air is on fire
villages burnt
cities ruined
schools collapsed
hospitals destroyed
the county's ravaged
in the burning hell
people cry in panic
no time to run
no place to hide
buried in rubble
the deaths and the wounded
of
all ages
pregnant women
children
babies
elders
the pilot on the bomber
neither hears dying moans
nor sees the torment hell
it's happening
on a foreign land
thousands of miles
far away from his home
on another continent
anyway
it's aliens' sufferings
not his own people's
just another collateral damage
added to the long list
in his war against terrorism
when someone scare you a little bit - you always call 'em terrorists
what do you call yourselves when you terrorize them a great deal?
Thao Chuong
2015-12-10
8 Years Ago
Sundry Thought on the Human Rights Day
Let's Talk About Human Rights
not only must a human
be
alive
safe and sound
but also all of his basic living needs
must be
met
if he were dead
he would need
absolutely
nothing
not
even a funeral director for his funeral
let's not waste any more time
and sputum
to
talk
endlessly
impractically
also save some trees
by not writing, printing, distributing too much paperwork
about
the human rights
let's take some real actions
instead
if they lived in a war zone
let them keep their own lives first
by allowing them to go to safe places
otherwise
neither could they enjoy any of the fundamental freedoms
nor could they exercise the very basic rights
to
those
hypocrites
on the Human Rights Day
isn't too ironic to talk about basic rights for humans?
while you still continue
committing countless
human wrongs
Thao Chuong
2015-12-10
8 Years Ago
Morning
Jason - Newtopian World love it.
Viet- Human rights...makes me think of the murderers and molesters and the thieves in prison who claim human rights when it is they who have violated others human rights.
8 Years Ago
Good morning all. Thanks for sharing your thought, Jane and Jason.
@Jane: Many countries in the West and their powerful propaganda troops - the mainstream media - always blame China, and many other developing countries in Latin America, Asia, Middle East, Eastern Europe, Africa for serious violation of human rights - They are right and it is so true. However, it's sarcastic that they totally ignore their own foreign policies and military interventions in different regional wars. Not only have their military interventions gravely violated basic human rights of many people overseas, but also have they taken away the right to live of others. Thousand millions were killed and wounded or uprooted.
@Jason: Agreed with Jane that your poem Newtopian World provided me - your loyal reader with a peaceful moment. Your "Crime Upside Down" tells the whole story in a diplomatic way.Watch out you may pay a costly price for your crime lol.
8 Years Ago
Yes Viet, these truths have been brought out by progressive movements and thinkers for years and especially starting in the sixties.
There is a tremendous amount of information out there now in our high tech information age. There is much more awareness.
At the same time there are the expert manipulators ruling the dumbed down.
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your thought on the issue, Jim.
Here is my today's thought in response to Jason's poem Crime Upside Down and to Jim's thought on the human rights
His Rights and His Wrongs
he's really mad
cats from his neighborhood
come over his yard
dig up
to bury poop
in his vegetable and flower beds
worst
they also
mate on his sundeck
make too much noise late after midnight
and terrorize his little kids during their sound sleep
he blames his neighbors
for
letting
their cats go free
into his highly-secured mansion
and threaten his family's peaceful living
and
he is right
enough is enough
no more headache
who could tolerate this type of abuse forever
he takes actions
by chasing those nasty cats
to
any corner
of the whole neighborhood
in
his merciless hunts
he takes guns from his huge weaponry stockpile
kicks front doors of his neighbors' houses
and shoots indiscriminately
at
cats,
rats,
mice,
cockroaches
and
also creates collateral damages to many decent humans
still
not deterred
by his bad image of being a bully
he
swears
he would not stop
his war against those sneaky cats
until his mission impossible fully accomplished
he kills the last one standing
or whenever he feels very secured
without any risk
left
to threaten his homeland security
certainly he has every right to care for his family and protect his property
the only question remains
is it right for him to defend his own interests
at
all costs
to his neighbors
or to the rest of the world?
Thao Chuong
2015-12-11
8 Years Ago
Hello Viet............Re: your poem ~ "In My Wild Dream - Your Love Never Dies''......echoing "My Hearts On Fire".......FIRSTLY, apologies for not speaking here sooner, though I did reply at f/b....of course.
Thank you, Viet..........you always so understand the essence of my artwork, and always always reply so meaningfully with your echo,and the attendant info from my image page.........
I really appreciate you. It is an honour to be your inspiration.
Thank you, Viet.
8 Years Ago
Hello Vivian... Many thanks for your feedback. Glad to know that you've taken my poetic inspiration with its positive and humorous perspective. I was inspired by your very poetic description for your work and also the tile of the work. I also like the quote: "Who suffers because of love, feels no pain." Have a restful weekend, my friend.
8 Years Ago
Description: Nostalgic For Two reminds me of all the couples I see out eating dinner and enjoying a dining experience with wine or some drink of choice.
I'll be going out to dinner tonight, but my husband won't go, my family won't drink and there is absolutely no Nostalgia involved since the experience will repeat itself many times over throughout my life. But as I sit there with my loud and chowing down family, I will see in the corner of my eyes, a couple silently enjoying the dim lights, a glass of whatever and the art of all that is intense for one who never has had that experience.
The original was sold on 9/13/2014 in my gallery. By Lisa Kaiser
Nostalgic for Two - You and I - Our Strange Encounter
warm and cozy
in the room
by the fire
only two of us
you and I
in silence
we drank
jiggling sounds
two clinking glasses
intermittently
kissing each other
nearly emptied
two wine bottles
slowly burning down
two scented candles
floated in the air
odd combination
of
wine aroma
wax-warmer scent
body odor
cheap perfume
old carpet stench...
too much wine
eyes sparkled
erotic moment
inside arousal
a heated desire
for sex
two moving shadows
on a blank wall
loosely embedded
by
the flickering light
from burning candles
and from cracking fire
in the smoldering woodstove
what the heck
making love
while drowned
in a deep sea
o' alcohol
like
two salt-water fish
mating on dry land
in desperate need
of lots of gulps of air
suddenly passed out
before reaching
the finish-line
not even half-done
no joy at all
next morning
terrible hangover
sore throat
bitter mouth
cramp headache
not remembered much
of what we did
the night before
I
swallowed dried sputum
tried to say something
but held back
just waved goodbye
you
threw a blank look
then took off
in broad daylight
Thao Chuong
2015-12-12
8 Years Ago
If you have heard of time travel this is somewhat similar, it's traveling to another place arriving there instantly. I found a sweet spot in the mall where this can happen. Don't ask me exactly where it is because I'm not sure. You will have to go and find something you love and discover it for yourself!
Holiday Inspiration
Lights twinkling with big stars suspended
creating its own heaven as shoppers
quickly walk below by windows alive
with scenes of winter skiing, chalets, bobsleds
and snow shoes for dreaming.
In the center a huge fire like those found out West in a mountain lodge
with a flue reaching all the way skyward to the top.
Flames dancing, glowing through thick glass in the round.
Who would have thought "This is the mall?" A taste
of what some of the world is experiencing.
I close my eyes as I feel the cold sharp
edges of snow pepper my face.
Looking far down the mountain below I see the tips of my skis
poised to swoosh down in the cold dry air.
I lean forward and slowly begin to move quickly building speed.
The lights below wink and blink through the evergreens
as everything around me becomes a blur...
8 Years Ago
@ Suzanne Powers: Thanks for sharing your uplifting poem and for lending me your power to light up my soggy spirit. Enjoy shopping season for the joyful Christmas.
8 Years Ago
Joyful Reason for the Shopping Season
wet
and cold
on tedious Saturday
miserable weather doesn't deter
bargain hunters looking
for good deals
special sales
at yearend
up to 80%
off
people keep pouring into crowded shopping malls
in
traffic jams
all types of vehicles
slowly crawl on watery roads
tolerantly run about many rounds inside parking lots
desperately struggle for vacant spots
warm and comfy
inside
at
every till
lengthy lineups
busy cashiers work nonstop
trying to chop off those toughly-killed snakes
that continuously grow
longer and
longer
impatient shoppers are awaiting their turn
bit
by bit
moving a little bit forward
while pushing shopping carts
full
of stuffs for gifts
Christmas has become the holy reason for business
no longer the sacred season
to
celebrate
Jesus Christ's Happy Birthday
Thao Chuong
2015-12-12
8 Years Ago
happy birthday Jesus on the 25th December
indeed Viet, celebrating religions with the many good and spiritual points, is a wonderful thing, i remember many times, 20 and 30 years ago, cakes and ethnic sweets coming round the workplace many times by people of all ethnicities celebrating each others religious days, without the animosity or hatred that has now come in to some minds... religions could find us unifying spiritual meanings that we all search for... everyone believes in one Great Holy Spirit beyond the statues that are made of clay and beyond history and wars...
2 billion Christians
1.5 billion Muslims
1 billion Hindus
350 million up to 1.6 billion Bhuddists
its kind of important to get along!?
20 main religions:-
Sacred Texts Membership
Christianity 30 CE The Bible 2,039 million
Islam 622 CE Qur’an & Hadith 1,570 million
Hinduism 1500 BCE with truly ancient roots Bhagavad-Gita,
Upanishads, & Rig Veda 950 million
No religion - None 775 million
Chinese folk religion 270 BCE None 390 million
Buddhism 523 BCE The Tripitaka 350 – 1,600 million
Tribal Religions,
Shamanism,
Animism Prehistory Oral tradition 232 million
Atheists No date None 150 million
New religions. Various Various 103 million
Sikhism 1500 CE Guru Granth Sahib 23.8 million
Judaism Note 3 Torah, Tanach, & Talmud 14.5 million
Spiritism 12.6 million
Baha’i Faith 1863 CE Alkitab Alaqdas 7.4 million
Confucianism 520 BCE Lun Yu 6.3 million
Jainism 570 BCE Siddhanta, Pakrit 4.3 million
Zoroastrianism 600 to 6000 BCE Avesta 2.7 million
Shinto 500 CE Kojiki, Nohon Shoki 2.7 million
Taoism Note 4 550 BCE Tao-te-Ching 2.7 million
Other Various Various 1.1 million
Wicca Note 5 800 BCE, 1940 CE None
source: wikipedia
good day people, another joyful day was yesterday...
http://www.theguardian.com/environment/2015/dec/12/paris-climate-deal-key-points
source: wikipedia
Good Agreement made on climate change
HISTORIC! a dream come true
1.5C is the aim for max temp rise
well done! and thank you!
A Letter of Thank You's
Humanity would like to say
"THANK YOU!"
thank you for being bold
thank you for having vision
thank you for taking that extra step!
thank you for dedication
and thank you for arriving!
And Mother Earth, no doubt
would like to hug you all
for behaving yourselves
on her planet
which you/we have borrowed
to live on
to play on
to dance on, to sing on
to hope on, to marry on
to live on...
And not foolishly
to die on
before our time, to end, has come!
Love is
Green lands of plenty
Pristine blue oceans
with
Frozen white sheets...
and the
Breeze of cleanest mountain air...
upon each face
as eyes water
only in glee
Coughs and splutters
in the smog of man...
may this come to end
Congratulations from
us
all
to
us
all!
as we stand humbly
ten feet tall
And no doubt, most of all
from all above, thank you too -
For Mother Earth, after all
is the Spirit
of Life
Transcending all...This planet in the heavens
just
spinning out of control
got a plan
to slown down..
Applause
and Thankyou
from us all, to us all, to all of you
Love
everyone
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
we all live in hope
8 Years Ago
Artists who stand still
While creating
Will become stagnant
Try to step ahead
Even if you stumble
You are moving forward
Even if you stumble, you’re still moving forward.”
8 Years Ago
An echo to Danl
The distance
If I stumble or I fall
I will get there after all
like the light through the morning dew
reflecting on some ancient wall
I can see it in the distance
like an ancestors call
I must not stall
its in the distance
to be insistent
look to the distance
its here in the presence
but also in the distance
Jim Taylor 12/13/15
8 Years Ago
“Doorway To Success”
Every artist has a door to open
If it does not open
It is not your door
Or your time
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your thought Jason, Danl, and Jim
@ Jason: Thanks, mate
1 -About your thought:
"i remember many times, 20 and 30 years ago, cakes and ethnic sweets coming round the workplace many times by people of all ethnicities celebrating each others religious days, without the animosity or hatred that has now come in to some minds... religions could find us unifying spiritual meanings that we all search for... everyone believes in one Great Holy Spirit beyond the statues that are made of clay and beyond history and wars..."
I think that today majority of regular folks around the world still celebrate different religious days. For example: Christmas has become a generic holiday for different peoples in many different countries. You could see Christmas lights and celebration in many big cities in many "non-Christian" countries (Even in Dubai and some other cities in the middle East). Too bad that there is only one god but with many different names.
2-
I have had a temptation to response to your poem A Letter of Thank You's. However, I am so reluctant to do it, because I am afraid that you would also remove this poem of yours (as you have already done with you poem Crime Upside Down after I had posted my echo His Rights - His Wrongs.
@ Danl: No one can stand still in a moving world.
@ Jim: Wow! What's an amazing poem. It's quite an interesting perspective. I love those followings of your wonderful lines:
"......
like the light through the morning dew
reflecting on some ancient wall
I can see it in the distance
like an ancestors call
I must not stall
its in the distance
...... "
Have a good evening to all
8 Years Ago
The Double Troubles Of Married Couple
in our lives
you and I
we both see
each other
everyday
different ways
many years
you and I
two lost souls
imprisoned
like two inmates
with life sentence
hate each other
but stuck together
in a same cell
for a lifetime
without choice
with no joy
but headache
forever
so close
you and I
face to face
same household
however
we both feel
faraway
like two stars
in the distance
of millions of
light years
far apart
in same bed
you and I
different dreams
casual sex
no love left
sour relationship
in so-called marriage
Thao Chuong
2015-12-13
8 Years Ago
Sundry Thought about God
(To All Religious Fanatics)
If there is...
(as many of you do believe)
there must be only holy God
Who
created
all beings
all stars
all milky-ways
and the whole universe
if there were many creators
there must be a top one
the holy God of all gods
The
holy God
He who has been claimed
by all religions on the Planet Earth
as their sacred God
with
a different image
a different name
a different ritual
a different way of worship
in their own term and belief
Remember all religions
were created
by
mankind
(some humans who called themselves prophets or son of god)
absolutely
Not by your Holy God - Himself
Don't forget
all religions teach love and compassion
most faithful believers follow those teachings
and live in harmony and peace
It's those fanatics in all religions
who
promote hatreds
divide humans
and put believers against believers
In worship of Him
your Holy God probably want you to love other living beings
and respect the nature and the universe
that He has created
Only Satan
needs your blood
wants you to hate
wants you to kill
wants you to destroy
all what your holy God created
Thao Chuong
2015-12-14
8 Years Ago
The Zen Moment of Mine
In a river
water flows
smoothly
never stops
On a rocky bed
pebbles lie
standstill
ever move
Why not I?
Like water
while thinking
let my thought go
freely
when in love
let my feeling rhyme
with its own rhythms
Like pebbles
while resting
let my mind stand
still
in one place
when out of love
let my heart sleep
soundly
without hatred
Thao Chuong
2015-12-14
8 Years Ago
Two poems on the subject of the 'One Holy', or what I like to call 'the Great Mystery', and the spirit incarnate:
THE SURFACE OF MYSTERY
The surface of Mystery is the deepest, most incomprehensible longing,
The beautiful dream at the moment of being dreamed,
Those sickening reaches of time where the twin oceans of beauty and horror meet.
Mystery itself is as fringed and intricate as the shape of the air in time
And we can only feel blindly of its hem.
I swallowed a seed and some soil and soon something perfect was born.
I go to the water, spreading silence before me like a wave
When a wave begins to surge under the water,
Like the surfacing of an impulse that erupted through the floor of my brain as I slept,
To wake in terror, eat in hunger, sleep with a mouth full of blood.
By some freak accident in a world where anything can happen,
Life is a faint tracing on the surface of Mystery,
That with extravagance goes to crushing waste.
That I fall like Adam is not surprising:
Creation itself is the fall, a burst into the thorny beauty of the real.
We lose our innocence when we start to feel the weight of the atmosphere.
The actual plot of the present moment in time after the fall --
All things live by a generous power,
Bumbling pitted, scarred and broken through a frayed and beautiful land.
I saw how freedom grew the beauties and horrors from the same living branch,
The perfect picture of utter spirituality and utter degradation.
The sea is a cup of death and the land is a stained altar stone.
The terms are clear; if you want to live, you have to die.
Renewed, renewing, world without end.
I didn’t know,
I never have known,
What spirit it is that descends into my lungs
And flaps near my heart like an eagle rising,
And can never shrink to absolute nothing, or end this terrible hunger.
Some enormous power brushes me with its clean wing.
The waters of separation, however lightly sprinkled, leave indelible stains,
But isn’t waiting itself and longing a wonder?
FINDING GRACE
What use has eternity for light?
We wake, if we wake at all, to rumors of death, beauty and violence.
This then is the extravagant landscape of the world.
That it is rough out there, and chancy is no surprise.
I live now in a world of shadows colored by shape and distance,
A world where space makes a terrible kind of sense.
Shadow is the deep blue where the light doesn’t hit.
It is Mystery itself.
If the landscape reveals a certainty, it is that extravagant gesture is the stuff of creation.
Beauty and grace are performed whether or not we will or sense them.
Standing on a rarefied mountain pass,
gazing transfixed into the abyss of freedom,
viewing an ancient world shining with newness,
my eyes can stand no greater light than this.
Nor can they see without it.
Does everything else but me pass so lightly?
There is another kind of seeing that involves letting go.
Innocence is the spirit’s unself-conscious state at any moment of purest rapture.
Hone and spread your spirit until you yourself become a sail,
Whetted, translucent, broadside to the merest puff.
I am the skin of water the wind plays over; I am a petal, feather, stone,
Up to my knees in the world.
Innocence sees that this is it, and finds it world enough.
Experiencing the present purely is being empty and hollow;
You catch grace as a man fills his cup under a waterfall.
8 Years Ago
Thank you Viet Tran for letting me know you enjoyed my poem, sounds as though you had your own shopping experience! Lol
8 Years Ago
Afternoon All :-)
Just taking a few minutes in my lunch digesting all these poems, works of art and thoughts. Takes more digesting then my lunch :-)
Jason - lets hope they stick to it - have you been watching The Hunt? There were some positives on there too with regard to wildlife.
Viet - Prolific and full of prose, I need to find some spare time lately, a quiet corner where I can think and be me.
New Life
8 Years Ago
Good morning Shelley, Suzanne, Jane. Have a nice day.
@ Shelley: Wow..wow...Thanks for sharing your two poems. I've read a couple of times. Very interesting to read. I like both of them.
@ Suzanne: Thanks for your feedback. My only experience in shopping is to be a chauffeur, a bodyguard, a shopping cart pusher for my always-better-half (lol).
@ Jane: Spare time is like spare change - not easy to find - you have to sit on a busy street in downtown and beg for it (lol).
8 Years Ago
Human Beings' Systemic Problem
created
by
the governing
for hundred thousands of years
the legal, social, political system is too rigid
but it must be complied
by
the governed
without exception
challenges severely punished
death sentence applied for any rebel against the establishment
even
struggle
for human's basic survival needs
is
forbidden
if it violates the conduct codes defined by those ruthless rulers
it's a crime
with jail terms
when the disadvantaged shoplifts a loaf of bread
from a supermarket for his empty stomach
in
contrast
the privileged has all the rights reserved for him
to
rob
and exploit
by any mean
at any cost to the disadvantaged
for more of his own wealth and money
the immense gap in living conditions
between
the rich and the poor
is unimaginably immeasurable
like
between
heaven and hell
but
worse
the disadvantage is always blamed for his fault
and make-believe
it's
either
his miserable fate
or his own failure of being unable to join in the league of the privileged
Thao Chuong
2015-12-15
8 Years Ago
Promotion of Tim Allen's art
The Last Leaf Standing
by the end of Autumn
naked trees
bonny branches
shivering in windstorm
all the leaves have gone quite sometime
only one last leaf's still standing
defying its
dying
fate
I
myself
would prefer
not to be the last leaf
I'd rather leave with all other leaves at the same time
no
point
for me
to stay any longer
and suffer my loneliness
in
chilly wind
and bitter snows
when winter comes
now
let it flow
let it blow
let it snow
let it go with its own rhythms
I would love to ride on the current of nature
Thao Chuong
2015-12-15
8 Years Ago
Promotion of Tim Allen's Art
Metamorphosis
in
painful reality
let's plant a seed of hope
to keep dream alive
in the night of the unknown
build a bonfire
to
light on darkness
in
a man's life
who would know for sure
what would happen within the next minute
today -an ugly worm
tomorrow
transformed
into a beautiful butterfly
while
living in darkness
close both eyes,
take a deep breath
dream of being a butterfly
flapping its wings
in a blue sky
under
bright sunshine
over a sea of colorful flowers
Thao Chuong
2015-15-17
8 Years Ago
Tis the season
Of holidays cheer
Smiles and full bellies
Friends and family
Joining together
It is a happy time
An early heaven
8 Years Ago
Good evening all. Thanks for dropping by with your thought..
@ Danl: Nice thought about the holidays. sorry for having no time for an echo today.
@ Jane: Shark? Who would he be? the ex or an ax? - lol.
@ Heather: Long time no see my friend.
Have a good night to all.
8 Years Ago
Celebration of Tim Allen's art
Description: A reflection of Seattle's Space Needle in a puddle after a shower. by Tim Allen
It Never Rains In Seattle
blue sky
up high
in downtown
sun shines
everything is fully exposed
under bright light
pedestrians
busy streets
high skyscrapers
crowded tower buildings
even my love for you is shining
don't
listen
to the weatherman
believe me
whenever I carry an umbrella
it never rains in Seattle
I don't lie to you
it's my fault
today
the only day
I leave my umbrella at home
sudden heavy rainfall buries the whole city
the Space Needle is hidden behind a water curtain
anyhow
let it rain
it's time for our romance
you and I keep walking in the rain
but
believe me
tomorrow
I'll carry an umbrella
it never rains in Seattle again
Thao Chuong
2015-12-18
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day an echo to Danl's Tis the season of holidays cheer
'Tis the Season - Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Everything is nearly done
the cleanup
the decoration
and most of the shopping
except one more tough task left
gifts for spouses
gift for moms
gift for dads
gifts for children
gifts for grandkids
gifts for other loved ones
gifts for friends and everyone else
He talks to her
"oh no
today
the last Saturday
before Christmas
we must be ready
for the special day
not much time left
we must rush... "
Like many other late shoppers
they've been driving around town
to different shops
in different malls
for good deals
Only
come once a year
Christmas and New Year
it's why
everyone is willing to pay for joy and fun
credit cards could reach maximum limit
the hard-earned money of the whole year could be blown in the consuming cyclone
All festive mood and excitement die down
when the marvelous holidays season goes away
takes with it all holy wonders
and replaces them
with
nothing
but headache and stress
In the mailbox
arrive
but bills
bills and bills...
everyone has no choice
but
goes back to work
like slaves all year round
to pay off the debts and also save
for
the next
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Thao Chuong
2015-12-19
8 Years Ago
Celebration of Tim Allen's art
Who Help Me When I'm on a Slippery Slope?
Whether I believe
in
Him or not
(I'm told so often)
He's always there for me
Impossible
to see
Him
as He hides Himself above clouds
up high
deep in the sky
somewhere in the mystic universe
invisible through my naked eyes
however
He loves me as any of his loyal followers
He's been watching every step of mine
to make sure
I'm safe and sound
and
whenever I walk
my feet are planted firmly on the ground
so I don't tumble down
and bump my head
Quite nice
for those believers
to hold on to such a strong faith
at
least
they have Him to rely on
whenever they're in need
they send prayers to Him
He'll help them get out of their own problems
It sucks
damn me
as a doubter
whenever I lose trust in myself
I have no one else to rely on
let alone an almighty holy deity
likely
that's it
I'm stuck with my own troubles
and would become dead meat
Maybe
it's time for me
to search for my own God to worship
Thao Chuong
2015-12-19
8 Years Ago
Celebration of Tim Allen's art
Go with the Flow
(of Life and Death)
think without judgment
judge
without bias
the mind is in stillness
give without any take
expect
nothing in return
the heart falls in love
believe with no doubt
question
without fear
set the soul go free
live without mistrust
trust
without hesitation
the life weaves in harmony
let the body and the soul
go with the natural flow
of love and life
of life and death
until
(everything is ready)
the outer universe
and the inner self
merge into oneness
then
let go blissfully free
peacefully back home
Thao Chuong
2015-12-20
8 Years Ago
Sundry Thought About Jesus' Humane Teachings
"Forgive and Forget"
the amazing teachings
of
Jesus Christ's
I've heard endless times
Many of His followers keep singing the beautiful lyrics
like
the needle of a vintage record player
spins on the same track
on a broken record
again and again
never stops
until it wears out
totally
out of order
"Forgive and Forget"
Quite easy for everybody to say
on the contrary
really hard for anyone to do
Only
if
they could stop repeating themselves like parrots
and start taking real actions in a humane way
then
they would comprehend
the meaningful teachings
of
Jesus Christ's
"Forgive and Forget"
This humane practice
would
absolutely
generate love in the heart
create peace to the mind
bring harmony to mankind
Let's turn our dream into reality
Love in place of hate
Peace instead of war
we could achieve it
just
simply
"Forgive and Forget"
Thao Chuong
2015-12-20
8 Years Ago
Jane I'm on catchup, hope you are having a good day! The hunt is primordial, David Attenborough a great biologist and i look forward to watching...
Good afternoon Viet! A great message for Christmas and all faiths seeking to find a path closer to God! Love, Peace and Harmony.
Taking on your theme of judgment, my thought of today in several parts...
Interpretation of sin -
in the past...
the bible has been used to justify RACISM
the bible has been used to justify APARTHEID
the bible has been used to justify SLAVERY
the bible has been used to justify SEXISM
the bible has been used to justify HOMOPHOBIA!
by some!
Most now consider these interpretations repulsive.
Personally i would consider these interpretations sinful.
Man made interpretations and translations that destroy a greater and deeper spiritual message!
Using the teachings of the bible to promote hate as opposed to love and understanding is sinful!
There are contextual, historical and far deeper meanings than shallow inaccurate interpretation.
Neither Jesus nor His 12 apostles ever even made any direct reference to condemn homosexuality at all, He never condemned it nor condone it!
Fornication is sex before marriage, and that it what was actually often condemned, that applies equally to everyone. Near everyone fails here.
Nor do the 10 commandments mention homosexuality, it does however contain many rules for a good life that are broken every day by millions! lies, adultery, theft etc
We should all look inward and not always out at others, and we might become more enlightened.
People are born gay, being gay is part of creation.
8 Years Ago
Likewise Sodom and Gomorra was a city condemned for immorality, there was no specific link with just homosexuality, it was corrupt in every way, greed, ritualised prostitution, and the story is more about city's demands, by young and old, for 2 angels sheltered by Lot to be handed over to face the city's desired assaults on them, it was more about Gods wrath at a city who sought to assault two of his angels rather than a condemnation of same sex loving relationships. Note that shrine prostitution and orgies in "worship" of God was commonplace, this was the real immorality! Young men and women were kept for this purpose! No doubt this was the desired intent of the crowd of asailants. Jewish scholars also disagree as to the modern homophobic translation.
Sodomy is a word derived from Sodom, a word not found in the Hebrew and used by early translators in place of the Hebrew words for quadesh - this being the Canaanite worship of a fertility godess - by the keeping of (young) male and female shrine prostitutes in mass orgies. A repulsive worship that is hidden from descriptive mention in the bible, yet sodomy has been the translation of quadesh worship ritual and this has been falsely reinterpreted to simply mean being gay to simply cover up the true depth of canaanite depravity that existed. This was the sin of Sodom and Gomorra.
If you look to hate, it's easy to hate, deliberate miss translations and using indirect references from the new testament to try to directly implicate homosexuality in every way, has induced hatred and is still savagely used to do so in some places. Gays are often attacked and killed in many places.
8 Years Ago
However, the old testament esp Leviticus does on face value, mention and condemn homosexuality, but this books also includes verses condemning tattoos, asks for animal sacrifice, the burning of fat in temples, forbids the eating of shellfish, asks for the shunning of the disabled and disfigured in temple worship, advises how to keep slaves, and includes the burning of women for some crimes. This book fits well with another belief system at present, no doubt. Much in the old testament is allegorical, and much was the ancient teaching of a priesthood seeking to elevate themselves - the beginning of modern religion, by today's standards these teachings are often primitive and often on face value, barbaric, equating the teachings of Jesus with this level of basic ancient thought is ridiculous because He sought to enlighten us with a different message, love and forgiveness.
8 Years Ago
Much of the apparently, on face value, homophobic verses in the New Testament can be attributed to St Paul writing in different books, but note, he was Greco-Roman and in this age of ancient "civilisation" the keeping of sex slaves, mass orgies, the buying and selling of slaves, mortal combat for sport, was the norm. No doubt he condmened this practice*?. That hardly equates to a modern loving relationship between 2 people of the same sex...
* actually St Paul didn't condemn slavery. This reflects the culture of then and now. Slavery was endemic and part of society. Does that make you doubt St Paul, or, look more closely at what is behind the face value readings?
Seasons greetings and happy holidays to everyone
and have a Happy Christmas too!
8 Years Ago
Freedom?...
Prisoner to your freedom
Locked by your key
Your words
Imprison me, oh destiny...
Theses days descend
Soft cries that do not weep
Whimpers of a soul
A soft cry in freedom
A deeper truth
speaks!
(c) Jason Chrisopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Hi Everyone...4 sleeps to go so I have been told!
Thank you for the post Viet :-)
Christmas
Unseasonably warm
Unseasonably wanting
Gone is the giving
Here is the taking
Commercial cola Santa
Myriad of Chinese gifts
Gone is the orange
and the book
Here is the Versace
and the Hilfiger
Gone is the reality
Here is the movie
Made in America
A Disney dream
Merry Christ mas
One and All.
JEM 211215
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jason and Jane. Sorry for my late response. Too busy yesterday. So, l decided to make it a non-poetry day for me. In compensation, I'll turn today a double-poetry day- LOL
@ Jason: Welcome back to this thread. Wow, lots of info. to read and digest. Thank you, brother. I hope I would have an echo to your thought by the end of the day.
@ Jane: I.m looking forward to reading your poetic response to Jason.
Have a great day to all.
8 Years Ago
Sadly, I don't really know poems, unless you consider the song lyrics I've memorized.
Is that allowed on this thread?
8 Years Ago
Thanks Dawn: Everything that comes from a human's mind and heart (from A to Z) is welcomed to this thread. Have a nice day
Here is my echo to Jason's Freedom
Freebies and Freedom
No other place on earth
is
better
than where he resides now
not only does it provide him with maximum security
but it also offers him a stress-free living environment
no worry about losing his employment
no headache whatsoever
about mortgage payment
monthly bills
groceries
etc.
It ain't a dream
actually
like
a paradise on earth
of which many people dream
he doesn't sweat much
for
all freebies
he's been getting so far
he pays nearly nothing
If he were not so lucky
either
he
could
lose his job
have his house taken by the bank
become homeless and suffer chilly weather in every winter
or
even worse
he could be shot dead by police in a bank robbery holdup
He gains more
as
an inmate
in a prison cell in the West
than being a homeless on city streets
Most importantly
he can retain
all of his basic civil rights
and nearly all freedoms for a human
except
his freedom of movement
Not bad at all
for
a rapist
a robber
a hardcore criminal like him
Thao Chuong
2015-12-22
8 Years Ago
Celebration of Tin Allen's art
In His Search for the Guiding Light of His Life
He had strolled about many rounds
inside a car lot
loads of options
hard
to select
the most suitable car
from different models and makes
by various vehicle creators around the world
For a second opinion
he consulted a car salesman
then, he became too confused to come to any conclusion for his selection
he felt very frustrated
he walked away
on that day
later on
he
recognized
he did make the wise decision not to listen to that salesman
Now, he's facing the same situation
physically being very sick
he's too exhausted to retain his strong belief in him
so he has found it hard
to deal with the problem
by himself
alone
Tired of driving his life on the worn path
he is searching of any holy god
who could help him put his mind back onto the right track
Unfortunately
there are too many creators for this only one universe
it is
religiously
more confused
to pay full attention to these believers
from different churches, mosques, temples, and other holy places
than
to listen to those salesmen at any car dealership
Peace of Mind
hopefully
he would find the lost God
He Who has been already residing inside his Inner Self.
Thao Chuong
2015-12-22
8 Years Ago
Celebrate
How many times
Is it said
Wouldn' t it be a boring place
If we were all the same?
red
Yellow
Black
White
Gay
Straight
Transvestites
Transsexual
skinny
Overweight
Strong
Weak
blonde
Brunette
Grey
Wrinkles
Old
Young
Atheist
Muslim
Christian
Catholic
Agnostic
Tribal
Pastoral
City dwellers
Country folk
On and on
What a colourful wonderful world we live in
Let's celebrate it
Respect it
Care for it
JEM 231215
8 Years Ago
Jane
'Wouldn' t it be a boring place
If we were all the same?'
I have trained for years just for the day I could jump high enough holding my pants in hands and landing a perfectly clean "both legs at a time"
It seems that everyone does it the same way.... "one leg at a time".
Maybe just going nude would make me different....or 'nuts'
8 Years Ago
Haha Yes Danl - but what happens when you get too old to jump, would it be your left leg or right leg first.....or maybe you would prefer a skirt / kilt then....or just flash the nuts and be proud!?
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane and Danl.
Victoria's Christmas Lights in the Night before Christmas
The city is colorfully illuminated
lights in different shapes and colors
with gorgeous Christmas theme exhibits
displayed
inside the glass windows,
on the front doors
on the roofs
on the front yards
on the trees
on the lampposts
on the roads
Tonight
in the rain
the town looks merrily beautiful
through
the
mystical
reflection
of multiple colors
on wet roads, on windows glass, in the rain curtains
I've been driving around town
with my two grand kids
for a couple of hours
to enjoy
Christmas lights
The older child
impatiently
whines
"grandpa
I want it snows
please go home
help me make a snowman".
Clearly
he has been watching too much fancy stuff about Christmas
on TV and YouTube
somehow
he is make-believe
snow always falls
for
Santa to ride his sleigh in the flurries
He doesn't know
that his granddad has a very different dream of the weather
I wish it would be always warm and dry for the homeless to enjoy
the Merry Christmas
as anyone else
in this town
Thao Chuong
2015-12-23
8 Years Ago
Fellow FAA members I need your help
fellow FAA I need your help!!
I am Colin Perkins, 30 from Knotty As(Liverpool,U.K.). I am setting myself a quite enormous task to run the New York Marathon in 2 years time. It sounds straight forward, but I am currently just short of 20 stone (280lb)and never ran in my life.
The objective is to raise as much cash for the MS Society, a disease which my mum has lived with for the past 15 years, a cruel condition that has sent her from having a full life to being bed bound in just a few months. The MS society do so much to advance research with the aim of finding a cure, as well as raising awareness. This is my way of helping them out for the support provided to my mum.
It's a massive challenge and part 1 is getting fit and running the great north run in September to test my metal. This should tell me how I am progressing. I am trying to publicise the challenge to increase sponsorship but equally to get as many people behind me.
I have deliberately launched this pre-christmas so there is no confusion that this is another New Years resolution.
Would there be anything you could do to help me publicise this? I would be happy to provide status updates along the way etc. I have attached my just giving site that provides further context
https://www.justgiving.com/Colin-Perkins2
Thanks
Colin
8 Years Ago
Sharing creation
Are you -
Christian, or pagan war monger?
Jew or Canaanite?
Muslim or evil terrorist?
There are beliefs
religions
faiths
and
abominations
and there is righteousness -
a path to find
for all humankind
A shared justice
A shared peace
A shared equality
A shared love of creation!
A shared Love of God
Lets walk it! find the right path
before its too late to find...
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Good luck Colin! Wishing you all the best and evryone a happy Christmas!
echo to Jane's lovely sentiment -
Creation is a celebration from God
but can humanity celebrate creation?
echo to Danl
4 legged
or 8 legged
or perhaps 6
trousers are obviously just for humans
yet otherwise the possibilities
are endless
1 then 5
3 then 3
4 then 1 then 2 then let it hang out
lol who knows
echo to Viet
when it rains
the Christmas lights do glisten a 1000 fold, yet
hoping the rain might cease
global warming is making some areas flood near every week now in the UK..
the Winter rains and rains... .
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: Leave the turkey alive! Let's take cheese and wine. Cheer to your good health.
@ Colin: What's an inspiring quest! You are very realistic in your achievable two-year action plan. I wonder if you have contacted with your local MS Society for help in promotion. I think that the society would connect you to a local radio station/or paper for sponsorship of promoting your plan. Good luck.
@ Jason: Thanks for your open mind and kind heart, mate. If every believers in different religions had the same philosophy and approach as you do, this world would be a more peaceful place to live in.
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL CHRISTIANS AND NON-CHRISTIANS THOSE WHO CELEBRATE THE SEASON
AND LAST BUT NOT LEAST
HAPPY HOLIDAYS AND NEW YEAR TO ALL FOLLOWERS OF OTHER RELIGIONS
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your awesome painting. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones, Jim. I hope the well-fed/fat Santa with his big beer belly could be able to slide through the narrow chimney and brings a gift for you -lol
My Somber Thought about Asylum Seekers on the Christmas Eve
It's the joyful time
on Christmas eve
people are enjoying the merry time with their loved ones
even the homeless could have their share of the joy
they did enjoy a turkey dinner
before going back to their regular living rhythms
While
it's cozy and delightful
inside those paradises on earth
outside
in the open sky
the weather is very frightful
For hundred thousands of recent asylum seekers
who fled from war zones on long journeys of thousands miles away
trying to save their lives
it was too late
when they arrived
all roads to heaven had just been tightly shut down
no way
in
impossible
to cross fortified borders
They've been stuck
outside of the gates
in the open air
inside makeshift tents
under
rainfalls
heavy snows
freezing temperatures
patiently awaiting the judgment day for their fates to be decided
whether they would be allowed to enter the heaven
Likely
Islamophobia is on the rise
in the West
furthermore
it's considered they worship the wrong god
as they don't celebrate Christmas
so they could be sent back
to hell
(where they came from)
Thao Chuong
2015-12-24
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8 Years Ago
Cheers Viet here is a tanka attempt for you
Cheese and wine just fine
Let's leave turkey out of play
Merlot and goats cheese
Gorgazola and shiraz
Cabernet and Pont l'eveque
Here's to your health wealth and happiness
8 Years Ago
Hello Viet, Jane and all.
My take on the old classic song.
He was singing the song
let it snow
let it snow
let it snow
let it snow
the more it snowed
the more he drank
the more it snowed
the drunker he got
safe at home
laying down
next to the warm fire place
thank God he’s home safe
let it snow
let it snow
let it snore
and
let it go
let it go
let it go
Jim Taylor 12/25/ 15
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane and Jim.
@ Janre: Your nice Tanka has just been published on the special issue of the Turkey Daily News and won the first price (voted by turkeys around the world) -lol
@ Jim: I really liked the humor.that made me laugh
Enjoy the restful day without shopping
Here is my echo to Jim's humorous poem.
Three Homeless Guys on Christmas Eve
no family
no loved one
no one to love
no home to go back
on Christmas eve
around 6 at night
it was already dark
bitterly
cold
under a tarp
beneath a bridge
sat
in
silence
three lost souls
drank Chinese cooking wine
to thaw their icy hands
and warm up their freezing bodies
they didn't care
whether it rained
or it snowed
they knew
after
they emptied up those bottles
it no longer made any difference
they became too drunk to feel nothing
why not?
you - guys
let it drop
let it flurry
let it go
let it snow
to enjoy a white Christmas
Thao Chuong
2015-12-25
8 Years Ago
An echo to Jane's Tanka
She Does It for a Healthy Living (Tanka)
no longer eats meat
she's becoming a veggie
not healthy at all
a deep sea of pesticide
in those green leaves - does she know?
Thao Chuong
2015-12-25
8 Years Ago
It Happens Only Once a Year
on Christmas Day
shopping malls are closed
all businesses take a full rest after the crazy shopping season
no vehicle on vacant parking lots
very
few cars
on nearly empty roads
buses run with one or two passengers
people stay home with their loved ones
the whole city loses its hurry rhythms
falls
asleep
and looks as a ghost town
how peaceful and tranquil
the mind
is
on Christmas Day
Thao Chuong
2015012-25
8 Years Ago
Hahaha Thanks Viet think I will have to consider returning my prize.....or not? I had pork 😤..oooops. But the cheese and wine was nice.
Good poem Jim!
Hope everyone had a peaceful day. x
8 Years Ago
The greatest danger for most of us is not that our aim is to high and we miss it
But that it is to low and we reach it
Michelangelo
8 Years Ago
Great echo Viet and nice writings all.
Stars and Bucks
A daily dumpster dive
trying to survive
wow a large unopened
package of Starbucks
I found Starbucks
it’s like big bucks
The word spread quick
he found Starbucks
always smelling it
never tasting it
every time he said Starbucks
star dust fell from the sky
and its not even decaf
what a gift
Starbucks
stars rolled in bucks
the low wage earner
who tossed it in the dumpster
looked on with delight
their campfire steaming bright
Jim Taylor 12/26/15
8 Years Ago
Thank you Jane, Danl, Jason, and Jim.
Happy New Year.
Good Health, Inner Peace, Joy, and Good Luck to You and Your Loved Ones throughout the Year 2016
My Sundry Thought by the Year-end
About the Fast Turning Wheel of Life
Life is so beautiful
everyday is a precious gift
every breath is a bonus
unfortunately
I
always
take it for granted
Yesterday was completely gone
no way to get back and change it
no
point
to regret
what I have done in the past
Tomorrow is too far away
there are eighty six thousand and four hundred seconds
in
every
twenty four hours
who know what would happen to me within the next instant
Anyway, not much time left
for an old guy
like me
to
waste
Most
importantly
I could die instantly
as it takes only a split second for me to get killed in an accident
Anyhow
I can only count my living time on this very present moment
while I am drawing air into my lungs
why don't I?
just
forget
what would happen to me next
and enjoy every breath of mine
right
now
at this instant
before it's too late
why not I do it?
Thao Chuong
2015-12-26
8 Years Ago
Cheer to your health on the New Year, Jane.
Here is another Tanka echoed to your Tanka Cheese and Wine
Cheese and Wine is Nice - Except its Painful Price
she loves cheese and wine
noble lifestyle of high class
does she not know that?
inside the league of the rich
she'll get the royal disease
Thao Chuong
2015-12-26
8 Years Ago
"The greatest danger for most of us is not that our aim is to high and we miss it
But that it is to low and we reach it" - a quote by Michelangelo - posted by Danl Art
about 18 hours ago
Here is my echo to the quote, Danl.
The Fine Art of Living
he aims too high into the sky
and
shoots at
the silver moon
he gets nothing but a broken dream
he aims too low toward the ground
and
shoots
at his feet
certainly he gets badly injured
the fine art of living is aiming
not
too high
and not too low
but at the right target
and
squeezes
the trigger
he gets whatever he wants
Thao Chuong
2015-12-26
8 Years Ago
Another echo to Michelangelo's quote
The Art of Sex
he aims higher
to
reach
her lips
he enjoys sweet kisses
he aims at the right target
to gently
rubs
his chest
against her breasts
he feels heartbeats in same rhythms
as the softness of her nipples touches his rough skin
he aims lower
to
her
secrete
he feels sizzling heat
the whole world is on fire
oh the Satan's burning Hell of sufferings
he merges his own self
and her own self
into
oneness
until both reach God's peaceful Heaven of joy
Thao Chuong
2015-12-26
8 Years Ago
When I look back at some of the old scribbles I did in my childhood
I see the freedom and unencumbered life of a young season
I see the intense happiness and free spirit
Now lost
So I must prepare myself to return to those days
To start again to do what I did then
To start childhood over again
Where the real meaning of life is located
And art blossoms freely as an infant's spirit
Danl 2015
8 Years Ago
DANL - How true, as we get older our boundaries grow smaller and we become completely fenced in our thinking. The greatest creativity comes in our early years unless we are able to keep those chains unlocked and the lid from the box.
VIET - Phew! lol
8 Years Ago
Thanks Danl and Jane
Here is my echo to Danl's wise thought of going back to the childhood
The Journey from the Empty Mind of an Innocent Child to the Wise Mind of an Old Man
like
a blank canvas
a vacant piece of white paper
until
an artist smears messy colors on it
a poet spoils it with nonsense words
the mind of a child
is
pure
pristine
innocent
uncontaminated
and prejudice free
as he's growing up
his
mind is
increasingly infested
by too much information
the more facts he collects - the less imagination he has
the more experience gains - the less tolerance he becomes
knowledge
is
but
a burden
to the mind
the deeper he sinks into the adult's world
the worse he is infected
no way back
to
his
pristine
childhood
likely
he's trapped forever
in the so-called wisdom of the old age
Thao Chuong
2015--12-27
8 Years Ago
Treasure Chests
aye!
mates
you no longer navigate your ships on the aqua blue water
around the Caribbean islands
to
look for
hidden treasure chests
as your comrades did in their tough old days
aye!
mates
instead
as modern pirates
with no blood spilled
it is quite easy for you
in your joyful journey to find hidden treasure chests
you
simply
sit inside a noisy Irish pub
let your mind sail on the rough sea of alcohol
let your sight flow freely around the crowd
to enjoy all treasure chests
that those attractive women
intentionally expose
and
sexily exhibit
to lure your eyes
and blow your mind off
aye!
mates
for your joy
go ahead
turn to "full mast"
let the wind blow
while your face is gluing to those unhidden treasure chests
Thao Chuong
2015-12-28
Cut and past from other thread for my own record
8 Years Ago
Celebration of Tim Allen's art
The Beacon of Hope Inside His Unknown Tunnel
sundown
nightfall
no moonlight
gloomy sky
starless
murky
he felt
as
if
someone has just smeared
a thick black coat
over
Van Gogh's mystical painting Starry Night
everything
is
fully
painted in black
he knows for sure
tomorrow the sun will come back
and will rise
again
its bright light will shine
and unveil the beauty of nature
he is sitting inside his own darkness
he
hopes
the bonfire
which he has built in his mind
could help him maintain his bright light of hope
to
guide
himself out
of the unknown tunnel
Thao Chuong
2015-12-28
8 Years Ago
Tanka Time :-)
Hope
Shortest day over
The days are getting longer
Won't be long before
Little buds peep out
Pushing the cold earth away
Bringing colour back to us
JEM 291215
8 Years Ago
Happy New years eve eve eve poets, said Adam, er
Eden at Eve
If the warming is endless
will the rain ever stop?
as the oceans empty
into the skies...
the seas moved
and
the fish grew wings
to fly
and flew
Higher than high they flew
until they reached a place of swans
and here they rested
As the deserts baked
a whirlwind blew
and grew
as lo, the sands
just
vanished
Leaving scoured faces
of Man
and
rock faces
scratched and fractured-
an ancient, ancient, land
of broken bones
A graveyard of the living
and the dead
The burial of Eden
was spoken
As the swans cast a magical spell
eden cried
to yield a new lake
of ever life
and here the fish returned...
with Adam
to find Eve
once again
in tears
(c) Jason Christopher
on nyeee
8 Years Ago
Good evening Jane and Jason
@ Jane: Nice tanka about the coming green shoots on current bare limbs. There is always hope, my friend.
@ Jason: Good one, my friend, Love it.
8 Years Ago
Promotion of Tim Allen's art
Description: This sidewalk timepiece once stood outside Carroll's Jewelry Shop on Third Ave. in downtown Seattle and now stands watch outside the new home of the Museum of History and Industry located in South Lake Union Park just north of downtown.
Does Anyone Really Know?
(About Yesterday- Today -Tomorrow)
Time flies extremely faster than speed of light
more
powerful
than any black hole
which
quickly
sucks everything on its path
Nothing could
stand
still
even just for a second
in its rapid moving current
Future keeps sinking into presence
presence is continuously rolling into past
and past is buried deeper into darkness
Time
swiftly changes
and keeps blowing all humans' lives away
Everyone knows for sure
eventually they leave here
but
who would know the exact time of his final departure?
it could be
today
tomorrow
next month
or next years
and.....
Why not?
ignore the unknown and fearsome tomorrow
also forget both the glory and the failure of the well-done yesterday
let each breathe go with the flow of time today
to the very end
of
its own journey.
Thao Chuong
2015-12-29
8 Years Ago
"Artists Going Nowhere"
When creating art
While traveling through life
Your pathway never changes
The carpet is rolled up behind you
There is no return
Each day you are trapped
Regurgitating....
The same style and subjects
When you think you are moving ahead
You are dying
TdpArts Gallery Terrance DePietro
8 Years Ago
'Lingering in the Moment'
Did you ever feel
the weight of your
Feet upon the Road?
Did you ever question
the Signs at the corner
or forget to even Look?
Have you found yourself
Looking from Hilltops
at the Road Traveled?
Have you looked back
at the Inns as you turn
the Bend at the Marsh?
Have you ever Tasted
a sweeter Well's Water
than the one You drink now?
Not that the other Waters
were Bitter or Tainted but
These are Fresh, Thank God!
tdp 29Jan90
TdpArts Gallery Terrance DePietro
8 Years Ago
'Ode to a Birth of Venus'
They all Rejoiced
at the Shimmer
of Light's Premiere
Clouds burst Aside
As Veils Part:
Voluptuous is Born!
Above the Abyss
Glimpsing an Eye
All knew well!
Never equaled be
Love's boundless Container
In Innocence Be!
Hitherto a Dream?
Reverie to Whom?
Dare One Ask?
No puzzle Be
Nor Riddle Haunt
Her Father's Account!
-tdp 2dec15
8 Years Ago
Evening Shawn and tdpArts :-)
Jason and Viet - Sweet - I like them!
If I don't get back on...Happy New Year One and All x
8 Years Ago
Oh my word - what on earth....... http://www.independent.co.uk/voices/comment/what-is-ttip-and-six-reasons-why-the-answer-should-scare-you-9779688.html
8 Years Ago
Thank you Danl, Terrance DePietro, Shawn Jeffries, and Jane.
Happy New Year to you all
Promotion of Tim Allen's Art
An echo to Jane's Tanka Time
Tanka: Space
Hope
it rains cats and dogs
the sky's murky and soggy
buried in darkness
he hope the sun would come soon
with rainbow on horizon
Thao Chuong
2015-12-30
8 Years Ago
An echo to Jason's poem Eden at Eve
On His First New Year Eve
he woke up
very
surprised
he couldn't believe what he saw
he rubbed his eyes
to make
sure
he were fully awake
as if in a dream
beside him
lied
an exotic creature
fully naked
very luring
so
attractive
and irresistible
that was curiously staring at,
then smiled at,
him
he could hear his irregular heartbeats
an overwhelming desire of possession
arose
inside himself
he felt the rising urge
of
running his fingers on her long hair
moving his hands around her lovely curves
feeling her fine skin
touching her nice breasts
kissing her lips
and exploring
further
her
glamorous beauty
he was about to say something fancy
to express his mystical feeling
at that awesome moment
but
"oh!.. ah!..."
were all what he could say to her
simply he spoke neither English nor Arabic
it was too bad
that
all humans' languages have been developed
long after God created Adam and Eve
Thao Chuong
2015-12-30
8 Years Ago
An echo to Danl's verse "Artists Going Nowhere"
Those Walking Zombies in the Contemporary Art World
For
fear of the unknown
they keep going on the worn path
by
faithfully imitating
those Old Masters' styles
and blindly following art movements
of the past
They're so scared and often cry foul
when
witnessing
any daring vanguard
stepping out of the limited boundaries
or pushing off
the cliff
what is accepted as the norm and the status quo,
in the realm of the art world
In modern days
not only
does fine art
present the splendor of the outer universe
as
it mainly
did in the past
but also it has been increasingly becoming poetry of colors
by
which
a modern artist would reveal
the magnificence of their inner selves
also the meanings and
the horrors
of
life
and love
Most
importantly
modern artists could communicate with their viewers
thoughts from the minds
emotions from the heart
on a canvas
on an electronic device
or through a conceptual work
In this regard
many
so-called
contemporary artists
are but walking zombies from the far past
Thao Chuong
2015-12-30
8 Years Ago
The Year-end's Thought About the New Year's Eve
It's a very odd concept
impossible
for me
to
believe
in the reality
that the New Year's Eve falls on December thirty-first
Today
is
the last day of this year
it actually belongs the year Two-thousand Fifteen
Before
it leaves here for good
this dying year will handover everything
to the new-born
baby
of
the year Two Thousand Sixteen
In another word
the New Year's Eve won't start until zero o'clock
at midnight
tonight
Today
is
the old year-end
or the new year's eve
or whatever else it is called in the English language
it's just a very subjective concept about the flying time
it doesn't mean much in the living process
let's take a deep breathe
and be ready
to
celebrate the fresh arrival of the newcomer
Let's bottom up our glass!
Cheer
to all of you
and your loved ones
with good health, happiness, inner peace, love, and harmony in the New Year 2016
Thao Chuong
2015-12-31
Note: We call "the New Year's Eve" - Dem Giao Thua (the Handover Night or the Joined Night) in my mother tongue. Culturally, today we party to say goodbye to current year. At midnight, tonight we will celebrate to welcome the New Year.
8 Years Ago
Happy New Year Viet...
May the new year bring you heath and happiness
And may your words and wisdom be praised by all
8 Years Ago
ok just fir a change lets dump the happy stuff, lol, i'll go with hoppy, hmm hoppy new year or hopey, hoppy new year for frogs and hopey new year for those who like to hope and ... seasons greetings to those who dont celebrate new years, much. Venutians have more, and Martians alot less of em, too. Have a good one where ever you are, who ever you are, when ever you are.... love your years and those years of others.... think of better new ones and the best days of old ones.
Viet in echo to your eden at eve echo and good observation, all i can say is words often go flat at vital moments, "er your nice girl eve", thought adam, nice,
chuckle
but a poem or two, do enlighten us...
keep on keeping on to you all
and always remember
erm
all humanity writes poetry
because we feel it
whatever it is
Jane, get back on lol
8 Years Ago
Hellooooooooooooooo - you called Jason? lol
Have you been taking that hoppy pill again??
Jim - Happy this and that
Viet - Happy Dem Giao Thua
Danl - All the best mate :-)
Moi x
8 Years Ago
Happy New Year!
2016 will be the good, better,and best year for all of you.
@ Danl: Thank you very much for your words. All the best to you.
@ Jim: Thank you Jim. A fine man with as kind heart like you always have a fruitful relationship with, and are well-loved by other people. Cheer to your health.
@ Jason: Sometime, silence is worth more than millions of words. Ir a blank canvas would give viewers with a full colour spectrum from endless imagination. Keep sharpening your words in poetry. Love, Peace, and Harmony to your inner self and the outer universe.
@ Jane: Keep the passion in your heart, the fire in your mind, the energy in your body to march ahead in your fight the the well-being of mankind -lol
8 Years Ago
Celebration of Tim Allen's Art to say good bye to the year 2015.
In Between Dream & Reality .
What
I
see by my eyes
hear by my ears
touch by my hands
smell by my nose
and taste by my tongue
it
would be
either truly real
or very perceptive
as those five senses of mine could betray me
the outside reality
is
actually
distorted
by my inner perception
A minute ago
I saw the bright sunlight penetrating through a thick curtain
at
this very moment
I'm
hearing
raindrops
striking at the thermal window
Yesterday
I saw the alpine mountain totally green
today
through the same eyes of mine
the mountain is fully covered with white snow
Reality is perceptive
Whenever I'm drowning in the deep sea of sufferings
too long
for
me to hang on
to my own breathe
could I turn my mind off from the painful reality
and let myself sink further down
into a fancy dream
of
mine
Thao Chuong
2015-12-31
8 Years Ago
All artists die
The goal isn't to live forever
The goal is
To create something that will
8 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your fresh thought on the first day of the New Year 2016.
@ Danl: So, do you really think that the goal of artists is to create something that "lives" forever? While you're still alive, why don't enjoy your creative process and worry about what would happen to your art after your die? I don't mean to dispute your thought. I just want to share with you about my thinking about art and life.
@ Jason: It seems to me that you're somewhat itchy. Are you allergic to something around here? Do you need a scratch, mate? Go take some fresh air. -lol
@ David: Ha..Do nothing this year and leave until next year what must be done last year. Relax, take wine and enjoy sex on the first day of the year
8 Years Ago
Sundry Thought About My Daily Resolution On the New Year's Day
In search for solutions to my own problems
for many years
I
have
learned
That
I often point my middle finger
to blame everyone but myself
for
my own mistakes
I tend to forget the fact
every judgmental error I make
and
any sin
I commit
could only be corrected
by
me
myself
not by anyone else
I could be forgiven and forgotten
only
by
those victims
of my wrongdoings
and not even by the almighty god
After I repay to those whose debts I owe
I
could
breath fresh air of no polluted sin
live free without silly dream of heaven
die well without any slight fear of hell
Pointless for me to keep committing more wrongdoings
while continuously sending my daily prayers to my God
and beg for His forgiveness
unless I truly believe
I could fool Him
to give
me
a free ticket
to
His
funky Heaven
Thao Chuong
2015-01-01
8 Years Ago
Waiting Is Worse Than Dying
So
afraid
to be late
I came in a half hour early
to wait for my first date
Young
and
inexperience
I didn't know
time was as elastic as a rubber band
furthermore
I had never expected
that she was so skillful
that she could stretch to its the maximum without breaking it.
I anxiously looked at my wristwatch every minute
like
a crying baby
impatiently waiting
to suck his mother's nipple for breast milk
Damned it
whenever I was need of its fast speed of light
time psychologically ran at its most slow pace
extremely
slow
as
if it were standing still
Also it made every instant of my waiting
much
longer
than a century
I was dying second by second
and about to give up my hope
Alas!
an hour later
she came at last
just
in time
before I felt asleep
I was speechless at her pretty smile
so I felt luckier than a dead man
who had just met St. Peter at the gate of God's heaven
Thao Chuong
2015-01-01
8 Years Ago
Viet an echo to your
Sundry Thought About My Daily Resolution On the New Year's Day
Pointing the middle finger to blame
funky Heaven
Hit a funny bone for me. ha ha
Everything is Funky
Funky car
it wont start
Funky shoes
make life hard
funky rain
what a pain
everything is Funky
smells real skunky
Funky art
but it’s a start
funky music
play it funky
feeling junky
everything is funky
I hope heaven
isn’t funky
Jim Taylor 1/2/15
8 Years Ago
Hahaha - It hit me too Jim Funky Heaven made me chuckle and come up with lots of images lol.
Funky Heaven
If God was a head banger
And Jesus was a D.J.
What would Heaven be like?
With disco balls
And flashing lights
One mother of a boogie floor.
Get down on it
with rapping and popping
and karaoke galore
From a waltz or salsa
to rock and roll
or even the funky chicken
Funky Heaven
who could wish for more?
JEM 020116
8 Years Ago
Jane, thanks for your funny funky response.
Funky is a great word that can be serious or funny.
I guess it's a newer English word but been around longer than the funky chicken.
8 Years Ago
"@ Danl: So, do you really think that the goal of artists is to create something that "lives" forever?"
Dedicated masters of the art. Not the nickle and dime artists.
8 Years Ago
crazy Jane! lol crazy Jim
head spin David! chuckle
i feel reborn Viet
re baptised, Dani
lovely days
maria
rock n roll
or knees up
go
echoooooooing i forgotten what.....
Dog scratching
scratch
scratch scratch
breathe in, n out
ahhhhh
peee
on da
treee
its a dogs life
scratch
scratch scratch
zen moment... a fly buzzed
then tuckled n tickled ma nose
ahhh lol
then moved in
scratch
hmmmmmm
love u fly
scratch
(c) Jason Christopher 2015
8 Years Ago
Say goodbye before it is to late
Artists gone before a new date
Four here will parish
Leaving nothing to cherish
No further discussion breaths
Only silence in their deaths
8 Years Ago
Ahhhhh Jason
Two p or not to pee
What is the question?
Tea for two
or
two for pee?
With a pee pee here
and a pee pee there
Where is da tree?
Where is da dawg?
That damn fly
bzzzzzzz bzzzzzzzz
buzz
8 Years Ago
Thank you Maria, Jim, Jane, Danl. and Jason. I've got home. Nice that you dropped by with a joyful mood for the New Year.
@ Maria: Happy New Year. Good health, good poetry, good art...for the year 2016, Ma Disley!
@ Jim: Enjoy the funky 2016 with you easy-going nature and humorous rhymes
@ Jane: Keep writing and saving the world. and make the 2016 better than before.
@ Danl: Art is in your sizzling heart and your firing mind. Keep sending your thoughts of wisdom
@ Jason: Your fight for the environment is admirable. I like your humorous and provoking thoughts. Keep punching until you see a dent in where you hit or until you wreck your fists -lol.
Good night.
8 Years Ago
An echo to Jane's and Jason's humorous thought
New Year's Joke
Two Ps or Not Two Peas Is Really a Question of Gender Inequality
To pee or not to pee
is
truly
a call of nature
no human could resist
Certainly not an issue
to discuss
openly
at
any public place
Pretty easy
for any male to do it
just to unzip and spray
his water pistol
at
any spot:
a dirty wall in an alley
a tree trunk
a bush
or wherever inappropriate
However it becomes the most vital issue
for any female
to
meet
the holy call of God
no way
for
her to do it
in a way that men effortlessly do
she does need a WC or at least a hidden place
to drain her flooded body
To ps or not to peas
always
makes him happy
and her suffered
Funky stories
written in those foggy Bibles
Eve came into life from a rib of Adam
God's gender bias in his creation of human beings
was
originally
a serous problem for gender equity and equality from the start
Thao Chuong
2016-01-03
8 Years Ago
An echo to Danl's obsessive thought about art and artists
Where Are You - Modern Artists?
Different types of creative people
not all of them
are
fine artists
as they often proudly claim
Those who manually repeat the same creating process
to produce identical products
for
sales
on a market
to make a living
are
absolutely
not starving artists
but purely hungry handi-craftsmen
Those who create with a blind desire for fame
or
to make a big name
are
daydreamers
Those who create something that could last forever
or would be sold for millions of bucks
are
not alive artists
but zombies of the future
From an emotionally firing heart and a wild imaginative mind
fine artists are those vanguards
who
create
something
unique,
provoking,
meaningful,
out of the box
Alas,
it's hard
to recognize
who are fine artists
in the contemporary world
that have more creators than sand on deserts or leaves in forests
Thao Chuong
2015-12-03
8 Years Ago
"Artists Going Nowhere"
I painted a cloud and it drifted away
I painted a star but it fell to earth
I painted a field but it died of thirst
I painted a horse but it ran away
My canvas is now a linen white
Waiting to try again
8 Years Ago
Art is never finished
It is abandoned
Sold to another
Hung on a wall
And forgotten forever
8 Years Ago
Cheer to your good health, Jane
and to your sombre thought of art, Danl.
Have a good night
Here is my echo to Danl's Artists Going Nowhere
The Daydreamer Goes Somewhere - But not to the Art World
whatever he does
it
is
disastrous
regardless, how many times he has tried
he hits the same dead-end
again
and again
he touches the stars
the stars turn to dust
he touches the sky
the sky falls apart
he touches the moon
the moon disappears
he touches the sun
the sun's melted
he touches her heart
her heart's broken
he touches God's heaven
God's heaven becomes Satan's hell
he
ain't
a good creator
but a daydreamer
for the sake of fine art
he'd better leave the canvas blank
Thao Chuong
2016-01-04
8 Years Ago
Celebration of Tim Allen's art
Fairy Tale Ending
His dream's badly smashed
by the cruel fist
of fate
Through the shattered glass
on the ferry's big window
he
could
easily see
the distorted reflection
from the full colors spectrum
The rainbow has been faded into the blue sky
his fairy tale of life
is
about
to vanish
into nothingness
He knows
the ferry is about to dock at its terminal
He
opens his eyes
inhales deeply
exhales slowly
then
murmurs:
"Aha...
it was not real
just a bad dream
at
this very instant
I'm still kicking alive"
Thao Chuong
2016-01-04
8 Years Ago
Jane-
The light at the end of the tunnel has been shut off due to a power failure....the power to create what has not been created.
8 Years Ago
Jane-
I prefer being a pessimist...that way, if it doesn't work out I won't be disappointed.... but if it does, I can also be elated.
Two birds with one stone
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane, Viva, and Danl,
@ Jane: Haha How did you find the Heaven dance floor?
@ Viva: I was overwhelmed by your New Year's thought. Awesome drawing with your ton-sur-ton trademark.
@ Danl: Thank you very much for sharing your thought to keep this thread floated.
Have a good night to all.
8 Years Ago
Land, Water, and Air on a Cold Winter Day
the chilly wind bitterly blows
my backyard becomes the no-animal's land
only the dog runs on frosty grass
and barks
for
fun
under thick ice sheet
the pond turns into the fishless water
koi, goldfish, frogs are in full hibernation
hidden somewhere
unseen
at
the bottom
in the gloomy
empty
gray
sky
a lone plane flies high up
in
a bird's deserted airspace
no much activity in a cold winter day
except rows of vehicles slowly roll
in the traffic jams
on busy roads
of
the crazy man's fully occupied land
Thao Chuong
2016-12-05
8 Years Ago
Morning Viet.
Brrrrrrrrrrr makes me want to escape to the sunshine with few humans about lol. Great poem.
Viva I love the crevasse piece. :-)
8 Years Ago
an echo to Danl's thought
The Lone Artist with the Two Birds and One Stone
quite convenient
for him
as a lazy artist
he always wanna "kill two birds with one stone"
for
money
and fame
at the same time
what's a wishy-washy dream
without
any talent
how could it be done
even
if
he takes his best effort
to threw thousand oh one stones
he couldn't get a single feather out of a standstill bird
why does he not save the tone for his loneliness
and leave the bird alone
so he can hear the songbird
singing
to
lure
a female lover
Thao Chuong
2015-01-05
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: It's cold here. The more humans in a crowded space - the more body-heat that everyone could enjoy -lol. Have a nice more..ning!
8 Years Ago
In support of Tim Allen
Dream and Hope in Darkness
there's always bright light at the end of any dark tunnel
unfortunately
at
all times
pessimists whine in darkness
they could only visually see things no farther than a couple inches away from their nose
so
they
never imagine
the ending of one world is the new beginning of another one
on the opposite
when good things end
optimists usually see changes
as
great opportunities
for more options
at
a cul-de-sac
a pessimist is stuck by his own thought of no way out
an optimist take it as a chance
to build a new road
there's always bright light at the end of any dark tunnel
so long as one could keep
dream
and hope
as the guiding northern star
to march ahead while getting lost in the sea of darkness
Thao Chuong
2015-01-06
8 Years Ago
Morning Viet finally getting colder here but think we have had enough rain now. Too many people flooded out. Love your take on the pessimist and the optimist ;-).
Keep the body heat ramped up ! x
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Viet, for your Land, Water and Air poem in response to my painting, Cravasse.
Your mood and thoughts really do echo the atmosphere created, and I do so appreciate that you were inspired with your quite calm and illustrative thoughts echoing my intent....as always, my friend.
8 Years Ago
Hello folks, keeping the world alive
should be our aim
and fire
zero police deaths
zero civilian deaths
the best stats to have
back onto a theme of a changing climate..
Pond of Winter
Beneath a sheet of ice
Winter was kinder...
still.
i shivered.
Yet the birds froze
and could not swim
nor fish
for fish
like the koi -
the carp
i was...
i looked up
and thought of
other fish in frozen ponds...
"i feel safer in winter"
as i shivered
and shivered
but knowing
Summer might kill me, burning
drought and
hungry birds
still i shivered
in the pond
of Winter
Brrrruh
as a bird froze
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
climate of change
8 Years Ago
"Making A Decision"
Follow the pathway of life
Till there is a divide
Go left or right
Only you can decide
Left is a bright light
Right is a rainbow
Choose carefully
No return once you go
Your decision is lifelong
Try not to mistake
It is your biggest decision
And the last you will make
8 Years Ago
Hey All
Whats Happenin'?
My mind is blank
I cannot think
Pen to paper
Fingers to keys
Nothing is happening
No inspiration
No irrational thoughts
No funny bone connected
The day is dull
No glimmer of light
No rain
No snow
Just sitting thinking
What can I write?
There must be something cool
to write about today.
I see no dogs
I see no trees
I see no fish
I see no birds
Just one damn fly
which leaves footprints
in my paint
and on my canvas
Fly away fly
Flee fly flee
Flow fly flow
Flit fly flee
Take your feet away
From my funky fun
Leave me to think
My empty blank thoughts
JEM 080116
8 Years Ago
that was a good one! oh your missing your giraffes Jane! lol
Tarzan
A giraffe peared over...
at the blank canvas
chewing leaves
as tarzan called
Jane painted
her tree tops
her kisses
her love of paint
her paint of love
and
then she slapped the
nosey face
hard
as a giraffe
grew taller
and saw a mountain sky...
she touched his leg
and off he galloped... .
with her on top😜
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
giraffes see further
8 Years Ago
hahaha - Nice one Jason.
My giraffe had stripes
And Tarzan wore a hula skirt
The Gorilla laughed so hard
His jelly belly wobbled
The leopard fell out the tree
And lost all of his rosettes
A naked leopard
Oh the shame
He jumped into the water
The hippo blushed and
Slapped him hard
While the giraffe
slowly
chewed
on
the
fallen
rosettes
JEM 2 080116
8 Years Ago
haha 😃you must be on the sherry again Jane lol 🐘🐘🐘🐢
sorry for this mad intrusuion Viet, i hope Tim is doing well, and keeping in good heart, your poem dream and hope in darkness was deep and moving
crazy days 1st angel, Jane is crazy lol
8 Years Ago
Jason.... My trouble is I am trying to have a dry month...no wine for me..
I shall just whine about having no wine!
Viet my friend, where have you gone?
Hello 1st Angel Arts :-) Are you joining in on the insanity?
8 Years Ago
Good Morning Jane! Nice one Jim
Has Viet been banned again or is he compiling his next volume?
nothing beats a good moaning, good moaning!
those lines just make me crack up everytime, for 30 years, a few of the old sit coms just hit those buttons, like are you being served and dads army and one or 2 others
i been switching from the processed red meats as a NY resolution, following recent reports
hopefully processed white meats and fish are ok, i think the risk somes from something to do with haem content, haem being the red content in blood, becoming carcinogenic in the processing, if its it something to do with the protein content ( i heard it was NH2 groups once) being altered, i cant see what different it makes compared to other processed proteins... or maybe it does have other explanations..
still i do like bacon and ham once in a while
whine oh whine lol
8 Years Ago
In support of Tim Allen
Good morning Jane, Viva, Dan, Jason, 1stangel, Jim, and Jack. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate your time to keep this thread moving while I was away. Have good time to all of you.
@ Jane: Thanks for your concerns about my absence from this thread I'm sorry for leaving you in the cold. (I actually had no time prior to my hitchhike to the moon -lol ).
@ Viva: Your work gave me a feeling of coldness. It's a very successful abstract that has a strong impact on the mind of your viewers.
@ Danl: Thanks for sharing your provoking thoughts. Please feel comfortable to Keep doing it,
@ Jason: Glad to know that you have had a lot of fun. No worry, you're always welcomed to post whatever you'd like. The banning bullets couldn't penetrate my pen as I put safety
vest around it -lol. But who know?
@ 1stangel: Welcome to the thread.
@ Jim: Thanks for sharing your humor.
@ Jack: Please share your thought in English. Not many artists here could understand your Arabic -LOL.
8 Years Ago
Celebration of Tim Allen's art
Description: 100% OF ALL PROCEEDS FROM THE SALE OF THIS IMAGE WILL BE DONATED TO THE RED CROSS FOR RELIEF FROM THE JAPAN EARTHQUAKE AND TSUNAMI.
Could I Conquer the Force of Nature?
life's too short
why I'm here?
how it ends?
what happens?
when I leave?
where I go?
many questions
too
confused
who would know the answers?
as a mortal being
I
can
neither avoid the inevitable
nor escape the cruel reality
in no doubt
sooner or later
I hit my own exit
it's destiny
it's karma
it's fate
or whatever the force of nature is called
be ready for that day
not easy
as it sounds
hard to take
not the ending
but the unknown afterlife
really scares the heck out my mind
anyhow
without choice
nothing much
I could do
I'll take it
as is
when it comes
I'll respond to its call
I'll ride on its current
I'll leave for its destination
whatever would happen
wherever I would end
I
wish
after this suffering life
I could totally rest in peace
Thao Chuong
2016-01-11
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane and Jason and your humor post.
Here we call it English humor. I guess that's what it is.
Viet hope your having restful days. This thread has been going over a year I believe and Marias also.
That keeps a person quite busy. I remember you did have to put out a few fires a long the way also. You are always encouraging and thanking people.
Well, Thank You Viet Tran, Thao Chuong
8 Years Ago
"A Love Poem to Martha's Vineyard"
Oh, who am I, Lord, who am I
That I should have the sea and sky;
That I should own this bit of land;
Be foreordained to understand
The lowly language of the earth;
In primal tasks to find life’s worth?
Ah, bursting is my thankful heart
My fate is not the crowded mart,
For Thou in kindness destined me
To love my meadow by the sea.
-Emma Mayhew
I'm daydreaming about warmer weather in my favorite place. Happy Monday!
8 Years Ago
"Keeping Customers Happy"
I threw paint on a canvas
Spun it in the air
Then quickly urinated on it
I sold it to a fine lady
She asked me what I used
To create this masterpiece
I showed her the medium
And she followed me home
Inspired by Courvoisier
8 Years Ago
DANL: in total agreement with your risk assessment! :-)
VIET....YOU ARE BACK! YAAAAAAAAY :-)
Hey Jason and Jim - good old British humour lol x
8 Years Ago
@ Jim & Jane: Thank you very much for your warm words, my friends. Is there any British humour? I'm afraid to say that Britons are too cold to laugh -lol
@ Danl: Good thought about risk.. And...a big laugh about your "excellent customer service. -lol
@ Tara: Welcome to the thread and thanks for sharing Emma Mayhew's poem and your thought. Have a fruitful week.
8 Years Ago
Description: Come over to my side. No you come to mine.
Haa. Jim: I like your humorous description.
She Ain't a Spare Rib of Mine
I'm her jack of all trades
her gardener
her kitchen helper
her bodyguard
her chauffeur
her shopping cart pusher, etc
In another word
I'm Mr. Everything whenever she has any problem
that she needs an immediate handyman
Ironically
I'm
also
Mr. Nothing for her to show off her vast knowledge
She
is
always
a captain of my ship: "you shouldn't do that. You must do this"
and a backseat driver of my vehicle:
"too fast
slow down
watch out
turn left
turn right
stop sign
yellow light".
Oh my Lord
I
believe
you made a grave mistake
instead of taking a spare rib of mine
you took my whole brain
to
create
my "better half"
it's
why
she is so smart to be in full charge of my entire life
Thao Chuong
2016-01-11
8 Years Ago
Viet - Shame on you - you wash you mouth out......who says Britons are cold?
Jim - there is a picture for you ....cold Britons lol :-)
Jason - what say you? Are we cold?
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: Sorry my friend. You're always right. Britons are hotter than lava. Sham! Sham..on me! Have a nice die..y! -Lol
8 Years Ago
oh we love a good chuckle Jane, chuckle hug to you and all, hot funny stuff here, Viet the stiff upper is old hat, well im as cold as iron, humour is so evolving its like an art, less sexist, less racist, more clever these days... imo. now to classify the intricacies... i believe 7 classes of humour were classssified including slapstick, double entendre ( or multiplex now lol) , irony, punchlines... erm and so in and and others
chuckle hug humour? chuckle slap, double chuckle hmmmm hot chuckle
these poetry threads have been going since 1905 Jim, u were late, ed is in his horror coffin having started it as a baby in nappies, he cant stop screaming hell now... arggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
8 Years Ago
@ Jason: Thank you for cooling off the heat. Glad you took the joke with chuckle. Nice day, my friend.
An echo to Danl Art's "Making A Decision" posted 5 days ago
Not So Simple as It Sounds
If everything in this life is quite obvious
as
dark or bright
left or right
it would be effortless for anyone
to
decide
amongst endless roads around
which path would better be taken
If everything in this life is quite simple
as
day and night
back and white
there would be no headache
as it's easier for everyone
to
recognize
between the rights and the wrongs
If everything in this life is quite obvious and simple
as
day and night
back and white
dark or bright
left or right
there would be neither miscommunication nor misunderstanding
this world would be a paradise on earth
or
at least
a much better place for all humans
to
live
in peace
and harmony
Thao Chuong
2016-01-12
8 Years Ago
Thank you all so very much. As you may know, I park here to renew the joy of your thoughts, to my own betterment. Poetry does that for me.......especially these here.......VIVA
8 Years Ago
Morning Viva, Viet, Jason, Jim et al. :-)
Viet you are forgiven, hot hug,chuckle,lava,hug hot, chuckle. x
To quote a phrase I once read in a magazine when I was a child and I have never forgotten it: Just beautiful.
Forgiveness is the fragrance that the dying flower casts back upon the foot that crushed it.
Have a great day/evening x
8 Years Ago
Just Googled my quote... It appears it has been manipulated like many things...This is the correct one:
"Forgiveness is the fragrance that the violet sheds on the heel that crushed it." Mark Twain
Very nice Mark Twain but I prefer the manipulated one you gave the inspiration for. Love ya RIP
8 Years Ago
@ Viva: Nice to know that poetry has renewed your joy. Thanks for your nice words to those poets on this thread
@ Jane: Your hot hug has made my heart melted down -lol.
Description: My Ode to Lovers parting at daybreak, an aubade. Celebrating Romance in all its glorious colour.
An aubade is a morning love song (as opposed to a serenade, which is in the evening), or a song or poem about lovers separating at dawn. It has also been defined as "a song or instrumental composition concerning, accompanying, or evoking daybreak". WIKI
Aubade - The Sunne Rising -John Dunne.
Busy old fool, unruly Sun,
Why dost thou thus,
Through windows, and through curtains, call on
us?
Must to thy motions lovers' seasons run?
Saucy pedantic wretch, go chide
Late schoolboys, and sour prentices,
Go tell court-huntsmen that the king will ride,
Call country ants to harvest offices,
Love, all alike, no season knows, nor clime,
Nor hours, days, months, which are the rags of
time.
Prints to 40"x28"; totes,cards,Pillows,phonecases
an echo to Viva's Aubade To Love
Aubade (Tanka)
on the horizon
crimson sky behind treetops
morning sun's rising
a bird sings the luring song
trying to call for his mate
Thao Chuong
2016-01-12
8 Years Ago
Tanka Your Hot Hug
(To Helen of Troy)
you gave me a hug
so much hotter than lava
do you really know?
oh my heart aches for you!
my life's melted to ashes
Thao Chuong
2016-01-12
8 Years Ago
Signs Of Life
Wrinkles mean you laughed
Grey hair means you cared
And scars mean you lived
That is life
8 Years Ago
@ Danl: You've given me headaches -lol. Have a nice day
During your lifetime
If you don’t risk anything
You risk everything.
Posted by Danl Art - 3 days ago
An Echo to Danl's thought
Who Can Avoid the Inevitable?
whether we can't tolerate it
or we don't wanna take it
risk
is
a cruel fact of life
it naturally comes and gets us at any unexpected moment
enjoy it or not
living is taking risk
so long as we're still breathing
regardless
how safe and secure we insulate ourselves
none
of
us could
avoid the inevitable
we could get injured or died
of
being
drowned when on a canoe, a boat, or a ferry
crushed while driving a vehicle or taking a bus
exploded into pieces in midair while taking a flight
even
if
we do nothing
but cover ourselves safely under a warm blanket in our bedrooms
we
could be
seriously hurt in a house fire, an earthquake, a tsunami, a cyclone
instantly died of a heart-attack
or somehow paralyzed by a stroke
instead
of
waiting for risk
to come to our home and take us away on its own term
why don't we take risk and deal with it in our own preferable way?
Thao Chuong
2016-01-13
8 Years Ago
Viet thanks for your fun response on my strange image. I don't know quite what to make of it myself.
Thought for the day/night:
Tread lightly for we all have to walk in each others shadow.
8 Years Ago
Viet, thank you for responding to my post. And especially, thank you for your Tanka, so right about Aubade. The magic you might not know, but so exciting, to
me, is that you intuitively cite the bird, and that symbolically, the White Raven, is my ) personal symbol for abiding love .....!
Here, if I may, is a recent painting sent to me here in answer to my request to her for a White Raven, in her iconic style......Ali Oppy..
Wrong image loads, so sorry..glitch!!
WHITE RAVEN...Ali Oppy.....in my Fav's
We are all connected......
8 Years Ago
Have a good night, Jim and a good day, Viva
@ Jim: "Tread lightly for we all have to walk in each others shadow".- Your thought has blown my mind away, my friend.
@ Viva: "We are all connected......" One way or another, it's so true my friend. If I follow those dots....I would meet you someday. .
8 Years Ago
Untitled Number One
he let his brush run wild
and freely smeared primary colors on a white canvas
'til
his emotion cooled off
his feeling fully died down
for the resurrection
of
an abstract painting
finally he created something amazing called fine art
unfortunately
even
the
artist
himself
didn't know
what the hell it was
so he named it "Untitled No 1"
at
least
he found a title for it
who would dare question him how did he title his abstract?
like
many other artists
he is always bewildered by the famous saying
"beauty is in the eyes of the beholder"
Thao Chuong
2016-01-13
.
8 Years Ago
Jim-
Never grab at a shadow
It will fail you
Rely on the sun
To show you the way
Hang onto a cloud
And drift far away
8 Years Ago
@ Danl: Thank you very much for sharing your thought on a daily basis. You have a very interesting response to Jim thought about shadow. You sound somewhat bitter about the "forced" closure of your last post. Take it easy, sir. Ignore the annoyingly biting dog and keep walking ahead.- lol. Have a good day.
8 Years Ago
Description: Shehd, 7, on the Hungarian border. Shehd loves to draw, but more recently all of her drawings have had the same theme: weapons. “She saw them all the time, they are everywhere,” explains her mother when the little girl sleeps on the ground alongside Hungary’s closed border. Now she does not draw at all. The family brought neither paper nor crayons with them on their flight. Shehd does not play anymore either. The escape has forced children to become adults and share concern for what happens in an hour or a day. The family has had difficulty finding food during their wandering. Some days they have had to make do with apples they were able to pick from trees along the road. If the family had known how hard the journey would be they would have chosen to risk their lives in Syria.
Since 2011, more than 4 million Syrians have been forced from their homes in the face of the ongoing war in the country. Roughly half of them are children.
Swedish photographer and twice-winner of the World Press Photo awards Magnus Wennman has been photographing Syrian refugees in refugee camps across the Middle East and on journeys across Europe as they flee a conflict that shows no signs of stopping. His photo project Where the Children Sleep captures the suffering that hundreds of thousands of children caught in bloody war have been subjected to. The caption above written by Wennman.
Magnus Wennman / Aftonbladet /REX Shutterstock
I Wanna Go Home
living in a makeshift shelter for many months
in the severe weather
it's miserable
wet
rains
cold snows
the toddler is too young to understand what's going on
he asks his mother
"mommy
where's daddy
I wanna go home"
she murmured
"I wanna go home too"
she held her son and wept
while thinking of the worst nightmare three years ago
yet
in
the depth
of her mind
as if it just happened yesterday
all
of a sudden
the sound of doomsday
a huge explosion
smoke
fire
flying debris
chaos
people ran, shouted, cried and moaned in panic
everywhere
splattered pools of blood,
scattered fresh, bones, limbs, intestines
strewn body parts
buried
in
rubles
her husband and two older children
she and her baby were injured
but survived the suicide bombers' attack
her people are victims of both homemade terrorism and foreign military intervention
like many asylum seekers from her war-ravaged homeland
she and her little kid have
no way back
no way in
they're stuck at the gate of a safe haven
Thao Chuong
2016-01-14
8 Years Ago
He Walked Me by Glen Lake in a Winter Night
on the backdrop of the hilltop
a crescent moon rose up
like
a silver sickle blade
slicing the murky and starless sky
it was very dark
its
pale light
couldn't penetrate
though the murky night
no moonlight shined on Glen Lake
except artificial light reflected from houses around
it was chilly
when the cold wind blew
it moved those light strings in deep water
and made the dark surface look mystic
the dog and I stood on the public dock
he sniffed on my leg and impatiently whined to remind me
he
must
continue his walk
to warm himself up in this frosty weather
Thao Chuong
2016-01-15
8 Years Ago
Inspired by your posting Viet I wanna go Home and Magnus Wennmans photo.
What are we
Devious, insane, warped, indoctrinated
We take no enemies
Destroy all that is good
That is our past
That has formed us
That has shaped us
That has made us
Our own insular little worlds
No-one can get in
There is no hole
No crack
No space
No chink
To let the light in
To change our set minds
Our warped minds
devious minds
indoctrinated minds
We see no innocence
no goodness
no humanity
no kindness
We only see evil
betrayal
Heathens
Hatred
For this you must not exist
You cannot exist
We will die to ensure
you do not exist
While the innocent sleep
with their eyes
wide
open
JEM 150116
8 Years Ago
Wow Jane! Provoking thought! I would feel the fire in your poetry and high heat from your heart. Who dares say Britons are cold? Lol. Have a great day.
8 Years Ago
Inspired by Jane's poem What are we.
Sundry Thought about Poetry
words
are
much
sharper
than swords
a pen is mightier than any weapon
in a poet's compassionate heart and provoking mind
poetry would have never died
even
after the death of a poet
who dares say poets are just daydreamers?
Thao Chuong
2016-01-15
8 Years Ago
On the Worn Path to the So-called Poetry of Mine
I have to admit
I'm an addict
who always floods screen with words
and nothing else but words
Like an untamed horse galloping on an infinite prairie
my emotion
runs wild,
burns my heart,
radiates though my mind,
then transfers to my punching fingers
I
have
actually
wrecked a couple of keyboards
I often beat around the bush
while my drifting thought
is
pouring out
as fast as compressed water shooting through a leaking dam
Most of the time
I
don't
realize about
what the heck I write
what hell I want to put across
Therefore
I never guess
that my readers would dig up
piles
and piles
of my chaotic words
to find out the essence of my cluttered expression
It's why
I'd like to reveal some clues
about
what's going
on inside my self
by providing the readers with a title for each of my wordy poems
I do hope
they would neither get lost in the labyrinth of my own world
nor waste their valuable time on the so-called poetry of mine
Thao Chuong
2016-01-16
8 Years Ago
Words words words
Reading Viets words
Emotion
Passion
Rhythm
Feeling
Sexy
Heat
Hot
Pouring out
Covering
The page
Screen
Keys
Burning
Fingers flying
Inspirational
Creative
Mindful
Aware
Caring
Loving
Cool
Is that the Viet we know?
JEM 160116
8 Years Ago
@ Jane: Thanks. But your words are too much for me to take. Oh no! "Sexy, Heat, Hot..."..Not me for sure.
Maybe you were talking about your bedtime partner -lol. Have a great day.
8 Years Ago
Alcohol and Sex - the Most Common Relaxation on Weekend
too
chaotic
on weekdays
now the work week ends
I'd better take a good break
and
relax
as much as I can
at least for today
it's weekend
even God granted Himself a day off
after His hard work for the whole weekdays
in His hectic schedule to create
the sun,
the moon,
the stars
the earth
the whole universe
and all beings including the troublesome humans
hard liquor and exotic sex
are
the best
for my relaxation
but the worst combination to take
between the twos
I'd rather sacrifice alcohol
as I might drink too much and get drunk
tomorrow morning
I would get into big trouble
for
being
unable to drive her
to the top of her joy mountain tonight.
Thao Chuong
2016-01-16
8 Years Ago
I'll cut the salutations short, and say g'day chums of the words that decorate a big cake, on a big big plate 😜
A flood of words
Can we meet again
by the river
said a maidens voice
lost in the void of night
as rivers flowed away
Cockatoos gathered in great numbers
birds of all kind sang their songs
a swan swam acrosss the river
where a maiden read
her words aloud
in Winter's melting snow
a river of her words did softly flow
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
8 Years Ago
Lovely Jason :-D.........or is that Lovely, Jason?
Fruity little number
You GRAPE all day about this and that
I'd GUAVA have fleas than listen to you
It's all sour LEMONS
Be GRAPEFRUIT you have your health
Light your CHINESE LANTERN
The big ORANGE one
KUMQUAT down here next to me
We make a right old PEAR
Let me PEACH you how
MANGOES through life
Being CHERRY
JEM 170116
8 Years Ago
indeed. out of war must come peace unless we all are to die.
Dazed
Let the daze continue
let it mellow in strange wonder
and seep out upon the smiles
no shallow truths are needed in this distant farthest tread
No clattering keys
and stubborn pens
just endless walks
Searches, across ridges and peaks
deepnes in the journey
dust offers more
just let go
and go!... .
as the clatter is but a distant sound...
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
on horseback
Jane, whenever you can, why not write abot your times in Africa, poems of an Asian in Africa would be fascinating. pardon my intrusion though.
8 Years Ago
Good morning. Thank you for sharing your thought. It's nice to read your unique perspective.
@ Jason: Good mourning, mate. Ha.a. too many words... Who says poetry is dead? Nice to hear birdsongs in your poem. Wow! Your poem Dazed is so..oowesome! I've read it a couple of time as I felt its liveliness and the positive energy from it.
@ Jane: Your poem is very yummy! I like the fresh smell.
@ Robert Frank Gabriel: Thanks. Your quote is short but it gave me a lot of thought for the day
@ Tomi Palonen: It's nice to get the rare thought from Finland. I like to visit and see your country someday.
Have a fruitful week to you -all
Here is my echo to to Tomi's thought
Good or Bad Depending on How We Perceive and Use It
whenever the food goes bad
any further delay would make it sourer for sure
either my dog
or
I
could
not consume it
no point to wait any longer for something good coming out of it
however
instead
of
wasting it
I wouldn't dump it in a garbage can
as I hate to pile up the public landfill
I prefer to squeeze something nice out of it
simply
I
follow
my own belief
(not in a sacred god but in a human's decent way of living)
that
nothing is good or bad in its nature
but
how
we perceive it
I'd better see thing without my perceptive prejudice
and
use thing as is
in a way that would benefit the most
in
this specific case
I'd put the putrid food in my compost bin
I know
the flowers
and the vegetables
in my backyard garden
would love this type of organic fertilizer
Thao Chuong
2016-01-18
8 Years Ago
Evening all :-)
Tomi - I love your positive thought
Robert - Must try harder not to be a shadow :-)
Viet - you can keep your putrid meat eeeeew.
Jason - Will think of something just for you.... A white British brought up in Africa and a brief time in Aus - G'day - travelling to Asia ....MMMMM food for thought
8 Years Ago
Where am I ?
A bustling market
A cacophony of noise
Rainbow colours of different cloths
Handfuls of money waving about
Overwhelming sensory overload
Spices, herbs, Fruit, vegetables
Dried fish, fresh fish, cooked fish
Prawns, squid, shellfish
Dried meat, fresh meat, cooked meat
Nothing wasted, heads, ears and innards
Flies everywhere
Laughing, smiling faces, children playing
Shoes, sunglasses, rugs, watches, clocks
Bags and packages carried on heads
Buckets in hands
Squeezing in and out twixt people and stalls
For just a few seconds.....
If I closed my eyes.......
And let my senses carry me.....
Carry me far....
I could be back home.....
I am flying across the Indian Ocean.....
From Burma back to Africa.....
So Similar........ only language separates us
We are the same
Wherever we are
Only some of us have forgotten
Forgotten how to live
Forgotten how to be happy
Forgotten how not to expect
Forgotten how lucky you actually are
JEM 180116
8 Years Ago
When you are really in tune with your goals, nothing can be more transformative than the withdrawal.
8 Years Ago
@Jane: I could visualize and inhale the unique smell pf the market.
@ Leonardo Castro: Welcome and Thanks for sharing your thought.
