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New Art &poetry Book From Fellow Faa Artist.

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 08/07/2012 - 11:21 AM

 

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Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 08/07/2012 - 12:10 PM

With introduction from the man behind the collaborated project VIET TRAN:
"There are many books of poetry collections on the market. However this collection is very unique since all nine poets are also fine artists. Their colorful vision of the world around them has certainly had a positive impact on the way that they perceive and express in themselves poetic words. In addition, this collection is distinctive as the poets are from a wide range of political, social, religious, and racial backgrounds in America, Asia, Australia, & Europe. "

Below is one of my poem included in the book:

Death of an apple picker

5 to 6 apple bins a day the master ordered
to avoid paying minimum the land declared
race is on against unforgiving weather coming
few weeks away and with few workers signing
the farm is wanting but who is to blame?

9 hours a day surely you will get a pay
whether you're in a journey or making it a day
78 dollars for a work less than demanded
growling owner cursing the state they abided
workers were called but few are able!

100 years ago all young even motherland
farmers are plenty like buffaloes in the grassland
they come from a afar , jolly and uncanny
no known profession or collared vanity
but dreamed to be an apple picker.

1 mighty nation forge by natural migration
fought all wars, humane or just abomination
fenced its feign bounty, from cheap labor army
decaying dreams of freedom loving humanity
the land's still sovereign, so they say.

-Saigon
©April 15, 2012

Book preview can be seen at http://www.blurb.com/bookstore/invited/2837333/0e9badbe2a5526dfcd06649246cd4312db01073b

 

Posted by: Ed Meredith on 08/07/2012 - 6:02 PM

i bought one... LOL

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 08/07/2012 - 7:35 PM

I have not read all poems yet as I want to turn the pages of the book and enjoy it fully. I really want to savour the words and images they conjure up also revel in the excitement of poetic thinking and ideas. It is difficult to read your own poems which you are so familiar with that you are unable at times to look at them with a new eye, but after reading and re reading for the editing of the publication i did find favourites of my own.


Perceptive

He writes in glances
as glassy and vast as glaciers
delicate and truthful
so ordinarily beautiful!

Maria Disley


This poem is about the poetry and foresight of poet Viet Tran. His spontaneous insights on life and people are so complex in meaning yet he manages to express them so simply like he has just glanced around him and absorbed a whole collaborative meaning on the world around us....which i might add is very transient and ever evolving. His seemingly ordinary poems usually have immense depth and many paths in which to follow his trail of thought, which often leaves me inspired.




Strong.


Haunt me if you will
With past gaping hollows
or uncertain futures
Whirl around me in your windy dress
goosepimpling my neck and arms
blowing echoes
in whispers
through my hair
if you dare
I won't stir!
monumental standing here

In the small of a moment.

See if I care!

Maria Disley 11/5/2012


This poem is about the strength that memories can give you. Sometimes the future is so uncertain that we have every right to be afraid, but most of the time we are not. There are moments however when the past can seem like a haven to regress into. You lose people who were there for you. as a child you had little responsibility for every word or action. Recounting good memories, advice that people gave you, recalling how you got through things you never thought you could, all gives you the strength to move forward. I have very vivid images and feelings for the past and enjoy bringing these images to life again in my poetry, and highlighting their significance in my life now.

I have ordered my book and wait in anticipation. None of the poets receive money from this publication. It is about sharing the poetry which was collaborated through Viet Tran. :)

 

Posted by: Viet Tran on 08/10/2012 - 10:39 PM

I ordered a hard copy on July 31 and got it today (I only paid for regular delivery). I am really impressed by its printing quality. It looks much better than the e-copy on Blurb. There are more orders than expected as a couple of friends of mines have also ordered a hard copy for themselves. They like the poetry collection of poets from different backgrounds and all over the world.

I think it is also better to read poetry from a book and view artworks hanged on a wall at an art gallery or printed in a book than on a screen.

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 08/11/2012 - 8:52 AM

I ordered my hard copy for my mum, but was too late for the 15% discount!!! Anyway she should receive it on 17th, her 80th birthday is on the 18th. her actual birthday is on 15th, so she may even get it by then. Hope so! Everyone who has read it from face book love it! :)

 

Posted by: Kevin Callahan on 08/11/2012 - 9:06 AM

I purchased 2 copies, 1 for my mother in law and 1 for my library. I also wrote and sent press releases to 4 local newspapers.

