Lovely work, Douglas! I have a similar comment to William's. Your "Little bird" is a wren. Rather than use generic labels, identify the animals, at least in the description. It's hard to tell which wren it is but saying that it's a wren does make a difference. It lets people feel that you cared enough to give them full information on what they're seeing. Provide a full description with the name of the location, the animal, the time of year. That brings the reader into the scene with you rather than making them feel outside it.