Have a good night
Psalm 144:4 - "Man is like a mere breath; His days are like a passing shadow." Posted by Robert Frank Gabriel - one day ago
Here is my echo
I Prefer to Put My Entire Life Under the Bright Light of the Sunshine
I know
life is too short
I
am like
a morning dew
shining under a rising sun for awhile
then vaporizing in the thin air almost right away
absolutely
I do not know
what will be going on within the next minute
let alone what will happen tomorrow
however
I know for sure
I could die anytime
(but I'd rather take it whenever it comes
than to live permanently in a great fear
and to pray god to save my soul as you do)
I myself strongly believe in my own self
as a human being
I can live free
and die well
it is I
who can
select the path for me
and fully control my entire life
I don't allow myself to be sunk deep down
into the fearful sea
of the unknown
after
death
no need to remind me
I've already known by myself
what was written
in
Psalm 144:4
"Man is like a mere breath;
His days are like a passing shadow."
life's too short
why shouldn't I make it more joyful and more meaningful
by
putting it
under the bright light of the sunshine
and also under my full control
please go head!
keep dragging yourselves under the holy shadow of your almighty god
by the way
I wish I wouldn't share the burning hell in my next life
with any of you
believers
Thao Chuong
2016-01-18
8 Years Ago
@ J L Meadows: Here is my humorous echo to your somber moment
His Quick Remedy for the Winter Blues
the sun hides itself somewhere behind grey and thick substance
he
could feel
the low ceiling of the sky is sinking down toward his head
and heavily resting on his shoulders
the day is quite dim
no snow
no rain
but
it's chillingly cold
he could feel
as if
his flesh and bones were bitterly frozen into thick ice
he blows some air while trying to rub his freezing hands
and warm
them
up
he feels really down
for no reason at all
maybe
it's just purely a matter of the damned winter
that
tortures him
with its sorrowful rhythms of blues
he keeps dreaming of flying south
like a migrant bird for the warmer weather
in the coming winter
for now
why does he not take a quick remedy?
he could go to an old English pub
takes
some Tequila shots
then picks up a hot Latina
he would easily heat himself up for the whole cold night
to get rid of his winter blues
least
for tonight
Thao Chuong
2016-01-18
8 Years Ago
The Elevator
The box swallows
me,
then moves up down;
down-up;
up-down
until
I'm knocked
unconscious.
Thao Chuong
8 Years Ago
Here we go a poets opportunity in Seattle.
http://www.atlasobscura.com/articles/fleeting-wonders-seattle-is-looking-for-a-poet-to-live-in-a-bridge
8 Years Ago
haha! i say we all move in! build a new bridge of thought.. a poets commune, with alot of sellotape to stick things down with, pens, latops, ipads and phones, u know tins of food, tent, feet... Extra strong bonding with the swinging swivel tilting bridge of poetry. Meet in the middle folks... lets go! (time toilet time precisely and it all goes into the river easily). Nice! Very Nice!
8 Years Ago
Alright Jason I knew you would be up for it.
I can appreciate Seattle doing this, a city dedicated to the Arts.
8 Years Ago
Jim - Love the thought but really....and they think the British are nuts...errr excluding Jason of course... :-P
8 Years Ago
Good moaning all, chuckle, the mourn doth rise as the Spring doth hide, yet in the pokey corners, a spider munches on dinner
Thanks Jane i am appreciative of this moral support, Jane, when the world is insane, Viet can bring us sanity in the form of his dog, being sane can look very abnormal. And on that note a rising bridge looks like a normal place to huddle up in, cooking will never be the same, and as eluded to, having a poo might also be synchronised with the needs of the bridge, omlette flipping, pancake flipping mighe be assisted in fast mode... but i think its more of a slow role over and cling on ...
in the meantime, has anyone been walking their dog? Man's best friend is his dog, reading. surely. ;-)
8 Years Ago
'Allol, Allo.
You are welcome Jason ;-)
Little Jason Horner
Sat in the corner
Of the Seattle Bridge
Writing his prose
Whilst using a hose
To poop into the sea
Down came the spider
To finish his cider
Causing Jason
To lose concentration
Flipping his Omelette
Right into the sea.
JEM 230116
8 Years Ago
Defintely a good morning Jane! lol
echoing another thread earlier this week.. .
Flower
Most flowers are not average
each is creation
a flower or a face.. .
Each one beams
each says
somthing
profound!
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
8 Years Ago
What is?
A pull
A sigh
An ache
A tear
A heart beat
A wanting
A need
A heady rush
grows
into
a warmth
a touch
a hold
a comfort
a piece
of
your
soul
JEM 230115
8 Years Ago
“If you're in trouble, or hurt or need - go to the poor people. They're the only ones that'll help - the only ones.”
John Steinbeck
8 Years Ago
Forgotten how this poem of DH Lawrence stirred up such emotions :
Mountain Lion
CLIMBING through the January snow, into the Lobo canyon
Dark grow the spruce-trees, blue is the balsam, water sounds
still unfrozen, and the trail is still evident.
Men!
Two men!
Men! The only animal in the world to fear!
They hesitate.
We hesitate.
They have a gun.
We have no gun.
Then we all advance, to meet.
Two Mexicans, strangers, emerging out of the dark and snow
and inwardness of the Lobo valley.
What are they doing here on this vanishing trail?
What is he carrying?
Something yellow.
A deer?
_Qué tiene, amigo?
León_--
He smiles, foolishly, as if he were caught doing wrong.
And we smile, foolishly, as if we didn't know.
He is quite gentle and dark-faced.
It is a mountain lion,
A long, long slim cat, yellow like a lioness.
Dead.
He trapped her this morning, he says, smiling foolishly.
Lift up her face,
Her round, bright face, bright as frost.
Her round, fine-fashioned head, with two dead ears;
And stripes in the brilliant frost of her face, sharp, fine
dark rays,
Dark, keen, fine rays in the brilliant frost of her face.
Beautiful dead eyes.
_Hermoso es_!
They go out towards the open;
We go on into the gloom of Lobo.
And above the trees I found her lair,
A hole in the blood-orange brilliant rocks that stick up, a
little cave.
And bones, and twigs, and a perilous ascent.
So, she will never leap up that way again, with the yellow
flash of a mountain lion's long shoot!
And her bright striped frost face will never watch any more,
out of the shadow of the cave in the blood-orange
rock,
Above the trees of the Lobo dark valley-mouth!
Instead, I look out.
And out to the dim of the desert, like a dream, never real;
To the snow of the Sangre de Cristo mountains, the ice of
the mountains of Picoris,
And near across at the opposite steep of snow, green trees
motionless standing in snow, like a Christmas toy.
And I think in this empty world there was room for me
and a mountain lion.
And I think in the world beyond, how easily we might
spare a million or two of humans
And never miss them.
Yet what a gap in the world, the missing white frost face
of that slim yellow mountain lion!
8 Years Ago
echo to Jim
And he, lifting up his eyes on his disciples, said: “Blessed are ye poor, for yours is the kingdom of God. Blessed are ye that hunger now; for you shall be filled. Blessed are ye that weep now, for you shall laugh. Blessed shall you be when men shall hate you, and when they shall separate you, and shall reproach you, and cast out your name as evil, for the Son of man’s sake.” -Lk 6:20-22 DV
Jane, a deeply heart stirring poem!
8 Years Ago
Where is my Viet
Where is my Viet
No not on the end of my legs!
My Viet
My poetry Viet
The one whom writes poetry
Putting everything into perspective
From walking down the street
To the sex life of butterflies
The one whom brings joy
To these pages of his
Posting peoples art
and waxing lyrical about it
Come back Viet
There is nothing to forgive
I will take off those socks
If you will show your face
xx
DANL - WHERE ARE YOU TOO - DON'T LET THE BRITS TAKE OVER XX
8 Years Ago
Just back from a long respite
Yawning, stretching, scratching
Ten days under my blanket tent
Coloring on my Sealy
Emerging into a world
Of pretending artists
Chasing thieves of their work
Scratching
8 Years Ago
ooooh Nicey!
Nice to see you
said the tree
to the passing camper
as the dog pissed on his leg..
the tree laughed
and dropped a branch
oops!
said the flower
as the dog growled
carrying his master home..
and the tree howled in the wind
creeking
creeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek......
dam tree
said the dog
i should have pissed on it
growl..
end of part 1
to be ctd some day...
has viet met his tree? or is it a one year ban? see him then
8 Years Ago
Caihuali Caihuali
Such poetic justice
I could never fathom
Bestowing upon those
Like a fiery dragon
8 Years Ago
An Artist Demise
Stumbling artists
That can't stand
Continue to fall
Begin to crawl
Then never more
Dead
8 Years Ago
Hello Jason DANL
Yawn, scratch, dog fleas
streeeeeetch, scratch, dog fleas
Get up streeeeeeeetch
Go for a pee
Yaaaaaawn, scratch, dog fleas
Streeeeeeeeeeeeetch
Bones creeeeeeeeeak
crack, groaaaaaaaan
Streeeeeeeeeeeetch
Scratch, itch, rub dog fleas
Is that you Viet getting off your Sealy
JEM 270116
8 Years Ago
Leonardo - that evokes many images - I feel a poem coming on :-)
DANL - What do you reckon? I found one pound thirty seven pence down the back of the sofa and 29p in the well in the car. What have you got? Jason, can you copper up for Viet?
8 Years Ago
THIS IS OUR LAND
I feel the wind through my hair
The breeze tells me what is there
My horse is my ears
My watch
My Legs
The earth feeds me
Hydrates me
Clothes me
Nurtures me
And provides shelter
I learn from the land
What I take I return
And only take what I need
I respect
And respect is returned
Strangers, white strangers
Killing the bison
the fields run red with blood
Streams crimson
Bodies decaying
Our land is burned
Our homes are ripped and torched
Bodies
Our women and children
Slain like the bison
This was our land
Where man and beast
Lived side by side in harmony
Now both caged
Fenced in with boundaries
What was that freedom like
With the wind blowing through my hair
Fresh scents, pine, wild flower, sweet honey
Not now
Sulphur,fumes, pesticides, poisons
JEM 270116
8 Years Ago
Jaaaaane... no seances, u can bring back bad spirits that never leave, take note, eeek
i shall double up Danl with another 2p, and another, but a cough and a question, if Viet is banned again, how will we know? hello soldier poet, the gripes of mankind need your attention and detail to his/her desires, pains and grumps lol
lovd that passionate poem Jane, feeling your passion for wild lands
and pardon my animal diggy dog poems, but humour never hurts unless you bust a rib.. ouch
8 Years Ago
Morning All :-)
Am feeling it Jason...just beautiful.
Certainly food for thought hey. As in Lawrence poem we could easily loose a few million people and not miss them but to loose that *white frost face of that slim yellow mountain lion.....
8 Years Ago
The biggest regret people have on their deathbed is that they lived the life expected of them instead of a life true to themselves
8 Years Ago
Jason-
Those who deny the existence of dragons are often devoured by dragons from within.
8 Years Ago
There are many dragons indeed Danl
http://reach-unlimited.com/p/1400441668/the-mystery-of-dragons-in-heaven
8 Years Ago
Morning everyone.
Was a church built as a way of controlling the masses, striking fear into the hearts of people. You will be damned and go to eternal burning hell. The devil will take your soul if you don't believe.
Where did dinosaurs come from millions of years ago when the bible does not go that far back?
8 Years Ago
Jane-
Dinosaurs were created in hell
And emerged in the fiery lava
That covered the world
They were the only to survive
Like sapiens that outlive their destiny
8 Years Ago
im no theologian Jane and DanI
but...
i thought the dinosaurs were all congregating here. sorry but that is the truth. lol no offence i am joking!
8 Years Ago
Jason-
God will continue to punish
Those that work toward Armageddon
Till the day comes when there
Are no more days for anyone
8 Years Ago
Anyone know how many air fresheners it takes to get a dead body smell out of a basement?
Asking for a friend.
8 Years Ago
On Work-Horse Pickups
and
Of Love-Child Trucks
There is the Pickup Truck. He shows a bruised and dented body –
the paint job scratched and worn.
He delivers tools, materials, workers where required, on demand.
A Work-Horse Vehicle, he has to earn his keep to live.
The Love-Child Pickup is quite another kind of thing.
In gray or blue, in black or red, and even sparkling white
and newly-wed, She gleams and preens.
She never toils, but owns a Slave who sweats and labors for Her pleasure.
That Slave is the deluded Man-Child who never comprehends his servitude,
But fancies himself OWNER.
Yet I feel his feelings just a little, because indeed,
the Love-Child – She is lovely.
2015
8 Years Ago
Johannes - great poem and RIP The Land rover Defender. Many great childhood memories in our old blue landies. We loved them.
Jason. Speak for yourself lol.
DANL -Tell your "friend" it depends on what the stench is on. Carpet go burn it somewhere, hard surfaces plenty of soap and bleach, a good hard scrubbing brush and a great deal of elbow grease. I know this also from a "friend".
Viva - Can you speak to Viet and tell him to stop looking in on the sidelines and sulking. Yes we really appreciate that he has kept this discussion open for a year, yes we apologise we did not organise a party and wish him Happy Birthday and yes we are missing him.
Love ya Viet 😆�🍻🍹🍷🍷🍹🍸🍻🍹🍻🐵 🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸🍸🍦🍰🍹🍹🍹
8 Years Ago
Sometimes I sit quietly and wonder why I am not in a mental asylum.
Then I take a good look around at everyone
And realize that I am.
8 Years Ago
IDK but he's not posted at F/b also, I think......all will become clear. Could be weather affecting the grid there.
Yesterday, here, one could not go out....the most magnificent electrical storm....knocked out even good people's connections.....
The heavy black thunderous clouds literally rolled through at street level !
8 Years Ago
Echo me
I called down from a mountain
I echoed through a canyon
Am I a person place or thing
some kind of noun
or a pronoun
please answer me back
echo echo echo
I hope it is not emptiness
I don’t like caves
Jim Taylor 2/1/16
8 Years Ago
Where o where is the Viet
Did he bend over and smell his feet
Made him pass out
Oh no you shout
He'll be out for weeks now our Viet
8 Years Ago
Leonardo - Very true!
Jim - Can you yodel? I always wanted to but never could - sounds more like a strangled cat!!
Jason - You disappeared down the same hole as Viet?
W H E R E A R E Y O U V I E T ?
I looked in his Zen garden
Under the wood
In the pond
Round the rocks
in the shrubs
In the shed
Under the shed
In the trash can
Up the tree
Behind the hedge
No sign there
In the house
In the cupboards
Under the beds
In the bathroom
Everywhere
Nowhere
was Viet to be found
Wait..............
there amongst the paper
in colourful profusion
Carefully glued
Within the summer collage
A picture......
A picture of Viet
Sitting right there
On his favourite seat
Within his own little zen garden
JEM 030216
8 Years Ago
In search of missing poets...
"No sign of him down here, dear"
'less hes tiny, very small
mere one inch tall..
I'm just so tall...!
said the poet
and Alice
Zen is when
the rabbit follows
Alice chuckled
hysterically
Meanwhile, back at the ranch house...
alarm bells were ringing
as others with big smiles played with mirrors
they cracked
like the pots they were
but no one believes
in hell
when it arrives
playing their endless mind games
the mad hatters confused themselves even more
blame that rabbit!
That will do!
still, said Alice
tea is more, when
poured on the floor
we can swim in it...
and that was the mad hatters
tea party
from hell
with a rabbit
drowned in endless tea
where no one
could find
the golden key...
just another day
down the rabbit hole
good bye
said Alice
standing on the pot
till next time...
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
a silly nonsense parody of poets
8 Years Ago
It is during the worst times of your life
That you get to see the true colors
Of the people who say they like your art
8 Years Ago
There is a pretty short path between tolerance and naivety that also separates determination from arrogance.
8 Years Ago
Jason - Glad to see you back in full force lol
DANL - Its amazing how quickly yours friends disappear when you have nothing to offer. True friends remain.
Viet - you have been away two weeks now....long enough - its hard writing a poem a day :-P
8 Years Ago
My new poem
please read my new poem
it wont take long
stepping out and shining
like a pair of new shoes
sparkling with spontaneity
step right up
it’s a free lunch
requires no real concentration
or any obligation
in less than a minute
you can go back to
saving a dog
saving a cat
maybe saving a real person
in that old world
if you are in traffic
stop for the red
I hope then it gets read
if you read this poem
then you read my new poem
Thank You
Jim Taylor 2/4/16
8 Years Ago
JIM - I like your new poem it helps you stop and clear your mind :-)
Good Night All
Sleep well
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jane for reading my new poem and helping me clear my head of any cobwebs.
Jason you must live by a pond and know frog language and poetry.
I always wondered about all the croaking, mating season I guess.
8 Years Ago
Two frogs by a pond...
ribit...
plop!
"Hes either on a long ban, been assssinated, been kept prisoner, blackmailed, is in a coffin keeping warm with Ed or compiling another book. As no one has informed us either way, i have no idea."
croaked mr frog
ribit
plop!
and out they swam... . .
8 Years Ago
Perhaps Viet is undergoing a sex change...and that brings up this fact:
The reason men have nipples is because all embryos start out as females in the womb.
Looks like Bruce Jenner had a jump on things!
8 Years Ago
on gender...
ovaries and balls start off the same in the developing baby. only once they decend into the scrotum does the ball appear. Gender is far more complex than most think. High testosterone in the womb can masculanise a developing female baby's brain. high or low hormones in the womb and baby..the gender of neurological connections, brain development.. is it always in sync? X, Y, XX, XY, XXY, XYY, some chromosomal rearrangements, genes missing, others expressing low, receptors likewise, over expressed, undeer expressed, childhood of complexity, puberty sees changes and puff your gay, trans, bi, and dont forget, its quite natural for a small number to have both features!! born that way then reassigned
so was that a crime?
edited
8 Years Ago
Left Alone
I got home early
Set the scene
Moonlight and candles
Scents and wine
Low music
Low dress
Glass of wine to chill, relax
Start to feel nervous
I don’t know why
Time slips by
I walk the floor
Glass in hand
A wrench rips my heart
An ache a pain
Growing
Tearing
I tremble like I’m cold
Feeling so nervous
I don’t know why
As time slips by
I pour another glass
A wave of nausea
My soul is ripped open
Wide, Laid bare
Cold
Exposed
I’m shaking, hurting, aching
Feeling so nervous
I don’t know why
As time slips by
The wine long gone
The glass is empty
The feeling is so strong
Known all along
Left
Alone
He thinks he’s found another
Feeling sick to the core
I do know why
Womens intuition
JEM 050216
8 Years Ago
oh Jane, a powerful hit on the heart, hugs to you
the journey is full of winding bends, Summer roads, Winter chills with endless storms, but Spring can lift your heart
listen to the birds
each one, a song just for you!
Happy new year of the monkey everybody!
i feel i should sing
why wallow
and dont forget the orangutans
that ancient orange man
of the orange jungle tree...
he wishes for a happy new year too...
happy jungles are made to keep, help keep the lands green
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
8 Years Ago
The job of the artist is to create anew
Feeding from what does not exist
Regurgitating it on canvas
Or starve
8 Years Ago
DANL- love the analogy
Jason - Cannot bear to think what it would be like without our green ...and orange utan! They are letting the large house building companies up here buy swathes of green belt to build more homes instead of telling them to use brown belt - its sickening. Thanks for the hug :-)
VIET - Really hope everything is okay - you are making me worry.
8 Years Ago
The measure of a civilization of the nation is how it treats its artists.
Cheers to all; and, the most productive weekend!
Irina Sztukowski
http://www.artirina.com/
8 Years Ago
Hi All - Viet is taking a sabbatical! He is away contemplating his navel - He is well. Enjoy the break Viet :-)
8 Years Ago
Thanks for the update Jane!...
mind you, i thought cucumbers were far more aqueous~95%
http://www.answers.com/Q/How_much_water_does_a_cucumber_contain
Dog walk - a poets walk
The poet, walked by his dog
sniffing at the road...
an endless walk
sniff
sniffed the dog
searching for home...
"I'm sure", said the garden tree
im sure, he will be back, from walking his dog
perhaps he walked a thousand miles
and ten more, of those thousand miles..
but the road winds and winds
on around, and on, around the world
from west to east
and back around, from east to west
and homeward bound, once more, again..
the poet, walked by an old dog
sniffing at the road...
an endless walk
sniff
sniffed the dog
searching for home...
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
8 Years Ago
Thought of the morning....
"Life is like a roll of toilet paper.
The closer it gets to the end, the faster it goes."
8 Years Ago
Danl, my cell phone battery also looks like a roll of toilet paper. :/
My quote of the day: Be careful when combining creativity, sensitivity and power of observation.
8 Years Ago
echoes to echoes
its a beautiful day Jane, Spring sprung very early, by my flat the cherry blossom has been in fullflower since the first week of January, and many of the magnolia have popped into full bloom last week, the trees outside my window make me smile, a very very early Spring, i saw dafodilfs in full december bloom... Even after snowfall a few weeks ago, and the nr 100 mph storm and pelting rain 2 days ago, and the sharp frost last night, the flowers are stunning, holding tight, few have dropped... how much longer will the flowers last?
Thud!
oops there fell a cat
having a poop
i swear it was using toilet roll in the tree...
lol
still
its a wonder dogs dont have compulsory nappies
in Spring
when you're nuts!
crazy days
its these shrubs with orange berries that keep catching my eye, ive never really noticed them til last Autumn, absolute abundance, 1000s of berries in ripe fullness all through Autumn and months of Winter later...
8 Years Ago
DANL: Where is your happy thought lol. It is true though
Leonardo: HI :-) It is too early I the morning for me to get my head round that lol.
Jason: Ah Spring. There was light still in the sky here last night at 6 PM, and light in the sky at 6:45 am. Your magnolia are out, our neighbours tree is in early blossom. Life is looking bright again. Wonder what those berries are...did you photograph them.
Spring is springing
Birds are singing
Owners should be bagging
What their dogs are pooping
THUD
Cats are digging
And then covering
No need for toilet paper here
Ooops end of the roll.
8 Years Ago
Jane....on a lighter note
Slowly and with a tone of gloom and doom
The ponderous clock begins striking
It's hands spinning faster and faster
Until the lid is closed and then silence
8 Years Ago
L Tresham - Could not agree with you more! It has been one hell of a long week
DANL - Lol - I am going to have to do something with your morose thoughts ! My life is flying by and then SLAM! -(Apart from this week at work....its been a looooong one!)
Have a fantabulous weekend one and all xx
8 Years Ago
Jane! I did achieve my goal: I had a very productive week. Created, marketed, sold :)
Thank you very much for good thoughts!
Cheers!
Live to Create!
Irina
http://www.artiriina.com/
My thought of the day:
"Life is Good, and will be even GOODA!" :)
8 Years Ago
Thought of the Morning-
"Thinking that you are a good artist
Is like a sundial in the shade"
8 Years Ago
Thank you all sharing your thoughts while I was in winter hibernation. There have been a lot of interesting thoughts, while I was taking my long nap. I really appreciate Jane, Vivian, Jason, and Danl for your PMs that woke me up. It is likely that Jane. Jason, and Danl have enjoyed a great time. Keep having your fun time here!.
8 Years Ago
The Workweek & The Weekend
(The TGIF Series)
worse
than
an old car
being about out of gas
slowly crawling on a curving road to the summit of a high mountain
they're
extremely exhausted
physically and mentally worn out
so
hectic
and stressful
that they feel
as if time would have stood still on its feet
it's likely a workweek often lasts longer than a century
finally, they sigh with quite a relief
here
comes
a weekend
after every five workdays
which they have always awaited
they're so happy for such a short break
just barely enough to catch their breaths
not
sufficient
to recharge their full energy for the next round
it's ironic
for modern man
to keep taking this sadistic cycle as his living norm
what does he sell his time for?
why the heck has he voluntarily sacrificed his life for the so-called "making a living"?
Thao Chuong
2016-02-13
8 Years Ago
Welcome back Viet! may the force be with you!
well at least now we know for sure u werent kidnapped or assassinated lol
Jane has been keeping everyone in order
😜
8 Years Ago
YOO HOO - Viet is back - Hard work keeping a blog going Viet - I take my hat off to you - missed ya. :-)
Off to Cuba in a few weeks time - sorry to say this, but have to go there before it gets Americanised - Great big KFC signs, McDonalds on street corners, Disney Chez for sale, everything fake like Chinese goods. Please don't take offence anyone...it is just the way it is. 😨🙌💩👯👅👑👙💰💳💲🎆🎃🎠🎪🍟🍕🍗
8 Years Ago
Thanks to you - Jason and Jane for the welcoming red carpet (lol). Jason, Danl, and Jane are the sailing team that has kept this pirate ship on its course.
Aye Captain Jane! Please say hello to my antique comrade Fidel Castro. This old guard must be mad to see those Gringos roaming his communist's sacred mecca (lol)
8 Years Ago
Money and Health
(The TGIF Series)
man trends to spend most of his living time
to
work
for more
and more money
he risks his health to secure a better and better living
he utterly forgets
regardless
how luxury his lifestyle would be
and how much money he could have
when he gets terminal illness
it is not possible
for him
to
buy back
any of his health lost
what's the point of selling his valuable living time even for billions of bucks?
Thao Chuong
2016-13-02
8 Years Ago
My thought for today:
"When life gives you a lemon - paint it!"
Cheers!
Irina
http://irina-sztukowski.pixels.com/featured/dancing-lemons-and-blossoms-irina-sztukowski.html
8 Years Ago
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY EVERYONE xx
Viet: Loving your New Year Resolutions.
Double dipping is allowed
As long as you only do it twice
Drinking from the bottle is allowed
As long as you wipe
the top with your hand
You can lick your spoon
And put it back in the jar
Sugar is a preservative
Just don't put your fingers
on the cheese
It will go mouldy
JEM 140216
8 Years Ago
A Valentine Day quote -
"Not everyone can be a great artist. But everyone can be a photographer".
Ramos Delos
8 Years Ago
Not much thought in my head, except Hearts and Flowers.. Having my first cup of coffee.. :)
Ok, there is one:
The main rule of watercolor: Don't dip your brush in your Coffee!
:0)
http://www.artirina.com/
8 Years Ago
Thanks Irina, Jane, and Danl for sharing your thought. Have a great day ir a good night to you all.
Here is an echo to Irina's and Danl's thoughts about fine art and artists.
In the Blind Eyes of the Beholders
driftwoods washed ashore
seashells staying lifeless on a beach
pebbles lying still on a riverbed
cloud drifting in an azure sky on sunset
moonlight shining on a lake in a cold night
the splendour of nature would be gone away - unnoticed
if it hasn't been explored. inspired, captured , and recreated
by
the imaginative minds,
the obsessive hearts,
and the artistic hands
of
those skilful creators
beauty in fine art
must
be
always in the creative vision of an artist
not in the eyes of any blind beholder
as frequently
being used
by
those incompetent amateurs
in cheap defense for their uncreative and crappy creation
Thao Chuong
2016-14-02
8 Years Ago
good moaning everyone!
peace be with you
belated happy V day Jane, sort the world out please
Viet, you have skimmed those pebbles upon the lake of life
Irina, colourful coffee! 🤓
a passing thought for today...
and remember...
some destinies are created, whilst others are taken away
in Heaven!
others are simply stolen and destroyed by humankind!
some are destroyed or taken by the dark demon lord some worship
- destroyed by overwhelming greed and prejudice and hate
edited
8 Years Ago
Helloooooooooo one and All
God Moaning good moaning - we all like a good moan - never happy, always wanting, never our own fault always someone else' - too true Jason.
People only get upset when it affects them visibly and directly. If only they went through life with a great big spike in front of them, it would teach them to walk more carefully.
Question: If we ruled the world would power, avarice, deceit and slothfulness take over us too?
8 Years Ago
Good evening all
@Danl: Haa...Poor our mother nature who has to wipe out our dirty butts and to clean up our messy stuffs
@ Vivian: Thank you very much, my friend. I would have still slept in my den, if you didn't wake me up -lol.
@ Jason: Opp! Lucky me to read your poetic flow, before it was blown away by the cyclone of your hands -lol. Your thought about religion is unique and interesting. I hope next time you would leave it for readers to enjoy. God moaning, mate.
@ Jane: If you ruled the world, I would have endless goat moaning for your iron reign -lol
Here is my humorous echo to Irena's thought about her love of art : "When life gives you a lemon - paint it!"
What is Your Creative Answer?
you're so artistic and imaginative
in
your
thought about your love of painting
"when life gives you a lemon "
you're able to transform it onto a piece of art
may I ask
if I gave you my heart
what would you do?
would
you
write song lyrics about it,
paint your love on canvas,
or just shout at me to get the hell out of your way?
Thao Chuong
2016-15-02
8 Years Ago
Here is my late echo to Jane's poem posted on the Valentine Day.
My Labour of Love for Her on Valentine Day
I had been waiting for one of our most romantic nights of the year
with candle lights
fine wine
hot sex
by
the fire
out of the blue - she calmly said:
"honey
no dining out
no fancy roses
no expensive gifts
no tiring long flights
no easy-weigh gaining trips on cruise ships
no Bali
no Paris
no Puerto Vallarta,...
stop bribing me with those fancy stuffs"
while I was wondering what had I done so wrong for many years?
she looked at my shocking face
paused
for a second
then clarified her peculiar point of view
"I appreciate what you have done for me so far
would you mind doing something else different on this Valentine Day?
I
do
need
your labour of love"
"no big deal at all!"
I said while smiling at her
as I had a dirty thought from my misinterpretation of her request
I was mistakenly thinking of
her
asking me
to sweat to the last drop of my body fluids for her in bed tonight
actually
it turned out
I had to work non-stop nearly the whole day
doing the laundry,
washing the dishes,
cleaning the stove,
scrubbing the oven
and doing many other household chores
what was the hell of a day
by
the time
I finished cooking the dinner
I was so exhausted that I wished
if I could drop right on my knees for a quick nap
the food was horrible
even my dog didn't wanna touch it
she ate it without a slight complaint
after
the dinner
I became so tired to sleep through out the night as a piece of rock
lucky me
she didn't wake me up for any round of a mattress fight in bed
it was my most memorable Valentine ever
yet
at least
I have learned
that
I tend to make a big deal out of what I've done for her only once a year
while she has been giving me her endless "labour of love"
now
I know
I have been taking her for granted
I must appreciate her for what she has done so far
not
only
in a single day
but in three hundred sixty-five days per year
for so many years of our "rock-and-roll" marriage
Thao Chuong
2016--15-02
8 Years Ago
Sorry bout that Viet, many transient thoughts go through my head.. besides some people might be offended by my words of folly in the world of sin and truths.. if they have the depth of a sheeet of paper!.. the wurds are but decorations slipping off the edge, just psuh em back on a bit.... . oops there dropped another!.. . . .
Frost of Winter
A man pointed at the heavens
scowling his discontents
Fool !
shouted the ghost of Winter
Crystal white
shivered the land
And the haunting
began...
brrruh!
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
lol Viet and Jane are best Valetines
please gargle first lol
8 Years Ago
No matter how hard you try
It is not meant to be
Don't be a prisoner
Escape your destiny
8 Years Ago
Viet
Why do you men only appreciate what we do for you when we all get too old?
If men grew breasts
If men grew breasts
Would they play or complain
If men had periods
Would women gain headaches
from all the moaning he would do,
of painful breasts
and the mood swings
If men got pregnant
The female pill would be available
If men suffered hot flushes
Night sweats, lack of sleep
Threats of osteoporosis
Breast cancers, HRT and the rest
Would they want to come back as women?
JEM 160216
8 Years Ago
Good evening. Thank you for sharing your interesting thought
@ Danl: "Viet- If you gave me your heart...that would mean I will have only one heart".
So did you give her your heart or did she rob it from you?. To be safe and sound. you'd better learn the way that those photographers do with their photo by "digitalizing" your heart and save it into a hard drive or make limited prints of your heart. So you can distribute those clones and keep the master copy of your heart -lol.
@ Jason: No need to say sorry, mate. I think that artists, writers, poets, and people in general must be able to freely express their thoughts in writings without any slight fear of being persecuted by the authorities or by those offended viewers/readers/listeners. I enjoy reading your original writing. I've found that so often your prompt reaction often reflects your true emotion and raw thinking from your heart and mind.
@ Jane: Males generally appreciate (or appreciated) the beauty of females when those females are (or were) young and fresh. Older males appreciate their female partners even more. Because mature females are like ripen fruits, they have more flavours and taste better with nicer textures. I guess same sex partners might appreciate each other even in a more comprehensive way. Simply because, physically and mentally they share the commons of of the same sex.
Have a good night to you all.
8 Years Ago
It Could Be the Answer to Love and Sex
don't give me your heart
it's extremely fragile
I
might
break it
before you slip into the puddle of love
don't give your love
it 's too dedicated
tough
for me
to take care of it
at the same level
as you've expected
if you don't mind
once in awhile
give me your casual smile
to warm my day up
like
the sunshine
coming and going
without commitment
either love or sex
would
tie myself up
right at this moment
I need my total freedom
pass me a lemon
it's what
I need
for my alcoholic drink
like
drunken Li Po
(the Chinese ancient poet)
I wanna jump
right into the river of time
to catch the full moon of modern life
Thao Chuong
2016-16-02
8 Years Ago
My brain has no heart
My heart has no brain
So when I speak my mind
I seem heartless
And when I speak my heart
I seem mindless
8 Years Ago
Good morning
@ Jane. Thanks How nice of you to say so!
@ Danl: Thanks for sharing your interesting verse. What's a great one. I love it.
Your thought is so provoking that I had to delay my morning walk this morning to put my mind back on track first -lol.
Here is the response to your thought from my wandering mind
Between the Heartless Mind and the Mindless Heart
Fortunately, there're a mind and a heart
inside every human being
too bad
so
often
man can't use both at the same time
He who tends to think purely based on logical facts from his mind
is
sensibly
heartless
in his decision
he could be at his best in science
He who prefers to listen only to his heart
often
comes
to wrong conclusions
in his mindless thinking
like a train derailed from its track
he could be a grand master in art
He who
neither thinks from his mind
nor listens to his heart
loves to go by the book
and strictly follows by the rules
he must be the worst bureaucrat
with
whom
nobody wants to deal
Only
he who
thinks with his mind
and goes for his heart
is
a balanced
human being
he might not be at his best in whatever he does
however he is generally happy
as he easily laughs and cries
to the natural follow
of love and life
Thao Chuong
2016-17-02
8 Years Ago
Why aren't the world's leading artists in these discussions
Sharing their woes and inhibitions for all to read
Chasing copyright thieves and asking the same questions
Maybe that's why they are where they are
8 Years Ago
@ Danl: Those world leading artists must have been extremely busy to market their art. They even have had no time to do art. -lol
Have a good night to everyone
Of Love
Love is a one way street
that leads to the unknown
with no way
back
Love is a waterfall
that keeps falling down forever
and never going up
again
Love is a bottomless bag
that
always takes
but could ever be satisfactorily full
Love
is
opium to the heart
obsession to the mind
incarceration to the soul
addiction to the life
but
without love
humans' existence would be absolutely meaningless
Thao Chuong
2016-017-02
8 Years Ago
Thank you Viet Tran for some excellent poetry with my paintings and others.
I'm really enjoying this during my break.
8 Years Ago
Good morning Lisa. It's nice to see your bright smile. Have a nice day,
Could I Avoid the Unavoidable in My Living?
living is taking risk
even I'm scared the hell out of it
just a matter of time
sooner
or later
it'll come and hit me
at my most unexpected moment
no point to keep burying my head in the sand
at
least
I could look at it through its bloodily cold heart
and deal with it
in
a way
that somewhat would benefit me
isn't
it
better?
either would I take it as is
or I could try to change its course
and squeeze some juice out of it
no other way round
unless
I
want to get rid all of my living risks at once
by taking an early checkout from this world
then
how would I know for sure
if there ain't more risks in the next life
Thao Chuong
2016-18-02
8 Years Ago
I have a new quote for each year. I learn it, memorize it, and live by it as best I can. My quote for the year is:
Fear stands for:
Face Everything and Rise
8 Years Ago
I have a new quote for each year. I learn it, memorize it, and live by it as best I can. My quote for the year is:
Fear stands for:
Face Everything and Rise
8 Years Ago
@ Jill Love: Thanks for sharing your unique quote of the year. It has provoked some thoughts in my mind.
The Game O' Life
Life is a mandatory gamble
no one could be excluded
except those early bankruptcies
If
I refuse to play
automatically
I become a loser
Even
if
I'm smart enough
and also work really hard for it
still
no guarantee
that I would be the winner
Consequently, the one who cares a lot about win or loss
is
the one
who suffers the most
even before he starts the game
Instead
of
sitting by the roadside and breathing dirt
wouldn't I better participate in
and have some fun with
the game
of
life ?
Thao Chuong
2016-18-02
8 Years Ago
Morning all
If life was a pizza and you had a choice of four toppings what would they be?
The roots are firm
The trunk is solid
The limbs are wiry and flexible
The leaves are soft
A wise old owl sits atop
JEM 190216
8 Years Ago
Good moaning all
@ Jane. Thanks for your nice poem that offers me a relaxing mood for weekend. Enjoy your sound sleep with yummy dream of a pizza with four toppings: the first topping: Monday off, the second topping : no work Tuesday, the third topping: Wednesday on a beach, the fourth topping: calling sick Thursday. Then you need no more topping as you will hit "the TGIFriday" -lol
Have a restful weekend to all
My thought on Friday
To Work for a Living
(The TGIF Series)
every modern man
must
spend
most of his living time for work
it's disastrous for him to lose his job
ironically insane
no
time left
for him to live his life
human is mortally fragile
he might hit the unexpected exit
at
anytime
long before
he reaches his retirement age
to work for a living
is
actually
to suffer a slow death
bit
by bit
day after day
could any of you who have worked full-time
have asked yourselves the simple question
why do you need
to
make
a living
while you're still kicking alive?
Thao Chuong
2016-19-02
8 Years Ago
An echo to Jane's poem
Of Owls
deep inside rain forests
far away from the civilized world
out of reach from intruders and predators
high
up
on tops of giant Douglas firs
wild owls built their nests
very
safe and sound
'til
no trees left
all forests were ruthlessly clear-cut for huge profits
those wild owls now share the cities with humans
night
after night
they whine in the same pitch
"who
who...
who destroyed our safe homes?"
Thao Chuong
2016-19-02
8 Years Ago
Work is the greatest thing
We should savor it and enjoy it
Putting it aside each day
To enjoy in the future
8 Years Ago
Hi Danl: Thank you very much for sharing your thought. Without regular contributions from artists like you, this thread would be very boring.. I would prefer this thread go with the free flow of instant thoughts by other artists or I would close it in case there are lack of interests. Personally, I don`t really enjoy talking to myself alone like a broken record here -LOL
I enjoy and appreciate the diversity of humans`thinking process. Have a nice day to all.
Of Man and Endangered Species
giant trees with huge trunks
in the old-growth forests
firmly
rooted
in soil and rock
defied cruel challenges of weather
survived the tsunami of time
but could not stand the iron hands of humans
traditional habitats for many species
and wildlife colonies
of
endless
generations
in many centuries
had been increasingly become the lost world
serene nature is vanished in the roaring sounds of destruction
man has kept using his powerful weapons
to declare endless wars
against
his
own
mother nature
one
by one
all giant trees have gone
old-growth forests have been clear cut
many species have become extinct
not much green space left for wild animals to roam
now they're contained in the modern habitats
city zoos and the so-called national wildlife parks
built
by
civilized humans
to show off their high pride
in preserving endangered species and saving the environment
Thao Chuong
2016-20-02
8 Years Ago
Good Evening Viet - How very true. To talk to oneself is it not the first sign of madness?
DANL - I certainly wish I could put work to one side to enjoy in the future - I do not have that luxury yet.
Has Jason gone AWOL now - Viet don't you be setting a new trend.
Gone are the days when beasts roamed free, now they are in reservations like the traditional people whom
revered the earth and what it bestowed upon us. The white man came and carved up the land, giving it names
and claiming it for his own. Murdering what ever was upon it, man or beast, and so it continues...
8 Years Ago
Breaking Through
If I were a bird I’d lay an egg
if I was in an egg I’d break out
a painter paints an egg camouflage
he hides the egg carefully
the child hunts the egg
the child finds the egg
the bird lays the egg
hoping it is not found
the baby bird breaks through
setting aside any barriers
Jim Taylor 2/20/16
8 Years Ago
Good evening
@ Jane: Haa. Talking to oneself is a sign of either confusion or insanity. Maybe I am suffering both -LOL. What type of new trend that you were referring to, my friend?
@ Jim: Nice you see you around and read your poem with very unique perspective.
Have a restful weekend
8 Years Ago
My thought from Jane McGowan's challenging poem : If men grew breasts
Gender Curiosity
She wonders what would happen to men
if
they
grew breasts
had monthly period
got pregnant for nine months and ten days
then painfully gave birth to a full-sized baby
To tell the truth
I have to admit
as
a man
I`ve never been in her shoes
so I have no clue whether
she suffers or enjoys
of
being
a female
However, I myself believe
if I were a woman
I would know for sure
I would be treated like a queen
I would have all the headache free
men would be dearly in love with me
They must patiently lend their ears
whenever I want to complain
they would love to be voluntarily
under
my full control
Furthermore
I
would
no longer
be a suffered man
who is in love with, and serving, any woman throughout his entire life
Now I wonder what would happen to a woman
if
she
grew a penis
in term of love and sex
how much headache she would endure from it
Thao Chuong
2016-20-02
I repost her poem for your reference.
If men grew breasts
If men grew breasts
Would they play or complain
If men had periods
Would women gain headaches
from all the moaning he would do,
of painful breasts
and the mood swings
If men got pregnant
The female pill would be available
If men suffered hot flushes
Night sweats, lack of sleep
Threats of osteoporosis
Breast cancers, HRT and the rest
Would they want to come back as women?
JEM 160216
8 Years Ago
Ha Viet - If that is the best you can do as a man and all you have to compare with is a penis women win hands down. Apparently men are the bain of our lives.....MEN opause, MEN struation, apparently the list is longer but it is passed my bedtime and I am beyond thinking lol.
DANL - they are only mans best friend if the owner allows them to be lol.
Hi Jim - nice to see you back in in full form
8 Years Ago
Good evening
@ Danl: Ha.. You've made me laugh aloud with your humorous metaphor. It's probably happen "Only In My World" -lol
@ Jane: MEN-opause, MEN-struation... Now I know why women often blame MEN for their physical and mental problems...lol. I do hope those angry feminists would be horribly upset at my little joke.
Here is my echo to Jim's poem Breaking Through
Humans and Eggs
When an egg is cracked
there is always a breakthrough
For better
or
worse
it could be transformed
into an omelette on a plate for breakfast
or a baby bird would come out into life
and be raised in a cage
then butchered
for
dinner
How an egg is cracked
or
what
the heck
it would be transformed
it don't make any difference
an egg is an egg and nothing but an egg
So long as human has his own interests fully served
he dun't care
even all other beings on earth could greatly suffer
for his own skin
it's the pure reason
why humans are sitting on top of the food chain
Thao Chuong
2016-21-02
8 Years Ago
Jane-
As a wise old philosopher once said....beautiful plums quickly turn into shriveled prunes
8 Years Ago
my thought of today
the best and most profound reason for having, and being part of, a European union, is to avoid all of this-
List of conflicts in Europe
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Contents
1 BC
2 1st–10th century AD
3 11th century
4 12th century
5 13th century
6 14th century
7 15th century
8 16th century
9 17th century
10 18th century
11 19th century
12 20th century
13 21st century
14 See also
15 References
BC
circa 5000 BC Talheim Death Pit
circa 1104–900 BC Dorian invasion
circa 753–351 BC Roman-Etruscan Wars
circa 753–494 BC Roman-Sabine wars
743–724 BC First Messenian War
710–650 BC Lelantine War
circa 700–601 BC Alban war with Rome
685–668 BC Second Messenian War
669–668 BC Sparta-Argos war
600–265 BC Greek–Punic Wars
595–585 BC First Sacred War
560 BC Second Arcadian War
540 BC Battle of Alalia
538–522 BC Polycrates wars
509–396 BC Early Italian campaigns
500–499 BC Persian invasion of Naxos
492–490 BC First Persian War
482–479 BC Second Persian War
480–307 BC Sicilian Wars
460–445 BC First Peloponnesian War
449–448 BC Second Sacred War
440–439 BC Samian War
431–404 BC Second Peloponnesian War
395–387 BC Corinthian War
390–387 BC Celtic invasion of Italia
335 BC Alexander's Balkan campaign
323–322 BC Lamian War
280–275 BC Pyrrhic War
267–261 BC Chremonidean War
264–241 BC First Punic War
229–228 BC Illyrian Wars
220–219 BC Illyrian Wars
218–201 BC Second Punic War
214–205 BC First Macedonian War
200–197 BC Second Macedonian War
191–189 BC Aetolian War
171–168 BC Third Macedonian War
135–132 BC First Servile War
113–101 BC Cimbrian War
113 BC – CE 439 Germanic Wars
104–100 BC Second Servile War
91–88 BC Social War
88–87 BC Sulla's first civil war
85 BC Colchis Uprising against Pontus
83–72 BC Sertorian War
82–81 BC Sulla's second civil war
78 BC Marcus Aemilius Lepidus
73–71 BC Third Servile War
65–63 BC Caucasian Iberian-Roman war
63–62 BC Catiline Conspiracy
55–54 BC Caesar's invasions of Britain
58–51 BC Gallic Wars
49–45 BC Caesar's Civil War
44–36 BC Sicilian revolt
43 BC Battle of Mutina
43–42 BC Liberators' civil war
41–40 BC Perusine War
32–30 BC Final War of the Roman Republic
1st–10th century AD
Battle of the Milvian Bridge, 312
Battle of the Hellespont, 324
35-41 Iberian-Parthian war
49–96 Roman conquest of Britain
51 Iberian-Armenian war
69 Year of the Four Emperors
193 Year of the Five Emperors
208–210 Roman invasion of Caledoni
238 Year of the Six Emperors
271–278 Colchis–Roman War
284–285 Roman civil war
306–324 Civil wars of the Tetrarchy
350–351 Roman civil war
360–361 Roman civil war
367–368 Great Conspiracy
376–382 Gothic War
387–388 Roman civil war
394 Roman civil war of 394 AD
482–484 Iberian-Persian War
526–532 Iberian War
535–554 Gothic War
541–562 Lazic War
582–602 Maurice's Balkan campaigns
c. 600–793 Frisian–Frankish wars
650–799 Arab–Khazar wars
680–1355 Byzantine–Bulgarian wars
711–718 Umayyad conquest of Hispania
715–718 Frankish Civil War (715–718)
722–1492 Reconquista
735–737 Georgian-Umayyad Caliphate War
772–804 Saxon Wars
c. 800/862–973 Hungarian invasions of Europe
830s Paphlagonian expedition of the Rus'
839–1330 Bulgarian–Serbian Wars
854–1000 Croatian–Bulgarian wars
860 Rus'–Byzantine War
865–878 Invasion of the Great Heathen Army
907 Rus'–Byzantine War
914 Arab-Georgian War
939 Battle of Andernach
941 Rus'–Byzantine War
955 Battle of Recknitz
970–971 Sviatoslav's invasion of Bulgaria
982 Battle of Stilo
983 Great Slav Rising
11th century
Battle of Hastings (1066)
Battle of Gvozd Mountain, 1097
1002–1018 German–Polish War
1014–1208 Byzantine–Georgian wars
1015–1016 Pisan–Genoese expeditions to Sardinia
1015–1016 Cnut's invasion of England
1018 Battle of Vlaardingen
1024 Battle of Listven
1024 Rus'–Byzantine War
1043 Rus'–Byzantine War
1044 Battle of Ménfő
1048–1064 Invasion of Denmark
1050–1185 Byzantine–Norman wars
1057 Battle of Petroe
1060 Battle of the Theben Pass
1066 Norwegian invasion of England
1066–1088 Norman conquest of England
1067–1194 Norman invasion of Wales
1067 Battle on the Nemiga River
1068 Battle of the Alta River
1073–1075 Saxon Rebellion
1075 Revolt of the Earls
1077–1088 Great Saxon Revolt
1078 Battle of Kalavrye
1088 Rebellion of 1088
1093 Battle of Schmilau
1093 Battle of the Stugna River
1097 Battle of Gvozd Mountain
1099-1204 Georgian–Seljuk wars
12th century
Monument of Didgori Battle, Georgia
1109 Battle of Głogów
1115 Battle of Welfesholz
1121 Battle of Didgori
1126 Battle of Chlumec
1130–1240 Civil war era in Norway
1135–54 The Anarchy
1142–1445 Swedish–Novgorodian Wars
1144–1162 Baussenque Wars
1159–1345 Wars of the Guelphs and Ghibellines
1164 Battle of Verchen
1169–1175 Norman invasion of Ireland
1173–1174 Revolt of 1173–74
1185–1204 Uprising of Asen and Peter
1198 Battle of Gisors
13th century
The Battle of Las Navas de Tolosa, 1212
1201 Battle of Stellau
1202 Siege of Zadar
1202–1214 Anglo–French War
1205 Battle of Zawichost
1208–1227 Conquest of Estonia
1209–1229 Albigensian Crusade
1211 Welsh uprising of 1211
1215–1217 First Barons' War
1216–1222 War of Succession of Champagne
1220–1264 Age of the Sturlungs
1223–1241 Mongol invasion of Europe
1223–1480 Tatar raids in Russia
1224 Siege of La Rochelle
1227 Battle of Bornhöved
1231–1233 Friso-Drentic War
1234–1238 Georgian-Molgol War
1239–1245 Teltow War
1242 Saintonge War
1256–1258 War of the Euboeote Succession
1256–1381 Venetian–Genoese Wars
1256–1422 Friso-Hollandic Wars
1260 Battle of Kressenbrunn
1262–1266 Scottish–Norwegian War
1264–1267 Second Barons' War
1265 Battle of Isaszeg
1276 War of Navarra
1277–1280 Uprising of Ivaylo
1278 Battle on the Marchfeld
1282–1302 War of the Sicilian Vespers
1283–1289 War of the Limburg Succession
1288–1295 War of the outlaws
1296–1357 Wars of Scottish Independence
1297-1305 Franco-Flemish War
1298 Battle of Göllheim
14th century
Battle of Sluys, 1340, from a manuscript
Battle of Nájera, 1367
1302 Battle of the Golden Spurs
1307 Battle of Lucka
1311–1312 Rebellion of wójt Albert
1312 Battle of Rozgony
1321–1322 Despenser War
1321–1328 Byzantine civil war of 1321–1328
1322 Battle of Bliska
1323–1328 Peasant revolt in Flanders
1324 War of Saint-Sardos
1326–1332 Polish–Teutonic War
1333–1338 Burke Civil War
1337–1453 Hundred Years' War
1340–1392 Galicia–Volhynia Wars
1340–1396 Bulgarian–Ottoman Wars
1341–1347 Byzantine civil war of 1341–1347
1342–1350 Zealot's Rebellion
1343–1345 St. George's Night Uprising
1347–1352 Neapolitan campaigns of Louis the Great
1350–1498 Wars of the Vetkopers and Schieringers
1356–1358 Jacquerie
1356–1375 War of the Two Peters
1362 Battle of Helsingborg
1362–1457 War of the Bands
1366–1369 Castilian Civil War
1366–1526 Ottoman–Hungarian Wars
1369–1370 First Ferdinand War
1371–1913 Serbian–Ottoman wars
1371 Battle of Baesweiler
1371–1379 War of the Succession of Guelders
1371–1381 War of Chioggia
1372–1373 Second Ferdinand War
1373–1379 Byzantine civil war of 1373–1379
1375 Gugler War
1375–1378 War of the Eight Saints
1381 Peasants' Revolt
1381–1382 Third Ferdinand War
1381–1384 Lithuanian Civil War
1382 Harelle and Maillotins Revolt
1381–1404 Second Georgian-Mongol War
1389 Battle of Kosovo
1389–1392 Lithuanian Civil War
1395 Battle of Nicopolis
15th century
Battle of Formigny, 1450
1400–1415 Glyndŵr Rising
1401–1429 Appenzell Wars
1407–1468 Georgian-Turkoman War
1409–1411 Polish–Lithuanian–Teutonic War
1410–1435 War of Slesvig
1414 Hunger War
1419–1434 Hussite Wars
1422 Gollub War
1422 Battle of Arbedo
1425–1454 Wars in Lombardy
1431–1435 Polish–Teutonic War
1434–1436 Engelbrekt rebellion
1437 Budai Nagy Antal Revolt
1438–1556 Russo-Kazan Wars
1440–1446 Old Zürich War
1441 Battle of Samobor
1443–1444 Long campaign
1445 First Battle of Olmedo
1447–1448 Albanian–Venetian War
1449–1450 First Margrave War
1449 Battle of Castione
1449–1453 Revolt of Ghent
1450 Cade's Rebellion
1451–1455 Navarrese Civil War
1453–1454 Morea revolt
1454–1466 Thirteen Years' War
1455–1485 Wars of the Roses
1462–1485 Rebellion of the Remences
1462–1472 Catalonian Civil War
1463–1479 Ottoman–Venetian War
1465 Battle of Montlhéry
1465–1468 Liège Wars
1466–1469 Irmandiño Wars
1467 Second Battle of Olmedo
1467–1479 War of the Priests
1468 Waldshut War
1468–1478 Bohemian War
1470–1471 Dano-Swedish War
1470–1474 Anglo-Hanseatic War
1475–1479 War of the Castilian Succession
1477–1488 Austrian-Hungarian War (1477–1488)
1478 Carinthian peasant revolt
1478 Battle of Giornico
1479 Battle of Guinegate
1482–1484 War of Ferrara
1484 Battle of Lochmaben Fair
1485–1488 Mad War
1487 Battle of Crevola
1487 War of Rovereto
1488 Battle of Sauchieburn
1492–1583 Muscovite–Lithuanian Wars
1493 Battle of Krbava Field
1493–1593 Hundred Years' Croatian–Ottoman War
1494–1498 Italian War of 1494–1498
1495–1497 Russo-Swedish War
1497 Cornish Rebellion of 1497
1497 Battle of Rotebro
1499 Swabian War
1499–1504 Italian War of 1499–1504
16th century
Battle of Marignano, 1515
Siege of Narva, 1558
Siege of Szigetvar, 1566
St. Bartholomew's Day massacre, 1572
Battle of Sisak, 1593
c. 1500–1854 Lekianoba
1502–1543 Guelderian Wars
1503–1505 Landshut War of Succession
1508–1516 War of the League of Cambrai
1509–1510 Polish–Moldavian War
1514 Poor Conrad's Rebellion
1514 Dózsa rebellion
1514–1517 Saxon feud
1515 Slovenian peasant revolt
1515–1523 Frisian peasant rebellion
1519–1521 Polish–Teutonic War
1520–1521 Revolt of the Comuneros
1521–1523 Revolt of the Brotherhoods
1521–1523 Swedish War of Liberation
1521–1718 Ottoman-Habsburg wars
1522–1523 Knights' Revolt
1522–1559 Habsburg-Valois Wars
1524–1525 German Peasants' War
1526 Revolt of Espadán
1529 First War of Kappel
1531 Second War of Kappel
1534 Silken Thomas Rebellion
1534–1535 Münster Rebellion
1534–1536 Count's Feud
1536–1537 Pilgrimage of Grace
1540 Salt War
1542–1543 Dacke War
1543–1550 War of the Rough Wooing
1546–1547 Schmalkaldic War
1549 Kett's Rebellion
1549 Prayer Book Rebellion
1550 Battle of Sauðafell
1552–1555 Second Margrave War
1554 Wyatt's rebellion
1554–1557 Russo-Swedish War
1558–1583 Livonian War
1560 Siege of Leith
1562–1598 French Wars of Religion
1563–1570 Northern Seven Years' War
1566 Siege of Szigetvar
1568–1570 Morisco Revolt
1568–1648 Eighty Years' War
1569–1570 Rising of the North
1569–1573 First Desmond Rebellion
1573 Croatian–Slovenian peasant revolt
1578 Georgian-Ottoman War
1579–1583 Second Desmond Rebellion
1580–1583 War of the Portuguese Succession
1583–1588 Cologne War
1585–1604 Anglo-Spanish War
1588–1654 Dutch-Portuguese War
1587–1588 War of the Polish Succession
1590–1595 Russo-Swedish War
1593 Battle of Sisak
1593–1606 Long War
1593–1617 Moldavian Magnate Wars
1594–1603 Nine Years' War (Ireland)
1595–1621 Magnate wars in Moldavia
1596–1597 Cudgel War
1598–1599 War against Sigismund
17th century
Siege of Breda, 1624
Action at La Hogue, 1692
1600-1629 Polish-Swedish War
1602 Savoyard escalade of Geneva
1605–1618 Polish–Muscovite War
1606–1607 Bolotnikov Rebellion
1606–1608 Zebrzydowski Rebellion
1610–1617 Ingrian War
1611–1613 Kalmar War
1615–1618 Uskok War
1618–1648 Thirty Years' War
1618–1639 Bündner Wirren
1620–1621 Polish–Ottoman War
1625 Zhmailo Uprising
1627–1629 Anglo–French War
1628–1631 War of the Mantuan Succession
1630 Fedorovych Uprising
1632–1634 Smolensk War
1637 Pawluk Uprising
1638 Ostrzanin Uprising
1639–1653 Wars of the Three Kingdoms
1640–1668 Portuguese Restoration War
1648–1657 Khmelnytsky Uprising
1651 Kostka-Napierski Uprising
1651–1986 Three Hundred and Thirty Five Years' War
1652–1674 Anglo-Dutch Wars
1653 Swiss peasant war of 1653
1654 First Bremian War
1654–1667 Russo–Polish War
1655–1660 Second Northern War
1656 War of Villmergen
1663–1664 Austro–Turkish War
1666 Second Bremian War
1666–1671 Polish–Cossack–Tatar War
1667–1668 War of Devolution
1670–1671 Razin's Rebellion
1672 First Kuruc Uprising
1672–1678 Franco-Dutch War
1672–1673 Second Genoese-Savoyard War
1675–1679 Scanian War
1676–1681 Russo-Turkish War
1679 Covenanter Rebellion
1683–1684 War of the Reunions
1683–1699 Great Turkish War
1685 Monmouth Rebellion
1688–1697 Nine Years' War
1689–1692 First Jacobite Rising
18th century
Battle of Denain, 1712
Battle of Fontenoy, 1745
Great Siege of Gibraltar, 1779–83
1700 Lithuanian Civil War
1700–1721 Great Northern War
1701–1713 War of the Spanish Succession
1703–1711 Rákóczi's War for Independence
1707–1708 Bulavin Rebellion
1712 Toggenburg war
1714–1718 Ottoman–Venetian War
1715–1716 Jacobite rising of 1715
1716–1718 Austro–Turkish War
1718–1720 War of the Quadruple Alliance
1722–1723 Russo–Persian War
1727–1729 Anglo–Spanish War
1733–1738 War of the Polish Succession
1735–1739 Russo–Turkish War
1737–1739 Austro-Turkish War
1740–1748 War of the Austrian Succession
1740–1763 Silesian Wars
1741–1743 Russo–Swedish War
1745–1746 Jacobite rising of 1745
1756–1763 Seven Years' War
1757 Georgian-Ottoman Battle
1763–1864 Russian–Circassian War
1768–1772 War of the Bar Confederation
1768–1774 Russo–Turkish War
1770 Georgian-Ottoman Battle
1770 Orlov Revolt
1774–1775 Pugachev's Rebellion
1775–1783 American Revolutionary War
1778–1779 War of the Bavarian Succession
1784 Kettle War
1784–1785 Revolt of Horea, Cloșca and Crișan
1785 Battle of Sunja
1787 Dutch Patriot Revolt
1787–1791 Austro–Turkish War
1787–1792 Russo–Turkish War
1788-1790 Russo-Swedish War
1790 Saxon Peasants' Revolt
1792 Polish–Russian War of 1792
1792–1802 French Revolutionary Wars
1794 Kościuszko Uprising
1795 Battle of Krtsanisi
1798 Irish Rebellion of 1798
1798 Peasants' War
19th century
Battle of Marengo, 1800
Napoléon at the Battle of Austerlitz (1805), by François Pascal Simon, Baron Gérard
Battle of Akhalzic (1828), by January Suchodolski
Napoleon III at the Battle of Solferino (1859), by Jean-Louis-Ernest Meissonier
The Sea Battle of Lissa by Carl Frederik Sørensen, 1868
1803 Irish Rebellion of 1803
1803 Souliote War
1803–1815 Napoleonic Wars
1804–1813 First Serbian Uprising
1804–1813 Russo–Persian War
1808-1809 Finnish War
1809 Polish-Austrian War
1815–1817 Second Serbian Uprising
1817–1864 Russian conquest of the Caucasus
1821–1832 Greek War of Independence
1821 Wallachian uprising of 1821
1823 French invasion of Spain
1826–1828 Russo–Persian War
1827 War of the Malcontents
1828–1829 Russo-Turkish War
1828–1834 Liberal Wars
1830 Ten Days Campaign (following the Belgian Revolt)
1830–1831 November Uprising
1831 Canut revolts
1831–1832 Great Bosnian uprising
1831–1836 Tithe War
1832 War in the Vendée and Chouannerie of 1832
1832 June Rebellion
1833–1839 First Carlist War
1833–1839 Albanian Revolts of 1833–1839
1843–1844 Albanian Revolt of 1843–1844
1846 Galician slaughter
1846–1849 Second Carlist War
1847 Albanian Revolt of 1847
1847 Sonderbund War
1848–1849 Hungarian Revolution and War of Independence
1848–1851 First Schleswig War
1848–1849 First Italian Independence War
1853–1856 Crimean War
1854 Epirus Revolt of 1854
1858 Mahtra War
1859 Second Italian War of Independence
1861–62 Montenegrin–Ottoman War (1861–62)
1863–1864 January Uprising
1864 Second Schleswig War
1866 Austro-Prussian War
1866–1869 Cretan Revolt
1866 Third Italian War of Independence
1867 Fenian Rising
1870–1871 Franco-Prussian War
1872–1876 Third Carlist War
1873–1874 Cantonal Revolution
1875–77 Herzegovina Uprising (1875–77)
1876–78 Serbo-Turkish War (1876–78)
1876–78 Montenegrin-Ottoman War (1876-1878)
1877–1878 Russo–Turkish War
1878 Epirus Revolt of 1878
1885 Serbo-Bulgarian War
1897 Greco–Turkish War
20th century
Explosion of the Hawthorn Ridge mine, 1 July 1916, marked the beginning of the Battle of the Somme.
Republican International Brigadiers at the Battle of Belchite, 1937
German Stuka dive bombers in the Eastern Front (World War II) 1941–45
A Soviet IS-2 tank in Leipzig during the 1953 East Germany Uprising
Icelandic patrol ship ICGV Odinn and British frigate HMS Scylla clash during the Third Cod War
A "Sniper at work" sign in Crossmaglen, a symbol of the IRA sniper campaign in South Armagh during the last stages of the Northern Ireland Troubles
UN troops on their way up "Sniper Alley" in Sarajevo during the Bosnian War
A Russian helicopter downed by Chechen militants, during the First Chechen War
The Russian Army's Vostok Battalion in South Ossetia
1903 Ilinden Uprising
1904–1908 Macedonian Struggle
1905 Łódź insurrection
1907 1907 Romanian Peasants' Revolt
1910 Albanian Revolt of 1910
1911–1912 Italo-Turkish War
1912–1913 Balkan Wars
1912–1913 First Balkan War
1913 Second Balkan War
1914 Peasant Revolt in Albania
1914–1918 World War I
1916 Easter Rising
1917–1921 Russian Civil War
1917–1921 Ukrainian–Soviet War
1918 Georgian–Armenian War
1918 Georgian-Turkish War
1918 Finnish Civil War
1918–1919 Georgian-Russian conflict over Sochi
1918–1919 Polish-Ukrainian War
1918–1919 Greater Poland Uprising
1918–1920 Latvian War of Independence
1918–1920 Estonian War of Independence
1919 Polish-Czech war for Teschen Silesia
1919 Hungarian–Romanian War of 1919
1919 Christmas Uprising
1919–1922 Greco–Turkish War
1919–1923 Turkish War of Independence
1919–1920 Czechoslovakia-Hungary War
1919–1921 Silesian Uprisings
1919–1921 Polish-Soviet War
1919–1922 Irish War of Independence
1920 Polish–Lithuanian War
1920 Vlora War
1921 Georgian-Russian War
1921 Uprising in West Hungary
1922–1923 Irish Civil War
1924 Georgian Uprising against Soviet Union
1934 Asturian miners' strike of 1934
1934 Austrian Civil War
1936–1939 Spanish Civil War
1939 Slovak-Hungarian War
1939 Occupation of Zakarpattia Oblast by Hungary
1939–1945 World War II
1939 Nazi German invasion of Poland
1939 Soviet invasion of Poland
1939–1940 Winter War (Soviet invasion of Finland)
1940–1941 Greco-Italian War
1941–1945 Soviet-German war
1941–1944 Continuation War
1944 Slovak National Uprising
1944 Warsaw Uprising
1944–1956 Guerilla war in the Baltic states
1945–1949 Greek Civil War
1953 Uprising in East Germany
1956 Uprising in Poznań
1956 Hungarian Revolution
1956–1962 Operation Harvest
1958 First Cod War
1959–2011 Basque Conflict
1968 Warsaw Pact invasion of Czechoslovakia
1968–1998 The Troubles
1970–1984 Unrest in Italy
1972–1973 Second Cod War
1974 Turkish invasion of Cyprus
1975-1976 Third Cod War
1988–1994 Nagorno-Karabakh War
1989 Romanian Revolution
1991 Ten-Day War (Slovenia)
1991–1992 Georgian war against Russo-Ossetian alliance
1991–1993 Georgian Civil War
1991–1995 Croatian War of Independence
1992 War of Transnistria
1992 Ossetian-Ingush conflict
1992–1993 First Georgian war against Russo-Abkhazian alliance
1992–1995 Bosnian War
1993 Cherbourg incident
1993 Russian constitutional crisis
1994–1996 First Chechen War
1997 Unrest in Albania
1998–1999 Kosovo War
1998–present Dissident Irish Republican campaign
1998 Second Georgian war against Russian-Abkhazian alliance
1999 Dagestan War
1999–2009 Second Chechen War
1999–2001 Insurgency in the Preševo Valley
21st century
2001 Insurgency in the Republic of Macedonia
2002 Perejil Island crisis
2004-2013 Unrest in Kosovo
2004 unrest in Kosovo
2008 unrest in Kosovo
2011–2013 North Kosovo crisis
2004 Georgia, Adjara crisis
2006 Georgia, Kodori crisis
2007–present Civil war in Ingushetia
2008 Russia–Georgia war
2009–present Insurgency in the North Caucasus
2013–present Euromaidan and pro-Russian conflict in Ukraine
2014 Crimean crisis
2014–present War in Donbass
Wikipedia
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_conflicts_in_Europe
to my knowledge, few wars are occurring within the EU itself...
8 Years Ago
Good moaning, Jason. It's nice to read your post. Thanks mate. I'm overwhelmed by the stats that show the dark side of human.
The Dark Side Of Man
Mankind always dreams of a paradise
where everything is perfectly perfect
with happiness - no suffering
love without hatred
only peace
no war
Quite
ironic!
All what man really enjoys
are on the opposite side
of his dreamy
heaven
Those
glamorous flowers
and forbidden fruits
only grow on sinful trees in a hell
It is why
man often worships his God
in
his best hope
of having his dreams come true to his next life
While he prefers to take all the best pleasures
as
he could
during this current life
To practically achieve this
he follows Satan
step
by step
Man fools himself
in his wish-washy thought
he could successfully deceive both Satan and God
to conveniently extract the bests from the two opposite worlds
Thao Chuong
2016-22-02
8 Years Ago
Since man is the only living thing
Who refuses to be be what he is
He creates a dark side
Pretending to be what he isn't
8 Years Ago
Jason - One very good reason I would say.
DANL : that paints a very attractive picture lol :-)
Wars and Weapons
Are you blaming man for creating wars
And wanting what is greener on the other side
Or do you look closer
To see who orders
These despicable hideous weapons of destruction
We sit in their pockets like toys they play with
To be taken out at their leisure to torment and jibe
we will build a hospital
we will pay for schools
You manufacture those weapons and turn a blind eye
They can do as they please as they have the money
They have the greed, the evil, the corruption
You say nothing
They are the mafia
They rule like the pharmaceuticals and keep you hanging
on
a
string
like
a
puppet
JEM 220216
8 Years Ago
An artist who is worth anything
Should know their art is worthless
If it doesn't contribute to society
And not their pocket
8 Years Ago
Thanks Danl and Jane.
Man and His Dark Shadow
man can never get rid of his own shadow
whenever he is in darkness
it holds him tight
so soon as
he comes out of the night
into
daylight
it stays beside him
right
at his own feet
man carries his shadow
since the first minute he is born
to the last day he reaches his own death
why does man often deny
and also have great fear of his own dark shadow?
Thao Chuong
2016-23-02
8 Years Ago
The Earth Shadows
Why escape the prison?
When the world outside is hell
unless you bring the food
the water
the comfort
the peace
tne hope
the light
the path
the faith for all
the new vision
the greater love
of God
no one is excluded!
do not exclude yourself
do not exclude others
for they are all your hope
as you are hope to all
escape from this hell!
Seek and yea shall find!
for they are all your brothers and sisters
as we are to them
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
8 Years Ago
Nice one there Jason. Sounds like some prophet speaking to someone down in a dark hole maybe. yee yee
8 Years Ago
Wow..Wow...I must raise my voice for the double wows to Jim' amazing visual echo and to Jason's best poem of the year.
Wonderful treats to my eyes and my mind.Thank you.
Have a good rest and a sound sleep to all
FEAR
I open my eyes wide
to look
at
what I am afraid of
I clear my mind
and try to justify the reason
why
I am too weak to let something hit my nerve
how
I am unable to prevent them from bringing me down to my own knees
I generally do not pay any attention to substantial risks in my daily living
regardless of the fact
in the worst case
I could die instantly in an accident
I would be paralyzed or perished by a natural disaster
it could practically happen
anywhere
anytime
during my entire life
however I have never been scared out it
the unknown
it's my own shadow
not
the unknown
that makes me feel insecure
fear is my worst enemy
hidden permanently in my inner-self
it doesn't come from the outer universe
it is I who imprison myself
in my own hell full of fears
Thao Chuong
2016-24-02
8 Years Ago
Good moaning all
W O W. Jason , Jim, Viet. Some great visuals and poetry going on here. My mind is turning...
Have a great day everyone.x
8 Years Ago
Powerful poem, powerful emotion Viet, FEAR!
Perhaps fear was the first emotion...
Good to know, Dan Dan the accountant man! lucky thing
..good moaning to you all , such a feeling of bonhomie with the birds singing... was nice to echo your visual poetry Jim! always stimulating, meaningful. hmm, so yee yee, huh? oh my mistake
yee ha, its a cowboy singing on a horse! lol
reminds me of a cowboy song we learnt in the school choir
whooppie tee for yay yippe oh, get a long little dogies, its your misfortune and none of my own
this is the nearest i found ( we must have had the lyrics in error/amended form) it always struck me as sad singing the cowboy tread to the slaughter of cattle)
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8 Years Ago
Other tangents to navigate this disordered universe of thought... follow...
what are you turning into Jane? Jane 2? sequels can be fun too!
You're far too kind Viet, at my meagre efforts at chucking words out on the screen. Splat poems. perhaps, chuckle.
anyways, my passing thought of more nonsense, imagine if birds growled all day in the trees...imagine if men ate grass all day in the field and
and if dogs whispered quietly.. ..
anyways, back to some sanity -
8 Years Ago
Further echoing thoughts on evil and shadows
How evil is the world ? -
- when the taliban was created by the West to defeat the Soviet invasion of Afghanistan
yet that spawned Al Quaida..
- when we invaded Iraq to depose an evil fascist dictator
yet that spawned ISIS with its renegades and also spawned a sympathetic growth of support from European Muslims that did not previously exist
- when paedophiles live lives of luxury, wealth and unending praise
Jimmy Saville abused over 70, many young children, whilst working at the BBC in the UK as a national celebrity, now a national shame, disgrace beyond measure, a monster, praised for his tv and charity works, let loose without question having attained high bbc status, honoured with a knighthood from the UK, presented with a medal of honour from Israel, and a papal knighthood.
Is the evil we detest actually often inadvertently created by our own society's deeds / misdeeds??
Or does satan subjugate the minds of those willing to be evil?
edited
8 Years Ago
Jason-
Evil can can keep you alive
Look at an ambulance
The two snakes on the side
Evil snakes with fangs
Slithering up the staff of Hermes
Their venom entering the van
Healing as the sirens echo
8 Years Ago
echo to Danl and Jane and Viet
its is good to FEAR Jesus Christ
be forewarned of His power, love and might!
It has not escaped my attention
that swans hiss like a snake.. .
for maybe they harbour great spirits
dragons from the heavens!
serpents may slither on their belly
but the angels of God fly like swans...
hissing at mankind!
8 Years Ago
Fear - an echo to Viet
It is not the dog that bites
It is the human that taught it
It is not the dog should be feared
but ourselves
Our own dark corners,
Things that lurk in the shadows
They could grow, mutate,
Like a parasite and its host
We are not to be trusted, Jekyll and Hyde
We so easily lie, cheat deceive
We only need one simple thing
To tip us over that deep, dark crevasse
There is nothing we would not do
What perverse course we could take
You do not see a wild animal do
These things a human has done
Be not afraid of the animal
Be afraid of yourself
JEM 250216
8 Years Ago
You been sharpening that pencil Jane, i like that one, an echooooo
Animal
The animal inside
howls at midnight
when the people sleep
the paws twitch
the mouth growls
as the eyes open...
the mind
transcends
descends
to see and feel
the darkness
eats!
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
8 Years Ago
Dark nights
Give me the night
covering me like a cloak
let the dark swallow the day light
on a dark country road
I’m talking night darkness
no television to fall asleep to
no night light
give me the night
in all it’s blackness
so dark I forget my name
I’ll forgive the moon
even enjoy it when it comes around
waiting for darkness to return
all the nocturnal creatures
roaming and rustling
even those black and white nocturnes
skunks
Jim Taylor 2/25/16
8 Years Ago
Jason, Jim your writings on the wall are amazing my pencil needs to be sharpened again lol.
8 Years Ago
Good morning Jane. To clarify, an observation on DanI's observation, an interesting observation on the staff of Hermes
For medicine it is the rod of Asclepius (where a single serpent entwines his staff, Asclepius being the god of medicine, depicted below) that should be 'correctly' used
however 'mistakenly'
the rod of Hermes, a 2 snake entwined rod with wings, is a mistaken error for medicine in some countries, it symbolises a different god - Mercury/Hermes the messenger of gods and magician / inventor of incantations... strangely also protector of thieves and merchants
sourced from http://drblayney.com/Asclepius.html and wikipedia
8 Years Ago
Dani
Medicine or poison? often they are the same
drugs medicate only at therapeutic doses, at other doses they are ineffective, or kill you, or riddle you with side effects. Truths are many, why illuminate just a few? and hide others... Would you rather be be posioned by a snake on a staff or healed by two? or vice versa? if a snake could heal you , perhaps you would let it bite, What venom heals a twitch, what toxin may kill a cancer, what eyes might see what is truth when others lie... medicate the truths and dont lie the poisons.. snake or otherwise.. still, it is true, swans do hiss!
8 Years Ago
Artists who push the sales
Of their work are used car salesmen
Art that sells on its own
Are works produced by real artisans
8 Years Ago
Products sell
Products dont sell
Art is
simply
deeply
admired!
and that is all
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
8 Years Ago
Jason-
A high pressure salesman can sell a car
Clank, sputter, shake, smoke and stall
Cars are cars
You bought the salesman
And junked the car
8 Years Ago
It's too nice a day to stay inside.
Life is too short to drink bad wine.
You can't take it with you.
8 Years Ago
Roy-
Medical reports show
Man releases "gas"
Fourteen times a day
Stay inside on a nice day
Don't pollute
8 Years Ago
DANL - 14 times a day! Wow - are we as bad as cows whom are supposed to be the worst to contribute to greenhouse gases. I think we should have a human cull, that would also reduce the number of cows required.
Jason - swans and geese hiss as do snakes. I was also chased by a baby tortoise whom also hissed. Funny as you like.
Roy - Hi :-) - am just enjoying a glass of the red stuff - cheers
8 Years Ago
methane is ~100xs more powerful a greenhouse gas than CO2, it stinks, it's a shame those city water treatments cant build fast breeder reactors of some kind and harvest this biofuel off, it really pollutes the air for half the week. and contributes to global warming. oh what a cheeky cute tortoise Jane. hope u were able to out run it. tricky things aint they, tortoises, lol, chased by a baby tortoise.. . .
🐢
8 Years Ago
Good evening all.
Thank you: Jane, Jason, Danl, Jim and Roy.
I really enjoy the natural flow of the thread: dynamic dialogues between Jason, Danl and Jane and provoking poems of Jason's and Jane's. Another wow to Jim's poem that reflects Jim easy and humorous style in both his naive art and peaceful poetry. I enjoy Jason when he lets himself go with his passionate but provoking flow. I am glad to have Danl regularly shares his unique thoughts from "Only In His Own World".
Have a nice weekend to all
Here is an echo to Jim's Dark Nights.
The Dark Night
Frosty night
howling wind
power outage
sudden darkness
all switches still on
but
no light
no TV
no video
no movie
no internet
(no email
no chatline)
quite tedious
Nothing to do
not only
no entertainment
but also
in isolation
(from abrupt loss of communication to outside world)
Fallen tree
flying limbs
loud bangs
house shaken
window smashed
thermo-glass shattered
icy air
pouring in
In the room
heaters died
biting cold
Some candles
in drawers
cigarettes
(a half pack
in pocket)
but useless
no lighter
empty match box
Hard liquor
in cupboard
(very little left
in a bottle)
not enough
for two
to warm up
Well-insulated
with bulky clothes
under thick blanket
still not much help
frozen fingers
frosty hands
shivered bodies
Both embraced
each other
in silence
Tonight
no power
in darkness
too lazy
for dinner
too chilly
for romance
no desire
for sex
How the heck could Adam and Eves survive Garden of Eden?
Why could such a place with neither electricity nor all other modern necessities
be
called
the God's paradise?
Thao Chuong
2016-26-02
8 Years Ago
A Dark Day
No blizzard can darken a day
Nor cyclone or cloud
No eclipse can darken a day
Only misery and death
8 Years Ago
Jason - alright you can stop laughing now...yes I was chased by a baby tortoise - he actually nipped me......and I thought I had a way with animals, obviously not tortoises lol.
Viet - you are the king pin :-) The cement which holds everyone together, this page is lost and flounders without you.
DANL - nothing worse to darken the mood than to wallow in ones own misery. Totally agree. Just keep the baby tortoises away from me:-P
8 Years Ago
Jane
I admit...I too do not like certain things in shells..especially drinks that come in coconut shells
8 Years Ago
. "Digital art software has empowered both the painterly side of photographers, and the photographer side of painters...the lazy side"
8 Years Ago
All the worlds' artists
Are riding in a giant car
The brakes fail
They are headed over a cliff
And all they do is argue
Over copyrights
8 Years Ago
Hello DANL - You look a bit lonely on here - Where has everyone gone? How very dare they desert you.
I love photography - I do think you have to have an eye for it - you have to get things in the right perspective - bit like life lol
Don't jump into it - assess it and get the best shot :-)
8 Years Ago
hello Jane, the tortoise was just tooooo much for me, im recovering tho, chuckle
Viet has prob frozen solid, Canadian winters are just sooooo cold esp,with no window. i mean if it's minus 40 and your window breaks. . .
The selling of frozen love
icicles grew on his face
as the torsos froze solid
in the act
they became
ice art
lovers in blue
forever
around them
little animals
gnawed away
a toe
a heart
a love
taking their flesh
'til bits were gone
just 2 butts remained
frozen
with 2 other bits
in conversation
like sex art
some chit chat
about nothing much
much
but the
rats had feasted
leaving
art?
or carnal deadly sin?
some kind
of eaten love sickness
a man and woman
frozen
in time
until it dropped off
the rats simply ate them away
into oblivion
keeping warm
in winter
(c) the proverbial potty. 2016
where piss take meets piss take
edited
8 Years Ago
Good moaning Jason
Very visual, descriptive and thoughtful. Love the thought of two butts left as mouth pieces lol.
Viet - Don't leave yourself frozen in time like Jason' two butts, move out until you get it fixedxx
Good morning DANL. Happy thoughts winging their way to you.
8 Years Ago
lol, well that was your take Jane, actually the 2 bits were the male and female organs caught in the act, a conversation, with their butts frozen, its just a parody of Viet's numerous sex poems, echoing his 'the dark night poem' with his broken window in a freezing windy night, with reference to porn culture, chuckle
might soon drop the nonsense poetry and head to greener cleaner pastures, mountain tops and streams where human feet have not trod and just beauty is found...
8 Years Ago
Jason-
I live in my own little world.
My life is bizarre
I know not what or whom I am surrounded by
I acknowledge the ignorant and the wise
The ugly and the beautiful
My mind is full of what should be
Not what is, although I am not blind to it.
I am a round peg in a square hole
I change colours like a chameleon
In the need to fit my surroundings
Tell me I am normal?
JEM 010316
8 Years Ago
Looking out from my world
The outer world is a fake
Photomakers who call themselves
Artists
Telling people they offer
Originals
Trying to pass their work off as
Paintings
Desecrating the beauty of nature
On a keyboard
Living in a fantasy world
8 Years Ago
DANL: - Fantastic artwork. . - one of my favourites is the ivy covered walls in the narrow passage way with the lovely lighting on the walls and the two people.
http://danl.fr/index.html
8 Years Ago
DANL- Now why do I think there is a hint of sarcasm in your comment - I know you do not like photographers lol. Although I do not profess to call mine fine art - nor do I digitally change them apart from crop and maybe brighten, or amend hues. But what I do hope they portray is the places I visit and the people and surroundings. - I hope I capture emotion.
With painting it is a vision changed - totally created to your own perspective. Art or photography totally depends on the viewers taste.
Jim...It wasn't me !!
8 Years Ago
Your fault
you both froze him solid, frozen to the core
who threw the rock?
a broken window
and poetry ended up like a freezer
a leg of lamb
in Canadian winter
blink lol
------------------
we all feel abnormal these days Jane... .
Deep
identity is shallow
beneath the ocean
hides unknown depth
people love the beach
the make up
nice clothes
and that is all!
which art is true?
which truth is art?
paint our shallowness
capture it well
pretend your better
cleaner, higher
the sure way to inner hell!
capture it well
paint it true
find it
show it
true to you!
that piece
it was of you!?
one part inside
an endless depth
the ocean well
of deepest blue!
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
oceans hide inside
re-edited
8 Years Ago
Viet you had better reappear before Jason eats you for a Sunday roast lol.
Jason Great poem. :-)
8 Years Ago
Jane-
No criticism....just do not approve of photomakers passing their work off as paintings....your photos are exceptional. If you tried to label them paintings I would frown.
8 Years Ago
DANL-IN that case I shall take it as a huge compliment coming from you. Mine are defiantly photos lol.
8 Years Ago
some crazy words
in a crazy world
The Jean Genie Lyrics
David Bowie
A small Jean Genie snuck off to the city
Strung out on lasers and slash-back blazers
Ate all your razors while pulling the waiters
Talking 'bout Monroe and walking on Snow White
New York's a go-go, and everything tastes right
Poor little Greenie, ooh-ooh
Keep her comin'
The Jean Genie lives on his back
The Jean Genie loves chimney stacks
He's outrageous, he screams and he bawls (Jean Genie)
Jean Genie, let yourself go, whoah1
Sits like a man but he smiles like a reptile
She love him, she love him but just for a short while
She'll scratch in the sand, won't let go his hand
He says he's a beautician and sells you nutrition
And keeps all your dead hair for making up underwear
Poor little Greenie, ooh-ooh
The Jean Genie lives on his back
The Jean Genie loves chimney stacks
He's outrageous, he screams and he bawls (Jean Genie)
Jean Genie, let yourself go, whoah
He's so simple-minded, he can't drive his module
He bites on the neon and sleeps in a capsule
Loves to be loved, loves to be loved
Oh, Jean Genie lives on his back
The Jean Genie loves chimney stacks
He's outrageous, he screams and he bawls (Jean Genie)
Jean Genie, let yourself go, whoah
Go!
Go!
The Jean Genie lives on his back
The Jean Genie loves chimney stacks
He's outrageous, he screams and he bawls (Jean Genie)
Jean Genie, let yourself go, whoah
Go, go go!
Songwriters
DAVID BOWIE
Published by
Lyrics © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC, Peermusic Publishing, Warner/Chappell Music, Inc., Universal Music Publishing Group
8 Years Ago
I looked in the small opening
Savored the inner juices
Inserted my finger
Ran my index around its wetness
Thrust my brush in the paint
And enjoyed a great artgasm
8 Years Ago
Viet-
Just to let you know that a recession is about to hit America...so if this is your market....better sell everything now. Experts predict the coming recession/depression will flat line the art market. A lot of artists will be looking for jobs that won't exist and park benches that are already filled.
8 Years Ago
Viet - We hope you are not frozen to that sofa, covered in a blanket with frosted breath and still no electricity.
8 Years Ago
Itchy Feet
Home, car, work,
Work, car, home, cook, sleep
Home, car, work,
Work,car,home, cook, sleep
Five days gone
Come weekend
Home,clean,wash, sleep
Home, car, shop,
Shop, car, home, sleep
Cook, vac, iron
Ad infinitum
365 days a year
Less 35 days
Including bank hols
330 days of repeat.
No wonder we get the wanderlust
The need to experience different
The need to rest, relax, unwind
Different places, different faces
No longer a caged animal.
JEM 060316
8 Years Ago
They will drag my shell out of the snowbanks
Rummage my pockets for keepsakes
Chip the ice that seals my lips
Dig the gold from my wisdom teeth
They will strip me of my clothes
Leaving my pubic to crystallize in the cold
The watch they forgot will stop ticking
As I remain forever frozen in time
8 Years Ago
to echo the silence
))) ) ) ) ) )
He communicates in silence
shshhhh and listen
to nothing.. .
but quiet
and chill
breathe slow.. .
you can feel the warmth
cant you?
for only demons
suck up the warmth
and chatter sins
endlessly... .
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
demons mock endlessly
8 Years Ago
Wherever you live, plant an indigenous (to that area) tree. Plant two if you can. Make it three if it's practical. For the planet's sake.
8 Years Ago
Maybe this will wake Viet up....
I slept terrible last night.
This sexy twenty year old girl kept pounding
On my bedroom door for hours
I had to get up at 3 am to let her out.
8 Years Ago
You are ready to evolve when you reserve yourself a front-row seat in your own audience.
8 Years Ago
Peter - Agree 100% - Plant 10 for me!
Jason - Get those Demons to Viet' house quick - shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
DANL - Maybe Viet has had a calling??? Cannot believe your sexy 20 yr old received no response.
Leonardo - Will try out that front row seat later on this year - Jason should do the same :-)
8 Years Ago
One Last Painting
It is always to late to start over again
Trying to brush away your mistakes
It is to early to do tomorrow's work
Trying to paint in the future
It is today your masterpiece will evolve
And you shall rest in peace
8 Years Ago
I fear our poet laureate has finally left us.
Viet are you saying goodbye to your thought of the day?
8 Years Ago
chuckle to your prior to prior comment Jane, shhhhugar. lol
Good moaning Jane, i hear your sobs. its difficult to write when he is frozen solid. he will warm up i'm sure. unless hes back in the coffin.
im stuck on echoes now.
i defrosted my freezer a week back. A handy hint for those who wish to thaw. lots of newspapers and a tray. switch it off. use a blow heater a meter or 2 away, and voila its all done in 2-3hrs and not 10hrs. keep all your frozen food together in a large bag or box to keep cold. make sure water cant reach the heater,. my thought for today. I may turn my attention more to handy household hints.. .
8 Years Ago
Artists....are you going to wait until you are are told at the pearly gates that you have accomplished nothing in your life?
8 Years Ago
an echo to bitterness
All on your terms? these are no terms at all!
Everything to suit you? - it suits no one at all, not even you!
-------
In the heavens, over the last few days some stunning celestial beauty has been seen!
A total eclipse is SE Asia where amazing pink prominences and a stunning corona are distinctly seen and the planets of Mercury and Venus were also seen in the night sky
Across the British Isles, the most beautiful display of northern lights as far south as Oxfordshire
http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-3480015/Northern-lights-dazzling-display-lucky-combination-conditions-means-aurora-borealis-visible-far-south-Oxfordshire.html
who needs poetry or art with such beauty in the skies! Photography brings such magic to our screens -
at least for today we are content
Yesterday by a lake..
that froze
within, a face looking out!
eyes bright as silver
gleaming.. .
looking unto farthest skies
a heaven of endless stars
from where comets are sent
from where night lights of Winter come
a blanket of wondrous magic!
these were the northern lights
where the heavens have spoken
in tunes of God sent light
as the sun and moon embraced in full
once more..
solar eclipses upon our sight
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
edited
8 Years Ago
Those Northern Lights must be spectacular!
Polar Venture
After enduring many hot summers in the desert
feeling like an over cooked lobster
hot dusty sweating like a pig
He ventured to the frozen north.
fresh cool crisp ice and air
searching for a view of the northern lights
Only to be eaten by a polar bear.
Jim Taylor 3/11/2016
8 Years Ago
Glad you got a little chuckle out of it Jason.
I was wondering if I finally killed the thread, or a polar bear....
Early Bird
my little red rooster woke me up
beginning an interesting day
I painted a whole wall
then watched it dry
a fly slowly crawled up the lamp shade
a jar of molasses fell over
it slowly rolled on down
down the cupboard to the floor
The toilet roared
I’m not bored
I heard a sound outside the door
walking with no carpet on the floor
it was only the mailman
delivering a dose of bills
that gave me chills
as day fades to dusk
my little red roosters in the coop
I turned up my music
hoping he will let me sleep in
Jim Taylor 3/11/2016
8 Years Ago
Hahaha Jim you are in fine form...eaten by a polar bear indeed lol. I am going to have to come up with a response to those two poems.. ..love em.
Jason I am surprised your wacky response is not already down here.
Am going to have to PM Viet. Hope he is okay.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Jason.........those are extraordinary images of truly extraordinary natural occurrences..........really beautiful and exciting.................Australia, being South, lol, does not get 'northern' lights............lol
but one of our Southern photographers does capture the most glorious skies........because n/s seasons are opposite, his pix are nice in usa when the sun/sets/risings are so different..............
http://fineartamerica.com/profiles/mark-blauhoefer.html
re Viet ...??........he hasn't been on f/b for two days as far as I can tell, maybe just away short hop somewhere, or babysitting....wait till Monday to start worrying..........Cheers everyone here.........thank you always for your posts..........
8 Years Ago
Jane?
good day sweet petal flung upon a breeze... 🌺
today i flounder in ma weeeeze
sweetest words are sent to tease
polar bears might often sneeeeeze
haha. chew
its the cold
not the flowers
nor the busy bees
um
the pause. of hungry bears
in the night
might bring a scare
as they glare!
and go
boo and growl!
and bite your poet head
eating poems
til your
bled
oof
u be welcome to share in such beauty Viv, as we may often be to share in yours. 😜
now, the coffin lid has been jammed, so viet and maria are stuck in it, they been eating steak in the night and er..
Jesus loves poetry!
random thoughts on Sunday
8 Years Ago
The collector's knowledge resonates with the artist's intentions and the cycle is finally closed.
8 Years Ago
Leonardo - Wish I could find my collector lol !!!!
Jason - woah...has Maria disappeared too? Is this the case of the missing poets society?
Jim - In response :
Lazy Days
That old bloodhound
With his droopy jaws
and dangly ears
Just sits in the dust and scratches.
The old red rooster in the shade of the barn
Only crows when it is cool.