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 08/14/2012 - 8:58 PM


Nice one Kevin, am giving this as a gift to my daughter and probably some more in the future for my clients.
Meantime am submitting this for a local Art Magazine for review and possibly feature our book.

 

Posted by: Viet Tran on 08/23/2012 - 10:14 AM

Just a quick note to remind you that I got an email this morning from Blurb offering 25% off from its original printing cost of the book. This great deal only lasts until August 28, 2012. Just use the promo code TRICKS when you order.

 

Posted by: Kevin Callahan on 08/23/2012 - 11:40 AM

HEY VIET, THANK you! I was just going to order 2 books for gifts. I got 1/2 a book off by using the promo code.

 

Posted by: Xoanxo Cespon on 08/23/2012 - 3:51 PM

Arggggggggggg!!!! It's come 2 days too late for my copy!!! due to arrive 5 September (chose slow post :-)!!!

Oh well...never mind...maybe future copies ;-)

Here's an extract of my piece:

Cannot recall…

First opened his eyes…
Or awoke?

All so different!!!
Maybe always was…

Had surrendered.

Every moment, then…
Unique, eternal…

Accepted the dream,
Until then lived.

Embraced the unknown.

Existence, Present…

Saw the thinking minds,

Dramas of intentions…
Passing by.

Own stories of pain and sorrow…

Driving fears and dreams…
Moving along…
From nowhere to no place.

Innocent smiles…
That simply….knew…
Nothing of no one,
And everything of all.

They dreamt…
Lost in fears…
The common dream.

Running from side to side…
Up and down, down and up!
Wondering when would they arrive…
Not knowing they had already done!

Tomorrow, they would say…
Tomorrow we will get there!
Perhaps, Not today…
But Tomorrow…Tomorrow, Yes!!

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 08/24/2012 - 6:21 AM

Better get on to that Viet! Thanks.

 

Posted by: Ana Belle on 08/24/2012 - 8:47 AM

im inspired to do the same thing. got a lot of poems written with flies all over it.

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 08/25/2012 - 9:39 PM

Hi Ana,

feel free to post some of your poem...the world is waiting.

For the meantime let me have my echo to your magnificient work:

The butterfly presence was a stroke of genius next to wonderful colours!

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Forbidden before
The quest o' man's primal mind
Makes us no divine

-Saigon
august 26, 2012


 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 08/25/2012 - 10:20 PM

saigon how about some moon poems in remembrance of neil armstrong who has just died?

 

Posted by: Ed Meredith on 08/25/2012 - 10:41 PM

Blue Moon Senyru

the last moon i saw
was as blue as blue can be
but then so was i

Ed Meredith
25 August 2012

Art Prints

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 08/25/2012 - 11:19 PM

@maria
(am trying to get a fine art before someOne slap this thread as purely poetry)

Photography Prints

Dream or neverland
Like the playground of the moon
set foot on high noon

Earth bound i will be
Like forefathers before me
Mortal destiny

Oh Neil Armstrong
Your note to mythology
Icarus as thee

-Saigon
8-26-2012

@ed
you wordsmith gunslinger, you beaten me again in another Texas(houston) standoff lol =))

 

Posted by: Viet Tran on 08/26/2012 - 1:55 AM


When Poetry Mixed With Politiks Senryu (sundry note to Saigon for your recent statement: "am trying to get a fine art before some slap this thread as purely poetry").

secrete back-door deal
worse than office politics
murkier than mud

keep staying on guard
for an unexpected knife
launching at your back

get away from here
to keep your peaceful mindset
and safety intact

Thao Chuong
2012-08-25

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 08/26/2012 - 2:32 AM

Brother Viet,
thanks for dropping-by my future legal counsel =)

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ANYONE SEEN MY UNCANNY JELLY FISH?

