Puzzles, I like the details you choose to mention, all photographers will know the hand ache caused by holding cameras. Then there's the burr of the wheels on the Tarmac, the smell of fuel in the wind, the perspective and philosophy of blur in the sky and dot on the ground, the haze of heat as the rubber tyres burn, very visual, and aural. Although, I like your casual style of writing, because I begin reading it as though it's just comments and find the poetry along the way, I think there's is also the ability to have impact with traditional poetic form in addition to your loose style. Always enjoy reading your work :))