The sun is high in the sky
The fleas are feeding
And time is slowly slipping by
The shade of the verandah
Is cool and inviting
There on a table are two glasses
A jug full of ice and lemonade
Sitting on the swing chair
Sunglasses and pipes
Sit two strangers
passing the time of day
Viet Trans and a polar bear
Chewing the cud and spittin' the baccy
Viet with a gun
Polar with a set of jaws n claws
JEM 130316
8 Years Ago
DMT is my mentor...my guide to swirling rainbows and dead pigs falling to the ground before romping away as three legged dogs...it is the demented dimension of my new art.
8 Years Ago
Having trouble uploading both works...perhaps it is because I just posted the Republican vision of the Donald a couple hours ago. Oh well hope someone gets a chuckle out of the one that worked.
8 Years Ago
John - Seen both of them - absolutely brilliant - boy is this scary times!!! And that is not just the hair!
8 Years Ago
Yes John no matter how you slice is it it's been wild with the moment of truth tomorrow, Tuesday.
Jane looks like you have the bloodhounds on the trail. he he
I have a search party out myself for Viet.
8 Years Ago
Jim - hahahahahahaha I see when Trump got his hair from now!
For All :
Viet is very busy
Doing good charitable chores
Looking after his grandchildren
And cleaning out his drawers
errrrr drawers
which drawers?
eeeeew Viet
8 Years Ago
John....
I had a contest asking artists to submit their rendition of Mohammad and it was shut down by FAA....so how did you get your Donald image approved?
8 Years Ago
Yes Jane we all need to stop and smell the roses, smell the coffee, recharge our batteries.
Followed by Lions
a lion roared
I was followed by a dozen lions
hot on my trail
I felt like an antelope
but without the speed
my only hope was to face them off
I turned with my best poker face
knowing there wasn’t to be a race
one of the majestic creatures
made his move
rolling on the ground
as if to play
I jumped in
like a circus clown
he rolled me round and round
like a toy he had found
I awoke in the morning
entangled with my large stuffed lion
the prize I won at the fair the day before
Jim Taylor 3/14/2016
8 Years Ago
i know i shall regret asking
whats dmt dani?
im glad Viet is busy in his drawers, this playground has deteriorated tho and it takes a Viet to sort the crap out
before it gets out of control / ridiculass
chuckle
8 Years Ago
Jason - are you calling me a ridicu lass? The cheek.
hmmmm cheek and drawers...hand in hand lol
Degradation of Viets page - shame on all of you lol!
DANL: What is DMT? I too am an ignoramous :-P
8 Years Ago
Jane, u r a mere butterfly in a breeze, well, a petal too
the flower, the breeze, the wind, the day, the crazy posts
just that sort of thing Jim
roller coaster rides, tooing and froing
ups and downs
takeoffs
crashes
handbreaking
psychedlic rolls
roars of thunder
and distant rides into midnight!
8 Years Ago
Jason..Bless you 😚 We should revert to poetry again you make it sound chaotic lol
Jim. We need the rooster as well as Viet to bring order 🐓
DANL....DMT. ....DANL mental training? 😲...Drinks my turn? 🍻 ...Damn monkey tails 🐒
8 Years Ago
I was being jocular of course Jane and all!
In the meantime Happy St Patricks Day to all of Irish Descent!!
there was a huge fireball over the UK last night, i couldn't sleep, should have looked out across the skies.. so many cosmological happenings
8 Years Ago
What an artist knows
Means nothing
Years of experience
Means nothing
What others appreciate
Means everything
8 Years Ago
You will get beautiful pictures by pressing the shutter button, but it's the delete button that will give you a solid career.
8 Years Ago
Evenin' all :-)
Time to go...
My feet are itching
Time to travel
Inoculations - check
Backpacks packed
Camera cleaned
Batteries charged
Passports - check
Tickets - check
Visas - check
Hotel booking - check
Car booking - check
Money - check
Visa cards - check
Weight allowance - check
Good to go
Be nice to each other
Take care of Viets page
See you soon
Will pop in if I can
inbetween x
8 Years Ago
please do Jane, have a great holiday! half the world might be there too! say hello to the world!
8 Years Ago
an artist's life is a lie
lies made up on canvas
lies hanging on a wall
lies sold to others
life manipulated by lies
may they not rest in peace
8 Years Ago
Its #WorldPoetryDay
Here are some links to indulge in
http://gu.com/p/4hk3t?CMP=twt_gu
8 Years Ago
#WorldPoetryDay
http://gu.com/p/4hmat?CMP=Share_iOSApp_Other
http://gu.com/p/4hmag?CMP=Share_iOSApp_Other
8 Years Ago
hello Jim and Dani and Viet and Leonard and John and Jane and Viv
its #WorldPoetryDay
have a lovely day of poems
meanwhile
here's some quiet thoughts in a field of flowers
Field of Quiet
This softest breath,
lace ripples, yonder misty thoughts,
cascading light,
a shade amongst flickering stems,
field of silver flowers,
whispers of caress
Be silent,
Listen.. .
as flowers tussle so gently.. .
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
8 Years Ago
Prayers to those in Brussels-
Keep your doors open and this is what you can expect....harbor people from the middle east and you can expect even more
8 Years Ago
A prayer for Brussels. A prayer for the entire world. A prayer for Turkey. And Syria. And all countries and peoples in turmoil. A prayer for the victims of persecution, the victims of hate, the victims of racism, the victims of injustice, the victims of endless war and the many millions who suffer endlessly world wide.
May the world not be harnessed into hate by those who commit atrocities, by those who encourage atrocities and by those people who seek to divide humanity to aid their own agendas of hate.
A prayer of many prayers, for we are soon maybe in need of many prayers, if others spread their hatred!
8 Years Ago
The Regret
Many prayers must be made
To prepare America for the future
Death will come and will not stop
Muslims will parish to accomplish
Martyrs will be made
The Koran left on body parts
One after another into millions
Americans entering into heaven
8 Years Ago
There is no better time
Scrap your canvas and color
Start a new life
Do not wait and waller
8 Years Ago
Wishing you all a very happy Easter, may the light of Jesus Christ light up your hearts!
Each butterfly is a world in flight
together
they are constellations
and the colours light up the skies.. .
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
8 Years Ago
Jesus is watching👁👁👁👁👁u and all and us very very closely happy easter X the crucifixion, the resurrection, the judgment to come. Fear the love. Pride was the sin of satan and his downfall.
8 Years Ago
WHAT! I missed world poetry day! No good not getting connection in Cuba. Plenty of vintage cars and horse and carts and happy people.
Hola to everyone. Glad to see Viet page still going. Will think of a poem before my card runs out of time.. Love your poem Jason
Take care everyone back soon xx
8 Years Ago
Don't u just hate it when u start to get endless calls from companies stating you have been in a car accident when you haven't
that's not poetry!
8 Years Ago
Jane, I hear Cuba is a fantastic place for photography - before the inevitable modernization swamps the culture! Great to see the US and Cuba on friendly terms after so long.
Maybe Cuba should keep some areas of its culture unchanged. Just like we all should. After all, we are what our history made us to a large degree. And where we go is up to all of us.
8 Years Ago
Jason=
Yes, Cuba should keep some of its culture unchanged, including the missiles pointed at the US during the Kennedy era.
8 Years Ago
When an "infringer" uses a piece of art without permission...
Cry like a baby over spilled milk.
Chase the bugger down the street.
Nah nah name calling.
Threaten the culprit
Lower yourself to a new level
Keep crying like a baby
Your work isn't worth it
8 Years Ago
Paint on a canvas should be like a worm in your burger...the wow factor....not the marketing
8 Years Ago
Today I am alive.
Alive to think.
Alive to love.
Alive to trust.
Alive to help.
Alive to befriend.
Alive to debate.
Alive to protest for justice.
Alive to boycott against injustice
Alive to create.
Today is a good day.
8 Years Ago
So you say you are an artist
So prove it
You put paint on canvas
You take a photo
You manipulate an image
So you say you are an artist
So prove it
8 Years Ago
Bukowski and Me
Drinking, Swearing and Throwing a Punch or Two;
Bukowski and me stood toe to toe
slamming each other
with words
sharp and cutting
nothing nice going on here
i met Bukowski in a skid row tavern
where the corners of everything
had been worn round from years of over use
the place was yellowish grey with age
and reeked with the stench of stale cigarettes butts
spilled beer and whiskey that fought through the acrid smell
of sweat and urine hovering around lost souls sitting alone
on wobbly bar stools made steady
by their occupant’s immobility
and desire to never leave.
2016
8 Years Ago
Viet,
Where have you been, my old friend? I watch our blog but I don't see you? Have you forgotten me? I trust you are well and still writing. I cited two of your poems in my book, "Agnello by Agnello," but wonder where you have gone. And to Ed Merideth--I am lost for your involvement too...where have you gone? what happened to your site? Agnello the artist needs you both!
8 Years Ago
Hey Kenneth, good to see you and where does one go to see your book, "Agnello by Agnello"
i've been away... and as i run through this long, long thread i see Viet has been missing too... i'll have to check on him to see if all is well.
My absences i think has been therapeutic... i quit cold-turkey my internet (FAA) addiction and only return now and then
like a drive by shooter throwing a thought or two before disappearing around the corner to the safety of obscurity once more... =>))
8 Years Ago
Peanut Butter Fears
I overcame my Arachibutyrophobia
thanks to the help of an older woman
who took me at the tender age of fourteen
to her bosom
and taught me that homemade chunky organic
would never
ever
stick to the roof of my mouth
if I would only approach it with confidence
I did
i still do
Ed Meredith
2016
8 Years Ago
Viet is reflecting
Without it
He will travel through life blindly
Faltering at all his attempts
Viet is reflecting
To achieve future rewards
8 Years Ago
Hi Ed...glad you are back and hope you are well...my book is an ebook on kindle..."Agnello by Agnello:Striking the Heart of an Artist's Confessions," a biographical narrative with examples of my work, so e 300 images. I must confess, the ebook translation does not work as well as the printed hardcopy--art books typically do not. All told, the book totals some 280 pages.
8 Years Ago
Hi All.
Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts of the day to keep this thread going head.
Special thanks to Dan the most regular contributor, then to Jason, Jane..
Nice to see ya back Ed. Sorry - Kenneth - for putting our collaboration on hold - I hope I could resume it later when I have more time
Which World Where I'm Really Living In?
I buried myself too long and too deep in the two dimensional world
where
everyone (whom I've contacted with) were unreal, invisible, untouchable , unpredictable
anything (I've done) and every word (I've written) seemed delusional
The newly created and high-tech space has given me:
a new way of living,
a hope (when I am in despair),
an escape route (whenever I'm stuck),
and a hiding place from my painful reality.
This man-made place is truly a paradise
a modern version of God's lost Garden of Eden
where
I
could
fool myself
hide my true identity
conceal my personality
and pretend to be someone else whom I adored and dreamed of
I could pour out all of my anger, stress, and frustration
and dump all of my garbage from any moment of my madness, imbalance, or intability
also I could share my fun, happiness, and learn something new
The place is easy for anyone to access through a keyboard
I
myself
have made many friends and foes with different strangers worldwide
have given love, empathy, compassion, and understanding
have also spread dislike, hate, abhorrence, detestation, and intolerance
However, I have to admit
it was extremely difficult to communicate and very tricky to navigate on such a blind sea
I became so exhausted and too tired of it, so I took an early checkout without leaving a damned suicide note
To my all dear friends
(those who have often wondered about my whereabouts)
I've been back to my really shitty world
quite busy
to scoop dog poo
and to welcome those extremely strong-minded Jehovah's Witnesses
(those who regularly knock my front door with their colourful brochures about the doomsday)
I must happily maximize my living time here before God put me externally in his hell of high heat
Thao Chuong
2016-07-04
8 Years Ago
Rejection
The sting
I feel it now
Where before
I was sure
Now full of doubt
The wall
Is immense
As I cower
Before it
No way
Forward
Bloody knuckles
Fuck it
Joe Burgess
4/7/2016
8 Years Ago
Viet my friend, you have describe a somewhat familiar place... and still, it's good to be upright... lol
Your "Which World" gave me thought that i need to wade into the creative waters a bit more often, but being careful of not going in over my head... . =>))
I Creator
In the beginning all was available in the potential of the unknown
and i thought
let there be consciousness, and it was so
in the dark days of learning all was incoherent and muddled
and i thought
let there be comprehension, and it was so
in the state of solitude all was self-centered and aloneness
and i thought
let there be companionship, and it was so
in the days of naming, all was this and that, different and separate
and i thought
let there be connectivity to the source, and it was so
in the fading light of time all seemed to weaken into an ending fragility
and i thought
let there be continuation, and it.........
Ed Meredith
April, 2016
8 Years Ago
Hi - Nice to see everyone back - Ed, Viet, Kenneth et al.
Ed - I had to look that one up - I never knew there was a phobia about peanut butter sticking to the roof of your mouth!!
Viet - Welcome home to your mad world :-)
Kenneth - is your book on Amazon?
Jason / Danl - Cuba is a very tired place will write more later :-)
8 Years Ago
I painted my sweat into my canvas
Creating an image for a year
Hung it in a gallery but to no avail
Years passed and no sale
One day it fell upside down
And sold while unattended
Perhaps I should see things
Like other people see
And just turn my canvases around
8 Years Ago
Habana Vieja
Like ants crawling from their holes
Thousands of them descending
Engulfing Everything
Winding their way
Through nooks and crannies
Leaving no stone unturned
Occasionally stopping
Listening
Looking
Demanding
The worker ants are tired
Same thing every day
Same place every day
Long hours low pay
No gratitude for what they do
No hope of progression
Dreams of following back to the holes
To float away on the big seas
To fly away up into the sky
Hope for the future
Hope for change
They always have hope in their hearts
JEM 080416
8 Years Ago
Ahhhhh....
Arghhhhhh
oof
Mmmmm mm...
A pleasant smell
the animals are back at the farm!
mooooooooow mooo mooo
Cockedooodle dandy doo
um
later gaters
tired eyes
weep in the shade
hehe x
hell o Viet
real life is never really that real...
people are fake
life is fake
but some people love that
others create it
the internet is fake
but more real than life
some just dream it to a different realty
a dream of truths that were once lies
wow u showed up mighty quick Jane
did Tarzan... . flaunt himself? chuckle
giraffes at hand to gallop upon into sunsets
Dani tortures himself so we dont have to, sweaty!
that was my thought of the day
bleak as it was
8 Years Ago
Hi All........checking in, been 'lost' a while, so thrilled you are speaking to us again , my friend Viet...........not surprised at your journey to reality....we all go through it.....and want you to keep in touch now, with a renewed interest.......in life, reality, delusion.....all grist for the mill.
And special hello to you, Otis.........peace! I like your attitude.
Thanks all.....this makes the best reading in the forum.
8 Years Ago
Keep on Burning
trying to keep my candle burning
ever eternal burning bright
I must have drifted to sleep
I awoke with the pain of hot wax on my face
it probably saved the house from burning
and no bridges burned
just a little wax on my eye glasses
the world looks even more fuzzed now
Jim Taylor 4/8/2016
8 Years Ago
Good evening everyone. Welcome back top the poetry zoo -lol!
@ Joe Burgess: Rejection is the right word when the head hits a brick wall.
@ Ed: I like your I Creator. Yeah, you could be a creator so long as you are capable of making love -lol.
@ Danl: Too much about art. How about Paris in Spring
@ Jane: How is my ailing old comrade Castro doing Say Hell..Oh to him. Your poem has reminded me of communism
@ Jason: Real and fake are just concept of dualism. None of them exists under Oneness
@ Vivian: Nice to see you here.
@ Jim: Hee... At least no bridge is burning.
Thanks. Have a good night you all
The Satanic Animal
no more leaves
as they believe
not a single leaf
left
in their belief
all
gone
with the wind
fresh air
clean water
running rivers
aqua oceans
vast lands
glazing deserts
green pastures
old growth forests
pristine mountains
wildlife
insects
worms...
even
God was dead
they shot Him right at His head
and sun-dried His remain to feed Satan
any hope
left
for the cruel animal
with blood-tainted hands
the so-called mankind?
Thao Chuong
2016-04-08
8 Years Ago
The Wonder of Nature (Tanka)
morning sun - so bright
diamonds shine on grass blades
I see immense sky
inside each watery drop
so tiny - how could it hold?
Thao Chuong
2016- 04-10
8 Years Ago
Have a restful weekend to all of you .
My sundry thought today
My Question At Noon
Very late
the sun is over my head
all roosters, hens, chicks have left their pen for worms in the field
all animals have got out of their dens in the zoo to enjoy free food given by generous tourists
Looking around
I see no one
I am alone
in this virtual world
I feel lonely inside the new reality of the modern living
To my friends and foes
(from the ones
I admire,
I adore
I like
I love
whom I remember in my heart
to the ones .
I disagree
I dislike
I pity
I hate
whom I don't forgive but I forget
or I don't forgive and I don't forget)
Where are you?
are you still barbecuing yourselves in bed?
wake up, will ja?
Otherwise
you'd be charcoal-burnt
and most importantly, you would miss the quick window of endless opportunities
to be rich
to be famous
to be in power
or be whatever you've been always dreaming of
Wake up right away
hurry up, will you?
or you regret for the rest of your lives.
I could only see my own shadow on the ground
I could only hear my own echos in the air
Where are you?
Thao Chuong
2016-04-10
8 Years Ago
Viet my answer to your question; “Where are you?”
Not lost in someone else's Virtual World but enjoying my own make believe... lol
i’m In Gotham City where the street vendors do the barbecuing and we eat standing up or walking.
i ate and walked until i found a spot to do some art in the physical world…
Trojan Horse At The Gates Of Gotham
Unknown Art Unseen
early morning before the city was awake
i placed three stones on the sidewalk
with nothing more than intention
no rhyme or reason
other than to do it
hundreds waked past without noticed
all but one that is
who stopped before the stones
and smiled
until the pressing crowd push her on
Ed Meredith
2016
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much for dropping by and sharing your thought. Have a good evening
@ Andrey: I like Audrey Hepburn's quote and your artworks
@ Ed: Wow! Your "Unknown Art Unseen" is a poem that stirs my mind up.
Description: This is a ballpoint pen drawing "Art Mechanica" as most of my late work, it took two months to complete this piece. Artists that specialize in ballpoint pen understand just how time consuming projects like this can be. Full size print of this artwork will be available later toward the fall season.
8 Years Ago
An echo to Andrey's today thought
The Possible and the Impossible
"Nothing is impossible
the word itself says 'I'm possible'!"
said
Audrey Hepburn
the fashion icon
the famous movie star
and the compassionate humanitarian.
Her quote reminds me of endless possibilities
which have passed by
right
in front of my eyes
unfortunately, I haven't caught any of them so far
either I was so pessimistic to think "everything is impossible"
or I was unproductive or too slow in my actions.
Her very motivating quote made me believe
the sky is limitless
the universe is infinite
so am I
everything is possible.
However
I still wonder
if I were optimistic in the past,
whether it would make my difference in what I have done so far?
Anyway
the optimists often think
everything is impossible
it is the pure reason why
they
usually get soaked when it rains
and easily catch a cold when it snows
(simply because they disregard the weatherman's advise).
On the other hand
those pessimists always consider that "everything is possible"
so they bring an umbrella, a raincoat, or wear a warm sweater when getting outside
regardless whatever the weather forecast of that day would be).
Somehow, we've been told endless time
"it is better to be optimistic than pessimistic".
However, realistically it is those pessimists
who are the main driving force
for many inventions
and creations
such as
bullet vets,
parachutes,
fire engines,
hard hats,
steel-toe boots,
and hundred thousands of other safety devices and equipment.
So which one you prefer - being optimistic or pessimistic?
Thao Chuong
2016-04-10
8 Years Ago
LOL… Viet, your echo poem, “The Possible and the Impossible” caused me to remember
a posting on one of your previous threads; ”The Road Taken: For Better Or Worse?
The Best of the Worst Thinking
woe is me
proclaimed the pessimist
things never get better
whoa indeed
said the optimist
look on the bright side of it all
things could get worse
Ed Meredith
8 Years Ago
Viet, it is a good thing every now and then to have one’s mind stirred and not shaken…
About three stones:
There is something about coming across objects like three stones on the sidewalk,
that has been placed there with intention, one may just recognize that it’s not just three stones
but a work of art that someone has placed there for some reason… It could just be one
of the last magical things we have… magical in the sense that a person can take an inanimate
object and instill or transfer an idea or spirit into it and the object in return can transfer those ideas
or spirit back to the artist a hopefully to the engaged viewer... because somehow, it magically holds that idea and spirit…
it's 3:30 AM my time, i best be off to bed now so my mind may be prepared for tomorrow's vandalism... lol
Have a restful and optimist day my friend...
8 Years Ago
Good morning Ed, Viva. Thank you for your dialogues which have bought back our good old day. Enjoy a fruitful week.
@ Ed: you have shaken my mind and stirred it up -lol. Your provoking thought has inspired me so much that I stole your idea of "being shaken and stirred" for my today's thought. No money to sue me, my friend.
Let the Mind Not Be Shaken But Be Stirred
Wouldn't I better let my mind be stirred up
for the full awareness of the uncontrollable
in my daily
living?
No matter what I do
I
can
neither change the reality
nor put it under my full control
However, I absolutely change my attitude towards it
Why I not take the day as is
regardless
it rains or shines
and smile on my luck of being alive?
I tend to retreat into my own den and fortify it with iron walls
whenever,
I
feel
so insecure
and too frightened
that I let my mind badly be shaken and taken over by terror from minor risks
Being shaken
feeling insecure
the sole reason
why
the most powerful county on earth has wasted billions of dollars per year
in the so-called Global War on Terrorism - her fruitless effort against an invisible enemy
while she fails to protect her own people from being shot like rats
by her home-made madmen with automatic rifles and lethal handguns
that are produced en mass
by her most productive weaponry industry
Thao Chuong
2016-04-11
8 Years Ago
Viet, Ed, Viva - it is great seeing you back here - you do make us think :-)
DANL - Cannot agree with you more on the mistake!
Ed - Love your Trojan Horse. In response to your three Stones:
To see or not to see
Ed placed three stones on the sidewalk,
A multitude of people passed by,
Unknowing,
Unseeing.
Apart from one,
Whom recognised with a smile,
Something different
Something unusual
What were the odds on that?
100 to 1?
1000 to 1?
Too many earphones
Too many telephones
Too many distractions
Too many selfies
Insular to the core
Take time to look up
Take time to look down
Take time to look around
You too may just see something
Unusual
Different
To make you smile
A beautiful dandelion
in the crack of the pavement
Some moss growing on a wall
In the shape of a face
A child' lost little teddy
Placed safely in the middle of railings
A small, red breasted robin
Singing atop the conifer
Three stones placed delicately
Just in the hope someone
will notice
and
smile
JEM 110416
8 Years Ago
Hi
Just dropping by and saw this thread and noticed the first two post "a poem a day" and "where are you poets?"
It's great to see how those post created a long thread since then. I wish to collect my words again and try to contrbute something the readers can legibly comprehend regardless if they will understand hahaha.
Cheers to you all!
8 Years Ago
Good evening Danl, Jane, and Saigon
@ Danl People hate you when you think, they like you when you shut your mind down and believe in whatever they told you
@ Jane: How has your trip been so far? Do you have any photo to share?
@ Saigon: Nice to see you dropping by, brother. Welcome to put your thought into words and share them here.
Have a restful evening.
Here is my late echo to ED's poem I - Creator
The Creator
Quite excited with his creation
but no one was around
so he couldn't share his satisfaction
he had to talk to himself aloud
"absolutely perfect as expected
it's a piece of finest art created from the scratch .
I
am
so proud
of my talent
of being the best artist of all time"
So exhausted by his hard work
after the long week of six consecutive days - nonstop
without a minute for a breath
No more creation
no more hard work
a break was all what he needed at that moment
he laid his back on a lawn chair
held a glass of fine wine
looked at the blue sky
and let his mind fully rest
As years have passed
his headache has been exponentially increasing with the time
whenever he looks at the only artwork he created
he really regrets at his disastrous mistake
what's a mess!
the two first humans ate the forbidden fruit and escaped from his highly secured Garden of Eden
they have spread like contagious viruses and destroyed everything on their path
Even worse
after gaining the immense knowledge
those sinners have kept challenging him
instead of worshipping
they have nurtured an ambitious desire to take over his reign and be the creators for their own fates
Fortunately
God is smart enough to fully reserve his almighty power for the recall of his faulty products any time
He enjoys melting them as scrap metal
eternally in the high heat of His burning hell
I think
God is the greatest creator
but He ain't a great Old Maser in the history of fine art
I wonder if He still has any appetite left in his peaceful mind to create better mankind after the doomsday?
Thao Chuong
2016-04-10
8 Years Ago
Good moaning et al
Jason - you gone awol? The giraffes have been let loose and the monkeys are running amok.
Saigon - welcome look forward to reading your thoughts.
Viet - lovely having you back on your own thread.
Looking and seeing.
Will try and put Cuba into prose tonight...as we felt it. Xx
8 Years Ago
A Chain Haiku for a friend
..
Sun set ember light
preceding the dusk of night
resting in the dark.
Rest oh rest Earth slaves
let souls dwells in the man-cave
of humanity.
Mind ever restless
or undying to offer zest
never again flee.
Saigon De Manila ©12/4/2016
8 Years Ago
Have a nice day everyone.
@ Jane: Good moaning. Thanks for the photo. Enjoy your holidays. Looking for poem about Cuba.
@ Saigon: Good morning, bother. Nice to read your poetry again. Drop by more often.
@ Jason: You often take your days off, each time I am back, Please pretend that I am dead -lol.
8 Years Ago
People Admire You When You Think, But Hate You When You Make Them Think
(The long title of this a poem is actually a full quote of Danl Art)
To think or not to think
either way, I do,
I am stuck.
she still hates it.
When I think too much, she always asks:
"what are you thinking about?
to make me happy and our lives simple,
why not do exactly as I've just said?".
Whenever I make any slight mistake, she often whines:
"do you lost your mind?
you usually do things without much thinking.
be careful and pay more attention next time ".
She is always right.
east or west
north or south
left or right
whichever direction I go,
I am likely off her railroad track.
Don't take my wrong.
It is just an observation - absolutely not a complaint.
I have no intention to hurt her feeling,
'cause I do love her very much.
also I must admit
that
not only I enjoy the way she acts in love and in sex,
but also I am addicted to her lifestyle.
(I often wonder what my life would be without having her as my thinking cap and my partner).
Thanks her
for her love,
for her cozy companionship,
and for our happy marriage.
I don't mind being driven back and forth like a pendulum
in
between
the two extreme ends:
a silent philosopher without any word
and a thought-provoking poet playing with too many nonsense verses.
Thao Chuong
2016-04-12
8 Years Ago
Hi Jane, thanks for Trojan Horse comment and your “To see or not to see" echo which contained these lines and thought:
Take time to look up
Take time to look down
Take time to look around
You too may just see something
Unusual
Different
To make you smile
A beautiful dandelion
in the crack of the pavement
Some moss growing on a wall
In the shape of a face
JEM 110416
Your words reminded me of what i found on the sidewalk not to long ago:
And for those who are not familiar with Alley Oop:
Alley Oop is a syndicated comic strip, created in 1932 by American cartoonist V. T. Hamlin, who wrote and drew the popular and influential strip through four decades for Newspaper Enterprise Association. Hamlin introduced an engaging cast of characters, and his story lines entertained with a combination of adventure, fantasy and humor.
Alley Oop, the strip's title character, was a sturdy citizen in the prehistoric kingdom of Moo.
And this image looks just like him... lol
8 Years Ago
A poem in Tanka form echoed from Viet's - "The Wonder of Nature" (Tanka)
The Wonder of Nature (Tanka)
morning sun - so bright
diamonds shine on grass blades
I see immense sky
inside each watery drop
so tiny - how could it hold?
Thao Chuong
--------------------------
Echo in Tanka Form
i fell from the void
into a drop of water
that holds everything
some call it the universe
others like me call it home
Ed Meredith
April 2012
8 Years Ago
hello hello hello
rip
not u Ed, u deserve a steak, lol
Jaaaaaaaaaaane
i wrote a poem for your lovely photograph
but it was too hammy so i
i might go back to basics
giraafes
swallow a long way
down
down
down
to
here
is the tum
and out it
plops
plop
plop
o o o
poerty
in the jungle
never stopped
i mean the potty
and the spotty
giraf
poop
look like 3 stones
i saw someone playing with on a roadside
haha ha
hello Saig i been ignoring Marias thread til she resusitates it
(good to see you powered up)
like Viet
back from the grave.....
8 Years Ago
It looks like all our trains came to the station at the same time… LOL
Running for President in the USA
The Public Hate Debate
i was slack jawed and wide eyed paying my dues
watching the candidates light the fuse
to short for public debate
once lit so hard to stop the hate
its us against them they say
they're so different in every way
foreign
untrustworthy
dangerous to our way of life
they bring their god
their culture
along with their constant strife
less than human has been proven so they say
stop them at the borders keep them in their place
remove them now remove them right away
and quickly quicken the pace
keep our country pure
the way it use to be
a mythical land of equality
from sea
to shinning sea
it’s a place for us not for them
to live in harmony
still slack jawed and wide eyed
i stood and watched and cried
as the placards rose with this bit of prose
LET'S PUT THE I BACK IN AMERCA
AND VOTE FOR ME VOTE FOR HYSTERIA
Ed Meredith
April 2016
8 Years Ago
Ed - Brilliant - and the leaf even looks like the robin!! By the way
"keep our country pure"
....does that mean the white man is moving out and the red Indians are moving back? lol
Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaason - hammy - you - Never! Just the old British toilet humour LOL - we are reduced to plops again - by the way - good link to the three stones :-) Like it!
DANL - Good call!!🏇🐎 Spare my blushes🙉
Viet - Hope your reality world was true to you today.
8 Years Ago
Good Day to Ed and Danl
Good Die to Jason and Jane (sorry for my bad British ekcent)
My echo to Ed poem Running for President in the USA - The Public Hate Debate
Comes the Election Time with the Heated and Hate Debates that Put U.S.A. Inflame and in Shame!
US Politics sounds like a joke
yet
it is very serious and practically real
In the past
American citizens elected a president
who launched a full scale of war to invade another nation
only
based on
his silly obsession about weapon of mass destruction
the man was so illiterate not to know the dammed fact
that no other accused "rouge states" than his own nation which had stock-piled the most weapon of mass destruction in the world
American people also elected a black man - the first president
he is a "yes-we-can" talker
but ain't a good deliverer
who has failed to do his trick of pulling the rabbit out of his hat
United States of America is obviously the land of opportunities
everything is possible
every dream could come true
No matter what you are: a fascist, a sexist, a racist, a feminist
and regardless
of
your political stripe: left or right,
your social value: liberals, conservatives, or socialists,
and your religious belief: Protestants, born-again Christians, or atheists
You can fulfil your dream
on condition that you could afford to run a public office and also have tons of money
at least enough for an expensive and tiring election campaign.
Now comes the election time
hurry up
jump on the wagon
throw your own firewood into these heated debates for loves and hates
Who knows
you may have enough skills of deception
to
become
the best candidate
who could pull up the tired nation and wake up the Americans people from their political nightmare
Voila!
there you go
you could be the next president of the most powerful country in the world;.
Thao Chuong
2016-4-12
8 Years Ago
Description: Setting off early in the morning in Havana Vieja to sell bananas for eating and limes for mojitos.
I think that you caught the real spirit of the "old" Cuba in your photo of a street vendor selling bananas and limes on his "tricycle cart".
Haa...Your description is funny as its' written bananas are sold for eating. Did you mean bananas in Havana is no longer sold for throwing them at those capitalist-pigs -lol.
Here is my poem for Cuba written from my inspiration of your above photo
Cuba - Havana - Cigars - Sugar Canes - Bananas and Limes.
After over a half century of trade embargo
Uncle Sam has become extremely tired of holding his tight grips
finally he looses his muscles a little bit for a good rest
He punched a small hole on his front door
just
big enough
for his cats and dogs roaming free outside for some fresh air
Welcome you back to Uncle Castro's beloved country
his sacred land of famous sugar canes
not-much-change since his bloody revolution
Amigos Gringos
it's over
don't worry
strolling around Havana - the capital of Cuba
you see neither posters of anti-capitalist pigs
nor anti-American slogans on old walls
Cuba has just been added
to the list of cheap destinations
for those American tourists of fat bellies
Now, you only hear the cheerful greeting:
"Hola, ¿qué tal estás? ¡A los años!"
Amigos Gringos
welcome here
where you could easily lose weigh
by
sweating in hot Latin dancing
taking a long walk around any beautiful small town
sunbathing under glazing sun on a sandy beach
eating Cuban's exotic and healthy food instead of high fat fast food at home
It's still safe and peaceful here
you
can leave at home
your stress,
your insecurity,
your fear of being shot in your own town by a madman
and especially your phobia of being blown off in a terrorist's attack
Amigos Gringos
come take a nice break
cool your throat with fresh lime juice in mojitos drink
puff a cigar while looking at the aqua sea
release your mind from all troublesome thoughts
cleanse your heart off soil from hate and intolerance
and refresh yourselves
Do it quick
or you would go bananas
by being caught in the traffic jam full of over-weighed aliens with fat bellies from your own country
Thao Chuong
2016-04-12
8 Years Ago
The Tao of Games
ah the screen the electronic dream
the place one never dies
virtual worlds endlessly refreshed
over and over again
the eternal now on replay
so easy to be
win or lose
there is nothing
to choose
except to play...
follow the path
Ed Meredith
April 2016
8 Years Ago
"I live in that solitude which is painful in youth, but delicious in the years of maturity.” ~ Albert Einstein
8 Years Ago
Viet, good to see you are back from your Soul vacation. Your words are always missed!
A Sabatical
Were you sorting through the threads
of your modern day life,
combing those electronic tangles
until the sun could shine through?
Did you unravel the knots
of Shelobs' web,
giving yourself more room
for the Artists' Journey?
Karen Newell
4/13/16
8 Years Ago
Good afternoon everyone.
@ Danl: I am lost in you quote. Fortunately, I have found my way out - safe and sound
@ Ed: Your poem "The Tao of Games" has driven a sharp nail into the heart of the virtual world
@ Karen: Welcome my friend. Very nice to see you dropping by with a poem. I have enjoyed the beauty of your poetry on Maria's thread, I am sorry that I didn't have much time for a chat. Please drop by more often and share your poetic thought.
Have a good night to all
My today's thought - a crude response to Danl's quote: "Paris is full of Muslim terrorists...they disguise themselves as pickpockets"
Bias - an Infectious Disease of the Mind
It is unjust
to partially judge,
then illogically make a general conclusion
that a few bad apples fully represent the quality for all other fruits from the same tree.
Generalization gives birth to bias
which is psychologically a mental disease.
it could be found only in a very sick mind
of an extremist
who
enjoys
throwing dirt
and smearing hatred
at all people of a specific race or a religion without exception.
Bias - an infectious disease.
it spreads like a forest fire burning everything on its path into ash.
it
replaces peace with war,
turns God into Satan,
makes dogs eat dogs,
and puts humans against humans.
Whenever biases take over the minds and occupy the hearts,
love is shattered,
compassion is ruined,
people get lost in the labyrinth of fears.
Consequently, some humans keep building more and more concrete walls around themselves
to make them illusively feel safer.
in fact,
the feeling of insecurity comes from the inner-selves - not from the outer universe.
so long as a person keeps turning the immense universe into a small space,
there
will be
less room for him to live
not enough air for everyone to breath.
By
freeing your minds from all biases,
cleansing hatreds from your hearts,
destroying all walls and remove all borders around you,
and releasing yourselves from those self-confined cells to the immense world,
you will certainly find happiness whenever you live in harmony with nature and with other beings on earth.
Thao Chuong
2016-04-13
8 Years Ago
East of Cuba by a banana tree
Someone dropped bananas...
and the tree aint happy
now its bananaless
its enuf to drive u
oranges! peaches! even plum crazy!
minds a little hazey
eyes gone glazey
tempers gone blazey
hah!
had u there...
u be bananas!
nr Havana
at this time of year
drinking beer
with a lime
spending
a dime
or 2
hooo hooo hooo
cooo cooo cooo
o o o
stoned
(with things that lookecd like sprouts i kept asking myself, why on earth... ohhhh limes! read i must)
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
o o o
an echo to Viets cuba poem and Janes photograph and Eds ominous stones
lol love these lines of Viets
"or you would go bananas
by being caught in the traffic jam full of over-weighed aliens with fat bellies from your own country"
8 Years Ago
Morning all x
Viet -eloquent as ever...Bias - I could not have put that better.
Jason -hehe you tickle me.
My Thoughts on CUBA.
If only I didn't believe what I read
And learned more Spanish before I packed
Everyone speaks English...So they said
But that is only in the tourist trap
We will go before the Americans move in
Before Kentucky, McDonalds and Dunkin D
little did we know, on every corner and in some windows
Pizza sandwiches for breakfast and cakes all day
Tourist traps were like a swarm of ants
With tired workers, long hours poor pay
No one wants to engage or serve
Nothing to serve but grunts and groans
Away from the tourist traps things were buzzing
Locals everywhere, money is coming
Clothing, jewellery, painted nails
Excited chattering, more shops and eating out,
There appears to be disparity growing
just like anywhere else in the world
We have the haves and the have nots,
Cuba is becoming no different
to here
and there...
JEM 130416
8 Years Ago
An echo to Jason's East of Cuba by a banana tree and to Jane's description for her photo of a street vendor selling bananas and limes in the "Old Havana".
Of Habana Veija - Its Charming Cobble Streets and Banana Peels
Seeing
bananas and limes sold
on streets of the "Old Havana"-
not as inside supermarkets of mega shopping malls in England
the British tourist took too many photos of street vendors selling fruits
and wrote this amusing description "in Habana Veija, bananas sold for eating and limes for mojitos"
She might not know
in
Cuba
Limes are not only used in mojitos for Western tourists to smooth their dried throats from the tropical heat
but also used daily by the locals for one thousand oh one recipes in the authentic Caribbean cuisine.
Banana is one of the most affordable fruits for the working-class Cubans
but
rather just simply stripping bananas naked
and eating the white flesh inside
they use for their daily home-made bakery
banana pie, banana bread, banana muffins, banana pudding,
and so on...
on the long list
In Habana Veija
bananas
are
popular fruit
(often eaten by those kids from poor families
of course they ain't too stupid to eat the inedible cover.),
bananas
are
also a potential trap for rich tourists
(those who walk on high-heel shoes
while busily texting on an I-phone).
So far, no report of any Western tourist killed
by accidentally stepping over banana peels
while walking on charming cobble streets in Havana
(Anyway who would be so naive to believe in the statistics
released
by the Cuban authorities?)
Thao Chuong
2016-04-14
8 Years Ago
"There appears to be disparity growing
just like anywhere else in the world
We have the haves and the have nots,
Cuba is becoming no different
to here
and there..."
JEM 130416
So true, Jane.. The same has already happened in few Communist-governed countries left in the world such as China, Vietnam. Cambodia. Where only the members of the Communist Party become very rich while their workers not only work hard and also get low pay. Furthermore, they are also abused and have their basic human rights seriously violated by Police, and other authorities, even by the regular Communists Party members.
Communism has promised to build a heaven on earth for all workers after their revolutions . However, those newly-formed-class - the so-called Red Capitalists have exploited workers of their own countries much worse than those who they loudly accuse as "capitalist-pigs.
8 Years Ago
Description: ''When you have learned about love, you have learned about god.''
(Native American Fox Proverb) -
Sub-titled:::::Effervescence.........!
Our Love Is So Strong, is a celebration in abstract of the myriad colors of love; a celebration of excitment,intense;a celebration of pure happiness, in every color of .. Passionate Love........an explosion !!
An echo to Viva's above painting.
Our Love Is So Strong
Once upon time, you held my hands and said to me
"Honey! Our love is so strong.
It lasts forever.
No one can break it.
Maybe, God could separate us by a death.
Yet, He cannot split our love into two halves".
At that most amorous moment
I wished
if you could have told me:
"our love is so sweet - so romantic.
let's enjoy the exotic taste of it, while it lasts ."
However I was thrilled by what you had said
You did make me believe
no matter
or whatsoever could have happened
our love must be still
fully intact
forever.
No natural disaster would burn it, strike it, shake it, blow it, or wash it away
not a wild fire
not a lighting
not an earthquake
not a hurricane
nor a tsunami
(even if the sky fell down
and we were crushed to death side by side
but our strong love must be fully intact.)
One day, you let me face with my shattered heart
by myself alone
in distress
Now I truly believe
at that time you really meant:
"Our love is so strong as long as I want it to be."
Thao Chuong
2016-04-14
8 Years Ago
Thank you,Viet....not only a poet extraordinary, but a 'seer' too. We shall see,yes...I so appreciate your post and..intent, but of course would wish for a happier ending............VIVA
8 Years Ago
Viet - So true and so sad regarding communism. But to me they can label it with any name - everywhere is as bad. I am sure you know we are on the verge of a referendum as to whether we leave the EU or not. Here is one good reason why we should - it proves we are all run by business, not the people we put in power : http://www.independent.co.uk/voices/comment/what-is-ttip-and-six-reasons-why-the-answer-should-scare-you-9779688.html
DANL - I agree, Cubans are probably better staying independent!
8 Years Ago
Doubtful...How much interest is there in people leaving this country as compared to those fighting to get in? Let's not kid ourselves--America has its problems--but not too many Cuban refugees are looking to return to the old country for a better life.
8 Years Ago
Good evening Vivian, Danl, Jane, Ken, and Sir Josef. Have a good evening to all;
My thought of the night
Of Capitalism - the Greed of "Capitalist-pigs"
and of Communism -the "Heaven-on-earth"
Those of you who live in the West
often complain
against
the rich and big corporations
for huge profits - they make
at any cost to the environment and to all beings on earth.
Capitalism is likely the son of a bitch - utterly addicted to money.
the more
money he makes,
the more obsessed he becomes .
he has no time for anything else - not even for his own health,
let alone costly love and unaffordable compassion for others.
So true about the immense disparity
between the haves and the have-nots
it is impossible to defend the exploitation of your labour
However, its alternative
Communism is horribly worse.
it uses you , abuses you , squeezes you , then discards you as a piece of lemon out of juice
Communism is a real "heaven-on-earth"
but
only
for its Party members - the have- everything
while all the workers and all the people are the have-nothing
Moreover, don't forget
under
capitalism
while making huge profits to serve his own self
and fulfill his urge for greed,
a "capitalist pig" creates jobs for you and incomes for everyone else,
consequently, he generates wealth for the whole economy.
Certainly, capitalism cannot offer a heaven-on-earth for you
at least, it gives you those who were born, raised and live in the West (its belly button )
a good living condition
with many public facilities and nice health-cares
the majority of you are employed, have an income, own a car, or may pay for a mortgage
a decent welfare system ain't a bad backup, in case you become unemployed, sick, or homeless.
I bet you
those buzzing Westerners
if you were citizens of North Korea, China, Vietnam, or Cuba
absolutely, you would be dead meat to be fed for fish in a river or in the ocean
so
keep
fighting
for your better living
but stop whining and enjoy chewing the yummy goodies in your full mouth.
Thao Chuong
2016-04-15
8 Years Ago
Shame on America
30 billion spent on illegals
Less than half
Spent on returning vets
Health and housing
For illegals
Little for poverty Americans
Shame on America
May you perish in hell
In an inferno of flames
8 Years Ago
Good morning Danl and Jane. Have a restful weekend to all.
Here is an echo to Sir Josef's Coconut Clouds
About Coconut Clouds
Like you
I love coconut clouds
they help me fulfill many of my wild dreams
they drive me high into the sky
I
could
fly like a bird
float with wandering cloud
or walk on the moon without a space shuttle
Ah. I could be thrilled by the unreal feelings
whenever I am so high
to become an emperor
or a god
It`s why I am addicted to coconut clouds as you are.
Thao Chuong
2016-04-16
8 Years Ago
Sundry Thought of Coconuts
I hate coconuts
their inedible shells are as burly as the minds of those ultra-conservative guys
(whose talks I've heard or whose writing I've read so far)
those hard shields are not only tough to be cracked
but also impossible for digestion.
Ironically, I like coconuts for the mildly sweet juice and creamy meat inside
unlike
a hardcore-mind
after being split
I could find nothing but a little pit - rough to chew.
Coconuts only give me joy
better than any delight from love and sex
(Oh,
I could never get rid of troublesome after-math
the
drilling
headache,
I often get from those women with whom I've been in romance.)
Coconuts don`t ripe
when they're young and immature, I can enjoy the sweet juice.
as they get older and mature I can crush the white meat for creamy milk
Thao Chuong
2016-04-16
8 Years Ago
I love to watch my machete
With its shiny blade
Cutting through the air
Glistening as it moves
Closer to its prey
Gaining speed as it
Approaches my bare hand
Crunch and splatter
The blood of the coconut
Ready to be savored
Like milk from the breast
8 Years Ago
Really?
a response to "Shame on America" and the curse wished upon the USA that it, "May perish in hell in an inferno of flames" by Danl
really…
you know nothing John Snow
or is it Nicolas Chauvin
that calls the kettle black
one might look around
and clean one’s own house first
before placing the curse
of your friend to burn
and perish in hell
but it’s OK
here in the land of free speech
to speak ill of US
and curse US to eternal damnation
for we are a charitable and resilient people
who wish nothing but the best for your nation
with its own political and cultural existential crisis
and we are looking warmly forward
to welcoming you with open arms
as you join US in hell
where we can burn together
Ed Meredith
April 2016
8 Years Ago
Alone Together with One’s Own Voice
last night’s five random thoughts in tanka
to know one’s own voice
be alone in refection
creation’s workshop
quiet from influences
of illusionary thought
——————————-
i listen i hear
my voice of divinity
found in solitude
even in crowded places
authentic gentle and clear
——————————-
stream of consciousness
my internal monologues
schizophrenia
verbal hallucinations
found very entertaining
——————————-
life is a story
woven together from thoughts
false recollections
of feelings and emotions
not necessarily mine
——————————-
sunsets paint the sky
in a technicolor world
created in mind
curious to what is real
when looking out from inside
——————————-
Ed Meredith
April 2016
8 Years Ago
Riddle of Truths
Truth is often buried
hidden
because no one wants to believe our accepted truths might
lie
or fail in being the truth
yet the real truths are so dreadful
we need to believe
they are lies
or so powerful
we must hide from them...
as lies are true, and truths are lies
or fail in being the real truth
we are but a moments breath
exhaled
then lost
and that to me
is a good thing
truthfully
it is good that you are not my truth!
and i, gladly, am not your false truths
that some might say
are lies?
the truth
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
some swords cut both ways
some truths are swords
8 Years Ago
thanks for the wonderful journey in limes Viet and Jane i d k wot u r sayin gal
its your uccent
cook up a banana cake Jane! lol
coconut juice is to be drunk slowly
chilled
in peace
The Blue Door
Someone knocked
at the blue door
and smoked the afternoooooooon
away
waiting outside...
dreaming of whom he knew
might still, these years later
be inside
but no one answered
for the day was far too warm
to lose the cool chill
of blue
within
the day mellowed at sunset
as smoke carried unto clouds
and forms of love appeared
as clouds glided into dance
and
a face in tears appeared
as the smoke choked the clouds
and
there
he saw himself...
as a heron flew
in gentle flight
a silhouette of the man he was
quietly the door
opened
in silence
The man waited
unknowing...
of the great spirit
who stood behind him
holding onto his heart.. .
...that had in that moment, died
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
echoes on echoes on echoes.. .
where tears and laughter
coalesce
8 Years Ago
Thoughts of today ! May I say............thank you for the feedback on My Coconut Clouds.......................
At times our own light goes out and is rekindled by a spark from another person.............
I say grace before the concert and the opera, and grace before the play and pantomime..........
I open a book, and grace before sketching, painting, loving and grace before I dip the pen in the ink.................
No duty is more urgent than that of returning thanks...................
You are the charming gardener who makes my soul blossom and I am grateful that you are in my life....................
All the above to my true wife of honor and trust and a must of pure lust .................................
So I make a spell before I scream and yell................
This spell so strong so true that is why I love you
8 Years Ago
Wow..wow.. wow... to Dankl, Ed, and Jason. . It is a day of poetry
@ Danl: You have become more more more poetic in your expression. I love you last verse
@ Ed: Your poetic response to Danl would make him think...And he hate that. Your five tankas are much better than any five-star hotel with erotic room-service -lol.
@ Jason: What's a momentum. Your poetry is soaring like a hurricane and burning like a wild-fire
as a heron flew
in gentle flight
a silhouette of the man he was
I enjoy those magic words
@ Sir Josef: Nice to read your thought. Keep Sharing
I am overwhelmed! Good night and sleep tight.
8 Years Ago
An echo to Jason's poem Riddle of Truths
The Naked Truth
"Grandpa
I only see a half moon
who broke it in halves?", asked my little grandchild.
Not easy for me
to find an appropriate answer to his simple question
he is too young to grasp my complex explanation
Even
it is quite difficult
for some adults to comprehend
that
what is happening in front their naked eyes
may not be the truth
but purely an illusion
simply because the mind is often deceived by its delusional perception of reality.
However
as eye-witnesses
those adults would fight to their own death in defense for their own version of the truth
Seeing me falling in deep thought
he shook my middle finger
to get my attention :
"Grandpa!
I looked from the upper deck last night
and saw another half moon in our neighbor's swimming pool
The little girl next door must break it".
"Yeah!
Is it so?
how do you know it, my grandson?"
He innocently claimed
" You know what!
I saw her naked in the pool
She even broke her own penis."
I bent myself down, lifted him up, and threw him in the air
we both laughed aloud
You know!
My grandson's naive reality
is often more trustworthy
than
any naked truth
of some adults whom I have met.
Thao Chuong
2016-04-17
8 Years Ago
Jason love your blue door- brilliant!
Echoes to Jason, Viet and Sir Josef.
Truths, lies and sundries.
It is a banana
This we can clearly see
The difference between
A lime and a coconut
This is obvious
to those who know
What would happen if
You were raised believing
A banana was a lime
A lime was a coconut, and,
a coconut was a banana.
If someone told you to squeeze a lime
Would you squash your bananas
If you were asked to crack open a coconut
Would you peel a lime
And if you were asked to make a banana shake
Would you be using coconut milk
You can clearly see where deceptions are made
How simple it is to twist the truths
And turn them into lies
Such a dangerous game to play
Are you a believer in what you cannot see
Or, are you agnostic and have to see to believe
Or, are you athiest and still do not believe
Even though you have clearly been shown
Just imagine
If you were brought up
With twisted truths
And
Being
an
Athiest
JEM 170416
8 Years Ago
America eats off the plates of the homeless
Offering health care for a price
Then taking away their homes
Taxing those that make next to nothing
Punishing the poor
Starving children
Poisoning the minds of civilization
Come to me says Satan
You shall parish in my land
8 Years Ago
Good morning all
@ Jane: A wow to you. I like the last stanza of your poem:
Just imagine
If you were brought up
With twisted truths
And
Being
an
Atheist
JEM 170416
@ Danl: Haa..Do you want Americans to feel sad or to be mad at your thought on USA?
Have a nice day to all.
8 Years Ago
My thought of the day comes from Ed's following Tanka
sunsets paint the sky
in a technicolor world
created in mind
curious to what is real
when looking out from inside
The Outside through a Keyhole
——————————-
Ed Meredith
April 2016
The World through a Keyhole
In the eyes of a frog
that sits at the bottom of a well,
the sky is absolutely not bigger than a round hat.
Based on the indisputable reality
about
what he sees.
in no doubt
he must believe in his undeniable factual truth
"Croak! croak ! croak!
I see the sky
bluish
and infinite
how amazing it is!"
wind blows to his ears the cheerful voice of a frog leaping on the ground
he looks up
and still gets the same view of the sky above
he laughs aloud and shouts back:" It's bullshit! Get lost with your insane thought!".
Likewise
through a small keyhole
my eyes always get a limited view of the world outside
it
certainly
would provide my mind
with narrow perception of the universe
I could be either the arrogant frog sitting at the bottom of a well
or the free-minded one hoping on the ground
depending pretty much
on
how
where
I prefer to put myself
when I look at the world
Thao Chuong
2016-04-17
8 Years Ago
i had two thoughts today... this first post was my second thought (revised memory), my second post will be my first thought...
Echo to Viet's 'The World through a Keyhole'
A Point of View From My Little Room
a sliver of the world
is seen from my little room
with its narrow window
cut on an angle
my perspective is skewed
understanding
obtuse
one-sided
swirling intoxicated
with delusion and madness
from what i see through my narrow window
i write on the walls
of my little room
what i think
what i feel
space
a premium
is running out
with no way to erase
whats been written
i've filled the walls
most of the floor
pondering the difficulty of the ceiling
saved for last
hoping my pen will write upside-down
making my thoughts
right-side up sense
Ed Meredith
8 Years Ago
Chauvin…
My Friend - My Allié
Chauvin, Chauvin is that really you
i can not believe the hatred you spew
we were once such good friends in the past
but now you wear the mask
of righteousness
condemning and wishing the end
of US
of you and me
i wonder where this comes from
this
hatred
were you harmed by a lover
who promised you all things American that She
never delivered
or did He abandon you in a "zone of banishment"
of discrimination
segregation
Les Banlieues
petri dishes of dissatisfaction
stewing in their tall towers
homegrown jihadist and things incendiary
is that where you learned
the chant
Death to America
Death to America
Death to America
is it still you Chauvin
or are you now Mehdi Nemmouche
Tariq bin al-Tahar bin al-Falih al-Awni al-Harzi
or
Ali bin Something bin al-Something or-Other
i wonder Chauvin
who you are
Frenchman
or propagandist legionnaire of the caliphate
when you chant
Death to America
Death to America
Death to us
Death to you and me
Ed Meredith
April 2016
8 Years Ago
Morning Ed, DANL, Viet, Jason et Al.
Purely Geography
Purely geography my dears.
Mexico is closer to North America
as the Middle East is to Europe.
Skewed truths abound,
we know not about anywhere
unless
we are
immersed
in its life,
culture,
peoples,
truths and lies.
Ask questions from a variety of people
and eek out a varied response.
Look for the good and the bad,
stick it in a bowl
and mix it up.
Still the same truths and lies.
Nothing can be changed after baking,
it is still the same ingredients.
No matter where we are......
Only to varying degrees
It is the same truths and lies....
whether in print or not....
JEM 180416
8 Years Ago
Viet-
Sad be those who are raped
Stripped of their freedoms
Hushed of their words
Robbed of their souls
And drown in a sea of propaganda
8 Years Ago
Today's Thinking Thought Tanka
i think and i thought
what i think about thinking
to think about thought
when i thought i was thinking
i'm awake in my coma
Ed Meredith
April18, 2016
8 Years Ago
Good morning Ed. Danl, and Jane.
Overwhelmed by the momentum of your poetic expression
a rumbling wow
from
my big mouth
to your poetic flow.
Ah, I think
I have collected enough heat for the coming winter.
Also the last winter in Victoria was so mild.
as a result,
I have some left-over firewood
I'd like to throw in your bonfire
would you mind
me
enjoying the cold night with you? -lol.
The following is my thought of the day -inspired by yours. Thanks.
Does America Belong to Americans?
Or Does this Continent Belong to the Citizens of the United States?
The people of the United States of America officially call themselves as Americans
and have tried to claim the entire continent America
as their own country.
Maybe, it is purely an honest mistake
which
comes from
both their illiteracy about geography
and their incompetency of the English language .
Maybe it is an arrogant attitude of a bully
who
would thinks
she owned the whole continent.
America
is
geographically known
as the Western Hemisphere and the New World
This whole continent comprises all territories and all countries
in both North America and South America
(Despite
of
her illegal claim
the United States of America is legally just only one of the three countries in North America
the other two are Mexico and Canada.)
In the English language
the term "Americans"
Must
be used
to indicate the people of the whole continent America
as
"Australians" for the people of the continent Australia,
"Asians" for peoples of different countries in Asia,
"Africans" for peoples of different countries in Africa,
"Europeans" for peoples of different countries in Europe,
et cetera...
If United States of America is successful in her new claim
America solely belongs
to
her nation
all other countries on this continent
would automatically become her new states
it would be a bloodless invasion in the human's history
Goodbye America
And welcome Americans to the New World
Thao Chuong
2016-04-18
8 Years Ago
Viet - Glad to see you fanning the flames - can feeeeeeeeeel the heat.!
Ed - love your thought Tanka - made me think of Tweety Pie and Sylvester:
I tort I saw a puddy tat
I tort I saw a puddy tat
I deed I deed
I saw a puddy tat
Stuck up a tree
With a giraffe
staring
directly
at him
Quietly
chewing leaves
off the tops
of branches
The monkey
threw a banana
aiming it at
Sylvester
hitting him
smack
between the eyes
The giraffe laughed
so hard
his teeth fell out.
They landed atop
the tortoise
who sped off
round the track
with the hare.
Tweety Pie
Was sitting
in the way
oooooooo
tweety pie.
Pastry required
JEM 180416
8 Years Ago
HAHAHaaaa.. Jane mmmmm... tort... can i have seconds.
No fire here to fan 'cause i know who i am and i'm good with it...
Thinking about the dilemma of AMERICA and AMERICANS
What shall we call those people from the United States…
those people who come from ALL around the world
Unitedstatians
Unitians
Statians
USAers
USeans
USers
or just plain
US...
such a Dilemma
anyone with better idea
than AMERICAN
help US out
cause we are stuck with that
-----------------
What’s in a name…
i am a North American from the United States and i am called an “American”…
i’m sorry if that rubs some people the wrong way or causes discomfort to others, but It seems really logical to use, “America” and “Americans” for after all,
the country’s name is, “United States of America”.
Yes there are many other countries in the continents of this hemisphere we called the Americas… North America, South America and Central America… but i think the USA is the only one with America in its name… and when one thinks about it, the "United States of America" means that the United States belongs to America and not that America belongs to the United States.
We “Americans” who use common sense, refer to our country in formal and informal conversation as the USA or United States or the simply the States …
We Thinking Americans would phrase things like this:
No America did not wrongfully invade Iraq… the United States wrongfully invaded Iraq
But you really have to Blame in on the Brits… sorry Jane... LOL
Because historically the term America was used to denote anything from the Americas, which consists of North America and South America. In the 1500’s the term American was used to represent the native inhabitants of the lands of the New World. However, in the English language, American came to refer specifically to the peoples of British America, and later narrowed down more to include just the newly formed country of the United States of America… and of course this happened in the late 1700s. The British were the first ones to call citizens of the USA “Americans.”
So as we Americans say, we had it first and possession is nine tenths of the law... . =>))
8 Years Ago
Hello Shelundra.
Ed - good job us Brits have broad shoulders lol and extra good luck it was all in the past!
8 Years Ago
Welcome Shelundra...
Jane. i know all about them broad shoulders... we lived in your neck of the woods in 1988 for a year in Lytham Saint Annes... my wife was working for the NHS.
i was known around town as the gentleman with the American accent... lol
funny story:
We were having a couple over for dinner one night and Lynne (my wife) wanted to serve chicken and said our guest had hardy appetites...
i assumed they ate large portions. I asked Lynne what size chicken should i get from the butcher, she said, "i don't know, something around eight pounds".
Now i thought that was pretty large for a chicken but i'll try. When i asked the butcher if he had a eight pound chicken, he smiled at me knowing i was American and said, "Is that weight or money".
We all had a good laugh and he had a good Pub story about the Yank and the eight pound chicken... i'm sure he embellished it for effect... LOL
8 Years Ago
Ha...Ed and Jane You've been running very fast. Slow down, won't you? Wait for Danl to catch his breath -lol
Welcome Shelundra and thanks for sharing your thought. I'd like your quote: "Life can be taken away without hesitation so notice everything and stress for nothing.
A thought from your quote
My Dream of Being Immortal
As a ,mortal being
my life is so fragile and too dedicated to handle
it could be easily taken away
against my will
at any time
I tend to forget
my life is my most valuable belonging
not anything else.
Yet, I always risk it
for many things
which
I want
but I don't really need them for my living
I wish
if my life would be replaceable like a driver's license
in case
it is lost or stolen
i would apply for a new one
Dreaming of being immortal
is probably one of many reasons
why
I often bury myself
in the virtual
land
Whenever my virtual life is over
I can reset the game
to play again
again...
....
...
.
until, I am exhaustively drop
my face on the keyboards
and start snoring
Thao Chuong
2016-04-18
8 Years Ago
good day Viet, Ed, Jane, Dani, Shelundra,
my echoes follow out of con text lol to the poetic escapades in battle
quite right Viet, we salute immortality endlessly
don't live once, keep,doing it, and snoring might be good for you, like gardening or blood transfusions or chocolate
(edit: actually snoring might not be good for you if it leads to obstructive sleep apnea)
puddy cat indeed lol, u crazy girl Jane, very clever
i tort we was was tinking but man we was just stinking
dont be prejudiced about turkey, they have enough on their plate without adding to it .
my very dry humour Jane
i find it distressing i have to clarify what is not nonsense and what is... man, but anyway
on nationality, race and America, Americano and Americana, some nonsense..
on nationhood -
the race to space and a new space nationality - the spaced out facers, space dude racers, the space they havent sold to us yet or shares to a black hole, chuckle, only joking, and the apple in space pie nationhood... i digressed, whoops lol
it really was a ufo but they pissed off back
baked with Alaska has a new meaning
chill in space
it really is all your fault! ok we was joking
a melting ice berg froze in America
ok thats my lot of rubbish besides....
i recently watched a discussion in which i heard someone in America refer to America as a bi-racial nation... but which races i wondered...???
CORRECTION noted by Eds pen, i recently watched a discussion in which i heard someone in the US refer to the US as a bi-racial nation... but which races i wondered...???
rich and poor?
black and white?
black and brown?
white and brown?
pink and not pink?
on the brink and off the brink?
yellloow and you?
Jew and non Jew?
Christian and non Christian?
Muslims
Muslims
everybody on pot and the rest?
the west and east? of the states
First Nations and the rest?!!!!
either way, the statement was unchallenged by the interviewer and ii thought that profoundly .. . alarming
multiculturalism is the result of hundreds if not thousands of years of emigration and immigration in every direction
and in Britain's case, the Commonwealth that fought in two world wars supplying millions of soldiers and also centuries of endless trade...
perhaps eventually we will all return
to Ethipoia
the dawn of humanity
the sunset of humanity
the rainbow will always be beautiful!
i should write some poetry one day...
but I wondered lonely as a cloud
to find a host of other
clouds
each one raining different ways
each one rained on endless days...
good moaning peeps
(some kind of parody but i dont knoow whats real anymore, i just have to guess and reasses)
8 Years Ago
Good moaning et al.
Ed, if we were immortal do you think we would learn and the world would be a better place?
Jason some good thunks there, you made me tink. (do u work night shifts?!! Or just can't sleep?)
Just to throw my tort of the day out there..... as Britain strives to be multicultural, by some, not by all, and some cultures remain enclaved. ......
Does multiculturalism kill patriotism?
8 Years Ago
No it doesn't Jane, most British minorities are proud to be British, multi culturalism is nothing new, its been around a very long time in many nations. Most nations have many strands of mankind and ethnicities woven into their heritage, be that the UK, France, Spain, Turkey, Egypt, the US etc
the Roman legions were multi ethnic, the Roman legions that occupied England for a few 100 years were Iraqi, ancient Rome was multi ethnic and the centre of the world, the most integrated and awesome empire of might... contrary to what people suggest, Rome didn't crumble from within but to outside 'barbarian' European tribes who were fleeing the Huns.
I consider myself multicultural, a Brit, and reasonably patriotic. I also do have 50% English anglo saxon heritage but i have often noted the ability by some (minorities included) to colour people very easily, In fact I'm probably very patriotic but not a fool to blind shallow thinking, nor propaganda or coercion or distortions of history and fundamentally i believe in equality for all and not the opportunistic hijacking of this basic bedrock principle, by those with other agendas be they 'patriots', Muslims, Jews or Christians. . Many minorities are proud to be British. That does not mean there are no major issues to address.. because the task is huge and has to be central to all our policies to keep our diverse and highly successful nation at one.
Im sure the media here in the UK used to refer to "black and Asian minorities". then that seemed to change a few years back after the 2012 London riots it changed to "black and minority ethnic". it seemed a strange decision, almost to sub textually exclude Asians from the main population whilst including black people as endogenous, by what decision process i wonder did this occur? and which people were involved in that thinking and decision?. It seemed politically but quietly loaded and divisive to me. Though i could be wrong here. Inclusiveness and equality are bedrocks to cohesion and self respect and mutual respect!
What we have today is seeded by many seeds, the post word war 2 middle east conflicts, actually many Arabs and Jews saw themselves as allies in this post war world in the quest for their own individual countries that did not exist then - as the land was Ottoman for 500 years, and many other rulers had passed through including Romans and Greeks, there is also global poverty, land displacement, extreme religion subjugation, indoctrination, a sense of injustice, the cause to fight for something.. misguded as it might be... etc.. . as root causes, and evil power grabs and power assertions. Maybe the lack of understanding of what is going on is fueling some of us to blanket blame whole populations.. dangerous moves that will force together entire populations into a new larger future far more dangerous adversary from peoples that might have once been our friends and allies, fighting wars with us, and many of whom still are!
I'm patriotic. Patriotism can be hijacked as can religions!
8 Years Ago
“Ed, if we were immortal do you think we would learn and the world would be a better place?” - Jane
Hmmm… immortality… bad idea…
however a longer life span would be OK with me, we could possibly reach a bit more maturity as individuals and maybe cultures...
but when it comes to being full-tilt immortal, i say no.
Your question made me think of reasons “why" humankind as a whole should not, (in spite of my optimism), have immortality.
The first to consider would be our track record of destroying the natural order of things.
Death seems like an essential component of any healthy ecosystem…
without it we run the very serious risk of overpopulation, and that could only lead to global decay as we put tremendous strains on the earth
to cater to our ever-expanding needs and i can only see the social divides becoming more severe as the world becomes overpopulated with
more extreme haves and have-nots…
And as far as we as a collective group, would we learn and make the world a better place… again our track record is not very encouraging, today, the unthoughtful out number the thoughtful… i can only see that increasing because the unthoughtful will never take the time to think and reason. even though they would have all the time of available time.
On biological terms, organic constructions are not designed to last forever, we would have to be immune from diseases such as Alzheimer with its slow decay…
even the fittest of minds would begin to show signs of malfunction after hundreds or thousands of years if not from disease, then from monotony and boredom…
life for immortal beings would slowly develop a monotonous schedule based around needs, habits and commitments… day in and day out, immortal beings could
expect the same tedious activities, with no end in sight.
There a many more unhappy scenarios i could think about being immortal… but i don’t have the time … lol
Comings and Goings of the Eternal
in the economy of nature
a soul born here
comes as a guest
and we know not
from where it came
or shall go
only that it abides
here
for a moment
in this eternity
called now
Ed Meredith
8 Years Ago
I don't know if you would really call this a thought of the day. However, I do have a promise of the day. I promise to not let myself get carried away by things that I can't do anything about. I promise to not let the day go by without smiling. I promise to take a break and just dwell on the beauty of life without entertaining a negative thought for at least moment within this day.
8 Years Ago
Viet- "Dreaming of being immortal..."
I too have dreams about being immoral
Sniffing little girl's bicycle seats
Holding my Johnson in my hand
Shouting "catch me you can"
My Madonna hand puppet is my lover
She is soiled and crisp with age
But she is always ready and willing
To satisfy my depraved dreams
8 Years Ago
I don't want anyone to think that I know what I am writing for the past month....but the drugs are not of my choosing. My dealer ran out of the good stuff, so I am forced with hands behind my back to take what's available. Cheap junk...but it keeps me out of reality! God help me, I think they're wearing off. I'm beginning to make sense. Please All Mighty dealer...get me the good stuff.
8 Years Ago
WOW - Ed / Jason - some very profound thoughts on the subjects - will take some digesting I think.
Viet - what are you thoughts on your immortality? Personally it would scare the life outta me lol!!!!
DANL ......NOW you are trying to be serious :-)
8 Years Ago
LOL... speaking of immortality, i just received an offer in the mail for a "Senior Final Expense Program" and if i qualify they have me covered... LOL
Senryu to Danl looking for his dealer and the good stuff...
Synthetic Bliss :
coming off my high
of a quick and easy bliss
always feels like shit
8 Years Ago
Thanks for the smooth flow from your comprehensive writings.
@ Jason: Perfectly well said, mate. I enjoy the humane approach in your thought. It makes a lot of sense but less humour when you are so serous -lol.
@ Ed: Totally agreed with your thought. Immortality is practically a nightmare for humans. I had been in my sweet dream of being an immoral god until I heard your loud voice to wake me up. Let me get back to my fancy dram,won't you - LOL
@ Shelundra: Thanks for sharing your positive thought of the day. It's a great approach to keep your mind on the right track and your life on the happy path.
@ Danl: Relax my friend. No big deal. The sky hasn't fallen. Life is going on... up and down as expected. Our mind is changed like weather: hot - cold,wet- dry, rainy - shining. Nice to see you here.
@ Jane: If I were immortal, I would stay single for the lifetime. Simply, because marriage would be an eternal hell for all immortal couples -lol.
8 Years Ago
On Culture
(Between Multiculturalism and Melting Pot)
A melting pot is hot like God's burning Hell.
it's a painful process.
this hard-line approach "my way or the high way" works better
for
those
who are too extreme
in protection of their own cultures
to the point that they reject other cultures
and also disregard the cultural norms of a mainstream society.
In the short run
it faces strong resistance
that could lead to violence and social unrest.
However
in the long run
it eventually makes a country stronger
when all cultures are melted into a oneness
and gradually merged and transformed into a new culture
no
longer
mine vs. yours
ours vs. theirs
less and less friction
more and more harmony.
On the other hand
Multiculturalism is beautiful like God's Garden of Eden with colourful flowers
It is a peaceful process for cultural adaptation
this soft approach ONLY works well
for
those
who are willing to accept other cultures
while trying to preserve the beauty of their own cultural heritage.
However
in the long term
it possibly pushes humans further apart
by letting peoples ghettoize themselves
and unintentionally encourages peoples of different cultures create thicker walls
between
you and I
we and they
he and she.
consequently it creates misunderstanding and mistrust
that would lead to hated and racism.
A nation can choose either "melting pot" or "multiculturalism"
depending
on
her people
her mainstream culture
her social and political system
and her immigration patterns (its trends, her policies and history)
.
There is no perfect solution for different cultures to co-exist in harmony within a country.
Thao Chuong
2016-04-19
8 Years Ago
i never cared for the term “Melting Pot” where the ingredients meld together into a homogeneous and dull flavored stew…
i rather it be a “Tossed Salad” where everyone keeps their personal flavor and contributes to the deliciousness of the whole.
8 Years Ago
Good morning
It's warm and sunny here. The air is still fresh. It's awesome to be alive.
@ Ed: Like it or not. In term of multicultural practice, USA is legally and culturally "a melting pot". In Canada, multiculturalism is the law of her vast land.
Welcome you to the North for a short visit or for the permanent stay, bro. (But please leave your WMD at home) -lol
8 Years Ago
@ Ed. Don't be nervous. We- Canadians always feel secured at our own home. And practically we are very safe and sound here (despite of strong accusation and endless warnings from her Southern neighbor that her land has been served as a breeding ground for terrorists).
Note: By the way, for you to know how confident Canada is in her multiculturalism. She has opened her heart and the front door of her sweet home to welcome 26,506 Syrian refugees.
8 Years Ago
HAHAhaa… Canada, a terrorist breeding ground…
i can hear the Canadian terrorist just before he detonates… saying to the crowd in the market… “Sorry”
LOL... our Second amendment "The right to bear WMD"
8 Years Ago
Viet, we don’t have time to think about terrorist in some of our States, at the moment they have more important things to worry about…
like in North Carolina and a few others.
Bathroom Breaks and Laws
i have been to the land of the bland
where everything is the color of sand
and pass laws from the high command
that allows with the lack of respect
discrimination to go unchecked
with the order to detect and eject
any man who is woman and woman who is man
should be prodded and scanned
with the very firm hand of the law of the land
stating by decree that none should disagree
with complaint or plea that their birth gender pedigree
dictates where they go to pee
Ed Meredith
April 2016
8 Years Ago
Ed / Viet........hmmmmm melting pot vs Tossed Salad.
Sorry Viet - I have to go with tossed salad - individuality is maintained
Tossed Salad
Mixed leaves strewn
Red onion finely sliced
Cucumber chopped
Red pepper,
Yellow Pepper,
Orange pepper,
Green
Sliced
Just to add the colour
Cherry tomatoes
Bright red
Halved and spread
Beautiful Kalamata olives
Rich deep purple
Crumbled creamy white feta
Dried pungent oregano
Sprinkled, peppering
the white with green
All followed by a drizzling
of cold pressed cool green
Greek olive oil
JEM 200416
MMMMMM I love a good salad
8 Years Ago
Good evening all. Have a good night.
@Ed: Haa... The black humor "Your Bathroom Breaks and Laws" made me laugh.
@ Jane: Even Tossed Salad will be mixed and eventually melted inside your belly -lol.
Description: THE PASSAGE FROM THIS LIFE INTO THE NEXT, 1987, oil on canvas, 75 in. x 93 inches.*Make offers--all offers considered...no set price.
*****Witnesses best not interrupt the omnipresent, yet invisible, power of the calling to the next life. Sit still, observe, let alone, the scene urges to those stationed on the platform. The red wall to the next life is now penetrable, but only to those invited.
The others sit tight, yearning for reason, rendered in different individual predominant coloring, which assures their separation from each other. By Kenneth Agnello
Passage from Nowhere to Nowhere
man comes to this world from nowhere
he brings with him nothing
absolutely nothing
and
merely naked
At his arrival
he cries to object of being thrown into
this strange place
against his
will.
Probably, he would take it easy and would laugh at that thrilling moment
if he knew
he would stay here very short
maximum - one hundred years
(much quicker than a blink in the infinite time)
Now
he knows for sure
he must leave very soon
on
his journey to nowhere
he is also fully aware
regardless how much he owns
he cannot take anything with him
he'll be buried empty-handed
same
as when he arrives
( if he is lucky enough
he would wear his best clothes, a pair of shiny shoes, and some makeup.
that's it.
nothing more.)
Somehow
he is so senselessly greedier and greedier
in his forever thirst
for
more and more
he ruthlessly exploits his mother nature and other beings
at any cost
(he don't care
even he is fully aware
he is creating mass-destruction to his own ass and his so-called home-sweet-home).
At the current rate of his fast exploitation
his mother earth is quickly dying a swift death
Pretty soon
there will be nothing left for his living
no air to breathe
no water to drink
no food to eat
no land for habitat
How could man survive, even if he were immortal?
Thao Chuong
2016-04-20
8 Years Ago
an echo to the terrorism dialogue
my thought of today -
The Double Terror of being a Refugee?
The confusion of imposed identity? refugees are seen as terrorists even though they have lost everything to terrorism and war? to clarify -
A REFUGEE - The refugees are the ones fleeing terrorism, the victims, the ones who have had their cities bombed to dust, their families murdered, their homes destroyed, their lives shattered...
A TERRORIST - The ones causing the refugees!
Perhaps everyone just looks the same these days.. the senses have been numbed
beyond belief
Pretend they are Christians or Jews or your families and perhaps see a different picture
There might be a few evil ones among them, just as there are amongst us, but as yet, pray to God, there aren't
turning a blind eye to such distress might seem, cold, confused, almost evil in itself, possibly...
racist!?
perhaps this might sound naiive, but the key might be strong security (in Brussels it was weak) whilst offering shelter and explaining our dilemma and asking for pledges and oaths to peaceful coexistence and to abide by the law.. of course most will do so.
just a thought
8 Years Ago
@ Viet and @Jane @Ed interesting points on multiculturalism and melting pot
i like the diversity of multiculturalism, its vibrant, you feel the energy
yet the US probably has a need to forge a single identity..
Jane that entire scene and piece on "respray" should be in an art gallery, he looked bewildered like the paint fell off his car, or was sprayed on by a ufo lol
Dani made me laugh, for a moment i thought i too had used "immoral" as opposed to "immortal", omg i thought
what a thought, slight error in communication
Still its great to express yourself
free speech, after all, is not spam, unless you are a frying pan, twitching to fry free speech
Freedom to offend might be spam with mold on
When is free speech most advocated? in art that offends others?
and derided most?
when we don't like the points being made?
can "fake free speech" be a vehicle for free delusions?
"i shall keep my free mind
my free speech
you keep your delusions"
a poet spaketh bold unto the breeze of hurricanes...
that swept his voice away
a thousand leagues they flew
unto desert islands
from whence
they grew..
~This made me laugh, i near fell off my seat
"Viet- "Dreaming of being immortal..."
I too have dreams about being immoral... "
cough
choke
echo to Viet
Some Brief Notes on Immortality
...........................................................
To be truly immortal...
is to stand outside of time
and create creation from within...
Amen
Praise be to God!
Are you immortal? a man was asked
yesterday, he felt immortal
but time stopped
He never knew the future
but his immortality was there
always!
but different to that of
--------------------------------
Immortals never "dream"
for their dreams are creation
stories in life
and you are but a part...
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
dreaming
8 Years Ago
You meet the nicest people in gender neutral restrooms. Squatters or standers...they're all the same.
8 Years Ago
Good afternoon all.
@ Jason: Your thought about refugees and terrorists certainly would touch the nerves of those people who listen or read too much propaganda from mainstream media in the West.
@ Ed: Good one. my friend. Not too many words, but your thought throws a heavy load onto the minds of religious folks
I'd to take a break to get back to sex and love or the so-called poetry of pornography -lol.
Love in Slow Motion and Sex on Fast Lane
Part One: YOU
calmly
point your
lethal weapon
right
at my heart
leisurely
put your finger
on its trigger
deeply
take a breath
and hold onto it
so long as
you could
slowly
squeeze your finger
to pull the tiger
and shoot at me
Part Two: I
no matter
how slow
it goes
exactly
it comes
towards me
regardless
what I do
no way
to duck
eventually
I bite
your bullet
frantically
I'm drowned
in a pool
of
my own
blood
Part Three: WE
You and I
both fall
in love
regretfully
neither you
nor I
would like
to give up
our weapons
of mass-destruction
consequently
instead
of holding
each other
to have peace
in love
we shoot
at each other
to make war
in sex
Part Four: Ending
Unfortunately
unlike
in
any
romance novel
no happy ending
in real life
no more
interest in
sex
we fall
out of
love
Thao Chuong
2016-04-21
8 Years Ago
Good day Danl: Hee.. Welcome you back to "the negotiation" table. It is likely that all almighty dealers are back to Paris to run their "booming" businesses -lol.
8 Years Ago
Op. The sticky mind after too much ...wine or maybe the sticky finger from too much sex...yeck! -lol
8 Years Ago
Viet - Can we have a happy ending please like Eds!!
Jason - Hopefully your version of refugees and terrorists will solve some peoples issues :-)
regarding the paint job.....there were no flocks of birds about.
DANL - Don't think the UK has such things yet....are we behind the times?
Good Night
Sleep tight
8 Years Ago
@ Jason:Sorry mate. I know you hate poetry of pornography -lol. I'll drive my thought back to your "blood splattered path of refugees and terrorism soon..
@Ed: SIN is something that we love to commit but we deny it when we get caught - lol.
@ Danl: Restroom is the best place to vent our hot air -
@ Jane: Are you sure that U wanna have a happy ending from me? To have an ending from me, you must start a dizzy relationship with me, first LOL
Here is my further thought about happy ending
Description: Valentine greeting card, celebrating LOVE....
Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was a choice, but falling in love with you I had no control over" .Anon
There is a language, little known,
Lovers claim it as their own.
Its symbols smile upon the land,
Wrought by nature's wondrous hand;
And in their silent beauty speak,
Of life and joy, to those who seek
For Love Divine and sunny hours
In the language of the flowers.
The Language of Flowers, London, 1875
celebrating divine love, only Roses can celebrate, to perfection.
By Viva Anderson
The Happy Ending
We were much luckier than the two parallel tracks
which have been together on same railroad
for many years
side by side
miles after miles
on a long
way
to
the infinite.
However, they could have never meet each other.
You and I
out of the blue
the two strangers have crossed path
stumbled on each other
somehow
out
of
our control
we fall in love
You said
you hates
the cruel fate
of those miserable
railroad tracks
You demanded
a happy ending
for our love
story.
You declared:
"regardless
what would happen
our love last forever
even
the sky falls
the sun stops shining
the earth is in darkness
my love still lights your heart
I will ALWAYS love you".
Honey!
If our love would last forever,
you could never have any happy ending
And if our love would end someday
out
of
your expectation
how could you have a happy ending?
unlike in a novel
absolutely
no happy ending
in the real life
for our love
Thao Chuong
2016-04-21
8 Years Ago
The UK Welcomes President Obama!
A great friendship between 2 countries
Unions can be great things -
The United Sates - a union of states
China - a united country of many peoples and languages achieved 2000 years ago
Russia - a federation
We have a union in Europe that has stabilized the continent, and rebuilt it after destruction beyond imagination - 2 near apocalyptic world wars. This is the greatest achievement in friendship and economic cooperation imaginable. Long may that continue... We have the best of all worlds and can achieve more together!
8 Years Ago
Can't help but feel a little sentimental, even lonely, right now, as each passes and time keeps slipping away...remembering when the kids were young and seemed to need me for social and recreational events. Now it seems I need them more than they need me...Humor me all, this is from my book..."Agnello by Agnello: Striking the Heart of an Artist's Confessions," available as E-Book on Kindle and Amazon.
I look back now on all I went through since the year 2000, especially where involvement with my three developing children is concerned. The years are layered, but I still can touch with a little sentimentality key individual moments as I continue walking. Time is unforgiving and moves too quickly, and, as I have said, I have difficulty keeping up with the pace. I drive around the same old town, passing the grounds, sports fields, ball courts, school yards, local stores, and shopping malls, all the stops my three children and I used to frequent—it seems like just the other day—where we routinely engaged in activities shared and enjoyed together as a group. Time spent together at the simplest of places holds special meaning. The kids are grown now and have moved passed their dependence on me for social activities. Driving solemnly and often slowly, alone, looking out, I pass all of these sites now, but find that they are all vacant, empty. None of us is there. A videotape plays through my mind, colored with the laughter and meaning of times now gone, echoing against the walls of my skull. I retreat within myself like an old man who yearns for yesteryear as he realizes what he has lost, unable to retrieve or replace the times he once enjoyed.
8 Years Ago
The 400th anniversary of Shakespeare's death
"Good frend for Jesus sake forebeare,
To digg the dust encloased heare;
Bleste be the man that spares thes stones,
And curst be he that moves my bones."
upon his grave is so written...
8 Years Ago
reposting an echo to another thread
The bee eater
Those hearts are trophies
pulsating for you
you keep them alive
half dead
half alive
the next few nurtured
seducer
plays with his toys
licking his lips
as bees sting his tongue
he eats them
one by one..
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
wooooah
8 Years Ago
Kenneth
The hardest thing in the world is teaching your child to ride a bicycle
Each day they learn to ride further away from you
But they will always return in heart and spirit
8 Years Ago
Good evening Jason, Jane, Kenneth, and Danl. Sorry for being under the radar and not engaged in any dialog with you. I've just been back after a short trip out of town for weekend retreat.
@ Jason: You have given about of thought with your recent poetry flow.
@ Kenneth: Thanks for sharing your true feeling about your kids. You are a damned good artist who has successfully captured in colors on canvas: your living process and your feelings and thoughts about love, marriage, divorce... ( and also about human's philosophical issues in the relationship among themselves, with nature, and God ...). Maybe, its the suffering that drives an artist to his best in creation.
Contemporary Art.
Nowadays
imagination is lost in the hi-tech world
the so-called "art" has become too robotized
and multiplied to endless clones
from the same mould
in mass
production
Boring
and plain
like sand in the desert
worse than sweet tastes of those hollow donuts
Art ain't dead
just
on-life support
after the overdose of 'hi-tech" drug
Contemporary artists are .stuck and feel dizzy at a cul de sac
What makes them worry the most
absolutely
neither about the artistic merit of their "art"
nor about how creative they're to express themselves and the environment around
but purely about the reason
why
their prints could not sold so well on the market
Hopefully
they could soon find the exit route
and bring fine art back to its creative path
Thao Chuong
2016-04-24
8 Years Ago
Hello Viet, and thanks so much, for your recent further thought and poetry about 'happy endings' , perhaps in response to my wish for same. I like your conclusion so much: there is no ending !!........Happy or otherwise. !
I am honoured, as always, by your thoughtful responses to me.
VIVA
VIVA LA VIDA !
8 Years Ago
Good morning Viva. Nice to see you dropping by. I believe no "real" ending. Even when a man's life ends, his remain continues to be on the new journey of transformation : food for other livings and into chemicals needed for the earth. And his soul (as many believe) will go to heaven or hell or in the process of incarnation. In another word, when one thing ends, it turns into other forms Enjoy a fruitful week.
In that sense, LIFE NEVER ENDS
VIVA LA VIDA!
8 Years Ago
LIFE NEVER ENDS - in response to Viet & Viva la Viva :-)
Just a little old twinkle
in
a man
and
Woman'
eyes
One egg,
One sperm,
Nine months
Waaaaaaaaah!
Nappies
Trainers
Knickers
Thongs
Tummy Warmers
Pads
Incontinence Pads
A new wooden home
In a hole
In the ground
Decay
Beetles
Bugs
Worm food
Roots
Food
Ingest
Fruit
Feed
Man.....
& Woman,.......
Nature
a perfect
C
Y
C
L
E
JEM 250416
8 Years Ago
Viet...thanks for commenting. You always see a sensitivity beneath the gruff in my work, and I always appreciate and respect you opinion and commentary. Too many viewers dismiss me as just another angry fool, but you sense the human feeling--I am a commentator, not a militant. Best to you, as always, Ken.
Viv Anderson...great to hear from you again...missed your input.
8 Years Ago
Good evening all. Thanks Jane and Kenneth.
I have read Jason's following post. He has have made me think of writing about this issue from his unique perspective. It took me a couple of hours just to complete Part One: The Hero - who fought to protect his country and the security of his people. I'll edit and share with you in my next post Have a good night to all.
Jason Christopher 4 Days Ago
an echo to the terrorism dialogue
my thought of today -
The Double Terror of being a Refugee?
The confusion of imposed identity? refugees are seen as terrorists even though they have lost everything to terrorism and war? to clarify -
A REFUGEE - The refugees are the ones fleeing terrorism, the victims, the ones who have had their cities bombed to dust, their families murdered, their homes destroyed, their lives shattered...
A TERRORIST - The ones causing the refugees!
Perhaps everyone just looks the same these days.. the senses have been numbed
beyond belief
Pretend they are Christians or Jews or your families and perhaps see a different picture
There might be a few evil ones among them, just as there are amongst us, but as yet, pray to God, there aren't
turning a blind eye to such distress might seem, cold, confused, almost evil in itself, possibly...
racist!?
perhaps this might sound naiive, but the key might be strong security (in Brussels it was weak) whilst offering shelter and explaining our dilemma and asking for pledges and oaths to peaceful coexistence and to abide by the law.. of course most will do so.
just a thought
By Jason Christopher 4 Days Ago
8 Years Ago
Acknowledgement: Thanks to poet Jason Christopher for his unique thought that has inspired me for these stories
Stories of War and Peace - of Love and Hate
Part One: The Good Guy - A Hero of His Nation
he looked up
from the cockpit
bright sunshine
sky in deep blue
so peaceful
he looked down
to the ground
except very few wandering clouds
his target is so clear
best weather
for his mission.
he flew on his enemy's airspace
yet, he felt very safe and sound
like in a video game at home
as everything
on his bomber
is
electronically controlled
very sophisticated
incredibly accurate
he made a circle
and dove down
like a hawk
right on its prey
he pressed a button
bombs dropped
eye-blinding blazes
ear-deafening explosions
mushrooming smokes
sky fell down
he felt no guilt
as he didn't see
what he left behind
by his own naked eyes:
a burning hell
of
mass destruction
and unbearable sufferings
on the contrary
he felt satisfied
as his mission was accomplished
as in many other sorties before
after landing on his aircraft-carrier
he enjoyed a couple of beers
sent emails to his wife and his kids
telling them
how much he loves and misses them
and he has been fighting against those religious fanatics to keep them safe at home
as a professionally trained warrior
tomorrow
and many days after
he will do the killings again and again
he continues serving his country
until
either he could kill the last terrorist on earth
or he would come home in a body-bag
as one of the many dead heroes of his powerful nation
Thao Chuong
2016-04-25
8 Years Ago
Jason and Viet made my mind buzz with these thoughts
Sorties
pilots flying sorties
sit in cockpits
on the head of the dragon
breathing destruction and death
upon faceless enemies
and victims alike
women
children
no concern
button pressed
bombs away
target destroyed
fly back to base
and a cold beer
fresh young gamers
sit in armchairs flying sorties
safe in darkened rooms a world away
see through the eye of the dragon
breathing destruction and death
upon faceless enemies
and victims alike
women
children
no concern
button pressed
bombs away
target destroyed
oder a pizza delivery
and a cold beer
Ed Meredith
8 Years Ago
Welcome Valeria... your beautiful photographs of nature and your thought of the day; “Nature doesn’t need Us, We need Nature…
reminded how much of nature i am…
Nature i Am
learning life
from the podium
of the headmaster
called nature
i rise with the sun
to ride the wave
and winds
of eternity
to form a rainbow
with every color
in its lonely existence
i enjoy the company
and need no borrowed wings
Ed Meredith
8 Years Ago
interesting points on what a hero is these days
the war hero
the game hero
cash heroes
tv heroes
often real heroes are severely injured.... for a few minutes of thank you
and spend the rest of their lives in near or real poverty
whilst others reap the rewards of the nation
ammassing fortunes
...sometimes for very little real contribution to the nation
how much are those who sacrifice themselves worth?
and how much does your cash hero really do
for the nation?
At least you can bin your tv
or love it to pieces
----------
its started snowing for a few minutes
and the sun is now gleaming bright once more
good afternoons
in late April
8 Years Ago
Got me thinking
Nature
I lie on my back on the cool damp earth
Arms outstretched
Fingers touching the small pink
woodland flowers
I look up and see trunks and branches
up high
Reaching upwards ever upwards
Green and fresh
The bright warm yellow sun peeking
warming up
patches through the pale green leaves
Illuminating the earth
I hear a green finch singing
the trickle of a stream
A small twig falls
Through leaves
The scent of that cool fresh earth
The warmth of that big yellow sun
Woodland sounds
I feel refreshed
Energised
At peace
At one
With the world
JEM 260416
8 Years Ago
Good afternoon all. Thanks to Valeria, Ed, Jason, Danl, and Jane
@ Valeria: Nice photos that give viewers a relaxing moment. "Nature doesn't need Us, We need Nature..." is really a beautiful thought
@ Ed: It's shocking whenever we put ourselves in the smelly shoe of our foes -lol.
@ Jason: It's too hot, No more provoking thought mate -lol.
@ Danl:
Get lost in nature
You will find yourself
Very inspiring thought about the outer universe and the inner world.
@ Jane: What's a wonderful moment of yours! Beautifully peaceful!
Have a good evening to all.
8 Years Ago
An echo to Jane's Nature
Spring blossom
white
flurries
dance in bright sunshine
the 'look-alike" snow flakes are spinning in warm air
then scatter on green lawn
a child jiggles
while he's running against the wind
trying
to catch flying petals
from white blossom of an apple tree
Thao Chuong
2016-04-26
8 Years Ago
Please don't ask me how I feel
For I will lie and you will know
Nothing here is really real
Realisation, very slow
Please don't ask me how I feel
It brings a guilt inside
Nothing here is really real
True feelings run and hide
Please don't ask me how I feel
It's much too hard to bear
Nothing here is really real
But thank you for your care
Please don't ask me how I feel
A smile and joke I try
Nothing here is really real
Inside I cry
and cry
~ Isabella FA Shores 26/4/2016
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Kenneth. G'Day all...........am quietly devouring input............Thank you ..All .........
