the header is unprofessional and hard to read.
i have no idea what this page is about. there should be a description as to why i'm here and why i want to stay here.
talking about merchandise first thing out is cheap.
mentioning your working out kinks and its your firsts website looks cheap as well.
your bio should start out with what this page is about - not your life story. the page is more about you and not at all about your work. start with - your a painter, then go on to the other stuff.
despite the fact you put a watermark on your picture -- NEVER EVER UPLOAD FULL SIZE IMAGES. i can easily take a piece of that or if i really wanted too- i could remove that mark.
http://www.vangrowart.com/merchandise/ i'm not sure what this page is, but it all looks the same, is hard to look at and i don't know what it is. they all of the same image, and the layout is too tight and hard on the eyes. your stuff goes to cowcow.... i don't trust that site at all btw.
http://www.vangrowart.com/merchandise/14-prints-and-canvases this layout is very confusing. because its the same image with different sizes.
you have a section that has prints and canvases - but the canvas is blank.
when i click on the home page -- there isn't a single word on it. nothing that tells me why i'm here.
basically your page is set up, but not ready to be seen. there is no reason to find or visit this page. there is no content and there is no way to know why you have it here. there is no purpose. a website has to outline what its purpose is, it has to start by explaining:
i am a painter, i make this kind of art, here are examples on the front page. then go on to how you make them, what your inspirations are, etc. then offer to sell them from that page. right now there is too much clicking and the layout isn't at all smooth looking. more so because you have no content google won't ever find this. your images are too large, you have to reduce the size, at the very least they take a long time to download.
---Mike Savad
http://www.MikeSavad.com