Anyone seen my uncanny jelly fish?
Not on tv or on Japanese dish
Yet it reminds you of  celestial hues
A frontier baffling as if universe are few

Be it in a frolic or  gazed in the sea,
Like of plastic, popsicle and honey bee
Unlocking, fragile looking wonder
A challenge Deity offers to painter - like me

How cool and tranquil oh unpretending
With a stung that would damn you unending
From a being with out a brain
Ouch what profit would i really gain

In a black virtual canvas created
(Creative abyss I think  I cheated)
Floating, gliding in its new domain
Proud creator forever I am

©2012
As published in the book
On The Wings 'O Butterfly


*Photo courtesy of Ms.Joan Minchak collection.



 

Posted by: Viet Tran on 08/26/2012 - 2:42 AM

My Friends and Enemy

My enemy
(if I had any)
could only hit
directly
at my face
for sure
he’s likely missing his shot as I could see
whenever
he decides to
strike

My friends
(I have tons of them)
ironically it needs
only one bad worm
from those loved ones
my lovely apple could be rotten from its core
my whole peace would be broken
into tiny pieces

For my own safety
I would
only
trust my worst enemy
unfortunately
I don’t have any
of ’em

Luckily
I have many friends
so once in awhile
unexpectedly
I get a knife
stabbed
in my back

But the price is not so expensive
as it’s worth every cent
in paying for my endless
friendship

Thao Chuong
2012-08-25

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 08/26/2012 - 3:01 AM

� � ��True friends stab you in the front.�
�Oscar Wilde quotes (Irish Poet, Novelist, Dramatist and Critic, 1854-1900)

Photography Prints

Of friends and foe

Lo between these two
What's the difference for you
If nether helped you?

Both can do make you
Or break for who you will be
Paradox really

Villain or hero
Distinction told from A to Z
Let them define me

-Saigon
08-26-12



*Art work from Granger's gallery

 

Posted by: Xoanxo Cespon on 08/26/2012 - 6:22 AM


"On friends and enemies"

There is a Spanish Rapper called "Mala Rodriguez" that sings...

"My back is covered in knife stabs, but who cares suffer more those who don't love" :-)

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 08/26/2012 - 7:23 AM

An unquiet moon. A quiet man. The man in the Moon.

No wonder the moon stares down agape
mouth awry in disbelief
gone unheard his awe and grief
at all the disarray beneath
the deep seared scars of friends and foe.
But all are blind
down below.

His metamorphosis, into scythe
injuring blindly the darkened sky
pricking with his silver blade
the world's black backdrop,
in his rage!

Torn the black, to twinkling slits
Where rockets only chance to pass
too fast to realise stars are tears
ripped by a moon
so full despaired.


Whose face was felt by just a few
Armstrong and another two.
and walked along the scythe's sharp edges
left footprints on its unearthly ledges
and maybe saw
in all its gore
the beautiful earth,
its worms and fools
with brains of straw.

A quiet man
walked on the moon
a quiet man he died
the quiet man will never tell
what the moon and he espied.

Maria Disley 26/8/2012


 

Posted by: Ana Belle on 08/26/2012 - 7:37 AM

Saigon, you rock! Im working on my poems now. Will publish an ebook soon, cheers!

 

Posted by: Ana Belle on 08/26/2012 - 8:05 AM

Here's one of my poems, its been published and spread over the internet by some people...

HOW CAN YOU LET GO?

How can you let go
When all you can think about is him?

How can you let go
When your body surrenders every time
A mere thought of him crosses your mind?

How can you let go
When the whole of your being wants to
Rest with him in his arms
To feel his strength and
his warmth?

How can you let go
When the thought of him is like a drug
That allows you to experience heaven,
And you don't want to stop
You want it again and again

How can you let go
When you dream smelling his skin
His breath?

How can you let go
When all you ever want is to rest your head
In his neck and feel his pulse on your cheek?

How can you let go
When all you can remember was
That moment when you lay beside him
Naked
and your body spooned with his
When his hand was placed in your breast as you
both fell
Asleep?

How can you let go
When every morning you wake up
And you want to kiss his lips
While you brush his hair
To feel his ever aggressive tongue with yours

How can you ever let go
When every time you breathe, you inhale
His splendor
His power
His passion
Inside you?


How can you ever let go
When every time
You close your eyes
You see his stare and
All your defenses melt away

How can you let go
When every time you look at yourself...
You see him inside you...