8 Years Ago
Enjoy a restful evening Isabella and Viva.
@ Isabella: Thanks for dropping by and sharing your poetic moment.
@ Viva: How is the weather there?
8 Years Ago
Stories of War and Peace - of Love and Hate
Part Two: Collateral Damages
sky fallen
horrors
chaos
doomsday
bombs dropped
thunder roared
lighting strike
right on target
fireball rolled
smoke risen
land ravaged
crops burnt
hospitals shattered
houses in flame
villages collapsed
cities ruined
human habitats destroyed
however
on military records
only deaths of enemy combatants
reported
civilian's casualties
often
ignored
unless
when caught by the media
those of senseless killings have been always defended
as
"collateral damages"
'cause innocent civilians
being used
as "human-shields"
in cowardice acts
by those militant combatants
unarmed victims were absolutely
not
faceless
nameless
and pure statistics
on meaningless reports
they were real human beings in flesh and bones
most importantly
they were someone's mothers, fathers, sisters, brothers, grand-parents, or relatives,
and friends or other loved ones
as a result
the more collateral damages done
the more strangers (and possibly more supporters, more friends, more allies) would be turned into our new enemies
the more terrorists automatically added to the long list
this war could never end in peace
unless
either we kill them all
or
we leave them alone
on their own troublesome land
I believe
already spilled
too much innocent blood
it's time to stop
we'd better go back to mind our own business at our own peaceful homes.
(...to be continued...)
Thao Chuong
2016-04-26
8 Years Ago
Good morning all. Good health to you.
@ Jim Taylor: How are you doing? Long time no see. I hope both life and love have been treating you well.
An echo to Isabella's touchy poem
In Words or In Silence
I do care for you
whenever
seeing you in distress
it itches my heart
I could feel the pain in you
I
ask
myself
what I could do
to share your moment of unbearable loss
so often
I assume
I'd better talk with you
in
my best hope
that I could take away some of the heavy load
our conversation would distract your mind
at
least
for a while
from your insupportable burden
I tend to forget
sometimes
it's better to say nothing
just give you a hug
or
sit with you side by side in absolute silence
I am afraid
if I made a wrong assumption about your immediate need
either way I do
instead of supporting you
I could hurt your feeling
I have to admit
it's tricky to predict
what your response would be to my sympathy
so
please let me know how you feel
I do care for you
Thao Chuong
2016-04-27
8 Years Ago
That's beautiful.
Sometimes it is best to hold someone and just be there, than to try and talk it through. It's sometimes harder being the one looking on than the one with the grieving heart. We never know what to say to someone heartbroken.
8 Years Ago
our condolences to Abbie
..elsewhere
Our minds were stumbling
we had a post.. . to say a message
someone dropped it
words can feel heavy
someone asked us to say something
they couldn't say it
and we fumbled
those clumsy words we hold and throw and catch and share
someone past her by
she caught a glimpse
eyes glazed
time trickles past..
rivers flow
years later...
they never age, once gone, those faces
memories are like ever-life flowers
slender stems
drooping bold colours
softness
everlife flowers
just like photographs
good times smile
bad times.. . they all kind of fade away.. . with flowing time.. . . . . .
Stillness, all quiet, smiles will come through
the laughs you had together
the warm words
she bought some flowers for both herself and her mother
and all the good memories.. .
the scent of Summer field and parks
in breeze and daze...
dazed.. . . .
days
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
days that daze
edited
8 Years Ago
Good to see all the poetry in motion Viet and all.
Spiraling thought cards
My thoughts shuffle by
like a casino card dealer
shuffling those cards so swift like magic
slight of hand with amazing dexterity
my head spins as they fly
my fate in your hands
I try my hand at shuffling that deck
cards spiral out of control
flying in every direction
I spend the rest of the day
gathering the cards of my thoughts
Jim Taylor 4/27/ 2016
8 Years Ago
Good evening everyone.
@ Isabella: Thanks for your response. I agree with your thought. I think words are helpless for those who have broken-hearts for the loss of their loved ones.
@ Jason: touchy and beautiful flow that came from your heart.
@ Jane: Thanks
@ Jim: Nice to see you. I enjoyed your new poem.
Have a restful evening,
8 Years Ago
again, loving condolences dear Abbie, and thanks Viet for your so thoughtful poem, full of comfort and care...........and to all others recent, my thanks, always.......you are solace to me in ways I can't explain........V.
8 Years Ago
Good evening Viva: Thanks for your feedback. Glad to know that the poem some how could bring you some relief. A hug to you from thousands of miles away, my friend.
Stories of War and Peace - of Love and Hate
Part Four: The Asylum Seekers
country ravaged
homes destroyed
nowhere safe to live
millions of civilians
most of them
women
babies
children
elders
fled away
for a safe refuge
they kept moving
from one place to another
around
and around
on endless journey
inside their own country
like ants on a burning tray
in a heated oven
millions of others
crossing borders
to neighbour countries
or Europe
on their hopeless journeys
to the unknown
overloaded boats
sunk
on rough sea
some perished
food for fish
some washed ashore
rest in peace
fleeing on foot
wounded or died
by crossed-fire
or by sickness and fatigue
on the way of escape
many lucky enough
to reach their destinations
at
their
arrivals
only found
borders shut
doors closed
exhausted
confused
shocked
so terrified
to hear loud chants echoed from inside
"Muslims
go home
not welcomed
they're infested with terrorists
send them back"
if
your country were bombed
your village were destroyed
your home were burnt
your land were ravaged
no food no water
nothing for a human's survival
wouldn't you run
as fast as you can
as far as possible
away from the hell of war for a safe refuge?
in this case, who would be blamed
you - yourselves - as the victims
or those culprits who have terrorized you?
Thao Chuong
2016-04-28
7 Years Ago
War and Peace (the short version)
first there was peace
then war
peace
war
peace
war
peace
war
war
war
then nothing but long silence
finally a sprout emerged from dormant ashes
how many times has this ancient cycle occurred on the planet?
Jim Taylor 4/30/2016
7 Years Ago
Good morning all. Thank you very much Danl and Jim for breaking up the dead silence on the refugee issue.
Have a restful weekend
@ Danl: Ha..ha..,a.. I have talked too myself a lot. I could never expect that you have also taken that expertise advise and followed my insane path -lol.
@ Jim: Thanks for sharing your thought about war and peace.
7 Years Ago
A response to Danl's Thought.
Talking to Oneself
considered as a obvious symptom of mental illness,
grownups don't talk to themselves.
they suppress their minds,
by compressing messy thoughts,
not letting them spilled out in words,
'til they find an easy ear
to dump their inner
garbage
in
self-expression
little kids naturally talk without any listener
their minds are so pure like a blank piece of paper
they simply let go whatever inside
without any
fear
of
being judged
(Anyway, a mind without bias has no concern of being judged)
when a man is old enough
and
wise enough
to regain what the lost from the childhood
he could spit his thoughts out of his mouth anytime
so soon as he doesn't need to entertain an audience
he could gets rid of all frictions with others
talking to oneself is quite normal
don't worry
nothing wrong
it's a healthy way to communicate with the outside world
I've learned how to take back this mind-relaxing exercise
from my two little grandkids.
the more I do it
the more I find my inner peace
Thao Chuong
2016-04-30
7 Years Ago
I never talk to myself.
I'm talking to that person standing next to me that no one else can see.
7 Years Ago
@ Jim. Oh yeah? I'm standing right beside you, Jim. Is it me or someone else whom you're referring to? -lol
7 Years Ago
Stories of War and Peace - of Love and Hate
(...continued)
April 30 1975: the fall of Saigon - the Capital of South Vietnam into the North communist regime (backed by the former Soviet Union and Red China).
(In memory of the Vietnamese people - both civilians and soldiers of North and South Vietnam - who lost their lives in the senseless war)
(Also in memory of American soldiers who sacrificed their lives to serve their nation)
Could any lesson be learned?
Part Five: War - A perspective from inside a Safe Haven
war
the unimaginable
for majority of people
those who have never been suffered
by
the trauma of living in war zone,
the loss of their own loved ones,
the damage of their homeland,
they have no clue
why?
why?
why millions after millions have risked their lives on journeys to somewhere unknown?
war
not much a concern
for many
so long as
it's out of sight
they don't see or hear it
so they have no guilt to enjoy peace at home.
war
no problem
to some
so long as
neither flying shrapnel would break their glass and spill the wine, while they're enjoying it on the sundecks
nor any explosion would shake their bed, while they're having sex.
war
the unavoidable
for
many
to feel alright
inside their safe haven
until the last terrorist on earth is gunned down
regardless
at any cost
(millions get killed, wounded, suffered
millions become homeless, landless, and stateless)
so long as
they don't pay any of it
war
is
a must
but it must
be somewhere
at someone's cost
(for peace and security
to be fully retained at home)
all of a sudden
out of expectation
they hear a loud bang at their front door
they whine in terror.
Thao Chuong
2016-04-30
7 Years Ago
None of us are getting out of here alive
So stop treating yourself like an after thought
Eat the forbidden food
Walk in the sunshine
Jump in the ocean
Say the truth you have hidden in your heart
Be silly, kind and even weird
There is no time for anything else
7 Years Ago
Trying to understand what is meant in all these discussions is mind boggling.
Keep it up and I will have to let all my demons out to play with you.
7 Years Ago
I am having a great time holding a conversation with myself
Uninterrupted by others
Not pressured into answering
Not being presumed
Not having to decipher
Just free wheeling
While others destroy their lives with work
7 Years Ago
Sniffed my pits
Checked my crouch
Smelled my breath
Removed my zits
Briefs clear of dingle-berries
Feet fresh
So it can't be me
Keeping people away
7 Years Ago
DANL - Hellooooooooooooooo - not sure about your crouch but you might want to check your crotch lol - Think that might be it!
Oh the flies are buzzin'
Jason where are you
DANL smells.
All in the best possible taste.
Eeeeeewww - taste!
No thanks
Pits, crouches and dingleberries
From the dingle bush
Flourish when nurtured
Splash of water every now and then
Do not drown nor scrub nor rub
Will drop of their own accord
when reaching a specific size
Beauuuuuuuuutiful
Then there is Hayley toeses
She is a dirty mare
Her teeth are black and stained
One breath from her
would kill at90 paces
Looooovely
7 Years Ago
heya Janey
nice to see ya back
good day people of odour
and
lol, what r u all on
Just checking in Jane
and checking out...
and back in
out again
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
go and wash
7 Years Ago
Jim -Great idea think DANL needed it at least it stopped him talking to himself. Hope he does not crouch too long his knees will cease... oh I'm a poet and didn't know it...oh there I go again. :-) Hug to you Jim.
Jasey Babe -lovely to see you drop in...errrr...drop out errrr drop in. Hope you have had more than a splash and a dash..Ooops rhyming again.
Viet...Am loving your series... are you busy with another? Time for a book maybe?
7 Years Ago
DANL - GO FOR IT! Where would we be without spelling mistakes - makes for some great topics :-)
7 Years Ago
Thanks Jane. Makes me want to smoke a huge Cuban Cigar.
Except I don't smoke.
I like to smell them from a distance though....
7 Years Ago
How the devil did your discussion page move to page two in the rankings? Page one is filled with the same repetitive discussions and doldrums. At least your discussions are new and innovative. So sad now I'm glad.
7 Years Ago
I got in touch with my inner self this morning...
That is the last time I buy 1-ply toilet paper at the dollar store!
7 Years Ago
One nice thing about talking to myself when everyone is missing....is that at least I am listening.
7 Years Ago
After reading all the discussions this morning...I conclude that there is a shortage of straitjackets!
7 Years Ago
DANL: just love the one ply.....funny as you like!!
Alone
A cyber world
You talk as much as you like
About anything you like
And as often as you like
Open you heart
Love, life and living
The mean and the giving
Do you know if anyone reads
Do you know if anyone cares
You receive no response
You could have touched many lives
You could have saved many lives
You think you are talking to yourself.....................
But everything is relevant....................
Over
and
Over
JEM 070516
7 Years Ago
Good evening all. Thanks Danl Art, Jestephotography Ltd, Jane, Jason, and Jim,
@ Danl: It's likely that you have had a lot of fun and also many provoking thoughts. You are the main contributor to keep this thread going, Danl. Without you, I would execute this thread and let it die of old age -lol.
@Jestephotography Ltd,: "Jon Snow is alivvvvvvvvveee!!" .Woow, Where did you meet him? In a pub? -lol
@ Jim: It'd better to smoke a cigar than inhale its smoke as a second-hand smoker, Jim -lol. I always appreciate your good sense of humor, my friend.
@ Jane: Alone is a good poem, Jane. How was your trip to Cuba. Would you mind sharing your own experience and your thought about the people, the country and the regime? I've taken time off to work on my Garden.
Have a restful weekend to all.
7 Years Ago
Signs of Old Age
"The older
a man is,
the wiser
he becomes", said someone.
I
doubt
if there would be any little truth in that nice saying
I have to admit
I'm on the opposite
the longer, I enjoy my senior's days
the more absent-minded, I've become.
It's odd
I often forget
what has just happened within a couple minutes
nonetheless, somehow my mind is often rewound to the far past
it makes me remember very clear in details of what
that took place many years
and years
ago.
In
addition,
I often repeat
over and ever,
again and again,
what I have just said
like a needle running on the same track of a broken record.
If you see me talking to myself
you'd better keep your mouth tightly shut
otherwise
any of your attempt
for a conversation with me
your ears would be flooded by a sea of my same old contaminated words.
Excuse me!
have I just said something?
Thao Chuong
2016-05-07
7 Years Ago
I'm not crazy
I'm just special
No wait
Maybe I am crazy
One second
I have to talk to myself about this
Hold on
7 Years Ago
Danl: Not much time left for a nap. Wake up and keep your thinking cap on -lol.
Perception of Old Age
getting old is naturally a physical state
but feeling aged is purely a mental perception
gray on the hair
but
young in the mind
fresh inside the heart
it's
why
some old folks keep living as if they were still in their indestructible teenage
they enjoy whatever they like
they do many "silly" things
eating junk food
smoking
drinking
having sex
(of course
whenever they can defrost their cold turkey
and turn their oven to maximum heat)
anyway
how fragile a human's life is!
whether healthy or not
no one could get out of here alive
why not
enjoy its best?
then leave here without any regret
Thao Chuong
2016-05-08
7 Years Ago
Rock of Ages
I've been listening to a lotta rock n roll lately
rockin in my rock n chair
rockin to rock n roll in my rock in chair
some rock n rollers stayed young
died young or before their time
in the middle of their prime
rejected the life line
tossing back the life line
it’s to late for me
and I’m not heading out
stepping into the tattoo parlor
I’ll hang in there and ride it out
young fingers pointing
look at that oldie
but a goodie
Jim Taylor 5/8/2016
7 Years Ago
When you see a ghostly white stallion
Motioning for you to follow
A shadow that appears in the darkness
Reaching out to you
The outline of a biblical face
From behind a layer of wall paint
A whisper of wind rushing by
When nothing can be seen
A muffled echo of a distant voice
Calling your name
The sound of feet encircling you
It is time
7 Years Ago
Morning All x
DANL ...wow was a great poem..sinister but great..
JIM....you are never too old...old is a state of mind...if you want that tat you go get it...sometimes we have to take care.... laziness is an old excuse..... if you know what I mean �😉
VIET..Spring has sprung..It is time to spend time in the garden...my weeds have been calling too!
Cuba.....hmmmmm ..I think, after talking to people whom have been years ago, Cuba has really changed already. The tourist places are overrun ...ha especially with Canadians! The workers work long hours still poor pay and had no interest in keeping you entertained nor in serving you.
Heading out of Habana Vieja -Old Havana- and into Central Havana life changes and you begin again to feel the spirit of Cuba..still tired though. Verdado too is more relaxed.
Headed down to Trinidad- again Tourist overload. We stayed the rest of our time staying in Casa Particulars - Homestays- these were better than hotels and the families were lovely.
From there we went to Sancti Spiritus. Loved it here. You can see money and wealth creeping in , food, fashion, nails hairstyles, cars. Great atmosphere. Santa Clara next buzzing uni town...ended up at a rave with some students one with a pot on his leg. Great vibe here no inhibitions another worth while visit. Bus to Varadero but did not stop...tourist built not for us...continued on to Mantanzas. Really old town..not too many tourists appears to be off the travel lists. Lots of hidden gems. Need to explore more.
Overall Cuba is changing rapidly. Full of entrepreneurs on every corner, lots of people already eating their own junk food...queues around little cake carts! You can see already the rich getting richer and the poor getting poorer...way of the world x
Lots to write but gotta go to work..x
7 Years Ago
Jane the poem is not autobiographical. Just pulling stuff out of the air as usual. People always assume a persons poem is autobiographical, including myself.
Maybe I should always put a disclaimer ha ha.
I am fortunately quite active physically.
7 Years Ago
Jim-
Have you ever heard
A voice you could not find
A voice calling for you
In a distance
On a crowed avenue
In a crowd
Behind a mower
A voice you could not find
A voice that finds you
7 Years Ago
Good moaning people hope u r all well (as well as possiblee)
an echo to Dani's madness lol
Din
Erase those lines
depart from the divide
and mingle in
its a harmony
a 2nd harmony, and third ones too
sing like a choir only could
be at one
ego
alto
and all the others too!
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
I'm with you on that one Jim! write as a dreamer or illusionist, chuckle along or go serious, why do we need cold hard reality in everything we say or do.. .? Writing in the first person is powerful for the writer and reader, of course those tolls (such a common word these days, not you Jane! lol) not interested in the landscapes of poetry but to ******* you up, will use your poetry against you, its of course "human" "nature" where the... .
oops i will get back on that ..
memory
7 Years Ago
decho to my echo
Trolling, when you engage in mirth and joviel interplay and go with the flow and then they call you a troll!?? get lost, i dont troll
TROLLs calling out "Troll!"? haha yeh right
(not being me in the echo of someone elses post where i was being no one in particular)..
Tourism and tourists.. "I hate tourists", said the tourist lol
man i love hating tourists
said the tourist
i tour by tourists said the other tourists lol
"love my money" flashed the tourist
i do, i do i do, said the hotelier
marry me called out the ladies
i'll have two called out the American
I'm a Canadian said the
oh i forgot again, back on that one later
well i guess the number of hotel beds, no doubt , set the
oh um, er
more echoes on trolling
Ever feel you been baited, hijacked and trolled from day one and then they call you a troll?
Is that a super troll?
a trollnado?
a cyclotrontroll?
Can trolls just stop calling out "trolls!"
chuckle
7 Years Ago
Good moaning people (afternoon here) and to absent poet's dogs lol .. did you have a dog?
excuse my silly echoes on memory to Viets recent poem on forgetfullness... (and trolling from an earlier year and post of long ago)
Hello Viet glad you remembered your thread! hope you haven't forgot your dog in park somewhere! Recent memories and distant long term memories and "immediate memory" as i call it, all have different characteristics.. .
there was a period 5-10 years ago i thought i had some kind of dementia developing alongside other ill health, i couldn't even sit at my laptop to do anything for years. couldn't even write a line of code, endless pain, constantly forgetting what i was going to do, now I have/had been writing 1000s if not 10,000s of code, 100s of poems, referred to a specialist her comment was i must have "never had the ability!" what a joke i thought, lucky i kept my sanity
7 Years Ago
Im just trolling this thread at the moment
my serious thought for today - a thought on memory...
Absent mindedness is very common in old and even in young people, but can be excerbated by stress, ill health, medications, alcohol and drugs etc, depressive illnesses, but a good way to test long term memory (and dementia onset) is to sit with someone you have known for may decades and recount distant events, like a holiday together or events that you both experienced and see if you remember or fail to remember them, no one gets perfect high scores for very distant memory, but very low scores, to me, would prompt action, mental exercises, reading, puzzles, walks, exercise/activity, conversations, writing, etc. a visit to the dr... but for me it was neurological supplements that's transformed me back to how i was, it took me a years to get the combination that worked for me... it transformed me to good health...SSRIS (assuming these pills were SSRis chuckle) made me a vegetable for 6 years, that's my own experience, many others are positively transformed by them, i think now its recognised that 1/3 are not.
Ten year memory is on the edge of good recall i think, 20 and 30 year recall can be very hazey for many events, but good for other events, and 5 year memory should be reasonably ok in a healthy individual. You need an "immediate memory" to be able to do complex tasks like write code or poetry as otherwise you cant concentrate on anything but the simplest things. This is not medical opinion but my personal scientific opinion. Use it or lose it they say, its true, but your biochemistry and genetics might play a part.. but activity and stimultation and nutrition (be that supplements if required for more serious states) are vital... (and side effects are all to be considered)
7 Years Ago
an echo to Jane's "Alone" poem
Hi Jane -enjoying your diary snippets, excuse my odd tangents and echoes off 'em
sounds like an epic holiday! keep us updated!
Alone together
We are all alone, together
and together, alone
yet we all feel at one
within our souls
connected
when searching deep
we find our depth of being...
And on the shores
some One stands
and others, with us
a hand to reach for
ancestors?
companions of a journey?
divine beings wait...
across oceans of time and
the failings and pains of humanity..
Reach out
someone upon a shore stands tall
waiting
for He created us!
and His Son Jesus Christ
came to visit us
to say that the Father
is the Father to all
and all are welcome
to be at One with One!
Hallowed be the name of God!
and such journeys of revelation
and truth
can be many milenia long...
One humanity at One with One God
Together!
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
be at One
7 Years Ago
Your final calling
The voices are to the left
No to the right
More beckoners join
Behind now in front
Chanting your name
Growing louder
Deafening your senses
Then silence
The tintintabulation ends
Enter eternal darkness
7 Years Ago
Hi Danl..........that's what I thought too, but no, 'there's more'..........believe me..............(without supplements, just strong imagination,and looooooooong memory,and fear !)
7 Years Ago
I am seriously thinking about opening a company that sells landmines that look like prayer mats. Anyone interested in a partnership?
7 Years Ago
Viva
Ever see something that was never there
Touch something that didn't exist
Look for something you never had
Lose your shadow in the sun
You have left life
7 Years Ago
VIVA
Talking about supplements
I took a Viagra
It got caught in my throat
I had a stiff neck for a week!
7 Years Ago
Thank you Jim, Danl, Jane, Jason, and Viva for sharing your thought. Enjoy a restful weekend.
@ Jim:" rock of ages is a good poem, my friend.
@ Jane: Many thanks for sharing your thought Cuba's tourism industry. Sorry for my late reply, my friend.
@ Jason: Wow...Your flow of thought has been naturally running like a river.
@ Danl: lots of thoughts in your mind.
To Danl:
This conversation between a senior and a clerk at a counter of a pharmacy somewhere in Paris:
- May I help you, Sir?
- This Viagra was a joke. My partners wanted me to file a complaint. They told me that it didn't meet their expectation.
- How come? Did you take it as instructed?
- Oh yeah! I did. But the drug last for only five to six times per night.
- Uh? I'd better try it myself.
(Full copyright reserved by Thao chuong -lol)
7 Years Ago
DANL - You make me laugh out loud - look forward to reading your thoughts lol
JASON - Oh my word! "hugs"
VIET - Missed you :-)
JIM / JASON - you are right...assumption is the mother of all f**** ups!!
night night :-)
7 Years Ago
The ultimate bargain
cruising the dollar store isles
everyone has that look of bliss
I suppose most people realize
plenty of imitation junk
waiting in the check out line
such excitement in the air
wearing a party mask disguise
I picked up on isle nine
checking out all the last chance bargains
placed strategically in front of your nose
standing by the conveyor belt rolling
all the little treasures to the cashier
a bit like the big one used at a recycle center
lots of impulsive last chance bargains
ready to be plucked by us suckers
got my cheap reading glasses on
getting a closer look
low and behold it’s a pregnancy test kit for a buck
Jim Taylor 5/14/2016
7 Years Ago
Jim-
Just once I would like to see
A pregnancy test commercial
Where the woman is like
"Aww F*CK"
7 Years Ago
Yes it's true they had these at the Dollar check stand or I wouldn't fictionalize it. It stuck in my head and had to get it out.
7 Years Ago
We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.
7 Years Ago
Ola :-)
OLD UNREQUITED LOVE
I see you from a distance
I know it is you
By that shape
That walk
My heart misses a beat
I feel breathless
Trembling
Dizzy
This unrequited love
All consuming
Eating me
Alive
I cannot wait til tomorrow
To see you again
I follow…
You
I get closer and even closer
Right behind you now
You do not see
Me
I am but insignificant to you
You look right though me
I am all
Invisible
You are holding my favourite flowers
Sunny, bright, happy flowers
Why are you standing
Here
Here amongst the gravestones
Cold, grey and miserable
I follow your
Gaze
I collapse and fall to the floor
Cold, numbing shock
It is there I
Lie
JEM 160516
7 Years Ago
Well,another day
This page slips to number two
Just goes to show
No one has a thought to share
Or don;t artists think
7 Years Ago
good one Jem! :-)
echoing thoughts
feeling love.... that feeling
reposting from another thread
Dont get locked up .. . not for loving too much...To love... or not to love... to love too much or not enough... Dont smile too much. love alot, only stars smile a million miles... Smile when it counts. Let love be real. Fake love is antilove. Fake smiles. Fake words that might kill... Silver flowers might be real - see them come and go.. like traffic cones.. . . flowers litter the pavement railings, park benches... road sides.... love left, love speaks... but often only after death... they took him away... dead.... love died before he died and now... they love but but ... but.. . so many buts
we can not see for traffic cones... . we often cant find our roads... yet new ones can find us home together. . . all of us.. . silver flowers
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
Yes, emphatically, Abbie, sigh...........I figure the stuff that stinks in life is what one cannot control............for better Or worse.......if that helps,lol
Danl...............it's been four days since you posted this here addressed to me..................I really had to think deeply.....
''Ever see something that was never there
Touch something that didn't exist
Look for something you never had
Lose your shadow in the sun
You have left life''
No, I have not left life..........the things I have lost but never knew, or even my shadow..........live and are found forever in my imagination, whilst alive, now,in this time, and it follows, therefore:::
Without my imaginings.............
........... I could not paint
.......................................... I could not breathe in times of stress
.......................................... I could not love wholeheartedly.
Are you here, Danl?
7 Years Ago
ok i be on the one liners too, if that helps lol
remember in life, perfume can cover the stench, but too much is far far worse
(holding noses)
7 Years Ago
Who needs to sing, its beautiful to sing but just shout them poems out, scream your poetry to the wind! lol
or whisper them
Poetry i think are at their best on a page
where you can read at your pace
re-read the feelings
stumble and climb the lines
Poetry be the words that settle upon your mind and heart
and talk to you in quiet moments
when you are alone
silent
they speak the most
those great words
when they are inside your mind
and your heart beats stronger
the pulse is strongest
when your heart feels
the poetry
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
Don't confuse my personality
With my attitude
My personality is who I am
My attitude depends
On who you are
7 Years Ago
Helloooooo Robin-Lee - A sheltered bird?
Jasey Babe - on a roll again - one liners hey?
DANL - May I never get on the wrong side of you :-)
Has Viet gone for a wander again?
Abbie - Only temporarily - you just wash off the stench and carry on!
Don't worry - Be happy :-)
Love to people watch - Dislike people
Be a chameleon and blend seamlessly
Don't let your difference shine until it's time
To stand on an escarpment, arms open, feel the warm breeze, gaze across the African veldt, smell the scent of the grasses, hear the doves, and elephants low rumble - I am home.
7 Years Ago
Life is like getting on a plane
The moment the doors close
Taxing down the runway
Wheels retracted
Turn to the right then left
Heading up then down
Turbulant storms
Bouncing about
There is nothing you can do
That's life
7 Years Ago
VIET?
Thoughts
I see a little figure with a dog
A wandering down the path
By the look that's on his face
You can tell the cogs are whirring
What thoughts are lingering
What thoughts are mulling
around in that head
A wry smile lingers on the lips
The dog pulls him
out of his thoughts
"Come on....lets walk"
That wry smile returns
Makes me smile too.
Should I ask?
JEM 180516
7 Years Ago
Setting a challenge Jasey?
Get the point? said the narwhale.
Got the hump? said the dromedary
While the penguin asked if they had got cold feet!
7 Years Ago
Ok im beaten Jane.
lol
crrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee...e..e.e.e.e..e..eeeek... . .
the lid opened
as moth flew out...... . flutter
and a giant bat shook its wings
to go for a midnight piss.....
slam, the lid shut
it went back in
relieved !!
©Jason Christopher 2015
get back out of your coffins old poets!
7 Years Ago
Helloooo Valeria - Burma hey! We were there last year to visit a friend - what took you to Yangon?
Jason - you are never beat! No-one beats you :-) You have given up far too easily!
DANL - are we managing to give you a break keeping the page right up there - or nearly?
Viet - Have you not finished walking the dog yet?
7 Years Ago
Please don't slam the lid
I am just resting awhile
Placid as I may look
I shall return with a smile
7 Years Ago
"The higher your resting, the more things will move around you."
(This thought has a double meaning. One good and one bad.)
7 Years Ago
Loopy
The monkey has gone bananas
The dog is a little horse
Too much barking up the wrong tree of...
Which.. the trunk belongs to the elephant
The mole is not on his back
But underground...asleep
wait.......
crrreeeeeeaaaaaaak k k k k k
Jason' bat...willow.... k as the ball hits
SLAM
JEM 200516
7 Years Ago
morning Jane and the hareem
should be harlem page trotters, but
bat
ball
lol
catch
slam
out!
just trying to entice Ed and Viet back
but coffins might be snug
Ed had a skeleton avatar months and years ago
hes a bit of a shaker
rackety ruckety rickety
Viet
has become the dog! walked by strangers
my profound thought
cough
for today
I guess we could start some coffin knock knock slam slam jokes
on to Dani and his box
slam
a good sleep is necessary to maintain health, sanity and hunger
7 Years Ago
Thanks you all for sharing your thoughts of the day. Enjoy a restful weekend without too much thought.
Here is my slow response to Jane's poem Thoughts?
Full of Thoughts Inside Humans' Minds
no cloud
on the blue sky
a red sun has already risen up high in the East
yet, a silver moon is stills beautifully visible
in the broad daylight
above the horizon
in the West
I
sniff
from the breeze
the smell of grass and leaves
the fragrance of wild flowers
and the freshness of morning air
I
enjoy
walking
jogging
running
back and forth
on the rural trail
with an empty mind
of no thought
of no word
not far
behind me
my buddy
as usual
head down
in absolute silence
like
a Zen master
in meditation
maybe
he loses himself
in the labyrinth
of his own thoughts
about
life and death
human and god
love and hate
war and peace
and other philosophical issues of human living
it's likely
he ain't enjoy any instant of his walk
as
I habitually do
I sniff
I bark
I pee
I poo
wherever
and whenever I'd like to
(and he - my poor master - always cleans up my mess)
I wonder
why
those so-called human beings often bury themselves
too
deep
in depth
at the bottom of the sea of nonsense thoughts about life
to forget enjoying it?
Thao Chuong
2016-05-21
7 Years Ago
Nice poem Viet and enjoy the others thoughts.
Empty Head
my belly is full
my head feels empty
must have had a brain drain
I went to have a cat scan
I hope it’s not a tumor
it showed nothing
just an empty head
dead space
from ear to ear
having a cleared mind
I was quite relieved
I’m a black hole in the universe
like the ones scattered through the cosmos
sucking and swallowing
anything in it’s way
The doctor says don’t worry
your brain just dropped down
it’s at home in your penis now
Jim Taylor 5/21/2016
7 Years Ago
@Jason: Uh! my nose was badly hurt, you slammed at my face, mate -lol
@ Jim. I love the sense of humor in your poem
Have a tight sleep
The Sound of Dead Silence
for
an instant
of inner peace
close the eyes
to
get rid of all images
shut the mouth
not
to utter
any single word
clear the heart
from
both
love and hate
empty the mind
by
disposing of
all thoughts
and imagination
bring oneself
deep
deeps
deeper
deepest
into
the core of naught
Thao Chuong
2016-05-22
7 Years Ago
@Jim... and then what happened? lol
@Viet. sorry big nose. lol
@Jason
o thats me stfu
@Jane tort i saw a thortoise tinking she was taught, as she torty plodded, deep in tourtoise thought
and
then she went indoors
into her shell, tinking, tinking
muttering
thung tisters of tortoise torts
a "loopy" echo to your "thoughts" thus said, above mentioned, hereby acknowledged, preceding poems and an echo to uccents thus dissed and discustard on t'other treads
@Dani slam slam
7 Years Ago
I don’t know Jason I’ll have to ask “The Doctor.”
Doctor John who is known as the night tripper.
and walks on guilded splinters.
7 Years Ago
Good evening all
@ Danl: You're are good at thinking out-of-the box.
@Jason: It's likely that you have had a good time with Jane.
@ Jim: Do you really believe in what "The Doctor" say?
Have a good rest to you all.
7 Years Ago
Out of Love
he fell
from the blue sky above
into a bottomless valley
she stayed on the shaken soil
by herself
alone
in pain
inside
her heart
tears
rolled
spilled out
ran about
and turned dried ground into a full ocean of salty water
inside
her mind
siren sounds
keep wailing
like
a dying soul
carried
by
an ambulance on its way to an emergency room
she cried
she moaned
she lamented
she grieved
for
the loss
o'
love
she continued submerging
herself
deep down
into a black hole of sufferings
while he kept plunging further
going through the bottom of Satan's burning hell
into the infinite darkness
below
it was how
they both eternally felt
when they fell
out of
love
Thao Chuong
2016-05-23
7 Years Ago
Wow, Viet your poem balanced out my Monday morning perspective.
"Neighborhood Watch" I'll be watching out for dips and turns and a bottomless valley.
7 Years Ago
Good grief!
DANL..Maybe too peopley here too lol. Nutter alert above or below which ever way you read this thread.one of your marbles has reappeared.:-)
VIET....Lovely having you back, Thank you for your great response to thoughts. Falling out of love..wow they must have been deeply in love too!
JIM...Witch Doctor?
Jason...stfu lol...You tort u taw a tortoise taying tung tisters lol and just whom are you asking to be your new bats hanging upside down? T'other treads -is that Yorkshire dialect -did you come for a visit and I missed you?
Have a great day everyone. brb x
7 Years Ago
OOOOOOPS! caught it DANL!
Hey who deleted the spammer! Yaaaaay
LOOP DE LOOP
A sandwich short of a
Picnic
A lamp short of a
bulb
Not the brightest button in the
box
A screw loose (Letting out the
marbles)
Not the sharpest tool in the
shed
As crazy as a box of
Weasels
A beer short of a six
pack
Bats in the belfry Jasey Babe
Nutty as a fruit cake DANL
Mad as a hatter JIM
Lights are on but nobody is at
home VIET
Not playing with a full deck of cards
Out to lunch JEM
But the lift does not reach the top
floor
OH DEAR!
7 Years Ago
Jane i hadnt no, in the past yes a few xs, i hear the accent though lol
oh well the marvels of idioms, u got the hareem named there!
always wonder how they get translated
i mean a fruit cake might mean a brothel in another lanuage
and a coo coo might be a professor
and a mad hatter might be a thug
well... u know etc
I lost my sense of smell long ago, just a weak sniffer
but i can smell ya all from here lol alchys
joke
cough, holey moses the stench is intoxicating lol
yeh so that was my thoughtless thought i tort, said the thoughtoise torting its stuff
babylon is burning oh why is the "different" spammer(s) always spamming the same stuff? is s/he in house lol?
ps has Jim @@@@ his brains out yet?
had to say it
7 Years Ago
well... world peace, global warming, equality and epidemics are a good list to occupy the brains amongst u! these threads are for mere artisans of lesser denomination and greater idealism and more.... hope
briefly digressing from madness, alcohol and pursuits of the heart ( these being the current themes as far as i can make out, i just go with the flow and echo everything on here in multiplex, lol)
7 Years Ago
Hi Jim...Somebody has to be lol. Vote for Jim.
Jason......
I am lost for words....maybe I should ask the torting thoughtoise.
Just wondering if the council up in North Yorkshire got a back hander when all of the villagers voted no to fracking and it has been allowed to go ahead.....who gives these councillors the right ? Grrrrrrrr
7 Years Ago
Good evening all
Thanks Jim, Danl, Jason, and Jane. - I luv ja all -lol
Have a sweet dream.
My late echo to Jason's Poem Alone together
The Diversities of Humans Beings
I wouldn't dream
of
living
in a world
where there were "only one humanity."
one humanity means
no diversities
in
race
ethnicity
language
and culture.
all human beings would look alike
as precise as clones
from
only
one original.
the earth would become a monotonous garden
uninteresting
to look at one kind
of flowers in same colour
in
general
human beings are identical in blood, flesh ,and bones
also have many things in common
in
particular
each individual
in the billions of humans
is
in fact
a distinctive being.
to live in harmony
wouldn't
we
better
look at the common
share the uniqueness
and enjoy the diversity.
Thao Chuong
2015-05-24
I re-post Jason's poem for your reference
.
Alone together
We are all alone, together
and together, alone
yet we all feel at one
within our souls
connected
when searching deep
we find our depth of being...
And on the shores
some One stands
and others, with us
a hand to reach for
ancestors?
companions of a journey?
divine beings wait...
across oceans of time and
the failings and pains of humanity..
Reach out
someone upon a shore stands tall
waiting
for He created us!
and His Son Jesus Christ
came to visit us
to say that the Father
is the Father to all
and all are welcome
to be at One with One!
Hallowed be the name of God!
and such journeys of revelation
and truth
can be many milenia long...
One humanity at One with One God
Together!
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
be at One
7 Years Ago
Well said Viet, diversity is creation, creation is diversity, a field of beautiful wild flowers indeed!! and they all, each and everyone, deserves care, love, respect and attention. Not to be made into a car park, Not a big land-fill hole to kill off and dump the beautiful dead flowers in - once sold and old. The world is turning uglier. Beauty killed off. A field Not to be sprayed with mutating chemicals. Not to be cut down and sold off to the super rich. Not to be covered in concrete, propoganada, endless nuclear missiles, not owned by the few nor made into a field of hidden snakes or bugs, but a beautiful honest display, to be shared, as was always intended... is that too much to ask for? A pond would be nice, a few koi, butterflies.... maybe a dove.. that kind of thing... so whats the new agendas? the new divides? the manufactured synthetic garden full of mines and the few such as you (an impersonal "you" here of course)?
btw Im not a pacifist unilateralist but we want to avoid new arms races and head for more multilateral decreases in deadly arsenals
You are never speechless Jane! yes a massive reassessment of energy and emissions is probably soon underway at last. Jim is here to help!
Jane the "thoughtoise" concept is hereby copyrighted, ©Jason Christopher, 2016, all rights reserved. chuckle. Be a capitalist and change the world. for better or worse.? Hide in my shell of thought. Thoughts are never hidden once shared. But stealing ideas from hard drives and internet intercepts is not on. Thats Screwity not security.... ive previously had my patent data intercepted and been sent fraudulent demands. Ive addressed this to my internet provider, they sent me heaps of stuf on security, all of which i had already implemented. I was assure ips are changed evry few weeks but still my ip is not changed months later. everything can be hacked and intercepted. For inventors and artists that is a nail in the coffin. It is a hackers paradise. We are entitled to such human rights, and we are not and will not be made into new age media slaves . Security of the individual is as equally important as security of the state. Or is it just multinationals that are important? Perhaps even they are the new hackers even? But They all started off as one person once... .
a thought for today...
edited
7 Years Ago
Congratulations to those who make it through it each day
where each word
hits us in the belly!
each smile
knocks our socks off!
each hic cup
a mere glint of natures reflections in the eye of time and sound of air!
each hot joke
makes us sizzle! like bacon (and eggs)
each cup of tea
a potion of your magic
Come
let us jocularise
metamorphosie
and be plenty
in an empty world
of silly pots
where we are but cups
old mugs
and china clay juggernauts
hic
hit em again
with that randy poetry
echoing
(c)the proverbial potty 2016
i might have to stop soon
the anhialation of a language is but complete
7 Years Ago
Chuck-
Nobody really cares if you're
Miserable, sad, sick or depressed
So you might as well be happy.
7 Years Ago
I'M ALWAYS HAPPY! (nearly)
Jason - so sue me lol x
Viet - luv ya back x
DANL - You split my sides!
Be Grateful
Be grateful you have your
health,
home,
happiness,
family,
food
life
Be thankful there is the
sun
moon
trees
flowers
water
life
Do not dwell on what others have or have not
It is of no concern of yours
whilst you have the above
you have everything you need
Be grateful - it brings a smile
Be ungrateful - it brings a frown
Be grateful and lighten the heart
Be ungrateful and leaden the heart
SMILE
JEM 250516
7 Years Ago
Good after noon everyone. Have a happy day.
@ Jason; Wow..wow..wow... your thought has flooded my mind. I was drowned and couldn't breath. Very provoking mate,
@ Danl: I believe if you would put your thoughts on canvas as exactly as in your mind, you would create many great abstracts. There must be someone who would care for your well-being, my friend.
@ Chuck: Nothing else but happiness is what I need for my entire life
@ Betsy: Good deed., It sounds easy to do. Yet, we tend to forget in our daily busy schedule
@ Jane: oh! you break my heart again -lol. Be grateful . We often take good life for granted.
7 Years Ago
Here is my echo to Chuck's simple thought "be happy"
Be Happy
(I- Inhale)
be happy
like
a dog off leash
no more restriction
absolutely free
to
run
bark
sniff around
chase other dogs
be happy
like
a cat without flea
no longer suffering
free from scratch
leisurely sunbaths on a deck
be happy
like
a bird not imprisoned in a cage
jumps from tree to tree in the jungle
sings in the wild
flips both wings
flies up high into blue sky
(II- Exhale)
be happy
for
being still kicking alive
to
enjoy
sky
cloud
water
ocean
land
trees
prairies
mountains ...
be happy
for
being still here for another day
regardless of the weather
sunshine
moonlight
snow
rain
flood
wave
wind
fire ...
(III - Hold the Breath)
don't worry
be happy
'til the last breath on earth
Thao Chuong
2016--5-25
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7 Years Ago
Viet-
I think someone does care about my well-being
But I am not sure
Is it the little voice over my right shoulder
Or the little voice over my left shoulder
7 Years Ago
Danl-
You've reminded me of hearing voices from heaven. No worry, my friend. In case you have no one who does care for your well-being. Then you'd better worship any God. He'll save your lonely soul -lol
7 Years Ago
About Vincent's Expressionism
his name is Vincent
he loves painting
unlike
Old Maser van Gogh
he's neither famous nor insane
he's too young
however he has had a permanent exhibition
at the best location
many abstracts were
drawn
and painted
in expressionism
not
on canvas
but on every wall around our house
the contemporary art world has become so insane
that anything would happen
every wild dream could become true
so
someday
our little artist grows up
and could become a great master
therefore we'd rather not paint over those old walls
who
knows
those works of his could be sold
to some crazy art dealers
for billions of bucks
Thao Chuong
2016-05-26
7 Years Ago
On Vincent's Best Day of the Year
unlike many older folks
he does the opposite
to
celebrate
his birthday
he
doesn't party
doesn't drink
doesn't smoke
doesn't do drugs
doesn't have sex
doesn't commit any silly act
he enjoys
running
chasing
playing with other kids
at least
for
today
and tomorrow
hopefully, it would last for about another ten years or more
on his best day of the year
he proudly says
"no
more diaper
for a big boy
I'm four today"
he gives everyone a sweet smile and a warm hug
while saying in his soft voice
"thank everybody for taking good care of me
I luv ja all"
Thao Chuong
2015-06-26
7 Years Ago
Jane heres a good hard pinch haha
Viet how creative! watch out for the expletive poetry next... @£&&@@!!! in crayon
Dani i shall post a substantial guide to assist soon, in the mean time PMT, i mean PMA , oh @@£&&**** that
Come back Jim we forgive u
Come back Ed
7 Years Ago
Jason : OUCH You little $@#*!&£
Viet - Love Be happy
DANL - You have to watch those little voices - they can get you into mischief or even worse trouble!
CLIPPED WINGS
Like a songbird in cage
Trapped for the pleasure of others
No joy to the songbird
To see only through bars
Not to feel the wind through his wings
Not able to fly
Soar up ..........high
Swoop down .........low
See life ..far......below
Freedom
Beyond
Locked
Doors
Human trafficking
Slavery
Still
Goes
On
JEM 270516
7 Years Ago
Bird poem echo to Jane and bouncing to anyone listening.
Canary Visitation
a little bird flew in my window
glowing with yellow plumage
a very beautiful bird
oh and the tune it sang
fluttering from room to room
testing the waters I suppose
must be a canary
looking for a mate
as I lie in yellow pajamas
a little sad as it flew out
deciding not to tarry
a canary in a coal mine
I must have passed
the non toxic test
glad I’m not toxic
only schizophrenic
Jim Taylor 5/27/2016
7 Years Ago
Good evening everybody
TGIF
@ Danl: I have a good a reason to be behind your back, my friend. I can hold you up, in case you get hit by a drive-by-shooting bullet -lol
@ Bruce: Welcome to the land of insane thought.
@ Jason: you're right, my friend. For batter or worse, you'd better duck or you would be hit by shrapnel of the coming expletive poetry. Have a "nie die", mate
@ Jane: Who would love "Be Sad", unless when she really gets mad -lol. I love your CLIPPED WINGS. It's sad, isn't it?
@ Jim: Your great sense of light humor always make me smiles, while Jason's provoking thoughts often make me cry - lol
7 Years Ago
Posted by Danl Art about 15 hours ago
Never worry about those
Who talk behind your back
They are behind you
For a reason
In response to Jason's phobia of expletive poetry (lol), here is my echo to Danl's post above
It's About You - Behind Your Back
How Would You React?
the ones who often waste time to talk behind your back
are
certainly
not your enemies
simply b'cause
any foe
of
yours
would prefer to strike directly at your face
then looks at your black eyes
hears your cries
and laughs at your suffering
except
a friend of yours
or someone
(who
cares for you
loves you so much
follows you so close
and pays attention to what you do)
who (the hell) else would know you
well enough
to
talk about you
right behind your back
anyway
if you believe
what said about you
is
totally wrong
why stressfully worry about it?
it's not you
but they who have their minds infested and their mouths soiled by gossiping garbage
if what said about you
is
right
then no point to complain
you must be grateful for the friendship
and especially for the free...
publicity
of
your true nature
Thao Chuong
2016-05-27
7 Years Ago
@ Jane:I like the texture of bricks on the wall and the waves of yin-yang tiles on the roof. It's quite a good shot. Like love Jim's suggested title: Cat on a terracotta roof.
Here is my echo to your work
The Calls of Love and Life
serenity of each night
is
often
interrupted by chaos
from those cats in heat
crying
whining
meowing for sex
chasing each other
then noisily moaning
while
mating on Chinese styled yin-yang ceramic tiles
on an aged roof of a Buddhist's ancient temple
how could those monks-in-meditation
keep
their hearts free from the call for alluring love
their minds shut off the urgent desire for sex
and their soul untouched by constant disturbance from daily living
would they be able to successfully get rid
of
their own inner agony
to achieve full enlightenment?
or
they're just fooling themselves
by
refusing
to accept reality
the authentic existence of
joy
happiness
and suffering
in
both
love 'n life.
Thao Chuong
2016-05-28
7 Years Ago
Viet-
Talk about drive by shootings....
I was shot at by an idiot years ago
It was all my girlfriend's fault
Her husband found out about me
Bang!
7 Years Ago
Good morning (it is Sunday morning/Sydney), and thank you for these recent posts, thoughts, musings..........I am 'happy' .............and, I watch my back..so far, so good......safe.
I am in a cage now, against my will. But my mind is free.
7 Years Ago
Great thoughts and images from all.
Not quite there but always start anticipating another hot summer in these parts.
Summer and slumber
my thoughts melt
as the day burns
feeling summer heat
fresh from the oven
toast is burnt
but the tomatoes are ripe
a cat jumps across a hot roof
a swift lizard watches below
looking to fade
into cool of night
ice cream dreams
melt on my pillow
the sisters of stars
move through the night
the feminine hand
comforts my mind
it relaxes my body
as morning arrives
with a new day
I’ll accept the gift
and hope for more
Jim Taylor 5/28/2016
7 Years Ago
Good evening all.
@ Danl: Your black humour made me laugh.
@ Jane: Those old cars of the fifties and sixties look prettier than modern cars
@ Vivian: It's sad to hear about your unfortunate circumstance! I don't really comprehend it. How could someone put you "in a cage against your will"? Why would you allow it?
@ Jim: Thanks for sharing for poetic moment. It's an amazing poem that reminded me of the summer heat in Saigon in the early seventies.
Description: The original is neither a painting nor a digital work- but pure collage with 100% colored paper ripped from magazines.
Summer Heat in Saigon
as in the haze of a raging wildfire
after
midnight
it was still extremely hot
and unbearably humid
'twas
totally
soaked
and soggy
on my profoundly sweated back
all clothes taken off
fully
naked
l laid my back
turned up and down
back and forth
and around
on cool concrete floor
in the best effort
of easing off the high heat
and wiping out sticky sweats on my wet skin
the physical torment became too much for the body to take
the psychological anguish was so high for the mind to endure
eyes tightly closed for hours
still sleepless
impossible
to rest
more salt added to the fresh wound
tedious sounds from the grandfather clock
strike
in
every
fifteen minutes
then heavily pounded in every hour
horrendous torture wrecked the mind throughout the restless night.
Thao Chuong
2016-05-28
7 Years Ago
VIVA
Think of your cage as a lovely gated community
Thought of the day....
"Just when the caterpillar thought its life was over, it began to fly"
7 Years Ago
Good morning all
@ Danl: Wow. I love your quote of the day "Just when the caterpillar thought its life was over, it began to fly" .It is very hopefully inspiring for those who feel that they are at the end of their rope.
@ Jim: Nice painting. I enjoy the simplicity of your art in naive-ism.
Have a restful day to you all.
My thought of the day is actually inspired by VIVA's post. However, I really don't know anything about Viva's situation. To avoid any slight misunderstanding, I must clarify that the following poem purely came from my subjective imagination . It is intended to present the general circumstance of victims in a trapped marriage. I absolutely didn't try to describe any specific situation of anyone in the real life.
Eve Gets Trapped Forever inside Adam's Paradise
morning air is fresh
sunlight tiptoes on her face
its warmness radiates on her skin
the room is filled by echoes from bird's calls outside
so
rhythmic
more melodious
more harmonious
than Shubert's masterpiece - Symphony 9
very real
it is
neither
a dream inside another dream
nor a hallucination of being on god's paradise
if
she'd like
she could open the window from her flat
at anytime
to
look
on green treetops
up at the unlimited sky
down on the crowded ground below
however,
every morning
she prefers to stay in same dream forever
she's too frightened to open her eyes to wake up
'cause
she certainly knows
she could no longer cope with the harsh reality in her daily routine
a long time ago
love
has been totally lost
she couldn't remember
when her nightmare started
and how the chemistry was faded
unlike a songbird
while
having its wings clipped
being imprisoned behind tiny bars
crying inside a bamboo cage
at
least
that bird could still retain its faint hope for freedom someday
but
not her
she has been absolutely trapped inside the iron hands for many years
and she'll have been locked up
in such an abusive relationship
'til
her last breath
like many other female victims of the so-called marriage
she always emotionally feels
as if she's been held brutally
against her will
inside
his ten soft fingers
but more fortified than those metal bars
some how
a psychologically strong feeling has risen inside
telling her
it's
too late
desperately hopeless
impossible to get out of this invisible cage.
Thao Chuong
2016-05-29
7 Years Ago
Viva, I was walking my dog and composing this piece. In my medicine wheel Tyger stirred up a snake, who struck at his foot and nose, how appropriate. Before I could snap a snakey photo he slithered away into the tall grass, despite my attempts to deter him 💫
The cage of the mind
seems twice as strong
as a dream of freedom
within the heart.
The Soul holds a key,
unlocking that gate
so Sensitives may step
lightly
into an otherworldly bliss.
Karen Newell
6/29/16
7 Years Ago
Ha ha, 2 poems today
I follow deer tracks
through the mud,
deep indentations
evident
on each step of my path.
I arrive in my Medicine Wheel,
a snake is waiting
with his startling message.
I laugh!
It is a beautiful day......
Karen Newell
5/29/16
7 Years Ago
Good morning. Danl is taking a long nap -lol.. It has been quiet so far
@ Karen: Nice to seeing you swinging by with the double treats. The Cage of the Mind provided me with thought. The Dear Track made me feel relaxed
Here is my echo to your poem.
The Path of Love and Life
he sniffed around
wagged his tail
then barked in a cheerful voice
to let me know he found something interesting on wet ground
I
looked
on Goose Trail
and saw soft foot prints
as if they were leading me to Medicine Wheel
I could feel your presence somewhere very near here
as if
we were on the same path
and you had passed by
just
a couple minutes ago
I
could
still sense in the morning breeze
the distinctive scent of grass, leaves, and wild flowers
mildly mixed
with
memorable aroma
of familiar perfume and your body odor
unfortunately
I was a little bit late
unable
to catch you in time
maybe
it's karma
which always prevents us
from bumping into each other in both love and life.
Thao Chuong
2016-05-30
7 Years Ago
Awake finally....
It is unfortunate that mornings come at such an inconvenient time of day
7 Years Ago
To Brexit or not to Brexit that is the question!!
I have made my mind up - vote in the post.
What say you DANL?
JASON: Have you made your mind up?
7 Years Ago
i have Jane
Remain! Stay In!
the eu is not perfect but it has built strong friendships out of strong enemies
and the sayings-
out of the frying pan and into the fire
dont throw the baby out with the bath water!
are very true here
7 Years Ago
Good evening Danl, Jane and Jason
@ Danl: You really wake me up with your provoking quote "Art is 99% robbery! (ha..ha.....) And what is the 1%. Is it copying or stealing?
@ Jane: EU wouldn't survive without your vote.
@ Jason: In this case it'd better to keep the bath water for recycling.
My thought of the day.
Why Is Every Day - My Good Day?
it's nice to wake up every morning
open my eyes wide
recognizing
I'm still
alive
I
know
how lucky I am
to enjoy a another day with my loved ones
as I am getting older
any extra moment is a bonus
not only I'm more grateful for
but also I am very satisfied with,
what have received from love and life so far
in addition
I value more
for,
all what
I'm holding in my hands at this instant
I no longer whine nor complain against anything
(as I often did with the blameless weather
when I was younger)
nowadays, I am fully aware
regardless how miserable and unbearable
it could be
whether
it's
rainy
snowy
windy
stormy
biting cold
sweating hot
I can do nothing about it
why am I so silly to let it negatively impact on my day
impossible to control or change the environment around me
nonetheless, I can change my perspective
so I could drive my day
smoothly going along
with
the natural flow
of life and love
isn't it wonderful to wake up every morning
open our eyes
knowing
we still have brand-new day to enjoy
Thao Chuong
2016-05-31
7 Years Ago
VIET - AMEN to Good Day
JASON - I am sorry....Why would you want people whom you don't even know, nor voted for to sign up to TTIP or anything else for that matter. Have a look at the Irish MEP Flannagan whom tries to have a look at the TTIP document. What solid reason (positive) have they given for us to stay in? All they have told us is what they presume to be a negative with no proof. Everything either way is supposition, but the majority of economists say we will be better out. Yes we may have a hiccough for a couple of years but after that we will be stronger. Being in the EU did not save us from the 2008 crash, we just had to prop up everyone else. Why should we be told who we can and cannot trade with without imposing massive taxes like Tate and Lyle have to pay because they do not use beet for their sugar......Is a to stay in vote corporate driven...is that why they are scaremongering. ....time for change and freedom and independence again...I am not scared....I am out.
7 Years Ago
Good moaning people
The only substantial reason to leave is the FEAR induced over immigration but it wont change when we leave because the economy is growing and generating jobs that need to be filled, once the jobs go, we go into recession, or we achieve higher automation, people will then leave.. .
7 Years Ago
Jane, to me, the peace dividend is immeasurable!! it has been trivialised by some, but 60 million died in ww2 and there were 2 world wars in Europe in the last century, and literally hundreds upon hundreds of wars!!
Yes nato guarantees security, but its a voluntary organisation and is underpinned by common social and economic interests, if the eu disintegrates, the old rivalries might re-appear leading to animosity, it might eventually lead to nato falling apart
7 Years Ago
Immigration is the only substantial leave issue...
but..
Jane - a postal vote ? are you currently an emigrant~?
apparently 3.9 million Brits lived and worked abroad in 2010 and its gone up
http://www.independent.co.uk/voices/so-many-brits-now-live-abroad-that-theyre-causing-immigration-debates-oh-the-irony-a6723006.html
I'm quite happy to have the shape of vegetables be standardised by the EU, i'm not bothered, if that's worthy of repeal well what ever, i'm not that bothered either way, i'm sure once the wonky veg returns from the repeal of such eu legislation, everyone will complain about spotty tomatoes and unripe apples etc lol it will be great material, its all about the chat these days
WE do make all our important laws
The EU has legislated on many equality issues such as women's rights and workers rights
I'm happy with diverse and cosmopolitan UK and Europe and a world full of Brits too
1 million Brits live in Spain etc
3.9 million Brits work and live abroad
Actually 2/3rds of ethnic minorities want to remain! Many thought they would vote the other way, some might be, but most seem not to be for leave
I'm not happy with racism or fascism that can arise if unchecked and nationalism gets out of hand, that is far more likely in a fragmented Europe
We need to find routes to equilibrium and that is the challenge
We could stop immigrants and find our economy is very short of labour, growing economies generate jobs, there is the highest level of employment here! and then what of the emigrants? Will Brits be unwelcome?
The UK economy thrives for many years now, and we are in the EU, we are not in recession, the EU does not harm us economically - we are doing very well!
The mass immigration INTO the EU is the aftermath of many wars, conflicts, and sledge hammer actions, they are refugees, many will return to rebuild their countries, under the UN they have asylum status, giving shelter - these are great acts of humanity and compassion
WE are part of the mass immigration WITHIN the EU but we can work to means of achieving equilibrium in the decades ahead
We need more refined interventions in foreign countries outside the EU and North America, and long term actions like rebuilding trust, economies and friendships - thriving states and peaceful foreign countries might actually attract immigrants away, of course we might actually want to keep them in future decades
Finally,
If we became the refugees, and our countries were bombed to dust, or suffered economic catastrophe, or drowned in global warming floods, would we be happy with the reception we got as we fled for our lives?
There's no easy answers in a global world in conflict and on the move and seeking solutions is best done as a team
7 Years Ago
enjoyed your etheral poem Viet
Boats
Over seas they came
desolate faces
haunted, gaunt looks
screams from the seas
where do we go? they cried
their lands washed aways
deserts that grew
cities turned to dust
the changing world
as we lamented
dazed, and
sat on our boats...
looking at the boats full
sailing the other ways!
as we pointed
and waved
and cried
and threw our arms around each other
have safety in your voyage!
as many drowned
i held on
as someone grabbed my hand...
we wish for peace
setllement
and hope
so do i
as i clambered aboard
shivering
we can help each other
find the way
but next to me
someone had died
who am i friend?
called out a voice
I am u, said he, then another
and u am i! i replied
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
in the minds of others, across mines, drowing in seas
7 Years Ago
Viet, Thank you for your lovely echo! Here is mine
Wild Goose Chase
We have met one million times
on one million different paths.
Here on Earth
it is just a wild goose chase.
;))
Karen Newell
6/1/16
7 Years Ago
Jason,
An Illusion of Peace
I try to hide in my garden
surrounding myself
with flowers and fronds.
I put my ear to the Earth,
listening
to her heartbeat thrum.
No matter how deep I dig,
nor how deeply
I gaze to the sky,
I cannot escape the suffering
of the war ravaged
immigrant cries.
I see their cities
blasted to rubble,
while our civilized citizens
shake their fists in fear.
Hackles raised,
voices raised,
"Don't stop here!".
Who will acknowledge
that collateral damage
has a human face?
This so called
normal life of mine
is a twentyfirst century,
modern illusion of peace.
Karen Newell
6/1/16
7 Years Ago
Jason :-) 1. I always do postal votes I find it easier and yes - I live in the UK - permanently.
2. My vote has nothing to do with the immigration issues and I am the last person on earth you could call racist or colour prejudiced. Do you really think that this is the only substantial exit issue - I certainly do not!
3. What are your thoughts on TTIP?
4. Do you really think Europe would regress back to the 1940's and have a Hitler state again? I don't.
5. In the EU or out of the EU - this does not stop you being part of a team! We were not part of the EU in the 2nd world war and look what we did then. It is negative thoughts about "oh you are not in my gang so I cannot help you" that causes these issues ps - still luv ya :-). Wobbly bits n all! You have your opinion I have mine :-) So be it.
DANL: Well expressed!
7 Years Ago
excellent!
im glad there is one person voting leave where that decision is Not based on (white) immigration, lol. i never inferred u was racist ! u @£&@@& !!
mind u I'm voting leave because of ttip! its a great slogan. chuckle.
VOTE REMAIN
STRONGER IN
i dont mention h at the drop of a hat. but an endless history of wars and division in Europe is there. hundreds of wars. hundreds and hundreds. im saying a stable union makes that most unlikely if not impossible, and the idea that division can never happen again!? look at the conflicts in every century of Europe.. they are endless
the recovery that the eu has created, in unifying Europe, is commendable
ive not given ttip much attention, its a trade deal with huge teams discussing it, im sure all sides will make sure their interests are heard.. go on say what u hate and like about it
the eu does not harm us economically - infact we are strongly growing in the eu, thriving, successful!
on art and conflict and atrocities, there are endless atrocities committed by everyone against everyone, the vikings were terrorists for 200 years and the Scandinavians are very fine people... likewise the Romans... us... the French, the Germans etc. we dont generalise do we? i mean isnt that what racists do? you are white - therefore a genocidal slaver?
splutter
Karen, well expressed, good to see you back
7 Years Ago
Jason - here you go: - Everyone in this country should know about TTIP!
http://www.independent.co.uk/voices/comment/what-is-ttip-and-six-reasons-why-the-answer-should-scare-you-9779688.html
and as much as I do not like this man :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oDpxzv02Ngo - keep searching - there is lots out there....
also:
http://www.telegraph.co.uk/foodanddrink/10145478/Germaine-Greer-Britain-doesnt-need-beet-sugar.html
http://www.telegraph.co.uk/finance/newsbysector/retailandconsumer/11654668/Tate-and-Lyle-Sugars-Wed-be-better-off-outside-the-EU-unless-Cameron-secures-major-reforms.html
The stay in people say
if you leave wages will go down....but wages have already gone down because of immigration
If you leave we will lose trade and the pound will devalue - Surely if the pound devalues we will be more attractive to trade with?!
If you leave there will be job losses - we have had job losses already due to EU rules and regulations - eg our fishing industry alone has declined by 90%
If you leave they will impose heavy taxes on what we will import from them - we can import from elsewhere (Do they really want to lose sales?)
if you leave everything bad will happen - I want to know what their positives are - I want them to speak of the positives - I have heard none - none that are based on here and now and not the past - what is good for the UK and its residents if we stay in?
the list goes on.....
Right or wrong - who knows - no-one knows - not one person can tell you what will happen if you stay in or if you leave - the choice is yours. I have watched lots of talks, I have read lots of reports and I have scoured the internet and spoken to people because this is so important. I have made my decision based on all of this.
We need to take this off Viets page - PM me :-)
7 Years Ago
I know of no other place in the world that offers patrons "spotted dick"
Now why would you ever want to leave the UK?
7 Years Ago
jane i honestly couldn't think of anything less enticing than discussing a trade deal lol
commisioners are appointed by each government
they answer to the european parliament who can sack them
they are charged with new policies
they present to the parliament for approval
i think, so contact your mep
i guess we might need increased lobbying techniques on particular national concerns
7 Years Ago
Wow! Nice poems and interesting dialogues. I enjoyed the poetic interaction. Thanks Jane, Jason, Danl and Karen. Enjoy a restful evening.
7 Years Ago
TO be wise, is to learn from the past.. .
List of conflicts in Europe
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1 BC
2 1st–10th century AD
3 11th century
4 12th century
5 13th century
6 14th century
7 15th century
8 16th century
9 17th century
10 18th century
11 19th century
12 20th century
13 21st century
14 See also
15 References
BC
circa 5000 BC Talheim Death Pit
circa 1104–900 BC Dorian invasion
circa 753–351 BC Roman–Etruscan Wars
circa 753–494 BC Roman–Sabine wars
743–724 BC First Messenian War
710–650 BC Lelantine War
circa 700–601 BC Alban war with Rome
685–668 BC Second Messenian War
669–668 BC Sparta–Argos War
600–265 BC Greek–Punic Wars
595–585 BC First Sacred War
560 BC Second Arcadian War
540 BC Battle of Alalia
538–522 BC Polycrates wars
509–396 BC Early Italian campaigns
500–499 BC Persian invasion of Naxos
492–490 BC First Persian invasion of Greece
482–479 BC Second Persian invasion of Greece
480–307 BC Sicilian Wars
460–445 BC First Peloponnesian War
449–448 BC Second Sacred War
440–439 BC Samian War
431–404 BC Second Peloponnesian War
395–387 BC Corinthian War
390–387 BC Celtic invasion of Italia
335 BC Alexander's Balkan campaign
323–322 BC Lamian War
280–275 BC Pyrrhic War
267–261 BC Chremonidean War
264–241 BC First Punic War
229–228 BC First Illyrian War
220–219 BC Second Illyrian War
218–201 BC Second Punic War
214–205 BC First Macedonian War
200–197 BC Second Macedonian War
191–189 BC Aetolian War
171–168 BC Third Macedonian War
135–132 BC First Servile War
113–101 BC Cimbrian War
113 BC – CE 439 Germanic Wars
104–100 BC Second Servile War
91–88 BC Social War
88–87 BC Sulla's first civil war
85 BC Colchis uprising against Pontus
83–72 BC Sertorian War
82–81 BC Sulla's second civil war
78 BC Marcus Aemilius Lepidus
73–71 BC Third Servile War
65–63 BC Caucasian Iberian-Roman war
63–62 BC Second Catilinarian conspiracy
55–54 BC Caesar's invasions of Britain
58–51 BC Gallic Wars
49–45 BC Caesar's Civil War
44–36 BC Sicilian revolt
43 BC Battle of Mutina
43–42 BC Liberators' civil war
41–40 BC Perusine War
32–30 BC Final War of the Roman Republic
1st–10th century AD
Battle of the Milvian Bridge, 312
Battle of the Hellespont, 324
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35-41 Iberian-Parthian war
49–96 Roman conquest of Britain
51 Armenian–Iberian war
69 Year of the Four Emperors
69–70 Revolt of the Batavi
193 Year of the Five Emperors
208–210 Roman invasion of Caledoni
238 Year of the Six Emperors
271–278 Colchis–Roman War
284–285 Roman civil war
306–324 Civil wars of the Tetrarchy
350–351 Roman civil war
360–361 Roman civil war
367–368 Great Conspiracy
376–382 Gothic War
387–388 Roman civil war
394 Roman civil war of 394 AD
482–484 Iberian-Persian War
526–532 Iberian War
535–554 Gothic War
541–562 Lazic War
582–602 Maurice's Balkan campaigns
c. 600–793 Frisian–Frankish wars
650–799 Arab–Khazar wars
680–1355 Byzantine–Bulgarian wars
711–718 Umayyad conquest of Hispania
715–718 Frankish Civil War (715–718)
722–1492 Reconquista
735–737 Georgian-Umayyad Caliphate War
772–804 Saxon Wars
c. 800/862–973 Hungarian invasions of Europe
830s Paphlagonian expedition of the Rus'
839–1330 Bulgarian–Serbian Wars
854–1000 Croatian–Bulgarian wars
860 Rus'–Byzantine War
865–878 Invasion of the Great Heathen Army
907 Rus'–Byzantine War
914 Arab-Georgian War
939 Battle of Andernach
941 Rus'–Byzantine War
955 Battle of Recknitz
970–971 Sviatoslav's invasion of Bulgaria
982 Battle of Stilo
983 Great Slav Rising
11th century
Battle of Hastings (1066)
Battle of Gvozd Mountain, 1097
1002–1018 German–Polish War
1014–1208 Byzantine–Georgian wars
1015–1016 Pisan–Genoese expeditions to Sardinia
1015–1016 Cnut's invasion of England
1018 Battle of Vlaardingen
1024 Battle of Listven
1024 Rus'–Byzantine War
1043 Rus'–Byzantine War
1044 Battle of Ménfő
1048–1064 Invasion of Denmark
1050–1185 Byzantine–Norman wars
1057 Battle of Petroe
1060 Battle of the Theben Pass
1066 Norwegian invasion of England
1066–1088 Norman conquest of England
1067–1194 Norman invasion of Wales
1067 Battle on the Nemiga River
1068 Battle of the Alta River
1073–1075 Saxon Rebellion
1075 Revolt of the Earls
1077–1088 Great Saxon Revolt
1078 Battle of Kalavrye
1088 Rebellion of 1088
1093 Battle of Schmilau
1093 Battle of the Stugna River
1097 Battle of Gvozd Mountain
1099–1204 Georgian–Seljuk wars
12th century
Monument of Didgori Battle, Georgia
1109 Battle of Głogów
1115 Battle of Welfesholz
1121 Battle of Didgori
1126 Battle of Chlumec
1130–1240 Civil war era in Norway
1135–54 The Anarchy
1142–1445 Swedish–Novgorodian Wars
1144–1162 Baussenque Wars
1159–1345 Wars of the Guelphs and Ghibellines
1164 Battle of Verchen
1169–1175 Norman invasion of Ireland
1173–1174 Revolt of 1173–74
1185–1204 Uprising of Asen and Peter
1198 Battle of Gisors
13th century
The Battle of Las Navas de Tolosa, 1212
1201 Battle of Stellau
1202 Siege of Zadar
1202–1214 Anglo–French War
1205 Battle of Zawichost
1208–1227 Conquest of Estonia
1209–1229 Albigensian Crusade
1211 Welsh uprising of 1211
1215–1217 First Barons' War
1216–1222 War of Succession of Champagne
1220–1264 Age of the Sturlungs
1223–1241 Mongol invasion of Europe
1223–1480 Tatar raids in Russia
1224 Siege of La Rochelle
1227 Battle of Bornhöved
1231–1233 Friso-Drentic War
1234–1238 Georgian-Molgol War
1239–1245 Teltow War
1242 Saintonge War
1256–1258 War of the Euboeote Succession
1256–1381 Venetian–Genoese Wars
1256–1422 Friso-Hollandic Wars
1260 Battle of Kressenbrunn
1262–1266 Scottish–Norwegian War
1264–1267 Second Barons' War
1265 Battle of Isaszeg
1276 War of Navarra
1277–1280 Uprising of Ivaylo
1278 Battle on the Marchfeld
1282–1302 War of the Sicilian Vespers
1283–1289 War of the Limburg Succession
1288–1295 War of the Outlaws
1296–1357 Wars of Scottish Independence
1297–1305 Franco-Flemish War
1298 Battle of Göllheim
14th century
Battle of Sluys, 1340, from a manuscript
Battle of Nájera, 1367
1302 Battle of the Golden Spurs
1307 Battle of Lucka
1311–1312 Rebellion of mayor Albert
1312 Battle of Rozgony
1321–1322 Despenser War
1321–1328 Byzantine civil war of 1321–28
1322 Battle of Bliska
1323–1328 Peasant revolt in Flanders
1324 War of Saint-Sardos
1326–1332 Polish–Teutonic War
1333–1338 Burke Civil War
1337–1453 Hundred Years' War
1340–1392 Galicia–Volhynia Wars
1340–1396 Bulgarian–Ottoman wars
1341–1347 Byzantine civil war of 1341–47
1342–1350 Zealot's Rebellion
1343–1345 St. George's Night Uprising
1347–1352 Neapolitan campaigns of Louis the Great
1350–1498 Wars of the Vetkopers and Schieringers
1350–1490 Hook and Cod wars
1356–1358 Jacquerie
1356–1375 War of the Two Peters
1362 Battle of Helsingborg
1362–1457 War of the Bands
1366–1369 Castilian Civil War
1366–1526 Ottoman–Hungarian Wars
1369–1370 First Fernandine War
1371–1913 Serbian–Ottoman wars
1371 Battle of Baesweiler
1371–1379 War of the Guelderian Succession
1371–1381 War of Chioggia
1372–1373 Second Fernandine War
1373–1379 Byzantine civil war of 1373–79
1375 Gugler War
1375–1378 War of the Eight Saints
1381 Peasants' Revolt
1381–1382 Third Fernandine War
1381–1384 Lithuanian Civil War (1381–84)
1382 Harelle and Maillotins Revolt
1381–1404 Second Georgian–Mongol War
1389 Battle of Kosovo
1389–1392 Lithuanian Civil War (1389–92)
1395 Battle of Nicopolis
15th century
Battle of Formigny, 1450
1400–1415 Glyndŵr Rising
1401–1429 Appenzell Wars
1407–1468 Georgian-Turkoman War
1409–1411 Polish–Lithuanian–Teutonic War
1410–1435 War of Slesvig
1414 Hunger War
1419–1434 Hussite Wars
1422 Gollub War
1422 Battle of Arbedo
1425–1454 Wars in Lombardy
1431–1435 Polish–Teutonic War
1434–1436 Engelbrekt rebellion
1437 Budai Nagy Antal revolt
1438–1556 Russo-Kazan Wars
1440–1446 Old Zürich War
1441 Battle of Samobor
1443–1444 Long campaign
1445 First Battle of Olmedo
1447–1448 Albanian–Venetian War
1449–1450 First Margrave War
1449 Battle of Castione
1449–1453 Revolt of Ghent
1450 Jack Cade's Rebellion
1451–1455 Navarrese Civil War
1453–1454 Morea revolt
1454–1466 Thirteen Years' War
1455–1485 Wars of the Roses
1462–1485 Rebellion of the Remences
1462–1472 Catalonian Civil War
1463–1479 Ottoman–Venetian War
1465 Battle of Montlhéry
1465–1468 Wars of Liège
1466–1469 Irmandiño Wars
1467 Second Battle of Olmedo
1467–1479 War of the Priests
1468 Waldshut War
1468–1478 Bohemian War
1470–1471 Dano-Swedish War
1470–1474 Anglo-Hanseatic War
1475–1479 War of the Castilian Succession
1477–1488 Austrian–Hungarian War (1477–88)
1478 Carinthian Peasant Revolt
1478 Battle of Giornico
1479 Battle of Guinegate
1482–1484 War of Ferrara
1484 Battle of Lochmaben Fair
1485–1488 Mad War
1487 Battle of Crevola
1487 War of Rovereto
1488 Battle of Sauchieburn
1492–1583 Muscovite–Lithuanian Wars
1493 Battle of Krbava Field
1493–1593 Hundred Years' Croatian–Ottoman War
1494–1498 Italian War of 1494–98
1495–1497 Russo-Swedish War
1497 Cornish Rebellion of 1497
1497 Battle of Rotebro
1499 Swabian War
1499–1504 Italian War of 1499–1504
16th century
Battle of Marignano, 1515
Siege of Narva, 1558
Siege of Szigetvar, 1566
St. Bartholomew's Day massacre, 1572
Battle of Sisak, 1593
c. 1500–1854 Lekianoba
1502–1543 Guelderian Wars
1503–1505 War of the Succession of Landshut
1508–1516 War of the League of Cambrai
1509–1510 Polish–Moldavian War
1514 Poor Conrad's Rebellion
1514 Dózsa rebellion
1514–1517 Saxon feud
1515 Slovene Peasant Revolt
1515–1523 Frisian peasant rebellion
1519–1521 Polish–Teutonic War
1520–1521 Revolt of the Comuneros
1521–1523 Revolt of the Brotherhoods
1521–1523 Swedish War of Liberation
1521–1718 Ottoman–Habsburg wars
1522–1523 Knights' Revolt
1522–1559 Habsburg-Valois Wars
1524–1525 German Peasants' War
1526 Revolt of Espadán
1529 First War of Kappel
1531 Second War of Kappel
1534 Silken Thomas Rebellion
1534–1535 Münster Rebellion
1534–1536 Count's Feud
1536–1537 Pilgrimage of Grace
1540 Salt War
1542–1543 Dacke War
1543–1550 Rough Wooing
1546–1547 Schmalkaldic War
1549 Kett's Rebellion
1549 Prayer Book Rebellion
1550 Battle of Sauðafell
1552–1555 Second Margrave War
1554 Wyatt's rebellion
1554–1557 Russo-Swedish War
1558–1583 Livonian War
1560 Siege of Leith
1562–1598 French Wars of Religion
1563–1570 Northern Seven Years' War
1566 Siege of Szigetvár
1568–1570 Morisco Revolt
1568–1648 Eighty Years' War
1569–1570 Rising of the North
1569–1573 First Desmond Rebellion
1573 Croatian–Slovene Peasant Revolt
1578 Georgian-Ottoman War
1579–1583 Second Desmond Rebellion
1580–1583 War of the Portuguese Succession
1583–1588 Cologne War
1585–1604 Anglo-Spanish War
1588–1654 Dutch–Portuguese War
1587–1588 War of the Polish Succession
1590–1595 Russo-Swedish War
1593 Battle of Sisak
1593–1606 Long Turkish War
1593–1617 Moldavian Magnate Wars
1594–1603 Nine Years' War (Ireland)
1595–1621 Moldavian Magnate Wars
1596–1597 Cudgel War
1598–1599 War against Sigismund
17th century
Siege of Breda, 1624
Action at La Hogue, 1692
1600–1629 Polish–Swedish War
1602 Savoyard escalade of Geneva
1605–1618 Polish–Muscovite War
1606–1607 Bolotnikov Rebellion
1606–1608 Zebrzydowski Rebellion
1610–1617 Ingrian War
1611–1613 Kalmar War
1615–1618 Uskok War
1618–1648 Thirty Years' War
1618–1639 Bündner Wirren
1620–1621 Polish–Ottoman War
1625 Zhmaylo Uprising
1627–1629 Anglo-French War
1628–1631 War of the Mantuan Succession
1630 Fedorovych Uprising
1632–1634 Smolensk War
1637 Pavlyuk Uprising
1638 Ostryanyn Uprising
1639–1653 Wars of the Three Kingdoms
1640–1668 Portuguese Restoration War
1648–1657 Khmelnytsky Uprising
1651 Kostka-Napierski Uprising
1651–1986 Three Hundred and Thirty Five Years' War
1652–1674 Anglo-Dutch Wars
1653 Swiss peasant war of 1653
1654 First Bremian War
1654–1667 Russo–Polish War
1655–1660 Second Northern War
1656 War of Villmergen
1663–1664 Austro-Turkish War
1666 Second Bremian War
1666–1671 Polish–Cossack–Tatar War
1667–1668 War of Devolution
1670–1671 Razin's Rebellion
1672 First Kuruc Uprising
1672–1678 Franco-Dutch War
1672–1673 Second Genoese–Savoyard War
1675–1679 Scanian War
1676–1681 Russo-Turkish War
1679 Covenanter Rebellion
1683–1684 War of the Reunions
1683–1699 Great Turkish War
1685 Monmouth Rebellion
1688–1697 Nine Years' War
1689–1692 First Jacobite Rising
18th century
Battle of Denain, 1712
Battle of Fontenoy, 1745
Great Siege of Gibraltar, 1779–83
1700 Lithuanian Civil War
1700–1721 Great Northern War
1701–1713 War of the Spanish Succession
1703–1711 Rákóczi's War of Independence
1707–1708 Bulavin Rebellion
1712 Toggenburg War
1714–1718 Ottoman-Venetian War
1715–1716 Jacobite rising of 1715
1716–1718 Austro-Turkish War
1718–1720 War of the Quadruple Alliance
1722–1723 Russo-Persian War
1727–1729 Anglo-Spanish War
1733–1738 War of the Polish Succession
1735–1739 Russo-Turkish War
1737–1739 Austro-Turkish War
1740–1748 War of the Austrian Succession
1740–1763 Silesian Wars
1741–1743 Russo-Swedish War
1745–1746 Jacobite rising of 1745
1756–1763 Seven Years' War
1757 Georgian-Ottoman Battle
1763–1864 Russo-Circassian War
1768–1772 War of the Bar Confederation
1768–1774 Russo–Turkish War
1770 Georgian–Ottoman Battle
1770 Orlov Revolt
1774–1775 Pugachev's Rebellion
1775–1783 American Revolutionary War
1778–1779 War of the Bavarian Succession
1784 Kettle War
1784–1785 Revolt of Horea, Cloșca and Crișan
1785 Battle of the Sunja
1787 Dutch Patriot Revolt
1787–1791 Austro-Turkish War
1787–1792 Russo-Turkish War
1788–1790 Russo-Swedish War
1790 Saxon Peasants' Revolt
1792 Polish–Russian War of 1792
1792–1802 French Revolutionary Wars
1794 Kościuszko Uprising
1795 Battle of Krtsanisi
1798 Irish Rebellion of 1798
1798 Peasants' War
19th century
Battle of Marengo, 1800
Napoléon at the Battle of Austerlitz (1805), by François Pascal Simon, Baron Gérard
Battle of Akhalzic (1828), by January Suchodolski
Napoleon III at the Battle of Solferino (1859), by Jean-Louis-Ernest Meissonier
The Sea Battle of Lissa by Carl Frederik Sørensen, 1868
1803 Irish Rebellion of 1803
1803 Souliote War
1803–1815 Napoleonic Wars
1804–1813 First Serbian Uprising
1804–1813 Russo-Persian War
1808–1809 Finnish War
1809 Polish–Austrian War
1815–1817 Second Serbian Uprising
1817–1864 Russian conquest of the Caucasus
1821–1832 Greek War of Independence
1821 Wallachian uprising
1823 French invasion of Spain
1826–1828 Russo-Persian War
1827 War of the Malcontents
1828–1829 Russo-Turkish War
1828–1834 Liberal Wars
1830 Ten Days' Campaign (following the Belgian Revolution)
1830–1831 November Uprising
1831 Canut revolts
1831–1832 Bosnian Uprising
1831–1836 Tithe War
1832 War in the Vendée and Chouannerie of 1832
1832 June Rebellion
1833–1839 First Carlist War
1833–1839 Albanian Revolts of 1833–39
1843–1844 Albanian Revolt of 1843–44
1846 Galician slaughter
1846–1849 Second Carlist War
1847 Albanian Revolt of 1847
1847 Sonderbund War
1848–1849 Hungarian Revolution and War of Independence
1848–1851 First Schleswig War
1848–1849 First Italian War of Independence
1853–1856 Crimean War
1854 Epirus Revolt of 1854
1858 Mahtra War
1859 Second Italian War of Independence
1861–62 Montenegrin–Ottoman War (1861–62)
1863–1864 January Uprising
1864 Second Schleswig War
1866 Austro-Prussian War
1866–1869 Cretan Revolt
1866 Third Italian War of Independence
1867 Fenian Rising
1870–1871 Franco-Prussian War
1872–1876 Third Carlist War
1873–1874 Cantonal Revolution
1875–77 Herzegovina Uprising (1875–77)
1876–78 Serbian–Ottoman War (1876–78)
1876–78 Montenegrin–Ottoman War (1876–78)
1877–1878 Russo-Turkish War
1878 Epirus Revolt of 1878
1885 Serbo-Bulgarian War
1897 Greco–Turkish War
20th century
Explosion of the Hawthorn Ridge mine, 1 July 1916, marked the beginning of the Battle of the Somme.
Republican International Brigadiers at the Battle of Belchite, 1937
German Stuka dive bombers in the Eastern Front (World War II) 1941–45
A Soviet IS-2 tank in Leipzig during the 1953 East Germany Uprising
Icelandic patrol ship ICGV Odinn and British frigate HMS Scylla clash during the Third Cod War
A "Sniper at work" sign in Crossmaglen, a symbol of the IRA sniper campaign in South Armagh during the last stages of the Northern Ireland Troubles
UN troops on their way up "Sniper Alley" in Sarajevo during the Bosnian War
A Russian helicopter downed by Chechen militants, during the First Chechen War
The Russian Army's Vostok Battalion in South Ossetia
1903 Ilinden–Preobrazhenie Uprising
1904–1908 Macedonian Struggle
1905 Łódź insurrection
1907 1907 Romanian Peasants' Revolt
1910 Albanian Revolt of 1910
1911–1912 Italo-Turkish War
1912–1913 Balkan Wars
1912–1913 First Balkan War
1913 Second Balkan War
1914 Peasant Revolt in Albania
1914–1918 World War I
1916 Easter Rising
1917–1921 Russian Civil War
1917–1921 Ukrainian–Soviet War
1918 Georgian–Armenian War
1918 Georgian–Turkish War
1918 Finnish Civil War
1918–1919 German Revolution
1918–1919 Georgian-Russian conflict over Sochi
1918–1919 Polish–Ukrainian War
1918–1919 Greater Poland Uprising
1918–1920 Latvian War of Independence
1918–1920 Estonian War of Independence
1919 Polish-Czech war for Teschen Silesia
1919 Hungarian–Romanian War
1919 Christmas Uprising
1919–1922 Greco-Turkish War
1919–1923 Turkish War of Independence
1919–1920 Czechoslovakia–Hungary War
1919–1921 Silesian Uprisings
1919–1921 Polish–Soviet War
1919–1922 Irish War of Independence
1920 Polish–Lithuanian War
1920 Vlora War
1920–1924 Biennio Rosso
1921 Georgian–Russian War
1921 Uprising in West Hungary
1922–1923 Irish Civil War
1924 Georgian Uprising against Soviet Union
1924 1924 Estonian coup d'état attempt
1934 Asturian miners' strike of 1934
1934 Austrian Civil War
1936–1939 Spanish Civil War
1939 Slovak–Hungarian War
1939 Occupation of Zakarpattia Oblast by Hungary
1939–1945 World War II
1939 Nazi German invasion of Poland
1939 Soviet invasion of Poland
1939–1940 Winter War (Soviet invasion of Finland)
1940–1941 Greco-Italian War
1941–1945 Soviet–German War
1941–1944 Continuation War
1944 Slovak National Uprising
1944 Warsaw Uprising
1944–1956 Guerrilla war in the Baltic states
1945–1949 Greek Civil War
1953 Uprising in East Germany
1956 Uprising in Poznań
1956 Hungarian Revolution
1956–1962 Operation Harvest
1958 Opération Corse
1958 First Cod War
1959–2011 Basque conflict
1968 Warsaw Pact invasion of Czechoslovakia
1968–1998 The Troubles
1970–1984 Unrest in Italy
1972 Bugojno group
1972–1973 Second Cod War
1974 Turkish invasion of Cyprus
1975–1976 Third Cod War
1988–1994 Nagorno-Karabakh War
1989 Romanian Revolution
1990–1991 Soviet attacks on Lithuanian border posts
1991 January Events
1991 The Barricades
1991 Ten-Day War (Slovenia)
1991–1992 Georgian war against Russo-Ossetian alliance
1991–1993 Georgian Civil War
1991–1995 Croatian War of Independence
1992 Transnistria War
1992 East Prigorodny Conflict
1992–1993 First Georgian war against Russo-Abkhazian alliance
1992–1995 Bosnian War
1993 Cherbourg incident
1993 Russian constitutional crisis
1994–1996 First Chechen War
1997 Albanian civil war of 1997
1998–1999 Kosovo War
1998–present Dissident Irish Republican campaign
1998 Second Georgian war against Russian-Abkhazian alliance
1999 War of Dagestan
1999–2009 Second Chechen War
1999–2001 Insurgency in the Preševo Valley
21st century
2001 Insurgency in the Republic of Macedonia
2002 Perejil Island crisis
2004–2013 Unrest in Kosovo
2004 unrest in Kosovo
2008 unrest in Kosovo
2011–2013 North Kosovo crisis
2004 Georgia, Adjara crisis
2006 Georgia, Kodori crisis
2007–2015 Civil war in Ingushetia
2008 Russia–Georgia war
2009–present Insurgency in the North Caucasus
2013–2014 Euromaidan and pro-Russian unrest in Ukraine
2014 Crimean crisis
2014–present War in Donbass
I will delete this post soon but its size is the real statement
Unions that avoid conflict and stabilise peace - are to be admired and cherished
(and if necesary - refined from within)
7 Years Ago
Jason - all this is surface material - you need to dig deeper than that you really do need to spend the time looking at trade agreements and corporate deals struck - immigration and security, wages are just cover overs for the corporates. Don't just scratch the surface.
VIET - Thanks for the post :-) Glad you are back :-)
7 Years Ago
Jason-
After I tried to memorize your listings, my mind shut down....I am currently under construction
7 Years Ago
Transatlantic Trade and Investment Partnership....sounds impressive...depressive or whatever
7 Years Ago
Im all for trade deals, increased trade helps growth, any specific issues should be dealt with, just feed them your ideas Jane. Write to your MEP if you feel so strongly. Theres always give and take. And in some aspects, people wish to protect in their own economy. In or out, we'd have to deal with them, give a bit, take a bit, share a bit, keep a bit, i think yu sound potty
Peas and Ice cream
Grow grow
quick quick
go
"quack quack"
slow
stop, spin and
grow
expect a yes and no - yo!
its the snail on roller skates
smoking pot
peas man...
frozen, canned and dried
negotiators cried
ice cream seller died
ice cream poisoning they screamed!
too cold said another
he froze to ice n died
farms of 10 miles wide
mines a little field
on the other side
too small to be a farm
or cause you any harm
too big to be a garden
its a grow bag gone bananas!
growing peas
in the new bahamas!
take off is now due
green pea towers
generates the power!
and that is
the pea Truth!?
strewth man , strewth!
(c) The Proverbial Potty 2016
give us what we want
peas
the philosophy of being potty
7 Years Ago
isee, well, u make the tea for a change Jane
chuckle
the ttip involves the Eu trade with the Us
so i dont see how that is a basis for leave
unless u dont want the agreement with either, full stop.lol.
smoker, ain't ya
now stop hassling me
thers a flood on, get a bucket and help Monsieur D
enough politico bollocks
7 Years Ago
Sigh...no I don't smoke either Jason....what ya trying to do...goad me....I have better things to do with my time...like work! Bet you don't!
Do you smoke.....
cough
PS if you read the TTIP - it allows companies to sue countries if they do not allow them in to mine or frack or whatever - how right is that?
7 Years Ago
i dont smoke. cough. i gave up decades ago. i dont cough its just a "poetic" tool. I'm self emplyed jane after decades in many other " very prof" jobs. i could list them. that sounded insulting btw. I will ignore it. " i bet u dont" . &@&£&@&!!
WHAT HAS TTIP GOT TO DO WITH BREXIT? these are US demands u refer to. not EU. make sense. they would be demanding these from the uk individually too. it does sound extreme. and they would have to be mutual to be in any way acceptable. with safety nets and early warnings with options of renegotiation if problematic i'd imagine . how can we know when its all locked up anyways. i thought the Germans vetoed some of it. i have no idea. ask your mep to do her/ his job, how are we supposed to know yet whats in it?
top of my list, personally, would be the environment, consumer rights esp internet fraud protection, freedom from hidden gm or at the very least full labelling, data protection and rights of compensation from stolen or misused data... eu data should be protected by eu laws etc but im not on it to know it. im not a trade negotiator with inside knowledge.
Im sure there are 1000 opinions...
7 Years Ago
I just ordered a life alert bracelet and it arrived today
When I get a life it will alert me
7 Years Ago
Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee
His hands can't hit what his eyes can't see
Rest in peace Muhammed Ali
7 Years Ago
I cannot be offended
Like a hard shell turtle
Simply retract my head
And let the rain fall
7 Years Ago
Treadmill
As the hamster goes round and round
In his wheel
Occasionally straying out
For food
For drink
For a quick exploration
We are no different to this hamster
Day in
Day out
Round and round our wheel
Occasionally straying out
For food
For drink
Venturing away for a holiday
we are but specks on this vast, beautiful earth
This earth is but a speck in this vast, beautiful universe
Let us not think we are any bigger
Than the next person
For we are not
Everyone has their place
in this world
From cleaner
To King
Whatever we do
Affects all.
