Dawn, I'm not really sure if you're asking for feedback or just showing your new sketches, but I will say that The Twilight Zone does not become public domain until 2055, until which time CBS holds the rights to it and they apparently don't like to share. They have sued over it before and have won, so unless you have some sort of agreement with them, I'd suggest proceeding with caution. If it were me, I'd create something else entirely. No use waking a sleeping giant.