How

Can

You

Let

Go?

Ana Belle 2009

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 08/26/2012 - 9:22 AM

I stood and stared at you tonight
the sky was dark
your face was bright

A stranger
I've known all my life
I speak to you but no reply
my breath is wasted on the sky

The 'O' of your mouth
in a constant mourn
a call, a wail or tired yawn
unmoved by me, a single ant
on a distant orb quite another planet.

I stood and stared at you tonight
smiling beneath your beguiling light!

Maria Disley 26/8/2012










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Posted by: Maria Disley on 05/20/2013 - 2:42 AM

My homage to your smiling innocence, your beautiful bravery
My homage to your freedom from behind the bars of my poetry.

p.s Tonight i am going to go through the whole poem and put together all the parts I like..only the best...and see what happens.
Like the children i will pick out what looks valuable...amongst the pile.
Then I think we should think about sending the agreed finished poem to smokey mountain youth centre with something..not sure what... what do you think..

Of course!!We should send dolls..:))

 

Posted by: Karen Newell on 05/20/2013 - 3:43 AM

Maria, I can't wait to see what you come up with. Sending dolls is a great idea :))

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 05/20/2013 - 6:11 AM

SAVING GRACE


Find
them quickly,
no stopping until you think
you may have found one, when
you do, you may stop, hold it up
to the mind and if it sparkles, pricking
all the senses, you may sit on your haunches
in the shallow inky water, or lie right where you are,
in soft bruised mud, above the buried ancient cities and
listen to the poem's secrets.. ancient trash or fresh, anyone’s
secrets are gold, as the next meal unfolds. But this is not a time for
eating, for filling the observer’s mouth, but silence. Send the timekeepers home,
hold the pendulums, put on your sandals and carry your brightest poems like starry
candles to the cleared fertile earth where once, fruit pickers had filled their blue juice stained
sacks, left tracks where they had scuffed the surface with their bee like movements, made scarved
paths for bearers to console one another among jewelled shrubs where only butterflies silently shimmer
with wings of gossamer as transparent as long, present memories...... and just listen to the colour of it all!
Feel the shades swallow your shoulders...nostalgic observer...shiver for a minute...as earth meets mud..mud..mud.
There, where even a rubbish heap will glow like a garden, with the merest gesture Of Lovingkindness in this piece of Mother
Earth. The pile of garbage smelling dirt, where young fragile hands relieve the old men who’ve left their dreams as untested Zen.
Fresh blood brings new strength of hope, meeting both ends just to cope. Simple pleasures can jolt one's face. An old doll is counted
As a child’s saving grace, it fills her heart, her dreams, imparts distant images of butterfly wings, trinkets, treasures and shiny things...far from
Her life as a scavenger. And, afterwards, from the observers spot, the hilltop, the coloured rags and wrangled tin, glistens not unlike the old fruit workers
Their juicy crops, the corpses now laying in the hollows of their cradling roots. Above, the roots of rags, the rootings of rattling metal bits, the roots of work
Of scavengers, of unrest, survival, the roots of courage and determination when all’s you have to hold onto is an object, the colour of sky, or a tuft of grass, the Question why? Reflections in a shard of glass, where time dissipates and all’s you see is a strange face, a small hand, and think you hear a marching band...the sound Of hope in the child’s mind. Clinging to her grandpa’s wrinkled hand, clenched there, a dollar for his find of cans. Hot noodles from junk plastic they sold, collected through Midnight, winter cold, while mother shared election news of manifold, and smiles lightened at the makeshift table in twofold. Sitting first, the angel-child with doll in hand whom she named Grace, begins communion of praise for eventful day at Smokey Mountain,
skipping school for the joy obtained, unmindful of the fumes that morning, better than street begging. Although to outsiders it may seem they
live a broken life, a tainted dream, the doll named Grace, would be the one to see, the bosom of a loving family does exist amongst
the streets of scrap heaps, and what could matter more in this world than to be cherished by a waif’s heart, by this little treasure
hunting girl? And from the observer’s hilltop, away from the lowest point; the the sea of cloth and tin, like seaweed and
shells rattling in to the shore with treasures galore, a soul screams at the sight, at the plight, at the light in the man's