JEM 050616
7 Years Ago
I had this one night stand
It was so awkward
I had to go out and buy another stand
For the other side of the bed
7 Years Ago
"Drifters' encounters"
Wanderers’ path
of leisurely stroll…
apparent
purposeless walk…
Lone sailor adrift…
unison of currents
and wind…
Nomads of time
Who dwell on the road,
Solitary travellers
Whose paths often cross…
Some come
Some go,
Some,
like the seeking flight of a seagull…
are always at home
Eternal Drifters of time
Whose paths often cross…
7 Years Ago
My wife just told me....
If I want to be served breakfast in bed
I should sleep in the kitchen
7 Years Ago
DANL...So much I want to do but not enough cash to do it with - know how to make a quick buck?
7 Years Ago
I am so old that
I remember staying at home
When I knew that
Someone was going to call me
7 Years Ago
Crazy Days
Crazy days said the Unicorn combing his mane
Whilst he muses about the Chimp playing King Lear
It just won't do
And can you see Lion playing Cordelia
He was chosen for his flowing mane
It just won't do
And why oh why is Owl playing fool
Oh dear...It just won't do
Unicorn snorts, shakes his mane and off he canters.
JEM 080616
7 Years Ago
DANL: hmmmm in what respect.....or dare I ask lol......Is it something we said? Surely I did not upset Jason and has Viet gone on a long walk again?
JIM: Come back :-)
7 Years Ago
The Circle Art Game
I do art to ward off depression
if it doesn’t turn out right I get depressed
so I do more art to combat depression
when it doesn’t sell I get depressed
I struggle through my depression with art
oh this one I am very pleased with personally
I’ll keep creating art to keep the blues away
Jim Taylor 6-9-2016
7 Years Ago
Morning Randy, Jim, DANL, Jason, Viet, et al
Trails to the Past
If only I could return
to that monumental moment
Back in my past
Where I had two choices
Where would I be now
Could I still be here
Writing this poem
Getting up to go to work
Or
Would I be in another country
Somewhere else in the world
doing something different
Married with kids?
Would I change my life if I had the choice
Do I have regrets about choices I made
Probably
Just like everyone else
JEM 100618
Enjoy your day everyone
7 Years Ago
When You Are Old
by William Butler Yeats
When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face;
And bending down beside the glowing bars,
Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fled
And paced upon the mountains overhead
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.
7 Years Ago
and my favorite-“When he shall die,
Take him and cut him out in little stars,
And he will make the face of heaven so fine
That all the world will be in love with night
And pay no worship to the garish sun.”
― William Shakespeare
7 Years Ago
I just found out that the police want to interview me
Strange....I never applied for a job there!
7 Years Ago
glad you are comfortable with my thoughts/her poem, and like it, thanks..........i suppose each of us must find a path through life, and the one ..out..........too
7 Years Ago
It has been one hell of a weekend - I just will never understand the mentality of people.
DANL - It is the person behind the gun. :-(
7 Years Ago
Jane-
Corner's report....
Four "bullets" to the chest
One bullet in the skull
Two bullets in the liver
Six bullets in the torso
Three bullets in the groin
No sign of a person or gun but plenty of deadly bullets
7 Years Ago
Morning Everyone...still cold and dull, hard to believe we are mid June and still no sign of summer. Maybe next week ? X
7 Years Ago
The best cure for constipation...
Stand on the top floor outside ledge of the Empire State Building and look down
7 Years Ago
Living the Lie
Keep the peace
Don't say what you want to say
It will rock the boat
Keep the peace
Do not do that
It will make them feel irritated
and wind them up
Stop doing that
Do not pull a face like that
They will know exactly what you are thinking
Smile be nice
Stop pulling a face
Do not be yourself
Be what everyone wants you to be
Conform, become, evolve
But not yourself
Hide who you really are
Do not be true to your feelings
Do not cry do not let it out
Hide it deep
deep
inside
Hide
JEM 160616
7 Years Ago
It is amazing how many people walk around without a thought in their head
Otherwise, this discussion page would be filled with "....thought(s) of the day"
7 Years Ago
I will never tell anyone about my personal quirks....
But I do flush public toilets with my foot
7 Years Ago
Waiting for everyone to come back....
I'm as bored as a blind man watching an XXX-rated movie
7 Years Ago
Oh My!! Right back at ya Danl! You made me laugh! and with that...my world is much like yours....flush with my foot, dispense the paper towel or hit the blow drier with my elbow and
throw the towel on the floor. Noticed in the past year or two they have put the waste basket next to the washroom exit door. Guess they caught on.
7 Years Ago
Hey John - Glad to see you here - can you keep DANL from going stir crazy - he keeps posting to himself - it appears I may have upset Jason, Viet is out walking the dog again - Viva popped in and popped out again. Jim is becoming absent - occasionally ... not sure why everyone is AWOL...maybe summer arrived (but not yet over here!!!! - Nor France I believe??
Anyhow ...off to bed in a mo.
Ciao - Tomorrow evening we are off to sunny Spain xx
7 Years Ago
I have a request
anyone going to Spain
please bring me back a pair
of boots of Spanish leather
size ten and a half please
the kind Bob Dylan wore in the sixties
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon everyone!!
Happy Sunday!!!
I love history... And what about u?
As one famous expression says: "The nation, which isn't interested in her past, doesn't deserve any future"...
Knowledge of history opens us understanding of todays events and increase our intellectual level...
I love history, especially I love to travel and open new sights, new buildings, new facts...
Allow to present one shot of historical building of Yangon, being taken by me recently..
7 Years Ago
Hi everybody, what's awake anyway..................Jim.........good luck with the boots. Oh to be in Spain again, the rain in Sp........ etc, is just like here today............pouring cats/no dogs allowed.
When in Barcelona: give a shout to my son: John Frederick Anderson: fredfoto.net...............he's a photog/lecturer/university/freelance...I like him a lot, you will tooooooooooooo.
Happy F's day to those who are.
Happy Sunday to those who are not.
I'm feeling friendly, but inside..I rot !
same old, same old,
when will I learn????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
7 Years Ago
My hands clinched about the sheets
My heart skipping beats
My pillow turning a blazen red
My life quelched in a fiery bed
My charred body was falling
The devil was calling
Oh hell
7 Years Ago
Hi Jim- will keep an eye open for those boots for you..
Viva - sorry no Barcelona this trip but will certainly look him up next time..am sure we will like him.
DANL..no requests? ...only wishing to be as alive as a dead spaniard lol?
Lovely sitting out here on an evening not feeling cold, a beer on the table, relaxing. .....bee yew tea full....actually not being cooped up inside...love it....must look for a property....I wish
7 Years Ago
Jane-
Perhaps while you are scouting the back streets of Spain, you could locate an original impressionistic painting by Joaquin Sorolla. There are numerous pieces missing from his collection which means that they are available on the black market. And US dollars speak Spanish.
All I want is one original or maybe more
7 Years Ago
DANL- just had a look at some of his works...just love the movement he gets in some of his paintings...p's I only have sterling and euros...After the referendum the sterling might not be worth much for a while lol will keep a look out!
7 Years Ago
Jane
His "Chicos en la playa" original would hide nicely in the lining of your suitcase,
7 Years Ago
DANL Is that for in or for out?......no sign of Joaquin yet...no lining in my backpack...would it fit amongst my dirty washing...
Jim I am still looking for those boots while playing the Spanish romantica.
7 Years Ago
Just flamenco'd through the streets of Lanjaron...A sight to behold ...definitely not as old as I am DANL...
7 Years Ago
Daniel-
The best way to cancel a post is to point a 45 at your head and pull the trigger
7 Years Ago
For all of you who can't sell their work
Several years ago I smeared cow dung over a canvas and poured paint over it....entered it in an outdoor show....sold it for 200 Euros
In conclusion:
If you can's sell sh-t...give up!
7 Years Ago
Hey ho! Brexit it is and now everyone is changing their tune about how they want to work with us except Spain whom wants Gib back again. Love politics xx
7 Years Ago
Terrible thing happened here in Lanjaron yesterday. Day of the San Juan parade and a man whom had been complaining about the noise from a bar went into the place drenched himself with fuel and set himself on fire causing one other person life threatening burns and injuring others. There were kids in there whom witnessed it happen. What state of mind was this man in.
Back home tonight...
7 Years Ago
Thank all of you for sharing for thought of the day to keep this thread alive while I have taken my time "off" , especially to regulars Danl, Jane, Jim, Jason,
7 Years Ago
@ Captain Danl and Pilot Jane: It is amazing that Danl is so skillful to sail this leaky ship for so long. You make me feel guilty for taking a long holiday, my friends
Now it is likely that this old ship is not only in the choppy water but also it is hitting a strong coral reef. Do you want me to take it to a dockyard for repair or just let it take more water and sunk?
Have a great time. .
7 Years Ago
Of Human's Creativity
if human beings were prohibited to freely express their inner-self and the beauty or the ugliness of the outer universe,
inspiration would be totally gone,
imagination would absolutely lost.
without creativity,
human is practically at the same level with all other beings on earth,
simply he would live like a wild animal,
only based on his instincts
to
search for,
and fight for,
his very basic needs of food, shelter, and sex..
he would have no intellectual activity.
there would be
no art,
no music
no poetry,
no literature,
nothing creative.
not too much to enjoy.
his life would be bored to death.
unfortunately,
for
the thirst of power,
the desire for domination,
and the hunger of controlling other humans,
governing "bullshit politick" is purposely intertwined into every aspect of daily living.
turning people into sheep is the damned reason
why many dictatorship regimes around the world
either
skillfully
exploit propaganda
to drive people' minds on a narrow one-way street leading to a small cage of thoughts,
or
forcefully
use blatant censorship to seal all the mouths
and forbid the people from freely expressing their creative thoughts.
Thao Chuong
2016-06-26
7 Years Ago
Yaaaay Viet is home. We need to plug this ship and be creative Viet. Where else can you put your thought of the day, share moments, poetry and musings, gain opinions and perspective.
7 Years Ago
Viet-
Creating what has already been created is not creating. I have put a temporary stop to my impressionistic art. I have followed your suggestion into the world of neo-impressionism better labeled abstract. Although not quite abstract.or neo-impressionism in the true sense. It has begun to pay off. Thanks Viet!
7 Years Ago
Viet-
Talking about old ships...Even a dory has holes in its bow to allow water to flow through on its voyage through pounding waves and unforgiving storms. It stays afloat and continues its journey into clear skies and calm waters.
7 Years Ago
Viet, if you have a go at me again, verse or no verse, I will close it. The rules are here for a reason whether you wish to abide by them or not
That's my thoughts for the day
7 Years Ago
Hush my mouth
Oooops there I go again
A brain which is not engaged
A mouth which opens
And words flood out
Think before you speak
Speak slowly enough
To enable a gear change
Accelerate.....slowly
Learn when to keep the engine running
Learn when to switch the engine off
Engage brain
Open the throttle
JEM 270616
7 Years Ago
Lightning Bugs
I sit on my back step
watching
as dusk turns into dark.
The fire flies are fliting,
their green fairy lanterns
glowing intermittently
across the lawn
and in the shadows of the woods.
The Kansas heat is oppressive.
I remember
capturing them as a young girl.
Trapping them
inside the mason jar so specially prepared,
a tidy nest of grass and leaves,
air holes carefully punched
into the metal lid.
I worried
over their loss of flight.
I never kept them long.
I think of the boys
in my old neighborhood,
running wild,
pinching off lightning bug abdomens
then using that phosphorescence
as jeweled rings and bracelets,
completely unconcerned
with insect mortality.
I still worry
about the pinching off
of Light
Karen Newell
6/27/16
7 Years Ago
Thank you all for sharing your thought of the day
@ Jane: Your support is always appreciated
@ Danl: You are a thought provoker who thinks out of the box. Glad to see your exploration of a new path for your art Your journey to discover your inner self and to artistically put it onto canvas is interestingly a creative approach. I hope to see more of your works.
@ Lady Isabella: It's a beautiful day. The sun is brightly shinning. I could feel the summer high heat. The weather is perfect and life is good. No point for me to whine under the sunshine -lol.
@ Karen: Wow. What's a great poetic moment of yours. I love the poem.
7 Years Ago
welcome back, Viet..........sigh, been there - done that...........chill, my friend.
Karen...oh, I love Lightning Bugs.......very bittersweet,touching the soul.
Danl....good move,like the outcome.
7 Years Ago
Spice of word
hand crafted poem
like a hand crafted burrito
pinto beans extreme
chili peppers just the right temp
sweet onions on the tongue
words flowing off the tongue
taste buds dance
as in a trance
like a perfect flowing verse
absorbing the aroma to the nose
stimulating an inner sense of being
effecting my inner gizzard
Jim Taylor 6/26/2016
7 Years Ago
@ Viva: Nice to see you. Thanks for your thought of the day. I know what you meant -lol..
@ Jim: You have a great sense of humor Jim. Your words are really spicy. BTW: I like you new avatar. It makes you look like Einstein.
Here's my thought of the day
.
Of Friction
love it
or hate it
friction is a fact of life
however
no
need
to stay away from the unavoidable
by burying the head into the sand
and pretending it doesn't exist
actually
friction is vitally needed
so long as it is at its manageable level
without
any friction
between the shoes and the ground
everyone would fall down
everything would be spinning or gliding forever
'cause the ground becomes completely slippery
on the other hand
too much
friction
the ground becomes too sticky to walk on
alas!
whenever friction is over-heated
instead of pouring water
or just simply awaiting it to cool down
so
often,
parties involved promptly add more fire
and turn it into a nasty fight
when I was younger I preferred to take any challenge
that made my life more interesting
now
as
I'm getting older
a bit
I could visually catch the logic and the benefits of retaining the "peace of my mind".
how about you?
what's your take on this?
Thao Chuong
2016-06-27
7 Years Ago
Thank you Viva and Viet :)) I have not written anything for a long time, I am glad you liked the piece.
PollyAnna
I have never been a fan of friction.
The static shock of disagreement
sends my senses on an inward spiral.
I walk the hermits path,
preferring loneliness over agitating opinions.
I bury my head deep in the sand
and study the landscapes of my peaceful dreams.
Karen Newell
6/27/16
7 Years Ago
There are a lot of people out there who think they can rule the world.
If only their parents would have used a condom!
7 Years Ago
My thought is: YAY! A professional photographer thought my work was good enough to be in a photography show/contest at the Art Center of Corpus Christi!
7 Years Ago
Laurette - congratulations - wish someone would like mine enough lol
DANL: Am loving the lippy and eyeshadow - infact the lippy nearly matches Laurettes :-0
7 Years Ago
Good evening All
@ Karen: Here is my thought about your poem Polly Anna: You're a nice person with a kind heart. I think those aggressively nasty people often interpret silence as a sign of weakness and defenseless. Burying the head in the sand to avoid friction is an invitation for abuse. I think it'd better to look at it and pull it back to a manageable level. If impossible to do so, then just stay far away from those abusers. On-line abuse has become a serious issue that has brought attention to legal experts and lawmakers.
@ Danl: Ha..ha... Some came into life through leaky condoms. Thanks for showcasing your new painting. Nice brushwork and movement!
@ Laurette: Thanks for sharing your thought. Your works are good without the opinion of any professional photographer.
@ Jane: Close the eyes and hush your mouth for peace of mind.
Have a good night.
7 Years Ago
I rule the world.
Now what to do?
Impose my desire
On the likes of you?
I'll stifle your will
And make it mine.
You'll push back
Just give it time.
I rule the world
Yet no one knows
For power lies
In the wind that blows.
In the hand and heart
The air and sun
I rule the world
For I am one.
Joe Burgess
6/28/16
7 Years Ago
Good morning and have a nice day to all
@ Joe: I like your provoking poem. I was about to do an echo but I had a slight concern that my prompt response to your thought of the day would be badly misinterpreted.
@ Danl: No more creative thought of the day?
Summer Haiku
gradually vanished
under gleaming morning sun
thin patches of fog
in the breezy air
beautiful sound of songbirds
welcome a new day
some hungry sparrows
hopping around on brown lawn
search of their breakfast
joyful grasshoppers
being unaware of death threats
enjoy the sunshine
Thao Chuong
2016-06-29
7 Years Ago
Thank you, Viet. No worries.
Honest intentions are often badly misinterpreted.
Have a good evening.
7 Years Ago
Characters of reincarnation
Hey,
it’s me again
just thinking
I’m not sure about reincarnation
or any of the sort for that matter
but the soul must live on
If not
I want a refund
but I would sure like
just one more shot
at the big crap shoot
poker table
take what I’ve learned here
carry it to the next step up
climbing that eternal staircase
one more time please
although
it may take a thousand trips back
before my soul gets it right
maybe come back and be amongst
the characters in my paintings
I don’t need a lead role
just hang out with them
I want to meet them all
I guess the so called moral of the story is
watch your characters
you may be hanging out with them some day
Jim Taylor 6/30/2015
7 Years Ago
Good morning.
@ Joe: Thank for your feedback
@ Jim: It's great poem, my friend. It's karma. Eventually, we harvest what we sow.
@Danl: I think that Jane might lose both her poetic inspiration and her trust in human beings in general
Have nice day to you all: both to the ones who bitterly try to rule the world and to the ones who leisurely go with the flow of their day. .
7 Years Ago
On July First
today,
neither an usual day off,
nor a regular statutory holiday,
but
very special day,
the birthday of our peaceful nation.
it had been sunny and quite dried for many days in a row.
this
morning,
it's drizzling outside.
the weather isn't nice to us.
but dried ground, gardens, brown lawns, vegetables, trees, and bushes
must be happy to celebrate Canada Day with us in the rain.
today
I
have
nothing to be hurried.
no anxiety of slowly crawling in the rush-hour of snail moving traffic jams
no fear of being late for picking up my grand-kids
without
an urgent need
of pushing myself to the rhythms of my regular daily routines,
I took time to barbecue myself much longer in bed,
and didn't move my butts up until nine.
fully replenished,
after
good rest
and a sound sleep,
I feel very relaxed.
I
slowly
lift up the cup,
slightly close my eyes,
sniff and deeply inhale steamy aroma,
and enjoy my morning coffee.
today,
everything is perfectly perfect
everyone is happily happy
except
my dog.
he impatiently whines about his late morning walk
and will despondently howl for being leashed when colourful fireworks magnificently light night sky
however,,
like joyful Canadians
he would certainly sing
"O Canada"
but in a much different tune
Thao Chuong
2016-07-01
7 Years Ago
TAAAAAA DAAAAAAAAAA
It's Friday!!
Hi DANL, Viet, Jim, Joe, Viva, et al Busy, busy, busy.....Too busy to have to go to work but need the money!
Oh my word
Oh my word
Too much to cram in
Too much I have to do
Just too much
I ain't got time for work
I need to get that finished
I need to start doing that
Learn a language
Not enough hours in the day
Suffering from lack of sleep
Not even ironed a shirt yet
Friday is nearly gone
Want to finish my photos
Still not completed my Burma ones
That was well over a year ago
Gambia remains untouched
My head is spinning
Time to crack open a bottle
Wine is allowed on a Friday
Time to relax...
Unwind
Oh my word
Half the year gone already
Busy, Busy, Busy
JEM 010716
Have a wonderful weekend everyone xx
7 Years Ago
Yo DANL
I did not know, but apparently you are allowed to grow two plants of weed for personal use in Spain, they even sell the soil in the general grocers shop. Now that might of been worth staying in the EU for lol.
7 Years Ago
Good evening Jane. Abbie, and Danl.
Thanks for sharing your thought of the day.Have a good evening.
Here is my echo to Jane's poem Oh My Words.
Oh My.. Oh My Words
words would
be
hard or soft,
sweet or bitter,
saccharine or sour,
sugary or astringent...
depending on the manner through which they're expressed
and also on how they would be interpreted.
oh my
oh my gosh
once in awhile,
I might unintentionally say something unkind that I really didn't mean it
moreover my listeners might misapprehend the real message through which I intentionally convey
like
an arrow flying away from its bow
or a bullet leaving its gun barrel
a word
after
spitted out
from a loosen mouth
impossible to be swallowed back
words are very powerful
they could be nice, kind, thoughtful, considerate, compassionate, diplomatic...
but
they could be mean, nasty, spiteful, vicious, destructive...
when an arrow or a bullet misses its target
it becomes harmless
as
it creates
neither any casualty nor any damage
however
with a word
it's totally different
even when it aims at no target
it could accidentally hurt someone's feeling
and lead to an unnecessary conflict
unfortunately,
it
is not
always up to an individual
to decide what he would get
because he can never control over other people's feeling and reactions from their own interpretation of his expression
as
a poet
l myself love words
and I am fully aware that words give me both love and hate, foes and friends, as well as war and peace....
I wouldn't mind making any compromise
so long as
I
would
not sacrifice
either my freedom of speech.or my love for poetry.
Thao Chuong
2016-07-02
7 Years Ago
Viet love your echo - how very true. - Here is my echo to your echo
VISUAL SPEAK
As I speak
I watch your face
Your eyes
Your reactions
I can see the effect
My words have
And the emotions
They create
I can change
what I am saying
and the tone I use
Analysing your face
Todays world
of texts and facebook
Are killing empathy
No emotion in a text
Words are used
With no thought
To feeling
Or tone
Better to converse
Face to face
Eye to eye
With emotion
JEM 030716
7 Years Ago
I have a garden ornament which is an old shoe and two blue tits made from resin. This morning there was a grey squirrel having a stand up fight with it. Flicking tail, chattering and diving backwards and forwards hoping to scare it off. Hilarious. Don't you love nature.
7 Years Ago
Jane-
Depending on the size of those two blue boobies....I just might join the squirrels
7 Years Ago
If you really want to hurt your parents
And you don't have the nerve to become gay
Become an artist
7 Years Ago
DANL: Should have known a couple of tits would grab your attention!
VIET - Where has my confidant disappeared to?
Night night sleep tight x
7 Years Ago
Jane-
The name Viet....a name that can be traced back to the Triệu Dynasty (2nd century BC).
Perhaps Viet is revisiting his heritage. A lot of centuries to travel to and fro.
7 Years Ago
Hi John - which is the most frustrating?
DANL - Wow Viet is old!! What do you think has happened to Jason then?
7 Years Ago
Jane-
Jason is a common given name for a male. It comes from Greek Ἰάσων, meaning "healer'
Chances are he's RXing something that he sprained last night.
7 Years Ago
In English-speaking countries, a blue-collar worker is a working class person who performs manual labour.
Example: An artist or photographer
So if you think you are entitled to a white collar....join the clergy!
7 Years Ago
Slinky
Slinky the cat
is a strange old beast
Neither here
nor there
sometimes no-where
Hidden
in the shadows
He slinks down low
Or climbs up high.
Around sIx am
Breakfast is due
Sleeping all morning
Somewhere
You might see him around two
Around 4pm he patrols
The rooves of houses
Looking
Searching
For what?
Around six pm
Food is required
Then the mystery begins
No sign of Slinky
Til six am
It's breakfast again
JEM 060716
7 Years Ago
Hi Jim - maybe it is full moon time - time for the cats patrol - love the drawing :-) - You seen Viet anywhere...or Jason?
DANL - Never fancied a white collar worker.
7 Years Ago
"going nowhere thought"....
If you create what you always did
You will get what you always got
7 Years Ago
Thank you all for sharing your thoughts, especially to Danl for your provoking thoughts and Jane for your dialogues to keep this thread running on a regular basis. Good to read Jane's two poems and Jim's poetic echo. Nice to have John and James dropping by with your thoughts
Here is my sundry thought
What's So Wrong About the Rights?
Freedoms
in general
for the basic human rights
sanctioned by the United Nations and by many countries on earth.
they give hope for mankind's civilization,
as they sound legally pretty on papers,
particularly
freedom o speech
one of noble concepts
for humans to express their creative ideas or provoking thoughts about dreams or imaginations from their inner-selves and from the outer universe.
However,
in practice,
like anything else in this life,
freedom has a certain price that must be paid,
without
any exception
including all of the rights.
freedom is practically not free.
I tend to think
of
risks involved
and how much of it I'm willing to take
in the decent exercise of my freedoms.
I also wonder
whether
I'd better freely speak up what's going on inside my mind
or I should restrain myself
to
say
not what I like,
but what the authorities want to hear.
It ain't a phobia
my fear is very generic and likely justifiable
if
I do not keep my mouth shut
and say what's interpreted against the governing league
it is clearly
I
could
be considered as a troublemaker to the establishment
or even be labeled as a dangerous rebel to the system
my name would automatically be on black list of the big brothers and big sisters
for harassment, persecution, or termination (when necessary).
Laws and orders are but an ass
too bad
most laws enforcers are "power-hungry" assholes
who often make our good days bad and our bad days worse.
Therefore,
whenever, I prefer
to
keep
my peaceful day intact
and my provoking thoughts blooming
I have no choice
but to act
like
a submissive philosopher who contentedly stays in silence
and sloppily smiles at the nonsense about the wrongs of the rights in a human's daily living.
Thao Chuong
2016-07-08
7 Years Ago
Viet-
Those in power are little people
Shaking their finger at others
Professing to be god all mighty
Craving underserved attention
They are no different
Putting their undies on
One leg at a time
Omitting rancid emissions
Just like everyone else
They are only
Insecure morsels of life
Feeding off of others
Mental midgets
That will never get bigger
Do not lower yourself'
Do not stand in the same hole
Rise above the lesser
Their sewage will bury them
And you will smell like a rose
7 Years Ago
Always say what you want to say
Do not let the directives of others deter you
Freedom is one of the only virtues
That will allow you to reach your goals
7 Years Ago
Make a difference
There are the fat cats at the top
Down below
We are but economic necessities
Stay United
For common goals
Shout out loud
Together
Be heard
Be seen
But we must unite
In big numbers
To make that difference
Even if
It doesn't affect you
But it is the right thing
Join
Unite
Shout
Be seen
Be heard
JEM 100716
7 Years Ago
Fat cats at the top
Only because we allow them
They scratch and claw
Just to remain there
Bring in the big dogs
And topple their fence
They will scurry
Like roaches in water
7 Years Ago
Marketing.
How can we reinvent the wheel
Put ridges on
Inflate the price
Tell them it's a smoother ride
Make it fillable with foam
Tell them it's safer
Inflate the price
Add knobbly bits
Tell them it's more durable
Inflate the price
How many untruth's
Are there in marketing
How many lies do you believe
And continue to pay inflated prices
But they need to sell
To keep their shares
Our shares
Our pensions
Our investments
Our future
Fat Cats
Vicious
Circle
JEM 100716
7 Years Ago
Marketing
Trying to sell something that no one wants
Couldn't care less about
Pushing an item that can't run on its own
Selling snow plows in the Caribbean
Panhandling hour old used toilet paper
Promoting pet roaches
If it ain't good enough to sell on its own....it ain't worth it
7 Years Ago
Good day Danl and Jane. Wow. What a poetic momentum that both of you have reached.
Wow to Danl for your more and more poetic expression of your thought
Here is my thought of the day. It is an echo to Jane's poem Make a Difference
Is There any Choice between an Oppressor and a Tyrant?
in any society and country,
the poor and the disadvantages
those who are oppressed and suffered,
always tolerantly act as repressed sheep by continuously taking the abuse,
'til they're pushed over the cliff.
as soon as they have:
no room for more shit,
no more space to retreat,
no way for a quick exit,
and no other choice,
but
to turn back en-masses,
and determinedly march
toward the dictatorship regime.
they angrily chant and shout:
"enough is enough.
time for a change.
fight for our rights.
freed or died.
bloomed or doomed."
they rally on streets.
they riot in cities.
they rebel in villages.
they try to take back their freedom.
they fight tooth and nail to overthrow the oppressive regime.
alas
even if they're lucky to be survived,
after they successfully bring down the oppressing elite.
another worse tyranny league could take over the country to retain laws and orders.
regardless,
whatever they do.
not much their ill fates could be changed.
the governing class always reserves its power and its rights to serve only its own interests..
Thao Chuong
2016-07-10
7 Years Ago
Viet - oh dear - Is there any hope - Love DANLs attitude - just go get em lol
Rose Tinted Spectacles
I awoke this morning
to the dawn chorus
The air was so fresh
I was as high as a kite
My neighbour looked up
Waved and smiled politely
I put on the news
No crime
No wars
Beautiful weather
India reported tigers on the increase again
Chine no longer murdered them,
nor elephants for their tusks,
nor let sharks drown while fins are chopped
The amazon forest is no longer
slashed
and
burned
No human slavery - abolished gone
No racism, no prejudice
no ethnic cleansing
No neonicotinoids
Gluttony, greed gone
I
wake
again.
100716
7 Years Ago
In response to Jane's question "Is there any hope?"
Safe Habitats for Humanity
humans often feel bothered and upset by the invasion of other species on our living space
we
prefer to
point our middle fingers at, and blame, those annoying beings
for the headache and nuisance which they've inflicted on our living
we've taken endless efforts
to
safeguard our shelters,
maintain our well-beings,
and protect our interests.
humans have been callously
removing,
eliminating,
culling,
and killing those species that happen to be on our way
from
the deer that chew our roses
the geese that eat our spinach
the rabbits that munch our kale
the rodents infesting our attics
the spiders that scare our spouses...
to
the raccoons that take our chickens
the wolves that kill our sheep
the bears that roam in our yards
the cougars that threaten the safety of our children...
how could we not blame the real culprit
who has
purposely destroyed the pristine nature,
callously ruined sensitive marshland, green prairies, old-growth forests - the safe havens for wildlife.
and arrogantly replaced with the man-made habitats for humanity
purely covered
by
asphalt, steel, and concrete.
Thao Chuong
2016-07-10
7 Years Ago
Morning All.
News this morning...because of the drop in oil prices Venezuela has opened its border to Colombia to allow it's people to cross to buy food...FAT CATS..??
We then got talking about the rainforest and I scared myself when I found this:
http://www.dailymail.co.uk/sciencetech/article-2507837/Google-map-reveals-devastating-rate-deforestation-globe.html
Have a good day/evening everyone. x
7 Years Ago
Just got the news....
Guess I'll just be floating around in limbo forever
Hell is completely filled
7 Years Ago
DANIEL -Love the water effect you create stunning work.
RITA - lovely refreshing work. A happy picture.
DANL - I see you are after those blue tits again.
7 Years Ago
There are two kinds of idiots
Those who tell others what to do
And those who do what they are told
7 Years Ago
The FDA just released the following report:
"If you stop eating bacon you're still going to die"
7 Years Ago
In response to DANL:
WHAAAAAAAT?
Something made me stop today
And I thought - what was that
What was I thinking
I could not remember
So I continued doing
Something else
I went into another room
I stopped and thought
I wasn't doing that
I was doing this
So I went back into the other room
I stopped and thought
Oh that reminds me
And I went into the kitchen
And opened the fridge
Looked
Looked again
And thought
I don't remember what I was looking for
Lets go back
Back to the other room
To see what triggered me
To open the fridge
I did not get much done today....
JEM 140716
7 Years Ago
Jane-
Did it ever occur to you to put the refrigerator in the other room so you wouldn't have to make so many trips?
7 Years Ago
"I want to die peacefully in my sleep, like my grandfather . . . not screaming and yelling like the passengers on his bus"
7 Years Ago
HELLOOOOOOOO helloooooooo hellooo hello.............IS ANYBODY IIIIIIIIN. .. Body iiiiiin ....dy iiiin. ...in?
7 Years Ago
Whilst we mourn again for the loss of life in Nice, and our hearts go out to those whom have lost loved ones, it begins to make me wonder yet again, about human society.
I wonder if we are slowly regressing, becoming more and more desensitized. Are we coming to expect this as the norm, how many of us go "oh it's another bombing' and mutter "such a shame" and go on with our daily lives. Is the destruction of innocents, just another tragedy? , without another thought unless someone else mentions it and we mindlessly say " oh yes terrible wasn't it"
How do we prevent this state of inertia, what can we do, what can we say, how do we change and make changes.
What can we do to change the mindset of those creating the atrocities.
7 Years Ago
I see a roach
Squish with my foot
Another appears
Squish, squish
To many to squish
Genocide
7 Years Ago
I struggle
to find my balance
on this tilt-a-whirl world.
A carnival of carnage
spins constantly
across the flickering,
blue screen eye.
I flounder,
seeking a focal point.
One hope.
One eternal star.
Only Love is real
Karen Newell
7/16/16
7 Years Ago
"Despite all my rage I am still just a rat in a cage.."
The only song from Smashing Pumpkins I actually like.
7 Years Ago
Thank you everybody. Have a restful weekend to all.
@ Danl: It's amazing how you have kept milking your thoughts everyday.
@ Jane: Nice to read your poems and your dialogues with Danl.
@ Rita: Regardless the world has been better or worse. I agree with you that it'd better not to lose our hope. BTW. I wish if I could be that lucky bird with its soft landing -lol.
@ Daniel: For sure that " The world is still a beautiful place.". I like your beautifully positive thought of the day.
@ Brian: Ah, you've made me think with your provoking thought about "love and hate" on the thorny head of the same heart.
@ Valeria: "World is an amazing place. Travel and open new horizon - widen your outlook and make your life even more interesting.". Yeah! What inspiring thought!
@ Karen: Nice to to read your poem. "Only love is real" I like the happy ending, my friend.
@ Jestephotography Ltd Thanks for sharing your favorite song. Music is one of the best ways for relaxation. .
7 Years Ago
How to Keep Your Good Day From Being Infested By Nasty People
you're nice in your nature
it's likely
somebody would consider your compassion and kindness
as
either an easy target
or a great opportunity
for
them
to take advantage of.
it's good to be kind
but you'd better know
someone would see it
as a sign of weakness
for
them
to start bullying or abusing.
in
my reaction
to malicious people
I
myself
would prefer
to be neither nasty nor rough
but
to be firm and tough.
I
believe
this attitude would help me stop their crap
without wasting much time and more energy of mine
for any further nonsense argument or nasty fight.
furthermore
nowadays
whenever I have a chance
I'd rather stay away from nasty individuals,
and let myself surrounded by decent people as much as possible,
I like the nice way to keep my good day intact
by
smiling at people
and seeing smiles on their happy faces.
Thao Chuong
2016-07-16
7 Years Ago
Viet-
"...decent people...."
Other artists do not find me decent. Non-artists consider me to be an a--hole.
It is their way of hiding their inferiorities.
7 Years Ago
Hey Viet - Lovely to see you
DANL - Certainly not an ahole - would love to have a dialogue with you over a bottle of wine or two - enough common sense to make up for the idiots
7 Years Ago
Hi Viet, and thanks for good thoughts...am glad you are back.
For Karen...........re windmills, me,too...........I am forever 'tilting at windmills'......sigh. (The description includes a fabulous response to the work, to life itself..written by a splendid wordster/friend, in response...................words, words, words..........so full of truth).
7 Years Ago
Good evening everyone. Have a good night.
@ Danl: My own definition: A "decent human" is a guy who robs my money and lets me keep my wallet . -lol. BTW: I really love your cartoon. You're a very talented cartoonist who has a great sense of black humor. I wonder if you would share more cartoons.
@ Jane: So sad to listen to the devastated news. However, it is impossible to stop the madman to inflict fatal damages whether he does the mass-killings with or without guns.
@ VIVA: It's a lovely painting. I could visually see and emotionally feel the movements.
7 Years Ago
Can Humans Get Along with Each Other?
don't forget
that love and hate
are generated from the same heart
it's
totally
up to us - as humans
to decide which one we prefer to treasure for our living.
let's
leave our heart unlocked
and keep it widely opened
also let our minds be free from prejudice.
douse off the raging hatred into ashes
then
use it as good fertilizer
to
nourish
the seedlings of love
until they become old growth forests.
nice
to enjoy
bees and butterflies
roaming free on green parries
colourfully dotted with wild flowers.
happy
to have
kindness and compassion
blossoming in our opened hearts.
so soon as
love
is
stronger
than hatred
mankind would happily live
in peace
and in harmony
with nature and other beings
instead of being suffered from constant conflicts and bloody wars.
could humans turn this beautiful dream into reality?
or would it be always a mission impossible
that
could only
be achieved
in those Hollywood's fantasized movies?
Thao Chuong
2016-07-16
7 Years Ago
VIVA -Just adore that painting..was going to leave a comment but you have shut up shop! Hope everything ok?
VIET- Lovely poems here is a tanka in echo
Genetically
Is man born really evil
Or is he born kind
If evil can we be changed
if kind can we spread the love
JEM 170716
7 Years Ago
Thanks for the echo Jane. Here's my tanka echoed to yours
Human Nature (Tanka)
man's born into life
innocent like blank canvas
painted black or white
he would become good or bad
outcome of his own culture
Thao Chuong
2016-07-17
7 Years Ago
Man is not born mean
It takes time
Developing skills
That will destroy
Learning to retaliate
Doing unto others
Before they do onto him
Perfecting a skill of survival
Honing in on the badges
An eye for an eye
He takes careful aim
His foe has fallen
Never more
7 Years Ago
Haa... Danl: "an eye for an eye" - God must be mad at your verse -lol.
Which One Would You Choose: To Die Instantly or to Live Without Freedom for a Lifetime?
Unlike a rat
that furiously rages for his loss of freedom ,
while
he's running frighteningly -
trying to get out of an iron cage.
a songbird has its wings folded
but she comfortably jumps back and forth
behind
those narrowly
enclosed bamboo bars.
She is still singing stunning songs
that
sound
so pretty
and very cheerful
to humans' ears?
Is
she pleased
to be safe and sound in the bamboo cage
or is she crying for her lost freedom?
nobody would comprehend how that songbird truly feels?
(Presumably
with an easy life
without too much worry about
terrible weather,
predators,
starvation...
and endless other risks outside.
she might feel very safe and sound inside that nice-looking cage.).
Anyway,
if I have to chose between the two,
I'd rather be the rat that rages in the iron cage
Even though
I know for sure
like
that rat and his poor fate
I soon face my instant death.
No
absolutely not
I don't wanna be the songbird
that lives and sings without her freedom for a lifetime.
Thao Chuong
2016-07-17
7 Years Ago
Jeremiah he calls to me
My feet becoming numb
My fingers with no feel
The branch above my head
Slowly swinging in the air
Jeremiah he calls to me
The men in blue
Chatting below my body
Laughing and spitting
The noose grows tighter
My tongue is parched
My ears begin to ring
Jeremiah he calls to me
The morn turns to darkness
The shiny badges fade
All sounds disappear
Jeremiah he calls to me
You are now free
7 Years Ago
Why do we have to wait to rest in peace?
Why can't we live in peace while we are waiting?
7 Years Ago
Wow to Danl for your poem. A question to Danl: You can REST IN PEACE anytime at your choice. What the "hell" are you waiting for? The sooner you go, the better seat you can get on heaven -lol
Amen echoed to Jane's post.
Have a good rest, my friends
My late thought of the day
New Way of Living in the Cyber World
I have "met" many folks
while driving on the newly-paved highway of information
Many of them
whom
I respect
I like
I adore
I love...
Some of those
whom
I disregard
I dislike
I hate...
Practically, I've never met any of them in person
I have no clue
about
their true identities
how they look like
in the real life
whether
they are
young or old
black or white
yellow or red
short or tall
fat or slim
pretty or ugly
round or square...
I don't know
who and what
they are
real or fake
good or bad
male or female
decent people or psychopaths.
et cetera,
Nevertheless,
I've talked
I've chatted
I've fought
I've argued
I've disputed...
with those invisible and untouchable human beings.
Isn't it bizarre?
I
let
myself
be up and down
go left and right
swing back and forth
and rock 'n roll
with those strangers
who are new friends and foes of mine
on-line - the modernly-invented world
O
my daily living.
Thao Chuong
2016-07-18
7 Years Ago
If you had a choice
Between drinking wine every day
Or being intelligent
What would you choose?
Red or white?
7 Years Ago
Viet-
I overheard my eulogy yesterday....
Rose are Red
Skies are blue
You have left us
Thank you
7 Years Ago
RED! - Is this a trick question DANL: - Only joking1
WINE
Red as ruby
Round as a cherry
A homage to the grape
Sweet to eat
But nicer picked
Crushed
Fermented
Matured
Bottled
Corked
Stored
Cork popped
Poured
Sipped
Glugged
Guzzled
JEM 190716
7 Years Ago
Good evening everybody.
"I overheard my eulogy yesterday.... " posted by Danl. Oh no. I couldn't believe that your kids were so desperate for their inherit of your art and your estate -lol.
@ Jane: Have you heard from Jason? Do you know his whereabouts? I think that he has been taking a good break as long as he could fully recharge his energy that was drained by your political passion about Brexit. - LOL.
BTW: Jason is a compassionate humanist and a provoking poet whom l love to see him around. I do hope both life and love have been treating him well.
Take a good rest
7 Years Ago
Why do we have to wait to rest in peace?
Why can't we live in peace while we are waiting?
Posted by Danl Art- a day ago
My following poem inspired by Danl's beautiful thought.
To Live in Peace or to Rest in Peace - It's the Question
Like you and many philosophical thought provokers
sometimes
I
wonder
why the hell do we wait until our last day on earth
"to
rest
in peace"?
Wouldn't we better enjoy it,
while we're still kicking alive?
Isn't it sarcastic?
we - humans tend to do the opposite
to
what
we value, love, and dream of
We usually talk too much about compassion
but
most of the things
which we've been doing for our living
we have made less love but more hate.
We often say
we would love to enjoy peace
while we are so busy to fight for endless wars
consequently, we suffer a great deal of casualties and destruction of our own habitats
However.
it's historically so obvious.
we - humans have reluctantly agreed to live in peace.
unless
somehow
all of our enemies suddenly collapse on their own feet and fully rest in peace.
Amen to human beings!
Thao Chuong
2016-07-19
7 Years Ago
Always be youself...
Don't care what others think
They are not you
You are not them
Thank God!
7 Years Ago
Hi VIET, personally I think Jason was more heated than me on the subject, however I believe we all have our own views and I certainly do not criticise anyone for theirs. We all vote one way or another for different reasons. The outcome is the outcome. I did pm Jason to ensure he had not fallen out with me and he said not. Personally I do miss our banters and loopy poems. come back Jason :-) Shall I pm again?
7 Years Ago
A Jason response....
Hear the gulls cry
Reach for the sky
Smell the open sea
Set your soul free
7 Years Ago
Robert James Hacunda - Hi - Three is never a crowd there is always room for friends :-)
DANL - Wow you are getting very profound - beautiful
Ahhh - The wandering minstrel has returned...or is that the prodigal son Jason ;-) I love Cornwall and Devon. Too long has past since I was last there
wrestling wild hippos and dancing with gators hey - paints a great picture. Missed your loopy tunes - glad to see you back.
Jim - there is a picture there for you :-)
7 Years Ago
JIM - there are many pipe dreams in this house that need to come to fruition but that is the difference to those that have the oomph to get off their butts and just do it, to those that don't.
Two Left Feet
Oh how I wish I had a right foot
Going round in circles
Is what I do best
Continually tripping myself up
Putting my left foot in
Taking my left foot out
Of my big mouth
Being a lefty is what I do best
Don't ask me to dance,
for next to me,
the wooden tops have more flair.
My feet are in a constant pickle
Never ever do I walk pretty
Oh how I wish I had a right foot.
JEM 220716
7 Years Ago
Thank you for turning your thought of the day - today into a poetry day on this thread.
@ James: Long time no dialogue. Welcome your thought, my friend. Three is too crowded on a queen bed for two when having sex -lol.
@ Danl: I enjoy your beautiful poem
A Jason response....
Hear the gulls cry
Reach for the sky
Smell the open sea
Set your soul free
@ Jason: Good to see ya back, mate. Now you sound very fresh and relaxed. Your poem is beautifully restful.
@ Jim: I always enjoy your poetic humor, my friend. Keep writing and making us smile
@ Jane:Now you get the credit for pulling Jason into our loop -lol. Your humourous echo to Jim made me laugh.
Have a good night to you all.
7 Years Ago
Live at Best then Rest in Peace.
a seedling of death is always planted at every birth
with no exception
living is dying
bit by bit
as
times flies
it grows into an old tree
each man goes closer to his final destination
sooner or later
he'll hit the jackpot at his own exit
death is the inevitable of all living beings on earth
nevertheless
human
in
his wild dream
of being immortal
or at least having his life extended much longer
mankind always tries his best to defy the logic of the living process
he wastes his time to worry about a life after-death
he dares not live to the fullest of his current life
'cause
he's so afraid
he would commit god 's forbidden sins
(not only would he be disqualified for heaven
but also would his soul be sent to an eternal hell).
life is too precious to be wasted
every
second lost
it would be gone forever
impossible to gain back.
what's the heck would I be waiting for?
I know
one day I must die for sure
I prefer not to whine in my tomb after I leave here
it's the dammed reason
why
I'd better enjoy my life at its best
while I am still well alive
right now
Thao Chuong
2016-07-21
7 Years Ago
I will never regret getting old
I have known to many people
Who never had that privilege
7 Years Ago
Nice writing all. Nice poem Jason.
Jane that's what happens when you leave the lid off the pickle jar with the music on.
Do you have any videos with you dancing?
Echo to Viet.
The good and the bad
life is good
when it’s good
bad when it’s bad
I suppose it all comes down
to love
which I hope continues to the other side
with all the BS left here after the ride
Jim Taylor 7/22/2016
7 Years Ago
JIM...not that I know of..but I do have a sneaky few of my sister in law after a few bevvies...caught her one night trying to do kick boxing on our punch bag...never seen anything so funny in all my life....
7 Years Ago
Here is a response to Jim's echo The good and the bad
Good or Bad - Very Subjective
when
I feel sad
or
I'm mad
I could perceive
everyone is nasty
everything is bad
when
I'm fine
I feel alright
I would find
everyone is kind
everything is good
clearly
my thought
my emotion
governed
by
my mind
my heart
they're also
mainly driven
by
my mood
so you know
when
I think
or I say
"good or bad"
neither about you
nor about anything
but totally about me
now
up to you
how to perceive
whether
good or bad
'cause only you yourselves - not any else who would make you feel glad or sad
Thao Chuong
2016-07-22
7 Years Ago
Good morning.
I love your sense of humor that I am lack of.
Dream of Being Number One
wildest dream
being on top
becoming
number one
above
billions of folks.
doing the best
at any costs
until facing
no competition
until seeing
no one
around.
reaching
up high
onto ceiling
of blue sky
seeing nothing
only clouds
floating about.
sitting alone
above everyone
without any human
fooling around
feeling lonely
to
live
like that
no fun at all
what is it for?
Thao Chuong
2016-07-23
7 Years Ago
Evening All :-)
Get down from that ladder Viet, Jim you will never make a llama, your spitting abilities are not up to par
Get off your ass
Get off you ass
Do it now
Don't let circumstance
Dictate your future
You have your dreams
Act upon them
You know what
You need to do
Don't sit back and wait
Do it
Now
Don't sit upon your ass
Circumstance blowing
sand in the wind
Going nowhere fast
Same thing
Every day
Follow your dreams
Make it reality
Do it
Now
JEM 230715
7 Years Ago
On Wings
if I had wings
like the birds in the sky
I’d bring down a rose
from the heavens above
dropping it to the ground
to all the flightless creatures below
if I was a man who had no legs
born without legs
or blown off in some useless war
a war that took a large piece of my body
along with my soul
I’d be content just to walk across the floor
Jim Taylor 7/23/2016
7 Years Ago
My wife and I are an interracial couple, she is black and I am white. Deeply in love with each other for over thirteen years.
I am ex-law enforcement mad as hell at the police shootings and pissed off at the black lives matter movement seeing them as indirectly responsible for all the violence against police.
My wife feels caught in the middle and has said she does not even want to live in a world where she is forced to take sides. Race has never ever been an issue in our relationship.
Last night after a day of both our major Canadian television stations as well as our American stations broadcasting the shootings of the Policemen in Baton Rouge Louisiana I was ranting about how I felt the
Black Lives Movement was responsible for the shootings of law enforcement officials in
the United States . My wife was largely silent during this rant not once expressing how she felt. This is her loving and understanding way. Unfortunately I failed to see how troubled she was.
Both of us were more deeply disturbed in so many subconscious ways that we did not fully grasp and both of us had trouble falling asleep.
We were both awoken by nightmares simultaneously! She was crying and awake as I woke myself up yelling “That’s my wife! Get off her!”
I was dreaming that she had gone into a street during a snowstorm to pick up a baby that had been in left unattended on a the road and suddenly two policemen appeared and took her to the ground, trying to handcuff her while she still had the baby in her arms.
This was when I began running towards them yelling vocally in my bed which aroused me from the nightmare.
I immediately heard my wife sobbing and we embraced each other. Her dream had been much more complex than mine and involved her deceased parents. The hallmarks of fear
of racism was the residual effects of the mood of the dream that woke her crying and she explained that she was overwhelmed with sadness and grief over the fear of simply being who she is. She had never felt this way in her life. And it actually prompted her to say to me as she continued to cry “I don’t want to have to live in a world life this, so full of hate and violence.”
After we both had a shared cry together we talked about the issues that had prompted such nightmares.
During this time I was again reminded of why I love and respect her so deeply for her intellect and reasoning as she so eloquently stated that all of what we see on the news is really not our life. She went on to explain that all of what we had experienced leading up to our fears and insecurities that lead to such nightmares was a construction of rare events sensationalized in the media and fed to us in continuing loops, over and over again. She further stated that this is largely what is responsible for all the unrest and divisiveness.
As I said to her many times in the past about so many other issues, “Honey, I believe you hit the nail on the head!”
Despite all she and I see on the news of terrorism and violence we live relatively unscathed by it. We never see such horrific scenes as is delivered to us in the media.
We conduct our daily lives in a setting of peace and goodwill, giving and getting positive karma from most everyone we encounter despite their race, gender or sexual preferences.
We have travelled extensively in the past to countries such as Egypt, Paris and extensively throughout Canada and the United States. All without fear or apprehension and met with kind hospitality by almost everyone we came in contact with.
It is not a small world unless you limit it to what we are fed through the media. It is a much larger world than that. We have decided to not watch the news for a while we enjoy our little place in the world.
7 Years Ago
Good evening Jim, Jane and John.
@ Jane: You made me think, Have you seen anyone who has voluntarily stepped down after spending too much time. energy, and money to climb that high, my friend? Difficult to climb up, so many people prefer to keep holding until they fall off the ladder
@ Jim: On wings or not on wings - ain't the question - lol
@ John: Thanks for sharing. your tricky situation and your unique experience about "daily ugly" news with the heating coverage by the mainstream media. Your writing has generated a lot of thought in my mind regarding racism, bias, race relation, love and hate...
Have a good night. Sleep tight.
Love and Sex - Why Not Take Both?
love is so sweet
lick each drop
hold its taste in your mouth
'til its tang absorbs into your tongue
then
swallow slowly
let it go though your throat
and eventually sink deep
further
down
to
the bottom of your heart
however
love alone is not sufficient
ever
never
enough
for the two souls fallen in love
just imagine
the two lovers
sitting idle side by side
looking at the silver moon
or staring at each other
hour after hour
days and nights
in silence
doing nothing
no hugging
no holding
no touching
no fondling
no kissing
no sucking
no pushing
no twisting
no moaning...
wouldn't this make you feel bored to death?
love without sex
is
like
drinking without smoking
no fun at all
falling in love is passive
making love is responsive
would it be
not only
erotic
but
also
chemically addictive
to the heart and the mind
without
sex
there would be no love
go for both
shoot your bodies
up high
to
God's heaven of eternal joy
at the same time
drive your souls
down
to
Satan's hell of burning pleasure.
Thao Chuong
2016-07-23
7 Years Ago
JOHN- totally understand. I never buy newspapers. It makes you wonder how many issues have been manipulated purely by the spewing of propaganda through reporting. I have a big dislike of the press. I am white brought up in Africa- Rhodesia now Zimbabwe and saw segregation and some people treating others badly, to me it did not seem as bad as South African Apartheid but it was there. I think of how the whole world imposed sanctions as they declared UDI. In 1980 it was handed over to another racist Mugabe and the crimes against humanity continued.. I look now at America and we are still seeing over there the exact same things that everyone was up in arms about Africa, the same things which were happening in America back then, Ku Klux Klan, before then the Indians. When will we ever learn. What ever colour, creed, religion I just wish we could all learn to get along. I wish we had an answer to this brainless stupidity.
7 Years Ago
A Dragonfly Encounter
Pachydiplax Longipennis
The blue dasher dragonfly
alights
on the sleeve of my shirt.
His azuline body
would be the envy
of any military machine engineer.
We stare
with mutual curiosity
into one another's face.
I wonder
what sixty thousand lenses
of compound eyes see.
What unseen aura
of the light spectrum
am I emitting ?
We gaze deeply
as he rests there.
His neon green jaws
are constantly gnawing,
reminiscent
of an alien insect cow
placidly chewing its cud.
Karen Newell
7/24/16
7 Years Ago
Sodium bicarbonate of soda runs the risk of running a bath .
There are jet paths over the wilderness .
Say it clearly,
The saps believed in Santa
7 Years Ago
It's 10:33 p.m. - it's been a long day - I'm ready for some shut eye - and sleep. Tomorrow will be here soon enough.
7 Years Ago
Good evening. Thank you for sharing your unique thoughts or/and poem: Jane, Danl, Ryan Demaree, Karen, Robert, RoyD, and Ryan Wolfy Brown
Enjoy a restful evening or fruitful day.
@ Jane: well-said about daily news reported by the media.
@ Danl: I really enjoy your provoking question with powerful image.
@ Ryan: I like the brush-work and movements in your painting. Maybe "dinosaurs will once again rule the earth some day" as you said. Is there any hope that mankind will rise again after that?
@ Karen: Wow...to this poem of yours. How nice I felt when I read it! Keep posting your poem whenever you write.
@ RoyD,: Smart move to take a good rest. The mind is back to its logic mode after a good sleep.
@ Robert: Which Santa you were talking about? It is Santa Clause? or Santa Ana? or Santa Clara? or Santa Cruz? ... Wilderness is no longer wild as it has been badly infested with humans's footprints all over.
@ Ryan: How sweet your thought is. Maybe, you would change your thought after you open this box and take a bite at the chocolates -lol
Here is my late echo to John Malone's post and to Jane' Response
Have You Heard any Good News Reported by the Media?
when
being shot
right on the spot
for whatever reason
whether he's a cop on duty
or he's.a suspect of a crime
the outcome is the same
blood spilled
a human's valuable life is lost
it's irreplaceable
sad parts of this news:
his kids lose their dad
his wife loses her husband
his dad is furiously mad
his mom is devastated
many people are in agony
the shooting makes the public feel less secured for their own safety
anyway
the press always manipulates bad news
to heat up their coverage
for
more
listeners viewers, and readers
to their networks
radios
TVs,
Internet,
and newspapers,
so they could make more money in selling ads
and they're able to spread their political propaganda more effectively .
mainstream media usually highlight those sensitive news
that
generates
public attention
thus they create racial friction and social unrest
in most cases
in their coverage of the news
they accuse,
they judge,
and they sentence without trial
they take a few incidents then paint everyone with the same brush
to
infest
our mind
with their "news"
"the good vs. the bad
the white vs. the black
Muslims against Christians
immigrants against citizens..."
They make us feel uncomfortable, upset, depressed, or even guilty
simply
because
we belong this race or we are a member of that group, etc.
I have stopped listening to, reading or watching daily news
as I feel really sick and tired of getting daily rubbish from the mainstream media.
Thao Chuong
2016-07-24
7 Years Ago
Hope is essential to all peoples..
Freedom was a dream once
past nightmares came to end
Peace is
the next dream
a peaceful world!
a peaceful nation!
Love thy neighbour
and be loved!
7 Years Ago
Feel like I have just encountered an old haunt, and I am smiling as I realise I always fall back on poetry and poets and philosophers.
7 Years Ago
Feel like I have just encountered an old haunt, and I am smiling as I realise I always fall back on poetry and poets and philosophers.
Maria Disley
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34 Minutes Ago
if we were a song
we'd each be a line
each line echoing into the other
to make beautiful music.....
lets write a song....
and unite in the chorus..
it will be ghostly sublime and humanly glorious
throw me a line to build on mine
let it be true and deep and spontaneous
let it be for one moment, and be remembered forever..
as US!
I am proposing a song with one line from each person....with a collaborative decision about which lines add to the song...please go to my page if you want to be part of the challenge..Hope you will join us Viet :)
7 Years Ago
The Internet
is like a box of chocolates.
You never know
if you will crack a tooth
on the nut
hidden
in a creamy,
caramel center.
:))
Karen Newell
7/25/16
7 Years Ago
Thank you Danl, Robert, Jason, Bill, Maria, and Karin.
@ Danl:
Always remember
Your present life
Is not
Your final destination
My question for you, Danl: Will there is a final destination for your next life?
@ Robert: "The American Dream is a nightmare". I think what you said is true. American Dream is really a nightmare for all the people of other nations around the world.
@ Jason: Isn't it peace for the mind more likely achievable than peace for the world?
@ Bill: Haa,,,It depends mainly where people buy art: art at Walmart, art at galleries, at online, or art at auction.
@ Maria: It's a great idea. Thanks for your invitation. I'm happy to be part of your poetry collaboration.
@ Karen: Internet is a sugar coated medicine which may be a good remedy for loneliness or mental illness. But it could be very bitter and also its side effect would be disastrous.
Have a good night to you all.
7 Years Ago
Tough Decision
Pain increasing
Movement limited
Crying
Big eyes boring
Into your soul
Pain relief given
No relief received
Sleep my boy
Relief is here
JEM 240716
7 Years Ago
@ Jane: What is it about? It sounds so painful.
"The Internet is like a box of chocolates" posted by Ryan Wolfy Brown and Karen's poetic response
Here is my echo.
Is Internet a Chocolate Box for Humans or a Live Trap for Rats?
when we're alone
and we feel lonely
with
nobody around
no one to trust.
a human touch
is
all what
we need
someone who would lend their ears
so we can take the heavy load off our congested chest.
we often look for
a quick fix
a painless solution
amongst simple options
internet is the best spot
where we could take a good shot at any direction
we could share our own story
without
revealing our own identity
no one would know
where we live
who we are
how we look
what we do for a living
therefore, our own privacy is fully protected
likewise
we never know
what we would get
whom we would meet
who could they be
they might have same issues as we do
also they've tried to look for a dumping site to get rid of their own rubbish
Internet
a sugar coated medicine
easy to take
a good remedy
for the disease of loneliness
or for other mental illnesses.
while online human touch provides
a quick relief
for
our extensive pain
(like a kinda momentary joy in sex inside a lengthy marriage)
its disastrous side effect is extremely addictive
worse than negative impact from alcohol or drug
it's very easy to be hooked
but difficult to quit.
it's up to our survival skill to get in and out whenever we'd like to
after we get what we need
hidden
within the live-trap for rats
the so-called internet.
Thao Chuong
2016-07-25
7 Years Ago
Viet-
Once the curtain falls
You are recycled
Separated
Awaiting a new life
Like broken plastic
An unread paper
Each in its own bin
Waiting for a swimmer
Entering the hen house
Attacking an egg
And you are reborn
7 Years Ago
VIET - Had to decide to let our cat go to sleep last night - he has had hip dysplasia since he was born - (he is mixed breed) but has also developed spurs growing on the spine trapping nerves etc. His quality of life had degenerated greatly last week, and we could not bear to see him in pain - his pain relief did nothing for him.
7 Years Ago
Jane, we just had to put our oldest down on Friday.
Nearly 17 years old. Lymphoma.
We're pretty tore up around here.
Sorry for your loss.
7 Years Ago
Thanks Joe / DANL - Sorry for your loss too Joe. Why do you get so bloody attached to them. I guess they are part of the family for that long you are bound to...I hated that decision...gutted.
7 Years Ago
Good evening everyone. Have a restful evening
@ Jane & Joe: Pets are our good friends and our family members. It was a heart-wrecking decision to put them to final sleep. Sorry to both of you for your loss.
@ Danl:
An echo to your poem "once the curtain falls"
Life is But a Play
"once the curtain falls"
the play ends
light is out
darkness takes over
whatever characters
we play
we finish our roles
then we go home
but
it's alright
it's the same
for every human
in the real life
why care too much about everything
what's the point to argue
who is right who is wrong
why worry
about
our next life
while we're living here
after we leave
we would know for sure
whether
we are
in hell
in heaven
or in the absolutely nothing
life
is
but a play
why not enjoy fully our roles in the spotlight
while we're on the stage
then
say goodbye
we'll leave for our home
hopefully we would have a sound sleep tonight
Thao Chuong
2016-07-26
7 Years Ago
Posted by Jane McGowan - 15 hours ago
"VIET - Had to decide to let our cat go to sleep last night - he has had hip dysplasia since he was born - (he is mixed breed) but has also developed spurs growing on the spine trapping nerves etc. His quality of life had degenerated greatly last week, and we could not bear to see him in pain -"
Posted by Joe Burgess - 9 hours ago
"Jane, we just had to put our oldest down on Friday.
Nearly 17 years old. Lymphoma.
We're pretty tore up around here.
Sorry for your loss."
Here is my thought of the day generated by both Jane's poet and Joe's post above
Of Pets and Humans - the Right to Die in Dignity
how lucky
to be
pets in the West
by the end of their lives
they could die in peace
by
being put
into a final sleep
instead of living in pain for so long until the last day
unlike
their pets
many terminally-ill patients
no right to die
they
depend
on medication
especially on pain-killers or on life-supports
they're dragged on a life without quality
suffered a motionless living in bed so long
for months and years
against
their desire
to die in dignity
through a medically assisted suicide
professionally administered by a legally licensed physician
unfortunately
in many countries
pets - not human beings
having the right to die in dignity
"suicide in any form is against God's will"
it's just the lame excuse
of
those religious fanatics'
who try to impose their own beliefs upon all non-believers.
Thao Chuong
2016-07-26
7 Years Ago
Thanks for your condolences, Jane, Danl and Viet.
It was a horrible decision to have to make.
I haven't cried like that in a long time...
Viet, you are correct.
Denying the right to die is one of the more glaringly obvious indicators that something is off with our cultural understanding of a god.
7 Years Ago
Warning:
Days on a calendar are closer than they appear
So spend every day wisely
And remember
There are many ways to lose a day
But not a single way to get one back
7 Years Ago
Companion animals are a lesson in love
Watching them suffer is a lesson in pain
Losing them to death leaves a space in the heart
which memories struggle to fill
7 Years Ago
KAREN - I will surely second that. :-)
VIET - absolutely agree - why on earth can we not choose to die if we are in pain and there is nothing that anyone can do. Why do we have to leave our own country and book ourselves into places like Dignitas for our peace. Surely they are taking away our human rights, our right to die in peace rather than suffering.
7 Years Ago
Thanks Joe, Danl, Karen, and Jane.
@ Joe and Jane: I understand that the right to die is a complicated and tricky issue. Unfortunately religion is the main factor that has a great impact on law-makers about this sensitive matter.
@ Karen: How nice and humane your verse is.
Posted by Robert James Hacunda - 2 days ago
"... The American Dream is a nightmare"
My thought of the day is a response to RJH's above quote.
America's Dream is But a Nightmare
Human's nature
desire to conquer
many empires
fallen and risen
death of an old one
birth to a new one
since the Stone Age
mankind has always been controlled by one or another conqueror
At the modern time
night has finally fallen on British Empire
light recently died on Red Soviet Union
Communist block lately collapsed
only one superpower left
the rise of a new empire
America's dream comes true
no nation could touch
no country dare challenge
United States O America
armed to the teeth
her powerful army
at every corner
of the world
on guard
for laws 'n orders
for her freedom 'n security at home
The international police
is extremely
busy
to
watch
and catch bad guys:
dictators of rogue states
and terrorists-without-border
Isn't it bizarre?
as a hawk
at
WARS
she always claims
she's dreaming of,
and fighting for,
PEACE
Like all other predators
feeding on their preys
she eats her kill
when she gets choked
by her generous meal
she often feels
herself
as
a victim
So
she cries wolves
for her nightmare
of having her prey
too tough to chew
she couldn't swallow
the bone gets stuck
her throat is hurt
it is not her fault
someone else must be blamed
for her misfortune
Oh
America's dream is but a nightmare
not only for herself.
but also for the rest of the world
Thao Chuong
2016-07-27
.
7 Years Ago
Recognizing the powers in others only strengthens your powers
And remember
The strong may not live forever, but the weak don't live at all.
7 Years Ago
@ Danl: Thanks for sharing your thought of the day. It has been deadly quiet. I could hear the sound of your thought roaring in the windless sky -lol.
One, Two, and Three in the Crowded World of Billions
1- One
number one - the best
nothing else is better
for a big ego
when no one around
one is great
for a good rest
and for privacy
but being alone
one must feel lonely
2- Two
number two - better
for a human touch
it doesn't matter
whether love or hate
it's more than enough
when in need of another
in term of romance
perfectly perfect
for both souls-involved
when no-one around
best for love and sex
for human conflict
one foe is good
on one-on-one basis
without intervention
from outsiders
either win or loss
it's a fair fight
between the two guys
nothing to regret
no point to complain
3- Three
number three- the worst
for both love and hate
three "makes" love sound very odd
not only does romance lose its charms
but also does sex lack its erotic flavor
no privacy
left
oh sour gossip
from a third party.
three makes war bloodiest
when another guy
fools around
takes side
no one wanna lose face
in front of a witness
in such case
so often
the fight don't stop until the only last one's standing
as a result
for better and best relationship between human beings
one
is good enough
two
are perfectly sufficient
three
become too troublesomely crowded
absolutely no need for it nor for any bigger number
even
in a world
sardine packed
with billions of folks
there're still lots of room for many more people
Thao Chuong
2016-07-28
7 Years Ago
True story of last nights siting.
I was fortunate to have the right timing.
Junk up Junk down
junk food
junk cars
in a junk yard
junk in a house
junk in front of a house
world filled with junk
opened up a trunk
guess what was inside
as I lie down last eve
to the dark of night
looking out my large window
saw a fiery orange glow in the sky
flying high with orange tail steaming
got out of bed to watch it move through the sky
the news report said it was a piece of space junk
from a previously launched Chinese rocket
I must admit it was the most beautiful piece of junk I ever laid tiered eyes on
Jim Taylor 7/28/2016
7 Years Ago
Hi Jim. It was a unique experience. You did turn it into a provoking poem which has inspired me for an echo. Nice watercolor painting. Many thanks for sharing. Have a restful evening my friend.
7 Years Ago
.
The Junk Collector - Why Does Mankind Collect Too Much Belongings?
too much junk food into a body
the body gets fat
hard to move
too much junk thought in a mind
the mind is insanely mad
impossible to think
too much junk emotion in a heart
the heart is badly poisoned
unable to love
man is a bottomless pack rat
junk and junk everywhere
here and there
inside his body
inside his heart
inside his mind
and inside his inner self
as well as
all over
the outer universe
no more room left
not enough storage
for his junk collection
consequently,
man buries his life under a big pile of junk
he turns his habitat into a huge junkyard
when he leaves this world
he can't take nothing
even his remain
must be left here
to rot
why does man keep taking too much during his lifetime?
Thao Chuong
2016-07-28
7 Years Ago
Hoarding knowledge is a disease
It diminishes your existence
Because it diminishes your presence
7 Years Ago
Viet, great poem and cracked me up!
Love yours also Danl !
Rags and riches
a homeless person
slowly pushes a cart
down an endless path
clattering on a journey
cans like tambourines
in a salvation army band
people passing by
laugh to themselves
looking at all his junk
they walk out of glitzy stores
with many unnecessary items
most not needed for normal sustainability
many of these items will soon be cast away
after the shopping addiction temporarily wears off
picked up by a homeless person to be recycled
possibly enough money to sustain him for a day
Jim Taylor 7/29/ 2916
7 Years Ago
Thanks Danl and Jim. Rags and riches is another provoking poem. Have a restful weekend to you all.
Is Writing About Love and Peace Very Clichéd?
I am about
to write a song
about my dream
of love 'n peace
for human beings
to live in harmony
you've said to me
too much cliché
same thing written
by poets, writers
philosophers
and songwriters
again and again
very boring
you've made me wonder
why keep dreaming
why keep hoping
why waste my time
to write something
you wouldn't sing
no one would hear
same old lyrics
torture their ears
you're damned right
thousands of years
not much has changed
yet, I'd rather write
not what you like
but what I love
to ease mind
and light my day
to keep my dream
and hope
alive
I'd better be very clichéd
you'd never know
maybe someday
my piped dream would come true
Thao Chuong
2016-07-29
PS: Originally posted on Poetry thread, I re-posted here for my own record
7 Years Ago
Viet, DANL, Jim, some very thought provoking poetry going on here - funny too.
Ahh junk and possessions, my pet hate, the constraints of being free. I am thinking of a response :-)
7 Years Ago
POSSESSIONS
If you possess
Does the thing you possess
Also possess you?
You surround yourself by things
Why? For what reason
Would you want collections of things?
Many handbags when you only need one
More than ten pairs of shoes
When you only need the basic
Clothes bursting out of the wardrobe
Designer tags stitched to draw the eye
Some of these never even worn
Bottles of perfume on the shelf
Mingled scents wafting down
Musty fusty old and dusty
Ornaments clutter every space
Filling every nook and cranny
Some cracked or chipped or glued
We saw them
We loved them
We bought them
We put them on show
We cleaned them
We dusted them
We broke them
We glued them
We left them
We added to them
We could not get rid of them
Who owns who?
JEM 290716
7 Years Ago
Thanks Danl, Ramona, and Jane: POSSESSIONS; Nice poem, my friend. So true about shoes and clothes. How many pairs of shoes do you have? -lol.
Posted by Danl Art - 14 hours ago
"Hoarding knowledge is a disease
It diminishes your existence
Because it diminishes your presence".
My thought in response to Danl's verse
Knowledge is a Malady to the Mind
knowledge takes away from human's powerful mind
its wild imagination
and
worse
its freedom to think creatively
it is a plague - extremely contagious - quickly spread
that infests all humans' minds
and
leads them
onto a narrow path
to a huge storage space
which is congested by purely pre-loaded information
the one who has his mind full of knowledge
usually thinks he knows everything
in spite of the fact
that
he has
no room left
for any creative thoughts
unless, we get rid of the burden of knowledge
otherwise, it is impossible
for
any of us
to think out of the box
Thao Chuong
2016-07-29
7 Years Ago
A Know-It-All
I hoard my knowledge
all along
the outermost layer
of my brain.
Incubating
cluttered memories
which I present as presents
to those in my presence
Karen Newell
7/29/16
7 Years Ago
Roses are a poor gift to a heart forlorn!
A ton of corn will feed a hundred or more!
Violets put off a lavender hue.
No heart misses me more than you!
Bahahahaha!!!
7 Years Ago
Something's wrong here....
Only in America
People leave an expensive car
In their driveway
And store all their junk
In the garage
7 Years Ago
Ultimate Junk
the junky
shoots the junk
into any vein he can
an easy way out
but the hardest way back
no longer for pleasure
but for survival
really didn’t want to travel
down that horrific road
just some how happened
like a python choking
the breath away slowly
until there is nothing left
and his soul is finally released
Jim Taylor 7/30/2016
7 Years Ago
VIET - lol I am sorry to disappoint, I have one handbag from a charity shop and two pairs of flip fops, one pair of shoes for work and two pairs of easy walking shoes and one pair of walking boots - if there is a posh night out I panic lol My most important shoes are my flip flops :-)
Drugs
I have never used any
I have never tried any
I am high on life
I need no intervention
You need to learn to be grateful
You need to know you are luckier than some
Look around you
See the breath taking beauty
The ingenuity
Of design
Of Life
On Earth
JEM 300716
7 Years Ago
Good evening everybody. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and/or your poems. Enjoy a restful evening.
@ Karen: it's tricky for us to KNOW whether we "know it all" or we know nothing or we know something.
@ Larry: It's likely you've had a good time here.
@ Danl: Haa.. Do you park your car on the driveway on the street or in your garage? your quote would make you sound as if you had a certain experience in shooting "duck" into the vein.-LOL
@ Jim: Love it. You have reach your poetic momentum with "junk" -lol.
@ Jane: No, you don't disappoint me. You AMAZE me. What a simple and respectful; lifestyle you have! . Which do you put your hard-earned money? -lol.
7 Years Ago
A Hot Summer Day on Sandy Beach
sunshine
no wind
low tide
ocean receded
more sand exposed
shallow waves
wider beach.
at water edge
topless children
in shorts
ran
jiggled
laughed
and chased
each other.
lots of fun
adults walked
barefoot
on watery ground
to cool off
body heat
footprints scattered
on wet sand
many took sunbath
on beach towels
or on dry sand
faces down - butts up
or the opposite
faces up - butts down
like
salted fish
being sun-dried
by
local fishermen.
he always hates crowded places, especially on hot days
if his grand-kids didn't beg him to take them there,
he would have taken a beer then a nap in a lawn-chair
under the cool shade of the willow tree in his backyard.
Thao Chuong
2016-07-30
7 Years Ago
Morning Everyone 😊
VIET Did you have to do something you did not want to lol? Love the imagery of the fish drying.
I only have - including bank holidays- 35 days, we spend our money travelling when and where we can. The mortgage is paid and we are ready to downsize.
7 Years Ago
Start your day right....
Never create before breakfast
If you have to create before breakfast
Eat your breakfast first
7 Years Ago
@Jane: VIET Did you have to do something you did not want to lol? Many thing that I did I didn't I want to. The worst one is paying tax.
@ Danl: I dream of doing nothing? Why should I work for it -lol?
Enjoy a restful evening
Here is my thought of the day given birth by your last pregnancy of thought, Danl -lol
My Dream of Doing Nothing
I wanted to turn my dream into reality
it was the motive which had driven me
to work much harder
than
any buffalo
plowing rice fields
in those "third world" countries.
you could imagine how tough the job was
for the poor animal to pull a heavy plough
through
hardened soil
in the tropical heat
from early sunrise 'til late sunset
day by day
year after year.
for me
it
took
hard work
plus a lot of lucks
my dream eventually came true
at my retirement age
I can sit idle with both arms wrapped around my two knees
'kuz, I have neither to be self-employed any longer
or to work for someone else no more
as
a slave
to earn a living
now, I'm fully aware
that my dream of doing nothing was purely a fancy desire
a castle on the sand built in my early age.
however
it
did rob
many youthful years
from my precious life.
now, the thought of "doing nothing" has been increasingly bugging my mind
I would feel bored
to
death
for not doing anything.
I have lots of time to fool around
I'd rather keep myself busy with different things
which I love to do
art
poetry
my dog
my grand-kids
some other minor things
and last but not least,
I don't mind sparing some of it
for my lively arguments with my lovely spouse.
. it's a bitter-sweet way
to self-remind both of us
about
how wonderful our honeymoon actually was
and how nice and tight we have been attached to each other so far...
Thao Chuong
2016-07-31
7 Years Ago
My thought after Jim's poem provoking/humorous poem Rags and riches
The Rich and the Poor in the US of A
the rich gets richer
it is likely never enough
they have fought tooth and nail for bigger tax breaks
to make their businesses more viable
or they ask for billions-of-dollar-bailout to save their troublesome corporations.
those fat cats know very well
how
to
jump through loopholes
and squeeze as much as possible for huge profits
on the other hand
they've complained
that the poor has unfairly exploited the system
they shout and demand that handouts to the poor must be stopped
or at least
a big reduction on these subsidies
they accuse that welfare recipients are lazy, unmotivated, not having a desire for work
and likely cheat the system
from food stamps
medical care
housings
to
other emergency assistance
those who own big corporations often ignore the reality
that capitalism creates a free market for big profits
everything is for the rich
too much earning
too luxury for enjoyment
the poor has very little
social subsidy is barely enough for the very basis
they
have to live
from hand to mouth
whenever the poor falls off
the safety
net
they end up being homeless on streets
on the contrary
when the rich is at the verge of bankruptcy
they
ask huge giveaways of billions of dollars
from
the public treasure
to bail them out from their own shits
why the hell do the rich always complain about small handouts from the system?
Thao Chuong
2016-07-31
7 Years Ago
Echo Echo
Squeeze Job
Yes the middle class have been squeezed slowly as they don’t quite notice it.
like sitting in the frying pan with the heat slowly turned up
not really noticing until your burnt and over cooked
most industry shipped over seas
looking at abandoned warehouses
at least there is more awareness now with internet and independent news.
choices other than corporate media feeding propaganda to the masses
they say the best con job is when the one being conned is ignorant
he walks away thinking all is good.
the internet is the greed control mongers worst nightmare
much harder to keep subservient population dumbed down
feeding only their twisted propaganda
All that really matters any way is my football game
and my minister telling me it’s alright
ra ra for the next president
slight of hand and under the table
by the hidden dictators
middle class squeezed by corporate greed
until only the wealthy or poor remain
Jim Taylor 7/31/2016
7 Years Ago
Upon entering the hotel
After my walk
To grab a breakfast
A woman appeared
From a car for the rich
She walked and talked
"A beautiful day"
"Yes it is", I replied
"My I help you with your bags?"
She handed me two
Placing both in her room
Twenty minutes later
The sheet was wrinkled
And slightly damp
I remember stepping
Over a pillow on the floor
As I exited
Upon returning home
My wife asked
"How was your morning walk
I kissed her on the forehead
And replied...
"Like all others"
7 Years Ago
Good moaning, good moaning et al.
Ah corruption and greed.
Third world country
Openly corrupt
Advanced Country
Sneakily corrupt
Put a man in power in a third world country
All good intentions
The smell of power and money is over whelming
And drives them insane
Put a man in power in an advanced country
All intentions already there
The man already made with ideology
How low depends on whose gloves he shares
JEM 020816
7 Years Ago
Good evening all. Thanks for your nice poetry and provoking thoughts. Great stuffs to read and to think.
@ Jim: You're more serious and less humorous in your poetry. You're awesome in either style. Your poem Squeeze Job is an evident that whenever you're serious , you really mean it -lol.
@ Danl: You've made me laugh aloud. I enjoy your black humor with the exotic French flavor.
@ Doug: "Life sucks, but it's better than the alternative". You can never know whether the alternative worse or better? -lol. Is there any way to go ask those who have taken the alternative -lol.
@ Jane: Oh, corruption and greed! Is there any alternative? LOL. If there were those would be worse and worst
My thought of the day generated by Bill's provoking thread "Lets talk about NOTHING".
Sundry Thought about Nothingness.
when there is nothing
absolutely nothing
in
his mind
man is incapable of thinking
in the vacant mind
(with no information -no data -no record nothing at all
for review or reference during the thinking process) .
he has nothing to think about
neither anything
nor nothing.
in
dualism
nothing is the opposite of everything
like
yin and yang
however, without fullness, nothingness cannot be in existence.
man tends
to
let his mind
and his life swing back and forth
in between the two opposite ends
of
day and night
dark and light
right and wrong
love and hate
peace and war, etc..
DUALISM is the only reason
why
MAN -being mortal- dreams of -being immortal - GOD.
HEAVEN -being happy- instead of -being suffered - HELL.
so soon as
man could get rid of dualism
to
reach
ONENESS.
he needs no god
he dreams no heaven
simply because, he is fully enlightened.
Thao Chuong
2017-08-01
7 Years Ago
Life is like a pendulum
Back and forth
Life on the left
Death on the right
Back and forth
Uncertainity between
Back and forth
Where will it stop
No one knows
7 Years Ago
DANL - It is not that no-one wants it - it is that the right person has not yet discovered it!!
7 Years Ago
@ Danl: It's amazing that you put your thinking caps on everyday -lol. The beauty of art is like the beauty of a human's naked body. It is for our inspiration and enjoyment at-no-cost. Selling a body for sex is an act of prostitution. I wonder whether would it be the same when selling for art for other people's joy.
@ Jane: Creating art is and selling art are different. Creating comes from the inner urge of artistic expression, while selling is mainly for money.
Here is my echo to your poem Ah corruption and greed.
The "Coffee-and-Tea" Money
governments of many countries in the East
have become badly bureaucratic
the system is nearly immobilized
like
those driving gears
of a corrosive machine
they're too rigid an too sticky to be turned around
unless, heavily lubricated with good grease .
Asia - in general
China and Vietnam - in particular
where bribery is a cancerous disease
by which both Communist party members and civil servants are badly infested.
the worst "daylight" robbers
whom law-abiding citizens have the most fear
are
no longer pundits
(those who point guns at their face on a highway
and demand their wallet)
but government officials
(those who hold pens in hands and patiently await
'til they get the so-called "coffee and-tea" money.)
it is the first requirement and foremost qualification required
before they sign on any paperwork
or
nod
their heads
and permit someone to proceed.
bribery sucks
but
at least
when money talks
everything moves forward at a smooth rhythm
corruption is the driving force for progress
in many third world countries
without
it
the system would be completely stalled
everything could stand still
everyone would suffer a great deal
as nothing could be done to make their lives moving ahead
Thao Chuong
2016-08-02
7 Years Ago
American flags are flammable
Keep out of the reach of children
The elderly and the enemy
Allow the blue flames to scorch
The bureaucrats
The white flames to char
The rich
The red flames to parch
The followers
The earth beneath the fire
Shall give way
America will be swallowed
And rest forever in hell
7 Years Ago
Danl I would like to think when I paint the angels smile. At least for the effort.
Viet, Yes corruption every where.
In Mexico it's just a fact of life in the open and is expected.
In America with all the pay offs it is different. it's slipped under the rug and secret with fake honor to prevail.
7 Years Ago
Own it
I own that dog
I own that land
I paid for it I own it
I can do anything I want
cut trees
carve roads everywhere
shoot any trespassers
I own it
you don’t own any thing
you are just borrowing it
from ancestors and future generations
The only thing you own are your own actions
you own it no more than a cloud
possessions are like a cloud
they soon fade and form else where
waiting for a fool to try to own their beauty
Jim Taylor 8/3/2016
7 Years Ago
Jim-
When you sell a painting
The Angles will sing
And the Devil will frown
Until then
The Devil will smile
7 Years Ago
A Jaded Ameican
My flag
is in tatters.
Political patriotism,
a rotten apple
gnawed
to the putrid core.
All that is left
is a tiny seed,
the dream of freedom,
which I tenderly nurture
within my heart.
Karen Newell
8/3/16
7 Years Ago
Cloud Nine
I live on cloud nine
it’s where I spend my time
nothing bought
nothing paid
nothing owed
a fluffed white cloud
relaxing from nine to five
also known as
cloud nine to five
I play in a band with angels
as it circles the earth
listen to the music as I float by
beautiful heavenly harp music
thanks to my guardian angels
Jim Taylor 8/3/2016
7 Years Ago
Good evening everybody. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, especially for your awesome poetry. Your poetic momentum has turned this thread into poetry land.
@ Danl: Your poem about American flag is very provoking. It has itched my mind and made me think a lot -lol.
@ Jim: Nice to see your poetic light bulb has been turned on.
@ Karen: Americans in general are very patriotic. Thanks for your poem. I think it is an interesting response to Danl's poem
The Forgotten Story
once upon time, there was a young American
who landed on France
without
a passport
as soon as he put his first foot onto the foreign soil
he got shot
right on the spot
precisely at his chest
the bullet blew through his heart
he fell down at the water edge
and
died almost instantly
the stars-and-stripes flag on his battle uniform was tainted by his American's blood
it was the D-day
on Normandy beaches
sea water and sand were painted in red
from
the same pool of blood
of ten thousands of his fallen comrades
those who had the same fates as his
he never returned home
since
then
he has stayed on this land
he rest in peace in Normandy
and automatically became a French citizen
he would turn in his grave,
if he knew
nowadays some Frenchmen would ignorantly rally in Paris
hostilely burn the stars-and-stripes flag
and
rowdily chant "Down with the U.S.A."
Thao Chuong
2016-08-03
7 Years Ago
Do not taunt the angels
With your rotted soul
Or ride into heaven
On a dying jackel
Do not present yourself
As you are not
Or deceive the gatekeeper
With a crooked smile
Face the flames
You have helped stoke
And return to the ashes
From which you came
7 Years Ago
Out of the Dark
when you think dark thoughts
when you step into the dark
you attract dark spirits
don’t want to open that door
when the door bell chimes
it is a choice
to think positive
without being pretentious
we are enlightened beings
but only when
the demons are rejected
without that negativity
ride the cloud
we all have
Jim Taylor 8/4/2016
7 Years Ago
Good "moaning" everyone - and especially to the two MIA British poets Jason and Jane (LOL)
Thanks Danl, Jim, and Valeria for sharing your poetry and your thoughts today.
@Danl Your poem with a great sense of humour made me laugh.
@Jim: Keep writing my friend. I enjoy reading your poem.
@ Valerie: Nice to see you dropping by with your thought about preserving nature for the next generation.
Here is my echo (written in Tanka) to Jim's recent thoughts about cloud.
Am I a Wandering Cloud?
"where are you going?"
I asked the wandering cloud
they laughed and replied
"why don't you ask yourself, man?
where do you go in your life?"
Thao Chuong
2016-08-04
7 Years Ago
Ride a milky white cloud
Til it turns grey
And with a bolt of light
It lets you go
Tumbling downward
Downward
With the force of rain
The noise of rain
Like piss on a tin roof
7 Years Ago
Good Musing today very thought provoking everyone
The rabid dog infecting everyone it bites
Everyone notices the rabid dog
The shy little mouse scurrying along, harming no-one
No-one notices the little mouse
The infected infect the others
The poison keeps spreading
The harmless go by unnoticed
Touching no-one, infecting no-one
7 Years Ago
Danl, I wont be standing under your cloud.
You may want to bring one of Jane’s dogs with you under it.
Viet, like the parable sound to your words.
(Not trying to tag you Biblically though??!!
I awoke to a beautiful sunny day
I was feeling a bit cloudy though
7 Years Ago
@ Danl
"The noise of rain
Like piss on a tin roof"
Haa...Danl, I was hit unexpectedly by those lines. Not so romantic - but very graphic to the ears.
@ Jane: Nice to find ya. .. in hide-and seek
"The infected infect the others
The poison keeps spreading "
The second line sums up everything about the infected. Victims of bully are usually turned into worse bullies. Victims of hates often become worse haters. Victims of violence tend to be more violent...Thus, it is so sad that terrorism is the best breeding ground for extreme terrorists.
7 Years Ago
The following poem, which came to my mind today, was an after thought from my former poem The Forgotten Story
They Died to Stop a Madman's Desire for Conquering the World
the shore was fortified with gun emplacements
and covered with mines, wooden stakes, metal tripods, razor wire, and other obstacles
Canadian troops landed on Juno Beach under enemy's heavy fire
roars of thunders
heavy rainfalls
of
grenades
artillery
mortars shells
pounded on their heads.
bullets from machine guns, automatic assault riffles
weaved in the air
plowed up the sand
punched though human flesh
soldiers shouted in chaos
they charged ahead
they shot
they ran
they ducked
they crawled on stomachs
they sealed themselves low on the ground
many fell down
the injured
some cried in pain
others moaned in distress
bodies of the death were strewn on the beach
some corpses were blown up again by mortar shells or artillery
body parts were scattered everywhere
three hundred and forty young Canadians lost their lives in the raid on the D day
many of them were from Québec
they came to liberate France - their ancestors' land
but they fell down shortly before the Victory Parade in Paris
at least
their dream came true
and they wouldn't be lonely
to rest in peace on the land of their root
Thao Chuong
2017-08-04
7 Years Ago
@ Jim
I awoke to a beautiful sunny day
I was feeling a bit cloudy though
Haa..What did you take the night before? -maybe too much wine and sex...Oh no, I hope your cloudy mind wouldn't come from the consume of too much drug- lol
7 Years Ago
No drugs for me. Not even any prescribed medication. Addictive pain killers would be a bummer which seem to kill many people and celebrities.
Just beer is good by me and no hard liquor.
I probably act like I'm on drugs though, he he.
Nice Tribute to the unfortunate ones Viet!
7 Years Ago
Good for you, Jim. Also thanks for your nice comment
Here is my words of the night from your thought of addictive painkillers. Sleep tight, my friend.
The Correlation Between Human's Pain and the Painkiller
healthy mind - decent thought
decent thoughts - easy living
easy living - simple life
simple life - nice smile
nice smile - luring attraction
luring attraction - cozy relationship
cozy relationship - sweet love
sweet love - erotic sex
erotic sex - wrecking back
wrecking back - addicted drugs
addicted drugs - foggy mind
foggy mind - illusive thought
illusive thought - uneasy living
uneasy living - complicated life
complicated life - nasty smile
nasty smile - spiteful reaction
spiteful reaction - vicious hatred
vicious hatred - rotten soul
rotten soul - burning hell
in another word
painkiller kills the pain
but makes the mind become foggy
also sinks the life into the burning hell of eternal sufferings
Thao Chuong
2017-08-04
7 Years Ago
The Gravemaker
With each shovel
He places the dirt aside
Deeper into the ground
Laying way for room
To rest the remains
Thump
WIth each shovel
He replaces the dirt
Allowing it to breathe
So the soul it will keep
7 Years Ago
Being self employed I haven't had to experience this to awful much.
TGIF
Friday!
Friday!
I’ve been waiting
waiting a long time for you
Lets have a fish Fry Friday
Saturday morning here we go
we’re having fun now
Saturday night beer
with a cheer
Sunday morning
starting to relax
lazy Sunday afternoon
I’m kicked back now
no worries
Monday around the corner
I feel a sense of dread
I’ll be back in the line
trying to earn some bread
why does Friday have to be ruined by Monday
Jim Taylor Friday the 5th of August 2016
7 Years Ago
Jim-
When I'm finished
With a stinking week
I greet Saturday
With open arms
It's my bath day
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon everyone.
@ Danl: Your pen has been sharper, so is our poetry. You have successfully blended your black sense of humour and your provoking thoughts. Your poem The Gravemaker is a clear evidence,
@ Jim: Haa.. Your poem TGIF is light and nice to read. It gave an easy "aftermath" smile
Thanks both Danl and Jim for making the weekend more restful.
Here is my response to Jim's TGIF
Weekdays and Weekend of a Young Worker's
on the first day
of each of his workweek,
time is clearly moving very slow.
he always starts counting,
while his powerful "racing sport" car is leisurely crawling in the morning rush-hour traffic jam.
on each Monday,
he feels as if he were a mule pulling a heavy cart upward
in a dauntingly long journey
from the bottom
to the top
of
a very stiff hill.
nonetheless,
as he proceeds,
he gains his momentum
finally, he hears a loud noise on the rumbling metal tracks and a joyful whistle,
here it comes,
he sees from a corner of a curve
a heavy freight train's approaching its final station.
he sighs then shouts in a cheerful voice:
"Jay!
Thanks God It's Friday."
what the heck is he excited about?
he has to work like a horse for five days a week.
(he is blindly made-believe he has to work to "make a living".)
he ain't aware that he is selling his life, instead.
he is dying bit by bit,
as every second,
every minute,
every hour,
every day...
goes
by.
by the way,
why the hell does he thank God for his rest?
if
God
had anything
to do with his exhausting workweek,
then God must be blamed for His unproductive labor
that has led to human's five workdays each week
.
anyhow, today is Friday.
in this afternoon,
after work,
he'll
go to a strip club,
take couple mugs of beer,
pick up a sexy prostitute to his apartment,
and have sex 'til he'll exhaustively drops dead onto his bed .
then
he'll sleep for the next two days off
recharge full energy for his battery
and get ready for next Monday.
what's a viciously repeating cycle,
in which a young man has wasted his life to work but not to live.
Thao Chuong
2016-08-05
7 Years Ago
In response to Jims TGIF and Viets Weekdays & weekends - here is an earlier post of mine :-)
Itchy Feet
Home, car, work,
Work, car, home, cook, sleep
Home, car, work,
Work, car, home, cook, sleep
Five days gone
Come weekend
Home, clean, wash, sleep
Home, car, shop,
Shop, car, home, sleep
Cook, vac, iron
Ad infinitum
365 days a year
Less 35 days
Including bank hols
330 days of repeat.
No wonder we get the wanderlust.
The need to experience different
The need to rest, relax, unwind
Different places, different faces
No longer a caged animal.
