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George Robinson

8 Years Ago

Comment On My Site.

I have been with FAA for several years, but I never did anything other than just put my work up. I never made a sale. Recently, I got involved with premium and social media and made a good sale right out of the gate.
Have a look at my FAA site and comment please. I are not good with grammar and commas so let me know. I am tough and can take it. OK, not that tough.
Thanks

George Robinson http://george-robinson.artistwebsites.com How do I make my URL clickable?

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Mike Savad

8 Years Ago

what is it your asking for? a critique? or what?

from what i can see, the images should sell, but you have to advertise them.

---Mike Savad
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George Robinson

8 Years Ago

Hi
I would like a critique. This is new to me.

 

Mike Savad

8 Years Ago

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i'd clone out the pieces on the upper left to keep the eyes on the tree. the image is kind of noisy, but otherwise its good. it could use a story of some kind to connect the viewer to it.

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this is so orange that even the boy is orange. too much saturation here. a little too much magenta and its a bit noisy. its out of place compared to the others

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this tells a story, though the crop is a bit tight and nothing is in focus. looks a bit enlarged.

overall the images either have noise or clarity issues, but the compositions look good. stories need some work. your gallery should be divided up to what you do, and not just your name. you want it easy to navigate. you should have more images. avatar wise, it looks like your asleep for the most part, maybe a nice head shot

the bio is rather wordy and just one big block of words. mention your in the airforce, that's fine. but try to isolate what you shoot, its mostly for google. but at the very least, break it up into segments.

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i don't think i ever saw the keyword wooshy before. i guess it is, but it seems barren of words. add holidays to that list, mentioning flag would help as well.

beyond that you can't wait for sales, you have to advertise your stuff.


---Mike Savad
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JC Findley

8 Years Ago

Freaking outstanding work.

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Absolutely love this.

 

David Bridburg

8 Years Ago

George,

Great work. I dont quite see it Mike's way here. Too much knitpicking.

You look like you are overdosing on apples in the avatar, so carry on.

Congrats on the sale....and a belated welcome....

Dave

 

David Bridburg

8 Years Ago

If you were purposely looking to the rule of thirds.....this is outstanding as an example.

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George Robinson

8 Years Ago

Thanks to all.
I think I will rethink offering smaller sizes or get better scans..
Wooshy is my dog's nick name. I put that in the keywords to find my images easy on the Internet. I have a common name and that does't work.
Thanks

 

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