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Vonnie Murfin

8 Years Ago

I Would Like Your Opinion, Please. Thanks.

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Matt Hammerstein

8 Years Ago

Most of the black space is not needed; I'd crop it much tighter. The horizon line is also nowhere near level. I would say it doesn't stand up to the same quality as the rest of your work; your other fireworks shot is much better with the people silhouetted in the foreground.

 

Marlene Burns

8 Years Ago

leveling the horizon line that is seen in a bigger view, is essential IMO and cropping out most of the black.
Fireworks are magnificent...they need to be front and center ( and level)

 

Mike Savad

8 Years Ago

not really all that exciting. just sort of like a bottle rocket. usually when i think of fireworks, i think of flower like things in the sky. a nice background and setting. this is mostly black, some smoke and a fizzle. looks more like a genie coming out of a lamp. in the tags. i believe its - Independence day not independent.

the angle, well it would be nice if it was level looking, but it could be a hill there.

---Mike Savad
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