Critique Please?

I think apart of the white is to bright. I only mention is because I have that problem sometimes lol. but other than that I like it

I like the composition, it kind of hurts my eyes to look at it though, it's so bright.

Great composition and contrast with shadows! I agree with everyone else I would turn down the whites.

Really cool shot. I agree on the whites as well.

its different, it could be a little less blurry. the legs and shadows at the very top are distracting. i'd rather see the shadows of the 3 in front of me, not in front of them. the angle of the floor bugs me, but mostly that seam in the floor.

---Mike Savad
MikeSavad.com

I actually turned up the whites in photoshop cause I want to hang it in a room with gray walls. Wanted to white to pop a little. Thanks! May change it back!

Diana,

There is the center of the image which might be a focal point, but I see your camera pointing even further down under center.
This sets up a dynamic. I personally much prefer images where the horizon is one focal point and the camera is tilted slightly upward
for the second focal point. The dynamic is much better that way, jmo. If the second main focal point is pointed down, you are looking into
the ground.

Dave

Thank you all! It is high key, but probably too high key, so thanks for your input.. I purposely made it this way.. not by default. Yes, not in clear sharp focus, but actually, none of it is. so in my opinion that is okay, if it is all soft. Mike.. the legs are what I feel makes this pic! Yeah, just having fun..

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I deleted what I first wrote, because I could not execute what I suggested, and so I think that I had misgivings.

The lights seem too blown out to fix in relation to the other tones.

Undo the lightening that you did and show us what THAT looks like.

Black still pops from gray.

I have to disagree about the "blown out white"...I think the image as it is, stands out from the crowd

I agree with Mike about deleting the fourth shadow and whatever that rectangle is in the upper right.

And eliminating the seam line.

But I like the point of view angle...a bit out of the ordinary.

And of course the blurriness of the shadows.

This image certainly has in my opinion, a unique and intriguing presence.

Deleting the fourth shadow would seem to imply adding even more of the bright to an already very bright image, which would imply deleting the legs casting those shadows, to make the image logical, ... adding yet MORE bright areas.

Exactly