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Comments Or Critique Of Image.

Posted by: Joshua Towne on 05/10/2013 - 4:08 PM

Was trying something different and came up with this image. I think I like where it's going but I'm not sure if it's there or not. Any thoughts, comments, or critiques of the image would be greatly appreciated. Thank You.

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Posted by: Mary Bedy on 05/10/2013 - 4:15 PM

I like the outline effect, Joshua. I'm not sure about the yellow striping. My eye kind of stops on the yellow....

 

Posted by: Conor OBrien on 05/10/2013 - 4:22 PM

I agree, I think the yellow/orange strips break up the image too much. Interesting to see what this image will end up looking like when it is finished

 

Posted by: Joshua Towne on 05/10/2013 - 5:04 PM

Thank you both. I will work on it with some different colors.

 

Posted by: Joshua Towne on 05/10/2013 - 8:14 PM

At least there's not as much yellow now. :)
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Posted by: Mary Bedy on 05/10/2013 - 8:22 PM

I like this version a lot, Joshua. I like the texture in the figure as well.

 

Posted by: Conor OBrien on 05/10/2013 - 8:37 PM

Good work. There is a clear improvement between the first image, WIP, and the second image, WIP 2.

Keep at it

 

Posted by: Janine Riley on 05/10/2013 - 9:19 PM

I like the WIP 2 also.

 

Posted by: Joshua Towne on 05/11/2013 - 8:05 AM

Thank you again all. Mary, the texture thing was pretty much a mistake. I had the "wrong" layer chosen. :)

 

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