mind, to be so kind to one so small, to comfort her in her adult role, provider. A soul screams tears and joy,
a soul screams for all scavengers whether in suits, sorting emails, or overalls sorting screws, or hard hats
sorting men, or waders sorting fish.....hard work is life, no work is no life, sorting is organising, is
designing, is skilling, is choosing, is creating, is understanding. Watching from the hilltop, the
observer notices little difference from factory cloths, the glint of the needles, the clatter of
shuttles, the snip of scissors the collection of cottons in so many colours, the boxes of
buttons, all sorted and spilled, the workers like bees between aisles of machines.
The buzz of work, people pollinating the shrubs of cloth, the petals of metal, the
blooming hillocks of rainbowed spillages, notice little difference if you rule
out money rule out disease, political unease notice little difference
ruling out comfort, or shelter or wealth education, good health,
notice little difference from the grace of the girl, the doll,
and her world.. The dump truck roars, announcing
its return Slowly marching into the moonlit dregs
To a kingdom ruled next to filth, they’ll burn
on a beautiful wistful night under an
elegant moon that’s unusually
light, a doll in her hand on a
dreamy night.The observer
stands to yawn, to stretch
in the forgetting of time
and place, to notice
the sketch of a new
moon, no half
s c y t h e
swinging
in the sky
and gone
is the sun, all
seamless are the
dyes of colour, all one,
but tinny bits try tiredly to
force a moonlit wink. Bones
ache from sitting idly on a distant hill
watching the workers and reminiscing,
the indistinctive dull rag mounds, the footpath’s
trail looks altogether a dreamy landscape route under
a sky where watchful stars do hang and shoot to make rubbish look
like dark boxed jewels, and scavengers, as slow as shadows now, huddled
up like dark carved dolls or cardboard shepherds for the nativity, pushed
by a Prometheus hand along the path....the hamster wheel..eternity..infinity? The
observer turns away. Leaves the hill, its silhouettes, which almost scare him half to
death, to walk another path, just another, with regrets, but hope for Grace, lest he for
one forgets in haste. Then time and place was rearranged and on the hill she stood so very still,
the sirens shrilling, women shouting, men swarming, she kneeled to something strange
horizon ranged, beyond the noise against the acrid odour of poverty, smoke and fire so overpowering,
monster orange, a beast's identity, as fear engulfs the impoverished sea like a disturbed ant of humanity.
A night of chaos, a silent sob, a rag companion to blot out the mob, speechless heart bleeding emotion on fire!
Unaware of eyes across the dust, the media and t.v crews, as the pink dawn broke it threw a light over the burning
smoking sight, It became apparent That their plight was far from over. The sanctuary they had always known Was a
charred shell, no longer a home. When the media showed the face of the girl Holding Grace in the smoking swirl Pity
reached out across the world, to save the girl from running wild a scavenging child. Surreal urban scene it all came to be
crawling life and struggling norms wish I'd never known as the clearing was shown under
the rubble of the burnt domain charred bodies over turned revealed as Grace’s
parents press cover in a frenzy for Grace's sympathy. The observer, in a
distant place, saw the tragic news, remembered Grace the girl and
doll, and as a poet, declared as he sat down with his family to a
meal, ' My homage to your smiling innocence, dear Grace! Your
beautiful bravery, My homage to your freedom from
behind the bars
of my barefoot,
ragged
poetry.

 

Posted by: Karen Newell on 05/20/2013 - 9:01 AM

Bravo Maria! You have made it totally cohesive :D :D

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 05/20/2013 - 9:09 AM

Wow! that was scary...i just went with it and that's how it came out. hardly cut anything, but swapped a few lines around..and somehow poetry became intrinsic...and as hopeful as the little girl...the girl was the poetry..don't you think? Wonder what the boss will say?????????? :)))

 

Posted by: Karen Newell on 05/20/2013 - 9:22 AM

Yes, the girl was the poetry :)). I'm glad the rhyme scheme is gone. It was becoming too forced. This is much better. That was some fun wiki play! Thanks to both of you, I had a great time!
Can't wait to hear Siagons opinion also:))

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 05/20/2013 - 9:35 AM

I think there is still a little bit of rearranging in the bottom quarter, but I'll look again when I'm fresh. Did you associate the layout with the heaps of rubbish?
Thanks for your input karen..it will be interesting to do one where we know from the beginning at least some common ground...some core...