JEM 060316
7 Years Ago
Thanks Jane and Viet
Viet the strip club part got me. he ha bbbaaaaaaaaaaaa
I do notice that Friday frenzy energy in the air if I'm in the city on Friday. People kind of going crazy. Cant blame them I guess.
Friday frenzies
That Friday energy
it’s in the air
out on the street
the boulevard is singing
swinging to the rhythm
like frenzied honey bees swarming
huge ice cream cones float by
boom boxes pounding to the ground
look at those clowns
people in a hurry
in a scurry
on a fast treadmill
eyes in a trance
zombie-fied
don’t drop your French fries
get out of my way
its Friday I earned it
I deserve it
time to blow my mind
then bide my time
hit the stores
hit the bars
lets over indulge
watch that bulge
get my life back
run a red light
don’t get uptight
Jim Taylor 8/5/2016
7 Years Ago
I want to savor my daily work
Not wishing the week away
I want each day to matter
Even in a very small way
7 Years Ago
We should refer to age as levels
So when you're at level 80
It sounds more badass
Than being an old person
7 Years Ago
Thanks Jane, Jim, and Danl
@ Jane: You've mentioned "car" six times in your poem Itchy Feet. It seems you drive and don't walk on weekdays and weekends. I wonder how your feet would become itchy -lol.
@ Jim: "run red light" Are you dead or alive?
@ Danl: whenever man reaches his eighty. He has both bald head and bad ass -lol
How Do I Free My Mind from the Labyrinth of Thoughts?
I let my mind take a short break
about half an hour
everyday
I
close my eyes
and try to get rid of all thoughts
by focusing on my breathing
most of the times
it works
I feel very relaxed
as if I reached god's peaceful heaven
at
the core
of my inner-self
sometimes
I
get lost
in the labyrinth
of my sundry thoughts
the air's stuck in my chest while I'm breathing
my mind is foggier than a cold mirror
mistily
condensed
when warm breaths blown on it
in such a disturbing situation
some people prefer
to take
drugs,
alcohol,
or any other substance
to clear off their cloudy mind
as they thought it would ease their burden
on the contrary, the aftermath makes them feel worse
also it drives their minds deep down into darkness
myself
I would beg for sex
(like any soldier does to release his metal pressure
the night before he's sent to a battle front).
if my request is rejected, I'd use words as a sword to cut a hole through the labyrinth
and let my mind sail freely on the rough sea of sundry thoughts
then land onto the wasteland
of
poetry
Thao Chuong
2016-08-04
7 Years Ago
Good evening everyone
@ Danl: Thanks for sharing your thoughts twice today. About your comment: "Most artists die before their time" Haa...Are you still alive or do you die before your time? LOL
About your quote: " Egos are shields", I think ego is like eggshell -very fragile and when it's broken the yolk will be totally spilled out.
Have a good evening,
My thought of the day is about politics.
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Political Nausea: the Would-be Naked Emperor Vs. the Potential Unclothed Empress
worse than two spouses
fighting
in
a broken marriage
and about to divorce,
their hostile war of words has been increasingly furious
like a raging wildfire
totally out of control
he talks
she talks
none would listen to each other
he's
nastily pointing his middle finger
and accusing her
of
being
political corrupted
a "world-class liar"
taking foreign bribery to sell her country
she's
striking back
in the same manner.
calling him a racist and sexist
blasting him as bigot dividing the country
both sides have tried their best
to
get
your attention
your support
and eventually your votes
why don't you turn off the TVs and internet
to
save
your ears from being tortured
and your minds from being infested
by
the rubbish which they've been hurling at each other.
Thao Chuong
2016-08-07
7 Years Ago
Viet-
Many artists die before their time
Seeking fame and fortune
Eluding them with every stroke
Continuing to die
WIth every canvas
Until the day they find rest
Poor in heart and pocket
Unknown forever
7 Years Ago
A Fractured Fairytale
He said.
She said.
America
is torn asunder,
trampled
beneath
two enormous egos.
7 Years Ago
Dueling the ruling
I propose that all these debates
be settled with a game of chess
wouldn’t that be a True Test
a test of intelligence and judgment
or maybe we should just stick to checkers
or a game of luck
truth in words has never worked
better yet an old fashion duel
the way Burr and Hamilton did it
winner take all
although I would hope for a tie
with both laid out on the ground
as we wait for the next pshco babbler
Jim Taylor 8/8/2016
7 Years Ago
Thanks Danl, Karen and Jim. Have a restful evening
@ Danl: "Many artists die before their time". As an amateur"artist, It felt very itchy to read your poem -lol.
@ Karen: I think that it is more about the power than an issue of egos.
@ Jim: Haa...You're back to your black humor. I enjoyed it.
Danl. Here is the echo to your poem from my itchy mind -lol.
Do You Wana Be an Artist? Why?
many modern artists defensively reject education in fine art.
some have clearly stated that formal training would have a negative impact
on their creation.
also
it
would
put them in a box
and destroy their imagination.
some have said,
no need to learn
how
to
hold a pencil
and draw on a piece of paper.
as a result, they absolutely have no clue
about the very basic painting techniques and tips
(such as
stretching a canvas
mixing colour on a palette
using different types and sizes of paintbrushes
knowing how to apply various media: crayons, pastel, watercolour, oils, acrylic.)..
in another word, they have
no skills,
no concept,
no basic knowledge of fine art.
they can neither draw nor paint .
however, they always claim
they're proud
of
being
full-time artists.
most of those are digital photographers
who have spent most of their living time in marketing.
they've tried
to
sell
"en masse"
cheap prints of their digitally-manipulated photos
for the general public and businesses to fill blank walls at home and offices.
they intentionally ignore
that
creating art requires an artistic mind
of wild imagination and high creativity
on the other hand
"making money" needs a business mentality and excellent marketing skills.
some of those "modern" artists may have a fat wallet but an empty canvas,
regrettably they are dying to make a living,
not
to create something meaningful in fine art.
do you wana be an artist?
why?
Thao Chuong
2016-08-08
7 Years Ago
Morning all.
Egos and power. Very dangerous combination.
Artists and Photographers. It's all in the eye of the beholder.
Self Promotion...
Light at the end of the tunnel.
We make our own light at the end of the tunnel
You work hard to achieve those results
You fine tune what you do
You create your own perfection
You hone your skills
You publicise
You get out there
You make yourself known
You find your niche
You sell
you create
You sell
You create
Have I done any of a the above
No
Have I sold anything
No
lol
JEM 090816
7 Years Ago
Good evening everyone.
Jane and Danl: Thank you for sharing your poem and your thought. Without you, I would talk to myself as if I were in a mental institution -lol.
Here is my sundry thought in response to Joe's question and Don's thought from Joe's thread "Why Do we fight?" . (I re-post here for my own record).
To Fight or Not to Fight: Do We Have a Choice?
Human beings - in our nature - always dream of living in peace,
because no one wants to risk his life going to war
and die
on a battlefield.
Unless, he is forced to do so in self-defense
against an outside invader
who is trying
to
occupy his country
seize his land
burn his home
take his life
rape his wife
kill his parents
and turn his kids into slaves
Unfortunately, mankind has been always suffered from endless wars
from the far past to the modern era
from East to West
empires with powerful armies have attacked
and/or occupied weaker nations
for
more lands
more wealth
more manpower (for slavery or cheap labor)
and most importantly for more natural resources
To maintain peace, security, and their luxury living
in
their
own homeland,
those emperors, conquerors, the governing class, and the rich
have always conducted wars somewhere else .
they have robbed the last piece of bread
from
the hungry peasants, the low class, and the poor
in their occupied territories.
Alas, those citizens of many highly developing nations in the West
have conveniently ignored
that
in the recent past
and at the present time
their "peaceful" nations have been conduced modern warfare
not only
through the old phase of military invasion
but also in the new scope of economic overrun
Their powerful armies and experienced troops of skillful business entities
have continuously raided many weak and poor countries
in the "so-called" third world
to
loot
both natural resources
also to exploit cheap labor.
It is so obvious
that
you - the invaders have a calculative choice
whenever you decide to attack others for your own greed
they - defenders have no choice but to respond
in self-defense
for
their basic survival needs.
Ah, many of you have been brainwashed by the manipulative propaganda machine
of newspapers, TVs, radios, and internet
to make believe
you're always right to fight for your freedom and your homeland security.
Thao Chuong
2017-08-09
7 Years Ago
Hi DANL and VIET.
Crazy Cat
New cat installed
10 years old
Silver Tabby
Two white Tennis Socks
Two white school socks
In for a day
Heavy boxes moved
Cat Flap
GONE
WHOOSH!
Missing
Eighth day
Silver Tabby in
Settled home.
Purrs and scents
Crazy cat
7 Years Ago
Your thought rings true Viet.
I was sentenced to 48 straight hours
of watching main stream media news
with powdered sugar donuts on the side
the whole time without a water break
and a deep voice saying wake up wake up
7 Years Ago
Good evening all.
@ Danl: Give 'em a bread, they eat for a day - give 'em a gun, they loot and eat for a lifetime
@ Jane: Your Crazy cat gave me a soft break
@ Jim: It must be the call of nature. You must have your pants wet, if you don't response to it -lol.
Here my thought for the day.
The Ones Who Don't Fight Likely Get Killed First
(However I'd Rather Be Killed than Pick up a Fight and Kill the Innocents)
unarmed men,
women,
children,
elderly,
handicapped
who are not combatants
but often suffer the most casualties in a war.
they often get caught in the cross-fires.
in addition,
it is likely
any civilian's facility
is
a much easier target
than a poorly-guarded military installation.
therefore, the preferable strategy
which any army would do
is
to creating a great fear factor
also to immobilize daily activities, the support system and the main supplies of its enemy
its troops often raid and destroy the people's livelihood and all infrastructures of the targeted country
(such as farmlands, rice fields, crops, factories, roads, bridges, utility-facilities, etc.)
military operations are often carried out in various forms
either direct landings and attacks
sabotage by special forces
or
bombings and airstrikes days and nights
launchings of mortar shells, artilleries, missiles from miles away.
even they are unarmed and not directly engaged in any battle
civilians most-likely get skilled or injured
in their homes, on streets, at markets, on public transportation, or at other crowded places...
in their hamlets,
their villages,
their cities,
I was there,
as an eyewitness,
in South Vietnam - the horrible hell
during
the only war,
which the Unite States of America lost in her combat history
while I am wring these lines
I could feel it as if it were yesterday
dreadful destruction, unbearable sufferings, and easy deaths
still
tear my heart,
numb my mind,
chill my backbones.
I'd like to share with you my own lesson
never
be involved
in any war with the US of A
mainly because, you end up being a loser
even
when you fight along side
as an ally of Uncle Sam
you'd better be careful to watch for your back.
sooner or later,
he'll
sell you
to his enemy
either for his own interests
or especially to save his own skin.
in case,
you have no choice.
you'd better dig your own grave,
and also bury your own county.
before you pick up a fight against the most powerful Superpower on earth.
Thao Chuong
2016-08-10 .
7 Years Ago
Just walk on your side of the street
Or the other side
Fart in the incoming breeze
Or the wind from behind
Don't look up or down
Just straight ahead
Don't laugh, smile or wink
Don't nod and keep going
Ignore the world
It will eventually go away
7 Years Ago
Ask
When everything you did
and try to do
amounts to nothing
or even worse.. .
And the nothings you do
amounts to everything – the hard weight
PRESSING, HARD
upon your soul
killing you cold
hurting your conscience.. .
your mind
our conscience
as one
The harmed greater humanity
bringing sadness, anger, derision
bringing us all, the tears inside!
as others, the speechless
quiet
look, and can no longer cry
As you seek
Do you seek to blame others?
Do you seek to blame God?
or have you been taken
owned and controlled
by the devil from hell
bringing us hell?
again and again
Are you
demanding answers when you have none
Off loading it all
Again and again
as spirits wain
As others simply blame
blaming us all
And the endless die
the silent cry the silent cries
again the question is
why?
why do we have no answers?
Again we have to ask..
why do we so often fail?
Why do we ALL so often fail?
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
When the questions go deep, into humanity
when compassion and mercy bring risks
do we walk away?
what monsters control our lives?
Ask of ourselves and others
7 Years Ago
Good morning all.
@ Jason: Welcome back "home sweet-n-sour home" of provoking thoughts. Thanks for sharing your poem ASK which has raised a lot of questions.
I don't know if anyone could have found any answer from this thread. BTW: I know nothing about you nor your intentions here, mate. I myself think each time we exchange our thoughts we raise more and more questions and create certain friction. However, I believe it is a good exercise for my mind, because I can learn a lot from other artists/poets like you.
@ Danl: Your shot words carry a lot of weigh. Haa..I meant your "short" words.
Have nice day to all
Here is my thought in response to Jason's question: Do you seek to blame God?
GOD SAVE OUR SOUL
(To Those True Believers)
hello
hell..o...
may I ask?
are YOU there?
hello
hell..o...
hell..oo..!
where are YOU?
do YOU hear me?
hello
hell..o...
hell..oo..!
anyway
it's likely.
YOU aren't there.
but I don't know for sure
I myself don't believe in YOUR existence
(therefore, neither have I ever asked for YOUR help
nor I have blamed YOU for my own misfortune).
if YOU get blamed by someone
it
must be
YOUR followers
those believers who have sent their endless prayers in distress
and have never gotten any response from YOU
I am afraid
I cannot swallow the belief
that
he -who commits wrongdoings -
(the so-called sins in YOUR own term)
must pray and beg YOU for YOUR help to ease his guilt.
I believe
he should give his victims some compensation and ask his victims for their forgiveness
also he'd better correct his own mistake by himself.
Where are YOU?
please demand YOUR followers to stop bugging YOU and exploiting YOUR kindness of easy clemency
and also ask them to learn how to cope with their own hardship
by
themselves
with their own hands.
if YOU do it
there would be less sins
and the world would have become YOUR Garden of Paradise
for mankind to live in peace while they're alive
GOD SAVE OUR SOUL!
Thao Chuong
2016-08-11
7 Years Ago
Evenin' All
MAN
Money Is not the Root of all Evil
Man is
Beware the beast for it is man,
Give him not power
Give him not wealth
It turns the sane into a lunatic
Give him not weapons
Give him not artillery
He will gladly destroy
All that is good
He will have neither empathy
nor conscience
For he has evolved
He has become
JEM 110816
7 Years Ago
Living easy, livin' free
Season ticket, on a one, way ride
Asking nothing, leave me be
Taking everything in my stride
Don't need reason, don't need rhyme
Ain't nothing I would rather do
Going down, party time
My friends are gonna be there too
http://www.letras10.com/ac-dc/traducao-musica/ac-dc/ac-dc-highway-to-hell
7 Years Ago
The Small, The Big and Midground
Look up and see the insane
Look down and feel the pain
Look up and feel the hunger
Look down and feel the anguish
Here in the midground
Overwhelming
Helplessness
Dispair
Look down
More than you look up
The burning question is..
When will it stop.
JEM 120816
7 Years Ago
Jane-
If we decide to become insane
Crazy in the membrane
We must be paid for it
Otherwise
We will be locked up
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon everyone. Thanks Jane, Rodrigo, and Danl
@ Jane: You've said very well in the poem Man and the poem The Small, The Big and Midground. I really liked to read them. Please keep your poetic momentum.
"When will it stop?" is the burning question for mankind. I don't know whether we can get out of our own mess.
@ Rodrigo: Highway to Hell is a good song. I like the flow of the lyrics. I think Satan's eternal hell is purely a scarecrow that was intentionally created with the purpose of numbing humans' minds and turning us into sheep. Fear gives the governing class and religion leaders an effective weapon to control us.
@ Danl: You have had a lot of patience and courage. It ain't easy to go through your thousands of failures to achieve your success. It's a unique lesson for younger folks those who don't have much experience of coping with failure.
Winning Rewards and Losing Penalties
he has reached to the top.
no more competition,
it sounds unfair.
but the winner takes all:
the bronze, the silver, and the gold medals
it's very common
that only the guy, who wins the game.
could have the rights
to
decide:
who is right,
who is wrong,
who should be praised,
who must be blamed.
after he defeats everyone
he holds the "just cause";
he has the truth;
he creates the laws;
he is the justice.
he rules the world.
so often
the winner puts on trial
and executes the loser
for war-crimes against humanity.
even though,
it is evidently clear,
that raw blood of his victims from the genocide
is still dripping off from his both tainted hands.
sadly, the winner of a war
is
often
a powerful bully,
a ruthless invader,
a malicious oppressor,
or a dominant conqueror.
not much left
for
the loser
(who has no choice but to defend his survival.)
the loser
if he is "lucky"
to be spared by the "compassion and mercy" of his winner.
he must pay the hefty price
by
serving
his former enemy
as a slave for the rest of his life.
wouldn't it be no shameful and less painful
for
him to
fight well,
die free on a battlefield,
and rest in peace on his ravaged homeland?
Thao Chuong
2016-08-12
7 Years Ago
Perseids Sky
We built a bed
on the back deck,
with cushions and pillows
and quilts.
We watched the starry sky
for hours, waiting
for silvery streaks
to spring from Perseus' loin.
They come so fast this year,
that ancient cyclical dross pulled
across the heavens by
Comet Tuttle-Swift
burning brilliantly through our atmosphere.
The turn of Jupiters' orbit
has pulled it quite close.
We squeal and kick
when we spot them,
like the giddy girls we once were,
causing the bats swoop
in low with curiosity.
Karen Newell
8/13/16
7 Years Ago
Hot squirrely days
dog days of summer
they can make a person
well quite squirrely
try to be cool
on a hot August afternoon
the ground squirrels
seem to be even extra erratic
so indecisive trying to cross
a hot black top road
it was so hot this afternoon
I may have had delusions
brought on by a heat stroke
I saw a squirrel with sneakers on
running across a black top road
way to hot for little bare feet
Jim Taylor 8/13/2016
7 Years Ago
Thanks you for sharing your thoughts and poems, Danl, Karen and Jim. Have a restful weekend to all of you.
@ Danl: "Peace is not a victory" - Very true, my friend. Peace is a status in which all conflicts are dealt with - by non-violent solutions. I like your pretty painting and your very touchy quote "Tears are worth a thousand words".
@ Karen: Your Perseids Sky is an excellent combination between human's romantic instinct, our curiosity, and the mystic universe. You have brought my mind back to the peaceful nature.
@ Jim: with the "Hot squirrely days", you have dipped your readers' minds into the funny sauce of your black humor.
Here is my echo to Karen's and Jim's moment of going back to the nature
Vaporized into the Hot Air on a Sizzling Summer Day
no rain for may weeks
extremely hot and dry
by three o'clock
this afternoon
under
the full shade
of the fully grown "cord-crew" willow tree
I leaned backward to rest my back
against
wooden panels of a garden bench.
lawn in my backyard has been turned
into light brown,
same
as
the colour of dry sand.
it made me feel,
as if I were sitting inside a desert.
I looked through the green canopy of the willow tree.
I hope,
I could watch
a hawk slowly circling on its wings, then swiftly descending for its prey,
or any cloud leisurely wandering about,
or anything else interesting on the blue sky.
instead
I was blinded
by the bright sunlight,
I immediately closed my eyes.
but it was too late, I could still see a flash and a red curtain all over my face
a hot day like this
it
made
me feel
as if I were slowly vaporized
and disappeared into the hot air.
I was dreaming of a heavy rainfall
pouring down,
and letting me float back
to my originally liquid base of water.
Thao Chuong
2016-08-13
7 Years Ago
Some poems shock the writer I'm sure, Viet it was a damning endictment on humanity's endless utter failure, its inability to bring a solution, and our complete focus on self interest and the need to blame others and offload it all, not a pretty poem. Psychopathic humanity. Blaming God, debasing God, in reality worshiping the devil, worshipping himself above all, the beast of all beasts and create hell and act as only monsters could whilst blaming others
Dreams...
A united family of nations
each with its own history and cultures
Each with
it own failures and achievements..
We all had dreams in the aftermath of world wars
and the end of apartheid and gradual fall of all racisms and hatreds
equality for all!?
a world giving to each other?
But as some evils were removed
others festered
in the hearts and minds
and many new ones were encouraged
as others grew
and souls turned bad
once again
To those living a hell created by others
may we always
show solidarity
in whatever ways
small or large
that we can...
To those who spend their lives
in acts of love and charity
bringing whatever comfort
relief and aid
to those who suffer
we salute you!
To those who bring Hope
we honour you
To those who seek to unify our worship
of God
the Great Spirit
of creation
the alpha and the omega
we do pray for you
because prayers of unity
unite us
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon. Thanks Vivian, Jason, and Danl for your art, your poetry, and the dialogues. Have a restful day.
@ Vivian:Nice to see your dropping by. I like your nice painting and your description which you have used the poem Storm-Wind by Boris Pasternak- a renowned Russian Poet/Novelist - the author of Doctor Zhivago. it's a good match for art and poetry/
@ Jason: It an awesome poem that reflects your burning passions in both social/human related issue and your religious belief in god. Good to see you sharing your provoking poetry on this thread.
@ Danl: TI must thank you for not letting this thread buried deep under the big pile of the discussion board. You may lost some sweats or some gray substance to do it -lol.
People see things
Different in every way
Like looking through
A kaleidoscope
I could find the wisdom in your above verse.
Some people sweat, others prefer to spill blood for unity. As soon as, the goal is achieved, they can have a just-cause and good cause for their past action.
An echo to Jason's Dream.
Your Beautiful Dream
of
Livin' Under the Unity of One Nation on Earth
and Worshipin' Only One God
Man often hopes for what he could achieve within his lifetime.
what is apparently out of his hands.
he mostly can do nothin'
but dreams of it.
why
not dream?
dreams sometimes come true.
PEACE is the mankind's most essential dream,
'kuz he is always at wars.
he endlessly dreams
dreams..
and dreams...
and brings it with him to his final rest in PEACE.
(As a human being and a true believer in HIS OWN GOD.)
not only would he be dreamin' of peace
in which mankind livin'
in harmony
and unity
under
only one nation on earth.
but also, he'd be dreamin' of all believers
livin' under the unity of all religions
and worshipin' only one god
on
the same heaven.
His dream of one confederation for all human beings on earth
could be realistically achieved
through conquering wars
after
an empire defeats all other nations
and puts the world under her total control
voila! the dream comes true
However, his dream of all religions on earth
which would unite and worship only one god
is
certainly
a piped dream.
Would you be still dreaming about unity of religions
If you have ever asked yourselves these very basic questions:
- which god would become "the only god" under the religious unity:
your Christian God?
or his Muslim God?
or her Hindu God?,
or which other one?
et cetera ...?
???
?."
- also will you be ready to renounce your own god and worship the "newly unified god"?
Now you know
the only conflict
with which humans cannot deal
by
any peaceful solution
is the fatally huge disparity in many religious beliefs in different gods
Practically there are lots of hopes
all dreams could come true so long as human beings try our best to achieve these
except
the only dream
about a unified God
this holy matter is way out of man's hands
To
all of you
those true believers
please ask yourselves whether you really believe
that your own god would save all human beings' souls (including those worship other gods).
God Is Greatest!
Allahu Akbar!
Amen!
Thao Chuong
2016-08-14
7 Years Ago
Lizard man
sitting on the front porch
looking at another hot August day
feeling good just to know
I got my morning chores done
a wise strategy to have
I don’t want to be working
in a hot afternoon sun
sipping my large ice tea
with extra ice and lemon slice
enjoying the moment
sticking to my personal rules
no beer before 4 pm
I spied way down the road
what seemed to be a large lizard
he was walking upright like a human
I was quite apprehensive as he drew closer
As he approached near my house I could see
it was a man enjoying way to much summer sun
no shirt no shoes
wearing only a g-string
face like wrinkled dark leather
with a reptilian gaze
body the texture of an old leather boot
skin like an old lizards hide
I offered him ice tea
but he just kept walking
maybe I’ve been watching
to many old Japanese sci-fi flicks
Jim Taylor 8/14/2016
7 Years Ago
Viet-
God doesn’t give us what we want
God creates the opportunity
For us to get what we need
7 Years Ago
As the presidential vote draws near
One must only adhere to the fact
Millions of votes across the country
Will be affected by voter fraud
One will fail with honor
The other will win by deceit
7 Years Ago
Things never run smoothly
But as long as you can laugh about it
It all adds to the entertainment!
7 Years Ago
I have been quiet for a long time, but have been a loyal reader to everyone who contributes thoughts to Viet's blog. July and August always set met back--deaths of my mother-in-law and brother, coupled with the deaths of my own mother and father-in-law--all within 2 years--make me sentimental. Anyway, as I wrote in my book--Agnello by Agnello: Striking the Heart of an Artist's Conessions, here's my recollection...
"This loss needs time to heal. Maybe a real hurt never really heals. Maybe each of us who lives on chooses to sit back, alone in a silent room, contemplating his own fate, probing into what was, wrestling with how to go on, resenting the knowledge that the world we once enjoyed has forever changed. The pieces have fallen. Only the brave dares to pick them up, to rebuild. I’m confident that each of us dares to learn how to get healed.
But, right now the deep freeze is too deep. I can’t seem to find the bottom. For some of us, the healing process is not so easy. We stumble along to learn the way. So, please, as we sort through the rubble, feeling rather empty, be patient; give us more time. "
John Lennon sings words in the Beatles song In My Life (track #2, album Rubber Soul) that stand for all who might from time to time reflect on the past, remembering with both sadness and reverence the people and places that enriched our lives:
All these places had their moments
With lovers and friends
I still can recall
Some are dead and some are living
In my life I've loved them all
Though I know I'll never lose affection
For people and things that went before
I know I'll often stop and think about them
In my life I love you more
And, I’ve been thinking about them all ever since. The years breed long memories. I wish we could have one more meeting together. There is still so much to talk about. Other close relatives and friends, too, have since departed after those fateful years of the mid-1990’s, bringing home fond memories of “people and things that went before,” all of which contributed meaning to a deep-rooted past.
Yes, I have been thinking about them…yeah, ‘been thinking about all of them…
Thank you for your ear.
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon Jim, Danl, Jane, and Kenneth. thanks for sharing your thoughts. Have a good night.
@ Jim I like your good idea "no beer before 4 pm." - May I add "no sex on a hot day"? lol.
@ Danl: I think God didn't create man, It was those old wise men who created God to ease their fear after death.
@ Jane: You're very smart to look at the sunny side of darkness.
@ Kenneth: Nice to see you dropping by and read your thought. I am sorry to hear about your loss. Deaths of our loved ones are always emotionally stressful to cope with. But it is more stressful to watch them dying on a hospital bed. I hope you would find or do something to ease your pains during the mourning period.
Have a restful afternoon to all;
Description
WHO AMONG YOU IS REDUCED TO THIS?, 2000, oil on canvas, 72.25 in. x 50.25 inches.
******Power is woman who defeats fatherhood with the best of weapons--slanted laws, designed to protect children, are carried out by false-hearted judges, extending a license that declares "thou shall take..."
And the children gaze, watching the melt down from fire-red to pallid despair.
Fallin' out of Love (Song Lyrics)
uh
uh...uh...
out of love
out of luck
out of life
you want me
fold my tent
take my bag
get da hell out of here
you say
"go away
hit the road, Jack!"
nah
nah...nah..
falling out of love
no more romance
out of marriage
no more sex
no more fun
ah
ah...ah...
you turn your back
dun wanna look
at me
but you say
it's over
it's over
go to hell, Jack
nuh
nuh..nuh...
I dunnu
what the heck are you tulkin' abou..
you call me Jack
it ain't my name
it's my bed
it's my house
they're my kids
it's my life
you wanna get all.
nah...
nah... nah...
it ain't over
it ain't over
i'm goin'na fight
a long war
'til my death
to get back my life
oh
oh... oh...
ain't on my side
no longer my lover
my wife no more
oh satan
in your hell
I'm goin'na fight
'til the end of my life
uh
uh...uh...
out of love
out of luck
out of life
Thao Chuong
2016-08-15
7 Years Ago
Kenneth-
When the sun has set
And darkness appears
There is nothing
Not even a candle
That can take its place
7 Years Ago
Misfit
a fine night at the
misfit mystic lounge
next door to the demoed
old town hall
just ask that fly on the wall he was there
no one seemed to notice or really care
all were doing fine
misfits among misfits
it all seemed to fit
like a glove made just for a special occasion
such as a night at the opera house
with shoes on the wrong feet
most of the talk was about the misfit ball
the crowning of the misfit prince and princess
Michael and Misty
two misfits married in holy matrimony
followed by the misfit guest speaker
Mumford Misfit
with applause followed by a short pause
then the serving of pickles and peanut butter
misfits do matter
let the so called regular people chatter
it don’t matter if you’re a little tattered
Jim Taylor 8/16/2016
7 Years Ago
Entering the beyond....
Wait your turn
Others are dying before you
Be patient
You are fifth in line
Your turn will come soon
Don't push or shove
Keep your place
People are waiting behind
You are number three
Be patient
Only a few more to go
As slow as it may seem
The line is moving
You are now number two
One more to go
Be patient
Now is your turn
RIP
7 Years Ago
let me join in the mirth Dani, There's a slight chance you could come back, er... reborn as you was long ago, tiny little thing, gurgling and kicking, or as another, a big big whale, a hippo or kangaroo, pooing everywhere... hopping around... or perhaps just as you was... or perhaps you just become invisible.. . farting breezes that smell of....
roses?
the gates are saying "full today, come back tomorrow"
St Peter has a church full
singing n prayin
hope you can sing
hope you can pray
Hallelujah!
Hallelujah!
(pr. Hah - lay - looooo - ya! ... . . sounnds a like, "how i loove ya", how i loove ya" ma sweet... oh um )
at least have a nice honest face
or perhaps a good soul
is all you need!?
departing and arriving
all at once
its the way to go
but only when its time
He will let you know!
Amen
7 Years Ago
Why are their laws for Americans and not Muslims in America?
The sign reads
No hats or caps
Allowed inside
Camera must
See your face
A woman wearing
A burka and veil
Enters undetained
Based on beliefs
Waiting in line
The explosion
Kills nine
7 Years Ago
it'S fUN tO fART....
I enjoy flatuation
Leaking without vibration
Just the right allocation
Blasting the elimination
Into clouds of intoxication
Stopping short of liquidation
7 Years Ago
MORNING ALL.
DANL We need you in evacuation processes lol.
Helloooooooo Jasey Babe.
The Magnets
Like a pair of fuschia pants on a washing line
Amongst greys and blacks
Like a sunflower in a field of weeds
Head and shoulders above the rest
Some people are the shiniest of stars
Huge amongst the pinheads of light
The whole room illuminates
As they make their entrance known
We sit back and watch the magic unfold
As a crowd begins to gather
Each vying for their attention
Just a touch, a nod, a look, will suffice
What power these people have
What good they could do
What influence they could have
To change the world for better
JEM 180816
7 Years Ago
Danl,
Yes, you are right. The mourning is over, but as my passage says, memories are secure. These deaths provided me with much theme in painting from the mid-1990's, but life moves on. And I have...
7 Years Ago
Tumble on
When the wind blows
and the tumble weeds roll
it seems to create a dream state
they roll by in unison
as all part of a brown prickly ocean
free as the wind on the open dry lands
in the vast open lands
there’s nothing stopping them
just those man made obstacles
called fences
journey over at least for a while
the tumbleweed freedom flyers
come upon the scene
they lift the ones that are stuck
tossing them over the fences
some are as big as cars
caught by the wind again
and gone with the wind
Jim Taylor 8/18/2016
7 Years Ago
I am a child in sorrow
I cannot cry
nor can I speak
For "I am a CHILD in SORROW"
the sorrows inside a heart
the failures of humanity
Aleppo in hell
7 Years Ago
I'm so sorry I am not a poet...I love your word-pictures....
Viet, yes, thank you. I appreciated your visits to my 'dry wind'....it is a lament.....when all 'round you dries up, sigh, the thirst , the thirst, it chokes so painfully all else, even tears don't flow............
I am...@Jason....an adult in sorrow.......
Even in my flickering wind, the flickering candle light succumbs....
7 Years Ago
Vivian, you say you are not a poet but I think you write poetically.
I call what I do just putting down words, for what it's worth
a penny for my thoughts
there free pulled from the air
7 Years Ago
VIVA-
"Even in my flickering wind, the flickering candle light succumbs...."
You are a poet
And don't know it
7 Years Ago
True Color
the morning light
hit the beveled glass
on my front door window
dividing the light
into a rainbow prism
projecting the primary color spectrum
each color bleeding into the next color
projected on my white wall
as if on pure white canvas
or a movie screen
purity of color cleansed my soul
rainbow light when the conditions are right
colors fading away
as the earth moved on
after its brief stay
in its orbital journey
around the sun of brilliant light energy
to be back tommorrow
but will be slightly different
as nothing ever returns exactly the same
color show over for the day
with ever changing light
until then I will be watching shadows on the wall
primary color universe law never changes
true color is a truth not invented by man
just borrowed by painters and the like
Jim Taylor 8/20/2016
7 Years Ago
Love your image Viva.
I always lean towards yellows, golds, and oranges burnt
blending into the soft blue is nice
7 Years Ago
Thank you, Helen/aka/Jane, very much, and nice to know we could have met twice !! In Africa.....we "stayed" (their vernacular, not mine,lol) in Jo'burg and went to Nice and UK as well as teenagers taken to Umshlanga Rocks, Durban, by car, me driving, thru the Drackensurg, ommg. And, got to Oz the same route.......um: rather than take the job offer in UK - no regrets, we settled here by kind permission of the Authorities and, um, lotsa money (gone now: retirement is expensive).................hope you enjoyed Australia....why din't'cha callll??????????????..Next time !! but tempus fugit for me at 78, so, c'mon down asap.......Cheers........
Jim, thanks so much indeed. I, like you, put a lot of truth, and heart, into my works, and almost enjoy writing the Descriptions as much as painting...V.
7 Years Ago
The Fireworks Have Evolved, celebrating the anniversary,the intensity,the excitement,the love,the light,the dark,the highs,the lows,clouds,birds,castles,roses,the mystery.
Heart of a Poet
She claims
she is
no Poetess,
though I have felt
the art
and ink
she incubates
within her Soul.
Karen Newell
8/20/16
7 Years Ago
I celebrate you, too, Karen.........in loving thanks and gratefulness, for your creativity, your imagination, and heightened empathy,
and most of all, dear lady, for your POEM !! for me,oh my !!!!!!!!.
As you know, of course, Love has no rhyme or reason, and to speak in response with words or visions, is a gift to be honoured.
You have honoured me.
I love your words, your interpretation so lovely. I honour you.
Thank You So Very Much.
VIVA
7 Years Ago
Viva, Thank you for your kind words! I have always recognized you as a kindred spirit 😘💕💕
7 Years Ago
Morning Karen Viva DANL et al.
VIVA - I tried to call :-) Aus. in 78 Brisbane and Townsville, Queensland. Somehow I can imagine you as the free spirited group which stayed at the caravan park with their motorbikes and tents next to us lot in the caravan. South Africa is a beautiful country. The Drakensbergs are magnificent..The second highest waterfall in the world Tugela falls, and home to the Drakensbergs Boys Choir School..my nephew went there for a while..He will kill me but here is a clip from you tube of him...enjoy.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=1W6_GFqooRM
7 Years Ago
Thank you, Karen..........I am proud to know you too.
Jane, oops, ........I love all our 'connections' and thanks for telling me about and the vid too, your brilliant chorister, hehe, and am thinking I hope you got to Jo'burg too...it was a scintillating experience for me, though too short a stay, on assignment.......but the 'usual visitors' from head office turned up regularly, in envy ! We didn't go out on Thurs nights when all the
local 'clans' met and wandered, freeely then.......they did get hold of the Great Dane, the owner/house left to our care in his absence, and, well, something terrible happened to that dog one Thurs night........suffice to say, he walked badly for weeks, after the Vet stitched him up........Africa , what little I saw outside of our Province, is the most mystical place....the air
is full of scents I still can evoke, and the light.......ohh my........and the sunsets so astoundingly beautiful at 4K,ft up, where we were, in Houghton....a world of its own behind high
iron fences and locked gates.......there is an undercurrent of , ohhh - not trouble or evil - something 'else' that the locals understand. We drove to Botswana with our visitors.....and were
greeted in the dark depths by the local constabulary, smiling while they held on to their rifles........omg.........all very friendly, yikes. So many stories. And to think, Nice was safe the, and just up past the next cloudscape, oh yes ! It looked really nice from the pilot's seat, where I was ensconced, omgggg, hehehe.........and so it goes, and so it
7 Years Ago
Since this is a person appreciation moment, I have to say I appreciate the thread with all the individual contributors here.
Viet, thanks for what you do. I would never have done all my writings on my own without a sharing platform.
It’s just a personal thing I suppose, for the world might not be impacted or care much, but that’s okay.
Yes, and a big thanks to Maria Disley!
7 Years Ago
Appreciating Myself
I tried for many years
To fit in somewhere
Then it dawned on me
I was not made to fit in
I was made to stand out
7 Years Ago
I believe I saw you at the misfit ball
wearing a deep blue suit with yellow pin stripes
it looked about one size to big
your hat pulled down
you fit right in
and stood out
dancing the night away
7 Years Ago
JIM / DANL - We are all born square pegs in round holes, we just learn to be chameleons, blending and changing colours to suit our surroundings.
VIVA - I think we have many stories to exchange and devour and mull over and remember. OMG Botswana too - what year? Before it was all touristy and expensive? I remember eating oranges sitting on top of our old blue Landy driving through Moremi - I don't know if crocodile camp still exists but we had a big old canvas tent, our shower was a water filled 45 gallon drum in a tree, and there were no restaurants nor chalets nor hotels. It was fabulous. Have car will travel in SA - stunning, beautiful, wild, and OMG those sunsets - pinks, peaches, reds, oranges, breath taking. Beitbridge, Jo'Burg, Pretoria - those Jacarandas , Augrabies Falls- so hot you can feel your sweat evaporating, Britstown, Winterton, Colenso, Umhlanga Rocks, Uvongo, Port St Johns & Coffee Bay - a small secluded bay - wild and beautiful, Durban, Port Elizabeth, Alice , Swaziland, Kruger, Capetown, Franschoek - stunning purple Mountains, Stellenbosch, George to name a few. Your poetry is emerging VIVA. Love Life :-)
7 Years Ago
Nerdisim
I think we have come a ways
to a new horizon possibly
the nerd was once thought of as
a lowly sub species
at least back in my school daze
at some point they have been accepted
even celebrated
and surprisingly even cool
how someone so uncool
is now pretty cool
the look is even fashionable
thick glasses and high water pants
with a ridiculous whaling laugh
I must admit I use to snicker at them
well I guess the laugh is on me
I believe the misfits time
in a new age is almost here
Jim Taylor 8/21/2016
7 Years Ago
Wallflower
I was a wallflower
at the misfit ball,
standing shyly
on the sidelines.
When substance abuse
released my inhibitions
I became the life of the party,
dancing
like there was no tomorrow!
😜😜
7 Years Ago
Hi Jane,
Bophuthatswana (a self-governing Bantu territory of South Africa) was a 'destination' in those days, with fine resorts..........my , then, partner travelled often to there, and on one occasion
enjoyed the company , in flight to the tiny airstrip, maybe four passengers, of Shirley Bassey (going home?).......always good company. And Table Mountain, Cape Town..oh my...no, I did not climb it, but what was insanely beautiful was where the Indian Ocean meets the Atlantic, in one mad clash of forces of nature.....and colour: Blue meets Green, in that amazing transluscent water, so clean , always in motion, and a madness through which to sail...not recommended ! And amazingly, at St. John's College, Jo'burg, our son in his first year (of three) topped the school in Africaans......go figure, lol. What's wonderful too, is that all the travel gave me new joy in returning 'home', at the time, the UK, Gerrards Cross, Bucks : laadeedahh.
I have a painting, celebrating the pottery we collected........brb.
As to "Walk Away", these discovered by chance thoughts-in-print, seem to come along just at the right time, for me, anyway. I kept it and know now how true it is, in no uncertain terms, and how timely that you noticed it, too........a lesson. One that is very hard to ignore when faced with choices of the
heart and soul, but I can attest to its truth.........courage, in the French pronounciation......fits here - Be strong, and true to ones' self, always. (I never know where those darn apostrophies belong !!!!!!!!!!!!)
Jim: love your nerd ! more on that next time, and, thanks for visiting my page and lovely comment........
............
7 Years Ago
VIET - IT is not time to hibernate just yet...come out from under that blanket.
JIM- How right you are..The Nerd has turned lol.
KAREN - substances shmubstances, you don't need them to love life and as VIET' painting says, for "dancing in the wind"
VIVA - goie more, hoe gaan dit? I had to check my spelling it's been a loooong time lol.
I am opening that door
The heat hits you
The heady scents
Grasses damp
From the early morning dew
Drying, releasing those aromas
Almost herbal
Crickets
Doves
There is no silence
Just wonderful peacefullness
The grunt of a hippo
And oh! That cry!
My heart leaps
I am home
The fish eagle returns
JEM 220816
7 Years Ago
Yesssss..Jane, ..good morning !
( phonetics are easier to spell, lolllll, well done)
'Tis evening in the Southern Hemisphere, so, to you.....G'day Mate......the days are lengthening now, and still chilly but the arctic wind has abated, and I saw a purple crocus....always good news........but the scents are not ready to intoxicate me yet, so instead ...cin cin as darkness envelopes this pretty, ritzy, village, so terrrrribly British, with hints of brash Aussie Color . Painting in this light, when the sun is still low, is delightful....in summer, colours are bleached in the bright haze, making for brilliant abstracts, as the defined forms recede to their essence...............Cheers!!!!!
C'mon down.......wake up, Viet !!
Karen......some days I actually wish tomorrow would never come......each day is a "high"........anxiety!....I am at a party right now, here alone in my new nest, sent here into isolation until I prove worthy of the next dance by behaving myself.......impossible! Good thing I like my own company !
Viva Dancing ....Those Were The Days, My Friends .....
I
7 Years Ago
Ohhhhhhhhh, Jason............thank you so much, crying,laughing,dancing,remembering,singing,.............and grateful to have those days and dreams, music, and......the
ability to 'live the life we choose', ohhhh, yesssssssssssssssssssssss..................I am so happy to hear that again.........it is still ! inspirational to this beatnik...........
and The Wind Mariahh, ohmy ohmy............la donna mobile ...............and ever will be.............Blowing In The Wind, oh yessssssss, all so good !
https://youtu.be/3l4nVByCL44
7 Years Ago
https://youtu.be/3l4nVByCL44
sorry,the link poster earlier, doesn't link,lol
7 Years Ago
Even after all this time,
the Sun never says to the Earth,
“You owe Me”.
Look what happens with a love like that.
It lights up the whole sky.”
AWS Training
7 Years Ago
SINDHU - Hi - we need more love like that :-)
VIVA / JASE - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DiWomXklfv8
DANL - That way you can enjoy your own fart!
7 Years Ago
jane viva
search..to be lonely..searching
submerge into depths... and.... emerge... naked in your mind.. just listen to the wind, and see the skies speak in your eyes!...
http://youtu.be/Ld6fAO4idaI
how many times?
+
7 Years Ago
Thanks Jane for Streets of London, so 'telling' of the times, which are not 'a changing'.......I loved the interview too. He puts 'pop music' in its rightful place....the voice for awareness and reason. Pop Art somehow does that too, though I can't 'do' it.From listening (again and again) to those times' music, I am struck by its so unsophisticated, so not-slick, undercurrent then of expressions about man's inhumanity to man......(I had a beautiful book of images published back then by LOOK......the world view relating to that thesis). Hasn't the world changed ! Inhumanity reigns now......I deplore it.........Why do I relate more to the times I knew and how I felt then, not about politics, much 'more', to do with the times before awareness for instance of womens' roles and their dawning awareness, thanks to Gloria S., and what has eventuated for us. My head's in the (Jason) Clouds today.....the music has set me thinking. Being alone is a luxury......one can indulge in thought 24/7.........but, am so glad of this venue to find solace, inspiration, good company. The model took this pose, and I 'knew' what it meant.......
7 Years Ago
VIVA - it just gets worse, and then you get to that time in your life where you have had enough of trying and signing petitions and talking to people and you just want to escape to a quiet peaceful community away from all the crap and newspaper propaganda. It's time to take stock, review renew regenerate relax.
I am on the search, it looks like you have found yours? Enjoy.
7 Years Ago
Hi Jane, and from my own experience, I assure you good outcomes of your search.......the trick is knowing what is right for you. I just took nearly two years off reality, enjoyed every minute, in my delusion that I had my search answered, so I was on a very circuitous route to the peace, and this time I do have regrets, but they are part of it all......yes, am much more settled, now being relieved of my delusions. They made me unstable, and is just as well I am on my own, and able to think clearly now (I hope). What a long haul it has been, this life .
7 Years Ago
Discussions are an exchange
Of laziness and ignorance
Everything can be googled
And everything answered
Exchange of thoughts
Remain outside the realm
Of computer technology
With a soul
7 Years Ago
Singularity
Computer
has been fed
one million bytes
of your Art and Soul.
A feast
of your personal algorithm
feeding
its electronic knowledge,
fattening
its artificial psyche.
Discussions
exponentionally speed the rate
of Singularity.
Karen Newell
8/23/16
7 Years Ago
Singularity........." a point where all parallel lines meet." All part of the equation
of life's rhyme and reason. Our Discussions occur in a parallel universe to our
cyberlives, and contain thoughts unintelligible to google. I know where I belong.
7 Years Ago
There is only one singularity
LIke a snowflake
A fingerprint
It cannot be replicated
Duplicated or copied
It is unique in its own
A human soul
Like no other
7 Years Ago
There is no tragedy
In not selling your art
No matter
How hard you try
All have succeeded
In this failure
7 Years Ago
Ode to the weathervane
my tin weathervane
blows high up on my roof
any direction the wind blows it goes
guided by the winds unpredicted path
controlled by the wind
like a puppet on a string
moved by that mysterious wind force
they say you don’t need a weathervane
to know which way the wind blows
but it helps to be pointed in a true direction
an art formed sculpture hammered in tin
does seem to give the wind it’s yearning image
that invisible force only felt on the body and hair
or visually through cause and effect on the landscape
or my whimsical weathervane bringing a smile to my face
Jim Taylor 8/24/2016
7 Years Ago
https://youtu.be/sfrcBQU8oh0
https://youtu.be/jorJh8DTMVM
Jim, I love your weathervane and prose...compliments!! Got me thinking about
this thread recently......seems wind has played a role in a lot of our posts....a
strange phenomenon. And rather lovely how differently we all respond to the
wind........I used to love sailing with the wind at my back; I love that old
blessing.........may the wind be at your back.....such is the wind's influence on
our psyche. I love reading Cervantes' remarks about 'tilting at windmills'..........
..............about Verdi's "la donna mobile" : The woman is fickle..........And that great song::
It Is Written On the Wind........
Windmills , weathervanes, they pique our imaginings........there is no physically knowing where the wind begins to
blow, or where it will go, is there? But, we respond when touched by it, depending on its force. I did a painting called "Windmills Of My Mind", prompted , then, by my own feeling of blowing in too many directions in life, the Description being:
'Windmills Of My Mind'::: Everything I do in life - has consequences not always dreamed of.........VP' (my alter ego VP) .
I was in turmoil, and found a way through Art to express that.
The various,wonderful memebers' responses were revelationary. One such,from another kindred spirit:::
:'mystical bliss,tilting at windmills,order and passion,returning,going in circles,returning,with the light shining a grace upon me............never following the beaten straight.....yes! Always following the epic odyssey,yes,the circles - yes, complete,full,yes.......quixotic,yes,.....guided by the moon that is my talisman,yes''...............an exerpt, truly poetic, linguistically beautiful, inspired !
Here is my painting. but the link doesn't work, so it's above this post, sorrrrrrrrrrrrry..............V.
7 Years Ago
Nice painting Vivian with a lot of texture and motion. You captured it! Always good thoughts also.
The wind and breeze is a wonderful subject with an abundance of metaphors.
It's easy for me to say since I've never had my house blown away in a tornado. Like Dorothy of Oz hehe.
Or where there are a lot of high winds that become a bit miserable.
Any glimpse of diversion such as looking up at a weathervane, is a diversion from the negatives around us.
My "Ode to the weathervane" poem was inspired by someone I know who just put up a weathervane he inherited.
I've always loved them and it's on my bucket list suited for my rural area. I would like to make my own using my image.
There are not enough hours in the day.
7 Years Ago
Thank you, Jim.
The windmill never strays, yes, because it is grounded, literally. Being grounded is a great quality, but, it seems not to preclude being stationary like a windmill, may I say with respect, Danl. I am 'animate-grounded', hence the turbulence in life, as one is buffeted by the winds of change.
7 Years Ago
https://youtu.be/HxLfFOY4wQk
Stravinsky Adagio para instruments viento
7 Years Ago
Sky Fluff
it floated down
a big ball of fluff
cotton candy from the sky
landed on my shoes
creating sticky weather
wherever I tread
sweet imagination
not to cease
freeze up
or burn out
rejoicing
in many echo's
bouncing back
Jim Taylor 8/26/2016
7 Years Ago
"Sky Fluff"
Like collagen
Puffed lips
Silicone inflated
Breasts
And hair spun
Like cotton candy
7 Years Ago
Inspiration gone
come back inspiration
don’t leave me all alone
you left me with no warning
moved on like a tumbling stone
come back easy
to a lost insatiable child
I’ll be down that hill waiting
in the dark valley depths below
watching the muddy waters move slow
throw me your velvet rope lifeline
wading on the edge of night
Jim Taylor 8/26/2016
7 Years Ago
Wonderful, Jim ! Though upsetting. Loss of inspiration goes deep, as you so beautifully pronounce. I am sorry, but I have no remedy, except to say, when down like that, I revisit all my work to seek inspiration, with the purpose in mind to re-inspire myself to another, or new, understanding for the works via inspiration to re-invent them, now.......as I am......now.
7 Years Ago
Thanks Vivian, I'll pause for a little more darkness.
I have my list of melancholy music I go through many times also.
Ode to the down hearted
a little down to the bottom
it may be good for the soul
to spring back up
that’s what it’s for
up for fresh oxygen a must
those on the even keel
may not really know
nor able to understand
what others cant ignore
though they read Emily and Poe
they personally really don’t know
wallow in melancholy
like swine at the melancholy trough
once again to spring back up
always with a brief time near the top
some may be more fortunate
with events of their life
for those who are not
well I guess that’s their tough luck
Jim Taylor 8/26/2016
7 Years Ago
MORNING ALL :-)
DANL: You should live to a ripe old age then lol. Loved your response to sky fluff.
JIM: Cannot see anything wrong with your imagination...sky fluff indeed haha.
VIVA: Can you have a look through your artwork and see if you have Viet stuck to anything..He might have brushed past some oils and ended up glued....
7 Years Ago
Danl, I may cash -in all my points at some point.
Jane, Thanks for confirming my imagination is not broken since that's where creativity is born.
I'll try to Move On Up!
7 Years Ago
Mixing promises
With sweets
Hiding reality
Behind doors
A sickness
Gone uncovered
Elected
She will parish
WIthin four
7 Years Ago
LIFE
High on life
Not on drugs
need nothing
but
Air
Sun
Food
Water
Family
Friends
Laughter
& Fun
JEM 280816
7 Years Ago
LIFE
Art continues
To ruin my canvas
Darkside with black
White without color
Red igniting anger
Blue reflecting sad
Mis-mixing colors
Puddles of mud
Dripping on linen
Like tears and snot
Rushing to finish
To begin another
7 Years Ago
Jim
Inspiration Gone is so beautiful! I especially loved ever word of the second verse :)!!
7 Years Ago
Monday 19th, morning all.........it is morning here, down under.
Jane: I have searched for Viet, and he's not even hiding in the images in my Favorites, though, his spirit is with me, too..........we wait.......a gust of gusty wind will return him, fresh !!
Jim and Karen....so lovely your clouds.......
I painted this about clouds, because it's not about the clouds, as the title would assume, more to do with my own cloudy sorrowful mind on 'the day:::9/11........
Inspiration, Jim, is always there in one's psyche, and you will find it...........dig deep..........or..........speak to the clouds....I do, sigh.
7 Years Ago
Nice writings all!!!
Many ways of looking at clouds.
Thanks for the good words Karen. Your image and poem is wonderful!
Viva, Wonderful abstract painting city clouds relating to 911!
Cloud gifts
clouds a gift of the skies
seldom shy as wind blows high
ever changing form
a pleasure to the eyes
like a changing ocean tide
natures soft sculptures
teddy bears on high
pillows of the gods
free form relaxing notion
moving in slow motion
purest white
rain filled black
every grey in between
describing ones emotion
Jim Taylor 8/29.2016
7 Years Ago
Clouds come floating overhead
Bringing shades to my canvas
No longer ushering in storms
Adding texture to my colors
7 Years Ago
The Flood-
The rain feeds the dead river
Like a sponge dried of thirst
Liquifying the bank's edge
Caving and widening the banks
Till it spills over and rushes
To cover victims in its path
Falling and swirling with fury
Bringing the dead river alive
Leaving the alive never more
7 Years Ago
DANL - Very powerful - The Flood - and so true - reminds me of when the rains arrive in Africa :-)
7 Years Ago
Look for me
In the perfect storm
Spiraling
Gyrating
Twisting
Rotating endlessly
In the perfect storm
7 Years Ago
I sit here pondering
All that can be
You know, deep stuff
Like more money.
One of these days
I hope and pray
To sell coffee mugs
On FAA.
Joe Burgess
8/30/16
7 Years Ago
Faerie Rings
The faerie rings have appeared,
their fat white caps
popping up in the yards
and fields of my neighborhood
seemingly overnight.
I imagine them
to be symbiotic crop circles,
fungi portals
to the Mushroom Planet
:)
Karen Newell
8/30/16
7 Years Ago
Inspired while driving down a road.
Saw a woman get out of a pick up truck to shut a gate.
Wearing pink cowgirl boots.
Pink
pink the girly color
sacred to feminine
hot pink feminique
some men use it
but never I
men never own it
but we can enjoy it
belongs to the girls
their own brand
set a side
fem pride
gotta love it
pink cowgirl boots
in a beautiful stride
Jim Taylor 8/30/2016
7 Years Ago
When you enter out
Of a turbulent storm
Everything changes
That is the miracle
Of mother nature
7 Years Ago
Morning Everyone
Cannot believe it is the 1st September already. Where has this year gone, would not mind if we had managed to get even a couple of weeks of constant good weather but no such luck. The jet stream has stayed below us for most of the summer, in fact for the last 5 or six years our weather has really changed Gone is the thick snow in Winter and gone are the weeks of sunshine in summer. The seasons have merged. Global warming? .....
Have a great day everyone x
7 Years Ago
Danl, Jane
I have just come out of the perfect storm............
Amazing lightness of being
And, it is SPRING here
But the Barrier Reef waters are sullied
Not like our Rivers, running pure
In the 'other ' direction to yours
I feel.........um..............like 50 , wow...........
7 Years Ago
It is obvious to me
The the people
Posting on the Main
DIscussion page
Should be drug tested
7 Years Ago
This quote has always helped me get out of a rut!
A favorite quote for all artists from Jim Jarmusch:
"Nothing is original. Steal from anywhere that resonates with inspiration or fuels your imagination. Devour old films, new films, music, books, paintings, photographs, poems, dreams, random conversations, architecture, bridges, street signs, trees, clouds, bodies of water, light and shadows. Select only things to steal from that speak directly to your soul. If you do this, your work (and theft) will be authentic. Authenticity is invaluable; originality is nonexistent. And don’t bother concealing your thievery—celebrate it if you feel like it. In any case, always remember what Jean-Luc Godard said: “It’s not where you take things from—it’s where you take them to.”
7 Years Ago
Yes Jill, everything is built upon. Hopefully making it ones own, from that gift to pass on and on.
I’m alive
inspiration comes in small and large doses
with varying degrees in between
written between the lines of a song
peeking through the window late at night
when a moon rises through the pines
a reminder of such luck just to be alive
Jim Taylor 9/2/2016
7 Years Ago
Jill-
Bravo to you and Jean-Luc Godard
Photographers copy all the time
With each click of an image
Artists portray what has been done
By centuries before them
Nothing is is done with nothing
7 Years Ago
I prefer to be hated
And
I couldn't give a damn whether
People like my work or not
I am not here to be liked or please
7 Years Ago
dbl post
edit: filling this dbl post with an excellent acoustic version of the song.
https://youtu.be/kDe51Odi8zM
7 Years Ago
JIM Have the pink panther theme going as I type....used to love those films...good old inspector Clouseau...Does your dog bite...no.....snap.....I thought you said your dog does not bite......its not my dog....
7 Years Ago
Yes Jane Pink Panther wonderful stuff across the board. I hadn't visited it a long while.
A different take on an angel song here
7 Years Ago
DANL - If I had a choice my feet would be miles away lol
JIM: Here is an Angel duet for you....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zZHrbjhwKik
7 Years Ago
" Do you follow your feet
Or do your feet follow you "
Danl, It depends if I am tripping over my own feet.......
Jane, I like the song and am a bit of a sap at times I suppose.
Angel Call
I called out
to all you angels
they came not
falling to my knees
with optimistic hope
they came not
out on the hi way
roll over car crash
they did not show up
with one last try
looked to the sky
visions of angels
they came not
weary and discouraged
slept in my chair
after saying a prayer
drifted to the deep
one hundred angel choir
appeared in my sleep
while calling all you angels
Jim Taylor 9/5/2016
7 Years Ago
DANL - I had to look that one up - oh my word literally - who thinks these things up??
Ceraunophilia - keraunophilia Sexuoeroticism linked to thunder and/or lightning.....enjoy!!!
JIM - Once a sap always a sap - join the clan lol Good poem...all this Angel talk has got me thinking......brb
7 Years Ago
A Chilling Thought....
Your next painting
Could be the cause
Of someone
Committing suicide
7 Years Ago
Evening All
Searching
As I drove to work
I looked in the cars I passed
I got to work
And checked the people
Whom Breakfasted in the café
Across the way
I walked at lunch and looked
at the people I passed
with a nod and a smile
Acknowledging each
Driving home I looked again
In the cars I passed
When I got home
I went in every room
Looking
Searching
Into the garden
Checked the garage
Under the pagoda
Round the side
Nothing
Still no sign
of
our
missing
person
Viet
JEM 060916
7 Years Ago
Searching....
There are two tragedies in life
One is to be lost
The other is to be found
7 Years Ago
The artist who labors
In the surround of silence
Creates a quietude
That only angels can hear
7 Years Ago
It looks like everyone
Has stopped thinking
To prevent brain drain
And expressions of pain
7 Years Ago
Shhhhhhhh
I hear a feather drop
Wings
Anglels Wings
I feel weightless
exhilarated
Floating
JEM 070916
7 Years Ago
DANL, Jim, Jasey Babe, Viva, Karen and Viet et al..
Is it to be Trump or Hillary. Which way is this going. Do you wish there was still another candidate in there?
What is the first thing Trump would do if he got in. Truely scarey times....
7 Years Ago
Jane-
Now that Bill and Monica are out of the oval office closet
Who will occupy this love nest?
WIll it be Trump and Putin consummating their relationship
Or Hillary banging her personal server with more X-rated emails
7 Years Ago
Expressions of pain, make for strong images, though probably not decorative enough for our viewers who, it appears, buy calendars for their bird ?? , reading the forum just now, having been quietly thinking, breath !, I am unqualified to judge your 'choices' for the winner there, but, if asked, I'd say.....both are losers !
Which therefore makes all of us.....losers.
7 Years Ago
Danl, you are indeed correct.....from my most recent experience.........I learned what a wonderfully gracious loser I am, and am proud.........but, the lesson is that I don't want to do THAT again.........but I have found out I can behave well when 'lost', and keep my dignity..........just won't happen twice! I like feeling like a winner betttttterrrrrrrr.
I am indeed floating.........like a cloud...........which has very deep and meaningful relevance to my recent experience......I .. soared !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
7 Years Ago
America....
The land of criminals
Home of the illegals
Eleven million strong
Taunting the law
Stealing from citizens
Raping the land of the free
Laughing at the law
"Catch me if you can"
7 Years Ago
I never understood how America can be land of the free when everyone is terrified for their own life because everyone is allowed to own a gun...how can you be free?
They all got rid of the "better" candidates, but then America is not run by whom you vote for - it is run by corporations....actually pretty much like a lot of governments in the world
7 Years Ago
Jane-
Dinosaurs killed each other
And became extinct
Does this not tell a tale
About the future of mankind?
7 Years Ago
DANL - Definitely agree with you - I hold no hope due to the greed of man..
If we have not destroyed each other by wars
we will destroy the planet with our greed
7 Years Ago
Greed will always devour
A disorganized democracy
Like a small mouth
With an insatiable appetite
7 Years Ago
Jane,
America the Beautiful
I am caught on a nightmarish carousel.
The media plays a crazy calliope,
spinning the scenes faster
and faster.
Within the eye
of this carnival hurricane
two maniacal clowns are bent.
One on each end of a cross cut saw.
They push and
they pull
furiously sawing the lady in half.
The audience is screaming
and cheering.
I cling to my wooden horse,
palms sweating,
thighs aching,
while I look back over my shoulder
watching
the illusions of my youth tear away.
Karen Newell
9/9/16
7 Years Ago
Going Nowhere....
Like a cog in a wheel
We follow endlessly
Round and round
Going nowhere
Like a carousel
Of painted ponies
Round and round
Going nowhere
7 Years Ago
Karen - Double wow - I am both exhausted and terrified - fantastic myriad of words there :-)
I am scared to imagine what will happen with you guys - I am not sure how they both got there....
DANL: How many times can we reinvent the wheel?
7 Years Ago
Reinventing
The Wheel....
Everyone reinvents
The wheel
Every day
To fit their lifestyle
And their demise
7 Years Ago
The Greed of Man
Like two bloated gluttonous sumo wrestlers
In between them the earth laid out flat
Like a table cloth
Their eyes flicking over the bounty
Set before them
Drooling over the concept it is theirs
For the taking
They grow restless awaiting the start
Where to start?
Go...arms flying grabbing, shovelling
In their mouths
Trees, plants, mammals, side of mountains
Dredging the oceans, whales, dolphins sharks
Mmmmmm those fins
Monuments, tower blocks, high rises, homes
Smashed gone laid bare
The continents have different flavours to entice
Their appetites
The Amazon fresh green luscious flavoursome
Trees for toothpicks to extract the unwanted
The Sahara dry gritty warm and bland
Their bodies expand, their eyes grow larger
The more they devour the more they want
The Himalaya's provide their salt
Indonesia their oil
Asia and Africa their medicines,
Tigers, Rhinos, Lions, Elephants
Grab, snatch, rip, tear, wrestle, slash,
A pause
They stop
They look
The table cloth is nearly laid bare
It is a mass of destruction, devastation ...a movement
They cannot grab quick enough....
Who will win....
Who will take the last morsel..
JEM 100916
7 Years Ago
Karen,Jane,Danl..................strong,wonderful work.................who will take the last morsel?...........who:maybe..........what?.........the bomb !
7 Years Ago
☺️☺️
I like to think about flowers instead!
Fall Blooming Clematis
The clematis vines are blooming.
Their invasive kudzu type vines
climb across the fences
and over the bushes.
In September they bloom,
covered in creamy white blossoms
like drifts of floral snow.
A cloying perfume,
perhaps a combination
plumeria, jasmine and oleander,
draws every bee.
The flowers buzz,
alive with insect activity.
A fragment microcosm.
An Autumn gift.
Karen Newell
9/10/16
7 Years Ago
Karen, I agree. For the most part I steer towards the simple beauty and human condition, with plenty of twists though.
With a bit of darkness at times. Maybe a bit silly at times.
Lately, for myself poetry is more of a personal escape to feel good. Some issue based at times. Depends on the mood I suppose.
Not to ignore all the crap going on in the world. I am quite aware.
No excuse not to have a good awareness in this day and age.
The issues of the world are completely overwhelming.
Astronomical in numbers. Crazy and complicated in seeking the truth.
Just my personal thing of course.
What ever gets you through the night.
Life cycle of a flower
tiny spike
between the leaves
spirals upward
in the breeze
pod waiting to open
at the right moment
bowing and swaying
to the rhythm of the wind
bees buzzing with musical wings
dusty flower pollen awaits a bee
like ladies waiting to be chosen
competition is fierce
but the bee is efficient
a diligent worker
leaving no flower unanswered
seeds for another generation scatter
with the fate for tomorrow
a flower withers away
on a loved ones grave
with bones resting below
Jim Taylor 9/9/2016
7 Years Ago
We do not rejoice
When the world we live
Is smitten with violence
We do not rejoice
When our hearts
Are burden with pain
Rejoice
When the flowers
Color the landscape
And sooth the soul
7 Years Ago
9/11
Today we mourn
The death of thousands
We have never met
As the twin towers fell
Then America sacrificed
Additional thousands
By sending youngsters
To be shipped home
In flag draped coffins
God forgive the enemy
And America
7 Years Ago
with all due respect
to all innocent victims
they stand on both sides
of that tragic isle
always being two sides
to every eventful story
bad judgment calls
or fraud raises it’s head
after tragic events
with the truth buried
on their own side
by the insensitive mongers
7 Years Ago
For Jim & Karen :-)
Perfection
From small to large
Bright to dull
Simple to Complex
Each intricate
and perfectly designed
For it's own specific needs
From the simple daisy
To the Venus fly trap
Beautiful each in it's own right
Simple petals like the pansy
Complex like the Leucospermum
Shaped in balls Like the Alium
Or the wild and spreading buttercup
Loved by some hated by others
Scents, intoxicating like the Spice Viburnum
Or a stench like the Titum Arum
Bulbs, plants, trees, hedges
A myriad of flowers
Colouring our landscapes
Through the seasons
Lighting up our lives
Bringing life.
JEM 120916
7 Years Ago
Praise the dandelion
For it goes by
More names
Then any flower
"Pissabed"
"Mares fart"
"Naked ladies"
"Twitch-Ballock"
"Hounds-piss"
"Open arse"
"Bum trowel"
Gold and delicious
In a chilled salad
Praise the dandelion
7 Years Ago
Ebb tide
the ebb tide of ones artistic mind
to have a slow rising tide most of the time
with some leveling to smooth glassy water
that would be divine
staying the course through a life
that would be a wonderful course
captain of your own ship
with the captains wheel in your hands alone
inspiration knocks and you must answer
to make time to set a side
riding the bottom of the wave to the crest
sailing on your ships growth journey
Jim Taylor 9/13/16
7 Years Ago
Chinese Whispers.........I just had to look it up, fyi....................
WIKI: a game in which a message is distorted by being passed around in a whisper.
Distortion ! I like distortion, I am an abstractionista.....my mind is distorted, my vision (glaucoma) is distorted..........I accept !
7 Years Ago
People are quick say
I have distorted
Views of them
When actually I see them
As they really are
Only they are blinded
By their self evaluations
The most dangerous
Form of distortion
7 Years Ago
Everyone has their own unique vision. My vision and yours are different and the beauty of what we see is our own. Capture that appeals to you. Anything else is not passion, it's work.
7 Years Ago
JESUS CHRIST
is
Watching
with
Eyes
that
SEE
everything
EVERYTHING!
The art of beauty
the beauty
of art
Creation
requires
such
deepest
vision
And the greatest beauty
of creation
is beyond
human sight
Christopher Maxum 2016
ChristopherMaxum
7 Years Ago
Jim-
I admire the floating sensation that your work invokes. Perhaps that is why I like Chagall.
7 Years Ago
DANL:: To quote what you said:
Danl Art
2 Days Ago
What is whispered
In the ear of another
Will be heard
A hundred miles away
Chinese Whispers: To whisper a comment into anothers ears and pass it on over a number of people, it soon becomes distorted and is totally different to what it started off as. The used to be a game we played as children.
VIVA - You get the prize :-)
CHRISTOPHER: You are scaring me lol
7 Years Ago
Played the whisper game also.
Thanks Danl. If you see me float by, don't be concerned.
Road Gator Hi way
driving that winding HI way
avoiding gators all the way
where is the gator control
mercenaries of clean road
every truck must have left one
special gift for me I suppose
white dash lines skip by
telephone poles fly by
hypnotized at the wheel
on broad expanse
dessert HI way
spotted one in the distance
look out you crazy gator
Jim Taylor 9/14/ 2016
7 Years Ago
Good moaning all... people and gators
Beautiful late Summer days here, grasses whisper... and whisper.. .
Sometimes its good to pause
And breathe fresh clean air.. .
pardonsnowden.org
Security by the people for the people with the people
End the subversive grotesque data intimidation
7 Years Ago
As I place a pin
Into the heart
Of a voodoo doll
I bite my tongue
Hoping I do not
Wrongly cast a spell
7 Years Ago
Where art thou....
All have gone down
To the silent garden
Not to hear or listen
But to remain mute
No words exist
Nor sounds are heard
Alone in thought
Isolated from the world
Blinded in darkness
Forever lost in eternity
7 Years Ago
The Devils rope cactus
a peaceful walk
through my cactus garden
admiring a large prickler
called devils rope
I got to close
had a stumble
almost tumbled
the devil grabbed hold
I had no choice but to leave him my clothes
grasped by thousands of tiny finger thorns
escaped with my body intact without a scratch
cut my way out of my clothes with my pocket knife
walked a way naked
you devils rope
you can have my clothes
but not my body
Jim Taylor 9/16/2016
7 Years Ago
I drive down the turnpike
into the shining circle
of a bright Kansas sunrise.
Mists drift lazy
along the valleys,
Sun rays sharply pierce
the scanty fog,
showing off
the light spectrum.
A hidden rainbow of energy
surrounding us.
The reality we rarely see.
Karen Newell
9/19/16
7 Years Ago
RIP thought of the day - never DANL!
Laxative and Sleeping tablet....does not bare thinking about .....
Jim - you gotta watch prickles when they grow up they become right pricks :-)
Karen - beautifully put - when that happens it is stunning.
Jason - shared :-)
7 Years Ago
Late summer tarweed
late summer in the sierra foothills
the tarweed covers the rolling hills and valleys
arriving to the calling of dry late summer
celebrating its favorite time of year
amazing dry beauty
natural fields of yellow gold
thriving without rain
in all its dry glory
enjoying dry soil and air
the scent of resins
pushed to the max
strong pungent fragrance
fills me up as I walk
sticky tar resins
remain on my skin and breath
carried through the day
it will hide in the winter rains
waiting out all spring bloomers
patiently holding yellow bloom
as a late summer surprise gift
filling the hills with its fragrance
Jim Taylor 9/19/2016
7 Years Ago
JIM...JUST BEAUTIFUL :-)
We are getting a chill in the air again here, although the summer has been very sporadic. Off to Spain again soon for those last few warm days.
7 Years Ago
Thank you all for sharing your thoughts, your poetry and the dialogues, especially to the following artists and poets:
@ Danl: I'm amazed at your energy and the continuous flow of your provoking thoughts. You're a tireless and most regular contributor to this thread. I could feel your frustration about the lack of participation.
@ Jim: It's likely that you have woken up your inner poet. I've enjoyed your poetic momentum! Keep writing, my friend. The more your write the smoother your flow becomes.
@ Jane: Thanks for your pm, your nice thought, your support, and your poetry.
@ Vivian: You are very articulate in your expression. You have a very poetic soul, my friend.
@ Karen: I think that your recent poems have revealed the new approach in your writings. I think that your poetry has been in perfect harmony with nature.
@ Jason: I hope to see you dropping by more often.
Have a restful day.
Why Do I Sometimes Take My Time Off?
to have some fun in life,
I enjoy emptying my glass
for
many
more rounds.
I do the same with my full mind
by
frequently
draining it off
for further thoughts.
whenever, I feel
it's enough and it becomes a burden
I'd rather
stop
it.
what's point do I keep flooding my full stomach with more wine?
why would I continue torturing my weary mind with lots of dull thoughts?
I'd rather be happy,
instead
of
being suffered
from whatever I do in my entire life.
it's raison d'être.
when my body tells me
I have already reached my own limit in whatever I've been doing,
it's the time for me
to
retreat
and relax,
until I could regain my cheery rhythms back.
I have no worry to take my time off.
I'm happy,
because I know
for sure
with
or without me
life would continue going on.
the world would never stop.
in the meantime
of
our "mean" time,
let's have some fun.
empty your own glass
'til
you feel
it's enough.
cheer!
Thao Chuong
2016-09-20
7 Years Ago
"with
or without me
life would continue going on.
the world would never stop."
The world would stop....
One last sip of wine
To toast the ashes of your life
Fertilizing the soil
For others to reap and sow
Savoring the harvest
Of your knowledge and art
7 Years Ago
VIET: Lovely to have you back with you new renewed vigour from your r & r.
Refreshed
Relaxed
Rested
renewed
Re-invigorated
Revived
Reinstalled?
7 Years Ago
Good to hear from you, Viet....I like your relaxed approach these days.......and thank you for your compliment: I treasure it.
Good Sydney morning Wednesday to all...........
I'm under pressure here, and so, am keeping quiet, and attend here for uplifting and am always fulfilled.......thanks to all for interesting, thoughtful verbiage to my heart and head.
7 Years Ago
Viet, I thought you were recharging your batteries. I agree with Viva and others about a relaxed approach.
I believe you were on here daily for over a year, that's a lot. Putting out some fires at times also. Yee Ha!
Jane, have a good one in Spain. I've never been there, but the images I've seen, it sure looks like my area and climate.
7 Years Ago
Good morning all. Thank for you, Danl, Jane, Vivian and Jim.
@ Danl:
One last sip of wine
To toast the ashes of your life
Fertilizing the soil
I like your verse. But I wonder if MY world would stop at the same time as YOURS -lol
@ Jane: Nice trip to Spain, my friend. Don't wear red clothes, unless you wanna have an exciting encounter with bulls
@ Vivian: Do whatever we wanna do as long as we have some fun, But, it'd be better to retreat whenever anything becomes too much to take. Why waste time for any unnecessary disputes with strangers on discussion boards.
@ Jim: I have read your poem Late summer tarweed for a couple of time. I enjoyed it very much, Jim.
Have a nice day to all
...
7 Years Ago
Of Men and Dogs (Tanka)
somehow he believes
he's always in full control
during morning walks
when the man's dragged by his dog
he knows who's the real master.
Thao Chuong
2016-09-21
7 Years Ago
Thanks Peeps :-)
I am partaking
in a drop or two
of the ruby red
Bag nearly packed
Everything printed
From boarding card
To car hire
I look forward to
The warmth of the sun
The outside life
The easy strolls
The rest
The relaxation
The re-invigoration
Looking at houses
For a bolt hole
To regain sanity
Peace
Calm
Tranquility
Serenity
JEM 210916
7 Years Ago
Thank you for your always insightful response, and glad to see you, the leader of our 'pack'..............Vivian
buen viaje, Jane. There is an accomplished photographer in Barcelona, very friendly, knows the ropes there: fredfoto.net ...........(John Frederick Anderson), say hi from me,xxx
https://au.linkedin.com/in/john-frederick-anderson-50a08942
7 Years Ago
I recently heard something about Spain not allowing the killing of bulls at a certain event. Just going by memory and not googleing it.
Little dancers
after midnight
they come out
little dancers
bounce on my pillow
bend me like a willow
energize my dreams
gone before sunrise
living at the in between
then float down stream
Jim Taylor 9/21/2016
7 Years Ago
Jim, I love 'little dancers'.......my night dreams, my daydreams, these sprites of one's psyche.
Yes, the bullfighting is being stopped. That was very conflicted among the populace........there is a famous,recent image now, of.......the Toreodor who Couldn't Kill the Bull.........
Speaking (earlier) of dogs......there is a bill in our parliament to stop greyhound racing........poor things, but, the racing industry is fighting it, of course. It is a State legislature issue, and isn't going well because the other States here do not support it..........politics vs good sense......again.
7 Years Ago
That's good to know about the bulls.
I know there are organizations for humanely adopting X racing greyhounds.
Viva this is for you and all people on the opposite end of the equator.
Tomorrow is the fall equinox and must be the spring equinox down under.
Interesting.
Equinox- equator
equator
up or down
northern hemisphere
southern hemisphere
your morning is my night
your night is my morning
your mourning is my mourning
in another place at the same moment
my fall equinox is your spring equinox
Jim Taylor 9/21/2016
7 Years Ago
Thank you, Jim, so much......beautiful thoughts...............the time zones completely affect my life, as it happens. Here is a celebration of that very thing........painted for me as a gift........a treasured image that says and agrees with all you say..............the artist was prompted to paint this to your words, though he spoke first..........I shall copy and keep and treasure your poem..........oh, I am a grateful soul, verily I say..............
7 Years Ago
VIVA-
.
Back in the 70's I was advertising director of the Greyhound Track Operators Association. I also owned racing greyhounds. This all ended when I visited a track at 5:30 one morning to watch my greyhounds being trained. As I approached the track I noticed something in a large trash barrel.. A closer look revealed the bodies of two greyhounds. After inquiring, I was told that they did not break the Maidens and were not worth housing and feeding. They were two of my greyhounds. I immediately fired my kennel trainer and called the greyhound rescue association. All the greyhounds I owned were finally adopted. In 1978, over 9,000 greyhounds were put to sleep because they did not break their Maiden...all between the ages of one and two year years old.
Greyhound racing should be stopped!!!!!!
7 Years Ago
Oh, how horrid, and am so glad you adopted them all out, well done, on all counts. Our NSW PREMIER (Governor) went against the Association and is being 'hounded' down, and might be voted out, but is holding steady even if it costs him his position. They are beautiful creatures, those that survive......thank you for sharing the truth. I won't be offended by a 'no', but, could I send a copy to him and/or the newspaper?......it might help. Only under my name, of course.
Our huge cattle farmers do the same and worse to newborn Bulls...they only need a few for keeping their herd numbers. People know, but do nothing. That Asscciation is extremely powerful, and can change an election result just by their huge membership.
The toreador finally faced the truth, poor soul. It cost him his dignity!...Yours is intact! Kudos.
7 Years Ago
Thanks Viva for your appreciation. Wonderful painting. It has a cheerful celebration energy. I'm just waking up this morning but will say good evening..........
I can imagine the difficulty being in an opposite time zone. I would think especially opposite seasons. Our modern era really brings this out more.
Interesting Danl.
7 Years Ago
Good morning. Thank Jane, Jim, Vivian and Danl for the nice flow your interaction,
@ Jane: Regain your energy and get some suntan in Spain .
@ Jim: Wow! I liked both of your poems. The Little dancers stirred my feeling up and the Equinox- equator made my mind moved.
@ Vivian: Thanks for your kind world. I think that all of you are deserved for credit of keeping this thread alive, especially Danl who has been holding the flag and leading the team during the low season.
@ Danl: Greyhound racing is a business that generates profits. I hope it could be stopped or at least strictly regulated to prevent the cruel practice in this business.
7 Years Ago
My Pop Poetry on the First Day of Autumn.
Yesterday,
summer had been shrinking to the end of its life.
Today
autumn has arrived
like a newborn baby coming out of darkness from his mother womb.
it is as fresh as a sizzling cookie
just
taken out
of a hot oven.
Except
the make-believe about the new season in the calendar
practically, I couldn't see, feel, or sense any change at all.
I couldn't even tell any slight difference
between
the last day of summer
and the first day of Fall.
1- Early in the morning
We walked on the Goose Trail
about 6 am
the moon was right over my head
yet city light was so bright
I could hardly see the pale moonlight
In my summer shorts and T-shirt
I felt a little bit chilly in the air
the same temperature as it was in yesterday morning.
We reached Glen Lake
my dog quickly ran to the public dock
as usual
I
heard
him barking
a foul bird swearing
then an airy sound of flipping wings
and a splashing sound on water.
at 7 am
the yawning sun started rising
and shining on the path
a good sign of a dry day.
2- Noon
Sunny,
cloudless,
warm, and windless
it was gorgeous to roam around outside.
after having fun at the Westhill Park,
around
12 p.m.
on our way
walking home for lunch,
my grandson looked up, shook my finger and excitingly said:
"grandpa
I see the sun and the moon now
I saw them yesterday by this time, too."
I didn't how to make him understand
that
we live up north
so whenever it's sunny
and the sky is blue yonder
it's quite normal for us to see a sun and a half-moon
at the same time during the day.
3- At Night
around 11:30 pm
my dog abnormally kept barking in the backyard for over fifteen minutes
I felt very annoyed and distracted
by
the continuous echoes
of his hysterical sound
punching through the thermal sliding door leading to the cedar deck.
I furiously shouted "shut up"
probably, he didn't hear me
I took a flashlight and got outside to inspect
he wagged his tail, looked up, and whined,
but stopped barking
at a family
of
three
raccoons
clinging on the cherry tree by the fence..
The night wasn't cold as it used to be by this time of last year
the starless and murky sky was lit by city light
I put the dog in the workshop
to
give those raccoons
a safe passage to flee away.
It was midnight
when I got inside
she said
"honey!
it's late
go to bed
you need to pick up our grandkids tomorrow morning."
time flies
the first day of autumn has already passed
same as the last day of summer
would I still be here by this time of next year?
Thao Chuong
at 1 a.m. on 2016-09-22
7 Years Ago
VIVA-
.
Yes, you may send him a copy of my experience. At that time I was working as advertising director of AGTOA in Biscayne, Florida. (American Greyhound Track Operators Association). You will never stop the cruelty, but you can stop greyhound racing.
VIET-
Sure it brings in money. But if your dog auditioned for a high paying TV commercial and didn't get the job, would you literally kill it? This it what happens to thousands of greyhounds every year that don't break their Maiden. It is legalized blood money.
7 Years Ago
VIET-
"would I still be here by this time of next year? "
We never leave the one's we love
7 Years Ago
If you seem to notice or find negativity, hate, ugly in life...trying changing your search settings to faith, hope and Love.
Author Tony Silveira.
7 Years Ago
Tony-
Great idea but the world doesn't work that way...wish it did.
The devils shall endure
In the many worlds of hell
7 Years Ago
Through
a clouded glass
we seek
answers
of the many
mysteries.
The fronds
of life
they sway
or streak,
green
green
then
gray.
Tiny pebbles
plinky
plink,
one after
another
another
another.....
inside
that infinite
hourglass.
KarenNewell
9/23/16
7 Years Ago
Thanks and good day to you, Danl, Tony, and Karen.
@ Danl: "We never leave the one's we love". Did you mean that I must wait until they kick me out of their lives? lol
@ Tony: Thanks for your good advice of how to to get rid of negativity, hates, and ugliness in life. I agree with you that hope and love are what we need to focus on.
@ Karen: nice poem that generated my thought about time and life
My thought of the day.
The Practical "Carrot and Stick" Approach
Of course
as
a mortal being
whether I accept or refuse.
I have no choice but to face with my own death.
I myself don't care
whether
there is
or there is not
another life after death.
Unlike those "true or false" believers
I've never had any wild dream
of
having sex with seventy-two virgins
then resting my back on a sandy beach
or looking over the immense sea
through a wide glass window from a waterfront mansion
inside
the holy heaven
as a reward from God.
Therefore, I absolutely have no unbearable fear of being cold-heartedly punished
by
God
for not worshiping Him.
The permanent thought of being burnt
eternally by extremely high heat in a blazing hell
is
so scary
and frightening.
not only would it continuously inject a frantic phobia into the minds,
but also it could pump hopeless feelings into the hearts.
Consequently
it
brings
many human beings
onto their own knees.
I
think
the strong desire for living in a heaven
and the urgent need of releasing the stressful minds from the mental anxiety
of the unbearable sufferings
in another life
after death
are
the two essential reasons
why many humans always pray for the holy salvage.
How lucky I am to live a life without fear of coping with the practical "carrot and stick" approach
from a sacred religion
created
by
my fellow human beings.
In short, I'm ready to say goodbye my life
and happy to leave here
anytime
in
peace.
Thao Chuong
2016-09-23
7 Years Ago
Burn baby
May you never burn in the after life
or the after burn from the rocket of your life
may the only thing that ever burns you
is that cigarette you should not be smoking
or the cigarettes cherry that is flicked out the window
from your pal riding shotgun
entering through your window in the backseat
landing on your lap while you peacefully sleep
Jim Taylor 9/23/2016
7 Years Ago
Today, it is Saturday here now,lol, I am in an amazing state of self-awareness, and am tuned totally, selfishly, into myself !! And in this state, I am seeing myself in all the words preceeding this post. And I am overcome...... Why is that so, today? I wonder? .....
Thank you Viet, your words
"In short, I'm ready to say goodbye my life
and happy to leave here
anytime
in
peace. "
mirror my own conclusions today.....though I could not have expressed them so succinctly.
Jim, your poem.............Burn...........touches me deeply........it has such esoteric meaning to me personally, for some reason I could explain, but won't............
Karen.............loving your thoughts.......and especially re pebbles, which again reaches me in a special place of my mind and Art....amazing connections
here today...........just or perhaps only in my disturbed state of mind..........
Thank you all.
Danl, thank you too, re Greyhounds..........shall send your posts along.........our Premier is a dreamer and realist, too.
.
7 Years Ago
Good evening Jim, Vivian, and Karen
@ Jim: You're back to your black humor, You've made me think and smile at the same time.
@ Vivian: Aren't we soulmates? It is why we're psychologically connected -lol.
@ Karen: I think you're very smart to wait for the answer from the mystic universe and not to be fooled by fully trusting any man-mad answer. Unluckily, all religions forbid any question related to the existence of the creator.
Here is an echo to your beautiful poem.
Where Would I Go After Leaving Here?
neither would I wanna eat any carrot dangling in front of me
nor I would be scared of a stick that could strike at my sensitively itchy butts.
b'cause I don't wanna to be fooled
as
a
dull
mule
pulls a cart
sacredly created
by other smart humans.
I wanna be a bunny
that
eats green
runs free in the wild
looks at the sun shining in the blue sky during the day
stares at the beautiful milkyway at night
and enjoys beauty of the outer universe
I
ponder
the answer for my next life
always stays within my mystic inner universe.
in my faith
so long as I'm still kicking alive like anybody else.
it is I
who must live as a decent being
until I leave this temporary asylum for the permanent sanctuary
my home-sweet-home
where
I originally came from.
by
that time
I would find either nothing or the creator
I wouldn't be afraid of him or her
since I believe a god or a goddess must not be as satanic as the bloodily tainted image
that has been continuously
painted
by
all man-made religions on earth.
Thao Chuong
206-09-23
7 Years Ago
Yes, Viet.
a reply from my archives, for sale, no buyers, read the description..............
Description
CRUCIFORM,by VIVA Anderson,is my personal response to dare I say, the Shroud as symbol of the Cruciform, abstracted to my sensibilities about light and shade and form, and, a personal response to dogma or faith, whichever you accept........................ When last I uploaded this, the following I found to be the most amazing response.........from my archives:::::::::::::: :"Sir Josef Putsche Mme Viviana you made me think deep again.....yes...Alveoli burst in seething pain Green bile floods out of lacerations. Cruciform expletives implode into disaster. I slice cornea's from my weary eyes. Scum stained nails rip teeth from jagged mouths. I stood in the womb of creation and cried. NOT LIED at the feathers dust of cream and the soft beam..........now and forever ......................not clever..............LF Josef. Viva Anderson Josef! You have dramatically seen it ! That you say, it is the truth of this, though only you seen it, of course ! Powerful response to this powerful icon. Bravo,Sir. BRAVO !!!!!!!!!...V. Viva Anderson There is no peace from this icon of broken hope, fear of living, fear of dying...promises empty.....organised chaos....imploding disaster ! YES ! Prints to
7 Years Ago
Viet-
"Did you mean that I must wait until they kick me out of their lives? lol "
In that case there will be no love lost
7 Years Ago
Good morning Vivian and Danl
@ Vivian: "There is no peace from this icon of broken hope, fear of living, fear of dying...promises empty.....organised chaos....imploding disaster !" I could sense the desperate feeling from those words of your poetic expression. Peace to the inner self, my friend.
@ Danl: "In that case there will be no love lost"
Here is my response to your thought above.
How to Cope With the Lost Love Whenever Love Is Lost
when she kicked you out of her life,
undeniably
no longer
love
in her heart.
the chronic pain from traumatic feelings
of having your vulnerable heart
suddenly smashed against,
and completely shattered on,
a cold concrete floor,
it
hurt
in no doubt.
you might hysterically cry
like
any child
whose ice-cream melted and dropped on dirty soil
since you felt betrayed
by the love lost.
but no good to whine forever
for the lost
love.
when love's lost
impossible to salvage any part of the lost love
it's gone for good
no hope for it
to
be found.
take a piece of tissue to wipe off your tears
then nip a couple of beers
not
to drown yourself
in the sea of alcohol for the mourning process of your loss
but
to cheer
you up for another round
o'
love!
Thao Chuong
2016-09-24
7 Years Ago
Some women cause us pain
Others are simply a pain
But the greatest pain
Is to love one in vain
7 Years Ago
Good morning all. Enjoy the Sunday off
Danl: Which pain you are you talking about? is it the pain from joys or the pain from sufferings? Enjoy your restful day, my friend.
A Sunday Without Much Fun (pop poetry).
it is overcast, dim, and gloomy.
the sky is murky, as if it were spread with a mushy layer of mud.
its ceiling is so low.
its heavy weight pushes down everything on the ground.
the space below is highly compressed.
the air becomes too condensed to breathe.
the morning keeps rolling ahead
as usual
at its speedy rate
the time has been already reached
10
oh clock.
however, after the extremely dried summer from its overwork,
the tiring sun has decided to take its time off for full relaxation
by hiding itself
somewhere
up
there
behind
the thick curtain of muddy sky.
on such a depressing day like this,
no fun for outdoor activities.
who
would be
in good mood
and in high spirit to do it?
moreover,
it's Sunday.
even almighty God took this day off to recoup His own energy
after He lost much sweat for the hard work
it cost Him the whole week
of his holy time
to
create
the mystic universe,
the intelligent man,
and all other beings on earth.
as a result
of an odd combination
between an official day off
and a day of "gloom to doom"
apparently,
in front of my house
not many vehicles on Sooke Road
neither biker nor walker on the Goose Trail.
I must stop my piped dream of sunbathing on a tropical beach
practically,
I'd
better
rest my back on my comfy swivel chair,
close my eyes,
loosen myself up,
while drinking a beer or two.
Thao Chuong
2016-09-25
7 Years Ago
Viet I see I was posting just after you. Synchronicity
I'd send you some of the sun I have if I could.
Flying through
I’d like to break down all the walls in front of me
if I could only see the things that are holding me
I’d like to try to run that race once again
barefoot through the park
naked and free
with everyone seeing me
on a freedom running river
through a canyon in a life
shouting at the sky
instead of wondering why
diving through that barbed wire fence
landing without a scratch
let the sun shine bright in the sky
like a big sweetened lemon pie
with the black birds flying
contrasted against that golden sun
on their confident destiny flight
until it turns out just right
Jim Taylor 9/25/2016
7 Years Ago
Thanks Jim. Wow! I could sense your energy,
"instead of wondering why
diving through that barbed wire fence
landing without a scratch
let the sun shine bright in the sky"
The "chi" and the power from the above stanza of your poem have radiated every cell of mine. Your great moment has shined up my day.
7 Years Ago
Ah, Jim
"barefoot through the park
naked and free
with everyone seeing me"
Oh those short lines of yours - about the absolute freedom - are worth more than thousands of words and much better than all speeches of those politicians about freedom,
7 Years Ago
Thanks Viet. OK I admit I hold my self back. In the mean time I will be searching for something to blame it on he he.....
Great poem of yours. We all deserve a little complaining....
I spent 5 years of my early twenties in Tacoma Washington so I know what a lack of sun is. I still have fond memories of it's special beauty though.
"it is overcast, dim, and gloomy.
the sky is murky, as if it were spread with a mushy layer of mud.
its ceiling is so low.
its heavy weigh pushes down everything on the ground.
the space below is highly compressed.
the air becomes too condensed to breathe. "
Sorry but your well written lines cracked me up!
7 Years Ago
Perhaps
I have 30 years
til the end
of my rope.
