i'd clone out the pieces on the upper left to keep the eyes on the tree. the image is kind of noisy, but otherwise its good. it could use a story of some kind to connect the viewer to it.
this is so orange that even the boy is orange. too much saturation here. a little too much magenta and its a bit noisy. its out of place compared to the others
this tells a story, though the crop is a bit tight and nothing is in focus. looks a bit enlarged.
overall the images either have noise or clarity issues, but the compositions look good. stories need some work. your gallery should be divided up to what you do, and not just your name. you want it easy to navigate. you should have more images. avatar wise, it looks like your asleep for the most part, maybe a nice head shot
the bio is rather wordy and just one big block of words. mention your in the airforce, that's fine. but try to isolate what you shoot, its mostly for google. but at the very least, break it up into segments.
i don't think i ever saw the keyword wooshy before. i guess it is, but it seems barren of words. add holidays to that list, mentioning flag would help as well.
beyond that you can't wait for sales, you have to advertise your stuff.
---Mike Savad
MikeSavad.com