 

Posted by: Karen Newell on 05/20/2013 - 9:43 AM

I had not thought about the arrangement looking like trash heaps but I see it now:)) I initially found it interesting, that perspective makes it more so.
Yes, next time we will all start on the same foot! Still this one really came together:)

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 05/20/2013 - 1:50 PM

Cheers!!!

The symmetrical image was a serendipity...
aligned text in the center and landscape orientation
a hill with a cross(?) and a shadow of a chalice?
AMAZING!!

...rest assured it can still be wiki-ed

Art Prints

*red ink at the bottom right are our names.

 

Posted by: Karen Newell on 05/20/2013 - 2:19 PM

Wow Saigon that is amazing! I can't read it as it is though, too tiny:))

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 05/20/2013 - 5:07 PM

perfect saigon...don't know how you managed that...i had great difficulty trying to get it on the post page...and didn't want to chance copy and paste but that worked....are you happy with the outcome?

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 05/20/2013 - 7:19 PM

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A
Wiki
Poem

-0-
S A V I N G G R A C E
-0-

Find
them quickly,
no stopping until you think
you may have found one, when
you do, you may stop, hold it up
to the mind and if it sparkles, pricking
all the senses, you may sit on your haunches
in the shallow inky water, or lie right where you are,
in soft bruised mud, above the buried ancient cities and
listen to the poem's secrets.. ancient trash or fresh, anyone’s
secrets are gold, as the next meal unfolds. But this is not a time for
eating, for filling the observer’s mouth, but silence. Send the timekeepers home,
hold the pendulums, put on your sandals and carry your brightest poems like starry
candles to the cleared fertile earth where once, fruit pickers had filled their blue juice stained
sacks, left tracks where they had scuffed the surface with their bee like movements, made scarved
paths for bearers to console one another among jewelled shrubs where only butterflies silently shimmer
with wings of gossamer as transparent as long, present memories...... and just listen to the colour of it all!
Feel the shades swallow your shoulders...nostalgic observer...shiver for a minute...as earth meets mud..mud..mud.
There, where even a rubbish heap will glow like a garden, with the merest gesture of loving kindness in this piece of Mother
Earth. The pile of garbage smelling dirt, where young fragile hands relieve the old men who’ve left their dreams as untested Zen.
Fresh blood brings new strength of hope, meeting both ends just to cope. Simple pleasures can jolt one's face. An old doll is counted
As a child’s saving grace, it fills her heart, her dreams, imparts distant images of butterfly wings, trinkets, treasures and shiny things...far from
Her life as a scavenger. And, afterwards, from the observers spot, the hilltop, the coloured rags and wrangled tin, glistens not unlike the old fruit workers
Their juicy crops, the corpses now laying in the hollows of their cradling roots. Above, the roots of rags, the rootings of rattling metal bits, the roots of work
Of scavengers, of unrest, survival, the roots of courage and determination when all’s you have to hold onto is an object, the colour of sky, or a tuft of grass, the Question why? Reflections in a shard of glass, where time dissipates and all’s you see is a strange face, a small hand, and think you hear a marching band...the sound Of hope in the child’s mind. Clinging to her grandpa’s wrinkled hand, clenched there, a dollar for his find of cans. Hot noodles from junk plastic they sold, collected through Midnight, winter cold, while mother shared election news of manifold, and smiles lightened at the makeshift table in twofold. Sitting first, the angel-child with doll in hand whom she named Grace, begins communion of praise for eventful day at Smokey Mountain,
skipping school for the joy obtained, unmindful of the fumes that morning, better than street begging. Although to outsiders it may seem they
live a broken life, a tainted dream, the doll named Grace, would be the one to see, the bosom of a loving family does exist amongst
the streets of scrap heaps, and what could matter more in this world than to be cherished by a waif’s heart, by this little treasure
hunting girl? And from the observer’s hilltop, away from the lowest point; the the sea of cloth and tin, like seaweed and