How on Earth
will it withstand
the sharp slices
of suffering
and strife.
Already
I feel the fraying
of the fiber
of threads unraveling
I gaze at the stars
the fire
the flowers
my loved ones
and wonder,
How long
do I continue
to hang on?
I trot and trudge
after that fateful carrot,
hoping for the joy,
for the happily
ever after.
I cling to the twine,
patching it
with all of the love
and light I can muster.
I smile,
facing
another day,
as anxiety eats
my heart
away.
7 Years Ago
Fate luck destiny and decisions
it is what it is
it is what it is not
for what it is not
is what it is
for what it could have been
it was not meant to be
it just kind of happened
it should not have happened
it did not happen
I wanted it to happen
I wish I would have done it
I wish I had not done it
good call bad call
they never did call
stand tall
slip down
up against the wall
don’t fall
Jim Taylor 9/25/2016
7 Years Ago
Viet, Karen, Jim, Danl, et al.....................................................................................
Thanks, Viet, for letting me know that link I cited here wasn't correct. Shall try again..........
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon everyone. Thanks for sharing your thoughts of the day.
@ Vivian: I clicked on the link http://fineartamerica.com/showmessages.php?messageid=3213465 that you've provided. Yet, it has brought me to the main discussion board instead of that specific thread. Have a restul day, my friend.
@ Karen: I like your positive thought of another thirty years for your living. I am somewhat curious about your exact prediction. I wonder how you would come to that thought.
@ Jim: You're smart in your interesting wordplay in the poem. I love your mind-game.
@ Danl:
We are enslaved
Wrapped in a fine web
Bound and constrained
Free not to be free
Ah...freedom is very perceptive. Whether you're free or not, it mainly depends on your thought of how to perceive it
My Pop Poetry about the Plight of Life and Death
unless one decides to put his fate into his hands
by taking an immediate flight out of this unbearable world
at a very unexpected moment
only
known by him
by his own choice
without any notice
.
otherwise, whether we live or die is entirely out of our control
not possible for us as a mortal being to know far ahead
the exact time and date
when
we would
hit our own exit
and get the hell out of this refuge.
the world we are currently living in
is
like motel
which we drop by overnight
for a quick rest, a shower, and a little sleep after a long, exhausting drive.
then we’ll leave for another unknown destination on our continuous journey.
sailing on the rough sea of sufferings could be an unbearable plight
it ain’t a piece of cake but an enormous challenge
extremely tough for all us to take.
in addition, the attractive promise for an almighty god’s peacefully sacred heaven
which has been constantly used as an alluring bait by all manmade religions
these
create a great temptation
for an immediate ending of current sufferings
to a new beginning of an afterlife happy forever.
however even most loyal followers
with strong faith
in gods
are
so fearful of death
they don’t wana fold their tent for an early trip to their holy lands
let alone non-religiously faithless people as I am
as long as I’m still able to breath
I refuse a voluntary stop at all time
since I love to keep marching ahead
I am willing to take every moment of my living as is
to the very end
of my rope
I don’t care when or how my own doomsday would be
I’m ready to leave whenever it comes
voila! there I go!
no fear.
no question asked.
no complain at all.
Thao Chuong
2016-09-26
7 Years Ago
http://fineartamerica.com/showmessages.php?messageid=3213465
hope the link works...........it is my thread in Discussion........look for the gal with blue hair, a nice smile, and fancy dress/author of the thread, xx
7 Years Ago
Warning: The following post is for adults only. Nudity and coarse language. Readers's discretion is advised.
It's quite boring to walk at the same pace. Therefore I have tried to step out of the regular path and put my itchy feet into the wild
Making Love (Porn-o'-poetry)
Both of us
fully unclothed,
eyes closed,
mouths locked,
tongues twisted,
bodies entwined
like two mating snakes..
I hold you firm.
you press me tight.
I slide my chest back and forth on your firm breasts.
your dense nipples consistently strike against my skin.
I could sense a surge in your body-heat.
you're hotter than an active volcano.
about
to be exploded.
I feel my finger juicily soaked
as it goes deeper and deeper
then gets lost somewhere
inside the mystic labyrinth
of your devil's
triangle.
You start pushing yourself very hard forward.
your low moan make my blood pump faster.
my heartbeats are rapidly rising. .
I
feel
very tense
in my veins.
all of sudden, an indescribably urgent urge is like a bomb exploded inside myself.
I automatically let my body go free with your rhythms.
You rock up and down,
you sway around;
you swing back and forth;
you push hard forward;
you're completely out of control
and
unconsciously
let yourself go free on the wild ride.
In response to your movements
I pull out;
I thrust in;
I move to the left;
I turn to the right;
I twist about in all directions...
inside the burning hell of sex
we kick
we weave
we curl
we coil
we entwine...
while we're
hissing,
laughing,
moaning,
and crying in ecstasy
'til
we're
totally lost inside each other
and drowned in our own immense ocean of sticky liquid.
we both merge into one piece at the most wondrous time
as we reach sexual climax
of
our joy
mountain.
Thao Chuong
2016-9-27
7 Years Ago
Viet, your a real Shock Jock.
Thanks for reminding me I'm not 22 years old any more.
Maybe 35........
Or 40.......
That's funny Danl!
Vivian yes change of good scenery!
7 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing your thought, Danl, Vivian, and Jim. Have a nice day.
Description: Blue Day is my painting of the wondrous beauty of twilight, vaporous evening clouds swirling in the moonlight over a city at twilight, before the lights go on, and that time when time stands still and envelops us in our dreams. Celebrating minimalism............
Sub-titled...courtesy my visitor Colleen Williams..."The Sound of Silence"....... . closing my eyes
Blue Night in the Wilds
at dusk,
the sun drowned and vanished behind the alpine mountains afar.
as the last ray of the day finally retreated from treetops.
the sky had its colour changed
from light blue
to
azure.
by nightfall
in the twilight
without city lights
the blue wonder
up
high
turned itself into deep indigo.
in the cobalt yonder
oh the mystic sky
first came to sight - the lone Venus,
later appeared - the crowd of trillions of stars,
then shined the full moon,
its
light
painted over the sky-canvas
with a thin layer of shiny silver.
the night was so serene.
the air is freshly filled with an eccentric scent of the wilderness.
they sat in silence
by a fire
at a remote campsite.
she leaned her head on his shoulder.
he ran his fingers on her hair stream.
lullabied by the symphony
of
night insects',
nocturnal wildlife's,
and her own heartbeats,
she got lost in the deep blue of her inner peace.
Thao Chuong
2016-09-28
7 Years Ago
"Viet......so cool, don't ever hold back ! Nice 'change of pace'. by VIVA Anderson
Good point, Vivian. Let's go for it -lol
Here is my response to your thought
Let's Enjoy the Wild Ride at its Full Speed?
no one else around
only you
and
I
with our absolute freedom
on the wonderland of love
no police patrol
no speed limit
without fear of being forced to stop
for speeding tickets
at hefty fines
why do it halfway?
what is the heck of holding it back?
let's press the throttle in full
to reach maximum speed
in the wild ride
on the freeway
of
sex.
Thao Chuong
2016-09-28
7 Years Ago
@ Danl: It's beautiful, my friend.
@ Jim
Viet, your a real Shock Jock.
Thanks for reminding me
I'm not 22 years old any more.
Maybe 35........
Or 40.......
Haa.. Jim: Never too old to do it. Keep wrecking our back - lol.
My response to Jim's comment about his age
It's Never Too Old to Live Fully
time is very psychologically conceptual
don't be fooled by the number of years
for
which you've lived so far
since, our age might physically reflect the state of our body
it fails to reveal our mental well-being
how young or old
mainly depends
on
the mind,
the heart,
and the lifestyle
of
an individual's.
a lot of so-called young guys
who are in their early twenties
but they slowly drag a boring life without much fun and no hope
as if they were about to reach the end of the rope.
countless old folks in their late seventies
still have enough energy to fool around
like those teenagers who insanely explore
the world of love and sex
for fun and joy.
regardless how many years of age you have collected so far
don't keep wrecking yourselves with such a helpless thought
that you're too old for this
or no time
for
that.
dip your lives deep in love and your body in erotic sex
'til the end of the world
won't you?
Thao Chuong
2019-09-28
7 Years Ago
Ohhhhhhhhh, Viet..........I LOVE your response to Blue Day, on this, sigh, a very blue day today for me........my own choices, for which I am paying dearly, but not regretting......
Yessssssssss, the wild side, oh yes, Viet...................it's so exciting, and well, costly..........again......no regrets..........
Thank you so much for your thoughts, and, care, my friend.
Jim, great thoughts..........I'm on that cliff !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
7 Years Ago
Viet, just playing with you. Shock Jock. He He. Nothing shocks me any more....
I do have to agree with you on age, but still facing a few facts.
Doing it
I would not trade my older brain in for a younger one
I earned every one of these gray blades of grass
that grow a top the roof of my wiser brain
It still holds a baby inside
a reckless teenager
a middle ager who has arrived
let the journey continue with a brave heart
the one it takes to live to an old age with a spark
what would be more tragic
than an old fool that never really learned much
or keep dreaming of the beautiful ladies
If the sight of an interesting beautiful woman ever fades
take me to the edge of a cliff and roll me off
with a bouquet of dead flowers
Jim Taylor 9/28/2016
7 Years Ago
In matter hold old you age
If you keep the ability
To see the beauty in a lady
You shall out live life
7 Years Ago
Thank you, Vivian,Jim, and Danl. Have a peaceful evening
@ Vivian: "Yessssssssss, the wild side, oh yes, Viet...................it's so exciting, and well, costly..........again......no regrets........" Your comment have made me wonder how I could keep walking on the wild side of life and having fun with it.
@ Jim :
If the sight of an interesting beautiful woman ever fades
take me to the edge of a cliff and roll me off
with a bouquet of dead flowers.
Haa..You've cracked my funny bones.
@ Danl: Oh, I think my soul would be lost at my first sight of the beauty in a lady -lol.
7 Years Ago
Description: FAMILY UPHEAVAL / END RESULT, 2000, oil on canvas, 70 in. x 50 inches.
*****When the soul departs, the home sinks, leaving those who are left to stand in between, pondering the "why," the "how," and the "what if." Colors, here, drip and overlay, melt and bleed, rhythmically merging over a green field as a natural flow of things.
Paints finally dry. Images and scenes are set in time. Art-making imitates the natural order.
Romance of Love and Pain in Marriage
people who fall in love
often love
to
hold
their fun in romance
and their joys to endearingly make love.
somewhat, they believe
a lifetime deal must be made
to
prolong
an ever-happy relationship..
also it would ensure their "never-cool-down" desires for sex.
they make a grave mistake in their judgment call.
instead of continuously enjoying their fun drive
on a romantic highway
of one thousand
o
one exits,
they decide to rush onto the ramp of the first exit.
they end up on a one-way street
and find themselves
in the forever land
of
marriage
they're panic
b'
cause
they could hardly find
neither way out
nor way
back.
as their last drop of chemistry's lost
no more romance's left
sex is a boring routine
love becomes purely a duty
both partners spend their lives
like
two enemies
fighting inside one tiny prison cell.
it is how
not only would love has been completely lost
but also so much hatred could take over many marriages.
Thao Chuong
2016-09-29
7 Years Ago
Good evening all. Thanks Jim and Danl
TGIF.
Friday evening is a popular social drinking night. It's also police's best time to squeeze milky cash from drunken cows
Drinking and Driving
the wine I drink
to loosen
myself
up
I would not have much concern
whether
it was
made in Canada
or imported from France or other countries
'cause,
I know
neither sweat from child labour nor blood of the innocent
would be badly spilled during the process
of turning sour grapes
into fine wine.
the gasoline
I consume
for
my SUV
to rumble on freeways
or be stuck in traffic jams
it could be
either refined right at home
(in Canada's oil-rich Province Alberta)
or imported from various war-torn nations in Middle East
I have no way to know for sure
each liter of gas which I pump into my gas tank
whether,
it would be
or it would not be
mixed with the blood of the innocent
from other petroleum rich countries
else where
in the so-called third world .
while I feel as if I were a victim of robbery
at gas stations
for high prices of gasoline,
I often do not feel guilty for the unaccountable cost
of many other humans' lives
that
has helped
keep my car culture alive.
it's Friday evening
don't voluntarily be the police's cash cow in their routine "drinking-n-driving counterattacks"
we'd better "drink and don't drive"
it also helps save some blood of the innocent
don't you think so?
Thao Chuong
2016-09-30
7 Years Ago
Fries fuel
I’m tired of the Saudi oil thugs
the prince of oil
along with their western cohorts
big black tar sand oil grunge
python like pipe trying to flow south
through the heartland of America
I’m converting my diesel vehicle
it will run on fast food deep fryer oil
I will only have to rely on
French fries addicted consumers
to keep my fuel flowing
Jim Taylor 9/30/2016
7 Years Ago
I am not concerned
About the tears
That flow
From my eyes
Like the rocks that
Never regret waterfalls
7 Years Ago
Can someone tell me
What I am doing wrong
I do the same thing over
And over again
Expecting different results
But it's always
The same old crap
7 Years Ago
Family shoes
family shoes lay by the door
they seem to be alive
kindred spirits of leather
they are like empty houses
waiting for someone to come home
they entertain one another
like dogs when there masters are away
looking forward to their next walk
a family in common
crafted for a perfect fit
to serve and protect
from the elements they meet
a journey unknown
life span uncertain
let me die with my shoes on
walking an interesting path
Jim Taylor 10/2/2016
7 Years Ago
Thanks, Viet...I see you have returned to my images...I always enjoy your poetic accompaniment to my work. In fact, on two occasions I included your poems in my book...those pertaining to my paintings, of course.
Best to you,
Ken
7 Years Ago
Good evening Dnl, Jim and Kenneth
@ Danl: Sorry for letting you talk to your knees alone again and again-lol.. Slow down down whenever you feel frustrated by the lack of sharing their thought of the day
@ Jim: It is nice that the journey in life is always unknown. Otherwise, living would be very boring.
@ Ken: I appreciate your comment and your permission of me using your art with my poetry.
Have a restful evening to all
She Left Here in Peace
(In Memory Of My Eldest Sister)
we were told by those medical professionals
it was just matter
of
time
and we did believe in what was sad
so I had no surprise
when I got the bad news through a long distance call from Vietnam
that my older sister passed away
at her seventy-two years
of
age
yesterday.
the last time - I saw her in person was - thirty-one years ago
since I fled from my homeland for freedom
as a matter of fact
in
our childhood
we were very close to each other
I couldn't hold my emotion back
I was chocked with tears
since the last stroke, she became entirely paralyzed
she couldn't move
she even couldn't feed herself
her brain was still functioning appropriately
she could understood but she could neither speak nor write
she could only either roll her eyes
or move her head lightly
it took toll on her mental state
she was frustrated
by
being
unable
to communicate
she did mention with me on the phones a couple of times
before the last stroke
that she'd rather have died
than
either to keep a life without any quality
or to be continuously a burden on her children
(those who would had provided an excellently loving care for her at home)
my mind was totally in line with her thought above
I want celebrate her life as a loving mother of her ten children
on the other hand
in my heart
I
still wish
if she would still hang on and be around with us
wherever she has left here for
she rest in peace
and
certainly
she's missed
by all of her loved ones
Thao Chuong
2016-10-02
7 Years Ago
Thanks Danl.
Have a nice day.
Life
capture each moment
be aware of instant breath
enjoy the fullest
live with easy breaths
be grateful for each moment
enjoy happiness
Death
accept when it comes
knowing life also will pass
enjoy the last breath
death – secret of life
expecting it’ll come one day
exit to new world
Thao Chuong
7 Years Ago
Sorry about your loss Viet.
My big sister sure looked after me when we were young kids.
A days dose
one part sorrow
one part joy
a dose of disappointment
a shot of reality
fades to acceptance between the bed posts
at days end and black of night
Jim Taylor 10/3/2016
7 Years Ago
Dear Viet.........
"She Left Here in Peace '..............I am so sorry for your loss, and praise your beautiful,thoughtful,heartfelt eulogy, with thanks for sharing the moment with us. Peace, mind,body,spirit............
Dear Jim......
Thank you so much for your poetic, thoughtful response to my drawing, "Family Shoes".....I'm honoured and touched deeply by your sympatico to the artwork, and therefore, me.
7 Years Ago
Good evening Jim and Vivian. I appreciate for your support
@ Jim: My eldest sister did the same as your bid sister. She took good care of us when we were young. Have a good night.
@ Vivian:Thank you very much my friend.
7 Years Ago
Questions Without Answers
what’s meaning of life
where will we go after death
from whom could I ask
God is out of touch
everyone else has no time
answers could be tough.
building a spaceship
resilient for long journey
endless universe
searching in deep space
many timeless dimensions
bottomless cosmos
outer universe
reaching childhood wonderland
for explorations.
van Gogh’s starry night
‘n fragments of love and life
neither can be found.
taking a deep breath
look at other direction
inner universe
search for happiness
deep voyage inside oneself
for peace and true love
sucked into whirlpool
lost in complex of own self
find nothing but dust.
life seems meaningless
one hundred years - a short time
handful of bullshits
time’s at its full speed
can those tough answers be found
before one’s own death
???
Thao Chuong
2010/08/08
7 Years Ago
.
Sundry Thought Of Life
In the living journey
nothing matters
but
happiness
Like
a golden leaf
floated in the wind
then drifted down the streams
and rivers effortlessly
going with the flow
of the day
It really doesn’t matter
whether
one could reach the big ocean
or end up somewhere
unknown
Thao Chuong
2012-04-29
7 Years Ago
Viet, so sorry you have felt a loss.
Big Sister
A first friend.
A little Mama.
Childhood memories
shared,
beautiful and ugly,
woven tightly
into the very fabric
of your unique Souls.
Distances and years,
separate lives lived
across the wide world.
A tiny thought
can trigger many emotions
surrounding a sister.
When she falls,
pulled from this Earth,
there is an unraveling
no seamstress can mend.
Karen Newell
10/4/16
7 Years Ago
Each day you live
You move forward in time
Also backwards
As reflections of those lost
Enter your daily life
7 Years Ago
Good evening. Thank you Danl and Karen. Have a good night.
@ Karen: Nice poem about big sister.
Man's Ephemeral Asylum – Mot Coi Di Ve Song Lyrics
endless years
gone
by
i’m still strolling around
reaching nowhere in this wearing life
sunshine and moonlight shining on my shoulders
for one hundred years throughout my journey
in a man’s ephemeral asylum
rhythms o' foliage
'n tempos o' exotic grass
rolling in my intoxicated mind
sitting motionless in an afternoon
wondering how delicate a life is!
days flown by
spring had already left
summer has just passed by
then galloping sounds of early autumn
echoed from afar
cloud hanging over my head
‘n sunshine on shoulders
i keep dragging both tiring feet ahead
leaving many streams and rivers behind
in my obsessive heart
vibrated an astonishing call for passionate love
watching sudden reflection of a human shadow
appeared in my inner mirror
listening to pounding sounds on a soggy day here
dreaming of rainy season somewhere else far away
watery drops keep pouring inside myself
each tiny needle strikes against my solo soul
running about on a vicious trail
oh a fatigued round
dreaming of a newly green path
‘n the youthful wonders of the past
each word by the sunset
last words to the tomb
final eulogy buried into rivers and seas
echoed from my past passage
through small creeks and streams
while going back home
i recall my ongoing journey of strolling around
climbing on high mountains
sailing to open seas
in both un-compassionate human hands
the howling wind has frigidly wiped out my youthful time
one hundred years in a man's life
an eye blink of the infinite time
i have yet reached the final destination
so wondering whereabouts of my homeland
in another world
Thao Chuong
@ 2011-10-22
7 Years Ago
Welcome to my room
Meds on the left
Straightjackets on the right
And keep your hands off
My crayons
7 Years Ago
Can people not hear??
"WE ARE CHILDREN, WE HAVE THE RIGHT TO LIVE!!"
The voices of Aleppo
The Children of Aleppo
7 Years Ago
VIET: Lovely to see you back and I feel for your loss. At least no longer in pain and frustration.
DANL: Forever holding the fort, where would we be without your humour .
Good Night all sleep well.
7 Years Ago
Good Morning All
Winter is definitely on its way or I am getting older and softer!
Chill in the air
Leaves slowly browning and curling
Leisurely falling to the floor
Light winds
Sweeping up and brushing them
Into corners of the streets
Children walking
Delighting into jumping on the top
Kicking then into clouds
To slowly fall
Back into their corners to collect
once again awaiting more to fall
JEM 071016
7 Years Ago
I heard there is a hurricane
Brewing in the Americas
If it is anything like the trick
I had the night before last
Get ready for a rough ride
7 Years Ago
Jane.....
Stand clear of the wind
It slowly moves its way
Quietly through the chute
It can omit a squeak
Or a rumbling blast
WIth the whiff of fruit
Rancid is the toot
7 Years Ago
The debate
my lazy boy big relaxer chair
sits in my sitting room
an end table on each side
tv straight in front
it is usualy turned off
it will be flicked on tomorrow
lots of strange sounds and glances
along with noisy corporate commercials
plenty of drama on the way for free
to all the freedom lovers out there
cockroaches have been arriving
seated on the left end table
house flies landing on the right
They have arrived early
not wanting to miss tomorrows debate
there will be plenty of party treats
crumbs I have dropped on both tables
I’ll probably need a beer or two myself
I am anticipating a full house by tomorrow
some of my uninvited guests may even have leadership ambitions
Jim Taylor 10/8 2016
7 Years Ago
Grabbing
Groping
Stoking
Blowing
Sucking
Licking
Caressing
Rubbing
Fondling
Banging
Oh God
Ahhhhhh
Climaxing Tuesday's debate
7 Years Ago
cock roach in a clock
just a common economical apartment
circa nineteen sixties
a little run down you might think
old kitchen built-in stove oven
has a round clock on the top panel
the clock no longer works
the hands lie still
frozen in time
no hum or tic tic tic
inside the clocks glass globe
lies a dead cockroach
one of earths most ancient creatures
welcome to a most timely kitchen
Jim Taylor 10/9/2016
7 Years Ago
JIM: Your poem reminds me of a friend who went on holiday to Tenerife...After each night out she used to walk home down a certain path with no shoes on....It was only when she walked down the path in daylight she saw what she thought were dead leaves crunching underfoot......ewww your cockroaches.
7 Years Ago
Recession woes
Hovering over
Waiting patiently
Til the second half
Of next year
Tearing all asunder
Bringing to its knees
America
The land
Of the doomed
7 Years Ago
My wife use to have these little pets.
The only cockroach I ever liked?????
Madagascar giant hissing cockroach
a real living jewel
beautiful polished ebony wood
looking good worn as jewelry
hanging like a necklace
listen to them hiss
harmless as their little legs cling to your neck
an unusual companion for the right person
other than me
7 Years Ago
Gossamer....
Each of us are constrained
In the daily web of life
Often times bound tightly
By thousands of threads
7 Years Ago
From Door Knocker Gremlin To Scrooge!
I appreciate it when I can add something to an image like fonts and a quote from a character in a book I love and grew up with.
It has the power to create, making something inanimate come alive and yes, even talk!
I straightened the image so it became smaller and the face of the knocker seemingly became larger!
Now that the doorknocker is bigger it seems to have taken on another persona (wonder who?!).
And now has something sage and Scrooge-like to say!
Next time you see a doorknocker don't think it is only there to let the person inside know you are on the outside and get their attention.
Think of the possibilities!
If it talks back don't be surprised because you have been forewarned.
Especially if it says something you are not expecting like "Bah Humbug!" on a day when you are dressed up celebrating.
Take it in stride and be open to the next door knocker you meet.
It may surprise you.
7 Years Ago
Knock Knock
who's there?
Jehovah's Witness
Jehovah's Witness who?
the same one that rings your doorbell
what do you want now?
I just wanted to pound your new doorknocker
7 Years Ago
Danl.............re Greyhounds........well, before I could advise the Gov of our State, NSW, about your terrible experiences with the sport........he rescinded his barring greyhound racing and gave into the pressure from the racers/clans who support it, and has allowed , without further legislation needed, to open the gates to the sport again. But, he has implemented very high (we shall see) standards for what were, as you said, extremely poor behaviours of owners. Political pressure at its worst. I grieve.
Excellent reply, Jim. ! I say.....so what,too!
7 Years Ago
You come home
Sit in your easychair
Sip a cup of tea
Alone
Listening to the quiet
Pondering
Is this loneliness
Or freedom
7 Years Ago
I'm a newbie to this site...just exploring and wanted to say hi. I've seen some amazing art on this site and it's already pushing me to up my game. So thank you all for that.
and since everyone seems to enjoy a rhyme:
Roses are red....
violets can be white....
I hope everyones art sells....
every day n every night.
7 Years Ago
Rick-
Welcome
When you wish that everyone's art sells both day and night...that is one hell of a wish since (according to Art Nouveau magazine) over 10,000,000 (that's millions) pieces of art are created every day. Now that's a lot of selling!
Good luck to you.
7 Years Ago
Hi Rick :-)
DANL - I am sure your sales have surpassed that!
JIM: Long time sine I heard a knock knock joke...may have to refresh my memory of those groaners like
Knock Knock
Who's there!
Howl!
Howl who?
Howl you know unless you open the door.!
Sorry!
7 Years Ago
Yes everybody I have not resorted to Knock Knock jokes, just a crazy reply.
These things sometime spontaneously resurface after many years, or from a knock on the head maybe.
hey milky way
hey hey distant milky way
looking up in a midnight sky
stars spun in chaotic order
like a million diamonds rolled out
on a black velvet satin silk cloth
by the hand of the higher power
I don’t want to be grounded
another night or day
so close but so far away
when I wake up in the middle of the night
pick me up with your sparkle and shine
don’t make me wait
I’m ready to go on your flight
this evening feels just right
spin me in your starry web
Jim Taylor 10/11/2016
7 Years Ago
Why do we have "hate crime". What is that all about?
Why do we have people who attack the disabled?
Sometimes I despair of people.
Reality has been lost in a world of TV games and films. What is this creepy clown phase where people dressed up as clowns with knives jump out and scare school kids. Get a grip. Turn off everything and actually look at the world and see.
7 Years Ago
"If you see something beautiful in someone, speak it." - Ruthie Lindsey
Words are powerful and you never know who could use your kindness :)
7 Years Ago
"If you see something beautiful in someone, speak it." - Ruthie Lindsey
Words are powerful and you never know who could use your kindness :)
7 Years Ago
Jane-
Behind a red nose
A white face
Vast crimson lips
Yellowing teeth
There stands a clown
How I hate clowns
You never know
What they're thinking
7 Years Ago
Ragnorök is soon to appear
Resulting in a great battle
Taking the lives of all
Leaving nothing in it's wake
Creating a natural disaster
Submersing the earth
In torrents of red water
Alas, to begin anew
7 Years Ago
DANL yes but : afterward, the world will resurface anew and fertile, the surviving and returning gods will meet, and the world will be repopulated by two human survivors (Wikipedia)..........only to start interbreeding all over again!!!!
7 Years Ago
"If you are too busy to laugh you are too busy."
------------------------------------
~ Bill
~ US Pictures .com
7 Years Ago
Jane-
WHO, WHAT, WHY, WHEN
This photo shows a door leading into a room where Clinton emails are stored.
7 Years Ago
DANL...oh dear I think it is a sensitive subject at the moment lol. Hush your lips. ...still funny though..sorry Isabella.
7 Years Ago
Alien...
Brrrrrrrrrrk bruk crrrrrirruk gas...
Trrrrbrrrr grob stribrrrrrrt wind
Grrruddle Brrrrrrrrrrb koffle burp
Dropple Dropple skrrrriddle fart
ROTFLMAO
WORLD TAKE OVER
7 Years Ago
"Your need for acceptance can make you invisible in this world.
Don't let anything stand in the way of the light that shines through this form.
Risk being seen in all of your glory." - Jim Carrey
7 Years Ago
Ralf-
An outcast I be
Frowning on acceptance
The light of this forum
Is dimmed by my
Uncontrollable misfittings
7 Years Ago
Madness has ensued again
Like a petulant child
Stamping it's feet
How did get in this state.?
7 Years Ago
I want to be an angst-ridden child
To take my place amongst demons
Screaming gurgle obscenities
7 Years Ago
Wrote this for some one I know who has developed one of the diseases of the mind.
Very sad for these people and their loved ones.
For those lost minds
you walked down another path
one of your own reality
perhaps living in a tangled memory
laying on a bed of nails
tied to the railroad track rails
unable to change positions
or come back to yourself
care free days left in the past
I stand with my hand out
like a beggar who has been rejected
your window curtains are pulled tight
they let in no light
I walk by another window
with a new morning light
with orchids blooming bright
but you are no longer there
will you ever regain part of your mind
or keep moving down A delusionary path
unable to find your way back
care free days left in the past
James Taylor 9/14/2016
7 Years Ago
Jim: Nicely put. My others half's mum has dementia. We visit weekly. She sees you and smiles recognition and then walks pasts, only to turn around again and smile like you were never there before. It doesn't matter because she is always happy to see us:-) I have never put words to this and I should try....thank you Jim.
7 Years Ago
I hate it when I see an old person
And then realize that we were in
The same class in high school
7 Years Ago
Facebook, for me, has reminded me of how the years have passed. I have been "reunited" on Facebook with former high school classmates I haven't seen or heard from in 40+ years! I look at the photos of these now-grandparents and visually see what 40+ years through time means. Funny, I still remember them as teenagers. Can it be that these 18-year-olds are really now 60ish?
7 Years Ago
Thanks Jane, at least your mother in law seems gentle. Some are not. I‘ve been watching you tubes on schizophrenia lately.
A real curse for those poor folks with all those strange and powerful meds they end up taking.
The human brain is quite mysterious........
I hate to think of the future with chip implants and artificial intelligence technology.
7 Years Ago
DANL / KENNETH : It is such a shock when you see pictures of people you went to school with and you think oh my they have aged.....then you look in the mirror......and STILL see a young person yaaaay!
JIM: She certainly has her moments though - she gets very frustrated and can still throw a punch at 85lol. hmmmm chips in the brain....no thanks...would still rather put salt and vinegar on mine and eat them :-P
7 Years Ago
Jane...I don't know if I am all smiles when I look at myself in the mirror...lol...For me, certain things just don't age--my favorite music and art, my interests, yes, still intact, immune to the tick of the clock. But the teenager in me and those I grow up with is visibly gone.
7 Years Ago
Hi Joseph - There is a an awful lot that needs no paint, however I feel there are a number of people lacking colour in their lives...glass half empty people.
Kenneth we are only as old as we think....ignore the body lol
7 Years Ago
to Paint the world
a monumental task
just to paint that fallen fly
that lies dead in the corner of my studio
if I could some how do it justice
a masterpiece arisen from the dead
now that would be something
7 Years Ago
It is all in the address.....
Most artists work for pennies
Never good enough to reach
The fame and fortune
Just swishing the paint about
Looking for handouts and coins
Selling by the numbers
Not a one with the address
MoMa
7 Years Ago
DANL: Thanks - I see there is hope for us all:
https://www.moma.org/calendar/exhibitions/1655?locale=en
7 Years Ago
My monkey
my monkey ran away
he’s off my back and gone
out terrorizing the neighborhood
I called out down the street
bed time for Bonzo
hoping he’d come home
eat a banana treat
and hit the sack
giving everyone some slack
he thinks he’s king kong
he should never have watched that movie
climbing the highest pinnacle
on that two story Victorian house
in the old world classic neighborhood
I suppose we all need our role models
at least It’s one monkey off my back
it takes a neighborhood to raise a monkey
Jim Taylor 10/22/2016
7 Years Ago
Doreen
Today was her birthday.
Ripe old age of eighty five.
We took a card....
A small cake.....
Pulled up some chairs.
She smiled recognition.
We sang Happy Birthday.
She cried.
She smiled.
Then we opened her birthday card,
This year she held it and looked,
She cried again.
This year was different to last....
Somehow
Last year no acknowledgement....
Not a look
Not a care
Only emotion was anger
At others
and us
This year they brought a cake out
With candles all alight
She actually leant forward
As if to blow out
Those twelve colourful candles
She laughed
Then cried
As we all sang and clapped
Then she rubbed noses with Clive
Like she did when he was little
She held my hand and tried to say..
something
only she can understand
She cried again
Then looked at Clive
And laughed again
I think today was a good day
for us
I think today was a bad day
for her
Confused memories floating
in and out
Emotions roller coasting
up and down
JEM 221016
7 Years Ago
Jim-
Just because you
Got the monkey
Off your back
Doesn't mean
The circus has left town
7 Years Ago
Good old moaning everyone, poets, people, others, fellow crazy plebinos and ploets.. . (chuckle)
Anyways
I never seen a shooting star
Till yesterday morning at ~5.30am
An amazing display, dozens, no hundreds flew by in Arcturus skies
it really was astonishing
a meteorite shower from Halley's tail i believe
It was magical!! I just watched and watched, mesmerised.. .
I wrote a poem
but it was crap.
chuckle.
correction : Plebino should be Plebeian. lets say, pleb.
Pleb ploets together. (lol, only joking!)
Very Deep Jane, a loving moment, thanks for sharing, for many moments my mother never recognized me in the last few years of life long ago, i'd sit down with her and bring things to the house, buy some shopping and go through each item, some of her favorites one by one and see her smile and recognize them... and cook a meal.. its best to deal with the situation by finding ways around them.. cooking a meal, sitting down together... I bet you made Doreen smile many times...
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7 Years Ago
Dad
Monkey
jumped the circus
and climbed
upon his back.
Granny
tied him
to the clothes
line pole
so she
would not crack
Monkey
grew up with him
ever by his side.
They had loads
of crazy
adventures,
a bipolar
bumpy ride.
Monkey
did not want
to be a Daddy,
too much
pressure there.
Family is
quite needy,
and he never
liked to share.
Monkey
hated aging
it came up
awfully soon,
no longer
a cute
chimpanzee,
but an angry
asinine baboon.
Monkey
was there
with him
when he died
in that lonely chair.
Finally freed from
his insanity,
loosed
from Monkeys' snare.
Karen Newell
10/24/16
7 Years Ago
I am lost
I have gone to look for myself
If I should return
Before I get back
Please ask me to wait
7 Years Ago
Morning et al.
Jason....hey How ya doing?. ...we can only do what we can do don't ya think, and if it brings a smile it's worth it. It's a cruel disease for those that have it and those around them, you also smile and cry.
Jim /Karen....my mind is blown....Karen that is Incredibly powerful...can I ask is it personal or observational?
DANL...I will send the monkeys to find you x
7 Years Ago
Thanks Jane 😊 My Dad lived with bipolar disorder. His manic phases corrupted many of his family relationships. Sad for all involved, those who suffer mental illness and those who try to love them. Dads who spout their ugly manic "truths" are hard to love.
7 Years Ago
Artists are the number one criminals
With their eye on what God created
They steal all his worldly works
Unless they are creative and skilled
Then they create what has never been
And will forever be absolved
7 Years Ago
When you paint a picture
Without mystery or fantasy
And the meaning is plain
People will flip the page
Like a boring magazine
7 Years Ago
KAREN - Its a wonder we come out the other side sometimes :-) It is a good job we can choose our friends.
DANL: I must try harder :-)
7 Years Ago
It was a gloomy day in Paris
Not one to spark thoughts
To liven up a canvas
So I dangled my feet in the Seine
And watched a seagull
Save a fish from drowning
7 Years Ago
I understand how several of you feel about Halloween, not wanting to answer the door with a hoard of trick-or-treaters on the other side! Once I became an adult I used to dread the day and go out shopping or retire early to bed.
That has all changed for me now. I am like the older adults I remember as a child. At that time Halloween wasn't celebrated anywhere else but your neighborhood, since there wasn't anywhere else to go except another neighborhood. Those were the days retail didn't have an event or anyone else for that matter. Children who were bold enough to go into strange neighborhoods other than their own were envied for their large stash of candy.
I remember neighbors sitting in their living room (back then you received visitors in the living room otherwise known as the parlor before that) having the children parade circling the coffee table on which sat bowls of candy you were allowed to help yourself to. This "parade" gave the adults a brief moment to see your costume before running down the front steps to the next candy oasis! I can remember falling at some point in my great excitement somewhere between exiting the last house and the house I was going to next! This is where for most children their Halloween goes awry. If you didn't run and fall then either you were older and not as excited or you were very young and with your parents.
I start thinking about Halloween weeks in advance excitedly looking forward to seeing the children dressed up in their cute costumes. When the children show up at my door I ooohh and aahhh over them like a cuckolding mother hen handing out carefully chosen candy. I particularly remember one boy about nine who came to my parent's door. He was dressed up as a business executive like those seen in the business section of photo stock images with the over-sized horn rimmed glasses, big round lenses wearing a bow tie and jacket. He was so cute. I think I was caught off guard not expecting a boy his age (most wouldn't be caught dead!) dressed up looking like a business executive character. Those of you who shoot stock know what I mean and would have identified with his look.
7 Years Ago
Suzanne
Last year at 80 I downed a Chippendale outfit and went to the local nursing home. I was lucky to get out of there with my bowtie and bruise marks. This year I am dressing down.
7 Years Ago
Death of a door nob
my door nob fell off
again
this time I’ll just let it go
I’ll climb in through a window
bounced off a step
rolled down that old sidewalk
with swaggered cracks
where strong weeds grow
rolling down the alley way
dodging all the forlorn objects
looking for another home
rolling under the gate
meandering down the alleys low point
where rain water travels through
chased by a cat
picked up by a dog
laid on my porch with wagging tail
as I crawled out my window
Jim Taylor 10/27/2016
7 Years Ago
JIM - Sounds like the dog resurrected your knob lol
Made me think of that meatball song...how did it go....something about losing your meatball when somebody sneezed...rolled off the table and onto the floor...hmmmm must look it up...
7 Years Ago
Jane, meatballs, doorknobs anything round that rolls. Maybe not the obvious though, ball...
Vintage chimney sweep
ok old guy
you got the ladders out
they’re ready for you
are you ready for them
sure
just another fall season
or should I say autumn season
chimney sweep time is here
sweeping away summer
summer dust
ready to turn to mud
in winter rains
ok old guy
go up the ladder like you always do
just like you do every year at this time
to the top of the roof
where the smoke billows out
just another year older is all
no problem
you seem to be extra careful today
never thought about falling before
no reason to pay for the service
at least monetarily
Jim Taylor 10/29/2016
7 Years Ago
Happy Halloween, all. My avatar has changed to witchy for the occasion. :) Keep having fun!
7 Years Ago
DANL...Speak for yourself lol. I am not that cheap....even at my age x
Leaves are falling
Faster now
As soon as I sweep
They reappear
Covering the lawn
Multi - coloured
Yellows, oranges, browns and reds
The only warm colours left
Most flowers gone
Winter pansies
Coming through
I await the glory of Spring.
JEM 311016
7 Years Ago
When you make a decision
Stick to it
There are to many flat squirrels
On the road
That couldn't decide
7 Years Ago
Canwape Kasna Wi
Moon When the Wind Shakes Off Leaves
Last night
my sleep was interrupted
by the big Burr Oak
dropping her enormous acorns
upon the bedroom roof.
I lay awake listening
to the Autumn symphony
of my ancient tree.
Acorns sporadic drumbeat thumping,
crispy brown leaves whispering.
Restless melodies,
blowing in breezy eddies back
and forth across the lawn.
Today
I will sweep the porch again,
remembering the mystic
messages of my insomnia
and the midnight music
of the wind shaking off the leaves.
Karen Newell
10/31/16
7 Years Ago
In the States, it is that time of year when people pretend to be something they are not and demand that their neighbors give them something for nothing...
7 Years Ago
I saw the thread "finding your niche" here.
It made me think of a true story I watched on tv a few days ago. It was about an older guy who lives in Maine.
One of those stories that linger in my mind.
Life long niche
he found his niche
digging a ditch
a certain kind of ditch
a grave
a grave digger
since nineteen sixty seven
and still to this day
no power equipment
just his pick and shovel
an unusual niche in a modern mechanized era
I suppose it keeps one close to the ground
close to the earth
close to many strangers who've moved on
a long with close ones he's known
not just a ditch or hole in the ground
a precise dimension carved out
with turf set a side
then put back in perfect sequence
I suppose you could call him an artist
a job well done with care
for infants to centennials
and the ones in-between
he's done them all
not morbid or strange
it just became his niche
he says he wants to do his own
well these things can rarely be planned
Jim Taylor 11/1/2016
7 Years Ago
When the light is just right
when the light is just right
that is where I want to be
morning glow
bouncing off snow
shining on the water
as you row
early morning sun
through a cabin window
Fresh misty new dawn
slowly disappears at dusk
fleeting perfect light
catch it when it is just right
sun moving behind a cloud
back behind another
hide and seek
to take a peek
sunset orange
morning pink
like pure water
a soul to drink
Jim Taylor 9/19/2016
7 Years Ago
In Response to Jims Perfect Light
Dappled light
When the sun is high
And the temperatures hot
I seek to find
My dappled shade
Under some trees
The light peeks through
the leaves and branches
The breeze is cooling
Up on the roof terrace
Under the vines
Supported by canes
My dappled light abounds
I stretch out
Close my eyes
Still seeing that dappled light
Feeling the warmth and shade
JEM 021116
7 Years Ago
Jane, from perfect light to doom.
Although I Don't like to dwell on these realities much.
The day the sun went red
after the sun went red
they buried the dead
not many left alive
although most dogs survived
they were different
a dirty red baked world
a dried blood color
even the water was red
was it a bad dream
a new age
a punishment
a curse
or worse
a final sign
of the final decline
one man asked
did it really happen
was it that bomb
yes the big one
dismissed as never really happening
only in a movie for entertainment
isolated pockets
on a once green planet
dog day afternoons
in burnt red
red day
dooms day
the weak knelt to pray
I looked up the road
looking for a phoenix
through a dirty red haze
Jim Taylor 11/2/2016
7 Years Ago
Oh Jim powerful poem..Certainly makes you think. ..and shudder at the thought
DANL..are you snoozing?
7 Years Ago
Don't forget to turn back your clocks this weekend.
I am going to turn mine back sixty years
7 Years Ago
Many thanks to all of you (Jim Taylor, Danl Art, Jane McGowan, Karen Newell, Vivian (VIVA) Anderson, Suzanne Powers, Barbie Corbett-Newmin, John Haldane )for sharing your thoughts , your art, and your poetry. I appreciate your time and your contributions, while I was away for a retreat. There are a lot of awesome thoughts and poems from Danl, Karen, Jim, and Jane
@ Danl: your flow of thoughts is like water on a river that keeps flowing and never stops
@ Jim: Wow...Wow..Your poetry has become not only beautiful but also very powerful. You have reached the summit of the creative mountain. You have become the poet who has anchored for this thread.
@ Karen and Jane: I enjoy your recent poems very much. I could see that autumn has been lifting up your poetic spirit.
The following is my echo to Karen's pretty poem:
"Canwape Kasna Wi
Moon When the Wind Shakes Off Leaves".
An Early Morning Walk in Autumn.
the wind shook the trees
the branches swayed in the breeze
the leaves were falling down,
flying in the air,
chasing each other,
and dancing around on the vibrant ground.
I could feel
the autumn’s chill drilled onto my skin,
I pulled up the collar
to
wrap around
my freezing ears,
then pulled down the sleeves to cover my hands,
and tuck both of them inside the light jacket.
as the wind blew;
a thin layer of colorful leaves softly moved,
weaved around,
and painted the ground
in
multiple colors.
if it wasn’t so cold
I
would
take my shoes off,
set my toes free from any restraint,
walk barefoot on the lively carpet of leaves,
and fully enjoy the delightful beauty
oh
nature
in Autumn!
Thao Chuong
2016-11-03
7 Years Ago
Viet, so good to see you back! There have been so many lovely poems keeping the thread alive 😇 I love to walk barefoot in all kinds of weather, sometimes even snow!
We gather
on the bank of the Kansas river
to pull a portal of peace.
Prayers tumble in
on rhythmic drumbeat chants.
The water rolls transformed,
divine crystalline structures
carrying our secret dreams downstream
like so much sacred silt.
Karen Newell
11/3/16
7 Years Ago
Viet, you always ride back in on your white horse at the right time.
And ride out like the Lone Ranger without his mask.
You must be psychic or psychotic like me.
Your autumn poem is really colorful. In more ways than one.
Those are some generous comments.
I also appreciate the regulars here.
You can count them all on one hand. Even if your missing a finger.
The visitors on half of the other hand.
The thread lurkers on both feet.
7 Years Ago
Hola Viet, like a breath of fresh air in you sweep again to keep us on our toes and make sure we are awake.To reinvigorate, re-energise and refresh us.
The page where we can drop our thoughts and questions and write to our hearts content only watching our politics and religion awaiting a sharp reprisal if we stray..
Morning everyone have a great day x
Karen..barefoot all the way ...👌🌼
7 Years Ago
Someone told me that clocks
Go back this weekend
I can't remember where I got them
And I don't have any receipts
Please help
7 Years Ago
A tic tock to Danl
Grandparents clock
I have a fine old clock
it was my grandparents
it chimes the appropriate
number of times
at the top of each hour
beautiful sounds
seeming to echo the past
takes me to a special place
it’s the monotonous
tic tock tic tock
tic tock tic tock
that drives me mad
it makes me think I’m slowly
running out of time
I guess I am
Jim Taylor 11/4/2016
7 Years Ago
I prefer a cuckoo clock
All it requires is to
Change the paper under
The bird twice a day
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon. Thank you for very much for your nice thoughts of welcoming me back :.
@ Karen: "😇 I love to walk barefoot in all kinds of weather, sometimes even snow!". I used to do it in the past, as my immune becomes weaker, I often catch cold . Nowadays, I only walk barefoot in late Spring, in summer and early Autumn.
@ Jane: I understand that politics and religion are the two forbidden topics on this site. However, I think that we can generally talk about it in the form of poetry without directly touching those two sensitive topics. Poetry and art are evolved from imagination more than from reality.
@ Jim: Who can resist the beauty of Autumn, my friend. Fall poems of yours and of Jane's and of Karen's and Danl's continuously provoking thoughts not only had prevented me from closing this thread, but also have inspired me to come back in time to the autumn.
@ Danl:
"Don't forget to turn back your clocks this weekend.
I am going to turn mine back sixty years".
Haa..Good luck, my friend. How come you forget the bad time and endless headaches from dealing with love and sex with those long-legged and sexy creatures, if you could get back to your twenties?
Here is my echo to Jim's poem Grandparents clock and also to Danl's illusive thoughts about time and clocks.
The Unreliable Pendulum of the Forefathers of America
like those fragile hearts pounding
inside
airless chests
of all American citizens’,
the pendulum keeps swinging back and forth,
tirelessly,
non-stop.
as soon as it reaches the far left,
it goes right back to the far right,
and continuously repeats days and nights with the same damned boring cycle.
without insanely noisy activities
from
both politics
and real life
it’s often utterly quiet around midnight
besides his heartbeats one could only hear tedious sounds
tic tock!
tic tack!
within every second,
in monotone rhythm.
then
boong..!
boong..!
boong..!
in every fifteen minutes
it strikes and provides exactly the same meditating sounds of a gong
echoing from any ancient Chinese’s Buddhist temple.
yet, instead
of
cooling off,
easing the daily stress and high anxiety,
awakening those sleepless minds in agony,
and taking them to a peaceful mood of deep mediation
it tortures them with horrendous fear of insecurity for their unknown future.
however, unlike the rotten pendulum of deceptive politics
passed down
by
the forefathers of America,
the truthful pendulum of a grandfather clock never tells lie
most importantly, it gives American citizens
a real sense of an approximate time
when it would come
to
the end of their faulty democracy
and especially, the doomsday of their troublesome nation.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-04
7 Years Ago
My older sister and I never wore shoes as young kids on the farm. I’m a tenderfoot now.
Danl, my sister has the old cuckoo clock my aunt got in Germany many years ago. Obnoxious little sucker.
Poetic politics is good. I actually agree with the rule here. To me there is enough of the garbage that leads to bad feelings elsewhere.
Nice tic tock echo Viet, I feel a bit cuckoo right now.
Spontaneity
a good poem
is no different
than a good crap
they both come
suddenly
effortless
spontaneous
smooth and swift
with wonderful satisfaction
Jim Taylor 11/2/2016
the main difference is one lands on paper
the other in the toilet
but there is still a very similar relationship there
7 Years Ago
Jeanette
She bit me hard
with sharpened teeth.
My heart lay
bleeding
at her feet.
Those twisted words
were quite unkind.
Our friendship
withered
on that severed vine.
Karen Newell
11/5/16
7 Years Ago
The song of stream
the tread of sky
roaming hills
endless walks in mountain side
the clouds glisten
when the sun shines
Christopher Maxum
7 Years Ago
Wall banger
if it’s not a little off the wall
it may be dead on the floor
out of a lukewarm oven
hum drum pie
in the dirty clothes basket
in the garbage can
or buried out back
don’t try to dig it up
just start again
push it harder
until it’s off the wall
but tastes good
after the broth has rested
Jim Taylor 11/5/2016
7 Years Ago
Good evening. Thank you very much Jim, Karen, Christopher, and Danl.
@ Jim: I am happy to see that you have maintained you poetic momentum so far. I enjoy your double treats today. I agreed with your sharp observation about on-line discussion "To me there is enough of the garbage that leads to bad feelings elsewhere." I think that those hostile debates have nothing to do with the topics. I have witnessed nasty discussions with topics purely related to fines art, such as "what's is art?", "who are artists?"....
@ Karen: It's a sad poem.
@ Danl: Ah! You have had such provoking thought about Karen's poem.
@ Christopher: Short but nice poem! It's like Japanese poetry.
Re: Victoria set a new record for rainy days in October 2016
Autumn Rainfall
in Greater Victoria - one of the wettest spots in Canada
during the last five weeks
from October first, this year,
there have been
only six days
in total
of
cloudy sky
and sunny break.
it’s been miserably wet most of the time.
the city has been buried inside gray curtain for so long.
the lengthy period of rainfall has made
the hearts soggy,
the minds muddy,
even, the souls rotten,
especially
for
those reckless drivers on slippery roads,
and stressful tenants in flooded basements.
it’s the right time
to
pack up,
follow those Canadian migrant geese,
and fly South for warm sunshine.
for sure
at those recently popular resorts in Cuba
or somewhere else in Central and South America,
it must be hot and humid
at
least
eighty degrees Fahrenheit or higher.
if one doesn’t mind
being around with fat-bellied tourists from Europe
especially, those rowdy, hard-drinkers from Germany.
then
it would be nice
to leave the miserably soggy weather behind
for other brave locals to deal with it.
isn’t it alluring?
to lie nearly naked
on a sandy beach,
rest the sore back
under the glazing sun,
and enjoy the amazing feeling of having high heat sizzling on sweaty skin
while spreading both feet and hands to fully relax on sun-dried sand.
these touchable paradises on earth are very authentic
while still kicking live,
take it now
right now!
why wait for your holy God’s dreamy heaven afterlife?
Thao Chuong
2016-11-05
7 Years Ago
Viet....in response to your Autumn Rainfall
Often times people
Are are to busy
Making preparations
For a rainy day
They tend to forget
To prepare for the
Tranquil rainbows
7 Years Ago
Quite dynamic poetry on here! Interesting sharp styles, perceptions, narratives and some crazy stuff too.
Enough to make a nut feel at home on here lol.
echo to Viets's rain
Autumn Falls
Enjoying the rhythm
the endless play
the rain
patters.. .. ..
its like a drum snare .. .. ..
a little clatter of keys
the thoughts of nature
snoring.. . zz z
waiting for Spring!
then moments, waking up
each glint of sun
seeking rays..
before the long sleep
Autumn colours are beautiful! i look forward to them every year, love the mist and fog and cool freshness of late Autumn, the stunning colours of forests laid bare to beams of light and swirling clouds as leaves flutter in golden yellows and reds and bronze, and swirl like small storms, the rustle of colours and sounds stir the heart.. as Winter shows her face.. and breathes her first snows upon you.. .
The serene beauty
of fresh snow.. .
laid upon you
... . . . . .
Nature's dream
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
Danl
I prefer not to play
in the dark
where biting
brings forth the sub.
Instead
I live in illumination,
beating back the shadow,
perpetuating
an Angelic Realm.
If my friendship withers
on this Eathly Plane
still it flourishes
where our Highest Selves
dance without Ego.
7 Years Ago
The ego is a shield
A wall
A fortress
It is self-born
Out of fear
It is transparent
Laughable
A guise
For all to see through
7 Years Ago
Good evening Jim, Danl, Jason, and Karen. Thanks.
@ Jim: Thanks for sharing, my friend. I'd like the lyrics of the song. However, I am not so keen the musical rhythms of it.
@ Danl: Your positive thought of the colourful rainbow and sunshine after long rainfall did give my soggy mind some relief of the bright future ahead! Ego is one of the main drives for us to keep our heads up. However, ego could also pull us back!
@ Karen:
I prefer not to play
in the dark
where biting
brings forth the sub.
what's a good option to consider - when in darkness.
@ Jason: Nice to see you dropping by, mate. Pretty writing about the beauty of nature in Autumn.
@ Jane: Enjoy your nap. Share your dream after waking up!
Here is my thought of the day
Daylight Saving Time
before going to bed last night,
I reset my wrist watch and all clocks inside the house
to make sure .
my life would be in line with the outside world.
alas! I totally forget to turn back the mental clock inside my mind.
after waking up this morning,
around
the same time,
as I did yesterday.
I was about to get out of bed for my craving of caffeine as usual.
she slowly lifted herself up,
gently pulled me down,
and alluringly said in a soft and sweet tone:
“honey! it’s too early for the morning coffee
also it’s Sunday.
relax.
and enjoy the extra hour, we have today”.
getting back under a cozy layer of the top sheet, the blanket, and the thick comforter,
I could feel her body heat increasingly high.
habitually, I knew more or less at that moment
about what she was
in need
of.”
I was excited to seize this astonishing bonus for an erotic ride.
simply because, I always enjoy being the only first responder
coming in time
to douse
her fire.
as we were halfway to the summit of a joy mountain,
we heard screeching sound of sharp claws on the glass patio door.
obviously, I couldn’t set back my dog’s inner clock
so he wasn’t aware of the new change in time.
he impatiently whined and then irritably howled aloud
to remind me
of my unusual lateness
in our routine for the morning walk.
“damn it!”
we both exclaim!
actually we didn’t aim our blame at the dog
but
at our silly exercise
in the so-called “Daylight Saving Time.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-06
7 Years Ago
Futile wars
the only war worth fighting
would be for coffee and beer
all others have seemed futile anyway
the Incas had tons of gold
but were a cashless society
the Egyptians paid their workers in beer
the Incas must have drank coffee
I’ll have to check that out
Jim Taylor 11/6/2016
7 Years Ago
Haa..Jim. Yeah! It's worth to go to war for coffee and beer -lol. Have a good night and sleep tight my friend.
The Trios
the dog,
the guitar,
and me,
do I need all those three?
the dog pulls the leash to walk me around
for his companionship
and love
to ease my loneliness.
the guitar vibrates its strings to sound my ears
for its pride in music
to lift my spirit up
from deep down
in the blue.
the two above are more than enough for me
nothing else is really needed
obviously
the unwanted one among the three
which I must get rid of
must be
“me”.
ain’t it sound very odd?
if I’d try to make everything in my life
perfectly alright for me
“myself”.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-06
Note: Copy and past from John's poetry thread for my own record
7 Years Ago
Natural pattern is an incredible phenomenon, which wonders me more and more each time I am travelling or just have a time "to stand and stare"...
Natural beauty is so impressive and breathtaking, it give me more energy and inspiration to achieve, create, enjoy, value... I cannot dismiss to shoot picturesque view and natural phenomenon more and more....
7 Years Ago
Thank you Valeria. It's nice to view your art and read your writings about the beauty of nature
My somber thought of the day
The Deceiving Game of Democracy
Many highly experienced politicians with plenty of years in holding public office
scratch their hairs and shake their heads
in
disbelief,
as they’ve witnessed the unbelievable
but perfectly done by just an amateur.
Their jaws have already dropped and lost in the muddy soil,
as they’ve been in absolute agony
by
the tight race
between the “arrogant” elephant and the “sneaky” donkey.
in which the two rivals have run
neck to neck,
at the very last leg,
before a very short distance to the finish line.
Those elected officials in the Federal and State Governments, also in the Congress
could never comprehend
how an amateur like him
with zero knowledge of government affairs
and absolutely no experience in politics,
such a guy
could
ride on big waves,
and rise with high tides.
he is rumbling like a tsunami about to wash away everything on its path.
Those professional politicians of “Old School” politics
have kept ignoring the most disturbing fact
that they have continuously betrayed their nation
and they have also frequently misled her citizens.
They have been offering her people
with nothing
but
endless broken promises,
also more and more damn lies…
Majority citizens of this nation are so fed up with the system
that they’re willing to take any cost and pay any price
to
get rid of
the rusty status quo
and demolish all rotten establishments.
They has no other choice
than desperately throwing their unconditional supports
to
a candidate
who is not only amateurish, but also highly ignorant,
he proudly defends for his racist’s and sexist’s ill-manners
it is how they’ve turned him into such a populist.
He has kept pointing his noisy "Trumpet"
to charge against everyone
both
his foes
and his friends
those who neither share his sleazy vision nor support his hostile approach.
It’s very odd,
if he would win this tight race.
on the other hand,
it’s the same shit,
if she could defeat him in this nasty battle.
The outcome is clearly devastated
either he or she
one of the two candidates must become the ultimate leader
of the most powerful empire on earth.
the people are deeply divided
the nation has been politically fallen into chaos.
Most importantly her democracy
is
certainly
going down the drain.
Farewell to America!
Thao Chuong
2016-11-07
7 Years Ago
Evening, morning , afternoon, night all Jim, Karen, Danl, Valeria, Jasey Babe lol.
I just wrote a poem here and then lost it - sigh.....should have used word first! It was in response to Valeria...maybe try again tomorrow:-P
Viet - Nightmares and sweet dreams lol I am sorry you have had so much rain - makes the mood soggy too. My sweet dreams were of summer and dappled shade.
It is cold here....I need the warmth of the sun.
Sleep tightx
7 Years Ago
Viet, As a highly empathetic person I find myself fighting constantly not to be overwhelmed by dark emotions. Ha ha, I love grey rainy days but it sounds like you have had way too many to make them feel restful. No Sun for a month would make me feel sad
When in darkness
I ceaselessly pray.
I chant my mantras every day.
I walk in the woods
and redirect my mind.
I look for the good.
I try to be kind.
I keep treading the dark water
to keep my head in the light.
I try not to give up
with all of my might.
Karen Newell
11/8/16
7 Years Ago
It’s been an entertaining circus season
many acrobats and side shows
I'd say best show ever
wandering magicians
slight of hand
oh they are good at their craft
the clowns have been the most entertaining
they all seem to look the same
even when their make-up
is washed away
I’m sure the show is far from over
much more entertainment on the way
7 Years Ago
Good everything Jane and the soggy potty
What can we say...
Fellow nuts
let us share the cracker
and feast
squeeeeeeeeeeze
the nut
cracker
TIGHT
the wooods are full
nature has laid bare
the berries
the swollen pods
the
rock hard
nuts
oops, NEAR BROKE A TOOTH
plenty!
just
grip
harder
HARDER
SQUUEEEEEEEEEZE.... .
CRUNCH! and
pop
out pops the nut
(c) the proverbial potty
chums of the word, the world of lunatics, nuts and poerty
remember in these days of national fever, fervor and fat mouths
OUR NUTS ARE BIGGER AND BETTER!
THE BIGGEST NUTS OF ALL ARE OURS!! US!
eat plenty
I wonderd lonley as a nut
to see a place of many nuts
each one hard, rough or smoooth
each one hard to mouth and tooth
each one played a game called
spoof
then i broke
my fractured tooth
oof
ooof
tooof
poerty is a liberation
a celebration
the way of the nation
vote 4 nuts!! (in poerty)
7 Years Ago
Getting ready to go vote 😷
This is how I feel today!
Willie Wonka boat scene
https://youtu.be/s62msrPjSVY
7 Years Ago
Good morning. It's nice to read your poetry today. Thanks
@ Jane: Losing your poem was normal. I have lost many of them in the past. Don't try to get it back. Take your high ride on another big wave.
@ Danl:
"Never get on a bus
Driven by a blind man".
why not? isn't this bus safer than the one driven by a drunkard? lol
@ Jim: It was very smart of you, man! You've talked politics without soling your mind with dirty politics -lol
@ Jason: Haa.. You've driven me nut with your poetry.
@ Karen: If you dare vote, do as soon as you can to get rid of your headache -lol
Here is my thought to Jane.
Of Your Missing Poem (Song Lyrics)
it wasn’t the first time.
you lost the poem you wrote.
you haven’t figured out so far.
what went wrong,
why it happened.
you felt so frustrated
that you’ve been pulling your hair off
ah, you ain’t the only one.
it has happened to many lousy poets.
not bad at all.
at least,
you knew for sure
it wasn’t your fault.
no point to feel the guilt.
no time wasted to find someone else to blame
no need to point your middle finger
and shout
at
the heartless computer.
trying to find a solution,
you reached deep down into your forgetful mind
in
your hope of finding
scattered pieces of your strayed poem
or at least some of those missing words inside your lost world of poetry.
sadly, your effort was to no avail.
so you were mad like hell.
oh no!
oh no!
my dear poetess.
what was the heck!
no big deal
no worry.
forget about it .
don’t kill yourself.
follow my silly advice.
(it always works fine).
trust me!
take some wine or beer,
then make love in a couple rounds.
I can assure you
the strong wind must blow your inspiration up.
jay! jay! jay!
yeah! yeah! yeah!
you sail back to the high sea of poetry
at
a much faster speed
than your wild drive in sex.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-08
7 Years Ago
VIET - Lol my other half agrees wholeheartedly ...on the bottle of wine at least ! Oh what a to do but not quite as bad as today for the voters - oh my!
Jason - your poem reminds me of the chocolate bar topic advert..........what has a hazelnut in every bite.....squirrel shit! Beautiful!
Today 8/11/16
Like a carousel
Round and round
Endlessly
Going nowhere
Which horse is in the front
Can you decide
Is there rhyme or reason
For this carousel
Just taking everyone
Along for the ride
or
Taking everyone
for a ride.
Can you decide?
up
down
all around
round
and
round
When will it stop
Will there be a winner
Or not
Is it nuts
as nutty as can bee
buzz buzz busy bee
round and round
like a macadamia nut
or shaped like a cashew
Or the carousel horse chestnut
Being spikey as can bee
buzz buzz busy bee
round and round
in circles
never-ending
circles
buzz
buzz
neigh
JEM 081116
7 Years Ago
America holds elections
Just before Thanksgiving
Because it is the best time
To pick out a turkey
7 Years Ago
Jane: It's likely Jason's poetic writing style has infested your poem Today 8/11/16
Danl: You have a great sense of black humor, man! Everyone is waiting to see which of the two turkeys would be sent to the slaughter house -lol
Here is my thought today
On the Election Day
Fingers pointing
no more!
nasty accusations
no longer!
both candidates have had their filthy mouths shut.
The patriotic citizen gets her mind back.
not fully intact,
but enough to enjoy some peace.
“what’s a big relief”, she sighs,
as she feels an extremely heavy freight
has just been taken off
from her overloaded
shoulders.
No way
to stay home
on this judgmental day.
now their fates fully rest on her hands.
it’s her turn to “play god”.
She loves to kick both rotten souls to hell
however, she must keep at least one worm - the lesser evil
for her compost to fertilize the rich soil
of her nation.
Time flies.
the clock is ticking.
she has yet made up her mind .
it is still dormant in its undecided mode.
She’ll wait until the last minute.
at the polling booth,
she’ll
close her eyes
play "Russian roulette" with her vote.
anyway,
she don’t care too much about the outcome.
it would make no difference to her life at all.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-08
7 Years Ago
HAHAHA DANL - YOU MAKE ME LAUGH!!
VIET - you are right Jason's poetry is like getting fleas - especially if you are British I feel - warped is as near to the description as I can get.....hmmm
The outcome of today is what we are all waiting for......
Jim - am loving your poetry :-)
7 Years Ago
Karen that was a great post. Maria has disappeared again, Jane your sounding like a graffiti artist so Whotcha on about dear - u a scratching old dog are you, mind your hair dont all fall out???? u on a fueled mission of some kind? the nut is obviously just a poetic tool referring to the nut politics of the last few months? maybe u didnt get it, or do you think its all pretty normal stuff in politics these days? A crazy poem is supposed to be crazy and i think Viet found it funny AS WAS intended)
Viet, how do people decide. In 2 years of campaigning, I bet many cant. If you are a new imigrant as opposed to an established one, you would probably most likely know. I often get referred to as an imigrant. Often sometimes by new imigrants and also by racists. Im anglo saxon. mixed race yes, but Im anglo saxon, father white english anglo saxon, and mother SE Asian. I see both sides. In a world coming together for decades, we are in danger of exploding in all directions. I hear the atmosphere and rhetoric - it can destroy communities, how will we all live together with the nasty rhetoric in people minds? good policies can address the needs of the world and the people in individual countries. We are seeing dangerous fragmentation everywhere. Its all one liners these days, meaningless, no depth, no real discussion beyond headliners. Maybe the media make it happen that way. How can anyone dispute global warming in this critical time? How can we not cooperate with Russia? How can we not be friends with China?
Dani and Jim, you have been writing some interesting stuff!!! Its endlessly enticing. Dont take over the commentory Jane, it gets annoying esp when derogatory. You little b.... . lol. oops.
7 Years Ago
I felt the Bern,
but he dropped out.
The top two candidates
fill me with loathing and doubt.
Now I sit watching
the flickering screen.
My conscious is clear,
I voted green.
7 Years Ago
Good evening everyone.
@ Jane: Haa...You were thinking of the today's outcome. Politics is opium to the mind and poison to the heart. Likely, you cannot get rid of it, eh? -lol
@ Jason: You have generated a lot of deep thoughts on different issues. You've kicked my mind around, mate. I don't know if human beings would ever find good solutions to those problems. Maybe, you and I could witness the doomsday of mankind, before we individually reach the end of our own rope.
@ Karen: Wow! You have found the best cause for your vote. It was very wise of you.
Have a restful evening to you all.
Sunshine on Goose Trail Today
a jet stream blows its warm air through the region.
temperature has risen up from its cold side of one digit
to over ten degrees Celsius.
it’s quite warm
this morning
at seven
oh
clock.
from the horizon afar,
the sun has leisurely risen up,
over the treetops,
onto the reddish sky.
it lights up the sombre mood of nature’s in Fall.
also it lifts up human’s happy spirit.
the Goose Trail is normally not busy on weekdays
especially
on Tuesday,
the second day of a work-week.
but on this multi-users’ sharing trail,
it is currently full of activities:
dogs bark,
walkers talks
cyclists weave their bikes.
on the gravel path,
autumn leaves are scattered
everywhere
they’re
stuck to wet ground
or sunk in shallow puddles.
It’s dry.
the day is nice.
the air is fresh.
the weather is warm.
who could refuse such an invitation for a morning walk?
even those couch potatoes
would
throw away their remote controls ,
lift their butts up,
run outside
to
enjoy the rare sunshine
in the raining and soggy season of autumn.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-08
7 Years Ago
Hi Jim: Your vote was counted. How do you feel about the democracy-in-progress DIP? Don't dip your head too deep in the countdown, you might feel disappointed -LOL. Enjoy the restful evening, regardless the outcome. To morrow is always a new day. Good night with sound sleep. my friend.
7 Years Ago
I’d love to see a woman leader
there could be many fine ones
but
it has to be the right one
no reason to shed tears
gender makes no difference
hopefully we have seen an end to a dynasty
run through the brambles and “Those Bushes” where the crazy rabbits hide
take your dynasty's
to the edge of the world and fall off forever
or be pushed off
I felt the Bern but it burnt me
supporting the dynasty in the end
in my state enjoy a joint now
long over due growing from the earth
I’ve already enjoyed my quota
in another life time
if there's a new dynasty
well
I’ll deal with it
7 Years Ago
JASON - Wooooooooah mate..........
1. I like you
2. I like your way of writing
3. I knew your poem was about poliics
4. My nutty poem was writtien in reflection to your nutty poem about politics
5. It should be a compliment to you that I try emulate your wacky writing
6. The British are reknown to have a warped sense of humour which you reflect in your wacky poems
7. Derogatory - not in my nature mate- if you have taken anything that way I apologise but nothing intended.
8. I believe we are actually on the same side you and I ?
9. Take over the commentary?? You b......? Do you have to try and get personal and nasty to me?
10. I am not THAT person you are trying to portray....you obviously do not know me
11. If you want my mobile number and want to talk to me - PM me I will send you it.
Here is a poem I wrote earlier:
VISUAL SPEAK
As I speak
I watch your face
Your eyes
Your reactions
I can see the effect
My words have
And the emotions
They create
I can change
What I am saying
And the tone I use
Analysing your face
Today's world
Of texts and Facebook
Are killing empathy
No emotion in a text
Words are used
With no thought
To feeling
Or tone
Better to converse
Face to face
Eye to eye
With emotion
JEM 030716
7 Years Ago
Ahhh Jane, must dash... you little b... (Brit! , chuckle) Love you too Jane, crossed wires then, i was caught up in ego, now im just trying to force out these teeth of yours, stuck in my buttocks. lol, joking of course. chew my ass whenever you want, ooh
A Lovely poem Jane! (Im borderline Asspergers though)
A beautiful morning poem for you then Viet, I hear BC has a huge amount of rain ! Its started raining here, November it usually starts, last few years it rained near every day for nearly 4 months. Mind you i looked up Bergen in Norway, a stunningly beautiful place, but its the wettest place in Europe, with 89 inches of rain over 231 days annually , it rains a mere 59 inches over 168 days in Vancouver, and in relatively "dry" London its just 23 inches over 164 days. You get hot Summers though!
Dani, a simple sentence can be so profound, i think people point at God far too often, we have free will, and that's basically it, this planet is hell because we all made it that way, The rest is random events in nature, we are subject to natural forces, and every now and then, God does intervene, as does that other guy the devil, but as we know, no matter what God does, God is always seen at fault and we will always be right. Its human nature to blame everyone else, including God, overlooking the devil and most often himself. I see it as like we are fish in a glass bowl, and God is outside seeing all, and the huge difference is obvious, we see a bit outside, but little else outside the room, little of the whole universe outside, and the vast difference in intelligence makes communication limited,. And as much as He tries to do.. we will always mess this place up.. and blame God. Ultimately, God will bring us our salvation. "Mysterious as we are"
Jim you'd make a lovely woman president, go for it
We have a new President. I say "we" because America's influence and power is global... . .
So lets all say "please give us your best Mr President"
Meanwhile
back on Mars, something emerged in the sands
some long lost poet
sent on a mission
muttering about this n that
looking for his dog
"give us peas"...
as peas grew
a new green planet
flee and flew
but no fish n chips?
His name was poet Tarzan
waiting for Jane
looking for his dog
it hiding in silly games
and then she arrived
with a (mobile) kitchen in toe
and his dog on lead
just a mile to go
a bloody long walk, she muttered
and together
they cooked, and ate fish n chips, in perfect peas...
Man, woman. and dog.
(just ma little wheeze)
Amen
a prayer for peas on Mars
stop being silly. who me?
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon everybody.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and venting your air out at the most critical time in modern politics -lol.
Enjoy the restful time!
@ Jim: I thought I could understand your frustration. I think that every married man has to carry one woman on his head. It would be better not to add another one on his worshiping altar. LOL. Sorry for my direct question that landed us in cold water. Take a beer and relax.
@ Jane: Jason has already explained the meaning of his former post. Personally, I believe it was just a misunderstanding. However, under a cultural perspective, I could totally wrong in my observation, mainly because I am not British.
Back to Jason’s writing in general and his poetry in particular, I think Jason tends to let the flow of his thoughts and that pf his emotion naturally go out. I believe it is easily to get his great senses of black humour. However, it’s hard to detect all hidden meanings from his original intention. Jason tends to insert multiple meanings within one poem or a piece of writing. I have found that while Jason’s poetry often provides his readers the freedom for their own interpretation, his poetry drive them insane. I could blame him for making me scratch my head. Also, I could sue him for my baldness –lol.
@ Isabella: Oopp…Sorry for our fun time of roaming around! Thanks for your timely reminder.
@ Danl Amen to your religious comment: "God works in many mysterious ways"
@ Jason: We have had a very long period of rainfalls. Some remote communities on Vancouver Island currently have to cope with flooded roads, highways, and houses. Local residents have to be relocated t emergency shelters.
@ Rudi: Thanks for dropping by and sharing your gloomy thought. Following is m silly response to your saying “Good Night America”:
Wake up and get ready for the tsunami! –lol.
Striking Beauty O’ Nature in Autumn.
early in the morning,
it’s densely foggy.
from the last night’s heavy rainfall,
lawn in the backyard
is
soggily soft.
watery dews
and dying leaves
still
hang onto the trees.
gentle breeze molests colourful canopies
with its unwelcoming touches
and disgusting kisses
on autumn
foliage.
from shaken branches,
a mixture of flurries
with
teary drops
and weeping leaves
keep jumping down
non-stop
pounding on the water-saturated ground.
lament echoes of trickling sounds
on trembled lawn
are
slowly
dispersed
into the thick mist.
the nature in Fall
not only looks artistically awesome
but also sounds musically rhythmic.
inspired
by its striking beauty,
musicians, artists, poets, and writers have created many masterpieces.
however
no human being
could have ever created anything more stunning
than
the stunning beauty
of mysterious nature.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-09
7 Years Ago
Viet you have a way of getting people in trouble....heha
The fog hasn't really set in yet, but I'm getting ready with a doom and gloom excuse.
A warm sunny day today and forecast beyond.
Fog season
it’s fog season
in the San Joaquin Valley
big valley with big fog
big ocean to nowhere
swallows the road trees and me
cant even see my nose
I’m sure It’s there though
since I’m breathing
my breath turns to fog
as if I am creating more
of the grey gloom
encircles me in it’s gloom
absorbed through the skin
soaked to the bone
my ship is lost at sea
ocean of greyness
it hangs like a bad dream
with me wrapped in it’s blanket
like a straight jacket
drives a person mad
when it’s day after day
day looks like night
trapped in a big brown paper bag
unable to break out
I cast no shadow
I cant pull the blanket from me
it will eventually lift
in it’s own time
when it feels I’ve had enough
as the sun burns the fog away
have a nice day
Jim Taylor 11/9/2016
7 Years Ago
@ Jim: Wow! your poem Fog Season is so emotionally descriptive that I would sense your own feeling. It also would make me feel as if I were walking into the mist in the San Joaquin Valley.
@ Joseph: Thanks for your lovely reminder. Family members and friends are the most precious treasure for our hearts.
Of Love and Sex
one
is
more
than enough.
even one-on-one basis
most of the time,
it is not easy to deal with,
moreover, it often goes out of hands.
two
are
too many
it’s impossible to manage
man tends forget
his God created universe and all beings.
but
He
only made
one man and one woman
with the perfect intention
for both love and sex.
so
sadistic
in his possessing nature,
man defies his God’s will,
he obtains as many as he can.
not only it takes his paradise away,
but also it sends his life into chaos
deep
down
to
the Satan’s hell.
man never blames himself
for
his ill fate
and misfortune.
he always points his finger to her
and accuse his almighty God
for
not saving his soul.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-09
7 Years Ago
Last Night Skyfall and Starry Sky Tonight.
Tonight’s atmosphere is opposite to the one - last night
everything is nearly back to the normal rhythm
everyone seems much calmer
The sky is currently still intact
(not
shattered
as horribly predicted).
the world mainly stays the same
(not
came
to its end
as previously feared).
everything is cooling down.
the horrible fear and high anxiety have been significantly subsided.
Last night,
it was significant difference.
an influx of high traffics
from the southern borders
has
jammed
and brought down
the website of Citizenship and Immigration Canada
mostly
by
anxious U.S. citizens
those who felt as if their nation was in high fever from a bad flu.
they perceived it as terminal illness also as a fatal threat to their lives
they acted in panic
as they were witnessing the end of their world next day.
They were searching
for
a safe refuge.
Canada is their first choice.
as she is the most peaceful county on earth.
she
always
stretches her hands to welcome
and opens her arms to embrace refugees and immigrants around the world.
In sharp contrast
to
the melting pot of her southern big brother’s,
she offers her Multi-culturalism for all new residents
those
who want
to retain and enrich their own traditions
while they’re adapting to her mainstream values.
Welcome all of YOU!
the Southerners
those who still wanna go up north
and share a joint with us
inside an igloo,
or outside in the freezing cold.
Only one condition requested:
“leave your guns behind”
We - peaceful Canucks
don’t
settle disputes
with drive-by shootings
but with maple syrup and salmon jerky!
Thao Chuong
2016-11-09
7 Years Ago
Echoing poems and thoughts... Fog, nothing like it for an atmosphere in the city, its cloak of finesse, a lace of calm and soothing quiet .. . misty mornings, the breath of fields in dew and hidden quiet, its rise like the face of morning life... let us drift, float, cast our days of mist upon the world and make it shine as only nature can, the mist is beautiful..
Floods and rain - these will only get worse as the oceans rise and warm and saturate the skies, the rain will become endless as others bake to dust...
back to base
Paranoid poets properly poetise paranoia plenty... carry that line on if you wish....
Now is this parody? does my poetry drive you all insane? they are often echoes of the prior many posts, cough, and there was me thinking thats what some of the cohorts among you had been trying to do these past 4 years lol... yeh u know who u r, lol, hidden in the threads, the internet and media... hijackers!! hackers, buggers, peepers, this *!$(*&%!*! this mess is all your fault, cough. paranoia?!!
I hope my meanings are clear in poetry - the one about mars was the poet endlessly seeking truths, set to comedy, walking his lost dog, chuckle and ending up on mars (unable to find the truth on earth) and it obviously embodied a take on sexual equality that pervaded even on another planet, with the peas being the metaphorical irony on peace, how could there be a war on a planet with no one there but a poet and his girlfriend... lol, the rhyming and metrics were awkward to make it a crazier feel. I hope it wasn't insane was it? The one about the nut was metaphorical about crazy politics set in Autumn theme.. pop
Jane, sorry, again. I might have upset your squirrel sensibilities.
Great point on guns Viet, here are the stats
Gun homicides per 100.000 of population
UK = 0.23
Canada 1.9
US = 10.9
Is the Canadian trend up or down? Once you hit a certain level of gun crime, everyone wants a gun and you end up like the US, unable to give up guns because everyone else has one, and people want to protect themselves from themselves ie from others with a gun... . You don't want to import gun crime.
Are people really flooding across the border? wooaah
my thoughts to yours, today, good day!
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
Gently
Lets us write gently
to the slow rhythms
of rest..
calm thoughts
pervade.. .
as the sounds
of cities
submerge.. .
and the swim
is coolness to the heat
and warming
to the
coldest
coldest
heart
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
Words can kill
Regardless what you say
Shouted out to a guy
Who verbally assaulted me
Have a restful heart attack
Two days later
His ticker stopped
7 Years Ago
interesting thread
Words can kill
love can kill
kill me with words
kill me with love
she kissed me
when I laid dead
and dead was I
in love
Christopher Maxum
7 Years Ago
Paranoid poets properly poetise paranoia plenty... carry that line on if you wish....
petulant pontificators plying philosophically potent phrases
7 Years Ago
gun homicides continued
Swaziland 37.2
and
wait for it
Zimbabwe.. .
0.39
(deaths by gun per 100,000)
astonished?
i was
deaths by poetry
0.0000001
+
deaths by words
many many MANY
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
good ones Karen, who can follow
7 Years Ago
Tiggers never get lost bunny boy!
BOING! Oh, hey, hey. Look, look, look. Oh, what a strange-looking creature. Mmm, look at those beady little eyes, and that "purrposterous" chin, and those "rickydickorous" striped
pyjamas! [looking at his reflection]..........
So ....if there was only Adam and Eve...or Tarzan and Jane and the dog eating peas - are we all related.........or interbred?
Paranoid poets properly poetise paranoia plenty.......picking pretty prose promptly, professionally.........
in echo to all
WINTER MISTS
Swirling, caressing,
Leaving no stone unturned
Whispering in and out
of all nooks and crannies
Climbing slowly and
Clasping the crags
Then swooping the valleys
leaving its damp dewy trail
As it rises and vanishes
with the gentle warmth of the winter sun
JEM 101116
7 Years Ago
Hey Jane! lol boing
That was a beautiful spread of mist
Now, to be serious, u r a word short of a 6-pea line pod
but i shall amend the unposted rules to allow 5 or 6... or 7 or... more pea words
lets say 5 to 500 words per pod and a big hand full of pods will make a great pea soup
Pea or P
P it surely is
Potty Poetry Plus
Paranoid poets properly poetise paranoia plenty...
petulant pontificators plying philosophically potent phrases
picking pretty prose promptly, professionally.........
who can make it rhyme v1 2,4 v2 2,4 v3 3,5 etc
7 Years Ago
Please feel free to amend it to
picking pretty prose promptly, professionally........perfectly.
7 Years Ago
Potty Poetry Plus
Paranoid poets properly poetise paranoia plenty...
petulant pontificators plying philosophically potent phrases
picking pretty prose promptly, professionally........perfectly
plum pleasing pleasures playing proud pertinacious
pleasing pea pod poets
7 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing I’ve enjoyed the natural flow of your thoughts. Have a restful time.
@ John: You nailed it. How could we –humans get rid of our yin and yang emotion? What would we be if we could dispose our “good or bad” feelings?
@ Jason: Your flow of poetry has risen as rising water has gone over riverbank. Nicely written poems! I lov’em. Easy to swallow! –lol.
About gun: I think that in general it is hard for human beings to kick off our own addiction. Moreover, “Gun and Gum” are more an issue of culture than a bad habit. I am somewhat biased in my observation that Americans culturally love to carry while chewing gum. –lol. Note: I was in Singapore for awhile. This country has strictly banned chewing gums. . Thanks for sharing your nice thought of our soggy mood.
@ Karen: Oh no! You’ve been lured to the muddy land full of P nuts -lol
@ Danl: Words are sharper swords. Words create a slowly suffering death, while guns give an instant checkout.
@ Jane: Wow… What’s an awesome poem! I could feel and see the flow of mist.
Haa…Jason, it’s my P response to your p, pee, pea, peanut...
To P or Not to P Is the Question
P is for:
pie
pea
pear
peach
pea..nut
Peed by those mental nuts, life is really sucked
Pea without nut must drive you nut
P is for:
pet
pee
poo
poop…
Poop too much must make your weak
Pee without poop must make you feel stuck
P is for:
painter
paint
pallet
painting
pancake…
Paint without fame, your inspiration must be dropped into shit.
Pain with no money gained, your empty stomach must be wrecked.
P is for:
poet
pen
peep
peek
pose
poke…
Punch your head too deep inside poetic shit, your mind must go down through a toilet
Pen of too many nonsense words, you must be sucked into feces.
P is for:
Ps,
Peas
Pees...
Please no more Pee.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-09
7 Years Ago
@ Christopher Maxum. Nice poem! Thanks for sharing.
"kill me with words
kill me with love
....
and dead was I
in love"
I enjoyed your poetic thought.
7 Years Ago
An echo for Viets poem about Canadian immigration.
I agree about Canada being good, and they accepted many conscience objectors during the Viet Nam war.
Jimmy Carter pardoned them a few years later and gave them the option to come back without going to prison.
This was my experience.........
Canadian border
it was 1970
three friends
fresh out of a stale high school
hit the road in a Ford Econoline van
to escape the orange curtain
Orange County Southern Cal
Destination beautiful Canada B.C.
along with the whole western U.S.
the excitement was building
as they reached the B.C. border crossing
ah beautiful B.C.
the north country
seemed exotic
they’ll just wave us on in like long lost cousins
like a friendly Mounty shaking your hand
a man outside the building
informed us that we needed to come inside
let me see your draft cards boys
ok we got them
it was the law that you had to carry them
my friend and I had 1A printed on them
meaning
“available and ready for military service”
our free ticket to the dreaded land of Viet Nam
Our other friends card read 4F
meaning unqualified
The man asked why 4F
my friend replied
I was arrested for marijuana
We were getting concerned at this point
the unfriendly man went behind a door for a few minutes
when he came back out
he stated in a rude way
we have reason to believe
you are coming here to dodge the draft
also unemployment is Canada's biggest problem
we laid down our argument
were only vising
and really wanted to see Canada
he pointed to the door and said
no your not getting in
we asked another woman at the desk if we had any recourse
she said you could appeal to the supervisor
we went back to the other counter
the same rude man came out
we stated that we wanted to appeal to the supervisor
he glared at us in a mean way and said
I am the supervisor
we proceeded to get the hell out of there
our brief visit to Canada was over
we drove past the building hung a U
and drove back towards America
as we passed the building
he was standing in front of a large window
he made a strong gesture with a swinging arm
in the southerly direction towards America
we responded with three sets of
one fingered salutes
as we drove slowly past
this dream spoiler from hell
back to where we came
we enjoyed an amazing summer travel
through the magnificent west
meeting amazing like minded people
that years draft lottery numbers
were announced in a local Colorado newspaper
where we were at the time
that’s another story
Jim Taylor
7 Years Ago
An echo
to
Danl's poem "Words can kill..",
, Jason's verse:
" deaths by words
many many MANY.",
and Christopher poem: "Words can kill"
Deaths by Knives, by Guns, and by Words.
wana kill?
go ahead!
behead me with your sharp blades
or blow my brains out with your machine guns
‘cause, I prefer a swift death to a dreadfully prolonged life
through
which
I
live in humiliation and hostility
with eternal sufferings
by your permanently verbal abuses.
you may know.
or you may know not
your poisonous words
whether dull or sharp
they
gradually
rob my pride
and steal my hope.
not only your dull words tear my heart apart.
but also your sharp ones rift my mind off
days and nights
I’ve been suffered a slow death
by
being buried alive inside a tomb
oh, your words are painfully hurt.
I wanna have my slow death ended instantly
please shoot me
or behead me
now!
Thao Chuong
2016-11-09
7 Years Ago
Ah Jim: Thanks for sharing your poem telling us about unique experience in the seventies. It's a very interesting story well-written by the poet himself. BTW: Glad to know that Canada gave you a good impression regardless the hard time you got from the border guard who wore triple hats. I hope you wouldn't mind sharing the rest of your own story as Vietnam War draft dodger. You had a happy ending of having been still kicking alive for far.
Good rest, my friend.
7 Years Ago
I just got some startling news
My imaginary friend just filed
A restraining order against me
7 Years Ago
Be unrestrained Dani
You have a way with words
unlike any other
they are mere gravel and pots and shiny gems
to trample on and kick about in your garden
of youthful old age
i hear the garden go crazy
crash smash and oh wait, what a diamond!
yee ha!
Haha what a story Jim, tell us more! echoing what Viet said too.
I was in Canada 10 year back and we had an interrogation to get into the US! They did let us in though
Dig up the border and let a stream flow through! lol -
we can paddle and just lift our trouser legs up and dash on through.. .
an echo to free movement -
There is this whole brexit thing going on here in the UK, we have free movement of people in the EU now, we will miss this if we go the full hard brexit and all need visas. I think we all need to address mass migration from any particular country as opposed to dynamic free movement with people coming and going, everyone was happy with the EU until the mass migration issue. The next generations might hate us and blame us if we go belly up, and cut off all their hopes in Europe, the stability, the freedom, the successes of peace and cooperation, the younger generations voted to stay. What a big discussion. Personally i dont think a 51% majority to 49% is overwhelming, its very very close for a life changing and nation changing decision, we live in a parliamentary democracy, everyone from the people, the government and parliament should get their voice heard, for a such a massive decision. As we know public opinion is very fickle, volatile and changes month to month, year to year, if we go hard brexit and ditch it all in the EU, and public opinion sweeps the other way, we cant go back and change it. We need the best long term answers, not short term possibly very dangerous ones. When the risks are so great, caution is advised, engage with others and fully discuss. Nothing is to be gained from a possible complete EU collapse and disarray and the possibilty of our collapse. One liners and rhetoric to shape our future is risky crap. Especially as the older generation will all pass on - leaving the young the to carry the can with the disarray. Playing roulette? isnt that for the super
rich?
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
echo to Viets multi-threaded echos
I couldn't have put it better Viet, how do we get through it all...
" I
live in humiliation and hostility
with eternal sufferings
by your permanently verbal abuses."
multithreaded echoes are fun to do, deep and can be quite profound Viet
Previousy You said
"I believe it is easily to get his great senses of black humour. However, it’s hard to detect all hidden meanings from his original intention. Jason tends to insert multiple meanings within one poem or a piece of writing. I have found that while Jason’s poetry often provides his readers the freedom for their own interpretation, his poetry drive them insane. I could blame him for making me scratch my head. Also, I could sue him for my baldness –lol."
Id say its more whacky and crazy than dark but it can be
You did worry me about poetry driving people insane, sometimes and often I do have multiple meanings in what I write, perhaps 3 or 4 meanings, that play with the reader, different levels, i guess that can confuse, i like the depth of multiple meanings, take one or some or all or none, or just see the imagery and play with it, go with nuts if you like lol
Let me plant flowers in your head
see them blossom
harvest my smiles and doom
play with my face and moods
and light the fires of hope
Be with me in your head
as you walk into mine
and I walk into yours
.. let us plant those flowers
as we smile and cry.. . endlessly
bald
Depth of meaning in poetry
There's alot of depth on these threads, different people, different ages, different experiences in life.. there's great depth and experience and thinking..
why do i say all this?
i hear others comment about poetry from the new stuck up and traditionals who often get there from who they know is this pal-ocracy, this chum-ocracy, the media-ocracy (chuckle)
Another recent dialogue i encountered that poetry SHOULD rhyme, have exact structures, that's what a poem is about.. aint it?
and...
that alot of the other stuff is just crap!
Hek
well my answer is one set of poetry might rhyme metrically, but when you take away the rhyme and metrics, is there anything much left of depth?
is it shallow or vacuous?
even worse
could it be hammmy and dull?
Most world poetry doesn't rhyme. Great poets often do not rhyme. Rhymes do rhyme though. Is a rhyme a poem? It can be, but its a rhyme. Is a song lyric a poem? It can be but often it relies on the music to elevate it to full stature. A bit like rhyming poems.. that can be great
and my definition of good poetry is that once you have read it
has it transported you to a different place in your mind? (ok, mad or otherwise)
Are you profoundly changed or moved by it?
Have your emotions been touched deeply?
Do you see something so clearly that you didnt see before?
Prose might do that in hundreds or 1000s or 10,000s of words but its often never such a magical or beautiful experience, just often a flat level education of sorts. Good literature obviously will effect you greatly and possibly do the same as poetry , But a poem can achieve it all in a few words. And as many books are written by ghost writers, publishing has made itself a complete joke to literature to many. Anyone heard of a ghost poet? maybe there are who knows.
AND we are poets.. simply.. naked.. and unpretentiously at play..
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
poet
7 Years Ago
Thanks Viet and Jason for your interest about my Canada misadventures.
"To be continued" the way the old film leaves you hanging until next weeks episode.
Viet "You The Poet"
Echo on the pea talk.
A little non sense keeps a person going.
Jason,You said ghost writer.
How about the ghost writers that write speeches for presidents and others.........
pea brain
they told him he had a pea brain
smaller than a bird brain
he agreed
yes like two peas in a pod
actually there are six peas in the pod
all working together like a well oiled machine
to achieve the same goal
like a team rowing together in a longboat
crossing the finish line
while the rest of the dummies are behind
thanks for the compliment
it also explains my green eyes
I have a ghost writer
the ghost visits me daily
usually hovering around the ceiling
I can’t really see him
but I know he’s there
he feeds the words down
with a kind smooth hand
or blows them slowly down
with a custom made straw
sometimes there a bit raw
I have to rework them
I don’t like that
he tells me if I emptied my mind
and let them enter
I would never have to work
and rework
Jim Taylor 11/11/2016
7 Years Ago
Good evening all. Thanks to Jason and Jim for sharing your unique thoughts and your poetry.
