its a nice shot, i may clone the glare at the bottom. you need far more keywords, and a general description would be nicer.
its an unusual picture. hard to say how well it will sell. a lower angle to get her eyes would be better. a close up of just the creatures as it's own shot may sell to restaurants.
your description is not great in this. if you can't think of a good description, then you might have too many infinite tide pools. the scene is over saturated btw, a bit too sweet and the contrast is too much as well. there is detail loss in the shadow. the scene itself isn't all that interesting, unlike that other one, this one can be anywhere. tell us where these are, a location of any kind. you need way more keywords on all your images.
again too much saturation - don't push the saturation, it only makes it look like a cartoon. hard to know how well it sell, its blue and has a lot of moss, it will be a tough sell. as an image it's not that interesting. there isn't anything going on it. if that wave were higher, or the tide was higher going in and out. if there was a crab in the middle of that. something to catch my my interest. good photos aren't just sharp, they usually depict a scene that says - i know why you took that - or this image is a representation of where i was, wouldn't you like to come here.... sort of like - i made this, be jealous that your not here looking at it.
i classify this as snapshot. while different and shows life there, all of them are posing, and are very static. the wires in the background are distracting. overall they aren't doing anything. if they were even walking in a straight line it would look better. generally posed images never look that good.
your bio needs work, tell us about your photography, not the age you started driving.
---Mike Savad