shells rattling in to the shore with treasures galore, a soul screams at the sight, at the plight, at the light in the man's
mind, to be so kind to one so small, to comfort her in her adult role, provider. A soul screams tears and joy,
a soul screams for all scavengers whether in suits, sorting emails, or overalls sorting screws, or hard hats
sorting men, or waders sorting fish.....hard work is life, no work is no life, sorting is organising, is
designing, is training, is choosing, is creating, is understanding. Watching from the hilltop, the
observer notices little difference from factory cloths, the glint of the needles, the clatter of
shuttles, the snip of scissors the collection of cottons in so many colours, the boxes of
buttons, all sorted and spilled, the workers like bees between aisles of machines.
The buzz of work, people pollinating the shrubs of cloth, the petals of metal, the
blooming hillocks of rainbowed spillages, notice little difference if you rule
out money rule out disease, political unease notice little difference
ruling out comfort, or shelter or wealth education, good health,
notice little difference from the grace of the girl, the doll,
and her world... The dump truck roars, announcing
its return, slowly marching into the moonlit dregs.
To a kingdom ruled next to filth, they’ll burn
on a beautiful wistful night under an
elegant moon that’s unusually
light, a doll in her hand on a
dreamy night. The observer
stands to yawn, to stretch
in the forgetting of time
and place, to notice
the sketch of a new
moon, no half
s c y t h e
swinging
in the
sky
and gone
is the sun, all
seamless are the
dyes of colour, all one,
but tiny bits try tiredly to
force a moonlit wink. Bones
ache from sitting idly on a distant hill
watching the workers and reminiscing,
the indistinctive dull rag mounds, the footpath’s
trail looks altogether a dreamy landscape route under
a sky where watchful stars do hang and shoot to make rubbish look
like dark boxed jewels, and scavengers, as slow as shadows now, huddled
up like dark carved dolls or cardboard shepherds for the nativity, pushed
by a Prometheus hand along the path....the hamster wheel..eternity..infinity? The
observer turns away. Leaves the hill, its silhouettes, which almost scare him half to
death, to walk another path, just another, with regrets, but hope for Grace, lest he for
one forgets in haste. Then time and place was rearranged and on the hill she stood so very still,
the sirens shrilling, women shouting, men swarming, she kneeled to something strange horizon ranged,
beyond the noise against the acrid odour of poverty, smoke and fire so overpowering, monster orange,
a beast's identity, as fear engulfs the impoverished sea like a disturbed ant of humanity. A night of chaos,
a silent sob, a rag companion to blot out the mob, speechless heart bleeding emotion on fire! Unaware of eyes
across the dust, the media and t.v crews, as the pink dawn broke it threw a light over the burning smoking sight,
it became apparent that their plight was far from over. The sanctuary they had always known was a charred shell,
no longer a home. When the media showed the face of the girl Holding Grace in the smoking swirl Pity reached out
across the world, to save the girl from running wild a scavenging child. Surreal urban scene it all came to be
crawling life and struggling norms wish I'd never known as the clearing was shown under
the rubble of the burnt domain charred bodies over turned revealed as Grace’s
parents, press cover in a frenzy for Grace's sympathy. The observer, in a
distant place, saw the tragic news, remembered Grace the girl and
doll, and as a poet, declared as he sat down with his family to a
meal, ' My homage to your smiling innocence, dear Grace!
Your beautiful bravery, My homage to your freedom
from behind the bars
of my barefoot,
ragged
poetry.

-0-

©
All rights reserved
2013
20th
May







by:deManila,Disley,Newell



 

Posted by: None None on 05/20/2013 - 7:43 PM

Dear Saigon, Maria, and Karen,

What a wonderful piece of work!!!!

 

Posted by: Karen Newell on 05/20/2013 - 8:05 PM

Bravo! It looks and reads beautifully :))

Thank You Kelly :) I had so much fun!

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 05/20/2013 - 10:38 PM

Thank you Kelly!

Karen, It was twice fun and exhilarating to work with you and Maria =)

 

Posted by: Ed Meredith on 05/20/2013 - 10:40 PM

SPECTACULAR!!!