Jason: Thanks for your flow of thoughts about free movement. I'd like to inject my perspective and make comments on these issues, because you have turned my mind over and made it itch. However, I has to restraint myself, simply I am afraid that it would throw both of us into a hot boiler -lol.
Your writing about poetry is quite interesting. I could see some good points. I'd rather do poetry as it always makes me feel good. I feel itchy each time I talk about poetry. Short or long, rhyme or not rhyme, expressionism or realism, etc... I think it is up to each individual poet to defines his/her own writing style. I don't see any point to define poetry in general and the good or the bad of a poem in particular. When a poet writes, she/he writes to express herself/himself and for herself/himself- not for the readers.
Jim: Your poem "I have a ghost writer " has brought my thought to those well-paid speech writers for sneaky politicians around the world -lol
I'd better go back to my poetry in action
Description: This shot was taken from a high viewing tower looking over all the temples in Bagan- I think it was 17 floors up? There was a lady in the garden sweeping all the leaves up. I just loved the shadows which had been created around her.
My echo to Jane’s poem about sweeping leaves (that was buried somewhere in this thread) and also her Artwork Sweeping Shadows. Thanks for being my inspiration, my friend.
Sweeping Fallen Leaves
on the ground
around
the Buddhist temples in Bagan
the lawn is well-manicured
like
a smoothly green carpet
of any golf course in the West.
in Fall,
wind blows fallen leaves around
and randomly forms patches of multiple colours.
under bright sunshine
the ground
looks
strikingly beautiful.
a maintenance worker gently sweeps
patiently gathers scattered dead leaves
and put into
piles
and piles.
she walks slowly around .
her bamboo-made broom strikes lentement,
at each of her step,
bit
by bit,
left and right.
back and forth.
as if it is trying to sweep up her moving shadow.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-10
Note: Adverb "lentement" in French means "slowly but confidently" in English.
7 Years Ago
ISABELLA - Thank you sooooooo much for getting Viet's page restored :-) Tell me who called you a gremlin and I will get them for you !
VIET - You are welcome :-) And thank you for the promotion. I had forgotten I went away to do an echo in all the commotion lol.
JASON - Hope you slept well?
DANL - I don't blame you really....only joking josh josh
JIM - You out there?
It's good to be home lol
7 Years Ago
First of all, I'd like to thank Isabella again for spending her valuable time and her energy to fix the technical issue and bring back this thread.
Secondly, I must express my thanks to ,those poet friends sand artist friends of mine for your PMs from your personal email accounts or from FAA email system. I am sorry for not being able to reply to all of your PMs.
I welcome you back to share your art, your poetry, and thought again.
Here is my thought of yesterday that was an echo to Jane's poem VISUAL SPEAK
Communication in Real-life and On-line
he‘s fed up with all types
of
online
communication
through which he blindly talks with invisible strangers.
he is sick of extreme hostilities
and frequent misunderstandings
on
chat-lines
and discussion boards.
he’d rather talk to a real human
directly
in
person
face to face.
he thinks
that it’d be better
to
see the face and notice facial expression,
look into the eyes and detect hidden intention,
glance at the gestures
read the body language,
and listen to pitches, tones, pauses, and rhythms during a dialogue.
he believes
it would help him detect the mood, sense the feeling, catch the emotions,
and
most importantly,
he would know the personality
of those whom he’s talking to or chatting with.
alas
somewhat he forgets
the great benefit of his online communiqué,
which he can terminate anytime
by
just immediately
turning his computer off.
he cannot do it in his face-to-face communication
whenever the talk goes wrong,
he can’t just ignore it
because, other speakers would interpret as an act of passive hostility,
they might feel really offended,
and could react in a nasty way.
he would get a black eye
or
even
worse
he might be sent to an emergency room.
in the modern era,
humans do need both online and real-life communication
each of the two has its own advantages and disadvantages.
it is totally up to the communicator
to solve conflicts
in
a way,
which could either benefit or hurt him.
Thao Chuong
2016-06-11
I re-post Jane's related poem for your reference
VISUAL SPEAK
As I speak
I watch your face
Your eyes
Your reactions
I can see the effect
My words have
And the emotions
They create
I can change
What I am saying
And the tone I use
Analysing your face
Today's world
Of texts and Facebook
Are killing empathy
No emotion in a text
Words are used
With no thought
To feeling
Or tone
Better to converse
Face to face
Eye to eye
With emotion
JEM 030716
7 Years Ago
Of Leaves and Humans (Tanka)
freshly green in spring
outstanding beauty in Fall
dying leaves on trees
now decomposed on wet ground
don’t humans’ lives sound the same?
Thao Chuong
2016-11-12
7 Years Ago
Anything happen around here? I fell asleep for a day and a half......
Sleep in a hollow log
an early autumn morning
stepping out my back door
feeling swept like autumn leaves
I wandered deep into the backwoods
loosing track of time as I walked
seeing an unusual number of animals
deer
raccoon
squirrels
hawks
even bear
small birds everywhere
I was inspired to hike on
came upon a hollow log
I crawled inside
needing a short rest
not meaning to sleep
I awoke from a vivid dream the next morning
was startled not remembering where I was
in the dream the animals spoke
but not in words
about delivering me to the next dimension
when my time has come
Jim Taylor 11/3/2016
7 Years Ago
Bukowski And Me... The Beginning Of A Great Friendship
Bukowski and me;
Drinking, Swearing and Throwing a Punch or Two:
i met Bukowski in a skid row tavern
where the corners of everything
had been worn round from years of over use
the place was yellowish grey with age and reeked
with the stench of stale cigarettes butts
spilled beer and whiskey that fought through the acrid smell of sweat and urine
hovering around the lost souls sitting on wobbly bar stools made steady
by their occupant’s immobility and desire to never leave...
and there we were
Bukowski and me standing toe to toe
slamming each other
with words sharp
and cutting
nothing nice going on here
Ed Meredith
2016
7 Years Ago
Jason's thoughts on poetry brought this to mind:
FAA
hello my fellow poet people my appearance here is just another sequel
in taking the helm of this digital realm so seductive and addictive
so copulative and predicative that i need to flee from time to time
to free my mind so that i may save a day for child’s play that keeps me sane
my featherbrain full of cellophane of thoughts fraught and overwrought
with lots of counterplots that freeze the rhyme of the line and rhythm with its schisms
of confusion and disillusion of how to bring this poem to its
conclusion
Ed Meredith
2016
7 Years Ago
Political Prisoner
i was put away they say for a lifetime and a day
my punishment never to cease never to be released
incarcerated in the name of public safety no grant of amnesty for me
you see i'm made to wait chained to freedom’s gate
that's welded shut and locked my internal debate
to continue on so long then so wrong
went the words of my chosen song
that no longer had rhyme nor reason
for pleasin' my state of mind so misaligned
with the paradigm that i was told
no… make that sold
that my ideas and point of view
didn’t fit with politics i knew to be askew
trouble maker anarchist they listed me
terrorist they insisted i be
put away out of sight out of mind so my kind
might never be seen or heard from again
but much to their chagrin
and lack of discipline
i put backspin on their ball setting off a squall
a tempest of dissent hellbent with intent
to change and correct the disconnect
of the State and the Soul of the body politic the people who refuse to bootlick
rise with me and use your minds my sisters and brothers
end the tyranny before it smothers
and absconds
with our rights and liberties lost together forever
when cut off at the knees will we whimper and please the overlords
wielding the sword that flays and displays the cruelty of their ways
expose them now look around
the evidence is abound
stop them in the path they have set
to destroy this grand experiment we have already met
called
LIBERTY
JUSTICE
EQUALITY
Rise with me
Ed Meredith
2016
7 Years Ago
Ohhhhhhh, I am so thrilled the thread is back, and, hi after so long to you Ed, and thanks all for keeping me sane, via your poetic insights, responses........(welllll, sort-of sane)
7 Years Ago
Hi Vivian...
its good to be here dipping my toe back into the poetry pond i'm so fond of, how you doing love, hope all's well in every way as you head for summer...
What if the first map makers had been Australian?
7 Years Ago
I'm still awake Jane, perusing, it feels like a time warp re-reading posts of months and years back, does time change in a poets mind, does poetry transcend... time.... as you write it do you change.. time.. inside your mind?
Jim's asleep. Found his home. snoozing with the ants and antelope, the rabbits and the flowers.. at ease with life
Ah, the old master is back. Great to see him post.
We'd duck and dive
but he'd still hit
bulls eye
7 Years Ago
Thank you everyone
@ Jim: Don't hibernate too long, my friend. Your neighbor building a wall to block your driveway -lol
@ Ed: Welcome back to home - your civilized world from your long trip in Latin America. Nice to read your provoking poetry which reminds me of our good old days of having fun roaming around.
@ Viva: Haa.. Glad to hear that you've found your sanity on the land of insane thoughts of the day. Did you see the Super Moon last night In Sidney? Too much rain here , so the Super moon was probably dissolved in the soup for my Last Supper.
@ Jason: Glad to see you safe and sound. Keep writing the way you'd like to write, mate.
My thought of the day is for Viva
My Blue Moon and Your Super Moon
I didn’t wanna miss the exceptional phenomenon of universe.
if I let it go away this time
no way for me
to see
it
again
within the rest of my life.
I had been waiting for it for many days
until last night
I
stood outside for awhile,
cocked my head up onto the gloomy sky,
and tried to look for the magical beauty of nature.
To
my
surprise
I saw nothing
but the gray and gloomy waterfall from the sky
I found myself soaked like a wet blanket.
Don’t tell that you saw the Supper Moon.
don’t show me your stunningly beautiful photos of it.
I won’t believe you.
Not only would I argue with you to my own death
to dispute your truth
and prove
that
you're
damned wrong,
but also would I blame you for fooling me of the truth.
Trust me
I swear to God
I saw neither your Super Moon nor van Gogh's Starry Night
I myself looked for it by my own eyes
onto the sky for quite awhile
last night.
So you know why
YOU
and I
as human beings,
we don't live well in harmony
often we go to war to settle the differences
between
your own
and my own
social, political, and especially religious beliefs.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-14
7 Years Ago
Viet if you cant see the moon.
Moon the people and cars going by.
That would be a super moon.
Good to see ya Ed.
I like your Bukowski sketches and writing.
He had a sculptress girl friend who did a sculpture of his head. A scary thing to look at on your table.
By coincidence I recently visited the you tube stuff which I hadn't in a long time. A lot of stuff on there now. Even complete E-books so I've been entertained.
No one reads like him!!
I grew up in Southern Cal. I had a friend that was always ahead of the curve.
Back in the day he told me he went to see a guy named Charles Bukowski read poetry.
He said he had a large pot of beer in front of him. He was dipping a cup into it and drinking as he gave the reading.
The crowd was yelling "Get drunk Bukowski get drunk. I thought wow strange.
I understand more now though.
7 Years Ago
Hi Ed, thanks for thoughts. Re 'first Australians', our Aborigines have been here over 40,000 years........but they never set out to map the world. As far as I know. They are attatched to their land, not seafarers like the UK, who 'settled' , traversed, and otherwise, 'occupied' the globe. There seems to be a need among some to wander..........I wonder, lol........pun intended..........why not for some, that need..................and for others.......that insatiable need to 'know'.........?
Viet, I just love your poem, and thank you for the dedication........I'm honoured ! And, hey, I agree with you, too............will wonders never cease? Somewhat like your incessant rain in BC...........there is a purpose in everything, m'thinks..........even this Beaver Moon..........it spooks me ! I've been moon-mad since the recent full moon, and can't shake the feeling
these major moons...........are, my, last.....................very strange. Suits me. I am.......replete.
7 Years Ago
Thanks everyone for your return greetings
Viv, i just wondered that if the Down Unders made the maps would we Above Overs defiantly stand on our heads…
Jason, i do hope it’s not just, “It’s all about me” that makes “me” think your "old master hits the bulls eye" is “All about me”… lol
Jim, thanks… Yeah Bukowski is indeed a good read… fans and crowds can be a destroying element in a person’s/performer’s life when they want them to be predictably defined and not necessarily who they are.
Danl, we all suck, that’s what makes us great-ly brave…
Viet, just as in the “good old days”, i was tempted to respond and echo your closing hot buttons in “My Blue Moon and Your Super Moon “ … but i thought better and used all my strength to comply with the rules set by the forum’s game of politics and religion.... . Restraint
Like you, i too missed seeing the Super Moon as it was hidden behind a luminescence veil of thin cloud cover. How different we view/see and experience the Cosmos, i guess it’s all about perspective/point of view. What’s that old saying; “Location Location Location”… lol
However an echo did happen, though slightly changed by the reflective walls and acoustics of my “ Location Location Location”…
every day is a new day
unlike any other
every day is a new day
to consider
a new worldview
new philosophy
perspective
every day of my life
was 30,000 different ways
of understanding the world
through 30,000 lenses
making sense of reality
and yet
an infinite number of vantage points
so elusive
have not been considered
i know nothing
nothing of this world
tantalizingly surreal
in its ambiguity
i know nothing
of its secrets
mysteries
or the steps
to its indecipherable dance
i know nothing at all
nothing but
every day is a new day
unlike any other
Ed Meredith
7 Years Ago
ok i will do as i please Viet, hope your playmate has more to post, the old Ed Cid
of poetry
strapped to his horse...
echo to Monsieur Dani
Pluck a violet
bite a rose
lick an orange
pick a nose
oi now
just suck my poem
like you know em
or if ur bad
remember chad?
huh?
u can blow em
like hanky jobbies
cry n cry, blow n blow
like a hobby?
the tears of the poet
are tears of a know it
oops a rhyme structure failure
not a pretty witty dahlia
just complete utter
poey potty poet mania
just kick a flower pot
and go with it...
crash
ps
enjoying your dryness
and then your wiseness
so, may the cockups
be with us
just like u and u and u on
the cock up thread, here baptised
lol
Just pissing with the dog
looking for the poet
walking his lead
us in the bushes, he doesnt know it
just pissing laughing
chuckle we just blown it...
ok that was dreadful
but nice
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
say what?
edited
edit: welcme back Ed
7 Years Ago
Thank you Jason
Rodrigo Díaz de Vivar
or Ruy if you prefer to defer
to El Cid
the kid
from Vivar
so far
from Valencia
by way of the Moors
who called him As-Sid
on their warring tours
Ed Cid
2016
7 Years Ago
HOLA - Ed, Viva, DANL, Jim, Jason and Viet et al.
VIET - to make you feel better:
Yesterday.....
Settings all set
Batteries fully charged
Car all packed
Found a hole in the rain cloud
Off I drove
Arrived at location
Jumped out the car
Clouds rushed over
Rain fell
Back in the car
Clear skies today
Moon small
Story of my life
Never be prepared
Only for the unexpected
Ahhhhh! forgot the camera
JEM 151116
7 Years Ago
In memory of my mother
You waited in the shadows of the night
You waited for signs that it would be alright
The moon shines down upon your face
With stars from heaven light and grace
The stars are souls that have passed away
You dream of seeing them all someday
Let them walk hand in hand and take you to the promised land
You hear the music and you see the light
For all that have passed will make it all right
Today and tomorrow you're in my dreams
A life that was torn away from it seams
You have been as brave as a soldier at war
The years have gotten you down to the core
So close your eyes and dream of your dance
Heaven is awaiting your precious glance
Hold me close and never let go
For your my mother and I love you so
I'll cry a tear and an ache in my heart
Mom deep down inside I am not ready to part
But with each new day time has healed my broken way
So rest your soul my beautiful mother
For in my life there could be no other
I love you Mom 🌹
By Lori Lovetere
11/15/2016
7 Years Ago
Thats lovely Lori, may she rest in peace and she will enjoy reading such a loving heart felt poem.
7 Years Ago
Wow..wow...whoa...What's an amazing poetic flow! Thank you all. it's nice to see nearly the full sledge of poets, except poet Karen and the missing poet Maria.
FYI: I have tried a couple of times with the "Search Discussion. However, I couldn't find Maria's poetry thread. I don't know whether the last technical bug has buried her thread somewhere in the labyrinth of discussion boards or it was my poor technical skills that prevented from finding it.
@ Jim: Don't follow Bukowski's path and wreck your mind. Get back to your nap in the log -lol
@ Vivian: Thanks for being my inspiration, my dear friend. It was nice to see you happy and relaxed.
@ Danl.
"Roses are red
Violets are orange
I suck at poetry
But all you guys are great".
Thank you, bro. I think that unlike mother-milk which keeps babies alive and healthy, poetry drives adults insane. Don't suck it, sir -lol
@ Ed: Glad to see your smooth flow and read your poetry again. Your poem Political Prisoner was quite a temptation. But I had to restraint myself from getting to the "P" trap that might cut my short life shorter. I could do an echo in a softer way, but I felt that I would lose my good punch at it -lol.
@ Jane: it's great to see you in the crowd.
Good day to all
My thought of the day is an echo to Ed's poem Every Day Is a New Day - Unlike Any Other
Am I Just an Insane Daydreamer?
today is like many other days in the past.
every day is the same.
not much difference.
nothing new.
nothing
has
changed in human’s nature.
from the savage time of the Stone Age
to the so-called civilization of the modern era.
man still eats man..
there are still wars.
he ruthlessly fights,
not
for his own survival,
but for his insane thirst of power
and for his bottomless desire for greedy possession,
for
more
and more…
every day is the same.
nothing is changed today.
man still hates man.
he kills without mercy.
he destroys his own sanctuary.
in many countries
towns
cities
prairies
seashores
farmlands
mountains
one after another are ravaged.
millions of civilians flee for safe refuge.
hundred thousands of innocents:
children
women
elders
die of starvation
or get killed by shootings and bombings.
tomorrow is another day
let’s hope it would be different
than
today,
and many other days in the past.
let us join our hands together and keep our dream alive.
I believe eventually peace would come.
am
I
just
an insane
daydreamer?
Thao Chuong
2016-11-15
7 Years Ago
@ Lori Lovetere: It's a lovely sweet surprise to read your heart-felt poem. I love it. Thanks for sharing, my friend.
7 Years Ago
Viet, I'll try to take your advice and not wreck my mind. I have insurance on my truck in case I wreck it, but not my mind. I have had to bend it back in shape a few times.
Like a fender.
Burnt grilled cheese
(or adventures of a wrecked mind)
I feel like a grilled cheese sandwich
that has a brown rubber consistency
sometimes used as a dog toy
that cheap standard in a poor boys diet
made with American cheese
you know the stuff that lies between
two pieces of plastic
peel away the plastic and flop it
between two slices of white bread
preferably wonder bread
the stuff in the bag
with yellow red and blue balloons
printed on the package
thin with not much substance
or nutrition
but keeps you going
grilled and cooked slow
slowly burning to a brown black
washed down with a liter of soda
that cracks your teeth
got my lunch packed
I’m ready for a dream venture
in a sailboat in the sky
yellow red and blue balloons
printed on the sails
sailing up
floating down
landing in the middle of nowhere
Jim Taylor 11/15/2016
7 Years Ago
Lori, your poem, “In Memory of My Mother” made me think of something i once read or wrote i'm never sure... lol:
When one recalls the enrichment of friendship love and family, then the sharp pain of loss is dulled...
Hola Jane, espero que todo esté bien y tu estés lleno de alegría...
HAHAhaaa, i did that once on a location photo shoot some 85 miles from my studio. It was the last day of a three day shoot and the set was already lit and readied from the day before. All i had to do was put the models on set and we could start the day's shooting. i suddenly realized that as the art director and i left the studio yada yadaing it, i had literally stepped around and over my camera case… duh
Viet…
When every day is the same we never speak of God here in Hell
But when every day is a new day unlike any other, we only talk of Tao here in Hell
7 Years Ago
Lori, I think Leonard Cohen gets it right. The song is written about a woman but I suppose its all the same.
Plus a celebration of the late Leonard Cohen. RIP
7 Years Ago
Good evening everyone. Thank you Lori, Jim, and Ed.
@ Jim: You have gotten back your humor with your poem Burnt grilled cheese
@ Ed: "When every day is the same we never speak of God here in Hell
But when every day is a new day unlike any other, we only talk of Tao here in Hell"
From our remark above, I could smell both Taoism and detect your black humor.
Here's my echo the your thought, ED.
The Way of Mind, the Life of Man, the God of Universe
in
Tao.
yesterday,
today,
tomorrow,
of
the flying time,
all are but the illusion,
like the no-stop flowing water on the river.
without the mind,
neither hell
nor heaven
could be in existence.
the world outside would only become a reality,
when it's ,perceived
by the inner
self.
without you and your self-awareness,
YOU
yourselves
wouldn’t subsist.
in
its own nature,
Tao don’t exist.
do not talk about it.
go with the flow of a river .
like
water dissolves itself into the immense sea.
you disperse your inner-selves fully into the outer-universe.
eventually.
heaven and hell.
YOU and GOD.
merge
into
Oneness
Thao Chuong
2016-11-15
7 Years Ago
Good evening Jason.
Sorry mate, I didn't mean to miss you in my late response. I had been trying to detect hidden messages in your echo to Danl's poem Roses are red. I didn't want to get hurt by your "bomb poetry". Yet, besides your black humour as usual, I could only see a nasty "blow job" -lol
Here is my echo to Danl's Roses and also a re-echo to your echo
Roses and Violets for You, My Love!
like
roses are red
and violets are blue,
your lips are red
your cheeks are rosy
your eyes are blue.
I kiss your lips
I dip too deep
my tongue gets stuck inside your throat.
I lick your cheeks.
too much make-up
a thick layer of pinky powder plugs off my nose,
I sneeze.
I wheeze.
I cough non-stop.
I drown myself into your blue eyes.
my heart are lost.
my mind are blind.
I fall into something alluring.
I think it’s sex.
you call it love.
It is so true.
roses are red.
violets are blue.
in love
everything is rosy.
in life
sex is blue.
in love and sex
life is endless headache
for both of us
you and
me.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-15
7 Years Ago
Viet, your thoughts of mind well taken, shaken but not stirred or lost in the vast full emptiness of mine…
The Paradox
Vive la Difference
i am
a prisoner of my mind
which should be but a servant
useful and loyal
not enslaved
by convention
and fear
but the heart
oh my heart
in its endless
freedom flight
seeks the unity
in harmony's paradox
of differences
found within the depths
of oneness
and uniqueness
Ed Meredith
7 Years Ago
An echo’s echo of Viet’s echo of Jason’s echo of Danl’s “Roses are Red, I Suck”
Roses are Red
Ice Cream'snot
Tao of Heaven and Hell
my stare was fixed
as i watch its movement
ever so
s
l
o
o
o
w
'til i could stand it no longer
a creamy sweet coolness
covered my tongue
as i licked his chin and lips
freeing them of Ben and Jerry
Ed Meredith
2016
7 Years Ago
Lori - God rest her soul - at least she is at peace now. Love life while you are here.
ED - Hiya - not so sure about Joy at the moment lol - Think I am awaiting spring xx
Jim: Loved the grilled cheese - makes you wonder just what gets manufactured for human consumption lol
VIET - You reminded my of a poem I posted earlier - I hope your dream is a reality
The Greed of Man
Like two bloated gluttonous sumo wrestlers
In between them the earth laid out flat
Like a table cloth
Their eyes flicking over the bounty
Set before them
Drooling over the concept it is theirs
For the taking
They grow restless awaiting the start
Where to start?
Go...arms flying grabbing, shovelling
In their mouths
Trees, plants, mammals, side of mountains
Dredging the oceans, whales, dolphins sharks
Mmmmmm those fins
Monuments, tower blocks, high rises, homes
Smashed gone laid bare
The continents have different flavours to entice
Their appetites
The Amazon fresh green luscious flavoursome
Trees for toothpicks to extract the unwanted
The Sahara dry gritty warm and bland
Their bodies expand, their eyes grow larger
The more they devour the more they want
The Himalaya's provide their salt
Indonesia their oil
Asia and Africa their medicines,
Tigers, Rhinos, Lions, Elephants
Grab, snatch, rip, tear, wrestle, slash,
A pause
They stop
They look
The table cloth is nearly laid bare
It is a mass of destruction, devastation ...a movement
They cannot grab quick enough....
Who will win....
Who will take the last morsel..
JEM 100916
7 Years Ago
On a lighter note:
Roses are blue
Violets are red
Manufactured cheese
And aerated bread
Pretend ham
Processed chicken
Added salt
Added sugar
Makes them taste yummy
Absolutely scrummy
With a nice cup of tea
enjoy!
7 Years Ago
Speaking of yummy, while in Ecuador i traveled first by motorized long canoe on the Napo River for three hours, then another half hour by short paddled canoe on a narrow and winding tributary into the jungle/rainforest... where i had lunch at a small Kichwa indigenous community... i sat with locals and drank from a coconut shell a homemade fermented brew of sorts and ate taro root and beetle grubs for lunch... mmmm tastes like bacon... lol
7 Years Ago
disgusting disgusting disgusting
i dont know whot u mean Viet
such meanings are lost on me lol
mere poetry
actually i had a few more disgusting ones, a bit of nonsense helps, but here i draw the line
echo to viet n eds echo to mynecho to danis knicker poetry
Roses are red
Violets are blue
They sucked on potatoes
and your a banana
or two...
has Ma Disley gone bananas again then
Her thread has been vapourised or abducted
very odd stuff on this site
anyone heard of her?
mean while
back at the ranch house...
save the planet Jane!
7 Years Ago
Jason, you may want to send her an email. and tell her about the disappearance crash. I don't thing she checks the site much, seems to be busy.
You could tell her you accidently went on a long political rant and they closed it. And your sorry. he ha
If I ever need someone to present a plea or throw themselves to the mercy of the court. Jane's the one....
I have to say the thread you wrote was heart warming, about your lost thread...
"Your thought for the day" !!!! has disappeared!!!
Grubin
I was starved
I told them I’m ready for some grub!
got any grub around here?
they took me literally and brought out a bowl of grubs
don’t you people understand American slang!
hey I eat rabbit food
but not bear food
besides those plump little suckers bite
as one hung on a guys lip
and I ate my lettuce
Jim Taylor 11/16/2016
7 Years Ago
Good evening Ed, Jane, Jason, and Jim. I am overwhelmed by the great flow of your thoughts and poetry.
@ Ed: You've made my mind itched with your poem Paradox. Beetles, especially from the leaves of palm trees and coconut trees are very delicious and a great source of protein. Young beetles can be coated with flour and deep fried. They taste much better and healthier than any steroid infested meat from farm-animals. Bugs, crickets, and other creatures are abundant in the wild and the main source of protein for many people.
@ Jane: Wow..What a good punch ! I could feel your passion in the poem The Greed of Man. Also the poem has turned my mind over and made me think about damages which we have done to our own home as humans in general.
@ Jason: How would you know what I meant? Most of the time, I myself didn't know what I meant -lol. How would know what is inside the insane mind of a so-called poet.
@ Jim: Your humor in the poem Burnt grilled cheese (or adventures of a wrecked mind) has driven me back to read it a couple of times. I think you're at your best when you merge your humor into words.
My following thought of the day is an inspiration from Ed's, Jane's and your thoughts about food and from Jason's "P" rant through his daring "bomb" poetry. Thank you and have a restful evening or day to you all
Burnt grilled cheese
(or adventures of a wrecked mind)
Dream or Nightmare?
Make America Great Again (revised version)
on the land o’ freedom
everything
is
free.
free men,
freeway,
fast lane,
free drive,
fast hand,
free guns.
short lives.
drive-by shooting.
free will,
fast foods,
fat bellies,
obesity.
oh freedom
of free doom!
slow deaths
dri-thru eating
on the land
oh democracy!
full stomachs,
empty promises,
all rights,
full exercise,
but not many choices
only two options:
die fast by guns
or
die slow with foods,
basically
same shit
for both.
no lesser
of the two evils:
guns and foods,
yin and yang,
left and right.
for better or worse,
close the eyes.
shut the minds.
alright!
be blind
to choose
either of the two evils.
good night America!
sleep tight.
keep your dream or nightmare alive:
“Make America Great Again!”
Thao Chuong
2016-11-16
7 Years Ago
Jim, i cant tell her that, she would go bananas, lol, ok i will. I contacted support but they are away for 5 days. ie Abbie is on holiday.
Well, if anyone considers snails, meteorite showers and flowers too controversial...
(Mind you i didn't completely understand a few of the posts and exchanges that went on that thread)
Go!
Snail politics
its just so fast
Zzzz.. zz..
munch
there goes a meteorite
wheeeeeeeee
munch
poo
munch
pooo
zz.. zz.. z ..
The irony is -
The rest of our merry discussion and poetry, its no more political than veterans days, religious days celebrated.
Perhaps we can pretend we haven't had the hottest year in 2016 ever recorded
Pretend Record Maximas of 54C have not been recorded in some countries (thats very much in the danger zone for human life to exist)
Pretend that the arctic ice cap isnt soon to completely disappear in Summer with its consequences for increased warming and other unknowns on the Atlantic currents that might stop
Pretend we are not in the sixth mass extinction of life on this planet... just pretend..
Id say pretending it aint happening IS political madness!!
The earth is in ecological and environmental CRISIS!! And we salute all those who are acting as one to save the planet!
In this 6th phase of mass death
The mass extinction of life
will the planet forgive us?
Perhaps we are to die
SO the planet can once more live?
Or perhaps...
We can live to love this planet
and love the beauty of its pristine white ice sheets
its lush green emerald forests
it aqua marine blue purity and turquoise green stunning iridescence
the paradise of coral reefs
the lands and oceans
that ripples with seasons and tides
and the breeze
of clean fresh air
that brings tears to our eyes
as others strive..
coughing
spluttering
baking
drowning
starving
dieing
festering in demise....
Save the beauty of planet Earth
For we too could be part of that beauty
in all our rainbows of creeds and colours
and not be
the plague of death upon life
Save Earth and save ourselves!
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
mind you i guess we could post on social media if our posts really are not welcomed, i dont think that's true
echo to Viet, Ed Cid, Jane and Jim
Feast or famine
And then they said
"Go eat grubs on toast with cheese"
until their plates arrived..
and there they then stared
with eyes fired blanks
As people starved
the grubs evolved
they became
you and i
and then the masters feasted once more again
licking lips
belching blood
coughing up our hearts and dreams
until the plates became empty
New ones arrived..
but these grubs were different
recognizable
just like their own
and here they vomited
And then they realized
that they were just too late!!
And in the frenzy of madness
they started to eat each, and every one another
in the carnage
of
the feast of
the plagues
of planetary death.. .
the swarm had killed beauty and life
but the swarm had also killed itself!!
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
edited
7 Years Ago
The following is the result of reading and misunderstanding of what went before... so please pay no attention to my ramblings.
Ah yes Jason we walk a fine l i n e
at the
e d g e
of banishment
or
Punishment
if one prefers
just kidding
you have no choice
the matter is closed
if you persist to resist
the rules imposed
your account your store
need i say more
will be suspended
or possibly
just
end ed
7 Years Ago
A recent study finds
That women who are
A little over weight
Live longer than men
Who mention it
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon all.
@ Jim and Jason: I think Maria may be taking a full retreat much longer than her usual short break. Personally, each time I take a break, I feel so peaceful and relaxed from the amazing beauty of nature and the touching feeling from the real world that I wouldn't want to go back to the digital world. However, I'm lured back by the irresistibly awesome poetry and mind-numbing, provoking thoughts of many poets' and artists on this site. I think Maria will come back with a great news about her song lyrics after she finishes the record of the lyrics.
Jason, I agree with your observation that "The rest of our merry discussion and poetry, its no more political than veterans days, religious days celebrated." I must add that while some threads purely about fine art are so hostile and confrontational, this highly provoking thread of sharing "your thought of the day" has had very little friction and nearly no hostility so far.
"...We can live to love this planet
and love the beauty of its pristine white ice sheets
its lush green emerald forests
it aqua marine blue purity and turquoise green stunning iridescence
the paradise of coral reefs
the lands and oceans
that ripples with seasons and tides
and the breeze
of clean fresh air
that brings tears to our eyes..."
beautifully and poetically written, Jason.
@ Ed: " ... so please pay no attention to my ramblings." I hear ya! I am OK, even if you would like to drive your truck into my house. So, your plea pretty much depends on whom you're begging -lol.
@ Danl: Haa... I got your humour. There a great sense of black humour from scientific researches funded by MacDonald, Kentucky,...
My thought of the day
Please don't listen to my suggestion!
Let's Talk about Politic and Religion
in politic,
either right or left,
no right,
no wrong.
all fights
and wars,
no peace.
in religion,
god or no god.
either faith
or belief.
no fake,
no true.
all aches,
no relief.
both of the two
too itchy.
minds soiled.
hearts poisoned.
politic and religion,
both put man against man.
both drive man insane.
both make man feel irritated.
both force man fight for his own truth.
both urge man kill for his own belief.
in politic and religion,
too many walls,
lots of partitions.
no point
to go on
and on...
forever.
no need
to prove:
what’s true?
what’s false?
who’s right?
who’s wrong?
fatal fights;
endless wars;
no win but loss;
all are bitter losers.
in politic and religion,
when we cross path,
we’d better yield.
you walk on your side.
i walk on mine.
you keep your faith.
and i keep my belief.
for
peace of mind,
you ignore me.
i ignore you.
please hide the middle finger
deep inside our own pocket.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-17
7 Years Ago
LOL Danl... Yes funny but very dangerous ground!!! They could work that into actuarial tables... lol
Viet, careful my friend, you too are walking on a sharp edge with your 'Can We All Get Along ideas' .. i shall not push that button but rather try and disguise my echoing Tanka thought as something 'profound' HAHAHaaaaaa......
do not search for harmony
in the differences of things
hold no opinions
or discriminating thoughts
of preference for this or that
Ed Meredith
2016
7 Years Ago
Well my Last post triggered something... lol
Five Tanka That’s the Truth
******************************
Ultimate Truth
to experience
the reality of things
existentially
and find one's ultimate truth
one must be out of one’s mind
☯ … aum … ☯
. here and now .
******************************
Bathroom Wall Graffiti Truth in Tanka
think that you can find
the reality of things
existentially
then you must be totally
out of your bull-shitting mind
Ed Seedy
Was Here Not Now
******************************
Hopeful Belief in Tanka
believe i have found
the reality of things
i know its the truth
because a priest told me so
and why would a good man lie
✝✞✝ Bobby Believer ✝✞✝
Waiting Here for Later
******************************
Biker Bar Philosophy Discussion in Fracking Tanka
I FRACKING KNOW IT
IT'S FRACKING REALITY
AND MY FRACKING TRUTH
DON’T TELL ME YOUR FRACKING SHAT
I’LL BEAT YOU FRACKING SENSELESS
Bad Ass Biker Bill
YOU BETTER BELIEVE I’M FRACKING REAL
I’M IN YOUR FRACKING FACE
RIGHT FRACKING HERE RIGHT FRACKING NOW
******************************
I don’t really care
what is real or what is not
never gave it thought
questions seem rather pointless
it doesn’t really matter
******************************
Ed Meredith
17 November 2016
7 Years Ago
haha! nice ones Ed
5 one liners on human "Truth"
Ultimately, would meeting and arguing with yourself disprove any notion of truth?
I guess who spoke first might alter truth profoundly, for truths are never the same as they stem from different arguements
All arguments start with a landslide that take you in one direction...
down hill from truth
Serenade truth like you can sing, or behave prettily and smile humbly, humming along
Accept the future only when it has become the past, for then it is true even if it had lied
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
edited
7 Years Ago
echo to Viet
Indeed! politics and religion were once almost the same...
Yet dont include faith in what is man made
for faith runs deep and pure
search and it can be found...
religion is man made
faith comes from God
and God should not be man made
to suit hatreds nor deceivers
faith is supernatural
for it binds our souls
to creation and to the Creator
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
My echo to Ed's Tanka Hopeful Belief and re-echo to Jason's echo
Faith Ain’t a Lie (in Tanka)
between false and true
how do I know what is the truth?
damn me! I’m so wrong
holy men never tell lie
why don’t I believe in them?
Thao Chuong
2016-11-17
7 Years Ago
An echo to Ed's Biker Bar Philosophy Discussion in Fracking Tanka
The Naked Truth (Tanka)
I proved I was right
in a biker’s bar at night
I got two black eyes
face landed on hardwood floor
then I knew what was the truth
Thao Chuong
2016-11-17
7 Years Ago
my echo to Jason's
"religion is man made
faith comes from God
and God should not be man made
to suit hatreds nor deceivers"
the echo is a question for Jason
Which God is Yours? Which God is Mine? (Tanka)
“faith from god” you’ve said
it ain't man-made - you believe
without religion
how would man know there are gods?
and which God - he must worship?
Thao Chuong
2016-11-17
7 Years Ago
My sundry thought of the day
Chicken and Egg Tanka
no egg no chicken
between these two – which comes first?
we often argue
same as religion and god
we die to defend our truth
Thao Chuong
2016-11-17
7 Years Ago
The Most Joyful Friend of Mine Tanka
both my dog and I
we talk without argument
he whines, I listen
when I howl, he's in silence
we love our nice partnership
Thao Chuong
2016-11-17
7 Years Ago
Nice Tanka all!
Never done Tanka actually, so here's a first.
Started off with a bit of a corny line.
Tanka numeral uno
I do tanka too
walking down a rolling path
resting on a bench
enjoying a day well spent
shadow chasing in the sky
7 Years Ago
@ Jim: Your Tanka numeral uno is numero uno. The first line gives a sense of humor too. I am looking for more Tanka of yours
@ Ed: I must thank you for luring me back to the Tanka world.
I've just got back from a short walk. Here is an echo to yours
Good night, everyone
Our Walk Tonight on Goose Trail (Tanka)
chillingly misty
calm and quiet on the path
no star in dark sky
in our peaceful walk tonight
my mind gets its own peace back
Thao Chuong
2016-11-17
7 Years Ago
Good one Jim, excellent first Tanka
You are welcome Viet... i enjoy Tanka and should try to exercise that poetic muscle more often.
Three bed time Tanka:
Late Night Echoing Thoughts
like my lonely mind
this Thoughts of the Day forum
reveals two percent
the rest is lost in big skip
never to be known again
one egg one chicken
one chicken many more eggs
question of life time
which is moving flag or wind
drinking warm beer at the beach
rising mountain peaks
lake of shimmering lights
silhouetted trees
grass sparkling sliver dew drops
my wolf howls the super moon
Ed Meredith
2016
7 Years Ago
Enjoying your tanka. I keep seeing a tankard of beer, i dont know why. lol.
but anyway -
heres some nonsense in echo to Ed verse 1
Human waste and hackers
Why waste the 98% of poems you throw away?
For The paranoid poet -
Convinced they were hacking into everything he owned
taking what they wanted
He spent years filling his hard drive
with 1000s of pieces of poetic crap
keeping the good to share, the rest hidden til time called
leaving the crap for them to steal and plunder themselves stupid!!
To send them bananas?
One huge waste of effort?
or a fitting punishment to stealers!?
May be, may be not
Because it still feels good to him
like a good long shit...
for shits to read
human waste, why waste the waste, recycle it, eco poetry, sludge and the rest..
(c) The proverbial potty 2016
7 Years Ago
echo to Viet, in answer to his quandary
quoting-
In discussing 9 founders of major faith traditions (Moses, Zoroaster, Lao-zu, Buddha, Confucius, Socrates, Krishna, Jesus, and Muhammad), which he called "mediators between the human and the divine", Macquarrie wrote that:
I do not deny for a moment that the truth of God has reached others through other channels - indeed, I hope and pray that it has. So while I have a special attachment to one mediator, I have respect for them all.
from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Religious_pluralism
This is a great perspective on truth and one that many now share
Which Religion? Which God?
Which breath is now yours
oh misty path, quiet lake
which breath is now mine?
shared walks on mud and green grass
as leaves share their cleanest air
(c) Jason Christopher 2016
7 Years Ago
Super Moon rising
pulling imagination
across the prairie
Giant amber orb glowing
above the Great Kansas Sea
7 Years Ago
Hi Karen... nice one ... =>)
One of my 98% that Jason speaks of:
i smile tanka smile
when writing tanka poetry
of woman in tanka top
swims in tanka full of sharks
of my tanka silly thoughts
7 Years Ago
Wow you guys are Tanka masters and other stuff mixed in.
I do love simplicity in Japanese art and culture.
Tanka Masters
all tanka masters
roll over in your grave site
mighty steam roller
is going to roll away
counting syllables on hand
Morning yawning
words flow at morning
sunrise through window yawning
coffee flowing brews
cloud over cup steams upward
mixed with thoughts good morning day
7 Years Ago
LOL Danl ... i hope Charlie Hebdo publishes it.
HAHAhaaaa... Jim, yes i wish i had seven fingers... LOL
And you can pick up your Masters Degree anytime you want, those are excellent...
Danl"s Trump/Pussy caused this to roll around in my head...
“USA USA USA USA USA"
a work in progress...
E Pluribus Unum:
there’s wide divide
in the land of e pluribus unum
and a house divided cannot stand
i’ve read
its been said
by a want-be Senator of little renown
who echoed the fabled Prince of Peace
“A house divided against itself cannot stand”
paraphrased young Abe Lincoln who did believe
the Union could survive
would survive
a Civil War
if not as one
then the other
but what ever is done here and now right or wrong
in this day”s history of our present actions
sets a new tone in this young experiment
of multiculturalism with aspirations
of peace and harmony
that goes against the historical grain
of thousands of millennia
entrenching tribalism
upon our Psyche set so long ago
that Human Kind be groups
or nations
sculpted in ethnic sameness
and cultural purity
isolated
alone
and
fearful of one-another
let that not happen here and now
or ever
i want to celebrate
and enjoy the richness of diversity
reap its lush rewards and nourishment of the soul
for there is to much to lose if you chose
the narrow path of that
which does not
end well
Ed Meredith
2016
7 Years Ago
Who is Charlie?
"Charlie Hebdo is a punch in the face....
Against those who try to stop us thinking
Against those who fear creativity
Against those who do not like us
Piss on them with cartoons"
This a quote from Charlie Hebdo, in my opinion for what is worth, one of finest publications in our disappearing world.
7 Years Ago
As I lay me down
sounds of the city
late at night
has it’s own mood
with a tone
all it’s own
lying in bed at night
with window open
the night air brightens
to invite the sounds in
not sleeping yet
not all that tired
there’s a special peace
while lying in the dark
thoughts are mellow
from an uneventful day
no worries
a dog barks in the distance
then another somewhere else
from someone's yard or house
an unknown place
a far off train whistle
is faintly heard
a distant voice
then another
travels through the dark
night insects
quietly add there low buzz
they work the night shift
before daybreaks call
underneath the darkness
distant motors hum
doors close
tires run
all in tune
each brief new sound
moves my imagination
to someone or something
I will never know
like fleeting foxes
before dawn
just fleeting soft sounds
lost in the echo's of night
as sleep puts it all to bed
Jim Taylor 11/18/2016
7 Years Ago
Good evening all.
@ Ed:
rising mountain peaks
lake of shimmering lights
silhouetted trees
grass sparkling sliver dew drops
my wolf howls the super moon
This poem is a good Tanka. I could feel the howling sound as an urging call from your inner self in response to the outer universe at this mystic instant.
@ Jason: Thanks for sharing the interesting info.I'd better take a break from religions in general to bring my mind to a cool path.
@ Karen: another nice poem. Tanka and Haiku are the great way to express the beauty of nature. They're short verses but they drive readers in deep thoughts and strong feeling.
@ Danl: Your poem Who is Charlie?
"Charlie Hebdo is a punch in the face....
Against those who try to stop us thinking
Against those who fear creativity
Against those who do not like us
Piss on them with cartoons"
As you've written it's a hard punch at censorship by Charlie Hebdo.
@ Jim: Your As I lay me down is one of the best poems of yours which I have read so far. It's my most favorite poem of yours- no including those poems of yours with a great sense of humor. You have perfectly "recorded" sounds of the night in a very poetic way.
My thought of the day.
Win or Lose
lose all
win all
all win
all lose
no one wins all
no one loses all
win some
lose some
some win
some lose
no one wins all
no one loses all
in life
in love
you win
you lose
it’s nothing new
when lose
don’t cry
don’t whine
don’t blame
sky don’t fall
it ain’t your doomsday
reserve some hope
for brighter day
when win
don’t be blind
don’t be nasty
don’t be so mean
and don’t take all
give some for life
offer some for love
also leave plenty
for
peace of mind
Thao Chuong
2016-11-18
7 Years Ago
Thanks for all generous comments Viet and Ed. I can probably find a place for an honorary degree on my wall amongst the many ribbons medals and trophies with ego shining like a new dime. I've ordered one for all, all for one. Enjoy reading everyone here.
Just try to keep the kid going.......
Yesterdays child
do your thoughts stray
to yesterday
when the castles
were built in the sky
to early youth
when the truth
tore through
without hesitation
Jim Taylor 11/18/2016
7 Years Ago
Good evening all. It's been a quiet day.
Thanks Jim. Except you, it is likely everyone has been taking a break for a good rest on weekend. Good night all of my poet/artist/friends
Why Do I Not Catch Your Beauty?
many things in nature, in life and love
are
so
awesome,
stunning,
amazing,
fascinating…
that often make me wonder
which ones I should spend my time
to
stop by,
be inspired by,
and love the beauty of these.
I
often
ask myself,
whether I should only watch and enjoy in silence,
or I should also talk about them
and recreate them
in
art,
music,
poetry...
I
don’t
have too much time
in my short life to take all .
how would I better spend the best of it
in order to help me balance and enhance myself
in
both
life and love.
most of the time
I rely on karma
I
let
my mind ride on strong wings of the wind ,
my heart go with its own flow,
and myself dance in the rhythm of the day.
If YOU and i haven’t yet crossed path
I keep my finger crossed
I
do
hope
I'd meet you and catch your beauty someday.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-19
7 Years Ago
Sunday morning as I walked through the rain how peaceful the world is when it is still. The rain gently hitting the petals of the flowers look like dimonds sparking on a beautiful person.
They were my thoughts this morning x
7 Years Ago
When I sit
Trying to to be a poet
My feet dangle
Grunting and grunting
Reaching for more paper
Until the roll is empty
A loud splash
I stink
Flush
7 Years Ago
Good morning Sarah , Danl, and all.
@ Sarah: Welcome to this thread. Thank you very much for sharing your poetic thought.
@ Danl: You've made me laugh!
My thought of the day is for Maria Disleys.
The Missing Poet Found
somehow, you did make me believe
you would have taken only a very short break.
as
time
slowly flew by;
days, weeks, months lost.
it became a holiday and then a lengthy nap.
I had thought
either must you be in a cozy dream;
so
comfy
that you would have ever woken up.
or you must be abducted by aliens from Mars.
during the time you were missing somewhere in the mist;
t 'was devastated on the Western front of our poetic world.
words after words vanished.
without your sharp pen,
we, poets almost got crushed
in our war
of
words.
when all our hope was about to get lost.
all of a sudden!
from
nowhere
you restfully walked in.
voila!
my dear poet.
what’s a nice surprise!
welcome you home-sweet home.
and to the real world
of
the wild
wild West
in the modern land of free speech.
where
we don’t do fistfights;
we don’t shoot with guns;
but we play with pens.
it’s a kinda o war;
without casualty
no death,
no injury to our weak bodies,
only some scratches to our strong egos.
so we must tip toe on the landmine of words
for
our survival
on the free-doom soil of free speech.
I’m excited to greeting you back.
let’s toss a welcome-home party.
forget poetry for now.
throw all pens away.
raise our glass.
cheer to you and to our healthy minds!
Thao Chuong
2016-11-20
7 Years Ago
JIM: Wow - Totally agree with Viet - your night sounds was fantastic :-)
DANL: Love your cartoon I Hope Charlie Hebdo like it!
VIET - I think everyone is Tankered out and gone for a nap lol
Ed - I envy your trip in Ecuardor, up the river eating bugs lol
Of Bugs N Grubs
Where would we be
Without the Bee
To pollinate
And make us honey
Life without the firefly
Like drugs without the high
The beauty of the butterfly
Takes your breath, makes you sigh
From the little looping caterpillar
To the large and hairy tarantula
The roach that makes you shriek
And the antlion you like to seek
They are the cleaners
The pollinators
The earth turners
The providers
They all serve a purpose
To share your space
Put not a frown on your face
Rejoice in the bugs
Smile at the grubs
Then coat them
and fry them
And eat them all up.
Yum
JEM 201116
7 Years Ago
Viet in response to your grubs
She placed her lips
Against my forehead
The blood trickled
Over my brows
Like a greedy grub
She fed off my
Deepest thoughts
7 Years Ago
@ Danl: Wow... to your provoking poem. It's sucked! So sad. I enjoy your intellectual thought about the bug that eats our minds off.
@ Jane: Nice echo to Ed's poem: Here is another type of bugs that infest our body.
More talk about bugs
Ain’t Bugs Good for You?
too bad
you’re coughing
worse than a dog barking at a blue moon.
you
must feel
too itchy in the throat
too stuffy in the nose
quite irritated in the mind.
you’re furiously mad like hell
so mad that you’ve been trying hard
to spit out these following words :
the “f”,
the “you”
the “sea”
and the “key”!
for better or worse
please think it over
oh
don’t..
don’t cry;
don’t whine;
don’t’ blame…
those damn bugs!
ask yourself
without
these germs
how could you get the flu?
without the flu, how you could find the good excuse
for time off from work
at least a day or two
it ain’t bad at all
for you
to
get away
from your boss’ ugly face.
thanks
to those bugs
for your short break
that make your long workweek shorter
you cough and wheeze
while you’re having sex in bed
ain’t
it better?
than you exhaustively drop dead on your own feet
while you’re dragging yourself at work
on the long way
to week-
end.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-20
7 Years Ago
Constellation Consultation
I stagger
along a shattered path.
The stars are
my fixed point
of concentration.
Such small embers
of sanity,
so distant.
7 Years Ago
Viet, thank you for enjoying my howling self... . =>)
Jane... envy not, three weeks later and the bugs that ate me still itch... lol
Karen... you brought home a familiar feeling,,,...
This week was our 25th wedding anniversary and our countless previous years together as a couple...
Anniversary
Looking through an old box of photographs
from the 1950s to the 70s
i found myself reminiscing of the turbulent times
we experienced and witnessed
wars
assassinations
Cultural Revolutions
the rise of Civil Rights
and i thought
if it were not for all these things
we may never have met
Ed Meredith
November 2016
7 Years Ago
First they came for the sculptors, and I did not speak out—
Because I was not a sculptor.
Then they came for the wood workers, and I did not speak out—
Because I was not a wood worker.
Then they came for the painters, and I did not speak out—
Because I was not a painter.
Then they came for me -
and I shot them because I am a photographer.
7 Years Ago
HAHAHaaa... John
One more Tank-a Bugs ... lol
Cicada
singing cicadas
covering the tree branches
drown out forest sounds
in a harmonious song
applauded by feasting birds
Ed Meredith
21 November 2016
7 Years Ago
Kamikaze Squirrel
kamikaze squirrel
messing with me again
I know you from the rest
of the darting dare devils
your smarter than you act
playing chicken with my truck
as I yell with my head out the window
run for your life Kamikaze
has all those nuts you eat
turned you into a crazy
zigzag tag nut
darting in and out
I know what your all about
must be risk takers rush
I hope I don’t see you laid down
on my way back home
unable to beat the odds
of Russian Roulette
one last time
Jim Taylor 11/21/2016
7 Years Ago
Good evening all
@ Karen: I've found your sanity on the beach of the Esquimalt Lagoon today. Do you want it back -lol
@ Vivian: I appreciate you too. Nice to see you're dropping by!
@ John: Welcome your humorous thought! Haa...Luckily I'm still alive! Now, I know who shot me!
@ Ed: Congratulation to your 25th wedding anniversary. Nice to know you and your better-half have sailed together hand in hand from the freshwater of love to the saltwater of marriage -lol. Cicada is a nice Tanka.
@ Jim: he.he..to your black humor about wildlife, cars, and roads...
Of Prejudices and Biases
humans’ five senses are extremely limited and awfully imperfect,
eyes can only see at a certain angle and at a very short distance.
ears can hear sound within a narrow range of frequencies.
nose cannot detect all smells.
tongue can’t tolerate all tastes.
skin would lose its sense under extreme temperature.
regrettably, for our thinking and feeling
we - humans have no choice
but
to fully rely on our faulty five senses,
we let them dictate our minds and hearts.
we fool ourselves with no doubt,
if we blindly believe
in the “truth”
from what
we see,
we smell,
we taste,
we sense,
and we I hear,
which make us think the way we think and feel the way we feel.
I myself know more or less
what I like or I hate,
and whom I love or I dislike,
however, when my heart and my mind become blind.
I cannot recognize my own unjust feelings and biased thoughts.
only you - through your reaction – whether rough or polite
it must make me be aware
of any prejudice
of mine
toward
you.
whenever I’m so mad to pull the trigger at a messenger
I shoot at myself
damned
me!.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-21
7 Years Ago
Here is an echo to Jim poem.
The War of Nuts (Haiku)
two squirrels at war
for an avocado pit
both think it’s a nut
Thao Chuong
2016-11-21
7 Years Ago
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Here my Tanka to Vivian's artwork
Galaxy Afire
my whole world inflame.
it ain’t your cigarette butt,
but it’s your lovebug
that blinds my mind – melts my heart
I die in your hell o’ love
Thao Chuong
2016-11-21
7 Years Ago
wonderful epic flow on this thread, good morning all!
Silent
Silent
was the wind
that blew their souls to God
each child's hand held
as the
war was left
far behind..
(c) Jason Christopher, 2016
7 Years Ago
Revelation
i spent the night in a Motel next to a “Something Wicked This Way Comes” carnival
with its three balls for a dollar games, decrepit rides and non stop Merry-go-Round
that continuously played the Beatles song, “Being for the Benefit of Mr. Kite!”…
The Motel called itself the Hotel Pentagram, a very cheap and noisy one star place
that faces highway Route 66. It had no running hot water or television… But fortunately
some guy named Gideon forget his bible and left it in the bedside table. With nothing
to do before bedtime, i thumbed through the book for a while and then decided to flip to
the last chapter just to see how the story ends. And later in my sleep, i heard the Beatles'
Mr Kite music and dreamt of the Book of Revelation and of Saint John the Divine’s Merry-go-Round…
Saint John the Divine’s Merry-go-Round…
four horse-men rode
out from a dark
and mythical mist
on fearsome mounts
of flashing hooves
and glimmering bodies
of sweat
and froth
the first to lead
on a white steed
as bright as light itself
holds high a bow
and wears the victor’s crown
some name him Conquest
i shall call him
Pestilence
the second rider
on a blood red horse
of fiery eyes
swings the sword
of destruction
laying waste
to all within his path
earns by action
his name of
War
the third rides
on a mount so dark
that reflective light
never escapes
and in his hand
he holds the scale
that sets the price for all
and he is named
Famine
the fourth and final
rides an ashen horse
with open jaws
dragging behind him
Hell
with all its promise
of misery
and we know him as
Death
and then there was me
riding on an ass
grey as a dove
and in my hand
with knuckles
white with fright
holding tickets
to ride the night
oh please oh please
call me Awake…
Ed Meredith
Room 6
Hotel Pentagram
22 November 2016
——————————————-
Satan's Hotel Pentagram
the Devil calls it a five Star Hotel
others call it Hell
i call it Home
Dante the towel thief
stayed here once
and wrote us a bad review
Milton the cheap bastard
skipped without paying his bill
Ed Meredith
2013
7 Years Ago
Ed-
It makes no difference
What a room costs
Just lift the sheets
And reveal the stains
Crisp or newly damp
A stain is a stain
So why pay more
7 Years Ago
Breakfast Vlei
When lost in South Africa
The Eastern Cape
Needing a hotel
There is a small one
With rooms to rent
Breakfast Vlei
Tarry not here
For if you can see
Through the dust and flies
You will see the ladies
Wafting their fans
Showing their wares
Continue up the road
Towards a town called Alice
Just to the left
On the way
Is a nature reserve
With Rooms
Overlooking
Great Fish River
Far below in a gorge
Book in here
Carry on up the road
In Alice you can buy
Warm beer and
Southern fried chicken
This surely is heaven
JEM 221116
7 Years Ago
He strolled
along the beach
of Esquimalt Lagoon today
The salty so air thick and cool,
the saline breath of Earth.
He pondered
life
and death
as he walked.
A tiny glint
caught his eye.
A treasure
half buried
in the dirty brown sand.
He dug it away
and held it aloft.
A single stubborn sunbeam
shone
inside a crystal teardrop.
He kissed the smooth surface
then pulled back his arm
and flung it
far
into the sea
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon. Wow...what's poetic flow that fills up the mind with thoughts and the heart with love. Thanks.
@ Jason: Short but very powerful, mate. This poem of yours is worth more than thousands of words. It made me believe that your faith in God is very genuine and indisputable.
@ Ed: You've stirred my mind up. What's great poem!
@ Danl: Very truth about hotels/hotels! It's likely that you have been infested by Jim's sense of black humour
@ Jane: Nice to read your poetry
@ Karen: You have brought me back to our "good old days". Your poem has touched my heart.
Here's my thought of the day - generated by Jason's poem,
Of Silence and Conscience
silence is the war
at
its arrival
bombs are dropped
villages in blaze
everyone in sound sleep
even at midnight
no
snoring noise
no howling lament of dogs
no crying sound of babies
all of a sudden
a world falls in dead silence
silence is the peace
somewhere
on
this earth
where cities never sleep
rowdy noise of clapping hands
joyful sound from champagne corks popping
while TVs broadcast live
the deadly war
far
away
from home.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-22
7 Years Ago
Nice seriously good writings.
Viet , nicely written. Yes the only thing that really impacts, is there own kind coming home in flag draped coffins. That is never shown.
Discomfort food
well comfort food season is here
one more year
the home grown tomatoes are gone
unless they’re in cans now
I’ll open a can of alphabet soup
on a nice cool afternoon
it’s great fun to see what letters come up
a word may even spell out in my soup spoon
might even get a poem out of it
soup nice and hot
watching all those little letters
floating like edible poetry
I dipped my spoon in
with random word anticipation
it read
you suck
I threw it back into the bowl
I dipped my spoon again
bite me
I was pissed
I’ll give it to the dog
I stopped and thought
that may not be a good idea
I’ll grind it down the garbage disposal
and send it where it belongs
I had a bowl of cheerios instead
OOOOOO
Jim Taylor 11/22/2016
7 Years Ago
Danl, it's good you cant stop eating your alphabet soup.
Kids keep eating the soup. One day it may regurgitate into nice writings.
don’t burn my turkey
with your black Friday
keep it golden brown
not charcoal black
what ever is left
to partake of the next day
of the turkey of thanks
7 Years Ago
Happy Thanksgiving
Whether you're having
Roach under glass
Lymantrid moth stew
Damselfly salad
Cecropia Moth broth
Orchid mantis tea
Be thankful
7 Years Ago
I made a new discount code today. It's BTRAYG. It looks like it says "betray". Haha, oh well.
7 Years Ago
Thank you Jim and Danl for the good laughs
@ Mary: Welcome this mind-bogging thread. Your word "betray" sounds very blue -lol
Happy Thanksgiving to American poets/artists and all Americans in general, (Thanksgiving is over for Canadians -We celebrated in Oct.)
My Senryu for Your Thanksgiving
1 numéro un
they die for men's joy
millions of lives have been lost
thanks to you - turkeys
2 numéro deux
turkeys beg for life
men have fun with food and drinks
on damned Thanksgiving.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-23
7 Years Ago
"I made a new discount code today. It's BTRAYG. It looks like it says "betray". Haha, oh well."
My Senryu to Mary Ellen Frazee's very "vague" message above (for better or worse -lol)
I Scratch My Head
she makes me confused
her beauty or the artwork
which one on discount?
Thao Chuong
2016-11-23
7 Years Ago
Is Still Life Still Alive through an Artist’s Eyes?
still-life is a life still
a life still is still life
life stands still
is
still alive
in real life
still life painted by an artist
even not in realism
life’s still alive
in
real life
still life in abstract is bona fide on canvas
Thao Chuong
2016-11-23
7 Years Ago
Fallen Fly
Painting the world
in all its glory
and untold story
seashore
desert
up mountain
Sequoia
bristlecone pine
to the timberline
a monumental task
just to paint that fallen fly
that lies dead in the corner of my studio
if I could some how do it justice
a masterpiece arisen from the dead
now that would be something
Jim Taylor 11/23/2016
7 Years Ago
Thanks Jim. Have a good night, my friend . I must say it's another awesome poem of yours.
Here is my echo to your Fallen Fly
Of Flying Men and Fallen Flies
like
a kite
flying
up high
in the sky
man loves to fly
up high above his fellow beings
when strong wind blows
he swings around
up
and down
lucky him!
unlike the ill fate of a fly
hovering around a house then being swatted,
man flies without wings
with
neither single
nor twin engines
the higher he flies the worse he's crashed
he
just lands back
very safe n' sound
onto the ground zero.
However his big ego is badly shattered.
flying man
never
dies
he has to start his hi-life by flying allover again.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-23
7 Years Ago
Mary Ellen, Viet and Jim your words and poems rolled around inside my mind blending like a morning smoothie...
a beautiful and thankful day to all...
i feel BTRAYG and confused
when a still life stands still no more
there lies a fly i dread
dead on the floor
if resurrected in paint it ain’t
gonna fly high in the sky
but maybe
just maybe in the hands
of an art lover like my mother
the patron saint
of my works of paint
it may this thanksgiving day
like many others have before
be hung upon her refrigerator door
Ed Meredith
24 November 2016
7 Years Ago
Orange
Or
an
ge
Orange
porridge
gorge
forge … ing
the sign’s sublime line
for observing the curving
of winding the road
Toads
driving cars
under the stars
no more bizarre or absurd
than a talking turd
that speaks in rhyme time and lingers
on snapping turtle fingers
of dancing snakes
like Jake whose found
in Chinatown
with a spilt lip
and a cut nose
who chose to ignore
the door of perception
deception in the law and order
of the teeter-totter’s ups and downs
the laughing clowns with frightening frowns
who speak in nouns when the teacher’s preacher
praise the lord he underscores in broken line like my mind
of scattered thoughts that brought all this to the surface without purpose
this aimless rambling scrambling discordant poem to roam on and on and on and on when all i wanted was to find a rhyme for the word Orange…
Ed Meredith
3:AM
24 November 2016
7 Years Ago
It’s Tanka Time For The War On Christmas
it’s that time again
annual war on Christmas
don’t blame atheist's
greeting “Happy Holidays"
blame the media Fox News
Ed Meredith
The day before the war begins
2016
7 Years Ago
Poem done in Tanka style
Tanka Thanksgiving
Happy Thanksgiving Tanka
I will not get tanked
just be thankful and present
don’t bomb the parade children
Or let the boob tube scare you into submission
7 Years Ago
I am thankful today
Thanksgiving Day
It is the only day of the year
Where gluttony
Becomes my patriotic duty
7 Years Ago
Just imagine
If the indians gave the pilgrims
A donkey instead of a turkey
We'd be all having
A piece of ass this Thanksgiving
7 Years Ago
Gappy Hanks Thiving.
Everyone is on form today I see
From oranges painting
To flies a swimming
In coffee cups
From which we sup
Clowns that frown
With ups and downs
Toads in roads
and snakes in lakes
Porridge scrambled
Turtles brambled
Patriotic Gluttony
And turkey Botany
Big recliners
with no shiners
Volcanoes scalding
Sins evolving
Kites a flying
no! a hovering
Turtles with wings
and man that stings
Aromas stirred
And one big turd
No wonder I am in a
mucking Fuddle
JEM 241116
7 Years Ago
Thank you Danl, Ed, Jim and Jane.
Nice to read your poetry.
especially to Danl:
.....
Flames of red
Surrounded by water
Scalding and bubbling
Unable to escape
Melting my sins away
Listening to the echos
Of the divine devils
As my flesh turned to ash
It's powerful. I think your "Volcanic island" is your best poem so far.
@ Jim: I could smell the humorous aroma from your big coffee.
@ Ed: A lot to to read and think, my friend.
....
if resurrected in paint it ain’t
gonna fly high in the sky
but maybe
just maybe in the hands
of an art lover like my mother
the patron saint
of my works of paint....
Oh no! Your mom did sound exactly same as my wife. It' why I am still sweating on her long runway and never take off... (lol)
@ Jane: Have you get out of the labyrinth of words yet?-lol.
Ed did pull my hair back to the world of war with his "It’s Tanka Time For The War On Christmas".
Could It Be Changed?
peace has been lost.
even
it ain’t a war.
no shooting,
no bombing,
no exploding,
no
casualty.
it could be called a fight,
but
not even a nasty fistfight
in its real sense.
no chopping,
no stabbing,
no ambulance wailing.
more accurately, it’s a struggle.
kind of a tempest in a teapot.
only
pushing
and pulling.
the smaller one cries.
the bigger one whines.
two little boys are fighting over a car.
both
stubbornly insist they wanna get that ugly one
while many other nice-looking toys scattered all over the floor.
small kids fight for toys
teenagers wrestle for identity and sex
adults go to war for power or whatever they reassure
it does happen so often to humans at any age
does it come from instinct of animal?
the greedy nature
of human
beings?
could it be changed?
Thao Chuong
2016-11-24
7 Years Ago
Tanka - Fall in My Backyard Pond
waterlily pads
most submerged - some stay afloat.
goldfish, koi, and frogs
in hibernation down there
quite still in the Zen-like pond.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-24
7 Years Ago
From Peace by Mother’s Milk to War for Mother’s Blood ̣(Tanka)
no longer babies
they need mother’s milk no more.
now, for selfish greed
those grown-up men go to wars
they suck mother nature’s blood
Thao Chuong
2016-11-24
7 Years Ago
JEM's Gem... "mucking Fuddle " ... . =>)
Viet, good morning my thoughtful friend, your poignant and moving poem of Peace and War
stirred my thoughts of what is happening in Syria and the city of Aleppo where everything is
being exterminated with the collusion of the United Nations.
Wars of Attrition
Shame on us
the surviving children
of conflicts past
shame on us
for not acting to stop
the annihilation
and shame on us
for our paralysis
of action
when everything is a target
everything exterminated
terminated
obliterated
shame on us
as we mutely hear
and blindly see
the horrors inflicted
upon the people
the children
the victims of the war
shame on us
for the barrel bombs
laced with gas
raining from the sky
and shame on us
for the drumbeat of artillery
the frightening pulse
of the people
the mothers
the children
the victims
shame on us
shame on us all
Ashamed
25 November 2016
7 Years Ago
Retake America....
Raise the Anti flag
Hold your bayonets high
Let the cannons recoil
Load and kneel
A line of millions strong
Fire at will
The Capitol caked in blood
WIth the thunder of hoofs
And the roaring chant
"This land is our land"
7 Years Ago
Danl...
Un-Civil War
a fast burning fuse
to short for public debate
once lit hard to stop
Ed Meredith
7 Years Ago
Flaw of the species
there's a certain human condition
one that very few have absent
a syndrome of one of the strongest
its always there with most
a finite few seem to have overcome it
action speaks louder than words
as it stays locked away by most
love is territorial
war and hate is territorial
but universal
an ancient survival mechanism
of the survival of the fittest and species
can this be transcended in another after death dimension
on this plane humans seemed to be board without it
as they fight over that last piece of bread
and crumb
Jim Taylor 11/25/2016
7 Years Ago
My echo to Viet's beautiful Tanka; "Fall in My Backyard Pond"
Tao's Lapidary
mountain tops in clouds
bring rains to sloping valley
gathering droplets
quicken the flow of rivers
rounding stones in rush to sea
Ed Meredith
25 November 2016
7 Years Ago
For the time being, loonatits, I have discarded my other other alias of oddball poetry, nothing matches you lot.
I have a kind of tanka
have it
Tanka
Winter's pond
Pond of hidden fish
Golden leaves of Autumns falls
Sleeping eyes peer through
Covers of snow, blankets deep
Robin's tread of Winter joys.. .
plop
the end
---
haha,
some profound thoughts. and the rest, im off to have a wash. wash off the sin poetry. lol, "a piece of ass at thanksgiving" , really too nuts, hah! Then for a bowl of poem soup, slirpss slirp
belch and it aint tamata
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon everyone. Thanks for sharing your poetry.
@ Danl
...
Hold your bayonets high
Let the cannons recoil
Load and kneel
A line of millions strong
Fire at will..."
You've painted and caught the hostility and war in a few strokes. Is there any better way than solving conflict with guns?
@ Jim:
"
an ancient survival mechanism
of the survival of the fittest and species
can this be transcended in another after death dimension
on this plane humans seemed to be board without it
as they fight over that last piece of bread
and crumb"
You've taken my fragile hope for peace away. Could the majority of humans -those who love peace - stand up and say "NO" to the very few in the governing elites? It is they who push US to wars.
@ Ed: I could sense your guilt in the provoking poem "Wars of Attrition". Your thoughts about the War in Syria and the terror in her city of Aleppo have brought me back the my own experience of the Vietnam War. The Tao's Lapidary is nice echo, my friend.
@ Jason: It's nice Tanka of yours which I've read so far. Hah... "loonatits.", you wrote! that sound right "aboo.." poets in general!.
My echo from Jim's and Ed's echoes to War
Can YOU and I, as Humans, Change the Unjust Rules of Merciless Wars?
YOU clap your hands.
hurrah to war!
in
defense
of your religion
and your beloved nation.
YOU shout in anger:
“death to the infidels!
send them to hell
at
god’s will”.
I do the same as you do
hooray to my fight
for
the freedom
and my country’s security.
I raise my fist high
yelling
“an eye for an eye,
a tooth for a tooth,
a hand for a hand,
a foot for a foot.” *(1)
in revenge
I
wanna
burn your country into ashes
and take many more lives of your people’s
than a few lives you’ve taken from mine.
Unfortunately!
WAR has nothing to do with the majority people
like
YOU
and ME.
actually YOU and I
WE both have no problem with each other.
War also offers nothing for the majority people
absolutely
NOTHING
for
US
(you an me).
ALL is ONLY for THEM – the very few guys on top
the super rich
the governing elites in the two countries.
unfortunately
YOU
and
I
we both get caught
at the opposite sides
YOU shoot - I injure.
I kill - YOU die.
both lose.
neither wins.
War is a bloody game
in which
we (you and me)
the little guys die
the BIG GUYS gain
Can YOU and YOUR PEOPLE, and MY PEOPLE and I,
WE
at both ends
change the unjust rules of merciless wars.
Note: *(1) Exodus 21:24 (source of info: http://biblehub.com/exodus/21-24.htm)
Thao Chuong
2016-11-25
7 Years Ago
EACH DAY WE SHOULD READ THE OBITUARY OF A STRANGER
PONDER THAT PERSONS LIFE.....
PRAY FOR THEM.
PRAY FOR ALL THOSE WHOM NEVER EXPECTED PRAYERS
AND THANK GOD THAT HE HIMSELF HAS PROVIDED US FOR THEM.
MAY WE ALL RECEIVE FEATHERS TOWARDS OUR WINGS THIS DAY OH LORD?
7 Years Ago
“Could the majority of humans -those who love peace - stand up and say "NO" to the very few in the governing elites? It is they who push US to wars.”
Viet, your thought I suppose is to logical and simple. Your right.
There's been a large anti war movement in this country since the early sixties. There's been many songs written and performed. They have inspired millions. They have most definitely influenced me at a young age when I was making up my mind about the world.
I really thought after the hard learned lessons of Viet Nam a newer generation would see the light. I’m still a bit dumfounded these wars were allowed.
The Buffy Saint Marie song of back in 1964 echos what you said.
Universal Soldier
by Buffy Saint Marie 1964
He's five foot-two, and he's six feet-four,
He fights with missiles and with spears.
He's all of thirty-one, and he's only seventeen,
He's been a soldier for a thousand years.
He's a Catholic, a Hindu, an Atheist, a Jain,
A Buddhist and a Baptist and a Jew.
And he knows he shouldn't kill,
And he knows he always will,
Kill you for me my friend and me for you.
And he's fighting for Canada,
He's fighting for France,
He's fighting for the USA,
And he's fighting for the Russians,
And he's fighting for Japan,
And he thinks we'll put an end to war this way.
And he's fighting for Democracy,
He's fighting for the Reds,
He says it's for the peace of all.
He's the one who must decide,
Who's to live and who's to die,
And he never sees the writing on the wall.
But without him,
How would Hitler have condemned him at Labau?
Without him Caesar would have stood alone,
He's the one who gives his body
As a weapon of the war,
And without him all this killing can't go on.
He's the Universal Soldier and he really is to blame,
His orders come from far away no more,
They come from here and there and you and me,
And brothers can't you see,
This is not the way we put an end to war.
7 Years Ago
Rain…Rain…Go Away!
he was tired of being detained
inside his home
for
many days
the little child pushed his nose against cold glass
he thrust his eyes through the thermal bay-windows
trying to look for sunshine outside
no hope
it was still drizzling
he sang in a poignant tune
“rain…
rain…
go away
and come back another day… ”
he made me feel so bad
that I had to put his raincoat on
and took him outside for a walk
by
the time
we got back
both was soaked like wet blankets
I dried him and took him to bed for a nap
I tried to lullaby him with the song about rain
“it’s raining
it’s boring
the old man is snoring...”
so
tedious
both in my broken voice
and in the dull song itself
that my little grandson fell asleep within a couple minutes.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-25
7 Years Ago
America shall become an island
Isolated from the shoreline
Europe and Russia will unite
Creating massive waves
Atop the red, white and blue isle
Enemies will become allies
And the speck in the sea
Will no longer be
7 Years Ago
i kept and read Gideon’s book, the one i found at the Hotel Pentagram titled the Bible, i thought what the hell… he’ll never return for it anyway.
iI the Bible had a book jacket/dust cover, what would the reviews read like… here are four of mine in Tanka:
The Bible
Four Reviews in Tanka
the Bible tells us
God is the primary Goal
once God is believed
salvation is possible
good alpha to omega
Bible is a book
of apocryphal stories
but not God’s purpose
or reason for creation
that secret's locked in God’s mind
the new testament
of unquestionable text
reveals Gods own words
scribbled by mere mortal men
with promise of salvation
from Adam to Christ
it’s one family’s story
a faux history
of lust greed adultery
murder too - sounds like Clintons
Ed Meredith
2016
7 Years Ago
Thanks Danl and Ed.
@ Danl: Wait 'n see! It would be interesting to see new development! What would happen in the coming years? What would it be in term of redrawing the world map? How the "global cake" would be cut off and who would take bigger shares than those of the status quo?
Here is my echo to Ed poem The Bible (four Tanka) .
Of the Creator and those Religion-made Gods
God create man
and give man
His Love.
Man creates religions
and gives religions
his Faith.
Religions create many different gods
and give man
their Hatred.
Those religion-made gods
are
NOT
the Creator,
but ONLY the Satan,
Whom each man-made religion claims as its true god.
Man-made religions drive man himself
into his own worst nightmare
of being punished
eternally in
hell.
They also lure man to his wildest dream
of being rewarded
with the forever
joy
in heaven.
Man follows his blind faith in the religion-made god.
he kills his fellow beings
to satisfy the Satan;
in order to save
his own
skin.
so his soul would be in the blissful heaven,
not in a torment hell
perpetually.
Man and the Satan’s blood-thirsty Hatred from his own religion-made god
certainly
have nothing to do
with the Creator and His unconditional Love.
Thao Chuong
2016-11-26
7 Years Ago
A Rainy Day In the Memorial Park (Tanka)
(written for the war hero and his lover)
tedious sound’s pounding
in dreary cemetery
rain keeps dripping down
fallen off on his tombstone
is it water or her tears?
Thao Chuong
2016-11-26
7 Years Ago
If you compare yourself to others you may become vain and bitter
for always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself.
7 Years Ago
Viet, i will steer away from the rabbit hole of religion we seem to be digging and instead echo Jim’s thought on poetry and truth…
Jim your short and thought provoking:
"Truth is like poetry
And most people
hate poetry.”
made me rummage a bit in my own truths… lol
Memoirs
rummaging around
in the nooks and crannies
of my recollection
i found my stories
my biography
my wonderfully erotic
and intellectual adventures
that reside in my memories
may be nothing more
than glamorous possibilities
that never quite realized
but then again
are they any more false than true
as when they did
or did-not happen
any more true than false
than anything else
in my memories
of my romanticized life
i’ve had a lot of years
of recitation to refine
my stories
my thoughts
my lusts
my appetites for truth and beauty
both in form and deed
and i am
not
about to change them now
and that’s the truth
Ed Meredith
27 November 2016
7 Years Ago
Good morning all. Enjoy a restful weekend.
@ Jim: There're a lots to think with your short verse about truth. Good punch, my friend
@ Marty Saccone: Welcome and thanks for sharing your smart thought. Following our nice advise would make people feel self-content. I love your Taoism-like remark
@ Ed: Fully understood about your move to get out of "the rabbit hole of religion". I'm sinking down in a shallow pothole of the rainy religion -lol.
"....but then again
are they any more false than true
as when they did
or did-not happen
any more true than false
than anything else
in my romanticized life"
unlucky me I've found no truth about my journey in romance so far, my friend. lol.
An echo to Jim's poem about Truth
My Sundry Thought about the Truth on a Rainy Day
TRUTH incontestably exists in GOD.
Without
it
in no doubt
man wouldn’t sacrifice his life
for the religion-made god
whom
he worships.
No one could dispute a man’s own perception
of his personal FAITH
in his OWN
GOD.
However, some questions remain for those believers to consider
in
the exercise
of their rights
in the freedom of religion:
-Which god from many religion-made gods
is
really
The Creator?
-Could it be possible for man?
while
he worships
in his own god.
he would take into account about the painful reality
that there’re many different gods other than his
and all of those believers are ready to fight
to
their own deaths
for their true faiths
and for the gods they believe in.
Could man stop spreading his own hatred toward other religions?
Most
importantly,
could he not kill other believers in the name of his own god?
Thao Chuong
2016-11-27
7 Years Ago
Poetry is Like Truth
Each poet
spins a pearl.
A conchiolin
of their truth
built
around an agitate.
The nacre
perfectly polished
to opalescent
iridescence
Karen Newell
11/27/16
7 Years Ago
Some people think
The "F" word is a bad word
I tend to think of it
As a sentence enhancer
7 Years Ago
Wow, out and about today and came home to a lot of good writings on here today.
Hitler's propaganda advisor told him.
If you keep telling the same lie
over and over
after a while people will believe it
so very True
as much as ever today
7 Years Ago
Good evening and thank you all for sharing your thought of the day.
@ Karen: I don't have a joyful perspective as you do. I know whether there would be any truth in poetry.
@ Jane: "If there Is a God and he was looking down today, would he be like.....OMG?" I don't know who could answer your tricky question. Yet, I "believe" that He would scratch His head about the destruction on the nature done by his best creation -human beings.
@ Jason: Your below writing did make me think of the poisonous hate and the death threat to Salman Rushdie, the author of the novel The Satanic Verses.
"For all we know these threads could be full of devil worshipers
demons
and
repulsive self styled demi gods, with self worshipping poetry flowing like diarrhoea
where the stench pollutes entire worlds!
it wofts out to Uranus and beyond
Mars all evacuated to a distant galaxy
and heaven shuts its air tight, demon expelling doors
no offence though
its free speech!
F speech!
edit: replace "these threads could be" with "this world is"
Note: I re-post your writing here for the original record - in case you want to exercise your editing habit.
@ Jim: I agree with you about the damned old brain-washed methods on human minds and also the made-believe truth from "lie, lie..,more lie..." propaganda
@ Jason again
:
"what do u believe in!? stranger reading, hopfully not
propoganda with strategic hijackings of truth, spinning altered truths as traps like a spiders web?
i need no gargage to see real truths, fake truths, dustbin truths and the toilet of thought and truths... "
In response to Jason's above remark, I would prefer not to make any "F"-urther comment. I'd rather re-post my former poem about religion and politic:
Of Venomous Politic and noxious Religion
in politic
either right or left
no right
no wrong
all wars
no peace
in religion
god or no god
either faith
or belief
no fake
no true
all aches
no relief
both of the two
too itchy
minds soiled
hearts poisoned
politic and religion
both put man against man
both drive him insane
both make him feel irritated
they force man fight for his own truth
they urge him kill for his own faith
in politic and religion
too many walls
lots of partitions
no point
to go on
and on
no need
to prove
what’s true
what’s false
who’s right
who’s wrong
fatal fights
endless wars
no win all loss
both are losers
in politic and religion
when cross path
it’d better yield
you walk on your side
i walk on mine
you keep your faith
and i keep my belief
for
peace of mind
you ignore me
i ignore you
please keep the middle finger deep inside our pocket
Thao Chuong
2016-11-17
7 Years Ago
My thought of the day
O’ Autumn Leaves
not long ago
autumn leaves
in
charming colours
n’ stunning beauty
now
already fallen
on soggy round
staying lifeless
gradually rotten
back to their own roots
food for mother trees
dead leaves
this Fall
new shoots
next Spring
death
is
not the ending
but the new beginning
o’ another life
Thao Chuong
2016-11-27
7 Years Ago
My lousy answer to Jane’s Question
What God Would Do?
If God looked down onto the planet earth
He could never believe in what He saw
He would scratch His bald head
and exclaimed:
“oh
my gosh!
too much sin on earth
what have gone wrong with man?”
He might take deep breaths and think of His next move.
only
two options available in his tool box
either He would send His other son to save humans’ souls
or He could open His hydro dam
to completely wipe out
all sinners
on
Earth
without mercy
all other innocent beings would be certainly also terminated
very unfortunate, but it must be considered
collateral damages
out of God's
will.
don’t
wait and see
whether you're sinners or not
for your own safety, you'd better build a new Noah's Ark'.
Thao chuong
2016-11-27
7 Years Ago
Hello poet peeps … you all opened the door to my
Heart and Mind’s
Inner Peace
i want my religion
to be simple
no need for temples
philosophies
or deity of any sort
i want a heart
and mind
clear of selfish blind passions
a heart and mind
rich in human values
like compassion
forgiveness
tolerance
contentment
self-discipline.
inner peace
a heart and mind
with awareness
that breaks through
the cloud and mist
of darkness and ignorance
a heart and mind
where the love of anger
and hate will fade
in the light of truth
Ed Meredith
2016
7 Years Ago
my echo story to Jane’s “OMG” and Viet’s “What Would God Do?”
God’s Own Drunk
i am
GOD
GAAWD
’s
own drunk that is
alone
face down
in the gutter
of a neon soaked street
fetal
wet
freezing in my own body fluids
prayin’
pleadin’
Oh Load
Dear God
help me
i don’t wanna die in the gutter
help me out
just once more
i promise
i’ll change
i really will
a sudden bright light
and a calming voice
broke through my sobbin'
my prayin'
my pleadin'
and softly said
“Come with me old timer … it’s OK
it”s time… take my hand”
that’s when i knew everything would be OK
i’d be safe
warm
and dry
as the police officer took my hand
helping me into the paddy-wagon
Ed Meredith
2016
7 Years Ago
Heretic
church inquisitor
accusation heresy
innocence be damned
when cauterant sears the flesh
screaming self betrayal flows
Ed Meredith
Today's Tanka
-------------------------
An alternative:
Singing in the key of F
the inquisitor
moved the searing cauterant
toward my precious scones
i sang like a f@%king bird
saying just what he wanted
7 Years Ago
Good morning all. Enjoy a fruitful but restful week.
@ Jason: I could see the tsunami from your sea of F. I feel too hot in the air. I wish if I could find a switch to turn off the intense heat from hell and bring back some peace to the burning mind. The sky is not falling down. Take a deep breath or go out for a walk, mate.
@ Ed:
perfection is all
ten thousand things of the world
sing in harmony
Very nice thought, my friend. This very cool poem was instantly doused down like a piece of ice throwing in the Satan's hell.
Money Worshipers
while they’re still kicking alive,
they worship the money,
b’cause
this god gives ‘em
a real heaven on earth.
they exploit other humans.
they kill their fellow beings.
they chop green forests.
they hunt wildlife for fun.
they
drive
endless species into extinction.
they rape their mother earth.
they suck her blood.
they cut her flesh.
they drill into her bones.
they let her die bit by bit.
the more money they get,
the less enough they feel.
they keep praying
for
more..
and more…
how much is enough?
when will they stop their madness of worshiping the “Money God”?
Thao Chuong
2016-11-28
Note: Removed Jason's F-Post at his reasonable request thought his PM to me
7 Years Ago
obviously i was wildly playing tongue in cheek wirh Danis F sentence enhancer. so stop reposting my entire poems. its copyrighted. cough.
7 Years Ago
Jason your F rants are contagious… lol
Viet, i don’t remember if its; “feed cold and starve a fever” or the other way around but you have helped my temperature to rise…
Fevered Mind
madness
has fallen upon me
a virus induced seduced
my thoughts
of darkness from the light
this night of rambling praise to
the insanity of the day’s
events
i vent
such hatred and malice
never drinking
from the chalice
of tolerance and love above all else
love of fellow men and women
without corruption or destruction
to my other brother from another mother
and sisters with the answers i’ve been looking for
beyond the door of my perception
of deception from the candidate
no it’s to late
he’s the President Elect who neglects the constitution's ideal
the appeal to me and you not this tool this fool a cynical minstrel
who is bound and destine
with infestation to the tower of power
what a scary thought
i bought into his defeat would be complete
beyond the pale and end his tale
of abrasive and divisive misrepresentation of a nation
whose identity is falsely portrayed displayed
by his fraudulent affront and pollution to America’s satisfaction of action
to the solution of multiculturalism without division right here in the USA
today he’s twittering away and on television with his mission of back to back
lies that flies in the face of reality four years is way to long
i want him gone
out of power
sent home with his moral squalor
back jack to your fifth avenue tower
take a cold shower
and learn to give a crap
Dump Trump
Ed Meredith
28 November 2016
and counting
7 Years Ago
Sorry about two videos in a row. There was a mention about parodies.
King of parodies weird Al with great commentary.
7 Years Ago
Good evening. Have a restful time to all.
@ Jason: To give you your peace of mind, at your reasonable request through your PM, I've removed your post. No sweat! It's a piece of cake. However, after you have removed all contents of your posts and I've removed my re-post of your writing, it looked like Jim, Ed, and I've talked to our knees -lol.
(FYI: This is a discussion board. So it is totally legal to re-post a part of a post or a full post of another person for the readers' reference about the related discussions or debates. It isn't an issue of copyright violation. Unless, the writing in the post is published somewhere for a profit.)
@ Jim: I got your black humor. I laughed - thinking of the Englishmen saying; "a tempest in a teapot". I haven't seen Danl since the rant. I do hope the Frenchman has not been drowned by the tempest in the English's teapot -lol.
@ Ed: Your Fevered Mind has made me nervous. I am allergic with these words ..dump..trump... dumb.. bump. hump.. lol
Howling Wind and Dead Leaves
peace is the way of golden leaves
that leave their homes for good
by easily letting it go
and dancing
in
the air
without
whispering “goodbye” to their mother trees
war is the howling sound of hell
as
wind
shakes leaves,
rattles branches,
whips on trees.
silence is the sound of heaven
when wind runs out of air
slows down
and completely dies
branches on trees stand still
dead leaves peacefully rest on the ground
echoes
in cold air
the serene sound of no sound at all
Thao Chuong
2016-11-28
7 Years Ago
Parody rants, oh sound great, Nice words Jim, i best bost my coakahooty and make em chirp biscuits with a wiggley do, u do your own nuts so well Ed, Futs i call em (chuckle) , keep the broth on simmer, the juices come out better
Cheers ears, Viet, ok i'm rested by that gesture. I see you deep in Autumn ponder, a walk really makes people see things..
Really we like your knees, don't worry, we talk about them too. .
Thank you for that removal Viet, we should remember sensibilities and possible misinterpretations.ok i should!. Well its all tongue in cheek echoes with twists of mad parody. I guess parody needs context. Actually everything we do does, words out of context become CON-text...
We're just very cheeky i guess. How is Maria, her thread does seem to have gone. like the wind.... You there Maria??? No revival of her lost scroll of memories? I see Jane has gone into long Autumn walks... . finding Dani walking his Fdog. Damn i did it again
This seems to have been quite a splendid Autumn around London and the SE i been out seeing the fall and the colours are still there, the latest ever i think this year - well into mid Nov, some oaks stilll holding their deep bronzed leaves. How beautiful the season are. Intrinsic in nature? a plan for creation? Is beauty ever definable?
7 Years Ago
My absence excuse
A lost soul
Cannot move
Hear
Speak or write
When asked
"Who are you"
I replied
"Who am I"
7 Years Ago
don't worry too much...
I'm sure God forgets things too.....
WHO AM I?? HUH?
prob not
wha? who am i? that place down there? man, just give me the snooker cue and let me pot it into a black hole
crush it to atoms
smaller
smaller
and spit it out
chuckle just joking!
hmmm
7 Years Ago
Jason, I thought you may have went on holiday.
Your posts disappeared like Marias thread.
Glad you don't take things to personal. Just kidding around.
The witch doctor song floated to the surface after many years. I remember it as a kid. Not just something I ran across. Quite in popular 1958.
Like the young lady in the weird Al video said.
I thought all this crazy stuff started with you tube, but wow they've been doing it a long time.
To have a sense of humor
is the most seriously important
trait one can have
Your as outdated
as a bald guy
with a toupee
The difference in people
is what makes the world go round
some heads spin more than others
and make other heads spin
Jim Taylor 11/28/2016
7 Years Ago
Who Am I
i
am a
speck
of dust.
i
am a
microscopic
mote,
a floater
upon the eye
of the Cosmos.
i
ride in a
wicker basket
woven of
word dreams,
pulled through space
by my brilliant
but
overinflated Ego.
Karen Newell
11/29/16
7 Years Ago
Hey up - Walked the dog off his legs lol
VIET - What do you reckon in this day and Age - Noahs Ark or a fall out bunker?- May be caused by the stench of the trump!!
KAREN: You made me thunk! I thunked about our time and space!
FREE MOMENTS - USE WISELY
Pulled
Stretched outta shape
Triangular
Rectangular
Ovoid
Diamond
Anything
but human shape
Noise
Everywhere
All around
Voices
Traffic
Machinery
Music
Work ..like an echo
HELEN ....Elen...len...en
Home....like an echo
HELEN ....Elen...len...en
You forget
Who you are
What you are
Where you are
What you need
Just a quiet space
In nature
Clean dry fresh air
Simple bird song
Grasses rustling
In a warm breezes
Breathe.....slowly
Clear your mind
Sweep out the noise
Dust out the stress
Feel your shape
Reappear
Everything sliding
Slowly
Off
those
shoulders.
Find yourself
Redefine yourself
Renew yourself
JEM 291116
and counting ED :-)
7 Years Ago
Good afternoon. Quite a big relief to know things have gotten back on the wobbling track -lol. Have a nice day to all
@ Jason:Nice to know that you've been back to your happy mood. It's cool mate. I appreciate your open heart and "easily-cooled-off" mind. You've made conflicts more easily to swallow -lol. BTW: I think the big wars of words in poetry are much less problematic than those little conflicts in the world of fine art.
@ Danl: Good to see you back. Glad to see your safe and sound after swimming on the English Channel -lol.
@ Jim: It ain't bad to have bald head, my friend. At least, those dirty flies don't use our forehead as a landing pad -lol
@ Karen: Haaa...How could such a speck of dirt have an over-inflated Ego?
Here is my echo to Danl's poem, Jason's echo, and Karen's echo.
Who Am I as a Human Being?
I am the most intelligent species on earth
the belly button
of
everything
and the centre of cosmos.
I
am god.
without me,
nothing could work well.
stars, solar systems, milky ways would rotate in the wrong direction.
after
I
die,
the whole world will cease its existence.
please don’t ask me
who
am
I
as a human being ?
Thao Chuong
2016-11-29
7 Years Ago
Ouch! Jane. You had just stepped over my right foot to reach the discussion board. while I was running and holding my post with both hands. You were the winner of this race. Oh Helen of the modern Troy! Who are you? -lol.