 

Posted by: Poe Ed on 05/20/2013 - 10:50 PM

I second Ed's comment! This master piece came from a collaboration of three poets with different mind sets. Yet, they weaved their own words, own heart beats, and own rhythm into a dreaming poem. Cheer to three poetic musketeers!

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 05/20/2013 - 10:54 PM

:)) I think determination too...really enjoyed the challenge...thanks saigon and karen and all encouragers... Could hardly believe my eyes this morning driving to work there was a banner up across a building announcing A DOLL SHOW! Well, it was meant to be so I will be going there to see which doll to send to the youth centre at Smokey Mountain....then I passed another banner further on that read Difference does not mean less.....isn't that what the poem was about also!!!! ?

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 05/20/2013 - 11:08 PM

Thank you Ed& Poe...

Great IDEA Maria, making a difference starting from an innocent fun of this wiki poem and into their lives...

now am thinking to translate this in my language and hopefully just hopefully read this sometime soon while distributing the Dolls for Smokey mountain.

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 05/21/2013 - 4:13 AM

Yay!!! I just saw you doing it. To do it personally would be amazing. Shall karen and I and anyone else who wants to donate a doll send them to you or straight tot he youth centre? you will be like Father Christmas!

 

Posted by: Karen Newell on 05/21/2013 - 7:53 AM

Thanks Ed and Poe for the nice comments:)) We all had fun writing. The plight of child scavengers is all too real though.
Saigon, Yes please let us know if you would like to deliver our dolls or if we should send them directly. Thank You again for the time spent working together :))

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 05/24/2013 - 1:47 AM

Welcome Back Xo!!!

That latest video is a coup and heart warming.

 

Posted by: Xoanxo Cespon on 05/24/2013 - 8:34 AM

Thank you very much Saigon!!!

Here's a video made a while ago by my younger brother, Oscar, that only recently he asked me to publish...His music, artwork and text (includes some of my paintings too)..



Translation...

"A story of Light"

Immersed in an obscure world
back to his own life
finds daylight
that disturbs his dormant soul
and feeling his energies
illuminates the world with his wisdom
speaks the silence when it sleeps
as so, the existence ceases being, what often is
Sleep, but when you wake up...
Remember who you are and who you were, if you are not inert.
Illuminate your world with his wisdom
because life is not a dream...
the dream is YOU.
The end
or perhaps the end, is the beginning...
For always, Eternally Yours

A Story of Light by OCO (Oscar Cespón)

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 05/24/2013 - 8:41 AM

After 2 unfinished WIP last year and the many personal activity came after..i guess i can move on now and smell the brushes or ink of my drawing pen..with this I will either take a few weeks off and or thinking this thread to drop curtains (finally).

Except if some co-authors can push their barge on this relatively old relic boat close to a year floating...i hope not to clog the rapids off lexiphiles around.

What do you think?

 

Posted by: SAIGON De Manila on 05/24/2013 - 8:44 AM

Another masterpiece Xo..and it runs in the family huh?

Hmmm..would you mind to steer my boat?

Erratum: OUR boat I mean;-)

 

Posted by: Xoanxo Cespon on 05/24/2013 - 9:02 AM

Thanks Saigon!!!

Hmmm it would be a shame to close it...I was just thinking earlier on that you've done well to keep it going this long...Having said that...I am not sure how involved I'll be on FAA, from now on...

Anyhow, I'd say keep it open and see what happens :-)

I am not sure if I shared this one here before, I probably have but...I'll do it again just in case :-)

(Ego talk :-)

 

Posted by: Maria Disley on 05/24/2013 - 9:31 AM

Prophetic Finalities


I feel a final page clinging barely to the oil within the ridges of my fingerprints
I want to hold on
I've left a mark
invisible to the naked eye
but in some mind...
if there's a quiet
patch of land
like some lost island
that's where
I'm there..
packing boxes
of poems
on topics
mapped from
North to South,
East to West,
the worst, the best.
I call and there's only my own echoes
answering me
Go away I say
Go away is the reply..
OK ..I sigh.
The world's our oyster
High and wide
crowds unwalked among,
unbrushed shoulders,
sudden faces,
voices,
paper,
brushes
Choices.

Maria Disley 24/5/13



 

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